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I'm almost done reading The Darkness that Comes Before by Scott Bakker, does that have any fans here?
#would like to talk#that book kinda caught me unawares#like it was good#surprisingly fascinatingly good#but also it was....a lot#had some amazing writing too#a few lines go so hard#the darkness that comes before#prince of nothing#second apocalypse#scott bakker#fantasy#fantasy literature#grimdark#dark fantasy
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I'm sorry, but I can't get over still what a mess Grievous' backstory now is lol, and mostly because I haven't looked at it for a few years, and somehow things got even more jumbled since then.
The amount of inconsistencies and conflicting info is just staggering.
Like, at this point I would honestly respect whoever is doing this shit way more ( initially Lucas and Filoni lol ) if they actually just. Changed his story and stuck to it. No "ambiguity" that Filoni tried to slide in out of respect and likely knowing fans wouldn't appreciate the new writing, no nothing. I would also respect it more if I could at least see that they put ACTUAL thought into it, more than the apparent 30 SECONDS that turned him into a character a 2-year old created.
I'd still ignore it, sure, but at least they could TRY to do something interesting with the "new and "improved" lore".
Instead we got that atrocity, and then the weird sliding back into Legends lore with them picking out some pieces and adding them to his "canon", while trying to avoid actually just changing it back to what it was, despite it creating a ton of nonsensical holes in the story. Why.
One of the MANY, but more recent examples I've seen was the shuttle crash incident from the now Legends, which made sense there, but not only does it make little to NO sense in the new lore, they also try to DIRECTLY STATE THAT IN THEIR OWN NEW CANON MATERIALS. They literally write "but actually it wouldn't have mattered if the crash happened, if it was the Sith who orchestrated it, because he already chose to be a cyborg and would've ended up as one anyway". Okay, then. Why did you add this back at all in the first place. You could've just not done this? Why was it brought back from Legends into canon just so you can then repeatedly say "but this event actually doesn't matter and has no effect on the story or Grievous' character development".
Literally what is this fucking shit. Who is doing this lol. How is any of this even acceptable writing.
Just, ffs - either keep his new lore, remove all the Legends stuff from it, and actually at least TRY to make something out of it - there are SOME interesting ideas, themes and directions they could go with this! If they actually gave a single fuck!
Or bring back his Legends story, remove this trash, and polish and work on expanding the original instead.
Every time I see some new piece of media that focuses on him, I have a shred of hope that they'll start doing something, anything with him, but instead it's either more garbage, or we just get something that expands on nothing at all, really.
It seriously feels like he's just a hated character by the majority of creators there, who refuse to work on him for YEARS and would rather give Jar Jar and other minor characters more development and screen time than him LOL. Jesus.
#this is my yearly rant about Grievous#yes I will keep doing this because somehow they can't stop abusing the character#also no I don't care what they do with his story#Legends is the only canon for me in regards to him and some other stuff too#unless something BETTER is created one day#but also I had to complain about it again because it somehow got WORSE#his backstory is literally just unreadable now because it's so messy nothing makes sense at all anymore#like holy shit do the people there just actually really hate this character or what#the lack of fucks given is amazing#god tier writing#text post#general grievous
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it’s actually crazy now that i’m thinking about it. with absolutely no side quests the story of veilguard is like 20 hrs long at most. that is SO SHORT. insane insane insane. we should all be on our knees thankful that they got any amount of good character writing in there at all. we really got dragon age 2 2
#i have seen some amazing posts by people smarter than me finding the most beautiful parallels and connecting things i didn’t even remember#mostly about solas ofc#which may suck if you hate the egg but i like him#anyways to me it is akin to DA2 which has AMAZING writing about the mages/templars:elves/tevinter parallels#but is weird about colonization and occupation and the qunari are underexplored. BUT FOR THE SAME#SAME REASON. both games are too short and had the worst developmental journeys known to man#dragon age#veilguard#dragon age veilguard
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I should have been born a frog. I should have been born a frog. I should have been born a frog. I should have been born a frog. I should have been born a frog. I should have been born a frog. I should have been
#us elections#us politics#election 2024#i talked to an older friend today and he helped a lot#being with people helps#reminding myself that people care helps#47.5% of people in the usa care#which is a minority but at least it's close enough of a minority to a coin flip that i can always find good people#i am trying to be positive and not live out these last two months of peace in despair#being alone hurts more and i spent too much time today doomscrolling but i need some time to prepare for what i might see in the future#i do not want to make plans i do not want to make plans i should not NEED TO HAVE PLANS FOR A PRESIDENTIAL ELECTION#when i was 15 i had a whole plan for a novel i wanted to write. it was a whole carpe diem/memento mori about living life before it's over#it was going to be a good book. but now i'm not sure i believe in what i am saying enough to write it.#and i am not sure if it would be what the world needs.#but it would have been a good book. it would have been an amazing book and i didn't want to start because i didn't know how#and i wanted to wait until i had more writing and life experience to do it justice#and now i just don't have the OPTIMISM to do it justice and now it may never be written#moral of the story is write the thing NOW edit later make the thing now while you are still passionate about it existing#contrary to the contents of this post i am actually doing much better than i was this morning.#today an irl friend held my hand as i cried under a couch and an online friend reached out to make sure i am okay and i am not alone.#a lot of it is cold comfort. but at least i am regaining some faith in humanity. not all of it. i will never again have all of it.#but i will have enough.#i am a little more afraid of dying young than i was this morning and that is good. that is good.#i am not the only one who has lived through a historical event.#i will do a lot more tiredposting in the near future#especially as inauguration day comes up#but for now in the tags i feel at least a little better.#seraph rambles#seraph originals#side note: the content of the actual post is reminding me of otherkin back in like the 2010s lol remember when that was a thing on tumblr
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sorry to everyone i tell a fic idea to that they get excited about bc i'm so bad at finishing a fic but i can offer you the start of the 8 new fics i've started this week with 0 plans on how to finish them if you would like
#rip to mushroom and spurious#i swear they must wake up to a new fuckin fic idea from me like every other day#me three days ago: omg so there's this fic i started-#me yesterday: so i had this new idea-#me today: omg so guess what i just started writing-#it's literally a curse#no one is allowed to look in my writing folders#they're shameful#i have too many fucking wips#help#how do you finish a wip#asking for a friend 😭#they're all amazing ideas tho#like evil dictator mcshep bc elizabeth actually dies in the storm/the eye#or ford adopting a puppy and coming home bc of it#or johm ascending and bonding with atlantis to help her run#listen i have nothing but good fics ideas#i'm just. less good at actually writing them to completion#we can't all be perfect okay i need some flaws#anyways#writer struggles#personal rambles#kinda stargate
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just thinking thoughts
#hmm… sappy moment rn but#y'all have given me so much over the past few years and it helped me get through so much shit#like i never would've posted or continued writing if it wasn't for all the love i got on my stuff (or maybe i would yk but i wouldn't post#any of it)#and i've had so much fun creating all these stories and characters – ruin you cmi atrw c&f etc etc#like 3 years ago i never would've thought anyone would love these silly ideas my brain comes up with so much#support them and be kind about them and also give ME as a person so much love?? ykwim? like im not used to this much affection#but i'm so thankful :') i do feel valued here… and i hope life stays gentle enough for me to be able to finish all this#like to finish cmi and all the other stuff i want to share before i leave this place… i hope the passion never fades#and that y'all stick around too <3 that whenever i do leave some day i don't regret not finishing something#but go with a content heart and with the hope that my stuff will be loved even when im away and the blog's archived#y'all are amazing :') it was easier to hold on over the years truly#sigh yeah that's it.. this got very long i know but if you read it all – ily :') <3#maybe dl?? maybe not let's see
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For the fic trope ask!
I've just read two of your age difference fics, Out of my head and Throw away the oars, which is a fic trope I LOVE. But I was curious what your opinion is on age difference as a reader? 😊
thank you, it means a lot to me that you read and liked them!! 💖
okay so first of all, i absolutely love this trope as a reader too, so it's an A or maybe even an A+:
A: Love it. Spend my time combing AO3 for it.
i want to elaborate a little on this though because it's actually something i've been thinking a lot about recently. my impression is that it's sort of a divisive trope, where most people either love it or actively avoid it - like, it either speaks to you or it doesn't. for ofmd specifically, middle-aged characters finding love is a core part of canon, and a lot of people (me included) love it for exactly that. i can absolutely understand that many will see de-aging one (or both) of the characters in a fic as unappealing for this reason (and i am not here to argue that they shouldn't - don't like, don't read). then, why do i like it so much? well, there's the obvious aspect of personally finding older people hot. wanting to fuck that old man and therefore writing how a guy fucks that old man lmao. but there's also the thing that adding an age difference introduces just a liiiittle bit of sexy power imbalance and conflict, similar to lots of classic romance novel tropes. the fantasy of having a more experienced guy show you the ropes while making you feel safe and desired. when writing, i put a lot of thought into 1) the older person not taking advantage of the younger person having less life experience (and usually making them struggle with their feelings because they don't target younger love interests in general) and 2) not infantilizing or taking away agency from the younger person (they're still a grown adult fully capable of making their own choices). when i write fanfic/AUs, i see it as a playground for exploring the characters in all sorts of ways, and i think it's interesting to change things i find fundamental about canon (and wouldn't want any other way in the source material), and changing their ages provides so many meaty things and opportunities to consider.
also, i have nothing but respect for giving a character a huge pile of daddy issues and either making them go "lalalalala i do not see it (as it's staring them right in the face)" or "obviously the only way to deal with this is to fuck that old man" 😌
send me a fanfic trope and i'll grade it!
#asks#xxprincess1x#ask game#this was wayyy beyond just a grade lmao sorry for rambling but i had some thoughts on this apparently#hope you give Bring the boat to shore a chance too i'm so proud of finally finishing their story <3#and Out of my head for a short fic where stede is the younger one!!#i have like 4 other age diff wips/aus that haunt me i keep getting ideas for them#shout out to those amazing fics in the humanized cars au where they're queer nascar drivers instead of actual cars#the kind of unapologetic age gap fics i aspire to write tbh (although with a much larger gap than i could imagine writing for ofmd)
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@mrswhymrhow literally practically everyone I told about wanting to write from the age of like 9-16. I had various teachers and random fuckass adults tell me to focus on art instead of writing and it felt like a WHO ASKED YOU? moment every time
#ill never forget my LA teacher being so kind to me though it still makes me nearly tear up like#just remembering handing in my short story and he called me up to his desk and i got scared#and he handed me my graded paper with a 100 and he told me You have such a talent for this stuff#and he told me about how captivated he was with my story and that I should pursue my writing dreams#he was so damn nice to me some random 14-15 year old who only started taking writing seriously like age 12#he said it in such an amazed tone too like he never had a kid submit a story like mine before#i rode that high of him constantly praising my writing for years cause he was the only person who liked my stuff LMAO
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I wrote this long before Ashton and Fearne became A Thing, pinky promise!!
This old fic of mine has been getting a lot more attention lately, which is odd considering I posted it a year and a half ago, but I’m not gonna complain!! I’m still very proud of this one honestly, it’s by no means perfect and there are plenty of things I would change if I had written this more recently, but even still, for a 6.6k word, almost entirely fluff, fanfic? It does it’s job well, and I’m proud of it
Anyway. I’m reposting it again because it’s been getting a lot more attention. If it continues to get more and more attention, maybe I’ll start writing and posting again <3
#thinking abt sept ‘22 when I started writing this and feb ‘23 when I posted this and now july ‘24 when I’m reposting this#sept ‘22 was a really really hard time for me which without going into too much detail definitely reflected a lot of Ashton’s emotions here#feb ‘23 was when I finally felt like I had found my place and I had found my people and like I was allowed to become someone I liked#now I’m here and I’m rereading stuff I wrote forever ago and I’m just amazed to see how much has changed#I wrote this because I have a habit of projecting on to Ashton (they are my fav tbh)#but now I’m rereading it and I’m just as much Orym in this fic as I am Ashton#and a lot of the conversations that are had in this fic parallel some conversations I had with my partner last night which. ouch!!#anyway that was my long sappy spiel about how emotional I am reading something that I wrote when I was at my worst now that I’m really okay#please read this. it’s good. I promise#critical role#bells hells#ashrym
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[TUVOKTOBER: Day 9] Ballet with the Captain.
#Tuvok#bea art tag#tuvoktober#Janeway would love doing a ballet recital if there was significant lore in the holonovel about the stakes and so forth#Tuvok does not want to do a ballet recital. He does not see how this is enjoyable.#Janeway canonically took dance lessons as a kid and Tuvok just seems like he would have too.#They were both forced to take piano (or its equivalent) and dance - and they both hated it at the time#But Tuvok stuck with lute & Janeway quit both to go on to other hobbies (she had/has a lot)#<- gets bored a bit easily and likes the excitement of a new challenge#Janeway...ok. I think she would make her romantic interest in this holonovel be:#A brilliant but sort of dismissive reporter who's an amazing writer but gets stuck doing pieces he has no passion for. And she draws his ey#bc she's so good at dancing and they have flirty banter where she shows him how dancing isn't boring or dumb and you KNOW she's putting in#scene where she like makes him dance in the rain or something. And he's graying despite only being a few years older.#The holonovel ends with him appreciating dance and writing an amazing article about the performance which she reads after#some sort of misunderstanding only to realize gasp! He really DID love her! And she opens the door but he's already there (he came to#apologize) oh Kath will you ever forgive me? of course...[kissing]#camera pans over to Tuvok who's like “=_= ...”#st voyager#st voyager fanart#also Janeway is a rose & Tuvok is an orchid
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I wanna. Pick them up in my mouth and shake 'em around like a dog obliterating a squeaky toy
#you can tag anyone you feel this way about but I was thinking about Rook hunt in particular#tbh I feel like he'd picture the same - just with Vil and Neige#he wanta his oshis to be besties (he is just lime me fr) (just a liiiittle furyher frim reality)#(I view neigexVil as nore of a crackship until we get more Neige development/lore)#(our queen Vil doesn't deserve to be genuinely shipped with someone who's kinda 2D rn.#But I respect people who flesh out neige with headcanons - they write the dynamics realy well tbh)#(hopefully we get more RSA development at some point I think that'd be cool)#(plus I'd cry if TWST just. stopped. after the last NRC OB)#(I mean it'd make sense aince that's where the story is based and it'll probably end once Yuu finds a way home#- which feels close now thanks to Ortho)#(But at the same time I. have been following this since it first came out when I was about 16 - same age as the first year squad lol)#(and I feel like it'd feel weird if we stopped getting main story updates)#(Im rambling a LOT lol - probably because I'm tipsy haha)#(hope someone can relate to my lamenting of future woes though)#(Oh well - I should atop borrowing sorrow from the future and live joyfully with the now)#(I do miss my friends who've stopped being in the fandom though - and my friends who deactivated and idk how to contact now)#(sugarandmelody... zacrazyvalentine... I miss them. but we had fun#writing and stuff. and I suppose that's what matters in the end. that we had fun.)#at least - I hope they had fun too. and I kinda hope they think about me how I think of them sometimes.#have a nice day if you're reading this. I rambled in the tags a while and I understand that it's kinda long lol.#and probably riddled with typos#I'm tearing up for some reason haha. well it is what it is#I hope each and every one of my followers know how amazing they are - I hope y'all have a wonderful day - evening - or night#I wish I could hug people across the internet lol#I should stop posting on tumblr while drinky haha#tw drunk#tw drinking#i'll tag it just in case#don't wanna cause discomfort and stuff
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Hiya!!!
Just wanted to stop by and say that I hope you’re doing well and that I love Rina and your Hadina ship and your art so much!!! You’re super duper awesome and I love the fic you’ve been writing too!!! ☺️
Hihi!! :D
Thank you so much!! I’m doing just fine, I hope you’re doing good as well!! 💗
I Really appreciate your support for all my Hadina Shippy stuff and I’m glad you like my art as well!! Ik it may not seem like it but I really do appreciate it a lot it encourages me to keep going :3 so thank you smm again!! 💗
ALSO IM SO SO GLAD YOU LIKE MY FIC AS WELL 😭😭 ESPECIALLY CONSIDERING HOW THE WRITING IS. ik the writing isn’t exactly the best at some points but I try 😭 I’ll get better I promise and my updates take me a while but I’ll try and update again soon enough when I get the energy and time to. (Probably gonna get started on that today if I can)
I also really really like the fic you’ve been writing too!! You’ve done a really amazing job on it I can’t wait to see more from you!! 💗 I think you’re super duper awesome as well 😼‼️
#mutuals 🌸💗#🖇letters from amazing awesome ppl💌#no cuz I’m sorry you had to read that my writing is…iffy at some point s#ALSO IF YALL SEE ANY SPELLING MISTAKES LEAVE ME BE YK I CANT SPELL#also that one really long Hadina oneshot I wrote I apologize that was so long for no fucking reason at all like my guy…#like when I write and I need it short it’ll be long but when I need it long it’ll be short#my brain short fuses and goes with the latter option idk 😭😭#BUT ANYWAYS THANK YOU SM FOR THIS💗#ive been kinda in dumps but I’ve been feeling better and this helped too so thanks a lot sis💗/p (sorry if that’s weird 😭)
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My gf is the GM of a cool little ttrpg group I'm in, but she's been busy this week and the session was going to be cancelled
I couldn't deal with losing the weekly game night, so I asked if I could GM a "beach episode" (which ended up being a holiday episode actually since I've now written it)
I've never been a GM before. I want to, desperately, but it's daunting. So I figured a holiday episode would be a really good start!
It's two days before the session. I've never been a GM. Never planned a session. I got the idea while procrastinating my job and immediately asked my gf if I could. I didn't think it through.
Consequences of my actions
But I actually kind of wrote down what I want to do and it's been very fun, and I have another day to finalize this plan
#its mostly planned#i dont want to plan too much because its improv but i want to be prepared#so i just kind of have vibes right now#but theyre fun vibes#its just a low stakes holiday episode. a touch of mystery but mostly fun#just to get a feel for running a session and playing npcs and such#soon i may be running a table at a monthly type event#so i want to get a little practice before then. with a group i know and love#its actually been super fun to plan just a little one shot#i played a really great dnd one shot awhile back#it was day of the dead themed#the dm was fucking amazing#the game im doing isnt dnd its one i like a lot more. unknown armies#much easier than dnd. bless people that run dnd. couldnt be me#anyway im having fun. its writing but with the instant gratification of making people interact with it#most of the stories i write just stay in ny documents. this one will be acted out by some of the coolest people i know#thats delightful#lmk if you have any tips for gming#im gonna give it my all#and a player that had to drop the campaign for the moment is making a one time return which im super excited about#it's going to be a good time. i hope and pray
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Mój przyjaciel. Co oznacza 17? Prześladują mnie twoje przypadkowe bazgroły. Czy ktoś... był z nią "romantyczny"?
answering this in english since it touches on the Janka lore 💥💥💥
although the comic idea was there more for the laughs, there's a significant difference between Giewont and Janka when it comes to relationships with people. The first one used to be a hard worker but got betrayed by humanity. They're wandering around, with no place on this earth, scared of what being around people will do to her. Forming meaningful connection is hard and they're not even sure if they really want to do that.
on the other hand we have Janka, designed to look nice, to be amiable. she's always there to listen. she knows your favourite songs and brightens your day. she can't leave you unless you get rid of her yourself!
i think it's an idea that would need some more exploration. people who are lost or lonely or angry or searching for whatever feeling they need in their life try to find a thing to bestow those feelings upon. and sometimes it ended up being Janka. whether or not the feeling was reciprocated or not, or if they've seen her as an object or as a person - that's a question for another time
#i was thinking about what may happened with some of the people she was close with#since she communicated in songs i imagine a scenario where she met a singer who was eager to write songs for her she could use to speak#simple phrases incomporated into lyrics like 'i love you' 'i miss you' 'please stay a bit longer'#but after a while she noticed some phrases were missing. there was never a 'you've hurt me“ but an ”i'm sorry you had to do that“#“you're to good for me to be true” instead of “you never treat me like a person”#“i can't stand a moment without you” instead of “please leave me alone”#the singer may have proclaimed love but did they really love Janka or just the adorations parroted back to them in their own voice?#amazing how you can make others bend to your will when you're the one writing the script they have to follow. but is it love? is it?#yeah sorry i got carried away. also sorry for responding so late i was out of town 😔🙏#Janka and her 7 evil exes (and 10 normal ones too. i guess.)#janka spg#giewont spg#(making a wild appearance)#asks
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Hebiichigo didn’t need to die to further develop Metal Lee’s character. I still stand by this.
Kagura also didn’t need to die to further the story!
#they literally tossed her character aside and I’m still mad#the writing team on Boruto is a mess sometime#kagura was being set up to literally be the successor to the mizukage & had all this amazing development and they just did him dirty#discarded him entirely like it was nothing; I’m salty about that still too tbh#the main manga even acknowledged the hidden mist trip arc to emphasize its importance to the plot initially and that also felt like it went#absolutely nowhere#I’m not going to dive into some other writer switch ups I’ve seen here but I do hope the anime gets some better managers/staff on it#mine#OP#Naruto#Boruto#boruto naruto next generations#boruto naruto next generation#boruto next generation#boruto next generations#kagura karatachi#hebichigo#hebiichigo#metal lee#tw character death
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Heyya everyone hope you're all having a good evening~ <3
Working through some requests atm and between juggling this, work and a couple new games I just wanted to give a heads up that I can start taking requests for Baldur's gate 3!
Ngl this game has me in a chokehold at the moment with the sheer amount of stuff to explore and I'm having the time of my life running around and making a fool of myself as I go so hey why not write some drabbles while I work my way through it?
Still pretty early into the game but I'm more than happy to write for any BG3 ideas you'd like to send my way~! Would love to hear everyone's experiences with the game too and their Tavs I love hearing ya'll's thoughts~!
#juno rambling#bg3#baldurs gate 3#bg3 imagine#baldur's gate 3 imagine#bg3 x reader#ngl imma be writing some stuff for this game soon bc theres so many amazing characters#all of the tieflings at the grove have my whole heart at the moment i wish we could just take em all with us#wish this game gave you the option to adopt im ready to just straight up adopt Mol and the other tiefling kids at this point#ALSO ZEVLOR???#HELLO???#Dammon's cute too and thats a hill imma die on hes so sweet from the few lines of dialogue weve had with him
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