#that they are both SHIT at poetry
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Hey hello. Consider. Hobie reading over and suggesting edits to drafts of Peter's writing and then going home visually with clippings and quotes from said writing as a part of him. Alternately, Peter takes inspiration from quotes visible on Hobie
heart on your sleeve…..
#spider man: across the spider verse#spider punk#spider noir#hobie brown#noirpunk#noirpunk discord was chatting abt words on hobie’s university signature reflecting his thoughts which i’ve done before lol#hobie gives me the opportunity to be obnoxious abt poetry <333#oh how i love them#thank you anon!!! i rlly appreciate people leaving lil ideas in my inbox#even if it takes a while for me to figure out how they’ll work#but it’s so much fun and it’s so sweet and i’m so glad people think of me to share their ideas!!#they’re both writers except parker usually sticks with prose#and hobie with song lyrics so i believe in my heart of hearts#that they are both SHIT at poetry#(yeah song lyrics are poetry but the structure/vibe is way different lol)#poetry is something they almost unconsciously start to practice together/for each other#type of nerds to be like ‘aw this is such a sweet love poem… you spelled this wrong and repeated this phrase already—‘
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saw ii (2005)//abraham & isaac before the sacrifice (jan victors, 1642)
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#when your father’s absolute dedication to his cause leads to you dying/almost dying at his hands#and you can’t imagine why god would mandate this sort of violence from him#and you don’t think he realizes that the situation god has put you in is a test of faith for both of you#a test of how far he would go to carry out the will of god#and a test of whether or not you could believe him when he lays a knife to your neck and says it’s not his will that keeps it there#only I guess for john & amanda the god he’s killing for is his own desire to ‘save’ the people around him by any means necessary#saw#saw franchise#sawposting#saw 2004#amanda young#john kramer#saw ii#holy SHIT sorry for the tags I just felt sad & needed to write bible poetry/saw fanfiction about it
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EVIL MARK, EVIL MARK, EVIL MARK!!! I want to be coherent about this season but please picture me foaming at the mouth and running on the walls. S2 being what if Mark's just like his Dad? Insanity. I love this show. Anyways, AU where an Evil!Mark tries to make Our!Mark worse, and Our!Mark tries to make the other better. Something something confronting your idea of the worst version of oneself. Plus, tweaked black and yellow costume because I saw it and immediately went murder hornet lookin' ass and knew I had to draw it. Evil ass Mark. Horrible. I think he should be dragged kicking and screaming into redemption.
#mark and the fact he is fighting for this fucking life to avoid the Many Bad Endings???? im pacing. getting out the red string.#when the season is about who you are and what you could become. when trying to be good is an active choice and a struggle.#RAHHHHHHHHHHH#chewing on the bars of my enclosure...when every mark is evil OUR mark is the outlier. the exception. the OTHER. RAHHHH#dog poetry being mark poetry because how often can you kick a dog before it starts snarling before you raise your hand?#how often can you beat it before it rips into you without mercy? when it bites not at your hand but at your neck?#when does violence for survival and violence for vengeance start and end? when your opponent is down and you keep drawing blood?#circling and pacing and losing my mind over this btw if you care#anyways self vs self gets me going crazy. did you know i loved the end of atsv? because it shows.#i think o!mark would lose his fucking mind at what evil wasp looking mark has done + this mf wasp would LOATHE mark's kindness#they both see the other as the WORST version of themselves and they can't stand it. They can't shatter the mirror but they think they can--#--change the reflection.#evil mark seeing mark and seeing what he USED to be#mark seeing what he COULD be#CAN U SEE THE VISION??????#digital art#invincible rotating in my mind#invincible fanart#fanart#mark my beloved#mark grayson fanart#mark grayson#invincible s2#invincible show#mark like hello this is my secret twin and he is NOTHING like me hahahaha anyways wanna debate about having mORALS and LIFE#mark grayson vs the urge not to accept every responsibility as his own#he's batman coded that way#ok im done yapping#if this happened in the comics in any way shape or form dont tell me JACK SHIT or i will PUMMEL YOU with my SHOES
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i honestly love the fact that i have just been following two people very invested in dnf for like a year, either bc of a misclick or other mutual fandom, because i have so little knowledge about what is and is not real with those two. i have never played or watched a mindcraft in my life, however i can acknowledge insane homoeroticism when i see it, and those two are either ridiculously committed to a bit or ridiculously committed to each other, and to the like fifteen people who still seem to care post-face reveal (which i always thought was awful by the way, like people were dicks about it) it doesn’t really matter
#i’ve never been a rpf girlie and most of the time it’s pretty delusional and weird to me#but from what i’ve seen those two invite it#and the amount of Events that happen that i just see mutuals losing their shit about#is so funny#like oh what’s going on with these two men today oh they kissed with tongue at a pride parade? interesting#the tall one wrote snd publicly performed poetry about the twink? sure#they both seem insufferable to everyone except each other and you know what i respect it#tagging it#dnf#bc what fandom doesn’t want to see a bewildered mini essay about them
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I think Marx and Taranza are both theater kids
Except Marx is the typa guy to love beetlejuice, while Taranza likes phantom of the opera or something like that
Everytime Marx tries to recommend a musical or play, Taranza would be concerned. Because why wouldn’t you be
Marx ends up somehow convincing Taranza to watch something together
But then it turns out that Marx does have taste so-
Taranza will probably tell Marx to shut up but that‘s besides the point.
#I like Taranza and Marx interactions#i imagine that Marx would annoy the shit out of him and bit taranza or something#until taranza snaps and bites him back#but I think that they both used to be theater kids#i always feel like they would have similar interests for some reason? maybe it doesn’t make sense#but to me they both like theater poetry puppets- all that silly stuff#kirby taranza#kirby#kirby marx#my art#marx kirby#my post#taranza#marx#kirby fanart#fanart#art
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So i finally got my hands on translations of both the Odysee and Iliad!!!
And despite originally caring more about the story of the Odysee i decided to read the iliad first and I'm so incredibly glad i did!
About 20 pages in and two different women are separately kidnapped and taken hostage, Agamemnon and Achilles are at each others throats, the gods are getting involved, Zeus is being himself and Apollo is spreading the plaque. 🤬
Meanwhile Odysseus is somehow on a peaceful road trip and has a sleep over with the boys after a fun karaoke night. 🥰
#Can't wait to keep reading#Hope Odysseus gets a few more good moments before his life goes to shit in the next book#But also the iliad ist just so damn entertaining so far#Everyone is giving it their all arguing with each other#I'm both flabbergasted at their dramatic antics as well as drawn in#It's like watching a train wreck unfolding you can't look away#Also i was fully on Achilles' side until he begged his mommy to manipulate the war so he could play hero to heal his bruised ego#Like bro!!! What are you??? FOUR!???#Still the way he verbally dragged Agamemnon for being an egocentric bastard was iconic#He kept calling him dog face too#Surely Apollo would have cried at such poetry had he not been too busy killing their men.#the illiad#the odyssey#greek mythology#achilles#agamemnon#homer's iliad#iliad achilles#the trojan war#iliad odysseus#odysseus#zeus#apollo#greek gods#athena
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|| Apology; The Way I Don't Know How TNO
And to say I was sorry is to fall to my knees and cry. And a man like me has never been allowed so a man like me doesn't try. Wail of infant song lost ages behind hearts of ours. Glance between water lines find them as prison bars. Only you, Old Girl, only you.
To beg forgiveness to mend, is to ask rain for no water. To force more words out bloody lips is to ask you a final kiss in the end.
Silenced by a heartbeat my name couldn't leave your lung. Your name was the last breath I borrowed from you, as it stung. As do I, Old Girl, as do I.
#cringe? we'll see#dutch van der linde#hosea matthews#vandermatthews#red dead redemption 2#rdr2#poetry#we're doing gay shit#4am autism motivation time#poetry is hard cuz I make it rhyme unintentionally and then have to fight to make the rest of it rhyme cohesively#there's good lines tho#or I'm tired#or both
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me after reading four poems by internationally beloved, critically acclaimed, insanely influential 19th-century poet charles baudelaire: wow this guy's emo lol
#why did we not read more of his shit in high school. this is speaking to the emo teen inside of me#the second poem in the collection is about how poets are MISUNDERSTOOD and HATED BY SOCIETY#but it's okay because this christlike suffering infers upon them a transcendent sainthood 😇#the third poem is also about how hard it is to be a poet in this mundane world that doesn't understand the poet's vision#and it. is. a banger.#obsessed.#my posts#french#i can't even figure out how to describe how influential he is you guys. i am underselling it#i have a copy of an english translation of les fleurs du mal that i bought by accident kind of#and i'm thinking of maybe reading some of the translated poems after the originals#because i'm fascinated by the concept of translating poetry and i'd like to see what is retained & what is transformed & what is dropped#but it's so hard to get past the title. the flowers of evil? it sounds so stupid.#i've been trying to figure out why and i think it's the extra syllables? flowers and evil are both 2 syllables#whereas all the french words are 1 each#i don't know. i'm workshopping it
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its been like. nearly a year (How.) already but i cannot lie theres Still a part in the back of my brain occupied with and being thoroughly entertained by the way that childes confirmed 4.0 complete self-awareness over waking up the narwhal at 14 recontextualizes some key liyue things leading to some very funny self indulgent scenarios in my head
like yes chili is old news its basic please excuse me for predictable popular ship crimes (do NOT however associate me w the crimes of fanon against their actual range. theyre peak to Me) but i just keep replaying the imagery of zhongli and childe back on their homoerotic Professional Working Relationship bullshit where their flirting passed the jkjk unless treshold of even remotely plausible deniability like 8 exorbitantly priced business dinners ago and theyre just like. doing that whole song and dance now neither committing to a move except zhonglis presently feeling moderately conflicted (but nonetheless fairly unfazed at) by the prospects of actually developing some sort of a thing for the harbinger hes supposed to puppet master into executing the major story climax of his 67-step retirement plan bc he turned out to be quite the strangely charming ginger specimen (to His weird fucking 6000 year old tastes at least. they deserve each other) with some fascinating life ambitions he cant help but be enraptured by.
but because hes still 100% Locked In on his entire plan zhonglis also just . simultaneously dual wielding his coy-ass "i like you and am taking it slow to Savor this developing relationship (Also bc of the Geo Archon Shaped Elephant In The Room) except am old as shit so my languid sense of time inadvertedly Automatically turns my behavior into an equivalent of the dark souls boss of playing hard2get" act (cue "waddup im ajax 24 and im in fucking agony with this hot funeral consultant". Yes they live like this) AND also meticulously theorycrafting like 12 moves in advance for his 6d chess play of leaving the most subtly crafted trail of breadcrumbs behind for the tsaritsas 11th to follow into the intended & completely "Coincidental" idea of unleashing the one particular sealed sea deity that zhongli Specifically wants momentarily released for his sweet 6k retirement party and graduation test for the nation hes helicopter parented for 3.7k years .
like. this is zhongli we r talking about the guy Absolutely has it planned out down to a fucking art like he has an entire branching path dialogue tree planned and memorized like its a visual novel for every possible way he can conveniently namedrop osial in a non-suspect way and also that he just happens to be sealed right over there across the harbor (what a coincidence!) and also to slip in the intel about the latent power of the sigil of permission etc etc. like zhonglis just out there doing all this massive galaxy brain computational work simultaneously while infodumping on an academic level about whichever subject childes latest random comment of amicable small talk happened to remind him of because in his helicopter parent in remission mind its Absolutely Critical that the idea about releasing osial occurs Completely organically in childes mind it Has to he Cannot risk revealing anything . (hes in remission not in recovery guys.) so like here we are. he requested notes from the tsaritsa Personally on the character of her 11th just to ensure every move was painstakingly crafted to draw him Specifically to the intended conclusion without risking revealing his true identity .
except. the thing . neither he. nor the tsaritsa . would have been informed of . is that this simply isnt childes first fucking rodeo waking up an eldritch city sized sea creature . and he is very well aware of this fact . he woke that beautiful wonderful beloved huge fucking narwhal up by himself had his brain chemistry Immediately and Irrevocably rewired as a direct consequence do you fucking think hes somehow stopped thinking about that singular moment for even a second since then???
yeah . thought so.
so what actually ends up happening in reality is theyll be on another definitely-serious-business-not-just-a-date and zhonglis going to get down to like dialogue selection part 10 of the 86 step conversation tree at Most where hes only beginning to like Vaguely allude to the key pieces of information involved but it turns out Because Hes That Guy (TM) And Has Been There Done That Before childes basic pattern recognition and sense of irony simply proceed to kick in Way ahead of time and hes Immediately perking up like Hey wouldnt it be really fucking funny if i wake up an eldritch sea beast Again . like just in case. as a last ditch effort .
and zhonglis just sitting there seeing the gears turn in his head as they enjoy their cringe fucking picnic (bc they just stare at each other intently like that nowadays its a thing. being in a room with them by this point is essentially a human rights violation) and is just completely fucking flabbergasted and lost on how in the hell childes speedran his way to that conclusion at what amounts to barely a 13% completion rate in his whole overkill fucking plan (just 1 of 3 contingencies btw) and its like yes he has his intended outcome but also precisely 0 idea on how the fuck said outcome was reached the way it was this fast . like hes still winning its His plan thats well underway and ahead of schedule but How
(pov: ur selling the concept of waking up destructive sea creatures to the guy who woke up a celestial body eating cosmic whale at 14)
anyway its truly beautiful i absolutely detest these two and have prime liyue AQ hijinks nostalgia now thank you for the lore drop that allowed this to become canon in my head hoyo
#im sorry for completely out of nowhere ship posting dude idk where this came from . i had to get it off my chest ig . runs away#chili my dearest i miss em . theyre the most normal business partners to lovers dynamic to me NO drama whatsoever they just#happen to be insane fucking people and thats why it ends up weird . but relationship wise. bland as SHIT they just get along well#drama?? betrayal?? angst?? NO. 1 spar and childe forgives instantly we all know this to be true#theyre so fucking basic as a couple bc both of them being as weird as they are just ends up canceling out#bc neither is unnerved by the insane shit the other comes with . and they just like. date normally . and make a semi-open committed ldr wor#they simply civilly agree not to bring up the uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Religious differences .#6k yo highly suspect god known for signing NDA with celestia dating guy intent on torching the fucking place personally like .#'we make it work despite our differences 😌'#and the known self-admitted heretic if it gives him power looking to conquer the world just#'oh no need to Rush the agenda after all im still busy getting stronger 😊 in time watch tf out tho <333 youre so sexy aha'#dont listen to bland tropey fanon guysss listen to me they could be so fucking peak. they Are to me#altho childe pairings are so weird to me now being a true narwhal truther. theyre all basically a love triangle to me now LKWDJKWDKJWDKJ#like listen. they could be in love they could be the same entity they could be opposites. nemeses. platonic soulmates. romantic rivals. idc#BUT whatever the fuck they are i want them together please thank uuuuuuuu so like. added hysteria factor to any other ship w ajax .#hes still fucking cheating on his narwhalllll on all levels. romantic. platonic. cosmic. unphased by any attempts at defining their bond#with mere words. what are they??? no clue. still cheating. no i dont explain my poetry often. theyre simply everything to me xx#how do i even fucking tag this man its not rly childeposting worthy is it....#and im not abt to risk breaching containment in the chili tag.........................#guess its just#genshin#rambles#lmaooo wjkdwkjwjkdjkdw
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October, 7 PM
The water,
Gods, the water,
There’s something about it
It pulls and moves and drowns and lifts
A cacophony of noise and the press of silence on covered ears
Muffling the world above
An infinity
Poised between, a balance of air and light and breath and
Nothing
Silence
The struggle beneath, gasping and clawing and fighting
Breaking the surface is an act of penitence
An acknowledgement of subservience
A prayer
And so prayers litter the surface,
Foam the remnants of a battleground,
Nets strewn and the bright buzzing of red, counting down down down until
It
All
Stops
.
.
.
It’s quiet, and so, so loud now
The screams of jubilance and pain
Family is something made in blood, here
Not the blood which runs through veins but the kind that drips, drips, drips
Tipping off of noses and coloring the surface maroon
Sliding off of nails, painting hands red with the violence and the love and the pain
Pouring into a battleground, a declaration of strength
Into the screams of victory, hands held high,
The warmth of seven souls pressed together as one
Unified in a stubborn promise
The clasp of hands whispers of war
Home is found here.
In the blood and cold and breath.
In the silence.
In the water
#poetry#words words words#so many words#words about water#and finding family in a sport that has torn me apart#both physically and mentally#but also is now such an integral part of my life#that I'm not sure how I'll live without it#gods I'm having feelings now oops#water polo#at the pool#teammates <3#disaster rambles#sorry for the break in the usal pile of reblogs#figured I could start putting some of the shit I write on here#for goofs. yk.#reposting to my normal blog bc I accidentally just posted it to a writing community#whoops
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the applicant, sylvia plath // revolutionary girl utena
#rgu#revolutionary girl utena#himemiya anthy#utena tenjou#utenanthy#utena x anthy#akio ohtori#kyouichi saionji#mamiya chida#souji mikage#hi *drops this after nearly 6 months of silence and then runs back into the shadows*#this edit has been in my mind forever#i dont usually make anything but i read this poem by sylvia plath and was struck by a very specific vision#the poem itself is so reminiscent of the dueling system and AUGH THE OBJECTIFICATION OF BOTH SIDES#it is my personal headcanon that anthy has read every single poem of sylvia plath's and she feels very very deeply about them#go and read the full poem if you can it is so insightful as all of her works are#my first edit so feedback is appreciated! i couldnt figure out how to export the images without killing the quality bc my laptop is shit ;-;#poetry#edit#utena edit#web weaving
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okay fine i’ll make a human design for the dumb triangle (/aff)
this was hell to draw BUT! i actually had a pose reference this time! yay!
#never again#that stupid poncho will be the death of me#but it was an incredible idea and i had to do it justice#so uh basically#his hair is meant to be a muddy golden brown#his eyes are brown but they have so many gold flecks in the center that it gives the illusion of central heterochromia#the poncho was made by mabel! he’s probably wearing smth underneath dw#but it’s less. emphasizing to the Existence and Shape of his torso? if that makes sense? than a sweater.#i didnt really draw it but he is very gangly. absolute pile of limbs. hammocks are his worst enemy.#did i draw HEAVY inspo for both his design and vague semblance of a story (dont get excited its never releasing) from Trials of Apollo?#mayyyyyyybe#bill cipher#human bill design#gravity falls fanart#i feel it necessary to remind you all I Have Never Seen This Show#all i know is all i’m told#and baby? i am SHIT at poetry#<- reference NOBODY will get#my art
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Up until now death is only for the inferior is what I thought but if the superior also die wouldn't they become superior "fertilizer"?
-森川許六
ima made wa heta ga shinu zo to omoishi ni jozu mo shineba kuso jozu kana
#poetry#actually my favorite#I love how this student of Basho casually uses “kuso”--which means both “shit” and “fertilizer”--to refer to his own future corpse#I'd leave the original kana but sources are inconsistent as to what that actually was and I think this poem was rewritten#in both classical and contemporary Japanese so IDK#the romaji are pulled from Yoel Hoffmann's book “Japanese Death Poems” and I don't forgive Yoel for not including the Kana but I should
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i dont mean to be a bitch but if this is the mind-blowing one-liner that you're certain will be one of the best lyrics of 2023 then maybe you should consider a change in careers 😐
#i don't mean to be mean but for the love of god#also i get so angry on behalf of mitski like idk they're both indie writers and they praise this shit when she literally writes poetry#just don't say anything#jfc#x
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do you ever think about how english allows for a lot of cool vivid expressions with verbs due to combining them with prepositions and how spanish has gender embedded into like every word and how the inflectional system is incredibly rich and. do you ever think of how that changes the way in which we understand and create literature in both languages since they have such different tools for producing poetic imagery. do you ever think about that.
#a classmate pointed it out a while ago and though it is obvious and i knew it it just. hit me?#like OH. YES#so so in awe at path of motion constructions and how sadly we dont have any naturally sounding equivalent in spanish#now im curious and i want to read different poems and their translations into both languages and see how they differ bc. fascinating#see this is the kind of shit that scares me abt literary translation lmaoo gimme any scientific journal and ill do good#bUT A POEM??#anyway. nerdy thoughts.#nerd bee#linguistics#poetry#literature#mine#boludeces y reclamos mios(?
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Gang do we fuck with the anomalocaris poem
#I spend most of my poetry classes writing about dead things and honestly it rules#if not that then animals#sometimes both!#also i know the 'monument' 'consummate' slant rhyme is a fucking stretch#cut me some slack okay dsfjldfs I'm shit at sonnets. as you can tell by the lack of iambic pentameter#don't tell your english profs this but sometimes people break the rules of established poetry forms because they suck at metre
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