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ngl i dont like complaining but i’m a bit upset about how quickly we jumped over from tory’s mom dying to… keenry relationship drama. im seriously peeved about how many people are boiling tory and robby’s characters down to being romantic partners, and i don’t think the writers understand how leaning so heavily on keenry weakens both the individual journeys robby and tory go on — robby with his father/role as miyagi do’s captain/brotherhood with miguel/running in 2nd place, and tory with her mother/role as ck’s captain/relationship with kreese/betrayal of her friends. they CANNOT AND SHOULD NOT be each other’s personal saviors; they HAVE TO SAVE THEMSELVES.
#cobra kai#ck negativity#to compare them to samiguel — both of whom seperate in a very mature manner after having gone thru a parental tragedy/sudden dojo drama#they need time apart to undergo their individual development. and on that note#the reason s5 samiguel works is because sam gives herself that room to work on her identity crisis. and miguel learns to accept#his unconventional family and his new life post-2018 all valley. not as a champion but as a boy#writers did that stupid fucking pair the spare shit and slapped robby and tory closer together after breaking them up in s5 😐#which is why i’ll always maintain that keenry only works in the context of a trauma bond a la their time at cobra kai!#sighh. ive got opinions about keenry tonight.#and if the entirety of s6p2 is keenry???…… hhrgrgrh. [frustrated noise]#(vitto look away i’m sorry for speaking ill of your faves and their bad writing)
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new fanfic pet peeve is when people are writing children and clearly don’t know the difference between a 3-year-old, a 7-year-old, and a 13-year-old. this newborn isn’t saying words, this teenager is learning emotional intelligence, this child is literally not capable of comprehending that complex topic. please, it takes 2 minutes to look up “how should a 9-year-old be speaking” and “how developed is a 4-year-old’s mind”
you could even take it a half step further and look up the various stages of development in people. piaget, kohlberg, erikson, all those psychologists created these stages because we all followed such strict patterns when growing. you don’t need to go into the moral development of your oc’s child but at least make sure they’re speaking and acting like a child would at that age.
also when in doubt, for older children just go for more mature. it’s far better than treating teenagers like they don’t know what an emotion is lol
#writing this because the fic i just read followed a LOT of 13-year-olds#and yet none of them were at ALL emotionally mature#like they were at the maturity i would’ve expected from a 9- or 10-year-old at best#just complete lake of control or awareness and no recognition of development#if your fic follows a large period of time we should be seeing GROWTH#it’s not enough to just acknowledge the birthdays passing#i’d like to see more complex thoughts and actions and awareness of consequences#i want to see your characters starting to feel regret and compassion more#weighing pros and cons and dealing with possibilities#they aren’t just existing anymore. they are actively participating in the world#but nooooo have your bloody 16-year-old be blubbering and unable to parse out a simple emotional interaction#yeah yeah context and whatever but seriously it’s just embarrassing#we already put so much effort into our fics so WHY should we give up here??
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still haven't moved on from zane in this episode (aka I hit tag limit again and am unhappy about it)
#alek insanity#not gonna main tag this but prepare for a tiny rant#home is actually really good zane characterization and its super cool to me how it holds up to this day#s1 characterization is very specific to me because the behaviors displayed by the ninja there (mostly) isnt bc thats how they really are but#its due to societal pressure. cole originally being more 'stone faced tough guy' -> 'down to earth' -> 'really sensible easy to talk to guy'#is because hes always been a sensitive guy... but he felt he couldnt express that true version of himself. thats the whole thing behind his#true potential. jay going from s1 -> s6 -> now is less of societal pressure and more teenager figuring himself out but it still applies. ish#seeing how much the ninja have changed or grown from then to now is amazing because back then they all wore masks. they didnt know each#other all that well. but theyve gained that comfortability with each other and also have grown and matured as people#some seasons / eps characterization for certain people im not a fan of (lloyds random misogyny arc in s13) but i mean the overall trend here#and then there is zane. zane in home was pretty dead on to how he behaves now (at least... when it comes to his faults?) and i dont want to#say people skim over that but i am the sf proclaimed n1 s1e2 fan and overthink every scene. zane's early characterization is some of my fav#for him period. he also goes through a ton of traumatic stuff and a ton of bad writing bouts but why he acts so 'weird' or 'distant' has#always been a thread sewn in. he changed so much he stayed the same in a way... if that makes sense. -> ohhh the ninja get mail and he#doesnt? oh he has no family? he quite literally walks away from that situation. oh the ninja are yelling in his face and asking whats wrong#with him? he literally walks away from that situation. he says its to follow the falcon but seeing how he apologized to them by not only#baking a ton of pies (cough... the food fight is what led to him leaving at first) but he also found them a whole entire new house.#zane is unable to truly value what he does for others. insert him in s11 saying he 'tried' to fufill his goal of protecting others.#everything he has ever done still isnt good enough. then the ninja tried to apologize and he didnt really... let them.#that one post about characters putting on facades and that facade being how people really see them. even in fandom. thats zane to me#the guy who lies about being upset and avoids his problems ran away after being yelled at? and he said he wasnt really mad? that is a lie!!#him being a ~360 when it comes to his character development is neat to me because he never hid behind a mask in the same way the others did#cole wanting to seem tough vs being really soft? kai wanting approval so bad he starts being selfish? kai isnt selfish usually!#he is self centered but that is a whole different thing. just wanting to fit in and breaking free of that. zane's true potential came in the#form of 'i finally know why i am not normal' instead of 'i will be my true self'. zane never pretended to not be weird#(instert book) states he literally didnt know why people got mad at him. he just existed and it was 'wrong'. the mask he hid behind was#avoidance. he was pretty open about how he actually was (most of the time). when he was upset he would audibly sigh and walk away lol#but for him saying he wasnt upset / saddened by the ninja... it felt like a moment of selflessness. if that makes sense. he blamed himself#for the monestary burning down. so he didnt deserve the apologies (ish) in the virtues of spinjitzu zane is shown as the generous one iirc#he puts the needs of others over his own. he will bear whatever burden he needs if others are happy. at that same time he doesnt allow
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this feels too soon to say because its still not well over a month that i started uni but like...
im quite happy by how things are going now- it doesn't feel all too restrained unlike my past school years. and apart from that, i feel a lot more independent being able to travel miles away from my home which has been my biggest anxiety as i got older. just the fear of getting lost spooks me a whole lot! even if i'm travelling through a planned route, going all by myself is probably the bravest thing i did this year and i say this as an introvert who doesn't go out all too often
#ive always wanted to share this sudden core memory of mine when i was grade 12: i liked my english teacher a lot and she made us write an-#-essay about something that.. i want to overcome? i think? i forgot but i remember my passage very well#i basically summarized that i feel i haven't developed that well as an adult in terms of maturity and feel that im very left out in social-#-situations. as well as feeling like a serious adult. i basically said that i wish i was given more time to get myself together#then when i got my paper back: my teacher had checked it with a little message near it: and it said something like#“it's okay to experience this - time will wait for you and you still much time to learn and grow” something like that. not verbatim but#that's what i remembered so well. when i read that i felt so happy and understood#i am not that close to my teachers but seeing that this teacher cared to really read my passage and not just check for grammar mademe joyous#so remembering that - and now that im in uni - typing this all out as i wait for my bus that will take an hour worth of travel to go to#i feel really accomplished#irl banter#~ rambling#yeah :)#my point is. you're never too late to learn new things
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parroting off of that post but it’s truly a fascinating phenomenon that wally is so thoroughly developed a character in his own runs and arguably miles more mature and possessive of the accountability to deal with certain emotional situations that the other members of the fab five continue to flail at and yet every time he’s in a titans book the greatest extent to his characterization is dumbass dickhead who doesn’t know how to do his job without someone (dick) telling him how to do it
#to be deleted#if anything this is why i sympathize with the fab five ig like they didn’t really get the benefit of writing that was intended#to help them mature. wally’s runs by loebs and waid /were/ written with his developing maturity in mind#and granted a lot of that has to do with wally’s role within the flash fam#whether that’s as a son / nephew / husband / uncle / father / etc#so his maturity was grounded in being the family man#which arguably not every titan also needs to be. some of them aren’t made for the settled domestic life#but it’s a shame they were afforded little opportunity to mature otherwise#except for roy i do think he was getting there for a while before things went haywire early 00s
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So yeah I actually think Otona Precure is retconning Coco and Natts ages
Their ages were always vague (at least to me!) and never outright confirmed. I always thought they were 16 and 17 respectively since I was a kid. Partly out of spite, partly because I was used to older-looking love interests??
Like the trends in the early 2000s to 90s, etc was the impossibly mature hot guy, the ikemen. Yknow, the model-like senpai who always gets mistaken as an an adult even though he's only a year older than the heroine. So IDK I always doubted Coco's age as a kid :/
And yeah I know one producer referred to them as "adult men", but to me that's just a producer and not the writing/animation team who presented the characters (this is where the spite kicks in...💀)
I thought Coco faked his age into being a teacher the same way Natts became a business owner somehow??? The teacher part is gross, but I know it was for Coco to in an all girls school and set up Nozomi's dream of being a teacher....
(LAME EXCUSE THO!!! He could have been a tutor, or joined a boys school across from the girls, or SUMTHN!!! Teacher x student always losing)
BUT BACK TO OTONA!!! I think Otona is taking advantage of their ambiguous age and is soft retconning that they were "adults". Like look at the Nozomi's flashback!! Coco looks ridiculously young in that picture, like he barely reaches Karen's height.
Does this look like an adult man???
And Otona is presenting Coco and Natts differently for there to be a clear distinction between them in the Yes Precure 5 and their adult versions now (mature features, lowered voice acting, height change)
So POINT BEING, I think we can consider them as teenagers aka children in the Yes Precure 5 and adults in Otona, because of the way the writers are presenting them now (thank GOD)
#and this isnt to excuse the creep vibes btw#but can we have HOPE (T⌓T)#honesty them being immature teens fits wayyy better for their development#because they come off as mature princes but turn out to be just as childish as the girls?#isnt that the whole point of them turning into cutesy animals??#natts being blunt about komachi's writing isnt peak maturity for me guys lmaooo#also if we could also stop treating the jp fandom as inherently creepy too...#who knows how many thought the same as i did as a kid#otona precure#yes precure 5#b.txt#coco#nuts
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I think it would’ve been nice if all the later incarnations of Ash gave him a similar personality to what he had in Advanced.
#He’s still the same sarcastic abrasive person he was all the way back in Indigo League but now he’s a bit more experienced and reserved#THIS is character development. Not that bullshit XY stans call character development.#Advanced Ash has undoubtedly matured and grown as a person but he’s still the same guy he was in Indigo. He’s changed but it’s believable.#XY’s what happens when a Ditto steals Ash’s face and takes on the most lukewarm personality possible so it doesn’t draw attention to itself#There wasn’t any explanation for this drastic personality change either. He just woke up one day and started acting like Clark Kent.#If a character abruptly loses everything that made them an individual and replaces it with a goody-two-shoes paragon hero persona#That’s not character development. That’s character assassination.#Anyways XY was a clusterfuck of trite cliche writing tropes and it’s only worth watching for the fight scenes+crying about wasted potential#pokemon#pokemon anime#pokémon#pokeani#ash ketchum#my fucking post#writing criticism#writing critique
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I've become intentional
With every step I take.
Understanding how to reclaim
My life by calling demons by their name
& Being bold in the presence of my
Oppressor as we stand face to face.
I AM not bound to emotional swings,
I AM not induced by the song of sirens
I AM stronger than the limited words of affirmations
I HAVE battled with my mind long enough
To know I Am the master of this ship.
I HAVE crumpled and rebuilt,
I HAVE glorified my ruins and learned i can only live beyond the ashes if i die to my former state.
I KNOW some days the war feels lost
But as long as I'm breathing I can fight another day.
A wise man once told me
"its easy to remain a victim of internal pains.
Because healing is strict,
it exposes Self to self,
demanding a recognition of afflictions worn as a necklace.
Giving you the illusion you’ve tried
Everything instead remain consistent.
Because going through the emotions perpetually is familiar than making a difficult decision.
For what will meet you is unknown and foriegn
So why step in a realm requiring faith to carry you. When you already carry you.
Listen son focusing on excitment and immediate gratification is a fantasy painted in movies,
The process is tedious and grueling, conforming is Metamorphosis for nothing new
Holds on to the image that carried all its misfortune.
Be picky of what thoughts influences you,
You must remain aware of what speaks to the heart, cause from the heart flows all of lifes issues."
I've become intentional
With every step I take.
Understanding how to reclaim
My life by calling demons by their name
Depression, anxiety, confusion
You all think the same,
Offering me something I am not
When I AM what the heavens say i am.
Abundant
#poem#thoughts#creative writing#young poets#poets society#thinking#poetry#journey#poet#poetryportal#wisdom#growth#maturity#understanding#awareness#self development#mindfulness#free write#free wrting#free verse#prose poetry#christian poetry#christian poems
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Finished my first playthrough of Oxenfree: Lost Signals and gun pointed at me, I'd still choose the first as my favourite.
But still very much liked Lost Signals and you know what, it was a little bit refreshing to be a tired 30 something trying to fix shit instead of following a group of (beloved to me) teens with their teen drama.
#oxenfree blogging#i liked so much the drama and character stuff felt just that little more mature#i like riley and jacob so much as characters#night school is just so excellent at their writing#that slightly cool detachment you develop as you get older - that you have to#like don't get me wrong#halloween i'll be breaking out oxenfree again#to watch the kids run around and cause portal ghosts drama#but lost signals was a very good follow-up
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biggest changes over the years have been tina becoming a lot more confident and less anxious about performing or having attention on her, louise getting a lot more mature/empathetic towards other people and gene getting a lot less mean and aggressive for no reason
#some of this was them better understanding how to write the characters and their personalities in a way that made sense#and some of it was just character development (especially with tina)#although i get how people would be annoyed with louise learning the same lesson over and over i think it works bcuz she is kinda impulsive#and she is growing and maturing as a person#all of them are honestly have u SEEN how tina acts as a big sister in season 1 vs season 13 its like completely different#txt#bob's burgers
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hmmm i’ve got an emotional confrontation ficlet (as if i ever write anything else) brewing in my brain about steve and dustin and boundaries and how it’s offensive and a little hurtful that dustin refuses to drop the robin thing, like it doesn’t matter what steve says or wants, dustin always knows best, and he doesn’t think steve’s capable of love and affection without sex
#something about meaning well and wanting your loved ones to be happy so bad you try to fix them#and you just end up making them feel broken#i love dustin so much his maturity level is so uneven#i want more ppl to explore that#the dangers of being besties with a 14 yo prodigy#sometimes their lack of emotional development makes them assholes by accident#steve harrington & dustin henderson#platonic stobin#it’s a bad pain day in my hands and arms sadly so i’m worried the inspiration will fizzle before i’m physically capable of writing it#so i’m dropping it in my writing tag for later#my writing
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What do you mean by 'i will be set free'? Are you unstanning or something?
In a scenario like that? I’d be like
#like cmon guys 💀💀💀don’t yall have like… self awareness?#i know myself. I know I would 110% pissed off#it’s a basic human reaction. natural even lmao#im already rolling my eyes to the back of my head because I KNOW like a science fact#there I would be forced to read huge ass masterpost on how#that’s not my problem to deal with not my life career not my closet not my fight#and whatever apologists will write about#repriming their inner natural reactions for the sake of … love? passion? admiration? you name it#probably because they want to sound more mature or even smarter idk#but you see being mature and smart sometimes is seeing through the mess and develop your own opinion me thinks#casella di posta numero 32
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i love final fantasy.
#🌙.rambles#like. uh. mostly ffxiv rn i just can't think straight bcs i just love ffxiv too much fuck but#other ffs too 😭😭 i was looking through some of my notes again n. i'm. it. IT MADE ME SO HAPPY#like yk those twt stuff from sqex or wtvr. i love squall n rinoa sm n then tidus n yuna n then#THE REST OF THEM N#n. w ff7 uh. fuck the fanwars just enjoy what you like i hate how ppl put others down. those adults can't even be mature or open-minded#n it's so disappointing but uh that aside! personally. this is for me okay. i just have a certain fondness of ships w aerith#no i don't want to talk abt ships but i didn't want to say this following thing without some context 💀#nah okay here i don't have super strong feelings abt any of those ff7 ships but i do like the charas n the tropes#like. i like the ones w aerith more in general bcs yk she's just. gentle. i like her 🥺 but i relate to tifa quite a lot actually#OH. I DIDN'T MEAN TO RAMBLE ABT THAT WAIT#w tifa just made me rmb along w. smth in shb made me think of hehe. yk w the wol w the uh.. spoilers but smth Bad happens#i'm gna go off-topic again if i talk about emet-selch in those scenes. bro the love he has for azem n hyth n. amaurot n how he#all those. lonely thousand of years n. remembering.. 🥹 n then the honesty w the wol n he#he. hdkafjsdlkf his va's rlly did well w him n the writing made me love him so much his character's so dear to me#wait. i went off-topic again. oh w smth that happens to the wol. like w wol n the tifa can i just have a dream too of like. being saved#like no ultimately i'll save myself but c'monnnn just once 🥺#writing the word once just always reminds me of zack fair damn hdlfkajsdfk one of my favs too hehe#head in hands i'm still so proud of alphi's chara development. n then. yk w thancred n minfilia n ryne.#n that talk w minfilia n ryne. hit. too personal. i remember. oh my god#alr i've just been rambling as i always have but atp i don't know what i'm writing abt anymore help#🥹🫶🏼 just love ffxiv so much fr. like not just ffxiv but yk what i mean. uwahh what a relief to. feel like this again at least#still stressed i just wna get that essay asap tho 😭 but yk it's lovely at least i'm rlly happy i remember again.#ffxiv's always. helped guide me in a way to rmb myself. so. please. please just listen to ffxiv's ost fr.
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OTP Interview #1
A new OTP interview has been posted! If you are a member of our site, you can see it here.
#roleplay#forum roleplay#literate roleplay#mature roleplay#roleplay community#writing#creative writing#writing community#rp community#rp#forum rp#literate rp#lit rp#mature rp#rpc#character interview#character building#character development
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hhhhh.
#the sky speaks#pregnancy tw (im not pregnant dw lol)#baby fever moment....................#the other day my mom was like i mean u know u dont even rly need a partner to have a baby. u could get artificially inseminated#and like. i KNEW that was an option but hearing someone say it out loud .................................#like i shouldnt have a baby rn. im not making that much money . am i even emotionally mature enough to raise a kid ?#but also if i had a kid sooner than later---the pregnancy would be covered under my parents health insurance ..#nd i know my parents would help me raise the kid! if anything the fact that im stillat home and have a pretty good relationship w my parent#would just make a more stable environment for the kid during their early development than if i was a lil older making just enough on my own#and also i want one :((((((((((((#i know it might make finding a partner harder down the line#but i wouldnt wanna be with someone who didnt want kids anyway !! its a high priority for me !!#augh . idk#im also thinking more and more about going on T and getting a pretty big chest reduction. and wouldnt it be easier n make more sense to lik#have a kid and THEN do that lol#in some ways im like nooo im wayyy too young but. im 24. my parents had my brother at 20. i cant possibly do worse than them.#i would love the fuck outta the kid...#anywyas for now i write my bkg single dad AU and i yearn#maybe i'll talk abt it with my therapist. im getting back on her sched soon
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sudden overwhelming urge to completely revamp ghostie
#i don’t like how her and ryou’s dynamic is right nowwww#it feels like. how do i put this#pitying almost?? coddling??? i don’t like it#and that’s a thing i could develop for like. character depth and growth or whatever#but i don’t like how major it feels in their over all relationship agdjfhf#and i don’t really know how i feel about the aloof aspect of her personality…#like a little bit of that would be good (i guess??) but i want her to be a little less. unaffected??#how do i phrase this#with how i have her right now i feel like she comes off as more distant from the main group#and much more aloof and restrained than i originally intended#i kinda just want her to have the initial air of being calm and mature and ‘confident’ like she has it all together#but in reality she’s just as much of a nerd and mess as everyone else lol#like she tries to act all wise and formal when approaching the group and ghosts or whatever#but in reality she doesn't have a clue what is happening most of the time#that's why i want to make the whole yamima situation more of a focus for her#and why i want to develop the whole seeing ghosts thing more....#agshjgs a lot of this could be solved if i had the attention span for writing. maybe i should start taking notes or something when reading-#the manga... hmmm#i don't knowww we'll see if i ever decide to do something with her lol#s/i: ghostie#delete later#i want more silly moments between her and everyone else!!#love the boys and all but i want to branch out her character outside of them (duh)#have her get into little back-and-forths with jou. cute moments between her and anzu.#casual quick duels between her and yugi where she stubbornly insists she can win against him one day#i don't know!! just something silly. make her a little silly. etc etc
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