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Not A Bad Cat (short story)
Gorseheart halted mid-groom, his tongue just barely brushing the hairs of his mateâs neck. âFroststorm?â he called, alarmed, at the distant figure running towards them.Â
Emberdawn opened her eyes and, within a heartbeat of seeing her daughterâs expression, shot to her paws and ran to meet her. âWhatâs happening?â she asked while Froststorm gasped for breath. âWhereâs Molechive and Lightswan? I thought you were with them.â
Froststormâs chest heaved. âTheyâŠstayed backâŠI ranâŠ.I had to getâŠyou have toâŠâÂ
Gorseheart ran his tail along her side. âBreathe, honey.â Dread filled the pit of his stomach like rocks. What was happening? Why did Froststorm have to run to them?
âWe didnât know what to do, but you do,â Froststorm explained unhelpfully.
âKnow what?â Emberdawn pressed.
âThereâsâŠthereâs a kitâŠâ
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Gorseheart and Emberdawn followed quickly after Froststorm after she took a few more moments to rest. As they moved, Gorseheart felt anger guide his storming paws, claws gripping the earth wherever they landed. Another kit. Another kit rejected by StarClan! Didnât they understand how dangerous it was here? Didnât they understand they were sending kits to a potential second death? For what? Because they were too young to fully grasp their actions?
âHere,â Froststorm told them, slowing.Â
Ahead of them, Lightswan seemed to be standing guard, glaring at the surrounding shadows.Â
Molechive lay crouched, eyes wide and uncertain at what Gorseheart had first assumed to be a dark patch of ground. Then he realized that it was a kittenâa small one.Â
Both sagged their shoulders in relief when they saw Gorseheart and Emberdawn.
Gorseheartâs heart twistedâthis kit was the youngest yet.
The kit had dark grey fur and a white throat. He shivered heavily, though from fear or the cold of this forest, he wasnât sure. He would think both, but the way the kit was pressing against Molechiveâs shoulders had him thinking otherwise.
Emberdawn leaned and whispered into his ear. âHeâs too young to even understand that he should be scared.â She echoed his own thoughts.
Sure, the kit appeared wary and looked at the cats with confusion and disquietness. But that was because these were strangers in a strange land. If this little tom really knew where he was, really understood it, he would have run and hid at the first sight of another cat, and he would be trembling so strongly that Gorseheart would be seeing two of him.
Gorseheart lowered onto his belly and crept closer, keeping a comfortable distance for the tom. âHello, little one. My name is Gorseheart. Whatâs your name?â
âAshkit,â the kit answered, staring at him with green eyes as wide as the moon on a Gathering night.Â
âHi Ashkit,â Emberdawn greeted from her place lying beside Gorseheart. âDo you know where you are?â
Ashkit let out what sounded like a whimper. âSomewhere bad. I did bad.â
Emberdawn let out a gentle hum. âWe all do bad,â she reassured him. âNo one is perfect.â
Ashkit shook his head. âI think I hurt my friends,â he wailed.
That made the family pause for a few moments as they processed that this little kit could have hurt someone, and a little more as they debated how to respond.Â
âDo you feel bad about it?â Gorseheart asked.
Ashkit nodded vigorously.Â
âThen youâre not a bad cat,â he told the little one simply. âBecause bad cats donât feel bad when they hurt someone, okay?â
Throughout their talking, Gorseheart had slowly crept closer and closer towards the kit. Now he stretched a paw, half-expecting the kit to flinch away as he brushed it testingly against his side. When Ashkit showed no sign of wanting to get away or wanting Gorseheart to leave, Gorseheart moved closer until the kit sat between his front paws. âSo youâre a good cat, you just made a mistake.â
âI made mistakes,â Molehchive chimed in quickly, watching the kit.Â
Gorseheart purred, proud of how fast Molechive jumped in to reassure the kit as well.
âI made mistakes,â Froststorm added.Â
Lightswan and Emberdawn followed suit with their own admissions.Â
âI hurt my friends, too,â Gorseheart went on. His heart twisted, and tore a little more when Ashkit looked up at him with those eyes that were so curious and sad and innocent all at once. âAnd I feel really bad about it.â
Emberdawn pressed against his side.
âDo you think Iâm a bad cat?â he asked the kit.
Ashkit blinked, then shook his head.
âWell, I donât think youâre a bad cat either.â He let the words hang for several long, long heartbeats before deciding to humour the kit. âBut you are stinky!â
Ashkit giggled, caught off guard. âIâm not stinky!â he protested.Â
Gorseheart sniffed his fur. âI think you are,â he replied, âvery, very stinky!â
Ashkit batted at his snout.
âI think itâs you!â Emberdawn decided. She made a show of pressing her nose against Gorseheartâs shoulder and taking a long, hard sniff. Then she pulled her head back dramatically, wrinkling her muzzle. âIt is you! Youâre the stinky cat!â
Ashkit giggled harder, little teeth glinting in the red light.Â
Froststorm joined in. âYou need a bath!â
âA big one!â Lightswan added, holding a paw up to stifle her laughter.
âHey! Why am I being ganged up on?â
âBecause you smell,â Emberdawn answered.
âWell, canât argue with that,â Gorseheart sighed. âHey, Ashkit, do you want to come with us to our warm den and help me get all this stink off?â He added, whispering in the kitâs ear, âor help me hide from everyone who wants to give me a bathâew!â
Ashkit nodded, grinning so wide that his mouth practically touched both ears.Â
âI can carry you, if you like,â Lightswan offered.Â
Ashkit paused, thinking with very readable expressions, then ran over to her.
âDo you want to share my nest?â Molechive offered, following beside them. âItâs got the comfiest moss.â
âWell, my den is the warmest,â Froststorm contested.
âIâll teach you all the cool moves!â
Emberdawn and Gorseheart followed behind their kits, purring so hard that their bodies shook. Anger still swelled deep within Gorseheartâs chest. It had been there since they found Lightswanâthen Brokenkitâand he was sure it would be there forever. But as he watched and listened as their kits welcomed and supported who would hopefully be the new addition of their family, he was overcome by immense pride.
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--Since Lightswan, Molechive, and Froststorm were all adults by the time Ashmint joined as a two-moon old kit, they were all very welcoming towards him. It's a mix of "I know what it was like to show up here as a kit" and "I want to be the coolest big bro/sis."
--The siblings were hanging out when by chance they found this kit and pretty much all went "UH UH UH WHAT DO WE DO UH....GET MOM AND DAD THIS IS THEIR EXPERTISE."
--Gorseheart would want it to be known that he does not actually stink.....no more than any other resident.
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Ashmint belongs to @ambitiousauthor
Molechive and Froststorm belong to @wills-woodland-warriors
Lightswan belongs to @liberhoe
I was originally gonna have Light be the one getting them, but wanted to give Frost some love. Plus something tells me Light wouldn't want to leave the kit.
#dark tales#dark forest tales#wc dark tales#molechive#molekit#molechive story#frostkit#froststorm#froststorm story#brokenkit#lightswan#lightswan story#ashkit#ashmint#ashmint story#gorseheart#gorseheart story#emberdawn#emberdawn story#tunnel family#tunnel family story
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Happy Scars
Wanted to draw one of the Tunnel Poly kits!
As he got older, Adderclaw got quite a few scars in scuffles. He sees it as no big deal, it's all fun for him. In the Dark Forest, no one holds a grudge against someone that gives them scars. It's just what you do.
He gets something from all of his parents.
From Fox, he gets his sense of humour and energy.
From Ember, he gets his agility and cleverness.
From Gorse (bio), he gets his build, pelt, nose, and ear colours and fascination with mythical creatures in stories.
From Birch (bio) he gets his tabby trait, eye colour, and almost perpetually joyful mood.
His tongue is a mix of Gorse and Birch.
@starfalcon555
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Base: F2U - Longhair Icon by Rexolete on DeviantArt
Background: [2019] Dark Forest Background [Feel free to use] by Kirabeans on DeviantArt
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AU where the others find out Jon is going to explore the tunnels in Season 2 and forcefully tag along (Sasha is alive and everything is fine)
I made a part 2!
#the magnus archives#tma#tma fanart#jonathan sims#sasha james#martin blackwood#tim stoker#tma jon#tma tim#tma sasha#tma martin#tma season two#just a full season of these four fucking around in the tunnels#theyâre all happy and nothing is wrong#they find leitnerâs food scraps and get into a full debate about if they can eat it#when they find leitner himself tim and sasha almost commit brutal pipe murder#i just love them :(#bound family
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Thinking about Hutchins and Harumi I'm so ill. Garmadon Rulez did something to me. He sang her to sleep every night. He took her to libraries so she could research despite her parents disapproving. He gave her that journal to help her cope with her trauma.
He didn't have to do any of this. None of these things were because of his obligation to the royal family really and in fact he sort of went behind their backs taking her to the library of domu (even if it took some convincing). He was the first to suspect her of her plans but didn't tell anyone, not even the ninja when he definitely had a proper chance to. I think he genuinely just cared about her. And that's making me so
#and the worst part is she resented him.#at least in the end#everybody talks about one-sided romantic relationships but what about one-sided familial ones. huh. what about that#what if he loved harumi like she was his own daughter#something tragic in that. that harumi searches for someone to fill that void losing her parents created#and the first person who really honestly cared for her wellbeing like that she pushed away#because she was so tunnel visioned on who she thought could.#and then of course Garmadon. was garmadon. and of course he DIDNT fill that void. idk does this make sense#i might be crazy#ninjago#lego ninjago#lego ninjago harumi#harumi#harumi jade#princess harumi#ninjago harumi#hutchins ninjago#garmadon rulez
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Watching the real-time election results while doomscrolling politics tags is probably the most actively stressful thing I could conceivably do, and yet Iâm doing it anyway
#us politics#us elections#I feel like Iâm gonna have a heart attack and I can hear my family praying in the other room#please let there be light at the end of the tunnel come the end of this
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it is a truth universally acknowledged, that a bernard down in possession of an empty lap, must be in want of a tim drake to sit in it
#that is tim's spot exclusively#that is his lap to sit in to be cradled in#that is his lap to feel safe in#they get a cat one day and tim hatessss that little calico bitch#who the fuck does lovelace think she is curling up in his area#bear doesnt even try to argue anymore#they're at like a family movie night and steph has a spot open next to her#except tim sees bear's open lap and tunnel visions so hard that he never makes to steph#he just flops onto bear's lap and snuggles into the crook of his neck#and bear just has to sit there ears bright red as the rest of family looks on#also tim's not the only one who gets jealous btw#tims got this teddy bear that he dresses up in đ» clothes and bear hates the thing#loathes it despises it#if he could throw it away without making tim sad he would#bernard dowd#tim drake#timbern#tim talking to lovelace: listen to me you little homewrecker. bear's lap is *my* spot okay? that's my big strong man!! not yours!! got it?#đ» the very next night talking to tim's teddy: listen to me you homewrecker. that is *my* baby!!! my bf to hold!!!#they're like certifiably insane about each other
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Beautiful friendship
#iasip#dennis reynolds#mac mcdonald#This is actually recreating a dream I had a couple weeks ago. Hopefully it functions on its own merits? I genuinely can't tell at this poin#The dream involved something of this general description happening in an episode#The episode itself did not appear in the dream but I was looking at LENGTHY tumblr posts about the heartbreaking tragedy of the Bong Scene#Like HUGE analysis posts on the Bong Scene (being called 'Bonggate') and the 'lawnmower motifs' (I don't know)#And dream me was like 'OK whatever can we please talk about how they referenced that 'Ariel Needs Legs' comic?'#(the 'Ohhh I can't not fuck him' bit was apparently in the episode) Like I was REALLY upset no one was talking about it#This was only half of the dream before it shifted focus to me crawling through drainage tunnels in search of a pot dealer#'Bonggate' came up again later but it stopped being a tv show fandom thing and had shifted into being about#a major political scandal involving the Bush family apparently? Which resulted in the federal recriminalization of weed? anyway#sketches
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I FINISHED THE GUY!!!!!!
(Pattern by @ghost-cinnamon)
Heâs perfect and I love him
But Echo! some of you might ask, isnât the body supposed to be red like his bones? To that I say! 1: Iâm impressed you saw it under the layers of clothes! /silly and 2!
BAH BAM
Embroidery!!!!! (Iâm so proud of this hehe it turned out way better than I expected. Also faceless doll jumpscare>:3)
And of course, credit must be given to my amazing little sibling whose immediate reaction to seeing my doll was âooo heâs spooky! He needs a top hat!!!!â
(She proceeded to make not one but two top hats hehe)
#Iâm so so happy by this guy hehe#itâs so silly#thank you sk much for the pattern ghost!!!#my art!#I speak!#donât mind the odd locations of some of the pics haha#I forgot to take a pic of the embroidery after making his clothes and I made the sweater slightly too tight to take off easily#not pictured in the first image#my sister literally on the floor laughing from how large his head is#none of my family members understand what heâs from and all have been trying to guess what inspired me to make him XD#honorary mention of my moms reaction: oh heâs such a handsome guy!#the top hat truly makes it thank you sibling đ#Iâm kinda tempted to make a couple drawings/comic of the adventures heâs had since being created lol#especially since some people (stares at siblings) /silly#seem to find him the hottest thing since sliced bread (thatâs how the saying goes I think?)#to the point where youngest sibling has shown him to the other children of the neighborhood#who were equally fascinated XD their reactions have been great for my crocheting ego /j#every time I make an original post I ramble for longer and longer in the tags lol#congrats to those who stuck through and read them all! I commend you! have a cookie here at the light at the end of the tunnel#undertale au#utmv#error sans
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fuck it maybe i will project my chronic pain onto the batfamily
#i have an rsi in 1 hand a carpal tunnel in the other along with knee pain in both legs âš#and back pain canât forget about that#batfam#bat family#dick grayson#batman#nightwing#dc#headcanon#jason todd#tim drake#robin#batfamily#damien wayne#dc comics#bruce wayne#red hood#damian wayne#gotham knights#nightwing headcanon#dcu#stephanie brown
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It's dark in the cellar, has been since they were tossed down here however many days ago. Hard to tell time without regular meals. Completely windowless, there's no place to spend his usual half hour basking under the sun. It had been a matter of hours before his coldblooded body had started to slow in the cool subterranean temperatures. He'd tried to keep it to himself, deal with it quietly, but there's no way to hide it from Gid, steadfast loyal Gid. Kremy had found his sluggish form gathered unceremoniously close to the living furnace that is his right hand man.
The heat may have stabilized his body temperature but it would do nothing to improve his mood(well maybe just a little bit it's hard to be too miserable when you're so nice and warm no matter the dire circumstances). Gideon took care of light well enough too, illuminating a circle around them with dancing warm firelight, though that was extinguished as soon as Kremy saw it start to waver and flicker, can't allow his partner in crime to burn himself out now can he? And so they sit in an almost peaceful silence, have done for who knows how long.
"Y'know it's not the worst bind we've gotten ourselves into. The gang will be along soon enough to bust down the door." Gid pauses in thought. "Probably not Twigsy. Or Frosty. Or Gricko unless he's a beasty. Probably down to Torbek to do the door busting come to think of it."
Kremy grunts noncommittally.
"Ah don't be like that, can't be worse than the time we had to climb out of the window of that inn."
"The snake oil heist on the western bank?"
"Nah the one with the innkeepers daughter, Felicity? Franny?"
He remembers that particular scrap well, if only because of the god awful wig.
"Felicia. How that veil covered my snout I will never rightly know."
Gideon snorts.
"Oh yeah. Sure would've been nice to know Gricko was an ordained minister before hand but it's not the first time we've been married."
Kremy hums. "Can't say it's the worst contract I've signed."
The warm body next to him rolls with deep, hearty laughter. The room goes silent for another spell before Kremy sighs.
"I dunno Gid, you ever get the feeling that we've taken it too far? Finally poked the bear that's gonna rip our throats out?"
"Nah man, I know you'll get us out of anything 'fore it gets too serious. Even if we end up knee deep in Fae tomfoolery. And I'll punch any bear that tries to bite us square in the body till it dies, no problemo." He pauses. "I trust you Kremy Lecroux."
That knocks the speech right off of his tongue.
Trust.
On a conceptual level he got that there was some form of reliance between the two of them, and sure some trust if you had to put a non-ironic label on it. He knows that Gideon cares for him, has stated it on many occasions in many different ways. And if you had to be so crass as to put it into words, of course he cares for Gid too, wouldn't have bothered keeping him around this long if he hadn't(lord knows the food bill would be enough to sway his opinion if he wasn't entirely too attached by now).
But trust?
Trusting Kremy Lecroux is a bad idea on any number of levels. He's a cheat by profession and a liar by lifestyle. Hell he's sold the souls of those around him in exchange for power more than once. There's nothing worth trusting in him, he's a coldblooded criminal and he's never gonna change, not for anybody. And here Gid is announcing it with his full chest. It's one of those things that's so endearing about him, he never holds back; Gideon Coal has never made a promise he doesn't fully mean. But since he's a man of contracts and business dealings he at least wants to give him a fair shot, a head start, a warning to keep that fiery heart close.
"You sure about that Gid? Those kinds of words have a power to em you know that."
"100% man, I'll follow you to the end of the world."
Kremy struggles to get air into his lungs, it takes a minute, two. When he finally gets enough to speak, it's frustrated and tinged with melancholy.
"Well I'll gladly let you do just that, if we ever get out of this fucking place."
"Hey." Kremy offers no response. "C'mon man don't be that way, the crew are all out there figuring their way in as we speak, fact I can smell the Torbek already."
He says nothing.
"I know what'll cheer you up."
A large, warm hand cups the bottom of his snout, gently directing his face up and to the side. Before he can think to protest, his eyes are drawn to the sudden lick of flame dancing on the tip of Gideon's finger. Not unlike when he lights cigarettes for him, except now he's pressing the pad of the digit to a small twig from the rocky floor until it smolders dully. Blowing on it, Gideon brings the small stick towards his face. It's warm but not uncomfortably so (he'd never had a doubt in his mind that Gid would hurt him). Carefully, precisely, with hands steady from working on the delicate innards of machines he can't begin to comprehend, Gideon draws the ashen tip of the stick across his upper lip in two swooping lines.
"There you already look more like yourself!" He proclaims proudly.
And god if he can't help the smile that breaks across his face.
"You're a crazy son of a bitch Gideon Coal, you know that?"
"Been told once or twice." he chuckles.
#âGid when we walk outta here I need you to go first.â âWhy?â âCause you're my light at the end of the tunnel. Always will be.â#Once Upon a Witchlight amiright?#god im obsessed its bad#theres not NEARLY enough fan content for this and it is is a CRIME#to any of my followers or mutuals: if you like banter if you like funnies if you like gay subtext if you like found family#i am BEGGING you to check out once upon a witchlight and gush with me#its done by Legends of Avantris on youtube and twitch#moustache moment in ep.26 my beloved#once upon a witchlight#kremy lecroux#gideon coal#coalecroux#legends of avantris
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More Tunnel Grandbabies
The four on the left are kits to Haretuft, who is bio GorseXBirch
The two on the right are Larksnow's kits (also bio GorseXBirch). He became mates with one of Rooklight's kits and they reproduced with the help of a surrogate. (light kit is bio Lark's, dark kit is bio Rookbaby).
Unfortunately, the surrogate died in childbirth. Luckily, Haretuft was still nursing her kits at the time, and so the six here were raised more like littermates, at least for the first part of their lives. But guilt still weighs heavily on the family. After all, if they haven't asked their mother to be a surrogate, she never would have died.
That's why MrGrumpy over there is always in a bitter mood, because someone--his mother, even if she was only meant to be a surrogate--had to die for him to be here. And maybe that's why he's more distant, because he resents his cousins for still having their parents.
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Haretuft's mate looks like this:
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Base: Base cat f2u by JUCZEK3000 on DeviantArt
(I know there's no tail on the other cat's head and it's meant to be hair tufts, but I thought this was fun).
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@starfalcon555
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@starfalcon555 you suggested designs but I saw them a tad late (after I finished Thorn's, who was the first)
At first I thought Half wasn't able to have white spots, but then I remembered that Gorse's bio mother is partly white.
The parents are Gorse and Ember, reason being that in the story they are mentioned, they are said to be the second-youngest litter with Birchflight carrying the youngest, and I don't think that Birch got pregnant twice in a row lmao. And Gorse is the father because the names connect to him the most.
Finding Mallow was definitely a 'oh that feels odd to hear that name' and then the kit with a half-white face was born and that probably sparked the "naming all of them after his old friends" thing.
Thorn: tom (and flamboyant af)
Fire: trans tom
Half: she-cat (and mute!)
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Bases:
Half
Thorn
Fire
#tunnel family#tunnel kits#dark kits#birchflight#gorseheart#emberdawn#foxfire#halfsong#fireclaw#thornbloom
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Iâm in the mood for angst so hereâs my take on the biggest personal demons of each member of the humanverse!FACE family. Theyâd be a close and loving unit but with some thorny issues to overcome before they get their happy ending:
Francis: Eating disorder. I imagine him working in fashion and no atmosphere is crueler when it comes to weight than Parisian cat walks. Even if heâs a designer and not a model, the pressure for the âfaceâ of the Bonnefoy brand to stay slim and attractive would be huge. A lot of starving himself, living on coffee, awful fad diet âcleanses,â and even popping pills at his worst. Not to mention smoking like a chimney for the appetite suppressant. Heâd also have some issues with helicopter parenting with the thirst for perfection leaking from work to family time. Not in a cruel way but more overbearing and micromanaging his sonsâ time to try and give them the quote-unquote âbest startâ in life.
Arthur: Substance abuse. Guy was a punk in his teens and early twenties and the addiction got its claws into him good and deep. Mostly alcohol, but occasionally he might slip into harder things. Arthur would try to kick the habit again and again after Alfred and Matthew are born but would fall off the wagon many times. The twins learn early that if Papa isnât home and they wake up to sounds of throwing up, theyâll need to make their own breakfast.
Alfred: Undiagnosed neurological condition and then a different kind of eating disorder when he gets older. The former being something with mania and difficulty focusing. Alfred is smart but school would be a chore because itâs so hard for him to sit still. And growing up watching Francis and Arthurâs various issues with food (and drink) left a dark impression. Alfred finds solace in sports when school is tough but the desire to be the best sets him on a path of impossible physical standards. Then he cracks, stuffs himself, falls into a cycle of binge and purge, and Arthur isnât the only one throwing up and trying to hide it by running the taps to muffle the sound.
Matthew: Glass sibling syndrome. Alfred and his problems monopolised the family focus growing up and Matthew had to make do with what was left over. This left Matthew quiet and anxious but also defeated and with deeply buried anger and resentment towards his twin. He learnt young that trying to compete for the spotlight was pointless so why bother. That rage and bitterness simmers, deep down, and the rest of the family are shocked when quiet, gentle Matthew is suddenly lashing out and getting into fights when he hits his mid-teens. Matthew never learnt how to control his anger and now itâs controlling him.
This family gonna need some serious therapy I tell ya hwat đ„Č
#hetalia#fruk#face family#hws france#hws england#hws america#hws canada#aph france#aph england#aph america#aph canada#my posts#donât worry they work it out in the end#i canât do angst without a light at the end of the tunnel bobby
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have a very early wip of a tea party :>
This is @phoenixcatch7 's Possessed Doll Au
#idk why but I was hit with the vivid image of the puppets holding a music box that guides whoever they're calling to down through the caves#Each song different yet the same for each of them#Behold Bruce's first time to the Dollhouse lol#Idk if it's canon to Phoenix's but honestly I like to think that the first doll Bruce encountered was the one that'd eventually be robin#Since he was a child when he fell down in the well and into the tunnels beneath#batman au#bruce wayne#possessed doll au#possessed puppet au#sketch#art#First time down there it's more cave like but as time goes on it shifts#Some of it from them working on stuff and others on its own#The table getting longer and larger as the family grows even if not there yet#The puppets know when to emerge from the shadows and join the others at the table#I like to think the patriarch puppet is damaged the first time Bruce goes down#maybe mimicking a certain father's wounds before he died but maybe not still debating that#god i love this au#Honestly their eyes are empty like sockets because they don't have the lights or glass yet#just darkness :)
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... The poem may be an elegy for childhood losses.
(On Dream Song 29, Thomas Travisano)
#myart#hollyleaf#power of three#warrior cats#MY MAGNUM OPUS!!!#AUGHHHHHRHGHHHHHHH#GUYS. DREAM SONG 29. DO YOU EVEN UNDERSTANDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD#okay here are all the details: âif he had a hundred yearsâ with the mountains is supposed to bring to mind the ancients#everyone is supposed to be faceless except for holly. on the second pace the bottom 3 silhouettes are leaf crow and squirrel#and their eyes are white with colored iris to look even MORE uncanny. the fire cuts across hollyâs throat foreshadowing her death#the entire second page with the fire is showing how this once event has completly collapsed her life itâs everywhere she canât escape it#lightning on 3rd page also represents the storm. and the fact that holly was scared of storms after the fire with is so :(#i also imagine holly used to be a lot lighter gray as a kit/paw with tabby markings. just personal hc#ashfur killing scene again you donât see the action you donât even see her face just the aftermath. she wasnt there it didnt happen. etc#the leaf has the tufts of her fur that were in his claws from the fight the only âevidenceâ of it happening.#and the last two shots show her alone in the tunnel dreaming of her family (squirrel bramble fire sand leaf and lion and jay)#vs lion and jay. and the prophecy. who donât even stop to grieve her because theyâve found the 3rd cat. nobody is ever missing
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2024 reads / storygraph
Outdrawn
f/f contemporary romance
two cartoonist whoâve been rivals since uni, and now have competing webcomics online, have to work together on the relaunch of a cult classic at the comic press they both work at
they both struggle with art-related physical and mental health issues, and complicated families
#outdrawn#aroaessidhe 2024 reads#sapphic books#I thought this was decent! I liked the concept (even if I got distracted by some art related thingsâŠ)#and the dynamic between the characters was good. I enjoyed their relationship development broadly speaking#and the emphasis on communication; though it was a quick flip into being together all of a sudden.#The sketchbook doodle flirting was cute. Some interesting exploration of their complicated family situations too.#Thereâs a lot of exploration of burnout and carpal tunnel and the dangers of artists overworking which I think are important conversations#and are done with some nuance. But itâs pretty much all discussed in the context of the personal pressure they put on themselves#rather than the industry corporate greed and artificial competition created by the comic platform - which are significant in this story!#It felt odd that that connection wasnât really ever made?#I know that this is a romance and nitpicking the background plot is beside the point and also that I am not a big romance reader#but the premise that the comic hosting site archives everything; wipes the leaderboard; and out of nowhere has a comic competition for#new weekly chaptersâŠIâm sorry but the art world would riot. Even if people enter because theyâre desperate for the cash theyâd be pissed#People live off the income from their webcomics! if they were erased (temporarily) with no noticeâŠ..there would be crimes committed istg#I simply donât believe that it would be doable to create a new weekly webcomic with no notice while you also have a full-time comic job#(especially as the only stylistic choices mentioned are full-colour) - not to mention what happened to their 8-years-running webcomics#that were archived? they donât think about them at all after the beginning? surely theyâd care about that?#And then with their new comics they make for this competition (after work I guess) we get vague snippets about them but barely anything#- if theyâre consuming that much of your time I would expect to feel like theyâre thinking about them all the time#rather than the vaguest discussion about genre and cast numbers only.#I guess I just think the whole comic site stunt felt unnecessary for the plot anyway -#it would have worked exactly the same if they were just competing on the normal leaderboard with their normal comics???#anyway - Iâm not judging TOO hard about all that because again I know itâs not the point and maybe the industry is like that in some place#Unfortunately it was distracting enough to affect my feelings on the book tho lol.#Lastly: the audiobookâŠâŠâŠoof. The narrators talk at different speeds; for one.#And Sageâs VA does this deeply weird raspy-anime-teen-boy voice for Noah which is such an odd choice#and doesnât match her character at all.#unforch my library only had the audiobook (what I usually prefer) so I just had to sort ofâŠ.translate the narration into a normal voice lol#anyway the romance is good tho
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