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I guess I'll put these here too!
#undescribed#not described#I don't plan on doing much with this game#since you know I'm uncomfortable with the drama and all#the devs and crap#but I do have some comic planned first#sort of a rewrite!#rununcart#dandys world#dandy's world#brightney dandys world#vee dandys world#poppy dandys world#dandy dandys world#astro dandys world
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do you ever think about how lucanis keeps losing and losing and losing — his entire life? losing his parents, losing his childhood because of the crow training, losing his freedom, his sleep, and one year of his life due to imprisonment. then the maker smiles upon him, and he's discovering something good (rook, the veilguard team, purpose), acquiring something back (his family, his life, his freedom, his job, his city), finding some peace in mundane things (coffee, cooking, taking care of others). it feels like the scales are finally moving, balancing — only for him to lose again. he loses caterina, he can lose his city to blight, he loses at weisshaupt, he loses grip on himself (thanks to spite), he loses control — he loses himself, piece by piece. rook can help lighten the load on his chest (thanks to spite), he gets caterina back, and breathing feels a little bit easier. but loss is not done with him. he loses illario, and it feels like losing a limb, a large piece of himself violently torn away. he's visibly shaken, but no one truly knows what it takes to string the assorted pieces of himself together and keep functioning. and then loss deals what seems like the final blow: some of his friends are dead or lost, and rook is gone, too. he failed; he only knows death, doesn't he? life only takes, and takes, and takes, giving only to tease and take it back. at that moment, he's falling apart completely — until they find rook, and there's a sliver of hope once again. the scales are moving, the team wins, they eventually go back to their lives — and that's when he realizes that the final blow is the life as the first talon.
#it's written with romanced lucanis in mind but i felt like it's important to mention that he can lose treviso too#also it's easy to water it down to some sort of karmic explanation: he dealt death and that's what he gets in return#but i think it's a completely wrong and even harmful take#his story could have illustrated perfectly the cruel and abusive system that crows are;#how it breaks people; abuses them for profit and (usually) brings out the worst in them (illario)#and they lose eventually — themselves; if not power#and even if you manage to stay human and sympathetic you keep losing as well because you're trapped in this never-ending cycle of violence-#--and power play; and that would tie perfectly with zevran's story they tried to play out offscreen in the previous games#it would have been so much more meaningful and impactful than uhhh whatever they did in the game 🙃#that would give illario so much more depth as well#also i don't believe lucanis wasn't shaken after the whole illario ordeal (i think it wasn't shown in the game at all????)#like. illario is/was the closest person to him. he spent so much time with him. and yet nothing???#idc about that stupid hero of veilguard badge gimme the brothers' agony!!!!#lucanis dellamorte#illario dellamorte#rook#dragon age the veilguard#dav#dav spoilers#**meta#**writing#UH i love them both so much 😭#someone needs to do the crows rewrites.........#not me obv im not capable but i'd love to read someone's version#anyway.... what do you think.... tell me...... talk to me about the miserable brothers......
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Wish 2: The Land of Dreams
Did some designs for how our main characters would appear in my hypothetical sequel. First and foremost of course we have Asha and Star, both learning to come to grips with being Magical/Human Shaped respectively, and seeping their relationship as they journey together through the ever shifting Land of Dreams on the Quest Queen Amaya gives them to find the long lost heir of Rosas…
Then there’s the Heir herself, Princess Maroula. A powerful sorceress in her own right, who a century ago defied her father to undertake her own Quest at the behest of The Blue Fairy, to protect the Land of Dreams against a the fearsome Lamia. For wishes and dreams are deeply connected. Maroula has made many allies in the Dreamlands, but her closest is the magnificent stag Selenos. Together they’ve managed to keep Lamia’s corruption at bay, but no one can battle forever…
And Lamia has recently found herself a new ally, one as deeply connected to dreams and wishes as her enemy is, and the best bet she has at finally overcoming Maroula. Of course the desperate, angry ex-monarch she plucked from the liminal slack of a mirror prison doesn’t need to know the foe she’s using his power to fight is his own daughter. Especially not when a couple of his own hated enemies show up at just the right moment to focus his attentions…
And that’s what I’ve got atm!
Links to other artworks I’ve done that pertain to this project
Movie Poster
Human Star origin
Fairy Godmother Asha art concept
King Magnifico/Maroula Backstory
Lamia backstory
#my art#disneyverse#wish 2: the land of dreams#wish star#wish asha#wish 2023#king magnifico#my ocs#disney ocs#lamia#maroula#starsha#human star#star boy#star x asha#Disney Movie Concepts#canon descendants#disney#wish rewrite#sort of#more like trying to improve it via hypothetical sequel
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Woe, brainrot be upon ye. An unlucky Storch and lucky Kolibri hunt for spies in a Vineta facility and are also gay (of course)
I don't have names for them yet but if you want the gist of their deal:
H13-Hesperides is a Vinetan facility, built to assist in the construction and security of a new Nation-built Sektor. Reports of possible Imperial spies as well as general discontent in the population leads to the arrival of a Kolibri cadre and Falke unit to help root them out (timeline-wise this is set just as gen 6 replikas are being produced). STCR-H1304 and KLBR-H1307 are assigned as the core leads of the investigation
STCR-H1304
Considered the unluckiest unit in the facility. More accidents and deaths have happened under her command compared to any other
As a result she’s infamous to both the replikas and gestalts as a bad omen of sorts
Her left eye was damaged by shrapnel due to an explosion. While still functional, she can't see clearly out of it anymore
Default state is silent fuming that can boil over into pure anger
More cautious than the average Storch (when not blinded by rage)
Hasn't felt truly relaxed in a long time
Very straightforward, in words, actions, and thoughts. Kolibri appreciates this simplicity
Wants to drop history or mythology facts when something reminds her of it but has learned to stop herself since no one really cares all that much
KLBR-H1307
Confident, stubborn, and very willing to prove her abilities to those who underestimate her
Very good at thinking and improvising on the fly and in stressful situations, aided further by her bioresonance
Also has a very good “sixth sense” and almost seems to react to danger before it happens (she just says this is a byproduct of her bioresonance and nothing more)
The rest of her cadre treat her as a lucky charm of sorts. She originally wasn’t supposed to be apart of this cadre but ended up as the final member due to production issues elsewhere
Not used to the bustle of a busy facility and can get overwhelmed by all the different thoughts
Her hair is always messy. She says she never has the time to brush it (she just can’t be bothered)
Likes reading mystery books the most. She always tries to figure out the answer before the reveal
Enjoys listening to Storch’s mythological or historical knowledge. Gets her to open up eventually about it
#idk what im gonna name them but its a 50/50 that it will be some mythological symbolism. smth smth a seer of sorts and an omen of doom#signalis#signalis oc#signalis storch#signalis kolibri#oc#flambo art#this took longer than i wanted to post bc i accidentally posted the draft last night. had to delete it. then had to rewrite it this morning#i feel like shipping the shortest replika with the (third) tallest might say more about me than anything else#oc: mors#oc: clover#ive got names for them now! updating my tags before i forget to#my ocs
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headcannon that after the squad becomes meifwas nekoette starts calling katelyn auntie because they both have blue hair and now share similar features. it starts reminding katelyn of abby, she loves and she loathes it because she misses abby, she misses having someone looking up to her. it reminds her of her brothers, of the times before she messed everything up. nekoette reminds katelyn of all of the things she regrets in her life.
#aphmau#minecraft diaries#mcd#katelyn the firefist#mcd rewrite#mcd headcanons#i just think nekoette is so excited to see someone who looks like her#someone who isnt her mother#shes so used to seeing the same people every day people thag dont look like her#that katelyn - who is a spitting image of her- makes her feel some sort of way she cant explain#she wants to make her feel welcome and loved so she'll stay around#so nekoette can learn from this person she thinks is so cool#this person people respect#shes never seen people respect and fear someone like her before#it fulfils her#i just feel like their relationship is so interesting#because they're not related and yet they look so similar its jarring#nekoette mcd
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So I was looking at the 'Get It Done Chargebolt' Fight and realized how bullshit it is.
Your telling me the MLA. A militia ideological group with numerous connections, a major one being Denerat (A Tech Company!) cannot give one of it's higher ranking members anything more than a taser!
(god, this is so forced.)
His quirk (Ampivolt) seems to work by taking electricity from any source and releasing it back out from his body, much stronger than it once was. (No, I did not read the wiki when writing this)
His body acts like a power amplifier, taking the watts absorbed and imparting some of it's own energy into it before sending it back out.
In a fair scenario (not manipulated by Hori and his bullshit), our elektromaniac here should have won out.
So, in a bid to do the MLA one better, I present to you my own contraption:
(Not my best. I made it on my cell while on the move, also yes that's the Denerat logo)
I've effectively strapped a car battery to this guy's back.
It's outer chasis made of a lightweight non conductive mesh, as to not drag him down. The battery stays locked inside, needing to be opened to charge beforehand.
The gloves are attached to gold wires to ensure maximum output and lifespan (as gold doesn't tarnish) and are wrapped in a sturdy carbon mesh. The gloves themselves act as tasers for both long ranged and short ranged attacks, having holes in the front and back to allow for combos and continous fire.
You may point to the Tesla coils that sit on either the sides of the battery's chasis and wonder what their purpose is?
Simple, destruction. They also ensure that the battery doesn't overload.
When the battery has reached it's max capacity, it will send some of that energy to the coils and these in turn transfer it to the single spike located at the end of each coil.
The spike on the end acts as a reverse lightning rod. sending the excess electricity outwards in a devastating attack that destroys anything in it's path.
Both coils are positioned outwards as to not harm the user as well as to ensure the electricity does not arch between the coils.
The battery then uses advanced tech in it's chasis to reabsorb some of the linering electricity floating in the air and recycles it back into the battery.
I don't show it here but the backside (facing the users back) of the chassis is a very plush material, as to not leave the user in discomfort. It is also where the straps are hidden.
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Test Drive (Or Denki's cooked, literally)
Ok we have the equipment, we have the MLA soldier. Now what?.
Well we speculate of course!
We know from OFA and the USJ Nomu that absorption and accumulation quirks usually have some upper limit.
We've also seen Denki fall victim to his own quirk numerous times (and quite severely at that), so it's not much of a stretch to say he could be burned by his own quirk.
Let's say Denki gets hit with Count Shock-ula while he's wearing the battery.
Above is the amount of electricity he normally expells when using his taser. Even now it could probably cause severe nerve damage or even death.
To save on length, we already know this man is a trained soldier, likely has been his whole life.
Given this, his fighting prowess and strategic mind should lend to him getting the upper hand in his fight with Denki, one of 1A's lowest ranking students in both academic and physical.
He hits Denki with a clean shot, maintaining a constant transfer of energy.
Even even as his muscles spasm and clench, Denki thinks he has the upper hand as does Jirou.
But now the battery is there providing a constant supply of electricity and Denki can only keep up so much, as Shock-ula's quirk does it's magic and increases the output.
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Exposition Time:
Presuming that Denki's stockpile is located at his center of gravity, we can say that the focal point of the overload will start here.
The inside of human bodies typically sit at an average of 98.0 Fahrenheit or 36.64 Celsius, about the same as a 50w light bulb.
The maximum amount of heat a human can take before they begins to burn is around 140°F (60°C).
The human body temp can flare up to as high as 106°F (41°C) when in extremely stressful situations (though this is more in the regards of certain anxiety disorders)
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As Denki's stockpile begins reaching it's limits, he begins to stress slightly. He can begin to feel the effects of his body temperature climbing and his growing panick isn't helping.
Jirou may try and interfere, but is either hit when the tesla coils expell the excess energy being absorbed or she is unable to approach all together as electrical currents surround the two electricity weilders.
Either way this only contributes to Denki's stress. He begins feeling the heat build in his abdomen, just above his bellybutton. Soon his insides feels like the inside of a hotspring.
Any attempts to sweat are foiled by his own electricity's heat evaporating it as soon as it forms on his skin. His body has no real way to cool down.
The MLA member may feel guilt in killing a child, but chooses to look at the bigger picture and what's at stake if he fails. He tries not to dwell too hard.
A long, aching moment passes by.
Denki is actually burning now, his intellect increases with each passing second and with it comes the ability to truly comprehend the situation he is in.
Trapped.
Denki's blood feels like it's boiling as he struggles to shut his eyes, fearing they may melt out of their sockets. His head is pounding and his stomach is rolling with intense nausea, a sign of severe heatstroke.
Yet the heat continues.
Blood vessels burst in his nose, lungs and eyes as the heart goes overtime, the kidneys have long stopped functioning and by this point Denki can't even think coherently.
A few moments later.
His organs and muscle fibers are now becoming covered with burn scars, he can smell himself burning and is finally then that Denki passes out. Perhaps for the last time.
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So, pretty grim huh.
Had MHA been darker (and more thematically consistent) this could have been a possible scenario.
It really makes you wonder what the fuck the heroes were thinking sending teenagers to fight in an active war zone.
Really makes me question the competency of both UA and 1A's respective parents because lord almighty...
Sending them to raid the base of the biggest crime organization in the country is already bad, as mentioned in my Jaku Disaster Post, not knowing what your doing is even worse.
This isn't the first time we've seen this either, remember the Shie Hisakai?
Yeah they pulled that shit too, despite knowing the entire base was a death trap but I'll leave that dissection for later posting.
It's not just Midnight who could have died, we could have been looking at roughly 10-13 members of 1A being dead (Not counting Bakugo) and that's just off the top of my head.
You know if Hori wanted to add shock value, rather than pulling shit out of thin air he could've just tossed some excess weight by utilizing his threats properly.
Really his over reliance on surface level "shock"* value in the later seasons, doesn't exactly put me in high hopes that his horror Manga will do well.
(*Retconning Rei's family, AFO's constant returns, Stars and Stripes, The Mech suit, Vestiges, etc etc)
If Hori wants to write horror, he needs to reapproach how he writes. Simple as that.
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Note: To the person that sent me the AFO ask. My apologies for not answering, I accidentally wiped it by mistake when trying to post, please feel free to resend the question to my inbox and I will glady give you an answer.
That was a wild one, so have a quick-sketch gag based off an MLA AU that's been floating around my notes for your troubles.
#mha critical#bnha critical#hero society critical#anti bakugo katsuki#anti aizawa#anti horikoshi#anti shota aizawa#horikoshi critical#mha ewe#mha rewrite#sort of#ua critical#it's there
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just ignore me, just dropping the (very short and very rough draft) rewrite!
Let me know how you like it. (there are a lot of grammar and spelling errors, the weather has me under constant headaches so please let me know if you find them!)
the next days i am at a convention so I wont be home and wanted to give you all something for the non existent progress.
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low quality link click doodle dump
#id in alt text#my art#link click#link click spoilers#时光代理人#lu guang#cheng xiaoshi#qiao ling#li tianchen#liu xiao#photo squad#squinky collection#every time i try to draw them normally i have another funny thought and i fill the whole canvas with these sorts of things#so heres all of them that ive done so far :]#lu guang in particular is very very fun to squinkify. his -_- meower swag#“concrete-flavored time” is referencing a discussion duckthedoof and i are having about whether time travel in link click is dominated by#the butterfly effect or by stable time loops. and dr who waters of mars is just because well dr who tries to rewrite time to save someone#and it goes badly. thematically relevant
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Well hello and welcome to this shitshow I’ve decided to tackle.
I’ve decided that I simply cannot allow Seven Deadly Sins—a series that I still think has great potential and squandered it—to remain as bad as it is and I am going to take a crack at improving it one delusional piece of artwork after another.
Anyway, here’s my redesign of Meliodas. He can look as youthful as he wants but there will be no borderline-toddler faces in this house. Still a short king wearing heels, but this time it’s boots! Redid his vest to have coattails instead of whatever it was doing before, gave him black pants because it balanced him out a bit better, and gave him a green bow tie because the red just seemed way too out of place in the original design.
I’ve said before but I will say it again for the masses: let 👏 the humanoid 👏 demons 👏 have more 👏 demonic 👏 features. And if no one else will then I may as well do it myself. Obviously he looks more human most of the time to hide his race, but he’s got slightly different demon eyes, fangs, retractable claws and horns (still working on the positioning and proportions) and a whole tail! Because we all know that the Demon Race are probably just oversized cats, am I right lads?
In my version if canon, the Demon Race used to be Goddesses or at least an angelic race of some sort until The Fall, which I like to imagine Meliodas was there for because someone’s gotta drop the deep lore. And because I think it gives a new layer to the Demon Race’s hatred for the Goddesses. Does it contradict the canon lore? Sure, but I’m in charge here and I, unfortunately for everyone, do what I want, and I always love me some biblical imagery and themes.
Anyway, that’s all I’ve got for now, so I should stop ignoring my schoolwork now. Let me know what you think, if ya’ll are so inclined!
#meliodas#nanatsu no taizai#seven deadly sins#nnt fanart#sds meliodas#fan art#seven deadly sins rewrite#sds rewrite comic#should probably come up with some sort of nickname for it huh?#HELLO NNT FANDOM I’M HERE TO BE A MENACE
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Never Leave Me Again
My eyes fluttered open after what felt like ages. After a moment of blurriness, I tried to make sense of my surroundings.
I found myself lying on the floor of the sitting room of 221 B Baker Street.
I must have fainted before.
Holmes was on his knees, towering over me from the left side.
Holmes. Mr Sherlock Holmes. My friend, my intimate companion, the only consulting detective in the world. The man the entire world thought to be dead.
Apparently, even death did not have a chance against him -- such was the power of my Holmes.
"Watson, my boy! Are you all right? You scared me to death for a good minute."
Something about his words ignited a fire in my heart. I clenched my fists in anger and frustration.
"Here I thought you were dead." I braced myself against the floor to be able to sit up. I grunted as I finally sat up straight.
Holmes looked down in embarrassment.
"Scared you to death, Holmes? Do you have any idea what I went through for these three years?" My eyes were welling up with tears.
I bent forwards to grasp his shoulder. Flesh and bones. I used my other hand to squeeze his shoulder properly, just to confirm that he was really there.
Holmes flinched in fear when I squeezed his shoulder. Did he really expect that I was going to beat him? It broke my heart to think he would even consider that a possibility.
"A thousand apologies, my dear Watson. I did not think you would be so affected."
"Why did you not? Did it not occur to you that you were my closest friend?"
"Of course, it did." Holmes' brow was furrowed. "I can assure you that you were not the only one who suffered all this time. I just thought that you would have moved on by now."
I moved a bit on the floor and wrapped my arms around Holmes to pull him in for an embrace. Holmes' arms were around my back now.
"Never." I swallowed hard. "I could never. Why would I even be here at Baker Street right now? I used to come here so many times a month, sometimes even daily, hoping you would come out of nowhere in front of me. I'm aware this was rather lunatic on my part. I could not help myself."
"You cannot imagine how many times I made up my mind and almost sent you a letter to inform you about my whereabouts. That would have been seriously lunatic of me, given how the situation related to Moriarty's network was at that time."
I gently held his head in my hand and pulled him closer. "You did not have to go through all that alone. I was right there with you that day. I always will be there with you."
"I know that, and I trust you deeply. I would never have forgiven myself, though, if something had happened to you because of me, or because of you being with me. I had to be alone."
I was not satisfied with his answer, but I decided to let it go for now.
We kept holding each other like this for a long moment.
"I am sorry."
I nodded in my reply. "How did you do it? There was no escape from the Reichenbach falls."
"I am exhausted right now, dear fellow. May I tell you about it later? I shall tell you the complete facts of the incidents over dinner."
My heart fluttered with joy at the sound of dinner together. I smiled and nodded as I let him go. "Promise me that you shall never leave me again."
Holmes took my hand in his own. "I will never leave you again. Now it's your turn to promise me something."
"What is it?" I asked, getting up from the floor to stand straight. Holmes did the same, and we were now facing each other.
"Move back in." His grey eyes were filled with hope.
"I will." His wish was my command. Always.
Holmes turned around and went to his old bedchamber.
I waited for him to disappear, and then I walked across the sitting room to look out of the window -- thinking about new beginnings with a broad smile on my face.
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Prompt: Forgiveness by @fluff-cember
Tags: @lisbeth-kk @helloliriels @jamielovesjam @calaisreno @keirgreeneyes @totallysilvergirl @topsyturvy-turtely @peanitbear @gaylilsherlock , etc.
#john watson#sherlock holmes#fandom: acd canon#fluffcember 2024#fluffcember#prompt: forgiveness#holmes x watson#holmes/watson#acd canon#fanfic#ficlet#my works#my writing#new ficlet#fluff#angst#awkward and long conversations#post reichenbach#reconciliation#reunion#sentimental#canon rewrite#sort of
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i am officially Moved In !! first night sleeping in my flat tonight, filled with all my belongings, so messy & so mad & so mine 🥰🥰🥰
#all my friends in edinburgh came to help me empty my old flat!#(bar one who is away so we'll forgive them)#& it was so cute#now my living room is an absolute mess of bags & boxes & books#but i will get the kitchen finished & bathroom cleaned up tonight#& my bedroom is done#so the living room & study can be steadily sorted over the evenings this week#i can't believe it !!!#a blank page; a rewrite#edinburgh era
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So I got spoiled about the Ekko talking Jinx down scene in episode 9 and I remember my first thought being how tf did she get away from Vi. She knew how devastated Jinx would be over Isha and after their fight in ep3 she would not want to leave her alone after that. I knew whatever happened people would blame Vi for it so I hoped she would try to slip away without Vi’s notice or in a way she couldn’t follow, which is what happened… kind of.
I’m not the first or the last to say that the placement of Fantastic was terrible because somehow I thought of how Vi would react to Jinx running off in such a state in about 2 minutes with limited information but the writers didn’t consider that in god knows how long.
So since I’m considering rewriting a few parts of season 2 here’s my rundown of changes for this scene.
Jinx breaks away from the hug and locks Vi up as is
When Cait finds her she is actually concerned. I could still see a kiss but more comforting like in ep3. She sits down on the ground to be with Vi for a moment. (give me back tender, loving Cait what did u do to her)
Vi gets a second of comfort before going after Jinx
Cait offers to help, wanting to be there for Vi but she declines knowing it’ll just make Jinx more upset
Vi arrives at the Last Drop and sees it ablaze, fearing the worst she runs around the outside desperate and finds Sevika.
Vi demand to know if she knows anything about Jinx and Sevika says she’s with a Firelight, she found them in Jinx’s hideout when she went looking for Jinx (in this version Sevika joins the firelight team like in the concept art)
#idk what this is#all the potential fix its are so jumbled up in my brain and idk how they’ll fit together#I just needed to imagine this scene as different#there’s much more to sort out for Cait and Vi earlier in the story but this wouldn’t leave my head#arcane#arcane critical#arcane rewrite#???#jinx arcane#vi arcane#caitlyn arcane#ekko arcane#sevika arcane#CaitVi#let Sevika be important
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I love Wonder Woman very much and I love her potential to explore themes of truth’s different meanings and violence against women and what it means for trauma to be passed on or processed in different circumstances but unfortunately all this potential is snubbed by her support of the military vis a vis her solider boyfriend and her origins as a character designed to encourage women to join the war effort. I think if you wanted to give her story real impact and meaning this would have to be completely removed and as such I long for a universe where Etta and the Holliday Girls are an internationally touring band and Steve is their loser friend who manages the finance and Diana follows them all around as the friend who can’t hold an apartment
#dc#my new story Wonder Woman goes couch surfing#which iirc already happened in the 80s but still#the internationally touring aspect would still give her stories a reason to be global instead of connected to a particular city#and would place Etta more centrally in the story I feel like a lot of WW comics aren’t sure what to do with her#and I think it would be fun and whimsical.. imagine Diana sneaking around to prevent#some sort of sinister sabotage at a music festival while Etta is performing onstage and trying to give her clues as to#where to go next and what to do.. classic funny#I have many ideas for this sort of WW rewrite but a lot of them are so divorced from the source material via#the ground up wiping of Steve’s backstory and character so I get nervous about sharing them LOL#Wonder Woman
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it is important to me that you understand that:
junko has no luck (and when she does, it's bad luck)
nagito has fantastic luck, but it always comes at a cost - for every moment of good luck, there is also a moment of bad luck; the higher the good luck he wants, the greater the sacrifice of bad luck he needs first (see case 5)
izuru has luck with no cost, which makes his luck better than nagito's; he's the inverse of junko, but his luck is downloaded, fake, contrived (like the rest of his talent is)
this must be combined with:
junko can calculate and anticipate anything provided she has access to the right dataset (the better she knows someone/something, the better she can manipulate them/it - this extends to talent as well; the more data she has on how someone's talent functions, the better she can imitate it, which is why she can't imitate ryota's animation as completely in the way that she wants (different talents have different rates in terms of how much she needs to analyze them, though))
nagito can deduce but he cannot mimic; he dabbles in manipulation, but he is much more of a servant to someone else's goals, which means his analysis is always in service to someone else (kyoko is similar but not quite the same; kyoko can get to the point of deducing fast enough to prevent things, which is a lot more similar to junko's analysis, just used in a different way; kyoko's more straight forward than junko is, which is why deduce and not analyze)
izuru's analysis functions the same as junko's does, except that he doesn't need to analyze someone else's talent to mimic it; he has had talent downloaded straight into him like neo in the matrix; if he wants more talents than the ones he already has, he's gonna need them downloaded again, probably
as a result:
junko's weakness is luck and incomplete data sets; an incomplete (or wrong) data set leads to a miscalculation, and when something relies on luck and cannot be precalculated or predicted, then junko falls. she relies hard on her analysis, which gives her a blind spot. (junko, however, is aware of this. that's why she has both nagito and izuru on deck; in the hope calculation that their luck, correctly used, will allow her to predict things that happen by chance as well)
nagito's weakness is his reliance on his luck. he believes in his luck. his luck will take care of him. he can't control how it works, and he can't control how the bad luck will happen or who it will happen to, but he doesn't need to analyze something for his luck to get him out of it (and the smaller the chance that something will happen, the more likely it will happen to him; his luck works on an inverse to everyone else's, basically, so what's the point of predicting things on what is most likely to happen when, for him, it will probably be the other way around)
izuru could cover his incomplete data sets with his luck, but tends to rely so completely on his luck to cover his ass that he stops analyzing and leaves himself open there - he should be the strongest of the two, but really tends to leave him with more weaknesses until he figures out how to use the two in conjunction; something junko has figured out but cannot do because her luck is not her own
#musings#danganronpa#junko enoshima#nagito komaeda#izuru kamukura#this is how i write them in#dr1 end rewrite fic#but also this is how i write nagito's luck#it's an inverse of an average person's luck; and for every good luck there is a cost re: bad luck#he can control this to an extent in terms of he can make the chance of something /for a normal person/ smaller /and thus give it greater#luck for him/ (see russian roulette in case 4)#but there is ALWAYS a cost#izuru's only been around for a year; he's still learning how to all the things#hajime is slightly better at this sort of thing#but izuru runs so much on the vibes of how something should happen that he forgets that bad vibes are still a thing#(izuru can be /overwhelmed/)
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it's now canon to the aac au that c!dream gets a little syndicate cape.
#loyal talks about stuff and things#aac au#one day i WILL finish it#part of the issue is i started back when so much lore was unknown#so part of me is like 'what if i rewrite it all into one big long fic'#but also i'm insane and have so many projects#i want to write my season two au and my selkie au#but i do feel like i need to write more platonic stuff.....#still lowkey regret admitting to it because i do think some people#assume the platonic stuff is actually romantic#when no. i'm just some sort of aroarce.
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More Wish 2 Paneling practice! This time featuring Princess Maroula , Magnifico and Amaya’s long lost daughter who Amaya has sent Asha to find-you can read more about her here
I’m really proud of how the paneling and colors turned out on these! First page features some stills from Disney shorts ‘Lullaby Land’, ‘Wynken Blynken and Nod’, and ‘Destino’.
#my art#disneyverse#wish 2: the land of dreams#wish 2023#my OCs#Disney ocs#king magnifico#queen amaya#the blue fairy#pinocchio#disney comics#disney crossover#wish rewrite#wish reimagined#sort of anyway#more fixing via hypothetical sequel#silly symphonies#destino#disney
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