i saw like a "bad fanfiction bingo" thing and it kinda struck a nerve because there were so many things on there that were just like. either personal preference or things that were NOT inherently bad writing. i'm sure that plenty of the best fics i've ever read would hit some squares on that card.
it just reminded me that so much of writing is about context and intent.
using little-to-no punctuation is something that can be employed to great effect, if it's a stylistic choice.
script format? works perfectly well for something like homestuck as-is; also, that's such a vague description that includes screenplay and comic script fics.
moaning/screaming/laughing typed out? so context-dependent oh my god. huge fan of when dialogue is broken by a little -- ah -- during a scene, for example
"eye color compared to gemstones" really peeved me personally since like. yeah one of my favorite characters has amber eyes. like that's straight up on the wiki page. yeah sorry i compare my blorbo's irises to blue labradorite because they are blue and gold and have chatoyant properties. skill issue if you don't like that
i'm sure i'm willfully misinterpreting the intent of the post i saw a bit. i'm sure op would not universally claim every single thing they wrote is a Sign of something being Bad. but like. that's the problem with generalizing anything when it comes to writing
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this is another page of gifs to add to my giovana cordeiro gif pack in mar do sertão. you may use them for crackships, gif icons, etc if you @ me. currently, on this new specific page of gifs, there are 109 gifs. like or reblog if using because i like to know if people are using my resources. thank you & have a nice day!
tw: kissing, flashing lights, semi-nudity (shirtless man)
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hii sorry I know this is random but I just need to have a laugh with someone. I'm cackling so hard at people taking that .2 second clip from the trailer of mew "smirking" (when it ended up not even being a smirk) when top was backhugging him and using it as proof of him being some kind of manipulator when the actual scene was him being heartbroken and feeling every possible insecurity. theories are fun but this is why you should not base all your opinions on them bc most of the time they are not true at all.
OMG RIGHT? i remember when people were saying that, i was like... you guys know what a sad smile is, right? like, i think you're being too generous calling it a theory, anon, it was just clown shoes🤣
i keep seeing a lot of folks in fandom, like, not knowing what smiles or other simple facial expressions are... i swear it's like androids from outer space trying to understand human emotions lmao
this smile, however?
absolutely scheming. idk if top's going to be one of his targets (i hope not!!!!!!😭😭), but definitely boston. that recording is getting leeeeeeeeaked, honey. which i guess might also be bad for top😭 maybe it'll instead be the video that drake (i don't remember his character's name soz) recorded🤔 if nick helps mew on his revenge scheme like book (? at least i think it was book) hinted, nick might hack drake's phone/computer to get it and ruin boston's dad's campaign.
mew is in full scorched earth p'det mode and i love that for him, but i hope top doesn't get too burned 😭💔
speaking of theories, i accurately predicted that mew would find out from the recording (and, at least since ep5, he'd get it from ray who got it from sand - although i NEVER would have predicted sand STOMPING ON HIS PHONE SO HE COULD USE NICK'S TO SWIPE THE RECORDING... girl you didn't have to do all that😭 aren't you poor😭 just say your phone is broken and that you need to make a private call or something omg he truly lost his mind), soooo i'm hoping i'm right that it's just a clip and not the whole thing - and when mew hears the context will realize that top was cornered and coerced.
i mean... we keep only hearing the moaning parts and mew was specifically upset about top and boston laughing behind his back about being a virgin - when top only slept with boston because he thought mew was NOT a virgin, because boston TOLD HIM mew wasn't. there's no way he heard that part, right? RIGHT??😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 IT HAS TO BE
thanks for stopping by, anon!💖 i too was thinking of that 🤡"theory"🤡 after finishing the episode, glad someone else had a laugh about it🤭
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Soundwave designing tramp stamps for the people he likes is peak comedy. Random grunts trying to figure out if Soundwave made them a design and then crying when it doesn't exist. You can tell how much he likes someone by how detail it is.
I can't tell if I'm really high or if this ask is just that funny, but I've been non stop wheezing for the last like?? 90 seconds or so because holy shit
Soundwave using tramp stamps as a form of affection? A love language if you will? This is so outlandish and silly and I am TAKEN. Anon you're a god damn genius. I'll be rooting for random grunts to earn their stamps
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