#rewritter

[technicallydelightfulpenguin]

Do you guys want me to rewrite Star vs The Forces of Evil?

[technicallydelightfulpenguin]

For me, Stella and Aldreaphus aren't related, they are friends who just gossip and talk about a lot of things.

I just thought of an idea about what bird stella could be and I'm Honestly surprised nobody had thought of this idea among the other ones. What if stella was a white crow? I mean, it would certainly match with her colors and how we hear a cawing during her phone call with stolas when he's getting her stuff moved out. Plus, there's a whole thing about crows literally being born hating owls which also explains why she wouldn't just divorce him since they're both equally opposed to the marriage. Like, it just makes more sense thematically and design-wise than a swan or a dove or whatever other ideas were thrown around.

Actually, no one knows what Stella actually is, she's a bird, sure, but the species is completely unknown, Viv claims that she's a swan or something like that, but other people have actually seen Stella as a secretary bird, dove or a white pigeon, but a white crow is a new thing for me.

Also, Anon, did you mean a white raven? Since white crows do not exist unless they're born albino.

I tried researching for white crows, but I found myself empty-handed, the same thing not applicable for ravens.

Despite that, Anon, I'm pretty sure that the detail of Stella's exact species won't be disclosed in the show because Viv needs her gay yaoi porn to get herself off, but hey, that means you have free reign to headcanon Stella as a white raven or a white crow!

[my-pjo-stuff]

Me and my WONDERFUL friend @trancylovecraft were talking about PJO and how we would have done stuff differently on discord when she dropped this gem. I think this deserves to be shared.

(.........)Like one of the themes if we're keeping it a kids' book should've been that not everyone you meet is going to be good. Like you should teach kids through Percy that strangers and people you meet are not going to be all good and all bad. For instance, they should've done it by making Percy a happier/naive kid and having THAT be his fatal flaw (though tbh id remove fatal flaws entirely if I had the choice, so we'll have that as just a character flaw) Percy could be introduced to this world as a bright-eyed kid, he could see this world of monsters and heroes to be exciting. He can be a hero too? He can fight off bad guys? His dad is a cool god? Awesome!!!! Luke himself should be introduced as a character who would be polar to Percy. He'd already been disillusioned, maybe starting off as the same kid Percy was before being sent on that mission and being injured- shown that the gods aren't really good and that the monsters they've been fighting were not all evil (eg. medusa would've been made out to be the villain by Poseidon. She was raped and turned into that thing) Luke should've been an advocate for the monsters who were done wrong by the gods as well as the demigod kids that they brought into this world. Percy would've been brought to think that Luke was the villain- no shades of gray before Percy becomes mortally injured too, perhaps Poseidon used him for something he needed and just left Percy in the dust Over time i believe that Percy would've become much more distant to the world. After a big arc- he'd join Luke and his group. probably in this AU being a fringe group of demigods and not Chronos' army this time In this- percy was said to be the child of the prophecy- but as the series goes into its second half we have a reveal that the child is yet to be born. They find out that Zeus had another fling with a mortal woman and this child is the one meant to be born to overthrow the gods and usher in the next era

Second half of the series follows the events where the fringe group of demigods eventually save the woman, using the help of some of the better gods (eg. having symbolism to the first titan-god war where some of the titans helped the gods). By this point camp half-blood would be in shambles- some still dedicated to their parents and others joining the group. The child is born, the gods defeated with the child sworn to be raised proper. The end.

[PLEASE NOTE THAT THIS IS STILL A VERY ROUGH OUTLINE]

[katie-krum]

Not a Slytherin - Chapter 1 - katiekrum - Harry Potter - J. K. Rowling [Archive of Our Own]

Harry Potter doesn't want to be in Slytherin. Severus Snape doesn't want Harry in Slytherin.

but...

Hermione Granger thinks that green suits to Harry.

xxx

She quickly and effectively managed to teach other Slytherins what being a Muggleborn really meant. She didn't have to use force for this. Her respect for wizarding culture, her comprehensive and even old-fashioned education, and the speed with which she learned new spells were enough to promote her from a Muggleborn to something more.

There were exceptions, but these exceptions inexplicably ended up in Poppy's care in the Hospital Wing. And she always had an alibi.

It only took a year for her to catch Lucius' attention and replace Astoria Greengrass in his marriage plans for his son.

To sum up, Severus Snape was afraid of this school year. He was prepared for the arrival of Draco Malfoy and Harry Potter but never, even in his wildest dreams, had he prepared for them both to end up in his care.

[ivypelvis]

P, R, U for Honeycomb, Bear and Zirconium?

Honeycomb:

P = Pace (Are they fast and rough? Slow and sensual? etc.)

Rough, sensual, and hard.

R = Risk (Are they game to experiment, do they take risks, etc.)

100% would. He loves to experiment and enjoys it immensely.

U = Unfair (how much they like to tease)

He is the world's worst teaser, since his kink is orgasm control.

Bear:

P = Pace (Are they fast and rough? Slow and sensual? etc.)

Sensual, rough, and fast.

R = Risk (Are they game to experiment, do they take risks, etc.)

Dude is down for anything. Would jump at the chance to experiment a little.

U = Unfair (how much they like to tease)

Not a chronic teaser like Honeycomb, but he teases and when he does, it's merciless.

Zirconium:

P = Pace (Are they fast and rough? Slow and sensual? etc.)

Sensual, fast, and deep.

R = Risk (Are they game to experiment, do they take risks, etc.)

A little less willing to experiment, but will sit down with his SO to discuss things to experiment with.

U = Unfair (how much they like to tease)

Second world's worst teaser.

-H

[jorrated]

id genuinely love to see u make a criticism of hb/hh. i like the show but its for sure not great, plus you seem to really like demon/religious/christion lore

i dont love or hate that show enough to do that, but yeah! I love to see different interpretations of demons, specially the seven princes of hell. so when i see bland depictions of them i just hhmm......

like.... idk how to explain it. but like. when fucking queer force was more explicit than you show about queer demons having sex and having daddy issues, i feel like we have a problem.

[todomemolesta18]

Personally how you will rewrite stella

Hm. OK, the problem for Stella is that her only personality trait is to hate Stella. And that she a caricature of an abuser.

So, first. I would give her a more simpathetic side. Because Stolas wasnt the only one forced to this marriage. Is not weird that she is angry all the time, I WOULD BE.

Even if it isnt Stolas faulth, she would blame him on her mind because of the marriage, but because Stella wants to look good in front of the royaltie, she would put a facade. At home, she would be cold and distant with Stolas.

Her anger would only grow when she sees that Stolas barely does work and she has to do everything. But she would still try. Stella would give disaproving looks at his husband and remember him to do is freakin job.

But then, he ruins everything. He cheats on her an doesnt bother to hide it. This is what makes her explode and hate him more openly.

After she controled her, no, hided her emotions, puted a facade an put so much effort in their marriage, this is what makes it.

Stella doesn care anymore. And wants revenge.

(I wouls also give her hobbie, like, maybe she likes fashion, give her friends name and dialogue, she likes drinkin tea and spending time with Octavia in the fashion saloon or teaching her about royaltie).

[garbage--account]

Me trying to explain medieval folks Miraculous Ladybug 🐞 :

Disclamer : i do not watch Miraculous Ladybug 🙃 and i personally don't know any medieval person.

A mystic man, known as Hawkmoth, is lurking in the dark, watching over the people downtown for desesperate souls to make devil pacts with.

In exchange of surnatural powers (based on what make them suffer the most), they must obey Hawkmoth and cause chaos in Paris.

Two anonymous heroes in disguise, Ladybug and Cat Noir, current holders of ancient jewel-like magical artifacts, the Miraculous, granting them the power of creation and destruction respectivaly, fight alongside to stop the possessed people from destroying Paris and free them from Hawkmoth's spell.

When they are not battling, the two return in their ordinary lives and complicated romances, not knowing the identity of the other.

Ladybug's real name is Marinette, a humble baker's and a foreigner daughter. Her heart has only love for the handsome and charming Adrien but struggles to be seen by him between the manigeances of the mayor's daughter, who despises her, and his arranged fiancee from a country far in the East.

Adrien, the son of Gabriel Agreste, a rich merchant selling attires and perfumes and an influencial man in Paris, is Cat Noir and in love with Ladybug.

The merchant is also, unbeknowst to his son, Hawkmoth and wants the Miraculous for himself to bring back to life his wife Emilie, recently dead from a mysterious illness.

[thebigbuttlover]

Helluva Boss protagonists redesigns made by my friend "The lone Lobster" on our Helluva Boss and hazbin hotel rewritte server on Discord:

Blitz:

Moxxie:

Millie:

Loona:

[andreabaideas]

Yeah, agree on that with you both @porkchop200324 and @mzannthropy .

They also said in reddit It was a team effort of both Sam Claflin and Riley Keough (I ♥️ both) who refused many scenes of the first rumored script because of the many shitty writings apparently, including one that had many Daisily Sex scenes... Not because It wasn't faithfull to the original material, actors shouldn't care about that, but because they found them "badly written and cringe", had they been good they wouldn't have been picky!!

Side note with philosophy : they both have the privilege of being more famous than their screen partners of DJATS (Sauf Timothy Olyphant and Tom Price obviously) thats why they were listened to, It may sound unfair, but like..

Sam is a "hunger games and romantic movies star" (hate the labels but they exist sadly) and Riley is "the definitive nepo princess" (again hate labels but her grandpa IS "the King") and actually a very talented actress, both have earned the Producers respect (because get audiences money make no mistake) and if both are telling you your writing sucks...They are probably right, and thus they got listened.

Rumors has It Camila Morrone had issues with both scripts the original and the official one we saw, but got completely ignored...Sadly.

To add : Honestly if they were going to ignore the book they should have done a throuple threesome like The Laureate did and It would've been far more interesting to watch tbh.

Was looking at the trivia for DJATS episode 10 on IMDb, and apparently the Camibilly argument was shot multiple times, and one of the shots involved the fight becoming physical?? I really hope Sam and Camila were the ones who shut that down. I'd rather see Billy punch Nicky, or Graham punch his dad 10 times than that. What were those writers on??

[nionom-art]

Hey there! First off, I'm gonna say that I love your AU and some of your designs (Peacock! Marinette for example, it's so original after seeing the same "Elegant party clothes with blue skin" a lot of times), and secondly, it's gonna give me some inspiration to my MLB AU!

Now with the quesitons:

1) Lila it's going to have a redemption arc? Just wanna be prepared if we have another "Scarlet Lady Case" (a lot of fans triggering beacuse Chloe it's not redeem).

2) How are the sentimonsters gonna work? Like canon or with some changes?

And 3) Have you gonna have a favorite chapter to adapt to your au? And if it's the case, you will have a hated chapter that you are gonna rewritte at some point?

Sorry for this amount of text, but then again, thanks!

Thank you so much!!! Peacock!Marinette has to be one of my favorite designs I’ve done too- I’m glad so many of you guys seem to like it too!

1. Just getting it out of the way now- I am not planning on redeeming Lila (she will have a character arc, just not a redemption arc). That’s saved for a different character. Lila will be her regular delightful self for the duration of the comic, lol

2. As for how sentimonsters work in my au- It’s a surprise :) I have some expansions on cannon I want to explore (I’m excited!)

3. I’m really excited for Kagami- I love her character so much!! I don’t have a hated character necessarily, but I will say that a few of them are being difficult to write (Zoe, Luka, and Gabriel particularly)

[anon-serenade]

its been a while that i have been cooking this AU but i will state this here as a masterpost for it.

Welcome to Cookie Run: Rebaked Bainmarine

This AU is mostly focused on rewritte side of Cookie Run while adding in a few twists, of course since I lack a platform to even elaborate on writing, I will share it around here + there will be additional design changes if I find the design too complicated for me to doodle or so.

seriously im not joking that i am not gonna follow the storyline after Silver Kingdom in canon. I will only tackle the beasts once Dark Enchantress is Dealt with.

Bonus Spoiler Design for Elder Faerie Cookie and ███████

[fuzedatti]

old drawing i forgot to post

kinda a redesign?? a rewritte of tmc, not really a fan of it now tbh

[dolconfessionsss]

The Eden change seems so weird to me. Like they are "too ooc" But the Christmas event? Soft. Hallowen? Soft. Radio scene? Soft. That one bath scene where PC sleeps on them? Soft. Rescue from the Asylum? Soft. Reading romance novels by the fire? Soft. The traumadump scene? Soft. Not even getting into the Valentine event, which seems to them the biggest offender. Like homie more than half their events shows them being soft towards the PC, if anything the fuckass prey-hunter thing is only prevalent the first week or less you spend with them in the cabin and then it's crickets unless you piss them off deliberately or don't visit the woods.

And this has been a THING for YEARS, and suddenly they gotta turn them back into this one note guy (gn) that is turbo abusive instead of having any depth because of the vision™ (that hasn't been of any importance until now) and for what??? So they keep being sidelined by most everyone that goes for the highschool LI's? And like is this rewritte really so pressing when most everyone else doesn't even have seasonal events and Avery over there barely has any content to the point of being a cardboard cutout of a LI compared to the rest? Like seriously the most interesting thing going on in their scenes is the Poker one and mostly because you get to see OTHER character that aren't them. Or Alex for that matter, if you take away the pregnancy content they really have got nothing going on that is not tied to the damn farm (that most PC's run for them so there's that).

Don't even get me started on the Black Wolf tho, talk about UNDERCOOKED and having no character to be OOC about (but no one even gives enough of a shit for that one). But Eden is the pressing concern, we gotta take that dimensional part and shoot it out the back, we only have room for one character with hidden softness and that goes to Whitney who might not pimp you out if you beg enough I guess, but hey they like sanrio merch. Like I get it, they want the Rapeville game where they fuck dogs to be super gritty and dark (but hey do NOT talk about abortion that is a step too far) and where no joy or whimsy is allowed, but man you already have enough misery as IS.

For a dogrape game, they sure neglect their one canine love interest 😔 But I agree, it's hard not to feel like there more favoritism on the school LI's.

[katie-krum]

Draco & Hermione

Kaleidoscope - Chapter 3 - katiekrum - Harry Potter - J. K. Rowling [Archive of Our Own]

As he walked along the train, he looked into the windows of the subsequent compartments. He was disappointed because none of them had even a single free seat. You should have go in earlier, he thought before stopping for a moment at the compartment in which the angry blond was sitting. Like it or not, he overheard part of his conversation with his friends.

“Father doesn’t even consider starting talks about the engagement contract! He told me that thanks to such a contract, he and mother now live together. I want to live with Hermione under one roof.” - he hissed. - “He’s just unbearable!”

At that moment, a girl with hair cut into a bob just above her ear spoke up. He only knew what this hairstyle was called because his aunt let the hairdresser talk her into doing something like that. - “He’s not unbearable. I think your father doesn’t want to deal with it because you want the contract for completely the wrong reasons...”

[ghostsprobably]

Winx fandom should make a hashtag or comments so that Rainbow knows and apologize for the absurdity of what they are doing, after that we should choose one of the fans rewritte to make the actual reboot(i choose either yours or maikyodel's)

i think the fandom has been pretty vocal when stuff is getting weird, but it doesn't really seem like the feedback sticks

actually... they did bring floral for fate season 2... so maybe we can get a scrap of change