#PLEASE…. PLEASE LET THIS BE JUST AN INTRO/DEMO THING
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numbersninja · 5 months ago
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PLEASE PLEASE LET ME PLAY AS MY PARTY MEMBERS I CANT BE ONE CLASS MASHING BUTTONS THE WHOLE GAME….
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asheepinthenight · 11 months ago
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Talon's End - Demo Update 1
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DEMO (itch) | DEMO ALT (github)
It's here! Thank you all for your patience and your kind asks and comments since the first demo version was posted. This update contains a bunch of new story content as well as some tweaks, both large and small, to existing content.
This update will break existing saves, so make sure you start fresh!
Please let me know if you encounter any bugs/typos/etc! A description and/or screenshot of the issue and what happened just before you ran into it is super helpful for me to locate issues and get them fixed! There's also a little survey (linked at the end of the demo and HERE in case you missed it) just to satisfy my own curiosity!
As of now, my plan is for Talon's End to always be free to play. If you would have paid/donated to play TE and are able, please instead donate to Palestinian or Sudanese causes or your local abortion or mutual aid fund!
A general, lightly spoiler-y list of new/updated stuff is below the cut.
New stuff!
Super secret RO #2 is here! You can romance/befriend them independently of Hawk or as part of a poly triad. (No additional ROs after this--just the two!)
Lots of new story content!
A few "achievements" for doing weird/obscure things
Early version of the profile page (more to be added)
Early version of the codex/journal page (lots more to be added)
Updated stuff!
New UI (lightly modified from this template!)
New icons for special choices
Updated intro/CWs for new UI and content
More options for nonverbal MCs
Updated wording in multiple places for clarity/consistency/flow
Fixed assorted bugs/typos
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aurelim · 4 months ago
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Hey do you know any other mermaid/siren whatever of the water merfolk sort IF's? because there aren't a lot
I also loved as the ocean lures, hope to see more of it in the future
thank you so much! I hope to write more of it in the future 😂
As for mermaid/siren/anything water-like creatures, I’ve got a few. Most of them are just intro posts and ones with demos that are pretty short, so I’ll split it up into two categories along with their tumblr blogs. There are some finished ones as well but you’re going to have to pay for the entire game so I don’t know if you’re going to want to pay in order to read the whole thing. I won’t put it but I can add some if you’d like!
I don’t really follow VNs so you’re just going to get text-based games. Sorry about that 😅
There was another demo for a game called Kalopsia but it seems to have been deleted. And there’s another game where you’re found and then saved by a captain. Both were on itch.io but I can’t find either one.
Demos
Abysm’s Veil [thread] by Jacic (inspiration for ATOL, about the rusalki)
The Sea Maiden [thread] by Jacic (they have some other games but they’re short if you really want to check them out!)
Beyond the Waves by @allthatwrites (inspiration for ATOL, related to The Little Mermaid)
Voiceless: A Siren’s Song [thread] by Fare (MC is not a mermaid but they can help one!)
Disenchanted by @disenchantedif (you can choose to be a siren)
Drown With Me by @barbwritesstuff
Siren Call by @darkpetal16 (it’s based on Undertale and while MC is not a siren Sans definitely is)
Intro Posts
…And I Am Undone by @fakeyellow (short story based on Hans Christian Andersen’s The Little Mermaid)
When Silence Speaks by @whensilencespeaks (seems to be on hiatus but the idea is really interesting!)
In Deeper Tides by @indeepertidesif (Disenchanted spin-off)
Through the Waves by @throughthewaves-if (this just came out recently and honestly I wouldn’t have known about it if I didn’t look at Zee’s reblog of it!)
I know there’s more, but I just don’t remember them or have yet to see them. If there is, please let me know!
There are some other IFs that are water related like @riptide-if (which is surfer related) but they’re not about mermaids or sirens.
Also, here’s interact-if’s list of mermaid IFs or water-related stuff if you’d like to take a gander. You can also just look up forums and Reddit for any mermaid recs. I’ve seen a few posts for them and people have given some. But I think I’ll cap it off here.
I’m so sorry to all the people I’ve tagged, but it makes it easier for people to just go to your profile and look at the amazing things that are cooking right now. Also because I’ve been making this list for about an hour and a half nonstop and I’d like to give my hands a rest 😅
(although I will tag @elegantunknownphantom as Zee probably has some IFs too that I didn’t list)
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zombeebunnie · 2 months ago
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Trembling Essence:💙Clean up changes + New CG💙
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Helloo guys and welcome new followers, here's how the game development is going so far!
A very big thank you to the recent influx of interest and comments stemming from my last game development post! I will try to get to everything when I can! :]
Important notice towards updates about Trembling Essence:
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For a good while I've been able to post updates about the game's progress weekly! Now that it's getting closer to fall and spooky month(Yay! :]) I am going to continue to be busy so I want to let you guys know that future updates will be irregular. Game development posts will be every 1-4 weeks depending on how things go. :[]
I spent the first few days continuing off from the previous development post by going through the last of The Swamplands and patched some things up! Towards the end of that week however, I got very busy and didn't get a chance to get to the cabin section or much else which is why this was delayed by an extra week so I appreciate the patience! :]
New CG:
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I drew up a new CG that you can get depending on your choices when talking to Noah. My play tester saw the first version I colored up but unfortunately the perspective was really off and his shoulders were too wide. I was given a couple of tips and pointers so I redid it and here's how it looks for right now. I couldn't do much else after that. :,,,]]]]
Last bit of clean up changes:
Intro:
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When it came to the introduction of Noah, the new parallax effect I added created a small glitch where the HP/COLD indicators were still shown behind CG's during a screen transition. There was some minor dialog adjustments, mainly describing certain situations a bit better. The moments where Noah talks to the player(Y/N) have been tweaked, not by too much but just enough to fill out this section of the game a little more. While I was going through the choices, I came across new dialog I added at some point and never came back to so I fixed it up just a little too. :]
Before:
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After:
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I altered the choice text for this since the previous wording was a little confusing from my play testers perspective. A good portion of the dialog was fixed and there was going to be a timed situation later on but I decided not to add it since this is a fairly straightforward path.
Chasm Ending:
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This ending got expanded by a fair amount mainly because the end is awkwardly abrupt and I didn't like that. I corrected it but the CG you see at this part didn't match the text so I went back one last time and a added visual effect. Overall, this part is done! :]
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If you like what I create, please consider supporting what I do on kofi! All donations and tips help tremendously while I continue to work on the game. Thank you to those that optionally bought the [Extended Demo] and the March 2023 demo on itch.io. :,]
Q&A / Ask box is open:
To know and understand Noah through Asks and random posts about lore, they'll be under #Get to know: Noah ! :]
**Some asks won't be answered if it contains spoilers but I do appreciate what I receive. :,,]
If you have any questions about Trembling Essence/Noah feel free to ask here or on itch.io please. This makes it easier for me to see and answer accordingly! I enjoy hearing from you guys!
I can't guarantee I'll be able to answer them right now since I practice drawing for responses but do know that I've seen them!
This update is getting fairly long so I'll stop here. Again, thank you to everyone for your continued support and influx of interest! I really wasn't expecting any of it since I got very busy towards the end. While I continue working behind the scenes on the game I'll try and respond to stuff/comments I missed! :,]
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shinakazami1 · 21 days ago
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have you seen the promotional material from tsp greenlight? if yes i would absolutely love to hear your thoughts on it. otherwise i can go fetch it for ya
First - please check Maximum's art - one of my fav TSP artists fr fr <333 Thanks for the ask!!
I asked for the files and now I'm sharing it here for you guys, too of the original TSP: HD REMIX greenlight.
I want to say that the TSPUD release took some inspiration from this campaign and I will compare the two, focusing mainly on the greenlight as you've asked for it.
There is a lot to unpack here so, I will break this into a few parts.
TABLE OF CONTENT
1) Trailers 1a) The First Trailer 1b) The Raphael Trailer 2) Images 3) The FAQ (frequently asked questions) 4) Final conclusions
1a) The First Trailer
Let's look at this trailer first. From what I can tell, this is the first instance of the 2013 intro. The layout of the Parable is once again unique, which happens in other trailers, too.
What is intriguing is the ending.
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The exit sign - was also visible in 2011 Escape Ending (with Curator), and 2013 (Mariella Ending - it's green). The only instance of it being above the door is the Demo (door close to 'Do you like the Stanley Parable' choice). It feels like a clever blend of the 2011 and 2013 ending to me, as the Narrator experiments more with the new placement. That's maybe why the layout feels isn't as familiar.
It's also the first instance where we see Stanley being conscious, besides the 2011 opening. From his perspective - he woke up to completely. Every video present in it is from the intro - which, seeing erratic movements from the camera, could mean those are new to him, too.
My take is this is where the Other Stanley comes in place. As he can move too, he might either be the guy who we see in the trailers OR, the one in the video. I like both interpretations
This trailer was reimagined for the PS5 release of TSPUD.
The layout is also different from the main game. What is intriguing, however, is the setup. While the intro does show the room from above, making this fake 427 room just a scrapped material, the fact that the new Freedom ending (look at the difference in the sky between the images), only furthers what I said in my prev post (about IOS release )
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Conclusions:
For trailers, the Narrator likes to make new parts of the Parable and play with layouts, letting Stanley run around freely.
That Stanley might be The Other Stanley. These, besides the Escape Pod Ending, are the only spots that Stanley moves by himself.
The greenlight trailer is there to show the new content from the perspective of 2011 mod, with a small callback to the original.
Now, onto
1b) The Raphael Trailer
Link to it Before I get to the trailer, I just want to give a shoutout to a Raphael Parable mod. It's an interesting fan game and I truly admire it.
The orange walls are typical Source SDK engine ones, and we have the emotion boxes found later in the Demo.
Have this list tho because it's funny
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It's the typical type of crazy list we see in the Demo, Disco, and iOS new content; I feel this is closer to most of them, written by the Narrator instead of Proctols like the Disco one.
It's also the first mention of other types of game and the Narrator's interest in them. The survival horror element with the Bicycle scene is really nice. It shows up later in the Memory Zone <3
In general - this is, before Cookie9, the first canon situation of the Narrator reading other people's feedback on the game. Just like with Cookie, he seems to take a proactive method with negative feedback, trying to show he can change. The attitude, however, also changed - for Raphael's ending, he is still 2011 way meaner self. The amount of sarcasm throughout the whole thing is so enjoyable and, whoever Raphael is, I hope he enjoyed this.
Conclusions:
The Narrator takes a proactive approach to critique that feels close to heart.
The construction part with desk 000 is shown for the first time - which could potentially mean each office number corresponds also to the part of office built.
2) The Images
There are 17 images in total. This part is also referenced in the PS5 TSPUD release video but also, if you look at the Mind Control Facility, some of the images are also used there as some of the room renders.
There are main three types of these images. The first, the contradictions that are also present in the PS5 video. It's a theme in the game in general to combine these, as The End is Never The End (thing that the PS5 text segment ends with) only shows it more.
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The second element - image 7 mentioned multiple different games styles that just like the video, fits the fact the Narrator loves gaming.
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But the third one is most interesting. The text in these seems conscious
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For the person who could say this, it could be either The Narrator or The Settings.
a) The Narrator: - Asking someone for help when game doesn't work like he thought:
Demo: " THEY SAID THEY LIKED IT! I NEED SOMEONE TO STOP THE DEMO! HELLO??"
Expo Achievement Fix: "Who fixed it? Is someone here?" ;
Confusion" "Will someone come for us?" - Skip Button parallels:
Image 12: slow corruption and scattered mind,
Image 15: "I am in control" ("It's all out of my control now. ") ,
Image 16: repetition,
Image 17: the return to normality
b) The Settings Person / 432 / TimeKeeper : - This could be his first appearance in the series.
- References to 'someone' could be his coworkers.
- Image 12: we know the number 8 is significant in the game. Just like the Bucket and Gamborrata, we know there seems to be some spiritual stuff going on and that might be the exact moment when he became the Timekeeper.
- Image 14: "If someone could get rid of the text maybe then I would see what the game is about" seems not quite like The Narrator's thing to say, as it's his game. Rather than that, it feels like someone else could be involved. - and with the corruption, it feels like a great
- Image 15: "don't tell me what to do" and Image 17: 'Let's begin again' fit their Settngs Persona
Both interpretations are as likely and while I prefer it's 432, feel free to make your own interpretations :] Maybe it's even a new character we don't know!
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"I would just like to know who is writing all of this. Do you know who is doing that. Would you please ask them to stop? Because I'm trying to figure out what this game is about (covered)"
This one part could mean whatever we see here are transcripts of thoughts, or what the person is saying is either written on the slides as they speak (meaning someone IS observing them), or they possibly have internet access (Google Translator). Once again, both can be true for The Narrator and 432 but, I thought it was a neat detail :]
Now, onto the last part:
3) The FAQ
It ties a bit back to who might be the person speaking in the images. And here, I would say it's even harder to tell due to the answers.
The question that starts it all is this:
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If you remember the iOS post, the Narrator will in the future to this say he holds back on the details. Of course, as this is Davey/Cakebread, it could be interpreted as one of the Proctols speaking.
The second part though, is really interesting.
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The question of identity is one in gen also present in the game (i.e. Confusion ending).
But the ending note-
"I'm alone again, aren't I."
makes me feel that once again. This might be either a) someone else entirely,
b) The Settings Person (theme of loneliness, loss of identity, understanding of weird rules),
c) Or, for this one my favourite, The Narrator.
Skip: "And here I am now, stuck in a room waiting for you (...) and that I'm going to be stuck all alone(...)" 
Bucket apartment: "No, no no, no, no, no, no, no, what's going on? Why do I want to be with the bucket, hear what the bucket has to say do anything it asks, what's wrong with me? I don't understand!"
4) Final conclusions
First - thank you maximum for the ask. I had no clue about the Greenlight Steam page so, this was a delight to look through and analyse. Here are my final thoughts on this:
This was still a collaborative work for the Narrator. The construction work, the different characters seemingly present in the images and the FAQ work well with the Demo having mention of Proctols. He used some old ideas and is going into new territory.
Trailers are spaces for Stanley (or, the Other Stanley) to walk in peacefully without a player's interference. It's unclear which Stanley is it.
The critique was meaningful to him from the start. The way he responded to it felt similar, but the emotional impact seemed to have changed, just like he did between TSP and TSPUD.
Themes of madness and loss of identity are important in the game. It might be the first instance of The Settings Person appearance, but no canon information is shown.
The FAQ might be the last canon instance of him being directly in touch with the Proctols.
If you got to this part of the post - thank you :] Nine cookies for you!!
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lynnerdo · 16 days ago
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Played the DATV demo today!
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Spoilers under read more!
A more in depth, warning spoilers! #veilguardspoilers
- We didn't get to CC, that would take longer than 20 for sure haha.
- I got to see the startup screen as they had to change my language setting from French to English, and someone went 'woops spoilers' HAHA. It's much like the intro for ME legendary edition where the companions show one by one. Pretty.
- The demo allowed us to choose a class, without knowing which Rook we would get. We soon saw the faces we already got accustomed to. Our female elven warrior, human rogue and qunari mage making a reappearance.
-It started in the middle of a scene with Harding, where you're at a campfire and Rook has a conversation with her until they hear a screech. Assan spots them and 'attacks'. Davrin has his Disney prince entrance, (swoon) and continues to size up Rook. He mentions that something smells, and as purple Rook you can joke "It's not me, it's the tents" and the camera awkwardly glances to Harding in front of the tent, the tent having blight on it. Very "the office" camera humor.
- Davrin is ??? about Rook but decides to give them a chance and continues on with the mission.
- We got to use Assan to do some environmental changes, like letting things fall down as he flies up to them to cut a cord or drop something.
- I spent a good 5 minutes just looking around, the environment looked GORGEOUS? Like the lighting? insane????? Weisshaupt out of this world fr.
- Then you have the first battle, a whole bunch of darkspawn and they're fucking annoying. I fucked up with the controller and got into fly cam mode, WHICH. IS A THING. So my entire hud was gone hahaha. But yeah the enemies are relentless. Good luck nightmare mode people.
- No one really is a "tank" so they WILL target you effectively, which as a mage, on first try... oh boy.
- Someone (redacted) who Davrin knows. (I don't wanna spoil this but it's not a big deal lol, just in case people don't want to read it)
- You move onto the next part, another Assan environmental change, there's also loot you can get, things you can interact with. But all subtle so more immersive.
- Then a big boy happens. Darkspawn will be fucking annoying and that's great honestly. The combo features are amazing for dealing huge damage, and after a while you get an idea of when and who to combo with. It's a small learning curve.
- If you forget to heal in time Harding has a skill she uses so I ALMOST died but the dwarf wife saved me.
- Dodge will be one of the most used skills for sure. I almost got sliced in two multiple times.
- Blight is gooey and gross, reminded me of Mass Effect.
- I couldn't really listen to the music sadly as the sound on the headphones were quite low, but the voice acting was greaaat ofc.
- It sadly ended before another cutscene reveal at the end of the short mission, upon they told us "we can't show you the end of the mission now can we :) " WELL PLAYED.
Overall: I can't wait to start. Can't wait to make my Rook. And honestly, the more. I looked at my qunari Rook, the more I liked him. He had a beard and he was all sass. The skills/spells look so fucking cool when the slowmotion combos hit or when you drop from the sky into someone's face. Loved it!!!!!! If you haven't pre-ordered yet, please do.
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churchofnightmares · 11 months ago
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Emoji Requests : Open
Discord Server : Not Available ; May make one if requested
Requests we will do
Certain fandom ones depending on how hard they are to draw, mildly nsfw ones ( Gore, things like that ), regular people, animals, wordmojis, ect
Please feel free to ask what fandoms we will and won't do
Requests we won't do
Fandoms we aren't in or don't know anything about, very nsfw emojis, endo things, things about war, ect...
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Hi hi y'all, we're Church of Nightmares, a subsystem in [redacted], it's nice to meet all of y'all, I'm Roman and probably will post the most here, but other headmates may as well.
We're primarily an emoji blog, but we may post other content at times, like bpd things, system things, other random art posts? We get burnt out pretty easily so we may go weeks without posting anything at times but I assure you we're still here. Uh- for more information about us here's a few of our more likely members to post here
🦊 Roman - Sleep/Tired/(Ask for more) - Subsys host
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We're all decently nice unless you're an asshole to us, uh- oh we're autistic and that does affect how we interact with people, we use tone tags not just for other's benefit but for out own, so if you're uncomfortable with them please let us know in advance so we won't use them.
We are bodily an adult so we may sometimes make posts that aren't ok for minors to see but we will always tag them so they can be avoided. Uh- few things about us- our collective pronouns are Ice/Fox, we are physically disabled.
Other then that hey! Nice to meet everyone, if anyone wants to ask anything / get to know us more feel free to reach out
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╰➤ BYI
We are ANTI Endo, we do not support endos, tulpas, demos or anything like that, we will not go out of our way to harass you for it but would prefer you didn't interact with us
We have severe BPD, it majorly affects our interactions, anything we see as rejection ( IE:// Criticism, arguments, ect... ) please keep this in mind
Tone tags, we need them, not only in our messages but in people we interact with, it will cause issues or problems that frankly didn't need to happen
╰➤ DNI
Endos
Endo supporters / neutrals who are only neutral to avoid arguments
Under 17 IWC and don't directly interact with us
Anyone friends with a discord user named .thecrimsonfuckr immediately block us.
The normal assholes
People who support Israel and shit cause fuck that
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dreamtydraw · 11 months ago
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this is how i feel about the stranger
second : I LOVE SO MUCH ABOUT THIS? i love otomes and i love horror things. the way that all the routes (without spoiling for anyone who sees this) all have a chance at being a bit spooky is sooo coool. obsessed with how rowan just outright comes back to flirt with you. also i thought it was so cool to include the group harassing aissata because its a real problem and mindset people have in some places and i think its inclusion to bring that fact up is so cool and so epic as a lesbian myself. third : ready for stranger's route to potentially destroy my life overall, i really liked the demo and im excited for its development going forward :] and also clems eventual cameo
Fkdkdidiiddi THAT THE ENERGY !!!! TALL NON BINARY !!!
Thanks you so much for sharing your toughts about my game ! It truly made my night (I loved reading people’s opinions about it 😭💕 ) And yes ~ Clem will have a Cameo but it’s not for now ;}
About Aissata’s scene with the students: The horror of the town goes in all shapes and forms, but if as humans we fear the unknown, we also fear other humans. Apple Bag will have more scenes linked to the fear of others, the intros was one example.
Without spoiling too much, let me say that many of Apple Bag’s them are linked to the fear queer people go through for being queer.
Very happy that you enjoyed my game, and also my li more memes please I like memes about my character it makes me jiggle
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sunshinemoonrx · 1 year ago
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Starhound: June Devlog
Okay!
My goals for this month were to make the third...not really a dungeon but encounter that occupies the narrative space of one, and then to refine the game such that I could make a demo up to that point to throw at people!
I have accomplished these things! Ideally I wanted to have the demo made but I'm still right about to be at that point, so hey. So, breaking down those two tasks:
First, the boss fight:
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I'm quite pleased with it! It's definitely something that might take a couple tries to figure out, but as a culmination to the first half of the game I think the balance is pretty good. Obviously I'll be taking input from people who didn't make the game and don't automatically know it inside and out, though.
But the whole premise of this game is that I am recreating the tokusatsu hero structure in an RPG; this necessitates certain elements like the transformation and finishing move which have a distinct flow. In the first two dungeons, the game avoids letting these be OP by having you measure out when you can afford to use them between multiple battles. This time you're guaranteed to be able to go at the boss full-strength, so she has to be designed around reacting to and defending herself against those abilities of yours, in a way that lets you have an interesting time reacting in turn.
Second, tidying up for the demo:
There's obviously general fixing issues, but I did some bigger things too. I went back through AAAAAAALL of Vega's dialogue, and added conditional branches changing her portrait if she's currently in her hero suit, or in catgirl mode. (I also made it so you can only transform into the suit in hostile areas to prevent that from being an issue for a lot of dialogue)
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I also added a database item you get after getting all the intro information, that allows you to review information about the game's systems, but also review your current objective and character profiles, which gives it a hefty amount of conditional branches of its own as those update as you progress through the game. Nothing groundbreaking, just took a minute.
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Ideal, aren't they?
Anyway, my goal for July is to do another playtest or two and get that demo up and running, shove it at a few friends and get some feedback, implement it, and if I'm very lucky and get enough time maybe even make a start on dungeon 4, because that'll probably be my main focus in August and it'd be good not to have to start from zero there. But we'll see!
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zannolin · 2 years ago
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with re4 remake in 10 days (if i remember rightly) I think we should do a bingo for those of us not being able to play it and are only able to watch it as yet
i started my list on sunday... on a post it note... that i almost lost
anyways working list
funny lines (eg where's everybody going? bingo?)
dog turns up (please capcom have the dog in the game as I don't know why it would be in the demo- i saw a comment about it the other day and it irked me a little)
fishing
bolt cutters
mine carts (cheating as they were in the trailer)
somebody loses clothing (RIP Leon's jacket as I think he loses that in the remake considering pictures and videos we've see)
spanish
chainsaw deaths (depending on the chose lets player you watch)
cool song (hoping so i love go tell aunt rhody and yearning for dark shadows etc)
(my PC can handle RE3 but i don't remember what i did to get it working so translating it to village so I can actually play it myself... no really it was changing config details, and unistalling it and reinstalling it and running as admin? it was a few things and I don't know for sure what did it? like the day i got it working i wasn't expecting it to work so I was on my bedroom floor decoupaging a box until I heard the menu screen music)
HELL yes i propose "cool intro" for the list a la re7 and re2r...please capcom give me a cool intro. i mean i guess it might just be what we got in the demo (which was cool) (but also)
if they don't keep in the "your right hand comes off?" line in i am jumping out my window btw
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mousetrap-if · 3 years ago
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Mousetrap is now live on itch.io!
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Well folks, it happened. Mousetrap was submitted last night to @interact-if's 2022 ranked game jam and is available to play on itch.io. The game is still a work in progress and, at this point, only a demo for the full story. Hope you enjoy it!
Click Here to Play
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You're one of the many overworked interns working at Whimsey World. When it was announced that Imogen, a category three hurricane, would soon hit Orlando, Florida, your employers asked for volunteers to remain in the parks during the storm, promising triple pay for at least 24 hours. You and your friend seized the opportunity. After all, Whimsey wouldn't ask its cast members to stay behind if it was potentially dangerous.
That's what you assumed before you were knocked unconscious. Before you woke up in a costume chained to your friend and three strangers. Before Dickey the Rat informed you and your "team" that you get $250,000 for each person you kill. Before the neurotoxins pumping through the park's air system began to loosen your grip on reality. Before nightmares and the real world bled into a horrifying, broken fantasy you can't wake up from.
If you survive the storm (and the things lurking within it), you'll win riches beyond your wildest dreams. But how far are you willing to go? How committed are you to pleasing your guests and satisfying your spectators? The Show will go on. It will always go on. But what role will you play in it?
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Twine Word Count: 53,625 with code (maybe like 48-50k without? idk, I write with code so I don't know how to estimate that)
Average Playthrough: 30 minutes (around 12-15k words)
And, is the game finished? Oh, no! Definitely not. This is far from the full story or the finished product (there are literally debug links that I forgot to take out in the very first passage).
Lots of content and features will be coming out in the near future alongside the patching that needs to take place. Details below.
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The next update will hopefully be on March 5th (though I'm a university student dealing with midterms so that may change). Further updates will be announced on the Mousetrap blog (linked here).
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Truly, from the bottom of my heart. I greatly appreciate all of the interest, support, and feedback that I've received on this project and others. If you're enjoying Mousetrap so far, please consider rating the game or leaving a comment on itch.io, reblogging this post, or sharing the game with a friend (or enemy, coworker, acquaintance, pet, stranger, distant cousin, really anyone/thing who you think might like it).
To read about some of my other projects, check out my personal game dev blog @gamesbyalbie or my project-specific blogs like @hadeskitchen or @zorlok-if.
(PS: The original extremely sleep-deprived version of this post has been preserved under the cut for posterity's sake)
Have a Magical Day!
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DEMO | BLOG | INTRO POST | DEV LOG | CAST PROFILES & PORTRAITS | PLAYLIST | PINTEREST: MAIN, COSTUMES, SETS
ORIGINAL POST:
Well, I'm mentally and physically exhausted (literally falling asleep as I'm writing this so, this may be a little loopy too). BUT, Mousetrap was submitted to the game jam and is now live on the Itch.io store.
This is not the finished game (like there are debug links on the very first passage that I forgot to turn off, but I'll be updating this with plenty of fixes and a lot more content as soon as I'm allowed to).
Total word count (with code since I write with code) is over 53k words. Average playtime is about a half hour. For a game that I've conceived and written in just one already busy month, I'm pretty happy with that. (except for the debug links, those are bugging the shit out of me)
BONUS - in case you wanted to know what stress looks like:
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Also, color me curious, if you want to and have the time to do so, let me know what choices you made (dream, relationships, role, route, etc.).
Tomorrow I'll be returning to Tumblr and catching up on everything I've missed. Have a great [insert your time here]! I'm falling asleep
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( ^ imagine that was my head hitting the keyboard, that's what it feels like I'm about to do)
Okay, I'm going to sleep.
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astaroth1357 · 4 years ago
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Brothers React to the MC Looking at Them Lovingly
This is a personal experiment. This is the very first time I've written one of these with a goal in mind, "Make them fall in love all over again." It's a tall order. I hope I succeeded. 🙏 Special thanks to @a-chaotic-dumbass for picking the mood for this one!
Intro:
We all know that look. The one where one person stares at another like they just realized they're the only thing in the universe and they're in fucking awe of it. The kind of look that tells you they're utterly enthralled by that other person and just can't get enough of their presence. That look. Yeah, the brothers just got that look out of the MC.
Let's warm some cold hearts, everybody.
Lucifer
Lucifer was always beautiful. Always has been, as an angel or a demon.
A morning star is one that outshines all the rest. It stands out when the other stars have dimmed, holding onto its luster in defiance of the sun. 
There couldn't be a truer title for Lucifer to have. Not the horrors of war nor the fires of Hell could tarnish his radiance in any way…
But there were moments, like right then, where the MC caught a glimpse of a different sort of Lucifer.
His brothers would often only see the uptight Lucifer, the practiced visage of perfection that he tried so hard to keep up… 
But after a long day, when he thinks he's alone, he retires to his room to listen to his music and the difference is astonishing.
There's something so entrancingly calm about him… How the light of the fireplace flickers and dances across his alabaster skin to the subtle slouch of his posture. His face no longer marred by creases of stress and frustration… 
And his expression is so pure… So tranquil and at peace… Beauty without effort. A shine that can't be ignored. A morning star, in the truest sense of the word…
It took awhile for Lucifer to see the MC leaning against his doorframe.
They were staring at him with the oddest look… Smiling like they were enraptured by something, but he didn't have a clue why. He was just sitting there…
So, naturally, he turned to suspicion.
"Am I really that amusing…?"
Frankly, he wasn’t prepared for the little laugh they let out in response.
"Mm? No, no... I'm just always so amazed by you, is all. I'll leave you to your music..."
Having thoroughly ruined the mood, the MC then turned to leave. But Lucifer was already upon them before they could step away, wrapping his arms around their waist and letting contented hum escape his chest.
"Going so soon…?"
Apparently he appreciated the compliment.
Mammon
He didn't have to do it.
When Belphie bumped into one of the House's vases, shattering it against the tile, he didn’t have to take the fall for it.
It wasn’t connected to him at all. He could have stayed quiet and no one would have pointed a finger at him for once.
But he did.
When Mammon set his phone down on the table, MC knew instantly that he had lied in the chat.
He was with them the entire day, he didn't have the time to accidentally break a vase. He hadn't even gone down that hallway all day...
But he said something anyway.
And he didn't even look fazed. He didn't turn towards them seeking approval nor did he look irritated that Belphie didn't speak up. He didn't curse at himself for doing something so self-sacrificing either...
When Mammon leaned back into the cushion of his couch, the MC saw something truly remarkable on his face… A smile. A small one, sure, but relaxed… 
Assured in his own actions. Confident in his choice and accepting the consequences… undeserved, and likely thankless, they may be.
A genuine, serene smile…
Mammon wasn't sure what he expected to see when he turned to the MC. Probably confusion or disbelief that he, the Great Mammon, could be so selfless.
Definitely not the awed, lovestruck look he got...
"G-gah!" He panicked slightly and pressed himself back against the armrest of the couch in shock. "Wh-... What'cha lookin at me like that for??"
When the MC didn't answer after a few seconds and just kept staring, he honestly didn't know what to do. Were they broken or something??
"Oi, MC! I asked ya wh-Hey wait a minute!!"
He made a noise between a yelp and a shout when the MC leapt forward and latched their arms onto him. What had gotten into them??
"U-uh… MC? MC?? Damnit MC, answer me already!! Or at least stop squeezin so tight!!... MC!!!"
Leviathan 
To anyone else, it was just Levi being Levi.
He had finished a new episode of his latest animated obsession and he had to share it with someone. Anyone would do, but the MC was always willing to lend an ear.
Something about Levi really changes when he talks about his passions… It's like he comes alive in a whole new way.
He speaks at a mile-a-minute, but that's because he's so excited the words fly from his mouth. 
Some part of him is always bouncing, be it his leg or body. Sometimes even his tail will swish and curl behind him like an ecstatic puppy. And his eyes… 
Citrine pools that glimmer and dilate from the exhilaration of it all. It's his little world and anyone can see he's thrilled to be sharing it. 
You'd never know he was shy. You'd never think he'd look down himself. You'd never guess that he hid himself away… Why would someone so full of passion and life ever want to? Some things are just too beautiful to keep hidden...
Levi had only gotten six minutes into his latest rant before he finally registered how the MC was staring at him…
This man has seen enough shoujo to know what that look means and it shut him up sooo quick. If anyone else were in the room they would have seen a beet-red Levi desperately trying to hide his face.
"M-MC…! S-top staring at me like that…!!"
"Like what~?" 
He didn't have to look at them to hear the teasing lilt in their voice.
"MC…" He peeked out from behind his fingers to see them still staring and covered himself up more vigorously. "Stoooop…!!!"
But secretly? He wished they'd never stop. His cheeks may have been red from embarrassment, but his heart was trying to hammer its way out of his chest to hug them itself. Hell, he'd have happily given it over to them if they'd asked…
Please just let those loving eyes be for him and him alone...
Satan
Soft isn't exactly a word anybody would use to describe Satan, least of all himself.
His anger was quick to spark, his strength was nothing to scoff at, and even his smiles were nothing but plastic for nearly all of his existence…
Nearly.
The MC learned surprisingly quick that there was one thing that could bypass all of the hidden ferocity to Satan's personality. Something that could make him melt like butter in the summer sun…
Satan had always looked a little cute when he was reading. He was easily at his most expressive when engrossed in a thrilling story or deeply intrigued by something he found between the pages of a book…
But watching Satan read about cats, as he was right then, was really something else entirely.
Maybe it was the way his emerald eyes would sparkle or the lopsided grin he just couldn't hide as he would scan the pages about the playful habits of Bengals or the relaxed nature of Ragdolls…
Maybe it was the sheer impassioned dedication he took the subject, pouring countless hours into collecting and memorizing every fact he could from their diets to coat maintenance.
Or maybe it was the sheer fact that anytime he saw a picture of kitty in-print he looked like a besotted schoolgirl drawing hearts around her crush in a teen magazine.
Really, who's to say? But to the MC, it was proof that under all that anger, there was a tender, loving center even for the smallest, softest creatures…
Satan automatically snapped his book closed when he saw MC watching him from behind a bookshelves. Caught red-handed…
He knows exactly how he looks when he's doing his research internally squealing over cat pictures so he tries to do so in private...
He was about to sputter out a defensive explanation but then he registered their face…
He'd seen that look described in stories, romance novels mostly, but he'd rarely seen it in action… and never once leveled at him with such intensity…
Not to be cliche, but frankly his heart skipped a beat.
Satan forgot about his book briefly and got up to close the distance between them, tilting their chin up to keep their eyes on him.
"Like something that you see, Kitten?"
"You could say that…"
He laughed at their attempt to play coy, but let it slide just this once… Easy to do with them looking at him so amorously.
Asmodeus 
Asmo is a very popular demon. Someone so free ought to know quite a lot of people, after all.
And, of course, he had plenty of fans. He made DevilTube videos, hosted radio shows, fashion designed, and even modeled.
So it wasn't very surprising when a young demoness stopped him while he and the MC were out shopping. It wasn’t the first time he had been asked to sign autographs, but this meeting… it was different.
It was clear to them both that this girl was shy. Though she held out the paper, her eyes stayed firmly on the ground and she stumbled on her question… She likely a fan from afar, but everything about her seemed meek… unassuming.
Most people would have just gave the autograph then went on with their day. The interaction could have taken five seconds at most… but not Asmo.
He asked her name… where she was from, how she was feeling, her favorite foods, outfits, makeup, you name it. All with investment.
It was amazing to watch the shy young woman slowly open up, getting more bright and cheerful with each passing question until it evolved into a healthy conversation.
When their little meeting finally wrapped up, he gave her back the paper (now signed) but also fished out a bottle of perfume from among the mountains of bags he was carrying. He gave it to her and wouldn't hear anything to the contrary, he could always buy another.
None of his brothers ever gave Asmo enough credit for his giving nature… even if he had his own way of going about it. Though he cared so much about image and his ability to shine, he never hesitated to make sure that the people around him shined too...
Asmo waved to the fan as she scampered away and was about to  apologize to the MC when he saw their face…
The man knows this look well. He's seen it a billion times, though it was particularly cute coming from them.
"Awww MC! Taken by my beauty are you~?"
He was about ready to kiss their cheek when they responded.
"No, not your looks, Asmo… with you."
… Oh.
It was very rare to see Asmo speechless, but for a few seconds his mind seemed to take in their words… letting them fully sink in before his heart utterly melting.
Oh MC… His sweet MC!!
Asmo ended up dropping the rest of his bags just so he could properly litter his human in nuzzles and kisses, the both of them humming and giggling in delight despite their shameless PDA.
Of course it would be his MC to see that part in himself… Who else would take the time?
Beelzebub 
Food is a precious resource to Beel. For him, it's a lifeline. A good meal could save him from the brink of starvation…
But that still doesn't make him incapable of sharing from time to time.
He and the MC were walking back to the House after getting takeout from Hell's Kitchen. Beel hadn't even waited until they left the restaurant to start eating his share, spilling the smell of fresh food into the air around them…
Things were going fine on their route back until they heard whimpering behind them…
A hellhound puppy, not quite old enough to bear its fangs, seemingly followed them as they were walking… It looked like it had been out for some time and eyed their food with hungry eyes, but weak posture. Who knows when it last had a meal?
The MC was about to tug at Beel's sleeve and say something, but their demon was ahead of them this time.
A casual observer might have gawked at the sight of Gluttony kneeling down to offer such a lowly creature a sandwich. But the MC knew better. When you spend your whole life hungry, nobody more than you understands that kind of pain in someone else. 
This reaction wasn't out of character for Beel, it was elementary.
And when the puppy finished its meal and covered Beel's cheeks with appreciative licks, he just laughed and scratched behind its ears. Amethyst eyes looking more relieved at its health than disappointed he lost some of his lunch...
Food was Beel's lifeline, but kindness is what made him who he was…
When the pup finally scampered off, Beel looked over at the MC to tell them it'd be alright and saw their face…
He wasn't really sure what they were staring at… Did he have something between his teeth again?
"MC? Are you okay...?"
They laughed at him for some reason but pulled him in for a hug so they must have meant well.
"You're so sweet, Beel…"
Beel's never one to refuse a compliment so he just hugged them back, beaming.
"Thank you, MC…"
Belphegor 
To say that Belphegor tended to be on the melancholic side would be an understatement… It wasn’t that he was incapable of expressing joy, it was just harder for him to do than most. Not helped, of course, by his tendency to keep his true feelings vague and hard to pinpoint.
But on those rare occasions where he was overjoyed… Belphie could really be something special…
The MC and Belphie were attending one of Beel's games and it was a tight one… Both teams had spent most of it tied and Beel's team was running out of time to overtake that slim margin.
Belphie had always been a supporter of his twin's athletics, but this time it was tense even for him. He kept on the edge of his seat and didn't even nod off during the breaks like he normally would… The MC could just tell how nervous he was for Beel…
But right as the time was about to run out, Beel made a last minute score and sure, the whole field erupted, but Belphie? Belphie hollered.
The normally sleepy and mellow demon was on his feet in an instant and practically shredding his vocal chords in excitement. If his tail had been out, it would have been beating against the bleachers like a war-drum. And his expression?
Belphie's smile is said to stop hearts for a reason. When he puts his all into a grin it's almost like he ascends to Heaven once more, as pure as an angel's choir and as warm as a summer's breeze… Nothing in his eyes but pride and adoration for his beloved twin brother.
Truly, a heartwarming sight to behold…
Belphie didn't calm down until the rest of the crowd settled and was about to point out Beel's skill to the MC when he noticed their face.
… oh no… Why do they look so sappy…?
"You really love your brother, don't you?"
Belphie quickly hid his thoughts behind an irritated frown and plopped back down in his seat… but that didn't shield them from seeing his pink cheeks.
"Of course I do. What kind of question is that?"
He debated just joining Beel on the field to hide his embarrassment when he heard them snicker back.
"Yeah, you're right… Don't mind me."
Oh he minded. He minded a lot that he let his carefully veiled image slip like that. But thinking back to that smile on their face…?
Maybe being a little open wasn't so bad after all...
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raeandwhatnot · 4 years ago
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Lucky Charm – Luke Patterson
Summary: Luke is reminiscing about his relationship with you in the past. 
Warnings: it’s a bit sad and angst… but also fluff
Words: 4.3k
A/N: (Y/D/J)= your dream job. This is 3rd person unlike my other imagines where I do it in 1st person. Might make a part two to this if y’all want it! I will be getting to y’alls requests ASAP! I’m so excited to write them! Also, italicized is flashback! 
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It’s been 25 years since Luke, Alex, and Reggie have died. The first thing that Luke thought of when he died wasn’t just his family, he thought of (Y/N). He thought of how he just left her. They were supposed to be together forever, but that forever was cut short from tainted hot dogs out of a car. The boys have been in the band with Julie for a while now, but Luke couldn’t help but think something was missing while he performed. (Y/N) was that missing puzzle piece. He always called her his lucky charm because he would always perform his best when she was in the crowd.
“Are you going to come to the dance tonight, (Y/N/N)?” Alex asks as the Sunset Curve group walks with the girl to their shared class.
“Hmmm,” (Y/N) hums. “I’m not sure. I have a lot of homework I need to catch up on.”
Luke groans and rolls his eyes at the girl’s excuse. “Oh come on, (Y/N)!” he exclaims, walking in front of her, making him walk backwards. “You have got to live a little every once in a while! All you do is worry about school work. You need to come to the dance. The best band is going to play at the dance!”
(Y/N) tilts her head, “Oh yeah? What band?”
“Sunset Curve, duh!” Reggie says. (Y/N) giggled as she already knew the answer to her question.
“Please?” Bobby pouts. “It’s going to be a lot of fun!”
The group stops outside of the classroom door and she looks at the boys. They all had pleading looks on their faces.
“(Y/N), please!” Luke begs, grabbing her shoulders. “I need my lucky charm tonight. I promise tonight will be worth it!”
(Y/N) looks down at the charm bracelet the boys got her for her 17th birthday. The boys collectively got a charm for her bracelet that meant something to them. Luke got her a clover as she is his lucky charm. She looks back up at the green eyes staring at her waiting for her to answer.
“Fine,” (Y/N) sighed. “I will go to the dance, but you have to promise me that you guys will dance with me!” Luke smiles and pulls her into a quick hug. The rest boys cheered and high fived one another.
Luke wished he could go back to that night. It was a few months before they started dating. He and (Y/N) slow danced together which made him realize that he that had feelings for the girl in the first place. He realized why she was his lucky charm, why his heart would always skip a beat when she laughed, why his palms would get sweaty when she held his hand, why he would always want to be around her because she made him feel safe. He couldn’t stop thinking about her even in the afterlife. He would wonder where she is. Did she get married and have a family? Did she follow her dreams to become a(n) (Y/D/J)? Did she live her life to the fullest? Did she-
Luke’s thoughts were interrupted by a voice calling out to him, “Hey, Luke!” His eyes tore away from his journal he zoned out on. He saw Alex and Reggie standing in front of him.
“Hm?” Luke hummed, sitting up from leaning against the piano.
Alex took a step closer and asks, “Are you okay?”
Luke tosses his journal on the couch and takes off the acoustic guitar that was wrapped around his chest. “Yeah! Just thinking about a new song!” Luke said. Alex tucks his hands into his jacket’s pockets as he doesn’t believe that Luke is okay. He has been spacing out a lot recently.
“Cool! What is it about?” Reggie questions.
“Uh, I’m not sure yet,” Luke answers. “I was just brainstorming. Trying to think of a meaning to it.” Alex turns his attention to the journal. Luke had doodled clovers around the edges of the paper. Alex taps Reggie with his shoulder and tilts his head at the journal. Reggie analyzes the book, realizing what Luke has been thinking about.
“You making another song about (Y/N)?” Reggie wonders, still looking at the song book.
Luke glances at what Reggie was looking. “I don’t know. She’s just been on my mind recently,” he sighs and looks at the floor. Alex and Reggie nod in agreement as they too have been thinking about their friend.
Alex takes another step towards Luke, “Do you want to talk about it?” Luke kept his eyes glued to the ground. He wasn’t sure if he wanted to talk about her. He didn’t know if it would make him feel better, or if he would just burst into tears.
His thoughts were interrupted once more as Julie skips into the room. “Ready to rehearse, guys?” Julie smiles.
Luke puts on a happy face, “Hell, yeah! Let’s rock out!”
Alex and Reggie look at one another, concerned for their best friend who seems to be hurting. The group walks to their respective spots in the studio.
“What song should we start with?” Luke asks as he plugs his electric guitar into the amp.
Julie flipped her song book. “Should we warm up with Finally Free? We haven’t done that song in a while,” Julie suggest.
Luke look at the boys who were nodding their heads in agreement. “Sounds good to us!” he answers for the group.
Julie starts off the song with her intro, and the rest of the band joined in. As they were performing, Luke messed up here and there, but not enough to notice. At least Julie didn’t notice as she was rocking out with the boys. When they finished Finally Free, they decided to do a new song Julie had started writing. They hadn’t settled on a title just yet which was okay because it was still in the works. They started to practice the first verse going into the chorus, but Luke wasn’t 100% focused. He kept playing the wrong chords.
Because he messed up, he let out a load, frustrated groan. The rest of the band halted their actions to look at Luke. “Woah, you good?” Julie asks concerned.
Luke shakes his vigorously to try to get his mind straight, “Yeah! I’m just not used to the pattern yet. Let’s try again.”
Julie looks at Alex and Reggie. They both shrug their shoulders, and they start the song again. However, this time Luke could barely get past the intro without messing up. He tried to continue, but he couldn’t do it.
“Damn it!” Luke shouts, dropping his guitar to hover over his chest as he roughly runs his hands through his hair.
Julie stands up from his keyboard. “Luke?” she softly says. Luke could feel the tears welling up in his eyes.
“I-uh,” Luke stutters as he takes off his guitar. “I need s-some air.” Luke suddenly then poofs out without another word.
Julie looks at the empty space where Luke was standing. She couldn’t figure out why Luke wasn’t in the right head space. He was always focused on the band, or at least he always seems to be. Julie takes her eyes from the dead space to Alex and Reggie who had sad looks on their faces. Reggie takes his bass off and sets it next to Luke’s guitar.
Julie steps off to the side of her keyboard. “What’s up with him?” she asks Alex and Reggie. They glance at each other before Alex steps away from his drums to standing next to Reggie.
“We’ve been thinking about an old friend from back in the 90’s,” Alex confesses.
Julie shrugs her shoulder, “Who? Bobby?”
Reggie shakes his head. “Gosh, no. I wouldn’t want to spend my spare time thinking about that song stealing dummy,” Reggie says in disgust.
“She wasn’t part of Sunset Curve. At least she didn’t perform with us. Her name was (Y/N),” Alex states, ignoring what Reggie said about Bobby.
“(Y/N)? How come I’ve never heard you guys talk about her?” Julie wonders. Both Alex and Reggie shrug their shoulders, unsure why they never talk about one of their best friends. “Well, who was she then?”
A slight smile grew on Alex and Reggie as they thought of (Y/N). Alex started to reminisce the memories of his old friend, “She was one of the most important people in our lives. She helped us with our struggles, helped us study, came to almost all of our gigs, helped us get gigs… she was just the glue of Sunset Curve. We wouldn’t hardly function as a band if it wasn’t for her. She was even the one who got us the gig at the Orpheum…”
It was a sunny Saturday afternoon, and Sunset Curve was writing a new song for their new demo. They wanted to make new songs as they always perform the same songs at every gig. “Hey boys,” Luke calls out. Bobby was playing random notes on his guitar, Alex was trying balance his drumstick on his index finger, and Reggie was catching dust. They all turned to Luke who had written some stuff in his song book. “How does this sound? When all the days felt black and white those were the best shades of my life!” Luke sings.
“Dang, Luke!” Bobby exclaimed. “That’s really good! How did you come up with that?”
“I don’t know. It just came to me!” Luke smirks. “I’m also half way done with the song!”
“It’s been, what, 30 minutes and you’re already half way done?!” Alex says. Luke nods his head as he writes down more in his journal. Next thing they know, they hear clicking heels coming from the driveway. They all look up to see (Y/N) with a huge smile on her face.
“Uh, oh. Here comes trouble,” Luke teases. “What’s got you all smiley, babes?”
(Y/N) stops at the entry way of the studio. “Well, I have some pretty big news to tell you boys!” she says, shifting her weight from the balls of her feet to her feels.
“What? You got the best SAT’s scores of the school?” Bobby asks.
“You’re graduating a semester early?” then asks Alex.
“No! You got us a puppy?!” Reggie asks excitedly. The boys looked at Reggie as if he asked the most absurd question ever.
(Y/N) giggled, “As much as I would love to give you a puppy, Reggie, you are incorrect. All of you are incorrect. I just did the best thing that is ever going to happen to Sunset Curve!”
Luke raised an eyebrow, curious at what his girlfriend could have done. “What did you do?” The group slowly walks towards (Y/N). Her smile thinned out as she took a pause for dramatic effect. However, the boys were anticipatingly waiting for her to say something. “WHAT?!” they outburst.
(Y/N) chuckled at the band, and she took out a piece of paper from her back pocket. She cleared her throat dramatically before readings out loud, “Dear Miss (Y/L/N). Thank you for sending us Sunset Curve’s demo and sharing their amazing talent. We would like to offer them the chance of a lifetime. On July 22nd, we would like to invite Sunset Curve to perform here at the…” (Y/N) looks up at the guys who got even closer to her and each other.
“Perform where?!” Reggie shouts.
(Y/N) smiles even wider than ever before she throws her arms in the air and shouts, “TO PERFORM AT THE ORPHEUM BABY!” All four boy’s eyes widened and screamed out happy cheers. Luke tackles (Y/N) in the biggest hug. She wraps her legs around his waist as he ran to the drive way to spin her around.
“This is amazing!” Luke exclaimed, putting his girlfriend down. “You really are our lucky charm!” (Y/N) blushes at the compliment. Luke then presses his lips to hers to give her a sweet kiss. She smiles in the kiss as she is the happiest she has ever been.
“Hey, Patterson. Let us give (Y/N/N) some lovin’!” Bobby tugged on Luke’s shoulders which makes the couple pull away from each other. Alex, Bobby, and Reggie then take their chance to hug (Y/N). Luke joined in by hugging her from behind. They boys thanked the girl over and over again as they were in their group hug.
“Guys!” (Y/N)’s voice muffled from the inside of the hug. “One of you guys need to put on deodorant. Plus, I can’t breathe in here!” They all laughed at her and pulled away from the hug, but Luke kept his arms wrapped around the girl from behind.
“What would we do without you?” Alex smiles.
(Y/N) let out a playful sigh, “I don’t know. Never be able to play anywhere?” She giggled at her own joke. Luke sneaks in a kiss on the cheek. “Alright boys, you need to start rehearsing now that you have this mega-important life changing gig! I will order some pizza and soda so we can celebrate even more tonight!”
“You’re the best (Y/N)!” Bobby says before walking back into the studio with Alex and Reggie.
“You really are the best,” Luke whispers in (Y/N) ear. She turns around and gives him a peck on the lips. “I love you.”
“I love you, too”
Julie felt her heart drop at the thought of Luke hurting even more for leaving behind two of the most important women in is life. Luke is not that open about his past life. Julie couldn’t imagine the pain he has been going through. Alex and Reggie had tears welling up in their eyes as they finished telling the story of how they booked the Orpheum gig. Her mind wandered to a song that she saw when she was flipping through Luke’s song book when Luke wanted to show her Sunset Curve songs. She remembered walking to the studio to hear Luke singing a song she never heard before, but she recognized some of the lyrics from his song book. “She sounds amazing. Do you guys have an old photo of her at all?” Julie questions.
Reggie looks at Alex, knowing he has a picture. “Yeah, I do actually. However, Luke doesn’t know, so please don’t tell him we have this,” Alex says, walking over to his fanny pack that was near his drums.
Julie tilts her head to the side in confusion, “Why doesn’t he know about you having a picture of her?”
Alex grabs his fanny pack and unzips it. “Luke’s been pretty happy recently, but I know that thinking about (Y/N) makes him a little sad. I would hate to show him a picture that brings back all these happy memories to make him sad that they didn’t get to have more of a life together,” Alex explains. Julie slowly nods her head.
Alex reaches in his back and grabs the polaroid picture. He walks back to Julie and hands her the photo. She slightly smiles at the picture. It was of (Y/N) and Luke. (Y/N) had a big smile on her face as Luke was giving her a kiss on the cheek. You could see the pure happiness radiating from the photograph. “Wow, she’s really pretty. Luke was a lucky guy!” Julie compliments. “You know, I’m sure Luke would love to have this picture. I think it’s time you guys should give it to him.”
Julie hands the picture back to Alex. Reggie started to play with his fingers nervously. Alex analyzes the picture in his hand and puts it in his back pocket. “We should probably go look for him,” Alex says quietly. Reggie nods his head and stands closer to Alex. Julie gives the boys a slight smile before they poofed out of the studio.
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Luke was sitting at the beach, the water hitting his feet when it came to shore. He watched the sunset which was helping him calm down. Him and (Y/N) liked to come to the beach and watch the sunrise, the sunset, and star gaze all the time! This was their spot when they wanted to get away from everyone and have a bit of privacy with just them two. They would invite the band sometimes to have bonfires and eat s’mores after a gig. Luke watched the lifers around him playing in the water and having fun at the beach. He wished he could join the teenagers jamming in a big circle across the beach.
Suddenly, he hears a poof behind him. He turns around to see Alex and Reggie. “Well, you guys found me,” Luke quietly says, turning back to face the sunset. In his peripheral vision, he saw his friends sit on both sides of him, Alex on his right and Reggie on his left.
“I figured you would be here. You are kind of predicable sometimes,” Alex says. Luke nods his head slightly, agreeing with Alex. “What’s up, Luke?”
Luke lets out a heavy sigh. He takes a handful of sun and lets it fall in-between his fingers. “I just..” he starts. “I just wish I could see her again. I wish I could hold her. I want to know how she’s doing. I wish I knew where she was, so I could see her one last time…”
Reggie patted Luke’s back to try to comfort him, “It’s okay, buddy. I know we all wish we could see her again.”
Luke shakes his head, angry tears forming in his eyes. “Sometimes I wish we didn’t die when we did. There was so much we wanted to do as a band, and there was so much I wanted to do with (Y/N),” Luke exclaims.
Luke shifts his weight to the left to reach in his front pocket. What he takes out of his pocket shocks Alex and Reggie. Luke is holding their best friends charm bracelet. “Wait, you’ve had this this whole time?” Alex asks. Luke nods his head, a tear finally falling on his cheek. Luke turns the bracelet to have the clover charm facing him.
“I found it at my parent’s house. When I first went there to visit them, I went to look at my room to see if anything changed. I found it on my bed with some of my flannels she stole. I don’t know why she would give it back. Maybe because looking at it gave her so much pain. I can’t imagine the pain she went through,” Luke explains.
Alex glances at Reggie who had tears brewing in his eyes as well. He suddenly became anxious as he wasn’t sure how Luke was about to react with what Alex was about to give him. He nervously fidgets before he speaks, “I actually have something to show you.”
Luke turns his gaze to Alex. Alex opens his fanny pack to reach for the photograph. Luke looks at his friend’s hand to see the polaroid picture. He hesitantly grabs the photo. He lets out a sad chuckle. It was the picture of (Y/N) and Luke. “Where did you find this?” Luke asks.
“I found it when I found our stuff upstairs in the loft. I’m sorry I didn’t give this to you earlier,” Alex apologizes.
Luke shakes his head to dismiss Alex’s apology. He studies the picture of the two of them. He remembered this day vividly. It was him and (Y/N)’s first date. He had taken her to a drive-in movie and ice cream. The picture was taken right before the movie had started. (Y/N) had always taken polaroid pictures for the memories. She had given this to Luke because she wanted him to remember that day, but how could he forget? He would never forget her or the memories they shared.  
(Y/N) and Luke were setting up the back of his truck before the movie. Luke was spreading out the blanket and pillows while (Y/N) was grabbing the snacks from the front. Once they finished, they jumped in the trunk and started to get comfortable. “Are you excided?” Luke asks (Y/N).
She pulls the blanket to her lap, “Yes! I’ve always wanted to go to a drive-in movie!” Luke smiles at her excitedness.
“I know!” Luke says. (Y/N) slightly smiles and looks down at her lap, blushing. “Which snack would you like to eat first, m’lady?” he asks in a dramatic British accent.
(Y/N) giggles. “Hmmm, why sir pass me the sour gummy worms!” she replies too in a silly British accent.
Luke chuckles, grabs the snack, and hands it to her. She opens the bag and takes out a blue and red gummy worm. She eats the blue side first and looks at Luke who was watching her the whole time. She could feel her cheeks getting warmer. She flicks her wrist to give the red side of the gummy worm to Luke. He looks at the gummy worm before grabbing it and taking a bite. “This is crazy, you know?” (Y/N) admits.
Luke sits up a bit and furrows his brows. “How?” he questions.
She shrugs. “I don’t know,” she mumbles. “Sitting here.. on a date.. with one of my best friends who I’ve had a crush on for forever. I never thought it would actually happen.”
She kept her gaze on her lap, playing with a gummy worm. Luke cocks his head to the side to try to get her to look at him. However, she continues to look down. He takes his hand and pushes her chin gently to face her towards him. She looks into his green eyes. “Well, you better believe it because I wouldn’t want to be on a date with anyone else,” he says. He tilts her head down and gives her a kiss on the forehead.
(Y/N) then remembered that she had her camera in her bag. “Wait!” she exclaims. Luke moves to the side a bit as she reaches for her bag that is behind them. She unzips her bag to grab her polaroid camera. “I want to take a picture!”
“How come you always bring that where ever you go?” Luke wonders.
She fidgets the camera in her hands. “I want to create memories. I want to remember my adventures and experiences. I want to remember it all, so I take pictures,” she says, checking to see if she has enough film.
Luke smiles, “That’s amazing!”
(Y/N) scoots closer to Luke and angles the camera up to get them both in frame. They smile, getting ready to take the picture. He then had an idea for a great picture. Right as she pushes the button, he kisses her cheek. (Y/N) smiles even wider and lets out a slight giggle. The film shoots out and she grabs the photo. She looks at Luke who was smiling like a kid in a candy store. You could see the love and adore in his eyes. Luke flicks his eyes to her lips for a second, but it was enough for her to notice. He leans in, but she stops him. “I thought you weren’t supposed to kiss until after the date. Or even on the first date at all?” (Y/N) jokes.
“We can be different,” Luke smirks before giving her a kiss. As his lips touch her, she takes in a large breath and leans forward in the kiss. He takes his hand and places it on her cheek to deepen the kiss. Butterflies were flying around in their stomachs. (Y/N) pulls away slowly.
Luke opens his eyes to see her cheeks were bright red. “The movies about to start,” (Y/N) says. He chuckles and pecks her lips one more time. They shift around to where they were laying down, resting on the pillows behind them. (Y/N)’s head rested on Luke’s shoulder. She grabs the bag of sour gummy worms and takes a handful out. “Gummy worms?” she asks Luke.
Luke looks down to see her handing him some gummy worms. “Don’t mind if I do,” he says and takes the candy out of her hand to place it on his chest. As the movie starts, Luke smiles to himself. He’s on one of many dates him and (Y/N) will be on, and he couldn’t wait.
Luke didn’t notice that he was full on sobbing when he was reminiscing on the past. He suddenly felt a hand rubbing his back, trying to comfort him. He looks to see Reggie comforting him. Luke pats Reggie on the back to thank him. “It’s okay to be sad, Luke,” Alex says. Luke looks at Alex and nods. “You don’t have to be strong all the time.”
Luke thins his lip in a sad smile. Luke puts the photo and the bracelet back in his front pocket. He wipes his wet face and sniffs the snot that his slightly falling out of his nose. “Let’s get back to the studio. Even though we don’t sleep, I need a nap,” Luke says, getting up and wiping the sand off of his pants.
Luke looks around the beach once more to see the lifers having fun. Alex and Reggie follow Luke’s actions and stand up as well. Luke walks towards the teenagers still playing their guitars and singing around the fire. He watches them smile and laugh with one another. Alex places his hand on Luke’s shoulder to signal that they should leave.
Before they poofed back to the studio, Luke noticed someone in the distance. He saw someone watching the group of teenagers like he was. He noticed the (Y/H/C) girl wiping away a tear from her eye. Then, their eyes connected. He recognized those (Y/E/C) eyes. He squints and walks closer to get a better look. He halted as he got a little closer. His heart beat quickened at the sight of her.
“(Y/N)?” he whispered before the girl poofed away. Luke’s breath started to quicken as he couldn’t believe his eyes.
“Luke?” Reggie called out. Luke turned around. “What’s wrong?”
“I think I just saw (Y/N)!”
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st-agatha-city · 3 years ago
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#and it let me fantasize even if i’m brief flashes that there might one day be an awful 3d… or claymation 👀… movie of st. agatha
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#5
It’s all coming together 🌸
So, with things moving along - I’m hoping to have St. Agatha City’s demo out by the end of the year at the latest - which admittedly is a little more difficult with my job (which I am very grateful for, but still) I’d like to talk a bit more about the upcoming features and my creative process! Normally, I kind of worry this sort of thing may be considered, well… with a little ire? I followed the YanDev thing and I do not want to pull a whatever that is.
However, excluding my week long break in July, I have been spending three hours a day, as I promised myself I would, on St. Aggs as usual, and since I have a grand total of 14 followers (ily guys, thank you so much 💕) and have not yet taken anyone’s money, I’m allowed to gush a little about future ideas, right?
I’m going to post concept art, ideas, and my mechanic workshopping a little more, especially during my editing phases of St. Aggs :)) I have a bunch of ideas for the future, both the finished base game, and DLCs, and having your reactions would probably be pretty helpful ^^
As such, please expect:
🎀 A series of posts discussing the purposes of the side characters (Nazir, Bailey, Giv, Eddie, etc. there’s quite a few who will be included in the polished base game that you haven’t met yet! Especially if you aren’t familiar with my characters from my art and daydreaming blog, @maddgicalgirl!)
🎀 Discussing the source materials of the main cast, how that affected them, and how I adapted it for St. Agatha (both art wise and reconciling canon) - as all of the featured characters originate from stories I have written who I decided to throw into a dating sim 💖
🎀 Showcasing and workshopping nonspoiler features, like the inventory and inventory items, as I develop them
🎀 and, of course: Proper character intros as I begin making the required steps in Sprite artwork, CGs, and story progressions!
Thank you again to everyone! Especially my good friend @sugarcoatedsadism who has been helping make this all possible, and @decaykid for being so supportive, and dear mutuals like @dreamyblur @dreaminpeaches @habits-white-rabbit @ivan-the-rat @acircusfullofdemons for your interest, and newcomers who’ve found their way here, who I cannot wait to meet!! You’ve made a world of difference to me! Even those who I have not listed, feel free to message me anytime on this blog - your presence matters to me greatly 💗
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"GOD FUCKING dammit KRIS where the FUCK are we?"
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Extraneous CGs
Just wanted to show you guys some of the non-spoiler CGs from St. Agatha City, Chapter 0! Here we have Pixy and a cockroach, and Donny - a clerk at the local taco place :))
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Thanks for looking at him. My Claggor post is officially my most popular art! This isn’t an Arcane blog (though arguably my main, @chainsawgirlfriend is haha) this is my art and game dev blog where I’m working on developing my visual novel, St. Agatha City. However, I couldn’t not celebrate. So, here’s Powder congratulating Clag on his accomplishment! I loved their dynamic ;-; he is such a good big brother.
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CLAGGOR ME BOY-
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td-efs · 2 years ago
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Episode 6: Killing Butterflies (Part 1)
(Disclaimer: I don't own any character, except for Albert, the host for this. Everyone and TD belong to their respective creators. There will be some mature scenes, but we can guarantee no NSFW here, as some of the campers are minors. If there is a (==)(==), it means that a confessional or a transition is being used. The confessionals will be in italic. If I portray a character improperly, please tell me! I have little knowledge about some of the campers, so please correct me if you can! Now, let the show begin!)
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Last time, the Angelic Axes ended up in the elimination and they ended up sending Velma and Demoman into the elimination challenge. Velma cheated by shooting Degroot (Demoman) and ended up losing.
This time, hope and despair grow in balance, but when one important person is gone, despair surrounds the air. Wait… are we killing someone?
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(Axes Boys Cabin)
“Demo! You’re back!” as Raihan noticed.
“Heheh! It was easy, until she shot me. Luckily, I was able to get payback, though I kinda regret it a little…”
“Really?”
“Yeah.”
“Anyway, congratulations.” said Sergei.
“Ah! You're starting to talk now, lad?” as Degroot turned to Sergei.
“U-uh…”
“Oh.”
“Say, do you know the next challenge is, hombre?” asked Don.
“Nope”
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The Silent Swords get a note from an unknown person.
“It said…
-It’s time to spice things up. Two of you will be eliminated after this challenge. You guys will be scrambled only for this challenge, so some of you better bond with opposing teams-
“What the…”
*cue intro*
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*beep beep*
“Hey campers, please meet me at the campsite”
“Well, that’s… different…”
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“What’s up with Albert today? They aren’t being themself…”
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Everyone woke up and went to the campsite.
“So yeah, new challenge today-”
“Hey, Albert, is everything okay there, lad? You called someone when I left.” asked Degroot
“Oh yeah, just an old friend of mine.” they replied.
“Anyway, what’s the new challenge?”
“That… It takes place in virtual reality. I won’t be in it because I’ll be busy. So meet this… bear thing…”
“Huhuhuhu!”
“The hell?”
“That’s right~!” the bear said “I’ll be hosting this challenge!!”
“Who the f//ck are you?” said Irina
“Now missy! Don’t use that language with me~! My name is Monokuma!!”
“Wait a minute, as in the bear from… Danganronpa?!” said MacCoy.
“Yep~!”
“Oh no, nonononononono-”
“Are we going to kill each other?!” asLena
“Correct~!” he responded
Fear grew in the group, as they panicked and freaked out.
“Guys, listen, you’ll all be in virtual reality, so you all won’t die in real life.”
*beep beep*
“Uh, wait in 5 minutes? Ok ok.”
“Bad news, I gotta go soon.”
“So when will you come back?”
“After the challenge, sadly”
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“Oh boy, we’re screwed, ALL OF US ARE SCREWED!!!” as Jean raged
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“So come with me.”
Everyone goes to the library, but it actually has a secret in it. Albert pulls a book down and reveals a hidden room where they can access the game.
“Before we do this, the note said to scramble, right?”
“Yeah.”
The screen pans down and shows the batches.
Group 1
Sergei
Raihan
Irina
Jean
Asuka
Lena
Anna
Link
Thomas
Shermie
Group 2
Demoman
Millia
Celty
Cassandra
MacCoy
Don
Giulia
Gromit
Sebastian
Luigi
“Those are the people you’ll be with in the game, so no switching~!”
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“We got an assassin here…” said Giulia
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“Batch 1 will go first, got it? All in Batch 2 must watch everything that happens.”
“W-what?”
“You can’t leave, or you must automatically go to elimination.”
“Yikes…”
“Batch 1, come with me.”
The first 10 followed Albert and Monokuma to the room where they’ll play. Once ready, everyone is taken to a simulation of the game itself. After that, a screen pans down, revealing Monokuma.
“Huhuhuhu~! I hope you guys enjoy this game and good luck!”
Everyone was given an e-manual and they read the rules and regulations.
“It said…
Everyone is forbidden from leaving the simulation without a valid reason. Anyone who leaves will automatically get killed and will be in the elimination challenge.
If you've been killed, you can leave, but you are not allowed to reveal the killer to the rest, that’s unfair.
You are free to explore the school. 
You can basically do whatever you want, except escaping of course.
Once a murder happened, everyone must go to the class trial. No exceptions.
A body discovery announcement will play when 3 or more people find a corpse.
During the class trial, if the jury figures out the culprit, then they automatically go into elimination. The class must choose one who seemed unhelpful to go against the rest of the losers. The victim/s will receive immunity.
If the jury accuses incorrectly, the culprit will be immune and the victim/s and the accused will be in the elimination.
Please respect Monokuma.
There are secrets to find, so roam around to find them.
“Are you all ready?”
“Y-yep…”
“Have fun!!”
Everyone goes around to do whatever they want at the school.
“Monokuma, thank you very much for doing this,” said Albert.
“You’re very welcome, Al! Now go, do what you need to do.”
Albert leaves the library and gets on the helicopter, leaving Monokuma to monitor everyone else.
Thomas POV:
-Ugh… my head hurts a little.-
(It looks like we’re in a school setting here. Strange.)
“Hey, Thomas!”
-I see Lena, my teammate calling my name-
“Dude, you good?”
-Yeah, I’m good-
“Dang, this school’s huge, ain’t it?”
-Yeah… it's rather… unsettling..-
(Why did they make it huge?)
“Anyway, where do you want to check out first?”
-Hm… we can try the gym first.-
“Good idea.”
General POV:
The duo went to the gym, along with the rest of the group. Monokuma appears in the game to give the motive for them to kill each other.
“What do you have for us, bear?” asked Sergei
“Huhuhu! Glad you asked, cause I got a motive all of you!
-Motive?-
“Motive for all of you to kill each other, duh!”
“Then what is it?”
“I’ll give the successful killers an advantage in the next challenge! You all need to get a headstart right?”
“Yeah, but it seems too good to be true…”
“I’m serious about it!
“…”
“Anyway! You know it’s a killing game, right?”
“Yeah…”
“Well good! That’s pretty much it. Now scram!!”
Thomas POV:
-Geez, he’s quite a tyrant for a little bear-
“Yeah, I can’t stand him”
-So, where to now?-
“I don’t know, but let’s hang out at the cafeteria. Bet they got snacks there.”
-Yeah, I haven’t ate for a while…-
(I wonder what is there?)
General POV:
The duo enter the cafeteria along with some others. They talked about how they can prepare themselves for other challenges in the near future with others. They eventually ate and went on their new day here in the simulation. 
Thomas POV:
“Psst, Thom, come here!”
-Jean? What’s up?-
“I got something to show you!”
-What?-
“Listen to Link!”
“H-hey…”
-Wait… you can talk the entire time!?-
“Yeah…”
-Why didn’t you say stuff from the start?-
“Yeah dude, why?��
“Well… I am uncomfortable talking because of my voice. It sounds weird to me…”
“Dude, you sound fine to us. There’s no need to be silent all the time. Plus, well… at least now we know what you really sound like.”
“Jean, look. I know you guys now know what I sound like, but please, don’t tell others about it.”
-Why not?-
“I just think that it would be embarrassing for me.”
-Oh.-
General POV:
The trio were chatting about various things before leaving each other.
*later*
Lena and Thomas looked at the garden in front of them along with Asuka, Shermie and Raihan but all of a sudden…
*BOOOM!!!*
“WHAT THE!?”
Everyone who had heard of the explosion ran to the source, but when they entered…
*cue the body discovery theme*
They find 2 bodies, a male and a female. 
“No… it can’t be…”
TO BE CONTINUED
Author’s notes: sorry again for the delay, I still have sucky motivation but this challenge will have possibly 4 to 5 parts due to the trial and the stuff needed. Either way, enjoy.
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valiant-if · 2 years ago
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Progress Update 6/1/22
✨✨Helloooo! And happy Pride Month!✨✨
There aren't that many of you yet, but welcome! I've decided to keep a semi-regular update schedule for this project. I probably won't update quite as often as I do with my main project, Ninelives, but I want to keep in touch enough about this one that people aren't left wondering.
And, aside from the intro, this is really the first post on this blog! I wanted to talk a little bit more about this project besides what's covered in the intro post.
This is very important, so I moved this to the top! Valiant will have its comedy and its light-hearted moments, but it will also be dealing with a lot of dark and heavy subjects. My goal is to be very diligent about the content warnings, with the option to see them at the beginning of each chapter, so that readers can easily avoid potentially triggering content. The floor is always open to send me feedback about content that needs a proper warning if it doesn't already exist. Please do not be afraid to approach me about this!
Also, please feel free to send me asks about the project! Since this is an 18+ project, nsfw asks are okay, but I reserve the right to not answer any asks I am not comfortable with.
I want to touch on why I consider it "episodic." At the end of the day, Valiant does have an overarching plot, but the general flow of the story is a little more relaxed, akin to watching a tv series, for example. The characters interactions will also be slightly inspired by RPGs like Mass Effect, Dragon Age, Divinity: Original Sin II, Baldur's Gate 3, etc. There will be smaller ventures and scenes that mostly serve to advance character relationships and stories. These will happen between (and occasionally during) the larger story beats.
I also want to talk a bit about how character relationships will work. My plan is for you to be able to explore friendship/rivalry routes. Unlike my main project (where I really only focus on positive relationship progression), you may not get along with or even like some of the characters in the story. Some of these characters might do things that you consider reprehensible or unforgiveable, so let this serve as your warning that it might not be wise to get too attached too early if this is a problem for you.
Character relationships are a huge focus, but romance is entirely optional. Personal character stories won't be locked behind romantic interactions—you'll be able to pursue them with platonic friendship/rivalry as well.
For those who are interested in the romantic interactions, let it be known that there are quite a few possible poly routes. FWB is also something that can be pursued. My plan is to have several different initiation points throughout the story, which will inevitably vary from character to character, so you might be able to initiate something quickly or have a slow-burn.
Because of the number of characters and the planned size of the overarching plot, this is an ambitious work. It will probably take a long time to complete, but the goal is to have a large number of variables for high replayability.
The project will be in Twine, in case I didn't yet mention that.
So when will the demo be available? I don't want to make a promises on an exact date. What I can tell you is that I've already been working on the prologue, which explores 4 major introductory routes to the story. The total word count right now is at about 7k words (working on just one route), which is likely to more than quadruple by the time the prologue is done.
I already have a very basic Twine layout, using a public template built by another author. I've made some minor changes, but the layout is functional and won't be a major focus for a long time, which means you'll see the writing long before you'll see any UI changes. (As a bonus, this particular template is mobile friendly, so you'll be able to enjoy Valiant on mobile when the time comes.)
As is my modus operandi, editing and revision will be done as I go. Unlike with my main project, however, this project is being built from a solid and detailed project outline, so it is less likely to undergo any major rewrites.
I think that's about all I have to cover for the time being, but, again, feel free to send me any asks about this project, whether you want to know more about a particular character, more about the mechanics of the game, more about the universe, etc. I'm more than open to talking about it!
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