#if it was written by vivziepop

[toffeechad]

// CENSORED BAD WORDS + VOLUME WARNING!!

The Mr. Men Show if it was written by Vivziepop:

anyways the hazbin hotel and helluva boss tags are only for more attention teehee

[technicallydelightfulpenguin]

Literally...

Reason why Making Fiends is better than this terrible written shit.

Helluva Boss has two moods

[arcusnoel]

"My name is cain! I'm your bitch!" ahh drawing

[mild-incompetence]

I like how we don’t see Fizz completely until he has his horns covered and how Fizz also doesn’t wake up Ozzie until he has his horns covered.

That whilst he’s lying on Ozzie he is still almost completely under the cover. You can barely see the tip of his face and his arm.

But then the alarm goes off and he has hidden himself entirely under the sheet.

[rejectedfables]

the Helluva Boss Mission shorts, all coming out between Apology Tour and Ghostfuckers, serve multiple purposes. Obviously they bring much needed levity back to the show during a very emotionally heavy story arc, allowing the audience and the characters time to breathe. They also bring I.M.P.'s daily life back on screen, allowing the creators and audience to experience a little bit of that original concept of the show that the creators pivoted away from to follow the more plot and character heavy story they settled on. AND they give us a sense of time passing as we see Blitz go through the aftermath of The Breakup.

All of these are things I've seen other people talk about.

What I want to talk about is the fourth thing:

All three Mission Shorts are a reflection of how Blitz used to see Stolas.

An aggressive dangerous group of birds who say derogatory things to him and WILL kill him if he's not good enough at sex.

An obsessed fan who is impervious to all harm, talks down to him, uses pet names for him, fetishizes him, and only cares about the FANTASY of Blitz while not listening to or caring about him as a person at all.

Being trapped and treated like a source of entertainment, treated like less than a person, commodified for being violent by a duplicitous man surrounded by small horned pets who he infantilizes but who can be reasoned with.

All three of these shorts are throwing Blitz's own baggage around Stolas back into his face in weird subtle ways, and Blitz has to grapple with the fact that none of these ACTUALLY feel like Stolas to him. For as much as Stolas contributed to the situation they're now in, so did Blitz. Because Blitz has been reading him wrong this whole time.

[segasister]

So… you gonna go this hard on everyone who’s done the, “if it was written by Vivziepop,” meme then or…?

Its a joke but you're wishing death on a person, no that the person be put down like an animal 💀. Most normal helluva boss fan response to anything poking harmless fun at the show:

Anyhow this was the video in question, lmao "my name is Cain I am your bitch" had me in tears how ridiculous this line is. Also goose was poking harmless fun at helluva boss in the glitchx stream, say this cos hb fans are like "goose literally worked on helluva" "animation aint a competition or fans giving the few instances in hb that isn't Plagued by cuss words/crude humor. This fandom cannot take a joke or accept jokes poking harmless fun at the show.

[dyssonant-skyline]

"because its hell" doesn't hold up.

When you create a setting from scratch, you have total control over it. You get to make the rules. You can't excuse a flaw in writing or presentation with "it is hell, it has to be this way!"

Here is one paraphrased example from Hazbin Hotel I've heard recently in response to a critique of calling the main characters too reliant on pinks/reds:

"All the characters have red in their color schemes because they are from the Pride ring and the rings are color coordinated."

While this gives an in-character/in-lore explanation for the color schemes, what it doesn't do is change the fact Hazbin Hotel's characters having a hard time standing out from the background. An in-character/in-lore justification should NOT be prioritized over the overall quality of a project.

As a writer, you have control over the constraints of your story. If you write yourself into a corner, you can't just throw up your hands and give up. You have to be willing to rework your lore and stories to make them stronger.

If excessive cursing is grating and making certain moments within your story less impactful, you should reel it in because it makes the presentation stronger. If your color based lore is causing the visuals of your project to suffer, it is time to reassess the lore.

Just because something is logically consistent within a world, doesn't make it a good writing/art choice.

A setting's rules should serve stories and characters, not the other way around.

[showtoonzfan]

Can I just say real quick, that I want to mourn the fact that we’ll never hear a Vivziepop female character talk vulgar about her vagina. Like, you know it’s true. How come her male characters can constantly joke about their dicks and have a lot of dirty sex jokes revolving around them but her females get nothing (outside of being called sluts and whores that is.) Like if you want your show to be edgy and raunchy at least go all out. I say this because Hazbin is getting real close, and I’m not expecting ANY vulgarity with Charlie and Vaggie, Viv’s only wlw couple. No sex jokes, no roughly kissing or anything, none of that. Of course I’m not saying they can’t be anything BUT sex jokes, but I am saying that it is extremely telling that all of Viv’s mlm characters can be open and dirty about themselves but Charlie and Vaggie are reduced down to just being gentle and soft. At most I’m expecting things like hand holding and kisses but that’s it, and it really does suck like…let your female characters be vulgar about their bodies too. (Outside of being slut shamed)

[angellic-critique]

EDIT: *Disclaimer, if you see the original posting with crude/first impressions I take full responsibility of my hostility. I'm just a disappointed and upset ex-fan. Tweaked typos, fixed Bugs Bunny Ref, and curses to be erased for accurate viewpoints as of 8/18/2024 --- Oh god, please don't get me started on how passive and surface level Blitz' """representation""" of drag/[genderswapping akin to what it feels like] alongside Moxxie are just used for eye candy/gags and NOT actual reasoning for the characters to genuinely try to show some gender expressionism! What do I mean by this? Due to Brandon Rodgers' ever present role in the show and projecting his past drag type stereotypes onto Blitz just like previous characters, without any thought and keeping it at a basis of a joke. Hence, the eye candy passive 'progressive' lack of genuine queerness is really hard to take seriously when both seasons of Helluva are like this.

Alongside Moxxie, the both of them are used as gags and jokes around/about the two cis[?] demon men reduced to visual jokes and walking punchlines rather then actually letting the characters be characters. Moxxie does not contain good or better drag considering most instances are for the plot rather then the character wanting to be drag or explore outside of their assigned genders. Before you try to bring up:

"Oh but Moxxie dressed up four different times surely that mea-"

He was the butt of the joke in all instances. Even the first time they performed drag was for a joke of a 'human disguise' that was quickly dropped post Unhappy Campers, examples being--

He was forced into drag as a disguise twice [thrice?], Forced into a wedding dress AGAINST HIS WILL MIND YOU

*Hallucination not actually the real moxxie a projection of Blitz' harboring feelings projecting moxxie to be drag- vs how he actually performs """drag"""

Spot the differences! No offense to bugs bunny of course at least he has substance and purpose to his drags for LOONEY purposes! He's saying the joke to always move the cartoon plot forward at least!

Blitz has only openly dressed in drag once and the fans applauded viv like it was a big deal. [Even though I personally believe Brandon is homophobic accidentally :/]

Even in merchandising moxxie seems uncomfortable to even perform outside of his gender role....???

I get the anxiousness is the appeal of the character but really put it into perspective why the valentines merch is like this !!!!!

I AM CRITICIZING A SHOW THAT I USED TO THINK WAS QUEER POSITIVE. I AM A QUEER YES.

[tategaminu]

Watched a leaked Hazbin Hotel scene and a character says the world "dck" four times and "fcking" two times in 13 seconds. How a writer can find this funny goes beyond my comprehension.

[starlight-bread-blog]

Stolitz if it was written well

[fun-ghoul-irl]

Kobra Kid and i are NOT a couple. we are NOT dating and i have NOT eaten his ass!! IT WAS A THREAT!! AND YOU'RE STILL SHORT!!!!!

-red thrill

Yes you are!!!

AND FUCK YOU YOU FUCKING CUNT IM NOT FUCKING SHORT YOU FUCKING BITCHY FUCKING ASSHOLE FUCK YOU YOURE THE FUCKING SHORT ONE YOU FUCKING SHITWAFFLE 🤬🤬🤬🤬

[tranquil-slaughterhouse]

[yams-here]

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Me opening up this app

[luckydcooking]

Ni*fty, is supposed to be an adult, but why does she sound like a child and acts like one? god.. I feel sorry for anyone who's a fan of, Ni*tty and wanted to see her be treated like an adult.