#just like the writers of SU
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ANOTHER STORYBOARD: DONE
Script / Outline: COMPLETE! Scenes storyboarded: 3/12 (Technically less but I split the scenes when they started getting long in my notes) Scenes animated: 0/12 Songs written: 0/2 OSTs written: 0/???
Overall progress: very little tbh bro we JUST started.
But hey! I am officially further than I was 2 years ago! And, my motivation is still intact! Gonna keep pushing forward!
I'm probably not going to update after EVERY scene is boarded, just the important ones or when I finish the boarding process entirely and move on to digitizing the boards (which should not take long), then FINALLY to the animation itself!
It's 4 AM and I'm going to bed but PROGRESS IS PROGRESS!
#follychromatic#dimond speaks#in case you're wondering why script and outline are the same point: i'm boarding as I go#just like the writers of SU#i have important dialogue written ahead of time and the rest is made up along the way#add some revisions as I digitize the boards and then we're going straight to animating!#cuts a lot of time with just as much creativity and less burnout lol#and in a rubberhose format like this i think that will add to the visual comedy rather than just scripting#cuz thats what i did the first 7 or 8 drafts of this thing and it always prioritized drama over comedy#i'm trying to fix that this time around lol#and so far I think i'm succeeding!#idk im excited lol#this is happening it's actually happening holy shit#fc update
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i saw this tweet and found it interesting for two reasons. one is that some people base how good cartoon network would be to toh by how it treated su, and despite the fact that su’s treatment by the network was considered poor at the time, now its thought to be exceptionally good in comparison to modern shows.
two is how exactly su got impacted by a limited budget. a common criticism is how characters like connie, peridot, and lapis are left out of missions. but balancing a lot of characters is not only hard but also costly (extra animation, extra voices—it’s been revealed that the show is limited to a set number of characters per episode otherwise they’re over budget). animation mistakes are not uncommon since retakes cost extra. the entire reason the original show got cut short was due to loss of funding!
#i don’t know if pay rates differ per networks#but a.ivi and s.urrashu have said that they needed to work outside of su in order to make sufficient funds#it only makes me wonder what other ways su suffered from a lower budget#that we as the audience never got to see#in the vein of the too-little characters complaint#another part of that is that low-stakes episodes should’ve been abt the main cast instead of the townies#like last one out of beach city and too short to ride vs restaurant wars and kiki’s pizza delivery service#i definitely see that especially since that isn’t budget related#nor would it seem to be network related (even if cn had an ‘episodic episodes’ quota it could still be abt the gems#(another side note: /would/ cn even have a requirement that the show make episodes that can be watched standalone?#this is a question for the people who were around when su was airing#what episodes often got rerun?#was it the townie eps or the lore eps?#for example i heard that su once did a ‘peridot event’ where they just reran peridot episodes#which had eps that skip around in the show#did they even care about airing the story so that it made sense anyways?#id get it if the low stakes townie episodes were the ones getting rerun))#but i have such a boring view on that which is i think it’s simply because the creators like townie eps#like in interviews r.ebecca s.ugar has said she’s the type to be really invested in background characters#answers in interviews have been crafted in ways to hide what’s really going on though tbf#prime example of this is rebecca and ian saying the wedding being interrupted was meant to follow the common trope#when later in the art book they said that it was bc cn rejected the ep bc it ‘wasn’t interesting enough’#both could simultaneously be true! it’s a psychology thing though where people make up nice-sounding explanations behind what they create#in retrospect because they want it to be thought out in such a nice way they believe in it#the bigger problem is that not matter how many episodes there are of them#it can be hard for ppl to be invested in the townies the same way they are invested in the main cast#i’m sure that a million writers have made surefire advice on how to get an audience to care about characters#but off the top of my head i think it’s because 1. most don’t have strong motivations to get truly invested in#(exception is ronaldo but people find him too annoying to care about him)#okay i had more points and explanations but i hit the tag limit and idk if anyone is actually reading this so bye
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i know a lot of people criticized steven universe’s portrayal of war and while i agree that there were some parts that were handled badly, most of it was pretty well-written.
unlike spop, they don’t act like war only affects the heroes and the villains, we see various characters like lapis, the cluster, the humans in the human zoo, etc. who were not part of the war in any way but were still horribly traumatized by it. similarly, all the characters treat war with the seriousness that it deserves (i believe there was a quote by greg that was something like “there’s nothing good about a war” when steven points out that rose won). it doesn’t use war as an aesthetic backdrop that only matters when one specific character is affected by it.
i don’t understand people who criticize su for its portrayal of war, then praise spop for writing a “tragic story where two lovers were separated by war”.
#also i saw a lot of people who probably didn’t watch su talking about how messed up the human zoo was#and acting like the writers of su didn’t know that??#GIRL. THAT WAS THE POINT.#it’s SUPPOSED to be fucked up#these people were like “are we not gonna talk about the human zoo who thought that was okay” NO ONE lol#the story acknowledges how fucked up it was how do yall not get that#it’s not like they were romaniticizing it or making it a joke#idk man people just find any reason to hate on su#spop critical#spop salt#spop#spop discourse#spop criticism#she ra#anti spop#steven universe
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"Two months ago we opened up the gate.." this is an insane line of logic honestly. And I'm wondering if it's just an insane leap of logic that the writers made regarding the situation, rather than just Dean and Sam's guilt complexes.
#sam winchester#dean winchester#spn#supernatural#I am mega sus at the writers - they're not really going into how it wasn't actually dean and sam who did it#like... hmmmm bad writing in the way where they just dont show how their guilt formulates around the idea#or bad writing in the sense where irl people every day blame innocent people for imagined slights?#oh I can feel it - all the energy and bitterness I had for the marvel fandom is gonna come back here#I think there is a dip in writing quality - as I've had no complaints in the previous two seasons#disclaimer: still having fun tho lmao#The Hardy Boys But With Ghosts
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the hannibal franchise fucking sucks <- is enjoying the hannibal franchise quite a bit actually <- is just very mad that clannibal is a thing that exists
#if a clannibal fan finds this post: Cry about it i do not care :D#do not get it mixed up! it is not because im a hannigram stan or whatever! just. just from my perspective as someone who really likes#clarices whole arc of proving herself to be better than the men around her i dont. why does. CALM DOWN SU CALM DOWN. FUCK#why is clannibal a thing. 'hannibal recognizes her potential and abilities as a smart and brave fbi agent' Okay and? And?#idea: what if he means nothing to her. what if. what if thomas harris was a good writer. i just. SIGGHHHHHHHHHHHH#WHATEVER. WHATEVER MAYBE THERES SOMETHING IM MISSING MAYBE CLARICE AND HANNIBAL AS A ROMANTIC THING HAS MERIT TO IT. I REFUSE TO BELIEVE IT#DOES BUT HEY MAYBE IM WRONG AND I JUST NEED TO SHUSH ^_^#I DONT KNOW MAN. FUCK i need to stop getting so angry abt this i have productive things i could be doing (TT U TT) Like killing hannibal le#just kidding <3 no im not#angel's mouth#hannibal
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lol i knew the fucking xiaoyu/xiaobao thing was in the book i still just dont understand it like. thats his sister. what the fuck
#giving that line to su yin 💔 friendship over with the writers#this whole part is very clumsy to me. could have been done much better#meet you at the blossom#myatb spoilers#and like. i know it would have been just acceptable in the time period and setting but i don like it#there are a few things in myatb that have hit very very close to my hard boundaries dhkfjhsdjk i guess add another to the list!
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I HATE GEGE AKUTAMI
#pack it up everyone funs over#what if we all drop jjk#and pretend it was a social experiment#or collective hallucination#idk bro i just hate this manga so much rn 😭😭😭#the way its 1 am alredy and i can't go to sleep because my mind is too busy hating#what if we just all kill ourselves idk#can sukuna kill everyone alredy so this damn series can finally be over PLEASE#like#what even is the point anymore#words could never describe how much i hate this#AND I HAVE NO ONE TO TALK TO ABOUT THIS#the way that#entré a twitter#y lo primero que vi fue a gojo con puntos#Y TODO LO QUE DIJERON SOBRE EL VIENTO SOPLANDO Y DESCUBRIENDO SU FRENTE PARA MOSTRAR LOS PUNTOS#ERA CIERTO CTM#y ni siquiera fue kenjaku#TENIA QUE SER YUTA WEON#alguien dijo q a este punto parece que gege esta sacando material de teorías de tik tok#para continuar la historia#Y ES TAN CIERTO#AT THIS POINT THE BEST ENDING WE CAN HOPE FOR IS ONE IN WHICH EVERYONE IS DEAD AND THAT'S NOT EVEN A JOKE#all of this just to save megumi#AND THEN WHAT BRO IS GOING TO WAKE UP AND EVERYONE WILL BE DEATH#anyways#rant#jjk261#jjk#when i enter a worst writer competition and my oponent is gege akutami himself or smth like that idk
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I need Daniel's 'assistant' to be Jesse.
#interview with the vampire#hulu iwtv#is my show tag#s2e5 is the best of the show#if you can look past the conceit in the first place#but its time for one of my drunk tag rants#this season is superior to season 1#even if i have to watch this with commercials on monday nights because my other avenues doesnt think this show is worthy of uploading#i just need jesse#or more women#but this ep had no women and was gripping#even with the long and awkward ads#ive been holding back on what ive thought of the season so far#bc i think it doesnt matter#but claudia not dreaming like i wrote Rose to not dream#kinda sus#im glad i stuck with the show#its vc in a different flavor#an au#and i can appreciate the au-ness of it#ben daniels as santiago is a highlight even tho he wasnt in this ep#i prefer bailey to delainey#but i think the writers noticed that delainey wasnt as good enough of an actress and minimized her role#bailey is off saving the coral (look at her insta)#while i dont think this show is a good adaptation#season 2 is a far better show than season 1 tried to be#instead of appealing to crassness#it appeals to our emotions#chefs kiss
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Hsyeeh i wanna write like a rant about the Beifongs and their family dynamics because they're just so interesting to me and lowkey fucked up and also like criminally underdeveloped. But I know if i start writing it's gonna look like this:
Blame my therapist for reading my weilin famfic and psychoanalising me.
#*takes Su's kids from the lok writers* no they're my victims of intergenerational trauma you can't have them#like genuinely#Baatar Jr being the only child of a legendary bender family to be a nonbender and trying to find his identity in Kuvira's army?#poetic#Su accidentally mirroring Toph's parents by being overwhelming to the point of pushing Kuvira and Baatar Jr away?#Fascinating#They're like a colony of bacterias in a petri dish that i just wanna shake around#legend of korra#beifong family#su beifong#suyin beifong#toph beifong#lin beifong#baatar jr#baatar#opal beifong#huan beifong#wing & wei#wei beifong#wing beifong
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as a fan of both shows it's so funny watching analysis videos for steven universe and my little pony back to back. like they both take their respective shows equally seriously, but one has some of the best characters, story telling, symbolism, emotional beats, music & musical motifs in the entire genre of older kids cartoons, and you can keep digging for years and still find new things to appreciate that were done fully intentionally by the crew, while the other is a toy commercial with fun characters and songs and somewhat rule-of-cool approach to world building. like I love ponies but it really isn't that deep lmao
#watching SU vids it's like yes yess this is so good there is so much to say everything in this show is so lovingly crafted with so much care#watching pony vids it's like. you just made that up to justify plot holes that the writers didn't think were important enough to worry abou#not saying the ponies wasn't lovingly crafted but like. it's nowhere near on the same level as SU#and it doesn't need to be! they've got different goals! I just remember I used to be sooooo into pony theories as a teen#and idk why. there isn't that much there lmao
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I do want to say that even if Whit dies or becomes a culprit, I will still think he is the mastermind. This boy cannot escape my allegations even in death.
#whit young#drdt whit#drdt#danganronpa despair time#like with how sus he is right now i wouldn't be surprised if the writers threw a curveball by making him look like he got killed#especially with veronika's whole speech about how people aren't just their appearance#I can see him somehow switching the body#Yes i'm making a theory in case Whit does die#No I am too delulu to care about the implications of that
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glimmadora remnants stop complaining about the show challenge: impossible
#she ra#spop#seriously. like. i love the ship but i freeze every time i see someone in the tags with a glimmer icon now#shes the BEST CHARACTER how did you DO this to me???#i love multishipping too#just cos the ship you like isnt canon dont mean the show is bad jesus christ#is this how steven universe fans feel about amedot fans#especially that controversy involving someone who may or may not have been a show writer#or someone staged to look like a show writer#su fandom was hell. either result would seem realistic to me
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Oh I fucking hate this person who snitched ao3 to my government. Like sincerely fuck you.
#> tired shitpost#a person can't fuckign read their fanfiction bc u need vpn and vpn slows down internet speed so much sometimes it cant open#and all bc they wanted to purge all russpeaking people out of platform#like fuck u#'tee hee they would block it anyway it was just a question of time'#no they fucking WOULDN'T#THESE PEOPLE NEVER KNEW ABOUT IT'S EXISTENCE YOU PIECE OF SHIT#oh wow kinda sus how a cite for Russian speaking fanfiction writers/readers is still there#maybe because people didn't fucking snitched on us#because it's their fucking home#and we were just Sitting there on ao3#now we really can't much anymore
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honestly i dont even think its inherently unreasonable of penders to want legal ownership of his characters and stories. it feels like he gets a lot of hate just for that when the real problem is his behavior and certain things he tries to claim ownership of. and im not defending him it just feels like people hate him for the wrong reasons sometimes
#the way he acts like hes the king of originality and anyone who does something kinda similar to him is copying him#when half his characters are just recolors or relatives or alternate universe versions of existing sonic characters#one of his ''characters'' is green knuckles. not even a separate character its literally knuckles. but green. he tried to make nfts of him#and scourge. he didnt even create the green scourge design he made evil sonic who was just sonic with a leather jacket and sunglasses.#this character would later become scourge when being handled by other writers and artists#but penders takes credit for their work and claims ownership of and tries to make money off of the green scourge design specifically#and again. he does all this despite accusing anyone who does something kinda similar to something he wrote of copying him#one of his incredible original ideas?? knuckles having a dad. he said that the sonic movie people copied him by giving knuckles a dad#i feel like some of the stuff he says is probably just rage bait and him trying to pick fights with sega again#like the thing with him saying shade and julie su are the same character even though he didnt create shade and has no legal ownership of he#but i know that he is serious about a lot of this stuff
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unpopular opinion but actually i love when heroes refuse to kill their enemies and no one is gonna make me not love it
#personal crap#i think it makes writers have to be more creative about how they solve problems#plus it allows you to play with the morality of killing and what ways to fight are ok#(doctor who and su do that a lot obviously and imho it slaps idc what anyone else says)#and have stone cold badass moments of like emotional superiority (vash from trigun does that a fair bit#and my favourite recent example is how in gotg 3 rocket refuses to kill the high evolutionary bc he knows he's already won#and doesn't want to do to him what he did to lylla teefs and floor)#when heroes do just kill their enemies in cold blood it feels kinda boneheaded to me by comparison#not to mention a lot of purity culture weirdos loooove when villains are just one-dimensional evil dicks who have to be destroyed#bc that plays really nicely into their morality#oh and i just thought of another one: in rotj luke refusing to kill palpatine to take his place is so cool#especially in contrast to how in tros rey just kills him like it's nothing even though they spent the whole trilogy#building up the idea her allegiance to the light side of the force isn't as strong as most jedi#only to go 'nah if you kill palpatine everything's good'
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Hate scifi-fantasy magic/energy dichotomies where they talk all about balance but use genocide one side or the other to achieve it. Buddy breaking the scale doesn’t make it balanced. What the fuck do you mean the dark ones are all evil? They have an evil ideology? Okay yeah I see where that can be taken as evil but - NO it’s not balance if the only thing left is the light! You’re telling me there’s never been an evil light user? Oh there has? Then why the fuck has there never been good dark users??? (Answer: author doesn’t care about representing balance they just want easily coded good guys and bad guys).
#ra speaks#personal#writing#yes. this is about Star Wars. but also a ton of other series do this to varying degrees#like hmmm I don’t think genocide is the key to balancing the universe. as a concept that’s kinda sus for a writer to focus on.#again I don’t understand why the Jedi didn’t expect Anakin to be/become a dark side user?#‘he’ll bring balance to the force’ + ‘the Sith are all but extinct’ = okay so he’s gonna revive the sith. that’s what I’m getting from this#especially in EP I like. they really all thought the sith were extinct. only after that does ‘balance’ become ‘destroy tbe sith’#like ? that’s not how balance works. you’re space monks haven’t you like. had philosophical discussions abt this great prophecy?#and like it’s so dumb why write a dichotomy hinging on balance and have one sides code be ‘lol yeah we’re selfish bastards’#while the others is like ‘we must be selfless and disconnected to the point of self destruction and alienation’#like those are both extreme interpretations but also. why is the sith code much more easily interpreted to that extreme.#‘oh they just intrinsically evil -‘ well that defeats the point of having a balance. there’s no coexistence with that.#I guess my point is. yeah Anakin obviously joined the dark side and yeah the genocide of the Jedi wasn’t out of left field I mean.#we go from 2-3 Sith vs thousands of Jedi to a neat little 2:2 (sheev and Vader. Luke and Leia)#<- I’m talking about canon and narrative ratios. obv we know more Jedi survived I’m just taking the og trilogy in isolation.
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