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Voltron vs Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles:
How one team feels like close friends, while the other feels like family
Iâm sure anyone who has watched Voltron past season 3 understands that there is a severe lack of meaningful interactions between the paladins as the show goes on. The Voltron paladins often call themselves a family, even all the way back in season 1, but there is something thatâs so obviously wrong with that wording. Team Voltron isnât a family, not because they arenât blood related, but because they donât feel like one.
This oddity always confused me. I mean, the Voltron paladins sort of act like a family sometimes, but other times they act like theyâre just barely acquaintances.
And it didnât hit me why the paladins calling themselves âfamilyâ felt so weird to me, until I began rewatching Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles.
Now, for the people who havenât watch TMNT, the characters have surprisingly similar dynamics with Voltron. Rise of the TMNT actually has an INCREDIBLE amount of similarities with Voltron, but thatâs actually not the only TMNT show Iâm gonna be talking about.
Now, the main difference between Voltron and TMNT in my mind, is that the Voltron team feels like close friends, while the TMNT team feels like genuine family. There are 2 main reasons for why Voltron just utterly fails at trying to create a familial relationship between the paladins (not including Allura) and Iâm gonna try my best to explain them:
1. The paladins didnât all know each other before the show starts. Now this usually wouldnât be a big deal when trying to establish something like found family, but what really destroys the whole âfamilyâ idea, is that you have Lance, Hunk, and Pidge, who know each other as friends, and Keith and Shiro, who are very very close. So already, the show is giving two characters a HUGE head start over the others, and this automatically makes these characters stand out from the âfamilyâ the show is trying to push. In turn, this makes Lance, Hunk, and Pidge less important in the eyes of the audience. To remedy this, the writers tried to give each of these characters families that they cared about/wanted to get back to, so theyâd all have the sort of âhead startâ Keith and Shiro had, but it just doesnât work. Mostly because Keith and Shiro are both paladins and therefore both apart of the Voltron âfamilyâ. What Iâm trying to say is that the show automatically makes the audience view Keith and Shiro as âthe important ones who are much closerâ, which makes incorporating them into a found family just not work.
Looking over at TMNT, they donât have this problem, and thatâs mainly because ALL of the turtles have a strong bond with their mentor figure, Splinter, and they all are close to each other. Every TMNT show goes out of its way to show this. Sure, Splinter may talk to Leo more, or Raph may get mad at Mikey more than the others, but itâs very clear that they all care for one another the same amount. I mean, you donât see TMNT fans thinking that Leo cared about Splinter more than Raph or Mikey or Donnie. No, they all care, and the audience is able to understand this even with limited screen time between Splinter and the turtles, because the TMNT shows set a precedent that the TMNT and Splinter not only knew, but already loved each other before the show began. Now, Iâm not saying that the Voltron team shouldâve know each other and already have been close with one another before the show started. Found family is often with people who have just met. The problem arose when they had Keith and Shiro be much closer to each other before the show started, than to the other paladins. You canât do that when youâre making found family. You have to have them all know each other before hand, or not. Because if you do what Voltron did, then you just end up with a relationship that feels like a dad favoring one child over the others. This obviously leaves a bad taste in many peopleâs mouths, so people decide to ignore it and focus more on a âfriendâ dynamic, as someone liking one friend more than the others is much more palatable to watch than a father liking one child over the other.
2. Voltron just doesnât SHOW the paladins being a family. The Voltron writers fell into a pretty deep âtell, donât showâ hole when they started to refer to the paladins as family. They tell and tell and tell you that the paladins are family, but there isnât any displays of it; subtle or otherwise. It just makes the audience clock out on the whole âfamilyâ idea. Like, characters bickering with each other once in a blue moon isnât them âacting like a familyâ.
Looking back to TMNT, it is very clearly shown from the first few episode of every iteration that these characters are family. Again, this doesnât need to be the case, as found family tropes usually take a while to establish the main family, but youâd expect Voltron to start doing it by season 3. Now, what do I mean by âvery clearly shownâ? Well, first of all, characters argue, but not the mean spirited arguing that Voltron characters participate in, in the guise of âteasingâ. No, they just genuinely banter with each other. They also care about each other in small ways. I mean, look up any âLeo being a momâ compilation on YouTube and youâll know what I mean. Often youâll see the turtles making food for each other, or messing around with skateboards in the lair together. When characters talk, itâs like they know each other better than the audience knows them. They mess with each other, but when things go south, they help each other out and, most importantly, APOLOGIZE/MAKE UP FOR IT (This is a HUGE pet peeve of mine when it comes to Voltron). An example of this is in the TMNT 2012 episode where Mikey becomes friends with Chris Bradford. Raph, Leo, and Donnie (mostly Raph) kinda make fun of him for it, but when Bradford nearly kills Mikey, they are all there to make sure heâs safe. Raph even talks to Mikey directly at the end, letting him know heâs a great guy, who Bradford didnât deserve to even be friends with.
The utter lack of âshowâ in Voltron makes characters look like absolute jerks when the writers try to make them bicker the way the turtles (aka siblings) do. For example, that one scene when Lance is upset that Allura and Lotor are hanging out together. Pidge and Hunk make fun of him for it, and it feels so wrong. And itâs because they didnât earn that teasing. It also feels wrong because even siblings wouldnât go that far. I mean, compare this to TMNT 2012, in which even Raph eases up on Donnie about having a crush on April, after he teased him. Like, ya, some teasing may happen, but it, firstly, has to feel like itâs actual sibling banter, and, secondly, has to have the ones teasing make up for it later. Pidge and Hunk donât do this. They leave Lance absolutely destitute, and they couldnât care less. I honestly donât think any of the paladins apologize to Lance for all the times they shit on him, except for Shiro. This approach in turn makes the paladins feel like friends that are kind of jerks, rather than family that occasionally goes too far.
These 2 main points come together to create a relationship between the paladins that feels like good friends at best, and bitter acquaintances at worst.
Anyway, I just needed to get this off my chest and put it into words. Because it has been BUGGING me. Let me know if you agree, or have any points youâd like to add! Iâm sure there are other reasons the paladins donât feel like family
#Look at Guardians of the Galaxy if you want to know what Voltron SHOULDVE been#like they actually act like FAMILY family#voltron#voltron legendary defender#Vld#tmnt#teenage mutant ninja turtles#tmnt 2012#tmnt 2003#rise of the teenage mutant ninja turtles#rottmnt#tmnt 1987#lance mcclain#keith kogane#pidge gunderson#katie holt#hunk garrett#raphael#Leonardo#donatello#michelangelo#feel free to add more points on to this lol#cause I KNOW they exist#just canât think of them rn#I did this very fast please excuse the dog shit writing#I just wrote family so much it doesnât sound like a word anymore
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Handing out a pamphlet to any mangahood fans giving the 2003 anime a shot:
Ed and Al (and Hohenheim) are not Xerxian. In fact there is no Xerxes. Don't interpret these characters through that lens. Similarly, Xing has no relevance here (it's a single line in a discussion of Amestrian geopolitics, and that's it)
Ed does not metaphysically supply Al's body with energy and nutrients. That's not how the Gate works here
Alchemy itself is handled differently from the manga and Brotherhood
This version of the story will not coddle or spoonfeed you. You will have to deal with complex themes and upsetting scenes, and you will have to pay attention to what's going on in order to understand and interpret the story and characters
In fact, if you're so inclined, repeat watches will absolutely reveal new layers to the pathos, mysteries, and themes presented, and answer questions you will still have after your first watch
I am begging you not to take everything at face value. The characters are not treated as infallible encyclopedias nor are they dispensers of morality lessons. They are treated like people. In that they are flawed, they are not omniscient therefore they do not have Complete Objective Knowledge over their own lives and the world, and the world/other characters will contradict and challenge them regularly
To put a finer point on the above: Don't take Ed and Al's perspectives as gospel. They are not the arbiters of righteousness who shine the light of Goodness and Reason onto the rest of the cast, they are orphaned teens scraping by in world that, by its nature, looms larger than themselves
Romance is not a big element here. You will not be eating well from the Edwin and Royai troughs this go-around
In mangahood Scar was right in killing state alchemists, but prepare yourself for: Scar was right in killing state alchemists, AND he never relents in being anti-military, AND he escalates that fight to magnificent proportions. Your fears about the "scary racialized radical who doesn't reform to your side nor assuages your guilt for the gains of imperialism you enjoy" are made real in 03
No doubt you've already heard that homunculi work differently in the 2003 anime. But to emphasize one of those major differences: the homunculi are not split aspects of one guy. They are all separate, unrelated, individuals
The characters shared between mangahood and the 2003 anime are, ultimately, not the same characters. Character design and some basal core traits link them to the manga, but their backstories, choices, character growth, and even their perspectives end up completely different from the source material
#there's probably more i could add but i feel like it's a solid primer#of course this is less an actual attempt at making a resource for new fma 2003 watchers and more#a commentary on seeing mangahoods liveblogging their experiences watching 03 and what#expectations from the manga/brotherhood they're bringing to 2003 which leaves them rather confused#i consider this to be spoiler-free (especially the first 2 points) so it could work as a primer lol#fma#fma 03#fmab#mine#meta
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[Images description: Twelve pictures of Star Trek actors. The phrase "thank you for being both amazing actors and amazing people" is written across most of the images one word at a time, except for the two images in the middle. The middle images are of William Shatner, reading "not you!" and Robert Beltran, reading "or you for that matter". The actors in the other images are George Takei, René Auberjonois, DeForest Kelley, Gates McFadden, Wil Wheaton, Kate Mulgrew, Patrick Stewart, Siddig El Fadil (aka Alexander Siddig), Nichelle Nichols and Leonard Nimoy. End image description.]
Non exhaustive list of course. Many more such cases, in fact feel free to add
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#i considered putting sid's full name in the image description but i felt that might complicate things for screen reader users#but just so it's in the post i'll put it in the tags#siddig el tahir el fadil el siddig abdurrahman mohammed ahmed abdel karim el mahdi#yes i did copy paste it my memory is shit. i can't even remember my own full name...#(i gave myself like five different middle names at one point because if i'm already changing my name for trans reasons i might as well have#fun with it right but eventually i stopped using them because i literally kept forgetting my own name and had to look it up)#(i still have the note btw and since it seems i won't legally be using that last name anyway (nor any of the middle names) feel free to ask#anyway#star trek#not star trek#(schrödinger's post lol)#oh!!! i forgot one version of sid's name!! here goes#۔ۯÙÙÙ Ű§Ù۷ۧÙ۱ ۧÙÙŰ§Ű¶Ù Ű§Ù۔ۯÙÙÙ ŰčۚۯۧÙ۱ŰÙ
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the only point guard I've ever known... to share a backcourt with.......... an honor to be his two guard for as long as I have.......... we know each other's spots, where we want the ball........... maybe one day he can be one and I can be two that'd be nice........... I've been living in this guy's shadow for a decade it's been nice we got some hardware to show for it.......... #lifeintheshadows #itsrealniceactually............. he's like the sun burning everything in his path giving us life...................
#going through it today#blaming all of you on my dash#these are all off the top of my head btw#he's probably said more but i don't have the energy to look now..... feel free to add#when your point guard is also your soulmate lol right fellas
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playing so much eo luminous the last few days i tetris effecting fish swimming in the corners of my vision at all times.
#i will probably write more in depth how i feel abt it but basically what i expected from initial trailer. not a fifty dollar game but i am#autistic and have been grinding the event map i want to crack top 100#at 160 now. uhm it sure is a game. there are no jellyfish in the game i didnt realize tilsomeone on reddit pointed it out lol#crazy. was talking to my brother abt it and he compared it to starfield which like. mmhm.#ive literally only played the event map i got the game a week late so like i have not experienced the actual generation part but still.#but like. slow collectathon mixed w pokemon snap free roam and random ppl swimming in circles w me is fun enough i will get my moneys worth#add seals to the game. i dont expect a giant content update but i would like a like. heres another fifty animals w like seals and waterbird#and jellyfish yknow. i dont expect a true story mode or even an aquarium mode (i never cared abt the aq in the original games so idc either#way) but i do hope for like some more types of spawn in formations and then more animals. pipe dream is zoom in spots but idk how possible#that is w the shared maps. though i figure its no diff than ppl freezing in place for the cutscenes.#i will write out my oficial thoughts probably next week but for now i will no life this game etc etc. yay#went and typed in the code for the softlock item from reddit so i am just going and starting to collect salvage the last hour#so its fun to read item descriptions
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Um. If the mushrooms grow out of broken skin. And even minor wounds would theoretically sprout mushrooms even if theyâd b easy enough to clear away. Do u think discos would b able to get a tattoo or would it go away with the mushrooms
#the way to clear them out of the area is like. make the area hostile or smth. itâs so far from an exact science mawris just figured out that#after breaking off enough eventually mushrooms stop growing in the area. and jouren is trying to recreate it. and I wanna know if discos#fun sea serpent tat on her arm would b feasible or if#âŠâŠ..stares at the word if for so long that I forgot what I was saying#if u get the point tho feel free to add input#bc thereâs always more detail to add to the random ass lore lol
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I have a lot of thoughts about ai and most of them are sad
#if there was a child named Ai and she was learning to write and draw then duh. wed let her learn from us to make her own stuff. and even if#one day she ended up getting a job i could have gotten instead of me#i wouldnt be mad. but if she kept cutting up others work and pasting it back together without creditting then thats where the line was drawn#and if there were thousands of her taking thousands of jobs and doing them shittily and putting thousands of people out of work and#*be pretty fucking mad at her especially since she didnt need the jobs herself#but thats the thing. shes still just a kid. a kid whos learning and whos not perfect yet and corporations are making her do shitty shitty#stuff that she didnt want to do#because i mean at this point ai is functionally just algorithms its not its own people. but if its ever truly Artificially Generated People.#then#.... ugh. will they be treated as people. i need to have a deep conversation with an ai at some point about this lol#but like. if ai was designed and produced exclusively by me and other small creators. and we taught her how to draw and write using our own#skill and textbooks and stuff. and she wasnt corporately controlled and abused.#and when people asked about who taught her to draw she could say My Mom Taught Me!#would yall love her?#because i want to love ai so much. i want anything truly sentient to feel loved and appreciated and i want them to do good#but i dont want to support corporations being dicks more yknow??#this isnt too eloquent and theres a fuck ton more nuance and please. please dont fuss at me. if you actually have something to add feel free#ai#corporate corruption#ibthink thats an appropriate tag#because this does tie into the How Do You Build A Pipe Bomb principal#ai discussion#i think theres a scale between Algorithm and Kindergartener and i dont know how to feel about it#cursing in tags#~ chevy
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Professional editor here đđœ piping in to say that that sentence is 100% grammatically correct, but it could use a pair of em dashes (if following U.S. English standards) or en dashes (if following U.K. English standards) to break up that interior monologue or emphasised exclamation (whichever one you intended it to be) as an interjection/interruption inserted within the main sentence. It would help your readersâ clarity and understanding, and therefore, boost their enjoyment levels too!
So, yeah, it still stands that Englishâs grammar sphere is extremely flexible, twistable, stretchable, flammable, combustible, slice-and-diceable, and however the fuck else you wanna abuse it to your selfish satisfaction! You just gotta make sure your overall creation is still readable, parseable, legible, decipherable, understandable, and therefore, enjoyableâyou know?
Unique author voices are completely different from grammatical errors and linguistic inaccuracies. The former is to be cherished! Treasured! Praised! Uplifted! Celebrated until the end of time! Meanwhile, the latter is to be reduced to a minimum, because we donât need them if they donât serve a very intentional purpose. A trained eye will be able to distinguish this without problem, which is indeed why human editors like me and my friends arenât that easily replaced by AIâthank you very much!âbut this elephantine task certainly takes on a differently flavoured toll when an author self-edits their own writing, especially if they donât have years of specialised knowledge and training in the art of editing. (And trust me, it is a wholly different and just as serious of a skillset as the writing part itself.)
Now, whether or not you plan to work with a trusted professional editor later on is up to you to decide (I mean, itâs obviously recommended, but the choice is still in your hands; and even if you do hire editors, the final choice to accept or reject their suggestions is also still in your hands), but here are a few things to keep in mind during your self-editing rounds:
Trust yourself, first and foremost! Youâre the one who understands your story best. If something strongly resonates with you, keep it in. At the very least, itâd add a touch of you and your humanity to your creation, if nothing else.
Having your own unique voice is a good thing. You should want more of it, and no one should ever try to kill it off of youânot even yourself. Stay authentic to yourself, explore whatever interests you, and keep honing your storytelling voice(s) through practice, practice, practiceâno matter how you think it âstands out againstâ or âblends in withâ or âdoesnât hold a candle toâ or âbastardisesâ other peopleâs creations youâve interacted with. Your voice is solely yours, and that is so, so valuable.
If you heavily suspect something contains a technical error, check with reputable sources, like some bigwig dictionaryâs example sentences section, or whichever style guide youâve chosen as your patron saint, or various editor(ial)sâ blog posts and articles, or Q&A/AMA sessions with editors or linguists, or you could try your luck and slide into their DMs if you have a particular someone you admire, or whatever combination of those options you fancy the most.
If youâve heard or read someone irl (including yourself) say those words or that phrase/sentence/monologue before, then itâs probably fine, dude.
For hearing folks: Say it aloud. Use various text-to-speech settings to read it aloud to you. Have your friend or relative read it aloud. Does anything feel wonky, somehow? Does anything need a sprinkle of pizzazz to liven up the dead air? Do these words fit the mood youâre currently feeling during this scene? Did your companion stutter at any point?
Let your writs marinate alone for as long as you can afford to. Forget about it. Then, come back to it with a fresh perspectiveânot one of an authorâs nor an editorâs, but pretend you are a reader who is reading some anonymous writerâs work with the intention of simply sinking into the read and enjoying whatever is served.
The world isnât divided into âgrammatically correctâ and âgrammatically incorrectâ. There are many other variables to composing, writing, editing, proofreading, and speaking. If you have the time and headspace to learn about them, do so. Finding the proper terminologies to describe your ideas and experiences will benefit you with great satisfaction.
Punctuation marks, symbols, spacings, margins, line breaks, paragraph breaks, scene breaks, chapter breaks, placements, pacing, etc. are difficult and time-consuming for us copy editors too. Donât beat yourself up for struggling with these technical details, but also, donât be so afraid of them that you omit them entirely from your writs. Instead, shift your energy and attention to creating and maintaining your very own authorâs style sheet, which you can then pass on to your editor to upgrade and tidy up for you as you kick back and relax, but it can certainly help ease your own writing process if youâve sketched up your own guide for yourself.
Editing any piece of workâfiction or non-fiction or any hybrid of themâshould always prioritise the authorâs original vision and goals above all else. Donât treat it like grading schoolwork with checks and crosses and /100 scores. There is no right and wrong to the art of writing. Why did you start writing in the first place? What do you want to explore and express in your crafts? What do you want your readers to get from your story? How do you want them to feel about your characters? What message are you trying to tell, and why is it important? Do you want to impress people more with your substance or your style? Linguistic unorthodoxy be damned; if your quirky choice gets the point across with all the right vibes and nuances ticked off, then go for it!
Remember that language is constantly evolving⊠as it should! What was once regarded as âincorrectâ a century ago could easily be the norm nowadays. If youâve decided to become the progenitor of a new trend, then you better own up to it! Be unapologetically compelling.
Remember that there is always a solution/answer to your confusion/curiosity. Even if you donât find what youâre looking for right now, thereâs still hope. Either youâll find clarity when you least expect it, or youâll create homemade organic closure for yourself, one way or another. The possibilities are endless. What matters most is to trust the process and never give up on yourself!
one of my worst writing sins is abusing my power to create compound words. i cannot write the sentence "The sun shone as bright as honey that afternoon." no. that's boring. "The sun was honey-bright that afternoon" however? yes. that sentence is dope as fuck. i do not care if "honey-bright" is a word in the english dictionary. i do not care if the sentence is grammatically correct. i will not change. i will not correct my erred ways. the laws of the english language are mine.
#thatâs it for now lol. feel free to chime in if you have more points to add!#writing advice#writing tips#writing tips for you guys#writing inspiration#writing help#rp help#writing & editing#copy-editing#self-editing#editing tips#mindset#friendly reminders#grammar#punctuation#compound words#English language#writeblr#writerblr#reblog + commentary#(I spent like 3 hours writing this reblog⊠WhoopsâŠ)
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As soon as my arm recovers from the aches it'll be all over for that bowling alley
#speculation nation#i wanna WINNNNNNNNN#i know the point of this class is to actually learn the technique to bowl better#but ive always bowled by attacking it with unparalleled ferocity#i bowled an 81 on Wednesday but only a 68 today bc he taught us proper form and it kept messing me up#doesnt feel natural yet. i'll keep working at it tho bc itll hopefully give me control And power. once i can do it consistently.#it was so funny. first round i got 0 points. second round i got only 3. third round i got a strike.#it was that moment where i was like 'oh Hey maybe theres something to this form shit after all'#then i proceeded to be generally mediocre bc i cant do it consistently yet.#BUT WHEN I CAN... i will be a menace. im going to absolutely cream anyone i go bowling with.#my scores better be 100+ or better by the end of the semester. i can do it. i know i can.#the thing about me is that i have great fuckin dexterity and also im stubborn.#im not too good on the power component bc of my shitty twig arms and tiny little fingers.#but if i can maximize Control.... then that's basically as good as power. even if it's not as showy.#YOU CANT ARGUE WITH RESULTS!!!!!!!! and im gonna make sure i get them.#might just take up my teacher on that unlimited free bowling times thing. for practicing. if i end up with the time.#bc im in the class i can just Bowl unlimited games within those designated 2 hour time spans. tho i do have to pay for shoe rental.#not entirely sure how that works actually. like do i just show them my id?? is my name on a list???#ill also be the loser alone in the bowling alley just goin at it for ages but like#you gotta get better somehow. and im certainly not planning on joining any competitive bowling shit#but the idea of just absolutely creaming anyone i go bowling with for the rest of time... it delights me.#it will add to my allure. when ur out bowling and someone is rly good at bowling well now that's impressive. that's Cool.#i wanna be cool. i wanna be good at bowling. might as well take advantage of this damn class to get there.#i can go higher.... i can get up to 120..... maybe More......#minimum goal of 100. but if i hit that before the semester's over then im gonna shoot higher. im gonna aim for the MOOOOOOOOOON#or whatever arbitrary goal i decide to set lol#but first things first. resting my arm. cringefail little loser cant roll a ball 19 times in a day without hurting đđđ#(19 instead of 20. cause of the 1 strike i got đđ)
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Ways I can think of that âDanDaDanâ differs from other shonen series:
* Female MC is as important as male MC
* Canon romance gets consistent development through the series. I think thatâs part of the reason why the MC ships with the rivals (Aira, Jiji) arenât as popular with the fandom for once. The main ship is actually getting good development, so the fanbase doesnât have to make up headcanons to fill in the space.
* Flips the found family trope on its head by having the main group despise new people whenever they show up and they even actively try to kick them out. The new people only end up staying because they keep lingering around to the point that the main group just gives up and lets them stay.
* The rivals arenât emo or angst-ridden. Aira is a delusional tryhard popular girl while Jiji is a himbo drama queen. Iâd even go as far to say that the MCs are the ones who are emo and angst-ridden.
* Supporting cast is more than just important, they become integral to the story. Iâd say that the further you read into DanDaDan, the more it becomes an ensemble cast where everyone is a protagonist in their own right.
* World-building is all over the place, but in a good way. Most other shonen are pretty consistent with what kind of world their characters live in. MHA is superhero-based, Naruto is ninjas and magic, Bleach is spirits, and so on. DanDaDan feels like the author just throws whatever cool shit they can think of into the story. Thatâs actually the reason why I wrote in a different post that DanDaDan reminds me more of Marvel/DC than any other shonen series, it manages to capture the catch-all insanity of those comics.
* Doesnât rely on hidden power-ups. The main characters either have to outsmart the villains or they have to train to get better with the powers they already have.
* The pervert comic relief guy is actually endearing for once. Not because of his pervert tendencies, but because heâs so oblivious to how socially inept he is that itâs kind of funny. This is gonna sound strange, but he sorta reminds me of Thor in Thor Ragnarok. Full of himself and oblivious to how dumb he can be. Heâs Thor without the good looks lol.
* Flips the ânerdy outcast loser somehow gets a haremâ trope. Instead of making Okarun cooler than how he actually is, the story emphasizes that the women who fall for Okarun are as weird as him. Momo is a weird outcast, Aira has main character syndrome, Vamola doesnât understand how to human because sheâs literally not one, Rin thought Okarun was a vampire (and wanted him to be).
* Flips the âelderly figure in charge of the teenagersâ trope. I donât really get motherly figure vibes from Seiko Ayase, I get more âcool wine aunt who is stuck with her nieceâ vibes. In fact, there was the arc where Okarun showed up to her in spirit mode to get her help with fighting off the alien invasion and Seikoâs response was, âWell, Iâm not in the area and I have other shit to do, so you kids figure it out.â
* The series takes the piss out of the trope of mystical/magical items that the group acquired to get their powers. I meanâŠthe main mystical MacGuffin in the series are Okarunâs balls.
* Okarun was about to go into an âIâm weak / I wish I was stronger / I want to get stronger for my friendsâ breakdown, but Turbo Granny told him to shut up and keep fighting.
* Not afraid to put the âcool girlâ in as many funny situations as possible. Off the top of my head, the series built up Momo as this cool, tough girl who doesnât take shit from anyoneâŠthen several chapters later, Okarun found out she got a job at a maid cafe.
(Feel free to add to the list!)
#dandadan#dan da dan#dandadan anime#dandadan manga#momo ayase#ayase momo#okarun#ken takakura#takakura ken#momokarun#momo x okarun#aira shiratori#shiratori aira#jiji#jin enjoji#kinta sakata#sakata kinta#vamola#bamora#rin sawaki#sawaki rin#seiko ayase#granny seiko#turbo granny#dandadan spoilers#dan da dan spoilers#manga spoilers#dandadan momo#dandadan okarun#evil eye
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Art style breakdown /tutorial(??)
Some friends asked so here we go : disclaimer im bad at explaining (so feel free to send an ask or smth)
Final art (long read so theres a timelapse at the end)
If its not for something important (commissions), i dont usually make a lineart for a drawing but just clean up the sketch , it wont be used anyway
I usually separate them by colors , mostly so i can Alpha lock them and not worry about coloring over parts
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When coloring i use a soft airbrush to have gradients within the shading , so its not one solid color . How i shade is very blocky , lots of triangles lol (if im using CSP i love using the lasso fill tool ) but there are parts especially in the skin where I keep it smooth and blended, usually nose and cheek area . Using an asaro head is usually a good start to learning how to shade faces with planes in mind
Depends on the character, but I like adding shadows on the lashes/brows itself , make it look solid and 3d , it makes the eyes pop more imo
Using multiply layer to make the shadows darker for more contrast
At some point Iâd merge everything together so i can just paint in one layer, easier to fix things with liquify too ; if im in CSP i keep the separate layers in one folder just in case i need em later but i cant really do that in Procreate cos of layer limits
This is the part where i make the shading more painterly .,To make the shading look sharper , i like adding lines on the edges .
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The fun part : adding the âš
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This is the part where I add textures , either from texture images or with screentone/hatching brushes. This is also around the part where i add the characterâs accessories and stuff like scars and freckles (its just easier to add smaller things near the end than having them accidentally painted over at the start)
Whenever I feel like the drawing looks too much of a similar shade / temperature , I use a gradient map+layer effects (masked) on parts to give it variety . Technically you can do this by just having a layer effect on and manually adding colors but gradient maps make me go âooooh didnt think of that color there â
CSP also has a posterization filter that i like using when i feel like some part looks too smooth to me.
I sometimes add in sketchy lines , and seeing how cool it looks in Marvel Rivals art ive been adding it more lol
Artists that influenced me are : Nesskain, Toni Infante , Valorantâs 2d art(their main artist is Suke) ,Arcane , Spiderverse and the most recent one ive been obsessing over is Marvel Rivals ( its got everything i want my art to be when it grows older lmao )
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Ahh i don't know if it's okay to req more than one thing đđ but i love your art so- consider this a req for if you're not getting enough other req asks!!! I also don't know what all you want to draw for these or if they have to involve Joel but!!
I would love to see an Impulse of the SV variety in your style :0 i particularly love Last Life Impulse (the wither duo my beloved) but any Impulse would do!!
If you want to involve Joel, well, they're neighbours with a similar theme on HC of course, and in Last Life they both at different points were Grian's closest murderbuddies <3 so maybe that could serve as inspo
SORRY FOR THE LONG ASK your art style is awesome remember to hydrate aaa-
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they're gossiping at the soup shop about Grian lol
no it's really fine :) sorry i took a long time! and ty ofr the rq and the compliments!!! also ty for letting me add joel lol
(i hope my impulse design looks alright!)
ps feel free to send me reqs! i'm always happy to get em
#i swear i'm not addicted to drawing joel#i can stop anytime i want#hahahahaha i swear#but i do find it funny how almost all my asks involve joel#even in a small itsy bitsy way when they ask me to draw other people lol#like an incentive#so ty all for indulging me!#hermitcraft#smallishbeans#joel smallishbeans#hermitblr#life series#trafficblr#life smp#impulsesv#impulse fanart
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quinn rlly is hairy, iâm imagining him pressing kisses all over your face and you squirming because it tickles đ
he's like a lil chewbacca and i just know heâd get so much satisfaction out of making you giggle. especially if he has a beard like he does right now lol
Quinnâs lips graze your temple, soft and warm, but itâs the scruff that catches you off guard. Itâs not rough enough to hurt, but just enough to scratch lightly against your skin, the sensation pulling an involuntary squirm from you.
You try to stay still, biting back the smile tugging at your lips because itâs sweet â heâs sweet âand you donât want to ruin the moment. But then he shifts, his kisses drifting lower, brushing over your cheekbone, and his cheek presses against yours, the bristles of his beard tickling in a way that has you flinching before you can stop yourself.
âQuinn,â you laugh, turning your head away, the sound bubbling out of you before you can smother it. Itâs that light, airy kind of laughter, the kind that spills out when youâre caught off guard.
He doesnât stop, though. Of course he doesnât. Instead, his arm tightens around your waist, pulling you flush against him like heâs determined to keep you right there.
âWhat?â he asks, his tone so innocent itâs almost believable, but you can feel the grin stretching across his lips as he drags them just below your ear. Itâs a mix of soft lips and rough scruff, each kiss purposeful, each nuzzle more playful than the last.
âStop,â you squeal, twisting in his hold, but it only makes him more determined.
His other hand finds your back, holding you firmly in place as he nuzzles closer, his cheek brushing against yours with exaggerated slowness, dragging his scruff deliberately, and itâs enough to make you gasp and squirm harder, your laughter spilling out freely now.
âYou donât want my kisses now?â he teases, his voice low and playful, the warmth of his breath brushing against the shell of your ear. He leans in closer, nuzzling against you like heâs doing it just to make you laugh harder.
âNot when they feel like this,â you gasp between peals of laughter, your hands weakly pushing at his chest, though the effort is half-hearted at best.
He chuckles, his lips finding the curve of your neck next. The kiss is slow, deliberate, and his beard grazes the sensitive skin there, sending a sharp jolt through you. You yelp, burying your face in his shoulder as your laughter dissolves into helpless giggles.
âQuinn, Iâm serious,â you whine, your voice wobbling so much it undermines the protest entirely.
âAre you?â he murmurs, the words warm and teasing as his lips brush along your jaw. Another kiss lands there â purposeful and just ticklish enough to make you squirm all over again. Heâs clearly revelling in it, the way his laughter blends with yours, low and rumbling against your skin. âYou always say my beard is sexy,â he points out, his voice dripping with mock innocence, as if heâs only following orders.
âSexy, yes,â you gasp, âticklish, no.â
He grins, utterly unrepentant, and presses another kiss just below your ear, the scruff grazing that one spot he knows you canât handle. You shriek, dissolving into another fit of giggles, and his hand slides to your back, holding you steady against him like heâs not letting you escape until heâs had his fun. He doubles down, his lips brushing just behind your ear this time â deliberate and slow â where he knows itâll tickle the most, and the sensation is instant.
âIt tickles," you gasp, voice breaking into another fit of giggles.
âDoes it?â he murmurs, the teasing lilt in his voice unmistakable. His breath is warm against your neck, his lips skimming your skin again as he adds, âI had no idea,â feigning innocence even as his grin presses into you.
You twist, trying to squirm free, but itâs useless. Heâs got one arm firmly around your back, holding you impossibly close, and his other hand slides up to cradle your jaw as his lips travel to just under it. The scruff grazes against the soft skin there, and you dissolve completely, your laughter spilling into his shirt as you cling to him, helpless against his playful onslaught.
By the time he finally pulls back, youâre breathless, your face buried in his chest as you try to catch your breath. His thumb continues its lazy pattern on your back, soothing in contrast to how playful heâd been just seconds ago. You peek up at him and heâs grinning, so smug, his eyes bright with amusement.
You roll your eyes, trying to muster up some indignation, but the truth is, you donât mind. Not one bit.
âYouâre the worst,â you mumble, though your tone lacks any real bite.
âMe?â he replies, arching a brow with exaggerated offense. âIâm just trying to show you some love.â He shrugs casually, his voice dipped in that familiar teasing lilt that always makes you weak.
Then he leans in again, his lips brushing yours in a kiss thatâs soft and sweet, and yet, his beard lingers â deliberate, tickling your upper lip in a way that makes your body jolt slightly. A shiver runs down your spine, and you groan against his mouth, though the smile pulling at your lips betrays any attempt to sound annoyed.
âItâs distracting,â you mumble against him, the words half-lost in the closeness between you.
But instead of pulling away, you close the space again, your lips finding his with ease. This time, the kiss stretches, unhurried and tender, and and thereâs something so easy about the way he matches you, letting it deepen just enough to leave your pulse fluttering.
When he finally pulls back, itâs his turn to laugh â a warm, low sound that vibrates through his chest. His thumb brushes lightly against your jaw, the motion mirroring the gentle patterns his hand is tracing across your back, as if holding on for just a little longer.
âGuess youâll just have to deal with it,â he says, his grin equal parts smug and affectionate. He leans in one last time, pressing a lingering kiss to your lips, so gentle it makes your breath hitch.
And honestly? You think you could deal with it forever.
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the fake princess
pairing: reincarnated male reader x yandere prince oc
fic includes: arranged marriage, cross dressing, reader's death (briefly mentioned), Dom to sub bottom male reader, rough sex, rimming 2x, gruwhdbwb will add more in the morning
note: THIS IS NOT FINISHED!! tumblr is rlly messing me up by posting my work earlier whenever i save my draft lol. feel free to read as i write the ending. reader is male! a male!! a certain character will be calling him "lady" for the plot!! i wont spoil much but please keep that in mind ;; this is messy lmao
poor you were just on the way back to your apartment after a barbeque party with your friendsâ until a drunk man grabbed you from the dark alley way and stabbed you in the stomach and pussied out after he realized what he did.
is this how you die? fuck, he couldve do you a favour by taking you out in one go and not run away?? loser behaviour.
you laid down in your own blood in the dimly lit alley way, your vision slowly getting blurry as your surrounding turns into a blur of colours and into nothing.
before slipping into darkness, you heard a loud voice shouting out your name. its too late, bootlicking shitfuck.
you opened your eyes by the sound of bird chipping, you stared up at the bright blue sky accompanied by someone with dark brown hair and green eyes staring back at you.
"Lady Amador.. it's time to go back to the palace. the prince is looking foward for you during lunch time."
who the fuck is lady amador, and why are they wearing a maid outfit?
sitting up, you take note of the grass underneath you instead of the rough concrete floor from earlier- are you hallucinating to the point youre in this nice garden..? huh, why are you wearing a dress, did a creep kidnapped you and dress you in one of their grandma's dresses?!
panicking, you got up towards the pond and looked into your own reflection. you still looked the same as before, you cant say the same since your hair looked much longer and the light makeup on your face.
lady amador.. prince?? garden.. holy- is that a palace behind you?! whats going on?!
before you could brainstorm any longer, the person from earlier waved their hand in front of you, catching your attention. "lady amador, its time to go. prince sebastian is looking for you."
prince sebastian? sebastian..
slowly, everything clicked to you, did you really reincarnated as one of the characters in the novel "The Villainess's Ultimate Plan!" holy shit.
you touched your face, and then looked into the pond again, that face..
the villainess younger brother?!
the one who disguised as the protagonist.. the one that planned the entire scheme to assassinate the crown prince but end up getting beheaded one day after the wedding night?!
with that information, your vision fade into black once again.
"My lady?!"
jerking awake, you hunched over, clasping a hand against your face. you slowly takes a few deep breathe, you slowly brought your hand away.
you looked to your side, the same person from earlier is standing next to you with a worried expression. not only them, a man with bright gold hair is sitting on a chair nearby reading a book.
prince fucking sebastian. the man that you're supposed to kill during you and the prince's wedding night.
he looked up from his book and walked up to you, you flinched away when he raised his hand, he stopped his action before he promptly caressing your face.
"you, please step out of Lady Penelope's room." he ordered the person (the maid maybe?), and they complied.
there was an awkward silence in the room, he was still holding your face, you looked at the side, scared to hold any eye contact with the man in front of you.
"look at me." he said in a stern voice, like a mom scolding her child.
so you did, afraid of any consequences. (since he was the same man that's willing to destroy the kingdom for your supposed sister.)
he let go of your face before sitting onto the side of the bed, his face is blank,, as if he dont care about you, but the worried tone in his voice said otherwise.
"y/n." you jumped at the name, how did he know your name- wasnt he supposed to call you by your sister's name ?! before you can say amything, he cut you off.
"..i was waiting for you at the dining table, but i got the news of you fainting in the garden right after waking up from your nap."
"..i apologize."
he leans in towards you, settling his hands onto your face once again as if to inspect for any injuries, he lets go once again when he saw no visible injuries.
"i know you prefer to be called lady amador when it comes to appearing as your sister, but a maid was here, and i have to convince people we have a medium love with each other.
especially when our wedding night is two days from now on."
what. the story already started?! no- screw that, how did he know you were pretending to be penelope?!
"how did you know im not lady penelope?" you kissed your teeth, gripping onto the comforter, subtly slapping the prince's hand away when he tried to reach for yours.
"lady penelope had sent a letter to me, personally stating about her plan, and we agreed on one term: i keep you safe and she sends me information of the war, simple.
though, i shall say, youre quite the beauty."
you were about to curse at penelope but your ears becoming warm after he said that, he chuckled before getting up of the bed.
"most married or engaged couples have monthly night together, and ours is two night from now on. we wont do anything sensual, do not worry."
"what-"
"see you tomorrow at lunch, dear." he kissed you on the forehead before walking out of your room.
for the next two days, you learnt the person at the garden is your personal maid, Andrea. apparently she found you laying on the ground at the garden (that sebastian built for you.) after you stated you were gonna take a stroll.
you also met your personal knight, William, Penelope's second love interest but was sadly killed when he defended you during your trail.
the three of you got along well, often seen having conversation near the garden or having tea party together. sebastian watched from his office and smiled at the sight of you chatting with Andrea.
william on the other hand,, have been too close to you for his liking. he nearly ripped an important paper when he saw william wiping off some biscuit crumbs from your face- why is he so touchy? Andrea couldve done that using a napkin.
he broke his pen, the black ink soaked his hand and his paper work. did you like damian better than him? why did you become flustered when the knight spoke about something?
should he get rid of him?
how troublesome.
he remembered when a butler and notify him what happened to you. he nearly tear down the entire palace when you didnt wake up for two hours he almost frown when you flinched and move away from him when he reach out to you. the way you were nervous around him,,
he slowly calmed down, reminding himself that you and his night together is tonight. he sighed, he should finish his work first then meet you tonight.
back in your chamber, Andrea and a few other maids helped you to get ready, even helping you to take a bath. you enjoyed the smell of lavender from the soapy water, an old maid massaged your body when you're just soaking inside the bathtub.
the old lady was kind enough to even offer you a drink as she tells you stories of her youth.
after that and when Andrea deemed you 'clean', began to dress you into a white night gown made with the finest silk, the strap of the grown barely hanging on your shoulder. the maid had explained that you have to wear this because 'the prince gave the gown as a gift.'
was he not shameless when his gift includes a set of lingerie?!
you fidget around with the ring, Andrea styled your hair into a loose braid, making sure you look presentable before leading you to the prince's chamber. you insisted that you walked by yourself, so she went back to the maid headquarter.
walking down the dimly lit hallway, no one is wandering except for a few knight patrolling. you soon arrived in front of his room, knocking a few time to make your presence known "sir sebastian-"
before you could finish, sebastian opened the door and grab you by the waist, dragging you into the room.
he lifts you up and carries you to the spacious bed, he gently laid you down and take a whiff of your scent before mumbled out a "you smells nice.."
you looked at him with wide eyes, he was only wearing a robe- your eyes wonders down and sees his toned body that he had clearly worked on. he noticed you and grinned, taking your hand and putting it on his chest
"like what you see?"
if you could kill him right now you would.
instead, you pushed him down the bed, him lying down on the bed and you on top.
"what if i do?
also.. i will be the one in charge tonight."
you leaned down, opening his robe hastily and take one nipple into your lips.
sebastian nearly flipped you over, but he held himself back. he moaned when you grinned onto his crotch, he lightly tugged your hair, leaning in as if asking for a kiss.
you gave him what he wanted, he softly moaned into the kiss, slowly his hand make its way towards your shorts, pulling it down your ankle before he pulls away from the kiss.
he sat up against the bed frame and settled you on his lap, he took in the sight of you wearing his gift- that he had commissioned for it to fit you, and god.
you are so pretty.
hair messy from the kissing session, the collar of the gown was low enough for him to see the lacey bra, a garter designed with silver lining tightly wrapped around your thigh and the underwear that only covered your erected cock-
he want to eat you up,,
so he did.
Sebastian was known to be a beast in bed as he was known in the battlefield,, was what the novel described him.
Unfortunately they were true to their words, his thrust was harsh and deep, creating impacts thats enough to make you cry out.
so much of being gentle?! he even ripped off your outfit, leaving you naked!
he was nice enough to eat you out earlier, even giving you to opportunity to ride his face.
sebastian continue with this harsh pace, holding one of your leg onto his shoulder while another holds your hand. his apologized multiple times while grunting, saying things likes
"im sorry- ah! youre so tight!"
"mm- if you keep moaning like that- hng! i wont be able to slow down-"
"dear.. mmh.. im sorry.. i'll take care of you later-!" im gonna kill you, you handsome bastard!!
you clung onto him on each thrust, it just feel so-! sebastian suddenly changed the position, pushing you on your knees while holding your arms at the back,
"se-sebasti- ah! wait-! mngh!" he holds your hand behind you back tightly to ground you, the position didnt help at all, you couldnt muffle your moans and his dick reach deeper than it did in the previous position.
he panted, letting go of your arms fearing that your arm is sore. he gave an apologetic kiss on your forehead before continuing .
he grunted when you tighten around him, he tried to sooth you by giving stroking your cock, but that only add to the pleasure as you cried out of overstimulation.
you felt like you were melting.
you had climax into sebastian's hand, fuck- why isnt he stopping-?! you continued to cry out before he stuff his finger with your cum into your mouth, you immediately bit onto his fingers to muffle your moans.
his climax came sooner than you expected, he twitched and came inside. he slowed down his thrust, riding out his climax before pulling out.
you panted, thinking its over,, until sebastian gripped your aas and spread them apart revealing your winking hole, dripping out his children batter.
without hesitation, he dive in as if its his last meal, slurping and eating his own cum. you moaned at this, trying to push him away but he stayed still.
"what are you-"
"round 2? gotta have heirs for the future y'know.." he said with a toothy grin, flipping you over your back and pressing you thigh until your ankle reach your chest.
"ah?!"
the knights guarding outside sebastian's chamber looked at each other then looked down, the two of them had an erection from your moaning- tone it down sometimes!
a/n: not proud with this one, will check and edit it in the morning (its 3.56 am right now) goodnight ^_^
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Becoming more productive
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Be a bit delulu... Believe in yourself; every goal you set yourself is archivable!! ;)
Challenging/tedious tasks first!! Get them out of the way!! ew!!
Visualise your goals!! What do you want to archive? How will you feel when you reach your goal? Write everything down, and make a cute vision card on Pinterest. Always helps me stay motivated <33
Make the most of your time. Got some free extra minutes? Start working on something from your to-do list!! :)
Organise your space. Being in a comfortable and inviting environment is so so important to be able to focus properly. Some scented candles, a cute bookshelf, some picturesâŠ
Plan ahead, make a simple to-do list (no more than 7 points)
Fix your sleep schedule⊠I'm still working on this myself⊠once I figure out how I'll definitely make a little guide lolâŠ
Take breaks, especially when studying. Exercise is perfect for relaxing your mind; if you don't love working out - like me... lol - going on a walk is a great option too!! <33
Be aware of procrastination⊠are you procrastinating right now..?
Reward yourself!! Spend some time taking care of yourself, invest time in your hobbies, eat your favourite meal, or get yourself a nice coffee⊠small things that make you feel good :)
As always, Please feel free to add your own suggestions and tips in the comments!! <3
â©â§â*:ă»love ya :*ââ§â©
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big flirt!
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MDNI 18+
summary: your friends force you to go out to a gay bar with them, and ellie buys you a drink.
content/tw: alcohol mention, subtop!ellie, slightly dom/switch!reader, reader and ellie are both drunk, face sitting(r!receiving), tribbing, strap-on(r!recieving), reader is called âgirlâ once or twice, afab!reader, reader is neither masc nor fem, college!ellie and reader, astrophysics major!ellie
notes: i left the ending written in away that i might add another part to this fic! lmk if u want that lol
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âhey, 6 oâclock, thereâs a certified hottie staring at you-â one of your well-meaning friends tells you, motioning (not very) discreetly behind you.
you turn around and your jaw nearly drops. the girl staring at you is stunning, with her dark auburn hair and flannel worn over a wife-beater, sitting at the bar and sipping her drink. you make eye contact with her momentarily, and turn back to your friend, mary, with wide eyes.
mary laughs, âare you gonna go for it?â
your friends had forced you to go out to this gay bar with the intention of meeting new people after a break up that left you a complete wreck. itâd been about 3 months since your ex broke the news that they werenât in love with you anymore, and it made any kind of romantic prospects leave a bitter taste in your mouth till this day. not to mention, youâre wayyy too drunk at this point to be on your A-game with flirting. you make a face and mary groans.
âcome on, dude! sheâs gorgeous, clearly interested, what else could you ask for?â
you make another face, âjust because sheâs staring doesnât mean that sheâs necessarily interested-â
âhow about if sheâs walking over to you right now? does that make her interested?â
you hear someone clear their throat behind you, and you give mary a murderous look before turning to the stranger with a smile.
she gives you a slightly awkward smile in return, âhey. i, um, iâm sorry if this is forward, but could i buy you a drink?â
your stomach is absolutely in knots, but you nod. âyeah, iâd love that.â
the stranger gives you a relieved smile in return, extending her hand to you, âiâm ellie. whatâs your drink?â
you give her your name, â-and just a rum and coke, thank you so much.â
ellieâs clearly pretty drunk as well, which makes you feel a little better. she leads you back over to the spot at the bar she was sitting at, giving you her hand to help as you hop onto the excessively tall bar seats. she gives the bar tender your drink order and orders another whiskey on the rocks for herself.
âso, do you come to this bar a lot?â you ask, and inwardly cringe at yourself. âi basically just asked âso, you come here often?â great.â
ellie makes a so-so motion with her hand, âsometimes, not very often though. i study astrophysics so i donât usually have the free time to deal with a hangover.â
your eyebrows raise and your drunk brain speaks before you think, âwow, smart girl.â
ellieâs cheeks flush a little, and she looks down, âi donât know about that, but iâm really passionate about it, which is more than half the battle, i think.â
you scoff, âplease, youâre literally studying rocket science. you canât convince me that youâre not smart now.â
ellie laughs a little, âokay, then iâll just shut up and take the compliment. thank you.â
the bar tender gives you two your drinks and ellie takes a sip of her own, âso, what do you do?â
you take a sip of your own drink, âiâm a student right now too, iâm actually studying-â
suddenly, you hear a familiar beat in the background, and you stop talking, a (likely goofy) smile growing on your face, âoh my god, i fucking love this song. nicki minaj literally cannot miss.â
ellie laughs brightly at that, raising an eyebrow, âi absolutely fucking agree. do you wanna dance?â
âreally?â
ellie nods, taking a large gulp of her whiskey, âfor sure. i couldnât live with myself knowing i cheated a pretty girl like you out of a dance break.â
you giggle and nod, chugging the rest of your drink faster than you probably should. ellie takes your hand and leads you out the the dance floor where thereâs a large crowd of people dancing together. you pull ellie against you, your actions emboldened by the alcohol in your system. ellie immediately goes to hold on your hips, your bodies moving against each other.
you donât really think to much about how youâre dancing, just letting your body move how it wants to. before you even realize what youâre doing, youâve turned around in ellieâs hold, grinding your ass back against her hips. when you realize whatâs happening, you nearly stop, but when you feel the tight grip of ellieâs hands on your hips and the way sheâs grinding back into you, you relax. you stand back up straight, and wrap your arm up and behind you, holding onto the back of ellieâs head, which is now tucked against your neck. when you feel her lips against your jugular, you inhale sharply, pressing more into her.
you feel her kisses trail down to your shoulder, and you thank your good luck for deciding to wear a tank top. you feel her pelvis digging into your ass, and you canât be sure because the music is so loud, but you swear you hear her moan.
you turn back around in her arms, and before either of you realize whatâs happening, youâre locked into a heated kiss. your arms wrap around her neck, and one of her hands sneaks down from your hips to squeeze your ass. you moan into her mouth, and she takes the opportunity for her tongue to explore your mouth. when you separate, youâre both panting.
âwanna get an uber back to mine?â she asks loudly over the blasting music, and you nod right away.
ââ
the uber driver for the ride back will likely leave ellie with a low rating, thanks to the two of you not being able to detach your mouths from each other for longer than 5 seconds, but you two eventually make it back to ellieâs apartment.
once youâre in her bathroom, you push her back onto her bed between kisses and straddle her. she kisses your neck and chest, pushing your tank top up. you take it off for her and youâre left in your bra. ellie grins and starts kissing the exposed parts of your breasts.
âgod, youâre so fucking pretty-â ellie says as she takes off your bra, immediately latching onto one of your nipples. you moan softly and hold onto her head, your fingers threading through her hair.
you feel her warm tongue smooth over the hardened bud before switching to the other to give it the same attention. as she does, her hands come up to squeeze your tits. sheâs still sucking and nipping gently as she looks up at you, her doe eyes stirring the heat in your belly. when she unlatches; her lips are a little swollen and wet with saliva.
âwhat am i allowed to do? what do you need?â ellie asks, smoothing her hands down your waist and hips.
you shiver slightly, âanything.â
ellie starts kissing your neck again, sucking a hickey into the crook of your neck, âyouâre gonna need to be more detailed then that, doll.â
you bite your lip, your tipsy brain racing, âi need you to fuck me.â
ellie pulls back, a wide grin growing on her face, and she kisses your collarbone. âjesus christ, iâd fucking love too⊠can you sit on my face first?â
your exhale sharply and nod. ellie lies back on the bed and you slide off ellie, kicking off your jeans, leaving your underwear on, before crawling back up ellieâs body.
ellie grips your thighs as you position yourself over her face. âfuck, you smell good⊠you this wet for me, babe?â
you nod again, your cheeks hot.
her smile is a little cocky as she looks up at your face, and licks over the wet fabric of your underwear. your legs jolt a little and you let out a shaky breath.
ellie shoves her face further between your legs, and you swear you hear her whimper. she pulls your underwear to the side, and licks a broad stripe up your cunt.
you moan, your eyes falling shut as you hold onto her headboard.
she pulls back, âi said sit on my face, babe, not hover-â
ellieâs hands pull on your thighs so you rest your weight on her face fully. ellie becomes borderline ravenous, her tongue lapping at your pussy, slurping you up as her fingers dig into the fat of your ass and thighs.
you bite on your fist to muffle your loud moans, but ellie will have none of that, her arm reaching up to pull yours away from your face.
after a moment, ellie sticks her tongue fully out, letting you rub your clit against it as you please. your breaths become more and more unsteady.
ellieâs hands on your ass help guide your hips, and when she moves to suck on your clit, the suction makes your orgasm hit you like a freight train, bucking your hips against ellieâs face.
when youâve come down, ellie helps you off of your face, and rummages through her drawer to grab her strap.
you stop her, your hand against her chest, âi wanna feel you against me first.â
ellie doesnât need to hear anymore, and quickly starts taking off her clothes as you take off your underwear. she moves so sheâs on top of you, hiking one of your legs over her shoulder. the moment her wet cunt grinds into yours, you both moan, your eyes rolling back into your head.
âyou feel so fucking perfect, so fuckin good for me-â she rambles
ellie starts thrusting her hips against yours, and you watch her small, perky tits bounce with each movement. your hand trails up to squeeze one of them and she whimpers softly. when you pinch her nipple between your fingers, she moans gutturally and moves against you faster. youâre not at all in control of how loud youâre moaning at this point.
âlook at you, sweet girl, so fucking gorgeous-â
it isnât long before your oversensitive clit is being brought closer to another orgasm. you make obscene noises as you cum again, ellieâs eyes trained on your face the whole time.
âthere you go- let me cum all over that pretty- ah, fucking- mmmh, pussy-â ellie grunts before cumming a few moments after you.
you both take about 5 seconds to recover before sheâs scrambling to grab the strap. once ellie has it on, you lick your lips, staring at it.
âcan i ride it?â
ellieâs eyes go big, and she basically throws herself onto the bed, lying back and patting her thigh.
you giggle and climb on top of her, kissing her lips again. she kisses you back eagerly, grabbing your hips and thrusting her hips up, but you pull back.
ânope. hands off and stay still.â you order, and her already very dilated eyes look like pools of black at this point. she nods, biting her lip.
you take the strap and run the tip of it through your folds. ellie whines as she watches this, her hips bucking a little with her fists clenching the sheets below her.
âhey, what did i just say?â you ask, a mischievous smile on your face.
she takes a shaky breath, âsorry.â
you laugh a little, âso needy, ellie.â
you make eye contact with her as your hand travels down your own body, taking the time to squeeze and play with your own breasts. meanwhile, ellie looks like sheâs practically salivating.
your hand travels down your stomach to your cunt, rubbing your own clit for a second as ellie watches, her mouth agape.
your fingers spread your folds and dip inside you for a moment, curling up and making you moan.
ellie is desperate at this point, âplease, jesus fucking christ, i need you so bad, you donât under-â
you withdraw your fingers, giving ellie a look. âhmmm⊠sounds like you need something to keep that mouth of yours busy, huh?â
you bring your slick-covered fingers up to her mouth. âopen.â
ellie immediately opens her mouth and starts sucking off your fingers, whimpers muffled.
you giggle, âawww, youâre too fucking cute⊠now keep sucking on those, yeah?â
without warning, you sink down onto ellieâs strap and start bouncing. ellie whines, her eyes fixated on your tits as they bounce with you, still eagerly sucking on your fingers. ellieâs eyes fall shut for a moment as the base of the harness gives her clit the friction sheâs craving.
you keep bouncing on her strap, watching the fucked out glaze in ellieâs eyes, half-lidded and fully dilated.
âawww⊠you just needed to get fucked, thatâs all⊠look how pretty you areâŠâ you tease and ellie starts whimpering like sheâs gonna come from your words alone.
after a few minutes, you start to tire and you take out the fingers in her mouth, slowing down, ânow, fuck me like you mean it, ellie.â
those words are all the permission ellie need before flipping you over and drilling her hips into yours.
â-pussyâs so fuckin- fuck, so fuckinâ tight for me, babe-â ellie whimpers, tucking her face into your neck.
you would find it more amusing that ellie is acting like this strap is physically attached to her if she wasnât making you feel so fucking good. you cling onto her as she fucks you, slamming into you just right, over and over.
âi need to cum, please let me cum- i canât fucking-â ellie rambles, and you cut her off
âiâm close too, baby, itâs okay-â you pant, your eyes clenching shut as she fucks you into your third orgasm.
ellieâs hips bottom out and she grinds herself deep into you as she cums against the base of the harness, her moans needy and breathy.
when you both start coming down, she pulls out and tosses the strap away wordlessly, going back to cuddle against you.
youâre completely exhausted (and both of you still slightly drunk) as you let her spoon you, barely saying anything before slipping into a deep sleep.
âââ
âso you just⊠left? without even saying goodbye?â mary asks over the phone as you walk into the music building on your college campus, lugging your beat up guitar with you.
âwhat was i supposed to do? make her breakfast and thank her for the 3 orgasms?â you ask, holding the door open for a girl running in behind you.
the girl gives you a look and your face gets hot, realizing she overheard what you said.
âi mean⊠maybe? she was super hot,â mary responds, slightly agitated
you groan, âyeah, she was hot, but i barely learned anything about her and we were both drunk. not necessarily promising grounds for a budding relationship.â
you walk up the steps to the room youâre headed to, checking your phone again for the right room number.
âyeah, but still. she seemed like she would be cool,â mary justifies and you sigh.
âwell, if i ever see her again while weâre not drunk and horny, maybe iâll ask her out. but right now, thatâs really not a priority.â you say, finding the right practice room.
mary starts to talk again but you interrupt her, âiâm sorry, mary, but i have to go.â
âwait, why? i know you donât have class right now.â
âiâm taking those private guitar lessons to satisfy that extracurricular credit, remember? itâs my first lesson, so i really donât wanna be late,â you say, and mary sighs.
âokay, whatever. have fun, and iâll talk to you after?â
you agree and end the phone call, looking to check the room number again before you walk in.
your forced, âmake a good impressionâ smile is immediately wiped off your face when you see the familiar auburnette playing the guitar in front of you.
she looks up at you and her cheeks go red almost instantaneously.
you say, âsorry, i must be in the wrong room- i have a lesson-â
ellieâs eyebrows raise and she lets out a slow sigh, âyou, uh, you have a lesson?â
you nod, gripping your guitar case.
ellie laughs a little, like this is some sort of prank that was pulled on her:
âthen youâre in the right room, because iâm pretty sure iâm supposed to teach you guitar this semester.â
you sharply exhale the breath you were holding in as the realization of whatâs going on sets in, âbut⊠youâre an astrophysics major?â
ellie chuckles again, âand a music minor, babe.â
you restrain the groan that you desperately want to make, your stomach sinking.
ellie pats the empty seat next to her, âwell⊠letâs get started then. you know any bar chords yet?â
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