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Winter Melting: Chpt. 9 Back Again but Still Not Home
Rating: M || WC: (3,325/38,390) || Haven Arc || Chpt: 9/??
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Chapter Excerpt:
Haven celebrates while Mirenan continues to be a buzzkill.
“Look at him. He’s doing it again.” Mirenan peered around Dorian. They had climbed onto the roof of her little hut in Haven, where the beam for catching the snow that accumulated made both a sturdy climbing hold and a nice little seat. From there, they had a good view of the festivities across the Inquisition camp, pilgrims arm in arm with Chantry sisters, mages keeping a wide bay of the Inquisition templars-turned-soldiers even as both groups’ voices rose in merriment and song. Patrolling the party was the ruffed Commander, occasionally exchanging a nod or handshake with a drunk reveler, but never ceasing his vigilance. Dorian sat up to give a perfunctory glance in Cullen’s direction before leaning against the roof again. “He appears to be trying, in his own way, to partake in a bit of leisure,” he said with a wave of his hand. “Let him. The man could use a break from his work.” “But he keeps looking this way. See!” Her hand gripped Dorian’s arm. “There he goes again.” She collapsed against the roof, hands over her face. “He’s going to kill me, I know it. First chance he gets.”
Chapter-specific tags/warnings below the cut.
Chapter-specific tags: Lavellan, Dorian, Fionna, Alistair, Cullen, Cole
Chapter-specific warnings: No content warnings for this chapter.
Maryden makes a background appearance, and yes, she did bring her lute.
#dragon age fanfiction#Solavellan#solas x lavellan#My fic#dragon age inquisition#Mirenan Lavellan#Winter Melting#Forgot to post this whoooooops#I do really like that final scene with Dorian though. And it came out of nowhere#Totally unplanned!#But it's exactly what the pacing needed#Also parts of this chapter are going to be SO FUNNY if I ever finish Raise Up This Knife
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oh yeah i finished sacred and terrible air and i regret to announce that the distressingly erotic autopsy scene in disco elysium was not an isolated incident
#gore text cw#disco elysium#i guess#my overall review of sacred and terrible air is; EXTREMELY difficult to parse and DESPERATELY needs an editor#theres some great prose in there and some really neat ideas but the pacing is INCOMPREHENSIBLE#the worldbuilding is also never once explained theres no joyce messier figure to tell you What The Hap Is Fuckening#so if you havent already played the game it would be COMPLETE gibberish#but theres some gorgeous prose and the worldbuilding is THERE pretty much exactly as it is in de#its extremely impresive but desperately needed editing#its also a lot darker & grittier than de no real jokes or light moments#i wouldnt say dont read it but i would say dont go in lightly#and dont read it if you havent played the game first to get the lay of the land
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Wake up somewhere better, maybe (Patreon)
#Doodles#SCII#Damned#Harvey Dent#ZEX#Blood#Ask to tag#Stepping back even further - I'm sure you can understand needing a little extra time on this#For multiple reasons haha#It took such a while to finish the first one and not just on an editing front! Honestly that didn't take very long at all haha#There's a frame somewhere that's bothering me - I ''animated'' that movement frame-by-frame myself so if it's a bit strange it's my eye#At least it's mostly like what I wanted! Mostly like what I saw in my head! The three overlapping and then drawing back to show the depth#It really was such a strong mental image for me - it's amazing how simultaneous things can be despite being described separately#The dog - Harvey - ZEX - all moving at their own pace! A split second can be so expanded like a slow-mo shot ah#It's honestly a very beautiful medium#Hhhh ZEX's death was very affecting to me ;; I so very much wanted him to go out the way he wanted to#Befitting his Admiral status - strong and confident and surrounded by his crew#But by that point he was so tired and ready to rest - it would have been sadder to watch him continue to barely scrape by#Not even killed by his Beauty! Just one good chomp from one big sick dog :'0#The others trying to protect him - they didn't know him just out of whatever empathy they had for their fellow!#Zero was a hero so that kind of character is easy enough haha but even Harvey! Even after ZEX made him uncomfortable with his long looks lol#He was still willing to help in whatever way he was able ;; And it still ended the same#His last word being just ''pain'' hhhwehhh ;;#It is always the saddest-saddest to me to have such an articulate and eloquent witty verbose and silly character reduced to singulars#Something so simple and still so expressive hh </3 ZEX dearest hweh#But loving also means letting go! Death was a release he needed even if it's sad#I'm a real sucker for Meet Me In The Afterlife kind of stories so I may or may not have batted that around as an idea down the line#He has plenty of loved ones that have seen the other side - even from the Institute specifically!!#It's not exactly a happy ending but it's something <3
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Although - let me premise. I like Lyse. I don’t think Conrad choosing her to lead the resistance was earned, it felt very fast and a bit out of nowhere because she’s not a leaderly type and the traits she gained were in Doma (he didn’t see that happen), but you actually don’t have to change anything major to fix or at least better it in my brain, you just need to swap around some dialogue. Don’t have him talk to you about choosing her, have her take the reins herself or with encouragement when he dies. thassit I think itd give her some je ne sais quoi
#play game#stormblood#stormblood spoilers#ffxiv spoilers#I was right stormblood tries to handle two big things at once and is a bit misbalanced with how much time they both need to really hit#but it’s really doing the most with what it’s working around#it has limitations and put its shoulders back and rammed into them and it’s like getting bruised but it’s still doing good things#I think it just gets a bit panicked about how its pacing is going and tries to fix it in the moment — but it needed to stretch the fix out#which may be a multiple writers thing? I’m unsure idk about the production.#SORRY FOR BEING A STORY GUY IM SORRY but no it’s doing great cohesion things and great engagement things they really got the#linear quest-to-quest feeling good enough that I know when I Can stop but I don’t Want to#I would have spoken more about the other expansions while they were happening (arr specifically) but I wasn’t Engaged then. And I AM engage#now; which is making me Think Things. I think the fact that I can pick up on what exactly is wrong instead of just going (??????????)#is a point for sb and hw and a point away from arr base patch#no anyways. and we didn’t need to spend quite so much time at the ruby sea. ANYWAYS-#LYSE COULD BE A LEADER. That’s what her arc has been leading to. it’s just that the shoehorned way the concept is named is not satisfying
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if i had a nickel for every time a company cancelled their top rated lesbian cartoon and the animators had exactly one season to wrap up what was clearly meant to be a five season storyline, I'd have two nickels...
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#yeah the awe is fading and now I'm going through the same feelings I had with toh when that show wrapped up#like. omg they did their best and blew it out of the park. but omg the pacing#jinx adopts a kid and becomes the face of the revolution despite not giving a fuck about the war#Vi has an entire montage going through her korra underground fighting career before getting bored of that#Caitlyn's dictator storyline is resolved in the next episode when she has 2nd thoughts#Mel is kidnapped and spends most of her screentime in a pit before figuring out she's magic#Ekko and Jayce are yeeted from the plot due to time travel shenanigans#Ekko has exactly one episode and it is the best episode. but omg he needed more screentime#Jayce has an entire montage stuck in the bad ending timeline before coming the conclusion 'i gotta go back and murder someone'#Singe does absolutely nothing and I have no clue what he intended to do with Vander. also I think he has a dead daughter#And Viktor had his jesus moment before doing the gayest shit I've ever seen and he is slaying#(although I'm pretty sure he's the last minute standin for the real villain of the show they didn't have time to introduce or develop#so Viktor is doing some complicated shit and not taking the breakup with Jayce well
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I love Monster Sanctuary
Been struggling for hours to 5-star some of the tougher bosses and I've finally made a breakthrough via tossing a penguin, a spider in a Halloween costume, and someone's fursona with a knife at said bosses until they die
Absolutely fantastic game, 10/10
#goosechatter#monster sanctuary#i mean this all in a /gen and /affectionate way lmao#it really is a fun game#story isnt too deep but the gameplay is great#slower pace than some other collect 'em all games ive played but tons of fun#also if you play this game you know exactly what monsters I'm using lol#i need a shockhopper plushie asap
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Finally watched season 1 of the reboot last night and everyone was right it is SO good
#it’s not perfect and the episodes could have been a bit longer to help with pacing#but overall this feels like it’s exactly what the series needed#a fresh enough restart with a great cast and solid humor#total drama#anyways my faves are probably zee emma and damien
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2024 reads / storygraph
Sea Of Broken Glass
fantasy
two sisters who live on a floating village in a shallow ocean are exiled when one develops magic and can’t hide it like her sister does
they travel to the land, trying to survive searching for their mother who was exiled 20 years ago, through the wilderness and magical caves
crystal/mineral magic, magical creatures, sister relationships
#sea of broken glass#aroaessidhe 2024 reads#damn this is like. weird and whimsical fantasy world. unique magic system? weird religion? creatures? CAVES?#aroace & sapphic-aspec MCs with basically no romance? MADE FOR ME! unfortunately it’s bad#like just the writing quality is not at all there. like it took me 1/3 to even sort of realise that in theory this is exactly#my kind of thing bc the not good writing was too distracting#the beginning is EXTREMELY fast paced; there’s no breathing room and everything happens too fast to get a sense of anything#The voice of both POVs is the same. Their relationship is so back and forth and all over the place it got a bit annoying#+ they both feel like 16yos not 20-somethings.#worldbuilding details were distracting me - some were answered eventually but not before I was getting distracted with questions.#eg I need to know about the ocean ecosystem. if it’s knee deep where do fish live. where are ocean plants. are there deeper parts of the oc#they hear a wolf howling. how do you know what a wolf sounds like you’ve never heard one.#why does everyone hate magic? Obviously bigotry doesn’t have a reason but like. just felt like it was there to make the plot happen?#if she has magic crystal powers that she can make anything with why did she not make them a boat?????? or shoes???#they walk across the sea for days??#and like I am happy with weird and slightly nonsensical worldbuilding details if the writing style and tone is very whimsical yknow?#but this is not that.#And like there ARE lots of cool elements! salt based magic? the giant cave frogs??#but unfortunately the writing style and execution is just not there.#I had to drag myself through most of it just because I wanted to form an opinion on the whole thing#Also it really awkwardly mentions their sexualities immediately. I don’t mind a slightly awkward delivery of that tbh#but do you need to do so in the first few pages of their pov?
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#this may not mean much to those who haven't followed me for long#but for my long term followers I thought I'd share a super positive update about my oldest 17 yo son#you may remember that for years he's suffered immensely from anxiety depression and panic attacks#he's since been diagnosed with autism which explains a lot of it (as has my daughter)#but it was so bad we had to take him out of school in 7th grade and it's still questionable whether he'll graduate#he's spent 5 years having almost no social contact other than online & hasn't been able to participate in anything but family events#because of anxiety and panic attacks#but y'all#Y'ALL#he just started his FIRST JOB#we worked with voc rehab & they got him a job at a thrift store run by parents of an autistic child so they know exactly what pace he needs#and he WAS ABLE TO DO IT#you have NO IDEA how amazing this is for him#and how much of a relief it is for me#because this means he's doing better#and he may actually find his way out of this and be able to build himself a bit of a future#it's amazing you just don't know how amazing it is after the last five years of struggles we've been through#so sorry that was a novel but I'm just so proud of him#he has it in him I know that he does#he just needed a break from life for a few years to find that bit of strength
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hey does anyone know how we’re supposed to survive it all. asking for a friend
#she speaks#oh gang we’re really in it now#i don’t think i’ve ever felt this bad this deeply in my whole life lol#the burnout just keeps accumulating past any point i thought it could reach#and i can’t even pretend at work anymore#i’m so tired and these kids are so infuriating and it builds and builds every time they do something shitty#and i love them and it’s not their fault they’re just kids and they’re tired and it’s almost summer#but god i can’t fucking do it anymore#how exactly am i supposed to survive the next two weeks#the class i’m taking is too confusing and too fast paced#and i didn’t buy the textbook bc it’s 200 fucking dollars#and our apartment is always a mess#and i can’t keep up with friendships and feel like i’m constantly letting them down#and there’s nothing i can do to fix any of it#until the school year is over#bc at this point it takes everything i have just to get up and go to work in the mornings#but then i still have to somehow find energy to do other stuff too. and like actually teach.#i have to grade and do report cards and return materials and clean up my classroom#i need to complete a checklist the size of a novel before i leave for the summer#i need to keep the kids engaged but none of us want to be here#i need to start organizing to make next year easier#i need to fill out paperwork and spreadsheets and update my password and find time to feed myself and grade more papers and#vacuum the floors and scoop litter and clean up clutter and do dishes and wipe down counters#and i haven’t been able to fucking do any of it in months and left so many chores to my poor partner who’s also going through it#bc i have nothing left and i don’t know what to do!! i want to scream every minute of every day bc i’m so beyond overwhelmed the moment#i wake up in the morning but i don’t have time for a meltdown so i just keep going!!#i wish i had better words to explain how bad it’s gotten but the brain fog has gotten so so bad#i can barely think i can’t make decisions my memory and recall have gotten so much worse#i take my anxiety meds so often that they’ve stopped working#and yet i still worry that i’m making it up and being dramatic. anyway sorry about all this lol
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god ok it's 1am i gotta like. go lie facedown in bed & not be able to sleep for another 2-3 hours lmao
#love u guysssss tysm to those of u who indulged me in simple texting stuff today#that's exactly what i needed; i had fun in spite of the existential dread which was a nice change of pace lmao ♡♡#maybe tomorrow i can put enough words together for some actual draft replies........ but we shall see#━━ ˟ ⊰ ✰ ooc ⋮ don't @ me.
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i got drunk & watched the rwrb movie last night and i have 2 thoughts
1. that was bad
2. it was like a bad porno but without any porn
#the acting was so stiff#why were there so many dead silences#what was that color grading#why were henry’s lips so red#WHY WAS EVERYTHING FADE TO BLACK#this movie was rated r but they didn’t even swear or fuck ????????#didn’t need to see em going at it doggy style but like ?? even the fucking kiss scenes were cut so short to make room for what exactly#the plot? the plot that they absolutely butchered?#i’m not gonna say the book was a masterpiece but like. at least it got the pacing right#i didn’t believe OR care about their relationship#and WHERE WAS JUNE#and why was nora insufferable#her lines????? no one talks like that#my friend said that the two leads only had chemistry when they were actively making out and like… did they lie#uma thurman did not give a single shit and i respect that#ok so apparently i had more than 2 thoughts#but like DAMN#i knew it’d be bad#but THIS???
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this hannibal rewatch is curing me. i feel joy again
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As a person who read almost the entirety of 'Legends of Bubble' series I can say that it's bonkers how 'Dreamcatcher' is the smallest book in the series yet it's surprisingly the most important book for its original source.
'Demonslayer' has, like, 5 separate legends, two of them are fucking HUGE (with 'Yarkh. Step up' being the biggest) but 'Dreamcatcher' is the only one that actually ties the first and the second part of its source material and uses it cleverly. It's amazing.
I read this one with the expectation that it's a fanservice-y kind of comic book that could potentially explore the characters but have very little impact on the story as a whole. A story for a very specific audience, a story that could be just skipped. But nooooooo.
They went HARD on this one. Not only we learn more about Balor and Yana's relationship and how it's even more fucked up than we thought (the part where we learn how their first meeting actually happened and whose fault it was had me shooked), but we also learn what kind of plans they had for the future, we learn why they do what they do in Vol.2, we learn why and how the whole 'Satan in the knife' plot started.
But the craziest thing is that they basically spoil the entirety of Vol.2. I kid you not, the way they splattered small delicate details everywhere that you only notice and connect after you read the entirety of 'Demonslayer' is insane. It was not even a Chekhov's gun, it was straight up a Chekhov's cannon. And if after you read it for the first time you're like 'Well, that was fun, moving on!', on your second reading you experience something akin to the existential crisis mixed with five stages of grief. And if you decide to read 'Demonslayer' in its entirety again, thanks to this you'll see everything in a new light and cry over things you didn't cry about before! In fact, you'll finally understand things you didn't understand! You'll also be obliterated by the ending twice as hard this time!
And to this day it drives me crazy how all of this was done in just 114 pages.
#also I need to give a shout-out to the duo of Rodin and Kablukova who did the art for this one#and like with the book itself you start to truly appreciate them after you read Dreamcatcher for the second time#if I'm not mistaken that's the only Demonslayer project they worked on#and after reading it you just feel a little bit disappointed that they didn't use this artist duo more#same goes for Exlibrium by the way! the most interesting heart wrenching arcs were drawn by THEM#in fact a lot of people got into Exlibrium because the early chapters were done by THEM#as I learned not so long ago they're called only for the very very important arcs that have a huge impact on the future of the series#and I realised what exactly that meant when I reread all of the things they had their hands on#the latest thing they did was the 'home-coming/housewarming ' arc of Exlibrium and oh boy was it important#it was the most interesting and well-paced thing the series had in two damn years!#listen the work of the writers is important as well but the way Rodin and Kablukova bring it to life with their own little details???#it's insane!!!#just... wow.#demonslayer#бесобой#bubble comics
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actually im cool with whatever i feel you linger in the air decides to do with the ending because nothing will beat ice paris being his own grandfather in love destiny the movie
#i was thinking about possible endings for this show and the most popular time travel ending is meeting the descendants/an incarnation#that looks exactly like the person they were in love with etc#but LD has them all beat 😂😂😂😂😂 he WILL stay in the past now he's his own grandpa 🤪#im loving everything they're doing in i feel you linger in the air so rn im not worried#everyone that said they were bored on the first eps or that ~finally~ a kiss don't know what they're talking about#the pacing has been perfect for me if they did anything b4 it would have felt rushed they're doing what they need to do for this story#IF YOU WANNA LEARN PATIENCE GO WATCH ALL 40 EPS OF LOVE DESTINY AND THEN COME BACK AND TALK TO ME#cata.txt
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“Ah, thank you, lass,” Wilhelm chuckled bashfully, rubbing the back of his neck as her gratitude-he wasn’t exactly sure how good of a teacher he was (particularly when it came to language), but he was glad that could be a help to Emily as she practiced her English, just as June had been such a help to him.
And besides, he never missed an opportunity to share his fables with anyone, always loving the chance to share the many great legends and stories he had been raised on with a new audience, and so he was happy to share them with Emily now, both as a learning tool and as a means of entertainment, allowing her a better look into Irish culture, and the stories told from generation to generation.
“Y’know, this was Randall’s favorite story when he was a wee lad,” he added with a smile, as he leaned forward, resting his head on his chin, saying, “He used to ask Junie and I to read it to him all the time, and he used to just sit and look at the pictures just as often. I think it was part of what made him want to get into tailoring and millinery-he loved the beautiful dresses Trembling wore, and I think he wanted to make something like them.”
Well, that, and he had a feeling the beautiful, golden-haired Trembling had something to do with his boy’s affection for blonde-haired young ladies...glancing at Emily’s own flaxen locks, he supposed he shouldn’t have been so surprised that Randall had become so smitten with the siren...
#((exactly; she could NEVER be a burden to them! they would be more than happy to have her there as a part of their home and family))#((and any adjustments they had to make as a result of moving her in? worth it!))#((they'd make it work! doing a little more fishing; working on the guest room to install a new tub; all of it they would do))#((if it meant emily got to stay! and like you said; she could go out into the bayou too; do her own fishing))#((and she could totally pitch in; since she can be out of the water for a bit! she could come out and help june around the house))#((and would no doubt be happy to do so; and hey; maybe she could also be able to come out of the tub for a bit))#((and socialize with the paces; being able to come into the living room to visit; or she could even have dinner with them!))#((emily really is a part of the family; and doing what they can to accommodate her needs would never be a burden to the paces!))#((it'd all be worth it in their eyes!))#outofhatboxes#beatingheart-bride#V:Part of Your World
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