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bentnotbroken1fanfiction · 2 days ago
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The heart killers series is great but one thing I didn't like is how they didn't give more us on fadel and bison relationship their relationship seemed so onesided with fadel putting all the efforts and bison either ignoring fadel or doing his own thing similarly I didn't like how the series not once show kant and babe relationship more than babe giving love advice to kant they could have shown us a flashback of babe nearly being taken away from kant or kant struggling to take care of him since babe was only a toddler when their parents died
YES!
So, I've had so many conversations about this exact thing on discord servers, and even made a couple posts on here about it, but yeah, I agree. And bear with me, because I may go all over the place lol so sorry, but I have a lot to say. (And none of it means I hate the show. I still enjoy it overall. If I didn't, I wouldn't have 15 fanfics and counting about it)
First, this show would have truly benefitted from either having more episodes (at LEAST 16) or having two seasons. Because here's the thing. The reason why many of us have stuck around for this show is because of the characters. Like they did a good job making us fall in love with them!! I have suspended my disbelief for most of the things I have beef with, solely because I love Fadel. Like I love Fadel so fucking much, guys. (I love Style and the other characters too, but this man just snatched my soul, ok?)
And can you imagine how much MORE we would have loved them if we were given more fleshed out back stories and character development? And how much more we would have loved Fadel and Bison if we were shown a few flashbacks of their years together? Or even have them share more scenes together? To really cement their bond????
And don't get me started on Kant, ok? Because everyone knows by now that I had mad beef with him. I don't hate him, but I was salty up until probably episode 10 lmao BUT I think I wouldn't have been so mad if they would have shown his struggle more. If they would have shown more of his shady past with Captain Chris (b/c that man is shady AF you guys!) I also would have felt more for him if we were given significant scenes with him and Babe, or shown flashbacks of him taking care of him or him being in lock up and freaking out over what is happening to his brother. I would have been more sympathetic to his plight if I were given more time to feel for him. (but alas, he came off as kind of a dick, mostly in regards to Style.)
I also felt that they handled the cop situation horribly, and even the Khun Lily situation horribly. So many things in this show were super fucking rushed so it just wasn't believable. Everything just miraculously worked out in one episode with barely any planning involved. Like, sure. We got the bad guy, but we didn't even see her put in handcuffs. Like Fadel and Bison could have slipped away and been long gone if they had shown the cops arresting Lily, or a montage of them arresting her and many of her other goons. (and I am not saying that because I'm mad about them going to jail. I actually don't mind it, but I still don't think it was done properly!!!)
And we don't even have a real reference for how much time has passed since they all met for the first time. My gut is saying MONTHS, because how else did Cap expect Kant to find info. In a week? hahahhaahha No, Fuck you, sir. There would be absolutely no way the cops could have expected Kant to gain access to information within a month. That is just stupid. And someone like Fadel wouldn't have caved so quickly with Style in just a week. Hell no. It would have had to be longer in order for Fadel to even start missing him when he didn't show up lmao So, in my head canon, in a believable timeline, Style carefully stalked him for at least three weeks (and not every single day at first...just leading up to it being daily) before Fadel really got super annoyed and then the storage room happened lol.
Stretched out timelines would make things more believable, in my humble opinion. Even the back and forth with Bison and Kant, because Kant also has a day job. He can't just run around chasing Bison every single day. (and neither can Style for that matter. And also, Fadel runs a DINER!!! They need a better timeline!!! lol)
But anyways, moving on!!
I also don't mind Fadel's ex and that storyline, but I would have also wanted it to be more fleshed out and maybe have it not be a two year relationship. A year would have sufficed. I would have also liked to see more of Khun Lily's manipulation of the boys. I wanted to see how she fucked with their heads and made them the way they are. I would have liked to see more of Fadel protecting Bison from her. Or protecting him from the emotions of what they are doing. I would have loved to see more of their dynamic in general.
I also would have liked to see them all use some more common sense and actually sneak around like they know what they are doing, and not behave like complete idiots lol Now, in episode 11, Style DID impress me. I think he did a great job catering to those women and flirting. He did better than Kant lmao. Kant couldn't hide the fear and disgust from his face lmao and Style did. With some help, Style actually would have been a decent spy I think lol because he is smart under his loud over the top behavior. (he uses that as a mask and I like that about his character)
I wanted to see more about Style and Kant's past too, and how they became friends. Because before epi 9, I really felt like their friendship was lacking. Part of me STILL feels like it is lacking, but I am just moving on because I know it's all about the time constraints and I know I have to give things up in order to still enjoy the show. I liked their scene in the bedroom and that made me believe these guys have been super close for years, but before that...nah. (Mostly because of Kant NOT telling Style that Fadel could literally kill him lol)
Overall, I love the characters enough that I can get over most of my gripes, because I know I can fix the things I don't like with fanfiction lmao. (And I also have a lot more gripes than I listed in this meta but it's already getting long...so I'll just end it here lol)
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graph100 · 7 months ago
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IMPOSSIBLE film photography youtubers try NOT to use lo-fi hiphop that all sounds the same as background music CHALLENGE (GONE WRONG)
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myblurryreality · 4 months ago
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I'm sitting here, contemplating if I should continue this fic because it most definitely seems to be going the "best uncle" Jiang Wanyin route, but make it Wei Wuxian's baby. I'll see how far I last, maybe he's not in it much. 🤞🏾
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hinamie · 5 months ago
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mentor
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cocomuffy · 9 months ago
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Dick: So you like, were in that Lazarus pit...
Jason: Yes?
Dick: And it like... healed you of everything and... it made you brand new and-
Jason: Get to the point..?
Dick: How do you STILL HAVE KNEE SCARS?!
Jason: What do you mean?
Jason's knee scars from the Boy-Robin Boy-Shorts™:
Jason: HOW ARE THEY STILL THERE?!
Dick: AND WHY DO I HAVE THE SAME ONES?
Jason: We have to talk to Tim and Damian. This might be a Robin thing..
*they do so*
Tim: Oh, those? Yeah, you guys have had those since you were little. They're from the lack of pants.
Dick: How do you-
Tim, maniacally: I have so many videos of you all falling flat on your faces and scraping your knees...
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bloomeng · 5 months ago
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Damian wanted a magical weapon and instead got a magical animal guardian </3
gonna get ahead of the curve and acknowledge this before it gets pointed out yes I’m aware that I chose outs at different stages of their lives but a) I refuse to draw Jon aged up mostly bc they sucked out all his individuality and b) I have other plans for Damian’s traditional Robin suit that he wears in Supersons. The outfit I gave Damian here is to match the rough timeline I’ve drawn his family in. I’m waggling my finger, it was on purpose so I better not see any gripes.
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foldingfittedsheets · 4 months ago
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My douchey new coworker has interrupted me more times than I can count and speaks on every topic like he’s the world authority on Everything. I am trying to reign my feelings in at merely disliking him rather than full on loathing but it’s a struggle.
One of the ways I’m doing this is by venting small conversational potshots at him. On the topic of coffee he was saying someone make a joke about him having an elaborate order. I quipped, “Yeah, I can see it. You have the mannerisms of someone with a fussy coffee order.”
He stiffly informed me he drinks black coffee.
Later he told me and another lady who he was only speaking to because there was no other guys on shift yet, “Yeah I drink two energy drinks a day.” This was delivered in the cadence of a brag which baffled both of us.
She said, “Your poor liver.”
He shrugged and said, “I just have a higher tolerance than most people.”
“I think that’s what alcoholics say,” I snipped and his mouth went flat. He would go on to inform us he once spent $2000 on dinner and we were both wildly unimpressed to his vexation.
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sevrinve · 9 months ago
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Astarion x tav (elora) brainrot
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sickfreaksirkay · 5 months ago
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i stand by my cancelled wife literally what did kay do wrong here to merit arthur saying he was BORN TO BE UNPLEASANT ?????
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zazrichor · 26 days ago
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the righteous stand before the darkness - and the Maker shall guide their hand.
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sensitiveheartless · 7 days ago
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They’re having a sleepover :0 (Neither of them are very familiar with sleepovers in practice, but mutually decided there should be plenty of pillows for ammunition purposes) (their battle shall be legendary once one of them inevitably decides to instigate)
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time-slink · 8 months ago
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glasswing butterfly.. :)
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wolfythewitch · 1 month ago
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What did you think of the Ithaca saga? Also what’s your favourite song in it
I really liked it actually! Reminded me a lot of the first few sagas, which are my favorites. I think Hold Them Down is my favorite vocally (and gives me animatic ideas lol) but wyfilwma is just really nice. I haven't watched the stream yet though so I haven't seen the art and stuff
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splankie · 10 months ago
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is blowing up a volcano after ur first kiss couple goals
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labotor · 3 months ago
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my bougie dwarf LoF rook Tyarva and her sugar baby silly charming professor who she adores so very much <333
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frogseasons · 10 months ago
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RIP falin’s tits…. u will be missed
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