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A HELLUVA REWRITE ♡♡♡
♡DISCLAIMER:THIS IS CRITICAL OF HELLUVA BOSS♡
♡DISCLAIMER:I DO NOT SUPPORT VIVZIEPOP OR HER ACTIONS♡
◇NOTE: English is NOT my first language so there might be some mistakes◇
◇◇◇Blitzø Buckzo◇◇◇
• Boss of I.M.P.
• Husband of Verosika Mayday (fight me)
• Adoptive father of Loona(17)
•I.M.P.•
◇ Blitzø basically started I.M.P. to support him and Loona since Verosika basically has her own money but uses some of it to support Blitzø's business.
•The emoloyees•
Millie- Blitzø met Millie during a trip in the Wrath ring. His van broke down and Millie's family basically took them (blitzø, Verosika and loona) in until the van is fixed. He told the family about his business and Millie was somewhat intrigued. She always wanted to see what earth looked like. So, she went with blitzø and became his first employee.
•The pilot•
The pilot starts with millie and blitzø figuring out how can they go to the living world and start their business since they don't know how to build a portal. Blitzø considers visiting his old friend the goetia prince himself, Stolas. He's quite scared to visit him since they weren't in good terms and if you weren't with good terms with the prince, you are up for a good ol' beheading. He tells his fears to Millie and Millie then tells him to face his fears (blah blah you get it) and lifts him towards the company van.
The rest of the pilot follows the three, Blitzø, Millie and Loona to the goetia prince's palace while also fighting some sinners on the way (woo bloodshed!!!!), and getting distracted by a carnival. They fight demons there too( woo bloodshed part 2!!!). After a few hours later, they finally arrive at the palace. They are greeted by the prince Stolas himself and gestures them to come in. Millie and Loona basically had fun in the palace, meeting and chatting with Stella, Stolas' wife, and Octavia, the daughter. While the females are having fun, Stolas pulls Blitzø aside and had a talk with him. Stolas agreed to lend him the book, much to Blitzø's relief, BUT on one condition. He gives Stolas his own soul, which means, the prince can do ANYTHING with Blitzø,(this is where the sex deal comes in)basically making him his very own puppet. Blitzø refuses at first but stolas threatens on beheading Blitzø, so, he agrees, much to a satisfied Stolas. Blitzø then exits the room, greeted by Millie and Loona. Millie asks him what's wrong but he brushes it off. Millie accepts his answer but is still suspicious about Blitzø. They go home and drink some whiskey and watched a movie. Blitzø is still paranoid about the deal.
•♡◇ THE END•♡◇
By: Vii
#vii rambles#vii “rewrites”#vii's critisism#anti stolitz#anti stolas#anti vivziepop#anti helluva boss#helluva boss critique#helluva boss critical#vivziepop critique#vivziepop critical#vivziepop criticism#helluva boss rewrite#wrote this during school#so thanks to one of my teachers who didn't show up!!!#note: this is critical of vivziepop#note: this is critical of helluva#note: i do not support vivziepop or her actions
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“Wait how can we communicate to the audience that a character is abusive?”
How about
we animate an angry
Backhanding
Slap scene?
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As much as I still love Fizz, I don't like how Vizize has a habit of 'woobie-izng' her characters in order to make them sympathetic. A character can still be an asshole while the audience can still have sympathy for them, or at least understand that they're in a bad situation (Starscream from Transformers is one good example depending on who's writing him).
Taking away someone's bite/nerfing them and turning them into a sad boi isn't good writing, it's just lazy.
#here goes sweets off her bullshit again#helluva boss critical#vivziepop critical#overall i thought the episode was alright. it was very messy and i feel could use more 'show not tell'#And Mammon's cursing really got annoying after a while.#but i didnt hate it and i think its a fair note for me to rnd on#maybe if theres more fizz and ozzie eps in the future i'll watch them otherwise im done with thr show
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Ive been liking the strella Halloween merch
But I’m hoping they aren’t made to be canon, I can’t stand one of my top ships being ruined by awful writing 😭
I feel like almost all hellaverse ships are better in fanon versus canon, I just don’t think couples in the show are well written (they either range from too perfect or just toxic, borderline abusive, there’s no in between)
#helluva thoughts#tumblr ramble#hazbin hotel critical#helluva boss critical#I had the same problem with fizzmodeous like it had a lot of appeal until it became canon in season two#but on a positive note the merch does make me wanna draw vampire hunter striker
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It's absolutely soul-crushing how the industry treats animation so badly that we've gone from the industry standard season of animated television being 20-30 episodes long to 10-12 episodes long. Like think about how many episodes were in seasons of Adventure Time in 2011. And now think of how many episodes were in Hazbin Hotel. This post isn't specifically about Hazbin, but I watched that recently so it's what I'm going to talk about. Hazbin Hotel is 8 episodes long. That is so fucking depressing for many reasons. It signals to me that the industry standard for animation is only getting worse, people have waited almost a decade for this show to come out only to be disappointed with the almost painfully short run time. On top of that season 2 supposedly won't come out until 2027. Too many showrunners already have to work under this immense pressure nowadays to fit everything they want into a 12 episode season, which is already ludicrous to me, but an 8 episode season??? It feels like Amazon set the show up to fail. Watching the show, it felt like the writers panicked because they didn't know if they would be able to develop every character properly (which is to some degree on them as writers for not shortening the main cast or only focusing on 2 or 3 leads, but the stupid short number of episodes ordered did not help them) which leads to the entire show feeling way too fast paced and rushed. I hope we can get out of this rut, I'm excited to see where this show goes but the way it was handled leaves me feeling grim towards the state of cartoons as a whole.
#note: im not part of the vivzie hatedom#im also not really a fan of hers either#animation is just something very important to me#and hazbin is sort of the little show that could#so i really really want it to turn out well#animation#cartoons#hazbin hotel#vivziepop#helluva boss#hazbin hotel critical#hazbin hotel criticism#adventure time
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•VEROSIKA REDESIGN•
I love her so much ♡♡♡♡
Bonus:
Silly little animation cuz I have no life ♡♡♡
#digital art#my art :)#note: this is critical of hazbin#note:i do not support vivziepop or her actions#anti vivziepop#vivziepop critical#vivziepop criticism#anti helluva boss#helluva boss critical#helluva boss critique#helluva boss criticism
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Okay I sorry but I gotta share this it is SO fucking funny, I am laughing so hard I cant-
It also makes a lot of good points about the writing and plot hotels and stuff
And here's one of the best parts. Took me 5 minutes to stop laughing
#hazbin hotel critical#helluva boss critical#vivziepop critical#im laughing my ass off right now I-#notes#Youtube
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people think Alastor an evil brilliant manipulator. then they need to watch Death Note and see Light and now a really brilliant manipulator works. (and by death note i mean the anime, not the live action crap movie. the movie sucks. the anime is great)
I agree. Alastor wishes he could be like him.
#helluva boss critical#helluva boss#vivziepop critical#vivziepop criticism#vivziepop#helluva boss criticism#helluva boss critique#anti-vivziepop#hazbin hotel#hazbin hotel critical#alastor#alastor critical#death note#light yagami#light yagameme
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people on this website are notoriously unable to be normal about things they love, but less discussed is the inability to be normal about things they hate and only one of those is a problem imo
#hint: its not love. be so weird about your interests#but maybe be a hater in a more well adjusted way ?#nobodys saying stop being a hater my god be a hater#but please like......... think before you solidify a belief that is undeniably Too Much for the subject matter involved#yall will be wishing death on people who are mid level crummy#calling stuff shit that is ok to average#the black and white thinking goes fucking crazy#remember kids: its ok to be a hater. its not ok to be an asshole#just bc you dont like it doesnt make it bad#just because someone is a bit shit doesnt mean they need to DIE#good lordt#vivziepop#hazbin hotel#helluva boss#vivziepop critical#hazbin hotel critical#helluva boss critical#sure why not. thats what this is abt lol#be fucking normal in the notes or i smite you#peeb post
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Worst-written TV shows I’ve seen in my short life so far:
-Girls (HBO)
(only for a few episodes, I had raw hatred for every single character in it)
-Hannibal (NBC)
(I sat through all of that godawful AO3 fanfic -Michael Mann, Jonathan Demme, & Ridley Scott movies are superior adaptations)
-Yellowstone
(Only for a few episodes, mighty Christ, how I hate the Dutton family except for their abused lawyer/ slave)
-Death Note
(the first show I regretted watching as I got older, not a single likable or interesting character in there- kill em all)
-American Horror Story after HOTEL
(only the teasers & intros are good after that)
Shows like Velma & Big Mouth were way too obvious- those shows are so bad that it’s not even worth making fun of ‘em.
…Helluva Boss and Hazbin Hotel are on the thinnest ice you can imagine.
Watch Breaking Bad, Better Call Saul, Fargo (the movie & the show), The Sopranos, True Detective (seasons 1 & 4), I Think You Should Leave, The Boys, Avatar: The Last Airbender, The Cuphead Show, & The Regular Show instead.
#tv shows#hannibal nbc#yellowstone tv#girls hbo#american horror story#death note#anime#helluva boss#helluva boss critical#hazbin hotel#hazbin hotel criticism#rant#rant post#sorry not sorry
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i REALLY fucking hope that the millie episode is going to have a content warning for suicide/suicidal ideation, esp since 1. their current content warnings are vague and condescending as it is, 2. that Cherubs episode sure didn't have one
#helluva critical#vivziepop critical#note: this ab the leaks in case anyone is confused#helluva boss critical#lovin rambles
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The new hb short sure is something huh
My thoughts:
First of all it's actually good? It shows the ACTUAL plot of the show(that somehow flew away like a bird) and I enjoyed it! (And there are people who said if the show followed the original plot it will be boring like shut up).
Second of all, why would the crystal need lust to activate it???? The incubus guy and Barbie Wire from the Unhappy Campers episode didn't need lust to make the crystal work??? So??? Viv. What. Was. That.
Lastly, penguins saying slurs? Wha-
Also blitz needs some help with his feelings. The damage St*las did to this man goddamn.
(Oh and the mittens on their tails ARE SO CUUTEE and MOXXIE'S GAME??? Good for him ig?)
#note: i do not support vivziepop or her actions#note: this is critical of helluva#note: this is critical of vivziepop#helluva critical#helluva boss critical#anti helluva boss#helluva boss criticism#helluva boss critique#anti vivziepop#anti stolas#anti stolitz#vii rambles#vii talks#vii's critisism#vivziepop critique#vivziepop critical#vivziepop criticism
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Okay I love hazbin hotel, I really do. I love the characters, I love the song. But I’m willing to admit that it have flaws and one of it being the pacing.
And ngl I think I found out why and it’s because numerous reason
Production. When Hazbin got confirmed for season 1 for all we could know the team only know that they get 8 episodes and that’s it. They don’t know about season 2 yet so either they got confirmed for season 2 when season 1 already out into work to the point there no fixing the script, or season 1 is don’t in production stage going to post when season 2 is confirmed. Giving benefit of the doubt there’s a certain panic to explain everything to the fandom so it’s just plot point after plot point being stuffed in one season without time to breathe.
Episode. This involved with the previous reason because if you happen to live under a rock, for some reason there seem to be a trend in shorten episodes seasons. It went from 26-25 to 12-15 and now less than 10. There’s not enough time to develop a character to the fullest. It seem rush because with the pressure from fandom and the uncertainty of confirmed seasons.
Lastly, it written like a musical but have TV show concepts. I feel like this is most confusing and might just be me so lemme explain. Hazbin hotel from ep 1 to 6 feel like a one whole musical where they kinda have to rush it a little? Cause musicals usually have 2 Maybe 3 hours and 40-50% of it are songs so you have to rush throughout the dialogue a little bit and let songs expressed the characters the most. I feel like this is what the show been doing, it rush through the dialogue and development to throw all the emotions we supposed to feel in songs and don’t get me wrong if it have one theme, one major problem like a musical it would work. However, Hazbin have all these problems, heaven forces, Lilith and Alastor sudden disappearance, the Vees, Angel’s arc, Charlie’s arc etc etc it all isn’t a minor problems like “oh these kids wanna be respected and accepted as they are” in School of rock or “this demigod lost his mojo” like in Moana. These problems are all main problem worthy and most of the time tv series have time to deal with this. Maybe one season address one of those problems, maybe one season have 2 main problems for first and later half. And so when you have musical writing with mostly songs where you need to have concise story but instead have tv series concept with multiple arcs what you get is a story that feel rush
This have been my tedtalk
#like as much as you love this show you have to admit#Charlie and Vaggie relationship could be more developed because they feel like they already who they want to be when they’re together#they’re not Tbf but it feel like it without episode focus on said characters#Emily and Charlie friendship should’ve been explored so the betrayal of Sarah can hit harder now that we know Emily more#we could’ve slowed down and explored the hotel premises more#we could go all around with character centric episodes that lay down the ground work for further development#for example the fact that Vaggie hate herself or Husk and Angel dynamic outside of Loser baby#do I still enjoy this show unapologetically?#yes absolutely I’m just willing to acknowledge the flaws in it too#also side note#do not compare Hazbin Hotel with Helluva Boss#imo I feel like it unfair to compare a self own self produced production with a production that is managed by a big corporation#hazbin hotel#devilg04#hazbin hotel criticism
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four years for this show...
#IM SORRY. ITS JUST. IM SO. HHHHHRGN#its fine. its good. its entertaining to say the least#but from a writing perspective......#im not an anti i am the worlds biggest helluva boss enjoyer the hellaverse is SO SPECIAL TO ME#but.. the more i see about hazbin s1......#how in over four years was this what you came up with. how is the pacing this insane. how is this character treatment ok.... PLEASE#my sorta toxic trait is that as someone obsessed with media analysis; narrative devices; and story structure -#as well as just. someone who is an aspiring showrunner/creator working on my own huge projects -#is that every time i come across a movie or show that i think is done in a really lacking way. all i can think about is how i would#have done it instead#(this happens in a non-critical way too tbf if i really enjoy a book or game i'll be like they should let me make a based on film)#but hazbin. hazbin. all i have right now is 'i could fix her' in my head#I WOULD TREAT THESE CHARACTERS RIGHT I WOULD GIVE THEM THE NARRATIVE THEY DESERVE#there is. so much potential here. how is the execution so lacking#mine#good ideas!!!! good moments!!!!!!!! THE OVERALL CONSISTENT NARRATIVE IS NOT DOING SO HOT#as a side note though i really think this is why helluva is doing so much better in terms of pacing and writing. the structure of that show#is so much more accommodating to a long intricate story WHILE weaving in a billion different character stories#8 episodes for hazbin is insane season 1 needed twice as much#nyx crit tag
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Lovesart23 art made another redesign video, this time regarding Stolas and his family. She did Stella today, and will do the rest eventually. I really like this Stella redesign of hers, aside from the pink. I am just….personally done with the color pink lol, I’ve seen it everywhere and it gives me a headache, but obliviously I can see why she chose it, that’s just me lol. I love the other colors, specifically the green eyes.
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As I’ve said before her videos are very enjoyable to watch for me, I love how she puts thought and effort into every redesign, taking inspiration from the characters backgrounds, animals, ect, and visually telling us things about the characters in their said designs. Can’t wait to see more.
#I absolutely HATED the anatomy on Stella lol#like her waist is SO SHORT and her torso is incredibly long#and yeah viv doesn’t really put effort into her bird designs#she makes them all look the same and never even specifically tells us what kind of demons they are aside from Stolas being an owl#take notes viv#vivziepop critical#spindlehorse critical#helluva boss critical#helluva critical#helluva redesign#helluva boss criticism#I am also glad she is recognizing that the show has issues#agreed with her thoughts on Stella#Youtube
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I wonder if Viv made Stella so idiotically shallow to be a hatesink for the fandom's misogyny. The way many of you talk about her...
#bitch cow idiot c u n Tuesday#thousands of notes hating her as if blitz isn't a predatory bisexual#as if stolas isn't a coercive grapist#like the imps aren't assassins#but abuse is the line#helluva boss#helluva boss criticism#helluva boss critical#helluva critical#stella goetia#introspection is sorely lacking#I'm defending a character i don't even care about#her first episode was fine
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