#valentino rewrite

[dnpanimationstudioclone]

Made some redraw versions of Valentino’s Door Greeters and Fizz-Bot Kitty for my Valentino! Changed the moth gals into bees to help connect them closer to Val posing as a day poillinator(Though I do def see him have Moth Gals at the night scene) and made Kitty more like a Playboy Bunny 🍯🐝👯‍♀️🍸 I imagine the Bee girls are named “Honey & Bea” and Kitty’s now something like “bunny” or “Bon Bon”.

Fun fact, Playboy was pretty popular in the 70’s!!!!!!!👯‍♀️👯‍♂️👯

In my scenario, I imagine it’s Val helping to keep Vox from blowing his top and trying to start an immediate fight with Al after realizing he was back.

🦋Valentino🦋-Bon-Bon, be a dear & whip up a nice drink for Vox a to help cool him down, and two for me so I don’t end up KILLING HIM BEFORE THE RADIO DEMON WILL!🍸

Here’s some of my inspo!

What do u think? I’d love to know💖

[penguinofspades]

The angels not knowing the rules for who gets into heaven makes zero fucking sense when the 10 commandments are right there.

You could even use it to point out how corrupt Heaven is. For example, perhaps Sir Pentious is not accepted into heaven despite him genuinely redeeming himself because "sorry dude you didn't honor your parents lmao" or some shit like that.

Meanwhile, a more vile person (let's use Val as an easy example) could be on their deathbed. They make a last minute conversion and as a result they're accepted into heaven since they technically kept all of the commandments.

[hazshit-hotel-hater]

“Excuse me sir! There must someone you’ve confused me for!”

Having Angel withdrawal again sorry guys :/ its time for some uhh… prologue stuff?? I think thats right. Anyway! As I mentioned in this lovely post, when sinners die the time it takes for them to wake up in hell and where they wake up depends on how they died. So for Angels case his body was formed in hell in a hospital bed cause thats where he died so theres like fibres and metal in his body from being formed around a hospital bed! This is also going to go into how regenerating and how injuries work so get ready! Basically whatever your body was originally formed and made out of regenerates eventually, you can have scars if theyre really big (uncommon since the injury usually kills you) but if you die again in hell they go away. Angel gets injured quite a lot and none of these injuries are permanent. That isn’t to say you can heal by killing yourself though! If you do die while injured there may actually be lasting complications since bodies in hell are typically made to regenerate while gravely wounded. Its kind of like a fucked up computer so if you have a broken leg and die by say snapping your neck the body may get confused and regenerate bones and such incorrectly. Or it may not! Its hell who knows! Ill likely figure out a more concrete plan and way that it works but at the moment I enjoy this aspect of hell to not have a random cheat code and instead include some body horror. Its hell so like some stuff is probably confusing right??

Back to Angel, later on around season 1 in the rewrite he also has throat surgery to remove his deformed inner fangs and those DO actually stay gone because certain hospitals in hell (usually expensive ones) have tools from sloth that have been permitted by Lucifer. Similar to how Stolas got that lust portal gem or whatever. Angels body wasn’t supposed to form like that and this is a common thing to happen with sinners that die “long-term” and that sounds confusing but it really just means sinners that die in comatose-esque ways like Angel. His body was dying over the course of months (December to March to be exact) so parts of his body formed over complicated or were underdeveloped like the aforementioned fangs (that were originally meant to form inside of his mouth and not his throat) that would randomly bare themselves and stab his own throat, paralyzing Angel temporarily. Other examples would be parts of his legs and smaller stomach.

This is the surgery Angel got by the way (expenses covered by Velvette but thats a whole other plot line)

On top of this I also wanted to draw Angel’s old markings (at least one of them). Prior to Valentino, Angel looked much similar marking-wise to his original comic designs where he was more purple and yellow with all the fun skulls and stripes. Though, with how contracts work in my rewrite, Angel loses the markings and they change into hearts after his contract and cannot return to normal after his contract is terminated. The same is true for Husker and Niffty. This whole piece is really just supposed to capture to horror of waking up after being comatose and you’re suddenly not yourself anymore and also not where you were for the past months and your entire anatomy is changed. Can you imagine waking up without bones??? In 1947??? Id have a breakdown personally!

I also wanted to use green for that sick gross feeling. Kind of the dread you feel before throwing up, but also to represent Angel’s later feelings of envy that I was unable to present in his design. I really like pink characters in green atmospheres if you can’t tell. If I think of more stuff to add to this post I will, but for now it’s just a lot of lore. Hopefully you all enjoy it!

[jollmaster]

redesign trivia: Valentino

° blind, tall, wounded, haughty

° orientated by smells and vibrations using antennae

° false gold teeth

° carved silver mask with no eyeholes

° style as a bit of a reference to latin american culture

° he died burning alive in his own brothel

° fine clothes disguise awful scars

° silk scarf covers a neck burnt to the vertebrae, golden bandages cover burnt skin, mask covers blind eyes

° Valentino cut off wings (they were in way), symbolically cutting off the possibility of repentance

main gang: Vaggie, Charlie, Angel Dust, Niffty, sir Pentious, Cherri Bomb, Husk, Alastor

Heaven: Adam, Eve, Lute, Emily

Hell: Lilith, Lucifer, Seviathan, Helsa, Razzle and Dazzle

Vees: Vox, Velvette

overlords: Zestial, Rosie, Carmilla Carmine, Odette and Clara, Flaming Skull Guy

friends and relatives: Mimzy, Arackniss, Molly

[bastart13]

So, funny thing! My sister and I watched Wish about two weeks ago and in that time she rewrote it as a novel, but better!

We both saw a lot of fairy tale potential in Wish which was unfortunately wasted by the hand of Disney's corporate meddling. My sister, who's written several novels at this point, tried her hand at fleshing out the fairy tale and the characters and she did such a good job!

The first two chapters are up on AO3, with more to come soon!

[minxtheeenby]

here are the sketches for some of my new hazbin designs

Sry if blurry, I had to resize this canvas so many times. more will be coming

[pyxehastoomanyinterests]

assortment of Happy Hostel doodles(i have so many, these are just a few)

[gracebethartacc]

……hi wish rewrite fandom I’ve come crawling back….

[cerulean-crow]

Little wip of Asha (and Valentino) because I’m really trying to nail down some finalized art for all the characters so I can hopefully make some nice little profiles for everyone <3

[asherashedwings]

Prompt. Angel Dust protecting Husk from Valentino

Here ya go! Had a lot of fun figuring out the perspective for this

[imdedinsidex-x]

Working on a Hazbin rewrite that I’m dubbing The Bed and Betterment Project. Some info about everything so far under the cut!

-Charlie is a lot more menacing in this AU, as I imagine her personality is a lot more like Michael from The Good Place. She’s still fairly cheery and seems kind, but she’s willing to remind others of who she is.

-Charlie started the Bed and Betterment Project as a way to see how far sinners could go to get better and improve, or if that’s even possible. This was mostly just something for her own entertainment, but as she gets used to the members of the project she comes to see that maybe they can actually improve, and thus she changes her sights towards redemption and she becomes a bit more optimistic as the show goes on

-Charlie has very unorthodox ways of trying to get the members of the project to rehabilitate by tempting them with their worse vices and making them relieve traumatic events, hoping it’ll push them forward (or perhaps over the edge.)

-Vaggie’s identity as an exorcist is already known by the denizens of hell, as well as by Charlie. In fact Charlie uses that to her advantage, Vaggie taking in the position of the ultimate bodyguard. Her character arc would be largely focused on her becoming her own person, gaining her own hobbies, and loving herself.

-All the exorcist wear mask that cover their true heavenly features, as do Charlie and Lucifer. Adam is the only one who doesn’t really need a mask, but he prefers to wear it.

-Speaking of Adam, he is much more intimidating in this AU, being a bit more serious but still coming off as affable and laidback, maybe even a little dumb. But despite his hedonistic tendencies, he still is a force to be reckoned with and can be quite threatening when he wants to be.

-Husk doesn’t have wings anymore. I believe they served no purpose, and instead he is slinky! His limbs and neck can extend to incredible lengths, as a reference to his looseness. And while he doesn’t immediately look like a magician like he did in his previous design, he can still do plenty of magical things in a similar fashion to the Cheshire Cat, being able to disappear and reappear really wherever, but he hardly utilizes this ability anymore.

-Alastor I figured could do with a neat little makeover, both in his casual appearance and in his demon form. I’ve gotten rid of his weird technical stuff and have decided they are instead crooked and sharp antlers he can spawn from wherever. Just as well he can control various radio signals and even create static sound or high frequency screams from his jaws, very much inspired by an elk’s cry.

-I’ve also changed Alastor’s backstory, but that’s something for a different piece.

-Wanted to lean into the blaxploitation inspiration of Valentino, as well as find a good balance of conventionally attractive and gross. I imagine whenever he’s about to say or do something particularly nasty, he pukes up maggots before hand to show off his vile nature.

-Not featured here, but I have ideas for Vox and the seraphims as well, but I’ll save that for another sketch page.

[dnpanimationstudioclone]

Meet Valentino🦋☠️

Meet my take on Valentino! This one took the longest for me to get around to.

Made him a Monarch Butterfly!🦋 I love the whole reverse Predator and Prey thing going on with him and Angel so what if he was a creature that would normally be considered Prey, if it didn’t have its own trick up its sleeve. Poison! ☠️ plus butterflies are often depicted as sweet and pretty, which would really lean into how he puts on a sweet face to hide his true colors.😈Though who’s to say he even is that(wink😉). Made his wings a warm gradient, added some sparkle ✨ and allude subtly to a split heart with the lines and dots💔 @the-burd-lord also pointed out they give off tears💧😢

Gave him a more bug like head, mouth, eyes and only has three fingers.

Gave him heart bent stripes like Angel Dust(@a-sterling-rose shared a cool idea that an overlord can change their contracted souls) wanted it to allude to bee stripes(bees love flowers and make sweet things) and other…striped insects.

Leaned with 70’s, DISCO !!!!!!!🕺🪩💃 Bell bottoms, matching top, PLATFORMS! The whole works! I figure it fits with his timeline a lot and with what he’s usually wearing. Plus he’s def into the club scene.

Replaced his top hat with a heart shaped fedora hat! Adorned it with all kinds of different flowers!!!!! Stuff like roses, Bleeding hearts, milkweed and the big flower he’s wearing is meant to allude to the Cattleya Orchid(Colombias national flower and symbolizes fertility and virility) roses are also very popular there! They even have a holiday around flowers called the “festival of the flowers”!🌼🌹.

For his sleeves wanted to allude to another Colombia flower “devils breath” highly toxic flower and in the same toxic family as the “Angels Trumpet”. Also a street term for the dangerous drug, scopolamine which is derived from the seeds of Borrachero trees, primarily found in South America like Colombia! 🇨🇴

Kept the heart buckle belt his og had but made it hollow. Hollow heart.

Gave him a cane that’s also a disco heart 🪩❤️which may not be able to squeeze out toxic gas and other tricks.

For his color scheme, @the-burd-lord suggested I'd go with RGB theme, colors on display screen(Vox is the leader and a screen) Ngl I was conflicted what colors to go with for the vees(Primary, Red blue purple etc). But then I realized when u mix those colors u get those other colors and then I decided to give the Vees two main color themes for each. One for show, the other their true colors! Val likes to use tropical warm welcoming colors(gold luxury), def still uses red for its sensual vibes….but those kinda colors are also color of many dangerous insects…warning colors⚠️‼️☣️☢️☠️☠️☠️

Made his Heart shades butterfly wing shaped like @lovesart23 did with her Val! Seriously LOVE IT!!!!!!!.

Added a heart on his chain with his initial. Was a gift from Angel Dust💔

Also wears black and white since he’s already very colorful and to appear clean with the white…the darkness often hiding under. Has some green for the leaves and thorns(every rose has its thorns) like how Velvette still wears gold colors for accesory!🍃🌿

My Valentino’s Colombian 🇨🇴 back in the 70’s a lot was happening with Drug trade(Cocaine trade) plus it’s in the warmer area of South America, where many butterflies can be found🦋🦋🦋Monarchs migrate to the south! Also great place for flowers🌹🪻🌸🌺🌷🌻🌼💐🪷

with the flowers also lowkey trying to allude with 60’s-70’s Flower power(he def likes to seem all peace and love) was also the time of the psychedelic era😵‍💫U know he def got that stuff.

Rewrite🦋☠️

Compared to OG he’s def more sly and smooth talking, often Make him ironically the more level headed of the V’s. Have him be able to keep a cool head more, try to covert his true nature, keep things under control. Play into how he likes to try a more pragmatic approach, relying on manipulation and pacifying first before getting violent if he feels like he’s not in control. They say u attract more flies with honey than vinegar afterall. he’s able to put on the charm and sweetness well enough. You do NOT want to get on his scary side…He relies a lot on manipulation but when push comes to shove, he can mess you UP☠️!!!!!!!

Leaning with the poison theme way more!☠️💊🧪.

He doesn’t just do Adult Entertainment, but also a huge drug supplier for Hell, especially for Angel💊. It’s been implied and supposed scrapped ideas and concepts have shown him feeding Angels drug addiction.

Have him be Angels main supplier and often uses his addiction to keep him under his wings, depend on him, likes to feed into it despite how much harm it does for him. He’s basically the embodiment of toxicity/addiction, things that can poison people, can become dangerous addictions and mess people up. He’s basically one of Angel’s most dangerous addictions, the toxic abusive boss/partner☠️

I honestly want him to want NOTHING with Vox’s whole revenge plan with Alastor and his new project…until he also realizes the Princess not only actually wants to help Angel but that Angel ACTUALLY might want to try to QUIT! Than he gets more involved with Vox’s schemes.

Gets his main poison from a special flower from Hell. Similar to how Monarchs get their poison from a certain plant(milkweed) as well as play into how Butterflies feed on nectar🌺🌸 perhaps has the flowers growing all throughout his studio…especially around and maybe even in Angel’s dressing room…

What do u think? How would u redesign Val if u wanted to? I’d love to know💖 I’ve also made the 🌈Hazbin Gang🌈 and his fellow VV’s, Vox & Velvette📺🧶

Oh one more thing…He’s not actually a monarch butterfly. Here’s some totally unrelated pics of wasps(one like the executioner wasp that can be found in warm places, like monarchs, spider wasps(not friendly to spiders) and….some more parasitic types)Warnign scary wasp pics) @the-burd-lord suggested the mandibles for his face(broken heart 💔)

[annymation]

Reimagining the characters in Wish

(Part 5- The Goat)

This will be the last one of these blogs about the characters. I was stalling on this one because honestly there’s really not much to Valentino in my rewrite.

Will his existence influence the plot tho? Yes, definitely way more than the movie Valentino did… Although that bar isn’t high.

So let’s go, animal companion time!

Personality

- Valentino is a one month old baby goat, a little ball of energy, too pure for this world, doesn’t know basic math and we must protect him at all cost.

- His main gimmick is that he follows Asha EVERYWHERE to the point it’s comical, like, I didn’t write him much so far in my rewrite (we’re currently on chapter 3 and he was alive in only 2 of them, so no wonder) but even when I don’t mention him just assume, he’s there… All the time.

- He cares a lot about Asha and sees her as his mother, since well, she technically is, she took care of him all his life (a month).

Main Traits:

- Curious

- Loyal

- Silly

- Innocent

- Determined

Backstory

(Because it wouldn’t be a rewrite of mine if the character didn’t have at least some angst, not even the 1 month old goat is safe from me)

- A month before our story begins, Asha was drawing animals at one of the farms in the kingdom, to practice, when suddenly she heard a new born goat all alone.

- She asked the owners where his parents were at, and they explain they didn’t notice the little guy under the hay earlier, they sold their goats to be exported to a neighboring kingdom.

- Asha felt really sad for him, so she asked to buy him, the farmer said she could keep him for free, taking care of baby goats without a mama goat around was too much trouble anyway, Asha was basically doing them a favor.

- Valentino obviously doesn’t know all that, but even if you told him it’s not like he’d care, he sees Asha as his mama and that’s all that matters.

- He’s very thankful for her taking care of him, getting him a nice sweater and a cozy little bed… He wishes he could thank her.

Which leads us to:

This Book

- So hear me out, there’s this kids book, “The Grateful Goat”, about Valentino, and it’s adorable, it’s my main inspiration for his rewrite.

- In this book we follow Valentino trying to communicate something to Asha and her friends, but they can’t understand him, since we’ll, he’s a goat.

- They try over and over to guess what he wants but nothing makes him stop bleating.

- Then, once Star came down and granted his wish, it turns out all he wanted to say was “Thank you”

Oh

That

That’s cute, I like that.

- Imagine this, in my rewrite, once Aster does grant Valentino’s wish and makes him talk, it’s a cute scene of Valentino going like:

“THANK YOU FOR ALWAYS TAKING SUCH GOOD CARE OF ME!”

(And he sounds like a child by the way, because that’s how a baby goat should sound like DISNEY)

- Now, am I saying that Valentino is just gonna speak once to say thank you?… Kinda, but not quite.

- You see, Aster’s wish granting magic is only effective on you if you really really REAAALLY want it to be.

- As he makes animals in the forest talk for example, or brings the tress to life, they only remain like that as long as they really want to, and what do you know, turns out most trees are chill just being tress so his magic fades away from them in a short while.

- Valentino’s wish won’t be to permanently talk, he just wanted to thank Asha, so once he’s done doing that Aster’s magic fades away after a few hours.

-… However, some of Aster’s magic remains deep inside of Valentino, so if for whatever reason Valentino reeeeeally wants to communicate something… Something urgent perhaps… Then he regains the ability to speak.

- Oh yes I CREATED TALKING GOAT ON DEMAND! HE ONLY SPEAKS WHEN ITS RELEVANT TO THE PLOT BABEEEEY!!!

- Not gonna lie, I’m really happy with this, because that just means I won’t have to come up with lines for him all the time, he’ll only speak when necessary.

Design

- So. Many. Cute. Designs… AND WE GOT THE WORST ONE GAAAAH DISNEY WHEN I CATCH YOU-

- It’s fine, I’m fine *breathes* we can fix him.

- First of all, he has horns, because believe it or not 1 month old goats already start showing their horns.

- Second, I debated a lot on this but we’re keeping the little sweater, yeah I’m surprised too, I hated it at first (still do hate it in the way that it is in the movie) but then I was informed it’s a reference to how Walt Disney used to put clothes on the animals of his family’s farm when he was a kid, and that’s the type of deep cut and cute reference I wish we had gotten more of.

- But the sweater won’t be so tight on him, like, let it be a little bit more loose, and maybe don’t cover his lower half.

- This concept art I used for the second chapter of my rewrite kinda illustrates it perfectly how I’d like him to be:

- The fluffy tuff of hair, the big eyes, the long ears, the lil horns, it’s perfect, that’s it, that’s our boy. Tho I don’t imagine him being all white, lets say he has some brown spots.

Final Thoughts

This post actually made me really mad because I wrote it all once and it was perfect, but I forgot to save it before closing tumblr, so I lost it all, ughhh why don’t they have auto save on cellphones??

I have plenty of ideas on how to make him more plot relevant than he was in the Disney movie, he won’t be like THE MOST ESSENTIAL CHARACTER OF ALL, definitely not, but little things that he does move the story forward.

If my calculations are correct he’ll most likely be useful on chapter 4 of my rewrite (or chapter 5, cause like, I’m trying to make them a bit shorter)

Not gonna tell how he’s gonna be useful in the story tho cause I think it’s better as a surprise.

A bit of a quick tangent here, but have you guys ever noticed how some Disney animal companions are the opposite of their human friends?

Ariel is brave and curious - Flounder is a coward

Pocahontas is wise and calm - Meeko is a dummy and Flit has anger issues

Alladin is generous - Abu is a kleptomaniac

You get the idea.

We didn’t get that at all in the Wish movie.

I was trying to come up with ideas on how to make Valentino have an opposite trait compared to Asha, but I don’t really know how to incorporate that into the story, oh well, I might just figure out as I go.

Anyway, that’s our goat, hope you like him!

Thank You For Reading!

[hazshit-hotel-hater]

Was looking at the helluva boss pride art again and im just genuinely so upset about verosika, I know vivzie really likes using bi and pan people as a get out of jail free card so she can just ship them with whoever she feels like, but im mostly disappointed because I was ORIGINALLY impressed because I thought she was holding one of the intersex flags (the pink and blue one I think, I dunno much about the flag but yknow) and then I realised its just the pan flag as highlights in her hair and viv is just like borderline fetishising bi/pan stuff again.

It would’ve been really interesting to have an intersex character in literally any capacity. Idk TMI I guess but as a sex worker who doesn’t really have “regular equipment” it got me excited and then I remembered that vivzie would never include an intersex character or anything more “convoluted” than like the most basic well known sexualities and then like 1 trans side character. Genuinely I don’t think we are ever going to get a main character that has a gender that doesn’t get put into a binary definition. I talk about him so often but literally I think Angel is the closest thing we are ever getting to a main character that has a different sense of gender. If we get a random nonbinary character, awesome! But even then I can’t find the hope in my heart to say it’ll even be portrayed correctly. Viv would have a fucking heart attack if she saw all my labels and genders and flags I have

Im not kidding if a hazbin or helluva character ever had a xenogender of any kind I will actually eat my fucking pants. Till then heres all my fucking redesigns and their flags (btw like half of these characters have NO idea what a xenogender is, its just like if they did theyd be like “oh yeah I feel like that too”)

I hope this shit ruins vivzies day straight up. I got my little queer hands all over your show whatre you gonna do about it. Btw I’m right about all of this but especially Sir Pentious and Velvette, go check out cassgender, cool shit! Also Vaggie is aroflux sorry I do not make the rules (yes I do)

[jollmaster]

asile!Hazbin Hotel: overlords trivia

• Vox is a japanese christian whose ancestors were persecuted for their faith

• Valentino, being blind, gropes people while meeting/communicating/hiring to visualize appearance and embarrassing them at the same time

• Velvette feels squeamish about Valentino because he reminds her of a producer who suggested to sleep way up

• Carmilla didn't give birth to second daughter, but breastfed her

• Rosie is infertile from birth, but she doesn't care: if she likes children, it's mostly as food

• Zestial jokes that he'll relive ten more overlords

• Broken Stone (the flaming skull guy) doesn't talk with almost any of colleagues

[rascalentertainments]

Wish Granted 🌟👩🏾🎶 (Wish Reimagined)

Chapter 3: This Wish

Chapter 2

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After all the inner lights of the Hamlet went out, the camera sweeps across the forest from an overhead shot and then zooms in slowly on a large feline running with elegant speed through the woods...

He leaps over rocks and streams making its way through the greenery as if he was on the hunt. After a few more moments, the lynx eventually approaches Rosas' gate. It slows down once it sees a slim familiar figure not far from the entrance. The lynx smiled and proudly walked over to his master, head held high.

The woman kneel down to greet the feline.

"Ah, I see your back from your trip! Took you longer than expected though. What's the matter? Did a mouse catch your attention along the way?" The queen said sarcastically with a smirk.

Sabor rolled his eyes at the assumption. He was more dignified than that...

The queen quietly chuckled and gave an affectionate rub behind her pet's ears. "Oh relax, I'm only teasing you. I raised you better than that. Now then, were you able to find where those traitors are hiding?"

The lynx nodded with a satisfied grin.

(Okay, just imagine this lynx, but he's Scar coded, and you have our Sabor. That's the inspiration behind him for this and a lot of his facial expressions reference it!)

"All right, now let me see what you've found. The spell should work since its fresh in your mind." Amaya explained. She put her hands on the temples of Sabor, closed her eyes and took a deep breath.

Sabor's eyes turned fully green and we get an extreme closeup of his right eyes, showing earlier events in a green tint and slightly fuzzy.

We're suddenly in Sabor's POV. The view is low to the ground and its looking at the front entrance of Rosas. He sees a young man in a cloak and aboard a horse leaving the place, then they suddenly take off in a run towards the woods. Sabor was caught by surprise but proceeded to follow the figure, picking up his own pace.

The lynx stayed only a few paces behind the horse, just to avoid being seen, but he kept up with the stranger. Whoever this guy was, he skilled on the horse and had done this many times before. Sabor got distracted for a moment by a mouse that scurried past him. He stops for a moment, the camera jerks itself quickly as Sabor regained his focus.

The feline gives chase once again and goes even faster to catch up with his real prey. Sabor finds the stranger is standing in front of a group of trees. The lynx then sprints to the other side of the path to try and get a view of the stranger's face. He says something in another language and throws something at the trees that make it move. Sabor tries to see the man's face, but its still hidden as he enters the Hamlet.

The lynx tries to enter the Hamlet, but it closes before he can get in. So returns to the bushes and starts to groom himself as he waits for the stranger to come back.

The vision quickly fades to white and Sabor's eyes stop glowing once Amaya moves her hands from his temples. "So, the rumors are true. The Hamlet indeed exists. Mi rey will be very pleased to hear this news." Her voice was cold as the night air itself.

Sabor purred as she lovingly scratched him behind the ear. "Well done, my dear." Her voice changing from cold to warm. "I'll even forgive your moment of weakness. Thanks to you, we'll not only capture the traitors, we're getting closer to having all the power we could ever want."

Amaya got up and turned around to look up at the stars shimmering in the sky, right above the castle. A moment later, the top of the tower opened up.

"It seems my dear husband is ready to try again. Best not keep him waiting, yes?" Amaya asked her lovely lynx, with a raised eyebrow.

Sabor rolled his eyes but followed her anyway. He wasn't really a fan of Magnifico, but he did make Amaya happy, so he tolerated him. The queen and her beloved pet proceeded to enter their home, heads still held high. Once a month after the wishing ceremony, the royals would attempt a feat they believe could make them the most powerful people on earth....

(Pretend that the cat is a lynx in this, okay? 😂 No hate on Charo though, he's fabulous)

"Well now, all this excitement has worn me out." Amaya said, patting her husband's arm gently. He understood the signal and helped her up.

Maginifico chuckled. "Indeed. I'm a bit tired out myself. Trying to pull that blasted star out of the sky can take a lot out of a guy." The two of them proceeded to leave the room until the king stopped in his tracks.

"I just realized something, who was the person who entered the Hamlet? I....just want to talk to him." He asked turing to his wife.

Amaya sighed. "I'm afraid that's the only information Sabor wasn't able to get. His face was covered."

Magnifico glared at the lynx. The lynx hissed back and leaped off the table in annoyance.

"Although I do have my suspicions... Someone who knows their way around this place as we do." Amaya tapped her chin as her brain already thought of the suspects.

"Well, while you ponder on that, I'll lead some of the soldiers straight into those traitors hideout tomorrow night. They won't see us coming if we come in at their most vulnerable, right? Hehehe..." Magnifico replied as he grabbed his staff and looked at his own reflection.

The man he saw in it knew they would soon be the most powerful rulers the world has ever known. His eyes glow green as his laugh and the screen fade to black. (MANIACAL LAUGHING)

After a few moments of silence on the black screen, we hear a deep male voice. "Asha. Have I ever told you about the stars above?"

The screen fades in to watercolor style animation (like the backgrounds in Lilo and Stitch, NOT SLEEPING BEAUTY) we see a large grown man and his daughter sitting on top of an olive tree, looking up at the stars above.

The father had his hand upon the girl's head. "Yeah, you told me the stars are just like us and all of them are different from each other, like people." 9 year old Asha said with wonder.

Tomas chuckled as he patted her on the head. "Yes, yes, I did, but there's something else you should know. You...shouldn't always rely on Magnifico or any one person to make your wish come true."

Asha looked at her dad confused.

Tomas gestures back to the sky, glittering with stars. "The stars are there to guide us, to inspire us, to remind us to believe in possibility. We're all connected in this great circle of life. I've gotten more wisdom from these stars than anyone I've met on Earth. I hope that one day, they could do the same for you."

"But I have you right here for that, papa!" The girl said as she hugged her dad's arm.

Tomas had a sad smile. "I have something for you, consider it an extra birthday gift." He reached in his satchel and pulled out a brown leather covered book and handed it to Asha.

Asha let out an excited gasp, thanked her father and opened the book, only to find it blank. "Aw, where's the story and pictures?"

Tomas put a pencil in front of the blank pages. "That's for you to create yourself."

Asha looked up at her dad in surprise.

"People think wishes are just ideas, but they are part of your heart. So promise me you'll draw and write whatever is in yours. Never let go of your wish." He whispered as a glimmer of hope shined in his eyes.

The little girl smiled and nodded. "I promise."

The camera pans out at the tree as the two of them embraced in a hug. The screen fades to black, but then...

The screen then lights up with green fire as men, women and children are running for their lives fleeing Rosas. Some of them were families with small children. They're feeling into the forest as fast as they can, not looking back.

12 year old Asha is running with Sakina by the hand as they catch up with Sabino who was waiting in the back of a hand made wagon pulled by a horse. He grabbed the two of them and told the rider to start going. They take off, and the last thing Asha sees is Magnifico with coming through the fire, with his own eyes and staff glowing an envious green. His face looking like a mad dog as he screamed.

"YOU THINK YOU CAN RUN AWAY FROM YOUR KING!? I WILL FIND YOU!! YOUR WISHES WILL! BE! MINE!!"

The screen is covered in green fire, then it flashes back to 2D animation, with Asha waking up in her bed with a cold sweat. She was breathing heavily and looked frantically for Magnifico.

"Maaaa..." The noise made Asha jump, but she looked down and saw Valentino in her lap and nuzzling his head into her chest, comforting her.

She slowly smiled in relief and hugged her little friend tightly. "Thanks, Val."

The moment is interrupted when both of them hear a loud cry. It sounded like a man in pain, but there's no way...

The two them rushed outside of Asha's room and followed the sounds in the house. Valentino ran ahead of her, sniffed around and stopped in front of Sabino's door. He tried head butting it open, but it didn't work. Asha stepped in and opened for him.

They were met with a terrible sight: Sabino was in bed and grabbing his chest in pain.

"Saba! Saba! What happened!?" Asha ran to his side. She looked for any signs of bruising, or bite marks from an unknown animal, but his body looked physically untouched.

"The-the remedy- I forgot to take it-" he gritted his teeth as he struggled to sit up. He felt like he was grasping for air.

Another pair of footsteps peddled through the hall. Sakina rushed in with a candlestick and a small bottle with a red liquid. "Don't worry, I have it right here."

After Sabino took the remedy (and got a good scolding from his daughter-in-law) he explained to Asha that he had been growing weaker for the past few months and took a homemade remedy every night to ease it. Ever since he lost his wish, he's had these sharp pains that he can't explain. "Maybe my heart knows its missing something important." He said.

When things finally calmed down, the family went back to their respective rooms to sleep.

Asha couldn't even think about going back to sleep so she and Valentino decided to take a walk in the Hamlet to clear her head. They sat by the well together as Asha took out her diary and touched it gingerly, thinking about her saba. Something had to change...

And then we get our next song:

This Wish ⭐

They promised that they would set us free, give our wishes to them and they’d be safe. (Asha opens up her dairy that contains a two page drawing to the royals, happily granting wishes)

So naive, little did I know, that they had lied, that the truth was so far off...

(She turns the page, showing the two of them going from looking friendly to being cloaked in shadows and sinister smiles)

All these years, my saba cared for me, kept me safe, from vicious royalty.

(She turns to a page containing a sketch of Sabino playing his mandolin happily, with a younger Asha singing happily next to him. She smiles at the sight of it)

But now, it’s my turn to be, the shield for them all, protect my family!

(At the "protect my family" part, she stands up with a determined look in her eyes.)

So I look up at the stars to guide me And I'm throwing all caution to the side

(She proceeds up the hill as she's looking up at the sky, with one star shining brighter than the others)

If knowing what we could be is what drives me Then let me be the first to stand and shout!

So I make this wish To have something more for us than this So I make this wish To have something more for us than this

(on the last "this", the star in the sky starts flicker just a little bit)

Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah, ah, ah More than this, oh, whoa, whoa, ah

(Asha speeds up as she gets closer to the top, with Valentino trying to keep up as he looks on with concern)

I always knew I needed freedom to go, But, I did what I was told when someone told me, "No!" Now I've got all of this desire in my heart And I just can't keep the lid on, but I don't know where to start!

(Asha and Valentino make it to the top, where the Wishing Tree is slowly in view)

'Cause we've been here generations and generations, Oh, where should I even begin? I'm done keeping my thoughts in No, I won't stop, no, I'm already rushing in!

(They're at the base, looking up at tree's colorful ribbons, the wind picks up and as they start to wave, the camera pans up at the same star, and now it's begun to flicker and shine faster)

If I could just be free of this feeling of suspension, Oh, where do I go and what do I do? My heart is breaking, but my head's held high, The way you always taught me to

(Asha looks up at the star above with hope)

So I look up at the stars to guide me And I'm taking this as a sign I'm sure there will be challenges that find me But I can take them on one at a time

(The star is rapidly flickering and flucuating as the music picks up)

So I make this wish To have something more for us than this So I make this wish To have something more for us than this!

(The ribbons on tree start to glow as the wind picks up and swirls red and pink leaves around Asha as she spreads arms her arms out, and her hair blowing in the wind)

Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah (so I make this wish) Hey, yeah, yeah, yeah, ah, ah (to have something more) More than this, oh, whoa, whoa, ah

(One more look at the star and its shaking rapidly and it finally starts to grow as the music swells)

So I make this wish To have something more for us than this!

(Her eyes are closed until she finishes the song with a wide smile on her face as a small glow starts to appear as the music finishes)

Asha slowly opens her eyes once she finishes and notices one of the stars seems to be flickering rather quickly. It wasn't doing that before. At first Asha wasn't really going to pay it any mind, but then it started to get brighter. And brighter. And brigther. It got so bright that she had to shield her eyes from the light.

The animals near her feet scrambled away, except for Valentino who beleted and hid behind her legs. Asha could barely see, but she swore she could hear... laughing? She tries to look back at the sky, only to see something hurtling STRAIGHT TOWARDS HER.

"What the he-" (her eyes widened) VALENTINO, RUN!" Asha exclaimed as she and the goat tried to run down from the tree. The laughing was growing louder and louder. Seeing that it was pointless, she grabbed her little friend and the two hit the ground together. Just in time too, because that ball of light wooshed right over their heads and down the hill, still laughing along the way.

Both of them looked up and saw the bright light going down the hill, the glowing ball flying through the air until–

"Ow!"

Thump!

"Ow!"

Thump!

"Ack!"

Crack!

"Oof!"

*Cat screeches*

"Sorry! AAAAAHHH–"

BOOM! 🌠

A huge bright yellow cloud of stardust bursts and it spreads out through the Hamlet and covers Asha as she attempts to shield herself and Valentino. As the camera follows the glow, it continues to the forest, across the land and even reached Rosas itself.

In one shot we see a large sleeping teen in his bed, having a bad dream. He's groaning and tossing and turning in his sleep. Once the wave passed over him, he suddenly stopped. He sighed as a smile appeared on his face and he started to snore the night away.

In another shot we see Flazino at his home with some papers piled up. He's attempting to write out the ingredients Amaya uses in her spells to create his own plant growing formula. And on another is a list of other supplies he needed for the Hamlet next month. The teen is bent over the desk with a lit candle nearby, and he's rubbing his forehead in stress. Once the glow passes over him, his eyes popped open and suddenly got inspiration for the spell.

In one last shot, its directly over the King and Queen's castle. Inside, the wishes of the citizens are floating in the lab. They start to rattle and laughter slowly builds up in the room and echoes throughout the castle.

We cut back to the Hamlet where we see Asha running down to the bottom of the hill, Valentino not far behind. Once they reach it, they see the entire center of the Hamlet is covered in gold dust. In an overhead shot, there's a huge imprint of a five pointed yellow star where the ball of light landed, right next to the water well. But instead of them seeing that, they see red long sleeved pajamas lying in the middle of it.

Asha was hesitant to approach it, but still curious. Valentino wanted to stay the neck away from it. "Baaaah?" he asked nervously.

"I...I have no idea what that is, Val. You felt it too, right?" she asked hesitantly.

Valentino shook his head.

"It felt...electric. I could feel so much joy and hope and wonder!" She started to feel some joy herself. Joy she hadn't felt in years. "And it was all wrapped up in the most loving light...." she sighed happily and she gently held her hand over her heart.

Asha suddenly came to her senses. "Wait, can light even be loving?"

The clothes stared levitating slowly off the ground, looking like it was limp in the limbs, with only the collar area glowing.

Both of them stopped cold at the sight.

Now the clothes turned around and started to move towards Asha. The girl was frozen as it approached her. It finally stopped and the collar where the head should be raised up and looked directly in her eyes. Whatever it was, was glowing yellow, with a pair of white eyes and black pupils.

After a moment, finally Asha opened her mouth. "WHAT THE F-" A bright yellow finger emerged from the outfit and quickly booped her on the nose.

"Hold that thought!"

It spoke?!

The being flew backwards to the space it landed in raised itself in the air. As gold dust started to swirl around it, the arm that grew out of the left sleeve gained a hand and four more fingers. A close up shot of the right sleeve grew its own glowing hand and spread out fingers.

The shot goes to the pants where the pant legs shake and two bright yellow feet appears through them, then a pair black Peter Pan style slippers with gold tassels hanging from them covered the glow. Soon the entire outfit turned black as space.

The collar had glowing white pointed hair was sticking out, and the left hand reached down where the collar and struggled to pull the head up, until *POP!*

The being finally had a face, complete with a bright white smile, big round eyes and pointed ears. The look of a magical teenage boy. In a shot behind him, a yellow flash appears on the back of his collar and a long black cape emerges from it, with a bright five pointed star in the center. The underside of it was a golden yellow and it shimmered with small white stars twinkling.

Asha was speechless at what was before her.

Once his transform was complete, he immediately fell to the floor, and the music abruptly stops. With a thud, the glow faded away on the grass. "Ow." He said flatly. He got up by grabbing onto the well, pulling himself up. Once he got himself together, he took a look at his shiny reflection in the water.

"Ohohoho! It worked! I'm human! Well, kind of human, but its close enough! Hahaha!" the glowing boy exclaimed as he looked at his hands and outfit. He couldn't be happier as his voice is full of excitement. Then he looks up and realizes he's surrounded by trees and small houses. He starts turning around to see everything around him.

(Author's note: Star is voiced by Jeremy Jordan in this version, but you're free to imagine another voice if you like.)

"Look at all this! I can't believe I'm actually on-" his gaze stopped on Asha, who's been standing there in shocked silence since he came down.

Like lightning, he zipped from the well to about a couple inches from Asha's face, grinning from ear to ear. This made Asha a bit jumpy. "Hiiiiii!" 😁 the glowing boy greeted her in a friendly tone.

(Thank you to @ishadow246 for this awesome fanart, you captured the moment perfectly before I even wrote it!)

Asha nervously chuckled and quietly stepped behind, away from the boy's view. The star slowly turned his head around to face her again. "Hi again!" he replied, still smiling and gave a tiny wave.

Asha sort of waved back. "H-hi. What is even happening right now?"

The star grabbed Asha's hands in his and raises them in the air. (Asha is so confused right now. 😂)

"Wow, my first human up close! and I got lucky enough to get a beautiful one too! Hehe!"

Asha's eyes widened. "W-wait, are you talking about....me?"

(Star looks up, but before he can answer, an angry loud bleat interrupts)

"BAAAA! BAAAA! BAAAAA!"

(Both of them look down and see Valentino headbutting Star's leg a few times to make him go away. When that doesn't work, he starts growling as he's biting on the star's leg)

"VALENTINO! STOP THAT, RIGHT NOW! You don't where he's been!" Asha panicked.

The Star blinked, then laughed. "Aw! He's giving me love bites!" 😁

Valentino looks at him like he's an idiot.

Asha quickly backs away from Star. "Okay, okay, okay. Let's back up a minute. Who, or what even are you?"

"Don't you remember? You called to me here!" The star gestured to himself.

Asha's eyebrows furrowed. "What are you even talking about?" She questioned, frustrated.

"Just a moment ago you called on me up on that tree for help, I don't know with what exactly, but you sounded like you really needed it. I could feel it!" He pointed to the sky above the Wishing Tree.

The girl then realized that the star she was looking at earlier was no longer there. "Wait, are you saying that....you're....the....?" she hesitated. Though in the back of her mind, she knew the truth. The wind started to pick up as some animals began peeking out of the woods to peek at the glowing figure.

The star nodded enthusiastically. "That's right, I'm a star!" he raised his arms as if he was onstage and bright golden stardust began to swirl around the two of them, making constellations. "And I'm here to help!" He replied with a wink.

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FINAL THOUGHTS

Aaaaand that wraps up chapter 3! Yeah, it was WAY longer than I expected, but I really wanted give you'd guys something worth the wait. Plus, I want have my own animation company one day, so I write out all my future stories like they're movies waiting to be adapted. And it's the last test chapter, so I'll put up a poll to see if you want to read more of my rewrite! So for now, I'll be taking a break to work on the art, other stories my writing and to continue reading some other people's versions of Wish! Plus, ITS SO HOT WHERE I AM. Its hard to concentrate on writing in the heat, so its good timing.

Big thanks again to my bestie, @signed-sapphire, for helping with the song, cause it needed heavy changes! I wanted it to show that's Asha's reached her breaking point and wants to take Sabino's words into action. Its time to stop Magnifico. (Plus, I'm still building up the villains there, Mags has a reason (well, of them, after the clip above) he wants a star, you'll see later on. The idea is that they're more like a combination of Hades and Yzma in front of Rosas, where they're big glory hogs, love the spotlight and sort of act like big shot TV hosts to advertise making Rosas look fun to stay in. Only behind close doors does their other more cruel side appears. (Plus I'm creating a scene where they literally create their own version of a commercial starring themselves about how great their kingdom is, like how Hades advertised the underworld as a five star hotel)

Also, WE GET TO MEET STAR IN THIS!!! Since Canon!Star's appearance was.....underwhelming, I wanted Wish Granted!Star to make a big entrance! Also, a few of the actual lines left in the film ate just so questionable with the changes. Asha says she felt Star's light was full of joy, wonder, hope and LOVE. And they expected me to believe that DIDN'T sound romantic? That Starboy wasn't head over heels in love as he came to Earth? That that's more likely the REAL reason he came down instead of freaking stardust BS!?

Anyway, he's sort of referencing all those classic Disney transformations, but the twist is instead of it being graceful, he just does it all cartoony and then face plants. 😂 Plus I wanted his body language and style to represent the old classic Disney shorts, where they're very animated and smooth in their movements. I loved the idea of him being a combination of Mickey and Walt from the concept, so I did my best with that.

As for Asha, I wanted her to have more layers. She's pessimistic because one of the most inspiring and positive people in her life was taken away (she'll find out how later) and she's close to losing another one. (And since Disney started sketching at 9, I applied the same idea that she started to write and draw at the same age.) So in comes Star, who comes down full of that joy (and love) she's been missing for years, and he helps her find her joy, wonder and positivity she once lost as a kid.

Hope you all enjoyed this, and I'll start outlining Chapter 4 in case people want to see it continue. And I have to change "I'm a Star" Because many of these lyrics are a crime against music. (HERE I ARE!? WTF!?) And I'll me putting up an ask box later this week too, to answer any questions you have about Wish Granted!

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