#nah but seriously though i'm really proud of this one :)
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steakout-05 · 1 year ago
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(DISCLAIMER: as of the 17th of August 2024, it was revealed that Craig is directly related to Barry, which obviously makes my Crarry art very awkward. this is here to say this was made before any of that was revealed and obviously wasn't intended to be a ship about... that.)
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it's a bit late, but here's the finished art for Jetpack Joyride's 13th anniversary! i can't even begin to tell you about all the memories i've had with this awesome game! here's to another decade of jetpack-related chaos!!
(i gotta clarify that the champagne bottle is referenced from an official JJ artwork for the apple soda jetpack and that the 13 might look a little wonky because i'm not very good at lettering,,,)
+ a few bonus wip screenshots under the cut (only a few though cause i didn't screenshot my progress as much)
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(craig was gonna have a beer glass but i decided to just have the red cup instead because it was easier to draw lol)
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that's all i screenshat,,, screenshotted before i went into Ultra Autism Focus Mode™ and finished the art,,,
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billycorn · 4 months ago
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What if Dusknoir knew his fate was sealed the instant he learned Hero's identity? What if everything after was the futile actions of a desperate man? If he believed himself irredeemable by that point, then the only way out was through, regardless of his feelings concerning H&P. (fic under the cut)
Spinda's Cafe was livelier than usual, it was only natural, they were celebrating being alive after all. In the month since the events of Temporal Tower, life had returned to normal for the people of Treasure Town, they were free to go about their business without worry once more, though they all felt the loss.
That little Rufflet, Jasper was his name, had only been around a short time, but if he wasn't a Treasure Town local, then no one was! Wigglytuff's guild had added a Rufflet motif to their totem poles and Spinda, well, Spinda had named a drink after him, the Hard Landing. Jasper had loved flying and was often seen soaring over the town, his Buizel partner hanging from his talons, but he never quite got the hang of landing. His crashes were legendary, and the Kecleons had implemented a "you break it, you buy it" policy faster than Chatot could enforce an income tax.
In memory of Jasper, Spinda was unashamedly proud of how quickly her new drink could knock someone flat (from its sheer deliciousness, of course, what were you thinking?)
So, Ludicolo and the Bellosom danced across the raised stage between the bar and recycle shop. Several musicians sat behind them, sending cheerful music carouselling through the air. The music entwined with the smell of drinks and hot food, and when paired with the company, what could ruin this night?
As a Buizel slipped free of the dance floor, waving off her friends, she collapsed into a chair, her chest heaving. As her breathing settled and her smile calmed, she pulled her tails around to lay across her legs. Her twin tails each bore a band, a red one that had been there a long time, and a black one that was more recent; it was the only part of him she'd been allowed to keep.
For a moment, her smile softened, and her heart began to ache, then heavy hands were clapping her on the back, sending her staggering from her seat. She immediately crouched low, spinning around and readied her fist, but froze, quickly tucking her hands behind her back and straightening up as she recognised the Loudred smiling at her.
"Great party, Buia! You gonna bust out the old fire breathing?"
Buia rubbed at the back of her head. "Nah, Spinda banned me from bringing Blast seeds in here. Apparently, I'm a fire risk."
Loudred laughed, his booming voice making her cringe. "Yeah, Jasper was always the sensible one! I wonder what he'd think of all this?"
Returning to her seat, Buia smoothed down her fur. "He'd say, 'eat, drink, and be merry!'"
Loudred frowned, scratching at his chin. "Really? That doesn't sound like him."
"Trust me." Buia nodded seriously, she knew exactly what her partner would say, and it was none of Loudred's business: some parts of Jasper's memory were for her and her alone.
"Wobba!"
Loudred jumped as Wobuffet appeared at his side, clutching a letter. Wobuffet handed the letter to the very confused Buizel, saluted, and quickly disappeared into the crowd.
Buia shared a look with Loudred, and he wished her a good night before hurrying to the dance floor.
Glancing at the letter, Buia found her name and a date scribbled onto the envelope- wait, was that the date? Geez, she really needed to get a calendar: She never needed one when Jasper was around.
The sound of the envelope's tearing was lost against the melodies in the air, though as she read the letter, the music faded from Buia's ears altogether. All she could hear was her heartbeat, pounding in her chest.
Buia,
Well done. To be reading this, you must have bested me, and 'saved' the future. Honestly, it was inevitable. From the moment I met you both, I knew that Team Typhoon would go down in legends. I thought you would be the last truly great explorers until I learned Jasper's identity and realised, no, there would be others, thanks to you.
I have many regrets, but I don't believe you want to hear them, or my excuses, so allow me to simply say this: I believe in you.
During my short time in Treasure Town, I caught sight of the light coming off you and Jasper, and for a second, I had seen a sunrise, which I did not despise. In truth, I would have liked to sit and watch your sun rise ever higher, to its zenith. Alas, I knew my defeat at your hands was inevitable, and can only hope you still burn brilliantly.
I wrote this before ambushing Grovyle at the Crystal Lake, guessing everything would be done by the date I set (assuming Wobuffet didn't mistake my instructions. I'm uncertain if he actually understood my request). Nonetheless, if I was correct, then Jasper is gone. I understand, his loss must still pain you greatly, but please know this, having chased him across continents, through time and space, I knew him quite well, and I can say with certainty, he loved you dearly. I know it is not my place to say it, but continue living for Jasper. It may be hard on your own, but become the greatest, and know he is smiling down on you from the great beyond. I hope to meet him, and you, there someday (though not too soon!) and offer my deepest apologies, and sincerest affirmations.
P.S If this letter was delivered with the incorrect timing, disregard its contents entirely, and I'll see you on the battlefield.
Warmest regards,
Dusknoir
Her heart beat so hard it felt like it would burst from her chest, and suddenly, the room was unbearably hot. On all sides, it seemed the crowd was pressing in on her, and the voices grew ever louder.
In an instant, Buia was racing from the Cafe. She sprinted through town, tears flying from her cheeks, the letter clutched in her paws. Arriving at Sharpedo Bluff, she screamed her heart out and leapt from the cliff, diving into the ocean below. There, she settled on the sea floor and wept, her tears simply another drop in the endless ocean.
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magical-wishies · 9 months ago
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To love or not to love, that is the questio-
Ok whoops wrong reference. Happy Valentine's Day everyone! I made a MV of the song "Darling Dance" by Kairiki Bear featuring my favourite little tricksters for the occasion!
I'd rather you go straight to Youtube to watch it because Tumblr always finds a way to cut the quality, lol.
Eng subtitles are available too!
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Here it is! Hope you enjoy my pride and joy. Basically like a hopeful child but in video format. Reblogs are specially appreciated because Youtube sucks at promoting new channels!
This also acts as a behind-the-scenes post, so let's get straight into that, shall we?
MV Project 1 "Darling Dance"
Illustration time: 37 hours
Editing time: Approx. 30-35 hours
Total: 70 hours
*Cough* Holy freakin' moly does making an MV take so long. Before you roll off your bed, I'll say that part of the reason making the art took so long was because I have trouble drawing Marx consistently.
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Here's some unused assets! Look at them, they're all salty over not making the cut.
In all seriousness though, a lot of times I don't really see a lot of editors/ MV makers getting appreciation for their efforts. And now that I've personally experienced making an MV for the first time, it's also increased my admiration to the people who dedicate their time to this! All the kudos to them.
Now, I'll go scene by scene then comment along the way! Spoilers ahead!
Verse 1
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Pretty good for what it is. In the first image, you see that heart behind Magolor? I discovered the motion of it on complete accident lol. Capcut is hard to figure out..
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I also really like the color palette of 2nd image. That art of Marx was the last one I did during production (aka I drew it this morning), and just look at him. He's such a bastard he's the best.
Pre Chorus 1
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Mmmm yeah it sure is the pre chorus! I put a bar behind the text in the middle because I didn't want people to stare into their soulless eyes for too long. That probably worked!
1st Chorus
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When I first added in the expression change, I fangirled over it a little on the first rewatch. Like, come on! They suddenly look mischievous, and the color change on the background! I know I drew it but still!
For the rest, I experimented a little with all the "Nah"s! I think it ended up well. Most of the lyric editing in this MV is completely original, so I had a couple of things to try out!
Verse 2
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This song is horrifically outdated because it says Twitter instead of X!! (/sarcasm)
This scene is my second favourite. I'm really proud of the details on the tabs and the editing at the beginning! Wish I could put more images but the app only allows ten. Bummer.
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I think it's cute, and I used it as my pfp on YouTube! That's about it though.. image limit is killing me I can't put anything here :(
Chorus 2
...Not gonna spoil it! I like how I drew them, but there ain't anything notable. Unless you look at the last image I put right before the bridge. :)
Bridge
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This is where my editing comes in freakin' clutch. Ooooooh it's so satisfying to look at. Chef's kiss. Also those Marxs (Marxes?) are really cute.
The second part of the bridge is nice as well! I tried to make the lyrics snap to the rhythm. Glad I added that tv effect in the bg too!
Chorus 3
This scene is my favourite! Wanna know why?
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This sequence right here. I think I will etch it into my brain forever... I love me some snappy editing. Like a lot. Like a lot a lot!
The second part of the chorus is like the original song's MV! I loved the hearts popping in and out whoever thought of that is a genius. Putting it into the MV was a good decision!
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And that's a wrap! Hope you enjoy the MV as much as I enjoyed making it. And, stay tuned for next time! I have a feeling a certain jester is getting his own solo MV...
Feel free to leave your thoughts either in the Youtube comments section or here. See you around!
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dracocheesecake · 1 year ago
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Oh I just wanted to ask if you have any platonic! Kai x reader headcanons with dynamic like big guy protects smol creature and maybe being a father figure to them?
Actually yes! Warning, though: Kai isn't exactly a great person.
Father-Figure!Kai x Reader Headcanons:
Why are you so smol and weak? It's not worth taking your chi, really. It would be like eating celery: you burn more than you get out of it.
Someway, somehow, though, for whatever reason, Kai can't seem to get rid of you. At first it seems that you keep on running into each other, and then Kai starts cracking a slight joke or two, full of self-satisfaction. "Alright, I refuse to believe it's destiny at this point: you just have to be stalking me. What, are you a fan or something?"
Then this eventually progresses until you somehow bump into him again, and Kai gets so fed up that he just decides to take you along for the ride with him- supposedly, until he decides just what to do with you.
Kai, of course, in the midst of this rash decision, forgot that you are very mortal and still require things like rest stops, food, warmth, sleep, etc.- Transporting you around isn't exactly like carting around luggage. Kai gets annoyed when you point this out to him, but does (reluctantly) provide for you- while claiming that he's just getting you stronger so he can take your chi later.
He's actually a decent cook, but don't ever critique him. "What? I haven't done this in 500 years, I'm a little rusty. Besides, if you were really hungry, you'd eat anything put in front of you without complaint. Eat or starve."
However, as time wears on, you notice Kai starts being a little less harsh on you. His occasional sardonic remarks become somewhat more playful, and sometimes are punctuated by him rubbing his knuckles against the top of your head in a manner one could almost call...dare I say...affectionate?
You find Kai making you little gifts: a cloak to keep you warm ("It won't be on my head if you freeze to death, at least.") A blade of your very own ("You're weak and small. You need some sort of protection. What? Did you think I was going to follow you around to play bodyguard forever?"), etc.
Kai will also start training you a little as well. It seems harsh and unforgiving to you at first, almost to the point of being cruel- but when you complain to Kai he laughs in your face. "Harsh? You call this harsh? You have no idea how easy I'm being on you. You should have seen how I trained my soldiers!"
*Sarcastic gasp* "You moved me at least half a centimeter! What an improvement!...Nah, fifty push-ups. Now."
When you actually start improving, he actually praises you- though at first it's more as if he's praising his own abilities as a mentor- but you can tell he's actually proud of you, how much you've managed to accomplish in such a short time.
However, if you do somehow manage to run into trouble, Kai is there in an instant- he's not letting anything happen to you, even if you can supposedly handle yourself. If you ask him about it, he just shrugs and says that if anyone's going to take your life, it's going to be him.
Kai also yells at you whenever there's the slightest chance you'll get hurt; the louder he yells, though, the more it shows he cares- he might accidently let a few words slip, such as "Do you have any idea how worried I was?! Do that again, and I'll throw you off a cliff myself! Maybe I should turn you into an amulet after all, and keep you out of trouble!"
Kai grumbles under his breath, calling you an idiot, all while he patches you up with more gentleness than you thought him capable of.
Also expect him to carry you around alot. You have tiny legs and it's faster and easier. Sometimes, though, Kai will scare you by running as fast as he can on all fours, laughing while you scream at him to stop, clinging to his fur for dear life.
Seriously Kai loves messing with you. He calls it his prime source of entertainment. At first his teasing and jokes at you are cruel and dark in nature, and often at your expense; but steadily they start turning more light-hearted, and even get a laugh or two out of you (which makes him smile- but you didn't see it).
Basically Kai doesn't want to outwardly admit that you've grown on whatever little shred of heart he thought had long withered away in his chest. Over time, he's almost come to see you as the child he'd never had the time to have.
When he finally does take your chi, he wears your amulet around his neck, close to his heart. It was hard- harder than he would admit, even to himself- but in his mind, it had to be done: at least this way, he tells himself, he won't lose you.
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deltastra · 3 months ago
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My Thoughts on Tower of God Season 2 Episode 7
BAM VS EMILY (Urek lol) LETS GOOOOOO
WEBTOON SPOILERS WAS TEASED BUT NOT OUTRIGHT STATED
Rating: 7/10
Summary: Ohhh boy I had to read the chapters againt to make sure they weren't pulling my leg but man...I have mixed feelings. First half was ehhh okay? Second half I liked!
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He's such a fanboy, so adorable!
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And with that, we can see why he's an Irregular lol. His ideal was honestly the most unique out of anyone's when it comes to the tower. Climb to the top? NAH I WANNA GET OUT OF HERE.
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AND THAT'S MY FAVOURITE VIOLE QUOTE!
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Okay so here's my take. I read the webtoon again and saw that they really did follow it as much as possible, Viole and Urek barely fought. But I still feel like they could have gotten away with animating an actual fight? Heck, add more dynamic camera movements like in episode 1?! Sigh. (I did see a bit more shaking and impact in this fight though so it isn't that bad)
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A very important scene! While people can be annoyed over Minseng getting in the way of the fight. This shows that while Viole cares a lot about passing the tests for the sake of his friends, he will not disregard the safety of his CURRENT team and will even risk his own life to protect them. I love Bam so much.
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Now I try not to nitpick over slight dialogue changes or cut content but...sigh.......PLEASE EXPLAIN TO ME WHY THEY CUT OUT THIS OTHER PART OF THE DIALOGUE?! Please tell me he said it in japanese and the subs got it wrong ;-;. It's very important because it shows that Urek isn't as "awful" as a person he portrayed himself to be. He let them live because Viole literally prioritised his teammate during their fight. From that, he saw that not only is Viole pretty strong, but also that he isn't like those Rankers who send people to their deaths. In the Tower, someone as kind as Bam is very rare.
By removing this last piece of dialogue, Urek comes off as cocky (which yea, he can be. But he's also a somewhat good person). Now an arguement can be made that the original dialogue was not that subtle, so they omitted it and let the scene speak for itself. I would agree, but with all the stiff characters and facial expressions, it's hard to tell when they are trying to be 'subtle'. I'm getting a bit off-topic, moving on!
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YES THEY'RE PLAYING 'BUBBLE IN THE WINE GLASS'. LETS GOOOO I ALWAYS ASSOCIATED THIS OST WITH UREK!
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I always loved the reveal that Urek wasn't actually there to mess around or assert his authority. He was there to help preserve wildlife! I remember my jaw dropping over this reveal because it was all the proof I needed that Urek is actually a pretty good guy!
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Haha. Love the casual reveal that he's working with Yuri too lol.
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No seriously what the hell is that. I swear I didnt see that in the webtoon.
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OKAY JINSUNG'S FACE LOOKS BETTER HERE
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THAT WAS NOT IN THE WEBTOON. SIR WHAT IS THAT. WHY ARE THEY ANIMATING THIS. Music went hard tho.
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YES. HERE. JINSUNG'S FACE IS PERFECT HERE (for anime standards).
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I loved this scene because it shows that after what Viole did. Team Sweet and Sour no longer fears Viole. To them, Viole isn't a FUG slayer candidate, but a fellow teammate. It's a nice way of showing that now, Wagnan will not be the only one who's comfortable around Viole. Everyone will support Viole as a teammate.
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It's amazing how one act of kindness can resonate so much in someone. And that kindness wasn't even towards Arkraptor himself, but the girl he lowkey sees as a daughter.
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People make fun of Yihwa for not being able to do basic household chores and that Hwaryun was "roasting" her for it. But like Horyang said, this encounter with Urek and the lies of Yihwa's family being exposed is testing Team S&S's resolve. They will face worse as they climb higher (*cries*), if they can't handle what they saw in this episode, they can never climb the Tower. Yihwa was sulking in her room because she didn't want to face reality. But Hwaryun's "insults" were said in a way to motivate someone as proud as her to get up and start doing something about it!
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I LOVE HER! Okay but in all seriousness, this is an anime-only scene that I actually like. In the webtoon, she just declared she would cook and we don't know if she actually did it, it was implied that she was about to, but was stopped.
Here? SHE STARTED COOKING RIGHT AWAY. WHO CARES IF THE FOOD WAS HORRIBLE. THIS ANIME-ONLY SCENE SHOWED THAT SHE ACTUALLY TOOK THE INITIATIVE TO DO SOMETHING NEW AND GROW!
Like I said, anime-only scenes are not bad as long as it enriches the main story! This is a prime example of that! (Apron cute too!)
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And I love how they took the time to actually animate this part of the webtoon instead of just taking the easy way out and just adding voiceovers while Wagnan goes out to see Jinsung (like what happened in the webtoon). Also the way all the tension between the guys was cut by Yihwa's silliness?! Love it! I miss Team S&S so much!!!!!!
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Haha. Don't know why they made Wagnan give one lollipop instead of three. But to be honest, I genuinely forgot that this was where Jinsung's lollipop obsession started.
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AND FINALLY KARAKA IS HERE! OKAY TIME FOR MY FIRST IMPRESSIONS ON HIS ANIME COUNTERPART!
I'm not too nitpicky about his design because I get that it's very complicated to animate it consistently, so they had to smooth him out. Shame, but hey I get it!
His voice surprised me, I never pictured him with THAT voice. Not a fan for now, but maybe it'll grow on me?
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Oof. Even I felt that jab.
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WAIT SO UNLESS HORYANG STRETCHED THE FABRIC. DID THEY BUY THE SAME APRON BUT A DIFFERENT SIZE JUST FOR HORYANG?! THAT IS SO CUTE.
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This was in the webtoon too but I love Yihwa. She really dresses the part for whatever responsibility she's given lol! She's locked in!
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Oh..this shot was beautiful. I like it.
Alright so sadly, Viole vs Urek was not as great as I hoped, even if I was cautiously optimistic. But I'll acknowledge that they followed the events within the chapter almost perfectly. I still think a few extra scenes showing Urek's power would've been better, or at least more camera angles and movements to show his intensity.
I did love the second half of the episode more though! I appreciated the extra scenes! Karaka was revealed and I may need more time to get used to him.
Now I also want to talk about Crunchyroll's treatment of the Tower of God anime. Not a fan. This was the same issue in season 1 but now it's somehow worse? Like come on they literally messed up the subtitles and played the NEXT EPISODE's subtitles instead. They also took 4 years to announce season 2, which led people to believe that it took 4 years to work on this anime, when really, that may not have been the case. I'll avoid making baseless speculations but it's sad to see Tower of God treated this way while manhwa like Solo Levelling get the A+ treatment from them.
Part of me is just happy we got a season 2 to begin with, but I also wish a bit more effort was put in, the first episode of season 2 genuinely gave me hope. But now it feels like the episode was just used so that it can look good in the trailers. Workshop arc will have more fights, I hope the studio has more time and resources by then. (I want to state the fact that I am not claiming that the studio doesn't care about Tower of God. I believe they do care, but lack the time and resources. If they didn't care, episode 1 of season 2 would not have been THAT good!)
Sorry this post took so long, I watched the episode when it first came out (that's why I knew of the Urek = Emily joke). However, I just didn't know what I wanted to say about this episode, did I like it or not? I feel more on the neutral side.
Well, next episode is in a few hours! See you in a few days lol.
(Funny how I said that I didn't know what to say about this episode, and yet, this post ended up being one of the longest for my ToG anime reaction posts.)
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randomgentlefolk · 10 months ago
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CPC CHAPTER 165+166
The warning earned a chuckle from me lmao. Because why did I literally gasp while reading the first line xd
The warning for eps 166...didn't make me laugh at all.
Yayy Gwen is finally awake!! I guess thanks Leland for removing the thorny plants so she won't hurt herself :|
Nah cause Leland really dare try to kidnap a girl who asked whether he's okay after she herself just woke up from an intense nightmare 💀
Bro has the GUTS. THE AUDACITY. To start ranting about the kids he's kidnapping.
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This scene is so emotional, and I am so glad Gwen is finally starting to know who Leelathae is. Though I won't lie, I'm a little disappointed that Leland is the one to tell her :/ I was expecting a family moment with Jack and the other pastel kids. But it's all good since she finally gets to know her :D
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I would like to apologize in advance. Serpent Leland kinda made me laugh due to his abs lmaooo.
But it's pretty cool how Gwen and Frederick sees Leland as a threat (tho unintentional), though with different perspective. Gwen sees Leland as a big bad wolf while Frederick sees Leland as a serpent.
HECK YEAH!!! You go, Frederick!!! For once, his ability to misunderstand something is actually resulting in something wonderful and amazing!!
Aww the Possum immediately hugging Gwen <3
Oh uh whoops. Can Curtis see through that glasses? Hopefully...
Guys, Leland is throwing tantrum again :/ but i can see how using Laverne as a weapon against him is a really useful tactic. Considering how in the past, he bought Laverne to be a replacement for Jack. So turning Laverne against him probably feels like a 2nd betrayal for him.
OOHH....Aww man. Damn. I can feel that comb hitting Leland's hand and pushing the thorns in. Ouch...
NAHH NOT CELSO!!! My man this is why you don't scream your move when doing stealth move 😔
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Did Frederick just do a Judo move.
I looked it up and this move is called shoulder throw or Seoi-nage.
BUT FREDERICK ACTUALLY, SERIOUSLY JUST SHOULDER THROW HIS FATHER, THEN PROCEEDS TO PLANT HIS HEAD ON THE WALL. Those laverne carrying are working. Plot twist he's actually buff lmao.
Ahwguwau Frederick actually learning from moments where he got hurt and being brave tho!! So proud of him <3
I love Aurelia and her comments man XD
Frederick immediately checking up on Gwen and making sure she wasn't hurt. These guys deserve their happy ending Lambcat c'mon :')
AURELIA FINALLY GIVING GWEN THE DIARY!!! PASTEL KIDS CHILDHOOD WJSJIWNSGEKA
But of course! Let's start from the beginning of chapter 166...
Lorena would be so proud if she see how Frederick tied his dad with her vines.
Yeah, Gwen definitely should start on the second page... Just reading the first page by glancing could lead to many misunderstandings.
May I just say, I love how Gwen is being stern(is that the word?) To Aurelia about how she needs to read that book and that she really want to know about her mother. Hah! Again, I love Aurelia's comment (this time about the war literally happening downstairs XD)
IT'S TIME. INTOOOOOO PASTEL KIDS CHILDHOOD WITH LEELATHAEEEE!!
(Cue that batman transition music (i forgot the era))
WUJWJWHWAIB THEY??? ARE ADORABLE!!! Awww Leelathae reading them a story with Jack and Gwen & Jamie's onesie!! Also their plushies!! I'm having cuteness overload....
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HAJSYAISYAJ THEY HAVE MATCHING DRESSES!!!!! Maybe Leelathae sew them herself??? SJSJSHJAUS
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Oh. Okay. That's not good. I suppose there's a side effect after giving birth to the children? That's...depressing.
But before we go deeper into that, birthday party!!
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I must say, I absolutely adore how chaotic Lorena seems to be lmao. Look at her and her little sword XD and Maria looking really elegant. She really does give the eldest sister vibe. Gwen looks so cute with the pigtails! (I forgot the hairstyle name). Jamie with the fruits and Gwen with the fruit and cooking utensils!
Also it seems that the pastel family is having a small party for birthdays instead of big ones like the plaid kingdom. I wonder why they don't invite the plaid family over? Blaine and Lance would be 6 and 5 years old at this time, so they're probably at the academy already. But what about Leland and Isolde?
Man, this family is genuinely so wholesome and that makes me even sadder for what's about to happen. CAUSE DAMN??? Leelathae passing out while holding the cake, and Jack noticing like 😭 AND THEN JACK RUNNING TOWARDS HER LIKE MARIA AND LORENA RUNNING TOWARDS GWEN I'M GOING TO CRY.
R.i.p cake (i had to do it)
Ahh I see. Okay. So the left ventricle (which is a part of the heart) is weakening and it can't strengthen back up? That's what I'm getting, at least. I wasn't aware something like this could happen. I'm just researching, and is Peripartum Cardiomyopathy (PPCM) the correct term for this? I don't know anything about childbirth beyond what I learn in school so... this one's purely based on searching the symptom in google.
Okay, let's see... *puts on glasses and squint my eyes* *clears throat*
Peripartum cardiomyopathy (PPCM) or also known as Postpartum cardiomyopathy is an uncommon form of heart failure that happens toward the end of pregnancy or in the months following delivery, when no other cause of heart failure can be found.
https://www.heart.org/en/health-topics/cardiomyopathy/what-is-cardiomyopathy-in-adults/peripartum-cardiomyopathy-ppcm
(This information is taken from American Heart Association website. I hope that's alright?)
Symptoms of PPCM that we've seen in Leelathae:
- Fatigue
- Shortness of breath
- Chest pain
- Feeling lightheaded or faint
- Dizziness
For now that's the only things I can note. I mean, I'm not even sure if that is what Leelathae is going through. But it seems likely. I don't have anything to add on this matter right now, so what if we go back to the story. Shall we?
"I'm going to perish...from a broken heart"
OHHHHH, OKAY DAMN LEELATHAE. Man... this reminds me of the broken heart syndrome. It's pretty interesting. If I'm not wrong, it's a heart condition that comes from extremely stressful situation or emotions. And it is possible to pass away from it. So yes, you can die from a broken heart.
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Oh man this just got depressing real quick... The kids sitting beside Leelathae's bed, the medicines piling up overtime, Leelathe crying and Jack hugging her...
Leelathae :( she just wants to see her kids grow up and her husband man... and yet because a certain jealous man just had to steal a portrait...damn it Leland.
The witch!! It's her!! :0000
That's nice of her to offer to listen to Leelathae's vent :) though she does mistake her for a witch :')
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THIS WHOLE TIME. IT'S THE WITCH LMAO. Okay actually being mistaken as a witch has a perk this time!! And does this mean Leelathae can bake??? Like mother like daughter real.
The panel of the witch hugging Leelathae is actually pretty sweet haha. They're besties now X)
I wonder how this spell will work....
That's it for now. 2 episodes in a post! Wooo! I gotta stop procrastinating... this post was so long lmao.
Mono out! (Ngl I'm still in lmao)
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gaiaseyes451 · 5 months ago
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Tagged by my fellow angst-lover @hakunahistata! Thanks for the tag, this was fun!
How many works do you have on ao3?
11!
What's your total ao3 word count?
247,209... Okay, okay but ~119,000 of that is collaborative work so really that's just 127,671 words that are only mine... (holy shit. Seriously??)
What fandoms do you write for?
Good Omens!
Top five fics by kudos:
Of Kings and Kids - A Good Omens Christmas Story: Self explanatory! :D
A Little Life : AKA the dementia fic that I wrote for Good Omens Song & Poetry Exchange. Human AU
Return to Eden - Aziraphale and Crowley return to where it all began in an attempt to help Aziraphale remember the real beginning.
Ostinato - Written for the Sex Pollen Event. Crowley performs an ancient ritual steeped in music to force Aziraphale to return from Heaven.
Fractured - Aziraphale grapples with the immediate aftermath of the War in Heaven.
Do you respond to comments?
YES! But sometimes it takes me a little while.
What is the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?
....*cackles* Personally, I think my angstiest ending is Choice.
What's the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?
Happy endings? What're those? Nah, I think my Christmas fic, A Carol Conversation has the happiest ending. It's the closest thing to fluff I've ever written, it's basically a Hallmark movie.
Do you get hate on fics?
I haven't yet!
Do you write smut?
I try to Yes, I do, but it's something I'd like to get better at.
Craziest crossover:
I've never written a crossover! But, the brain worm for Good Omens x The Good Place is definitely brewing.
Have you ever had a fic stolen?
Not that I'm aware of
Have you ever had a fic translated?
No, but that'd be so cool!
Have you ever co-written a fic before?
I worked on Coming Home and A Very Clippy Christmas! @the-literal-kj and I have a major collaboration called Bitter Things in the works, too!
All time favorite ship?
I mean, how could I betray our Ineffable Idiots? Though I do have a perhaps unnatural adoration for Lucifer/Angel Crowley ;)
What's a wip you want to finish but doubt you ever will?
The very first Good Omens fic I ever started told the rest of the story of 1941 and how it shaped events going forward. It started as a one-shot (that is on AO3) and has five more chapters sitting in my google drive, unfinished.
What are your writing strengths?
I think I'm pretty good with metaphors and setting scenes. I've been told I'm decent with plot.
What are your writing weaknesses?
Smut and dialogue, also managing word count...
Thoughts on dialogue in another language?
If it fits the story, absolutely!
First fandom you wrote in?
Good Omens is all I ever posted in, but I have a partially written Shadow and Bone fic from before I knew that what I was doing was writing a fan fic.
Favorite fic you've written?
A Little Life. I'm proud of that story and the response it got from those who read it. <3
No pressure tagging: @adverbian, @tawnyontumblr, @dbacklot99, @harlotofupdog, @doonarose
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Siblings in Henford 10/15
John smiled, “We could sit down over dinner, and you tell me about what's changed in our brother. Maybe I can help somehow?”
Elita looked at him, dead serious. “Sure, dinner sounds nice. You got any blood? or can I just drink a bit of yours?
John seems a bit confused at first but doesn’t skip a beat really. “You can, I don't know if it's going to be any good though, me being green and all, but you're welcome to try.” He holds out his arm for her without even giving it a thought.
She laughs. “You were supposed to freak out, not take that in your stride... nah, I'm just messing with you, I eat normal food. A vampire that eats normal food, eh? Who’d thought!”
He laughs, “Living in our family... that felt normal to say. It's weird being with folks who act "normal". I rarely know what to say to them. I just figured if that’s what you need, that’s what I should give. It didn’t seem out of the ordinary to me.”
Elita shrugs, “You should try going to school again. I’m supposedly seventeen years old now....”
John shakes his head emphatically, “Ooh, no thanks. One trip through school was enough for me.”
Elita smiles, “I only have a little while before I leave. So, it’s not all bad.”
John sits down at the counter, “It goes by fast. Let's sit down to eat… I’m starving!”
John and Elita eat quietly when John decided to ask a question, “Oh hey, what do you think if I posted some of my vegetables on simstagram? I want to show off my hard work.” He slides the images over to her on the table.
Elita panics for exactly one second before she looks down at his selfies of him and his actual vegetables. “John... don't... don't post that stuff on social media man. Seriously, trust me on that one, and just... don't.”
John completely oblivious, “What's wrong with the eggplant? it's huuuge! Shouldn't I be proud of it?”
Elita shakes her head, “You should be proud of it, but this is one of those... "Trust me bro." moments. Promise.”
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sarandipitywrites · 11 months ago
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saran's year of writing (2023)
hey y'all! saw a couple posts like this floating around and thought i'd hop on the train, because this year has been WILD for my writing (in a really good way). let's start with the bullet points version and i'll put the details under the cut. here we go:
I JOINED WRITEBLR
shared snippets of my work with other, actual humans!
made friends?!
started (and finished!) draft 2 of Dead Roots, Dark Water
wrote 1 short story for every week in october (that's 5 stories in a month! that's great for me!)
first NaNoWriMo in 10 years (and i finished it!)
drafted and re-drafted The Art of Empty Space
started draft 3 of Dead Roots, Dark Water
details, links to projects, me getting maybe a tad too personal, and those all-important wordcounts under the cut:
I JOINED WRITEBLR
i just realized i only started participating at the beginning of october, but it feels like i've been hanging out with you all the whole year 😅 maybe that means i should cut back a bit? nah...
really though, this year was the year i started taking my writing more seriously (not in a 'gotta get published' kind of way, but in a 'writing makes me happier than anything else and that's enough reason to set aside time and energy for it without feeling hella guilty' kind of way) and seeing you all posting your work and being so positive and encouraging to each other was what helped me get up the nerve to join in. and i can say without a doubt that it's the best choice i've made all year. y'all are such a supportive community and i've never once felt like i was encroaching or didn't belong here (and for me, that's really saying something)
so i guess what i'm getting at is: THANK YOU! i've loved reading your snippets and projects this year, and i'm way more confident in my own than i've ever been 💜 y'all are good peeps
Dead Roots, Dark Water
word count (edited and written): 187,789
that's a lotta words! DRDW is both my longest work wordcount-wise, and the work i've dedicated the most time to... probably ever. and i'm SO happy with it, it's a little concerning (/positive)
DRDW is now on its THIRD draft, and (assuming i don't do a massive re-edit) should be ready to start posting in 2024! *excited screaming* i've never released anything i've written in its entirety (the snippets i've been posting are actually a lot more than i've ever shared before), so this is MASSIVE for me and i'm both excited and terrified! overall, though, it's a very, very good thing
Short Stories
this october, i decided to challenge myself to do several things i don't ever do: write short stories; write them on a timeline; and share them. and i did! i wrote one short story for each week in october, and posted them here. they're far from my best work, and due to the timeline, they never could have been my best, which oddly i think helped make it easier to post them? they were also the first pieces i shared here (or anywhere)! they're not awesome, but i'm proud of them and i'm proud of myself for sharing them
NaNoWriMo and The Art of Empty Space
i've done nano once before, ten years ago. i was in college and had a lot more time then (and a job where i could spend the entire day just writing - i didn't know how good i had it), and even so i remember struggling to reach my word goal. but by the power of writing everything in wingdings so i can't second-guess my word choices, i made it this year! and even though i decided to challenge myself by writing a romance-heavy project (something i've historically avoided because IT'S HARD FOR ME, DAMNIT), i love AES and its characters and that feels fucking awesome.
even though my brain decided to spring a surprise plot restructure on me and now i have to rewrite like half of it. it'll be better for it, though, so it's all good 🥲
What's Next?
my plan for early 2024 is, of course, going to be to work on draft 3 of DRDW with the hope of getting some chapters posted (they are LONG, so i'll probably post to tumblr in chunks and the full, unbroken chapters on Ao3 due to formatting). once that's ready, i'll be able to return my attention to AES and getting draft 1.5 all written up. i've mostly figured out where the plot's going there, so it'll just be writing it up to figure out the gaps. if i'm able to write something for november again next year (which i really hope i will; nano did some great things for AES), it'll probably be one of the other Jak & Daxter fics i have kicking around in my head, because i am Obsessed (and switching it up between working on fanfic and original fic seems to work well for my brain).
i've been not super active here for the last month or so because Real Life Work is kicking my ass, but hopefully that will calm down and i'll be able to do more of what i want: writing wild shit, reading your wild shit, and screaming about it together 💜
good vibes and best wishes to everybody in the new year 🥂
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yallemagne · 2 years ago
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So, on a plane yesterday, I skimmed through the rest of P.N. Elrod's book, Quincey Morris, Vampire.
It's not very good. It's poor fanfiction. I do not support attacking fanfic writers or the stereotype of fanfiction being the epitome of bad writing (most of my writing is fanfiction and I'm rather proud of some of it [some bc a good deal of my older work is amateur]), but it's a rather amateur plot where Elrod spends the entire book rewriting the book she's supposed to be building off of, not desecrating.
Now, Elrod has quite a few vampire books, so I think this story is just a self-indulgent take on a neat lil idea she had, but she felt the need to discard all of Bram's vampire lore and all of Bram's plot and squish her own in. I respect Elrod as a fellow fanfic writer, but I don't respect her character assassinations of Jonathan and Renfield and the attempts to justify the assault of Lucy and Mina. Though I guess that Dracula was an unreliable source? Hopefully, the intention was not for the reader to take Dracula's claims seriously.
Since I skimmed, I cannot say that I am the best source. I did read the beginning part up until Dracula starts claiming Jonathan is an insane adulterer. Then I just couldn't take any of it seriously. I mean, I couldn't really take it seriously when Dracula and Quincey were just... having a calm conversation but whatever.
Spoilers of course.
So, in the story, Quincey's body is dragged from the sleeping team's side by wolves and they cannot find him once they wake. Why did the wolves drag him? Because Dracula is apparently alive and has figured out that Quincey is a vampire. Dracula blackmails Quincey into coming with him back to his castle. If he had refused, Dracula would have murdered Quincey's whole team.
And yet after that, the book tries to claim that Dracula was secretly in the right the entire time.
Dracula has green eyes. It has no plot relevance, I don't believe Quincey remarks on the change from red to green, it's just a dumb detail that keeps being shoved down our throats.
Through Dracula's guided questions, Quincey realizes that a woman he had sex with years ago that drank his blood and forced him to drink hers was a vampire (apparently she's also a character from one of Elrod's other books). Why didn't he change into a vampire sooner? Dracula claims there are two different types of vampires, and he's the cooler one while Quincey is the lamesauce one. So Quincey only has to drink animal blood. Quincey worries that his tainted blood may have killed Lucy but Dracula's like "... nah".
Quincey confronts him on everything, but Dracula has a bullshit answer for anything. I feel the only bearable way of reading this is the interpretation that Dracula is gaslighting Quincey. Quincey says "you killed Lucy, you fed on her repeatedly and she died of blood loss". Dracula says "no that was your fault. she would have gotten better if you just left her drained of blood". Dracula claims that Mina's still gonna become a vampire, but bc she wished hard enough I guess she got to not be hated by God anymore. And he claims he broke off his connection with her amicably, and they're totally cool now.
He claims that he was in the right to kill Renfield because Renfield was a madman and would have hurt the team... when he only attacked Dracula in defence of Mina. This is so damn ableist. Dracula, you can't claim self-defence when you are a fucking vampire with the power to hypnotize people. That was a gratuitous use of force against a mentally ill man that was of no great threat to you.
Worst of all, when told of Jonathan's account of the Weird Sisters assaulting him, he's like "oh, I didn't interfere. I watched. they had their way with him several times. and he liked it. I mean, he had an ensuing mental breakdown, but he was totally down with being raped in his sleep every night." He claims that Jonathan was just oversensitive to the paranormal and that everything he wrote in his journal was delusions. He gaslights Jonathan. Apparently, there were servants in the castle. Dracula, you fucking twit, that would be the strangest thing to fucking lie about, and you know it. When questioned why he locked Jonathan in his castle and left him for dead instead of taking him to Whitby with him, Dracula waves his hand like "eh. couldn't. don't ask me to elaborate. I'm still an amazing host."
Quincey later denies Dracula's claims about Lucy's death being all their fault, but he never contradicts the claims about Mina and Jonathan. In fact, he constantly repeats the part about Jonathan being oversensitive. So? He agrees with Dracula that Jonathan and Mina being assaulted was okay? He agrees with the ableist notion that Renfield needed to be "put down". Maybe I just skimmed over a part.
Dracula forces Quincey to drink animal blood and stuff. Shows him the ropes. Quincey goes out and actually finds Arthur and Jack still grieving him. He does not reveal himself. I was glad that Arthur and Jack don't have their characters assassinated. They end up shooting a wolf and Dracula gets mad and Quincey is like "you literally had my body dragged away by wolves, they were acting in retribution, you don't get to kill them for it".
Blah blah I dunno, Quincey moves back to London. He tries out his cool vampire powers to harass some lower-class people. He bites a sex worker (super uncomfortable with this part, he says himself that he felt betrayed by the fact his vampiric paramour forced vampirism onto him without his consent while he was in the throws of passion, and he does it to someone else?) He meets Elrod's OC.
Bertrice Holmwood is a Mary Sue. Okay? She's a manic pixie dream girl, she's a strong independent woman that needs no man (except that she sorta blackmails Quincey into sleeping with her), and she doesn't feel like a real human being.
She's yet another hastily shoved-in plot device. She's Arthur's older sister by exactly one year and her whole deal is that she's the black sheep of the family because she's a girlboss. Ugh. She's less of a character and more of Elrod's vague idea of a cool woman.
"Black sheep", Arthur loves her! They're on good terms and they're very protective of one another. She's not ostracized at all. But here's the thing, if she always existed and she and Arthur had such a close relationship, why was she never mentioned in the original book? Now, I'm not gonna get mad that Bramothy didn't make Elrod's OC canon. I'm gonna get frustrated that Elrod so poorly shoved her in. If Arthur is not an only child, why did all the managing of his father's funeral fall to him? Why was she never present or mentioned in scenes pertaining to Arthur's grief? Because she's not... real. And it doesn't fit the original story for her to be real.
I would have vouched for her role in the story if she had been Jack's secret sister instead. Jack having a sibling that he doesn't really interact with during the course of Dracula is realistic because he has a job and he's not a noble. You could even make her Quincey's sister visiting from Texas upon receiving news of Quincey's death. But. Well. They're not Alabamian so the sex would be out of left field then /j.
She is told the events of the book and is like "I'm gonna kill VH for hurting my baby bro" and like. Fair. Honestly, I appreciate that the book calls out VH's manipulation methods instead of trying to twist it like VH was the secret evil all along and Dracula was the good guy. It seemed like that was how it was gonna play out in the beginning, but Quincey empathizes with VH while still criticizing his methods. It's a human take on VH. Sucks what Elrod did to Renfield, Mina, and Jonathan, though.
Bertrice hangs out with Quincey a lot, but my eyes glazed over for those parts bc of all the written-out lower-class accents. Despite her being rich, she hangs out in exclusively the slums of London apparently. It makes her less likeable honestly. Stop gentrifying the neighbourhood, Bertrice. But one scene I did read was when she took him to a fortune teller that used tarot cards to explain his whole situation. One of them was "you've been lied to" and from Quincey's later insistence that Lucy's death was none of their faults, I think he rightfully took it to mean that Dracula was lying? But he doesn't apply that logic to his interpretation of Mina and Jonathan's story, nor Renfield's death...
Quincey reaches out to Arthur and Arthur is a bit spooked.
Arthur: You're dead! You're a vampire! Begone! Quincey: I'm actually a good vampire. 'Just drink animal blood. Arthur: You're lying! Quincey: I'm not. Arthur: Oh, okay. It's good to have you back.
Quincey tries to talk to Van Helsing, but Van Helsing refuses to believe him. Jack on the other hand...
Jack, on the other side of a door: Quincey, is that you? Quincey: Yeah. Jack: If it is you, open this door. Quincey: Okay, but don't freak out. VH: DON'T LISTEN TO HIM HE'S A MONSTER. Quincey: *opens door* Hey. Jack: Ah, hey bud, good to see you again.
It's funny how easily Jack accepts that Quincey is alive and totally chill, especially with VH screaming at him that it's all lies. You would think that he'd at least be equally as unsure as Arthur. VH storms out I think, and Quincey explains to Jack everything-- that VH is probably just defensive bc if Quincey is a vampire and totally chill, that opens the door to the possibility VH was wrong about Lucy. But he restates numerous times that Lucy was dead, she died of blood loss, the Bloofer Lady was not Lucy because that vampire fed off of children, and there was no part of Lucy left to reason with.
VH apparently kidnapped Arthur and Bertrice. Why? I dunno, because he was paranoid about Quincey. But he cages them and that's just super weird. Quincey tries to remedy this by having Jack reason with VH. When that doesn't work, Quincey tries to reason with him with a *bit* of hypnotism. It doesn't work. VH shoots him several times in the chest and, assuming Quincey is dead, crosses himself and leaves.
Quincey isn't dead, he's fine.
Uh? The End? The Harkers never show up, so they're unable to defend themselves against Dracula's claims against them. It really frustrated me. And of course, Renfield couldn't defend himself, and Quincey only barely argues on his behalf before blindly believing Dracula. VH serving as an antagonist felt okay seeing as he's not vilified, he's just painted as a grieving, irrational old man. That's realistic. Except for his kidnapping of Arthur and Bertrice... which was just... so melodramatic.
Also just... so I mentioned that Bertrice and Quincey have sex and it was kind of coerced. I don't recall when this happened, it's really that pointless to the plot. So Bertrice springs it on Quincey that she knows he's a vampire, and in the high stress of that confrontation, she asks him to have sex with her and bite her. He does. Eh.
All in all, the book kind of reads like a very self-indulgent work of fanfiction. Whatever Elrod wished to put into the story, she put in with disregard to the actual events of the book she was basing her work off of. It honestly wasn't the worst Dracula fanfiction I'd ever read, though the victim-blaming was atrocious. I appreciate that Bertrice was a bit more than just a fuck-buddy for Quincey. Her protectiveness over Arthur is a bit of a character trait. I also like that the Suitors are still bros. The conversations between Jack and Arthur that Quincey listened in on felt like I was reading a better story for a bit, their friendship felt real.
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darrelodin · 1 year ago
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Fic Writing Meme
Tagged by @auncyen - tagging @chronicdelusionist. @onadacora (but don't feel obligated obviously!)
1. How many works do you have on ao3? 6
2. What’s your total ao3 word count? 263,444
3. What fandoms do you write for?
Persona 5 and Undertale in the past, though it’s been quite some time for the latter haha. I also had one fic back on FF.net that was for FFTA, and BOY did I overreach on that one
4. What are your top five fics by kudos?
Would That Make You Sad? (522) which was done because I had fallen in love with Onadacora's "Would That Make You Happy?" (which if you never read please do if you're an Undertale fan, it's the best fic ever, in my humble opinion), and I wanted to try doing a little spin on it based on some character's she'd introduced, combined with inspiration by Chronicdelusionist's comics based on the Underswap AU [If that reads like a bunch of gibberish, you avoided the Tumblr Madness of Undertale and I envy you].
The Phantom Thieves In: You Have Got to be Kitten Me (397) which is a fun little AU/what if where Joker and Morgana swap bodies post-Kaneshiro and deal with that fallout. It's... Almost done, I swear.
A Shining Moon (225), which is a 'What-if?' story about Mishima's thoughts at the tail-end of the Kamoshida arc, and if a sliiiight change had happened.
Regrets (171) was just me feeling like torturing Morgana with his heartbreaking, and writing some Joker & Haru comforting him.
The Magic Arrives at Macy's (36) was a silly idea of an employee at Macy's meeting Papyrus on the job. Absolutely ridiculous, but I love it in concept anyway.
5. Do you respond to comments? Why or why not?
I always do, even if it takes me some time! If someone put the time in to respond, I always want to thank them and provide some sort of response, because it means a lot to me that they read what I wrote!
6. What is the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?
Hmmm, I really don't have one tbh. I don't like writing stories that end all angsty.
7. What’s the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?
Due to being the only actually complete one, A Shining Moon XD
8. Do you get hate on fic?
Nah, though I did get one particularly heated comment on A Shining Moon at one point, though it's since been deleted by the original poster.
9. Do you write smut?
Have I? Yes. Will you find it? Only in WTMYS, I've never posted any other anywhere haha.
10. Do you write crossovers?
Nah, though I like the idea of it. Auncyen and I have spitballed ideas in the past but neither of us have the time for that lol.
11. Have you ever had a fic stolen?
Not to my knowledge.
12. Have you ever had a fic translated?
Not to my knowledge.
13. Have you ever co-written a fic before?
Nah, though I often provide feedback to my fellow writers and suggestions.
14. What’s your all-time favourite ship?
Oooh that's tough. I like a lot for many different reasons. I can't think of just one!
15. What’s a WIP you want to finish but probably won’t?
Hmm, I really don't have any atm. The WIPs I got that won't be finished (i.e. the Undertale ones) are safely dead in the water sadly.
16. What are your writing strengths?
I feel that my dialogue writing is really good. I can get into the character voices fairly well, and often keep a scene flowing just based on that alone.
17. What are your writing weaknesses?
Overthinking, exhaustion and IRL getting in the way.
Eh, more seriously, I could improve upon getting character thoughts and motivations across without dialogue. Describing scenes could go better as well.
18. Thoughts on writing dialogue in another language in fic?
If ya ain't proficient in it already, this way lies madness.
19. First fandom you wrote for?
According to FF.net, Persona 4 apparently.
20. Favourite fic you’ve written?
Honestly, I think The Phantom Thieves In: You Have Got to be Kitten Me. It's about characters I feel for, I've put a lot of effort into it and I'm really proud of how my writing has improved throughout it.
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She nodded as well. “About that, are you still going to need me to fly Toothless for a bit? ‘Cause I totally can.”
Squinting her eyes, she placed her hand just above her eyebrows as she looked Hiccup up and down. “Umm, so yeah, I’m trying really hard to find your so-called red-ish hair, and I’m not seeing it, all I’m seeing is an ugly glob of brown on top of your head.”
“Nah, your ‘good years’ are over— actually, the second you have kids, your entire life if over. I mean, after today, I’ll probably never see you again, you’ll be too busy with her.” She gestured to Zephyr. “And Chief duties, so I guess… this is goodbye,” she said, sighing dramatically and shaking her head. “It’s okay, I’ll just… rot away in loneliness, huddled away in the depths of my room, never to be seen again. When people ask, I’ll just say my brother abandoned me, and that caused me to go into a deep sadness…” She couldn’t help herself, and she ended up bursting out laughing.
“Oh yes I will! And when she’s old enough, I’ll make sure to tell her every embarrassing thing you’ve ever done, since I’ve met you at least. Won’t that be great, Hiccup?”
“Sure! You know, I’m pretty proud of my work, it might even compare to yours! Well, not the axes, those are harder, but still.” She smiled. “Of course, I mean, you’ve helped me more times than I can count, so this is the least I could do. And like I said, anytime you or Astrid need help with anything, just come find me.” She sighed. “Look, Hiccup, I’ve told you this before, but if you didn’t let me stay on Berk and help me, then I would probably be dead. So, seriously, thank you.”
Danny’s smile only grew wider as Hiccup said yes, and she re-situated herself so that she would be able to comfortably hold Zephyr.
“I will, though you should know, this is my first time holding a baby.”
As he set her down, she made sure that Zephyr’s head was being supported by her arm, and once that was done, she held her free hand in front of Zephyr’s, to which the baby immediately grabbed onto one of her fingers, causing Danny to chuckle.
“Aw, hi Zephyr…” Danny looked up at her brother. “Okay, I’ll say it again, but she is a pretty cute baby, you got lucky, and Thank Thor she doesn’t look like you, or else she wouldn’t be as cute.”
"Yeah, just for a little bit longer. I'll be able to take him again in about a week, I think." He stifled a yawn.
He rolled his eyes playfully, and he laughed with her as well. "Oh, don't be so dramatic! My life is far from over, it's just...a new chapter, is all."
He was looking forward to seeing the weapons and tools she made with Gobber. It'd have to wait a little longer, though, as he was still very much needed here.
Shaking his head, he wanted to contradict her, but he knew it was true. There were too many out there that would have killed her without a second thought. "I just...I don't want you feeling like you owe me anything, that's all. I take the help when I need it, but I don't want you feeling as though you need to repay me. Does that make sense?"
Tilting his head, he nodded. "Yeah, I thought it'd be. You'll be fine, just don't move quickly, and keep her comfortable."
Once he was sitting again, he leaned back, a smile still on his face as he watched his daughter hold onto his sister's finger. "She likes you already!"
Laughing sarcastically, he rolled his eyes. "Ha ha, very funny, the horror that she'd end up looking like me." Letting out a genuine chuckle, he added, "In all honesty, I'm glad she looks like Astrid. But who knows? Maybe she'll end up looking a little like yours truly as she grows up? Or maybe she'll take after me in other ways... hopefully she won't be as reckless as I am..."
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secretsstash · 5 months ago
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Thank you babydoll for taking the time to respond to all the questions, AND including a gif. You're a real one for that (you deserve to get your ass ate 😉). But nah seriously, thank you for your honesty, I appreciate it. To all the guys that live by you, you're welcome and you better be taking notes or else I'm going to make her all mine. Pretty, smart, funny, hot body and has a good perspective on love, what more can you ask for. You truly are a good girl, you deserve all the love your soul desires. It's a shame we didn't cross paths in life sooner, I would've loved being the first to give the little you the love you needed. But since I'm not, that's why now you're stuck with me =P I'm always going to show you love. Aside from everything, I'm proud of you for loving yourself to not lower your standards and putting up with bullshit. That's why I'm so fond of you, have a soft spot in my heart for you, and will always be here to water you and see you grow. I know how it feels to reserve yourself, yet your heart yearns and having to ignore it because you know yourself deep inside on the love you deserve. So in case your mind is playing tricks on you, speak kindly to yourself because you're doing amazing *pets your head and caresses your cheek*. I like how you stick true to what keeps you happy at heart, but even though you're happy with simple gestures, you deserve someone that goes over and beyond for you because something tells me you do the same when you're in love. I don't mean to get too personal but you're one of a kind, I gotta protect you in any way I can. As for everything else, I only have three things to say. One, your favorite roleplay is interesting and adorable, and I'd love to find out what your kinkiest wet dream and dirty secrets are ;). Two, you have pretty eyes. And three, when am I getting my caramel sauce? =P
Thank you again for answering. I enjoyed reading and getting to know you more (reblog more posts like this and yes I'm telling you what to do 😏). Have a good day my precious dirty little angel
I'm adorable, aren't I? ;)
thank you for the message, I really appreciate it! If I tell what my dirty secret fantasies are, they wouldn't be secret, would they? I need to keep some kind of mystery :p
thank you for complimenting my average brown eyes 😅
you bring a jar, I make the sauce - it's a simple transaction, really :p
you have a good day too 🤗
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after-nine-at-the-oasis · 9 months ago
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Hey y'all! So, for just under a year, I've had a review for the Season 6 finale of The Good Doctor sitting in my drafts. There's barely anything, and I've never had the motivation to get around to it, so I'm going to do a really quick one here. I'll try and do a more in depth one with that draft in the future, but the finale season (😭😭💔) premieres in a couple of days, and I want it out before then. I'm super busy and tired so I don't have the energy for the full thing lol, so here's just something to ease my mind.
I'm sad to see Danny go :(. I'm glad he's doing what's best for him and that he's not mad at Jordan (because yeesh I understood him but that hurt me, hurt on all sides lol), but I'll miss him </3. Maybe one day he'll come back :') (although in current context I doubt it buuut you never know). And poor Jordan too 😭.
Also thank goodness Jerome and Jared are okay xD. I mean okay is a relative term here but yk. Anyway, I'm so glad they're okay we went through enough this episode 😭❤️ xD.
AAAHHHHH PARK AND MORGAN ARE BACK TOGETHER!!! WHOOO YAYYY FINALLYYYY!!! They took their sweet time huh xD. Like, the show lol. Still, they're gonna be a family together :'DD I'm so happy. They're adorable, I love them <33.
:OO Andrews is quitting! That's wild tbh. I mean good for him, and Dalisay too, but dang xD. Brave move man, lol. You better hope it works out xD, with her I mean. But nah, I'm happy for them :DD.
Iirc Lim and Glassman were with the patient who couldn't move or was almost brain dead or something like that, and I'm so glad they found a way to help her improve :'). I'm proud of them <3.
I don't remember who was on the case with him but I remember Asher's patient's father (I believe) died and I felt so bad for him 😭. Poor Asher :(. And poor the guy's family! They just kept doing heartbreaking things this episode xdd. Also the little Asher and Jerome moment at the beginning of the episode <33 my lovelies.
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHAUN AND LEA HAD THEIR BABY :'DDDDD!!! I'M SO HAPPY FOR THEM HOLY CRAP 😭😭❤️❤️❤️🥰🥰😭❤️😍🤩🥳🥳🥳🥳❤️. AND THEY NAMED HIM STEVE AARON AAAAAHHHHHHHH 😭😭😭😭😭💔❤️❤️❤️❤️!!! I'm not okay thank you very much <333. I love them all so much :'))).
Also VOEIAMPFWNIAH GLASSMAN WHY. HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME. I MEAN I KNOW WHY BUT SIRRR 😭😭😭💔💔💔 I DON'T DESERVE THIS!!
Y'all can't/don't believe how much I'm stressin. Again, I do not deserve this xd.
Anyway but him sending the gift was so cute 😭😭😭💔💔❤️❤️❤️. But just aUOAGH he was SO CLOSE TO GOING INNNN-
Once again, I don't deserve this <3.
xD But seriously, even if the hat part made me SAD, I loved the whole storyline <33. And I am so glad Glassman sent a gift xd. They'll make up eventually :')). It would be absolutely WILD if they didn't, and it will be pain until they do, but I'm sure they will lol.
Anyway!! There was a lot of drama between people this season (though there always has to be), and sometimes it was stressful, but I really enjoyed this season. There were so many great moments and I just love all these characters so much <333. And let's not forget the new characters!! Danny and Dani (I still find it absolutely wild that they never addressed that btw lol) were icons, and I was sad to see both of them go but they were really good for their time on <3. They were both super unique and I also loved seeing a disabled character in Dani :D. Her journey helping Lim with her own journey was amazing, and I kind of relate as a disabled person <3. And Danny was also super great, it was nice to see him stick to his reasons and decisions a lot. For a one season character he was really complex and I like that :)). Also his relationship with Jordan was great <333. It was also wild to see Kalu return this season lol!! It took some adjusting (though I enjoyed that time too) but I love having him back :DD. I love all of these guys so much and I can't wait for next season <333.
Sooo yeah!! I absolutely loved this episode, it was so dramatic and so good. I'm so excited for the next season!
This has been my review for. . .
The Good Doctor, Season 6, Episode 22: Love's Labor
I loved it, it was such a culmination of the season. I'm scared of the drama but also so excited for it, and everything else about next season. I'll be back then for my review of. . .
The Good Doctor, Season 7
See you then!!
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rebornchampion · 11 months ago
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"Your damn Vileplume kept knocking me out, and you assholes kept taking my money."
"I sure as hell see you as the enemy, right now. But we'll work out the finer details after the fight."
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"Oh no! Who am I even offending here really? They're Meteor Grunts. That's number one, they're cultists, that's number two. And honestly? Do they even count as people? I sure as hell don't think so. I'm with Saphira here. Lets just kick their ass, blow em up, and move the hell on."
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"Damien, stop... What they did was wrong, but they aren't our enemies."
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Damien: world! Everything goes back to them! And you want to show them mercy?! After everything they've taken from us!"
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"I know, Damien...trust me, I know..."
"Because of them, Nim was killed and turned into what she is now, because of them, my Aunt is dead, because of them, I got to experience death, and because of them, Crescent drove my friend into joining when he was at his lowest." "I. Know… Though but…these four people? Right here? Right now?" "….They haven't wronged me….they haven't taken from the people of Alamissa or Sashila… I know who my enemies are…and they aren't them."
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"I definitely try. Though...credit goes more to my wife than anything. Without her I don't think I would've changed much at all... C'mon on outside with me. If nothing else it'd be better to let all those sour feelings out than keeping them in."
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"Damn..."
Damien: Seriously...
"Nah, it's not like that. It's just. You remind me of myself way back when. The part I'm not exactly proud of... Back in Reborn, me, my friends Victoria, Adrienn, Arclight, and Amethyst had just delivered what we felt was a major blow to Team Meteor. We were riding the high of victory...~"
Damien:....You felt like nothing could touch you...
"Bingo. So, we got a "hot tip" that Lin, the leader of Team Meteor was hold up in the fake Devon Co. building. We just...rushed right in...caution be damned...it was a half-assed plan, honestly...and all we got for it? Victoria and Adrienn ended up electrocuted, Arclight lost an eye...and...Amethyst was beheaded...right there in front of me."
"Reality came hitting hard. All I could do was just cry~"
"Point is, I'm honestly no better every now and again... And knowing me? I'm liable to let anger take the wheel again." "But the fact that you're aware of it is good. Means you're already on the track towards getting those impulses in check. Good on ya."
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"Thank you for trusting me. You take care, alright?"
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familyvideostevie · 2 years ago
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emma, i adore everything you write, seriously. you've quickly become one of my fav writers here on tumblr, and whenever i'm in need of some comfort i come to your blog and reread one of your fics. ♡
if you're still taking requests, how about either steve or eddie tying a ribbon (or anything, really) on reader's ring finger as a makeshift wedding ring while they're talking about marriage? like, all domestic and fluff.
it could be a baby blurb or a drabble...anything, really. and no worries if you can't/don't wanna write this! ily anyways <3
also, congrats on 500 followers ♡♡♡
amy hi!!! i am such a fan of your blog, this means the world to me!!!!! i really really loved writing this for you, so i hope you like it!! come say hi anytime please <3 this was just screaming eddie and his rings to me in a post-graduation moment<3 | 1.1k, fem!reader, fluff fluff fluff
"I can't believe it's over," Eddie says. You're tucked into his side where you both flopped down onto his bed. His fresh high school diploma is propped up on his desk and his green gown lays crumpled on the floor. The entire group had shown up for the ceremony and you have a stack of polaroids in your pocket of everyone and the new grad. It's been a wonderful day.
"I thought Higgins was going to cry when he shook your hand," you say. "He looked so relieved when you walked off stage." Eddie's palm traces up and down your arm lazily, his other hand playing with your fingers on his chest.
"Me and him both." He hums, a sound you feel in your bones since you're so close. "Thought Wayne was gonna crack a rib when he hugged me." He sounds unbearably fond and a little in awe. Eddie has never stopped being surprised at how much people love him. It's been kind of an overwhelming day as a result, which is why you're taking a breather here before you head out to his graduation party.
"He's proud of you, Eddie," you scold him. "We all are. I am."
"Gotta figure out what's next, I guess." He's quiet for a few moments and you sling a leg over his, turning so you can see his face better.
"Well, what do you want to do?"
"No idea, sweetheart." He looks down at you, taking his time roaming over your face. "Never got that far in the planning." The only thing he's been sure about is you.
"We could stay here. Get jobs and stick around and make sure the kiddos graduate high school."
"Think Harrington could get me a job at Family Video?" he snickers. You roll your eyes.
"Or we could move out of Hawkins, try somewhere new?"
"We'd have to come back sometimes," he reminds you. "Otherwise we'd never hear the end of it." You adopt a serious expression and nod.
"Of course." His eyes are sparkling and he looks so happy. You want to look at him forever. "Maybe Corroded Coffin will go on tour and you'll be a super mega rockstar."
"Nah," he says. He brushes some hair off of your face, the pads of his fingers gentle on your forehead. "I'd miss you too much."
"I keep saying 'we' for a reason, Eddie." You feel shy all of a sudden for having to spell it out for him and your face heats. "Where you go, I go." The way his eyes soften and his mouth forms an 'o' would be funny in another circumstance, but all you feel is tenderness.
"I see," he whispers. "So you wanna stick around then, huh? Hitch a ride on the Munson express?" You burst into laughter and smack his chest lightly before sitting up.
"We were having a moment!" you sputter out, giggles overwhelming you. He follows you up, turning on the bed so his knee presses into your thigh.
"Okay, okay, calm down. Bring the moment back." His hair is a bit of a mess so you run your fingers through it though you know you'll never succeed in taming it. "I just had a thought," he says, softer, eyes on your movements.
"Oh dear," you mumble. He smirks but continues.
"Think about the future for a second, yeah? Me and you doing whatever we want wherever we end up."
"Sounding good so far, Eddie." He reaches up and pulls your hands down into his lap, tracing your knuckles with his thumbs. His expression is earnest and fond and maybe a little nervous.
"And we decide that we want to make things a little more official. Since you're it for me."
"And you're it for me," you say back, your usual refrain. The realization at where he's going with this makes your fingers tingle and your eyes start to burn. You feel like your heart is going to burst open. Eddie seems to realize that you're catching on so he hurries his words.
"So we have a little party and invite all of our friends and somewhere in between the drinking and the music we get --"
"Married," you breathe out. "You wanna marry me, Munson? Is this a proposal?" You wouldn't mind if it was, but you know this is something that's far down the line.
"No," he says. "Wait, yes. Yes I want to marry you. No this isn't a proposal. Not a real one, anyway."
"Okay," you reply. "Just checking." You know that Eddie loves you but this feels like something else. It feels bigger. It feels forever.
"So, what do you think about that?" he asks. You realize you never gave him an answer, however hypothetical it may be. You surge forward to kiss him and land a little left of his mouth in your excitement. He laughs and you try again, this time taking his bottom lip between yours so that he might get a clue as to how you're feeling.
"I think that sounds great," you say when you pull away. He untangles your hands and pulls off one of his rings. "Eddie, oh god, I'll lose that, you don't have to --"
"Doesn't matter if you do, sweetheart," he says. "I just wanna see what it feels like for a second." You're a little confused but surrender to him as he lifts your right hand and then furrows his brows.
"Oh, shit. Wait, is it left or right hand?"
"Baby," you say, unable to contain the smile on your face. "I have no idea." He holds his hands up in front of him and flicks his eyes between them before coming to a decision.
"Left, I think. Let's go with that." He gently picks up yours and slides the metal onto your ring finger. You both gasp as he does it. He just holds you there, unable to tear his eyes away.
"Looks good," Eddie says, voice a little raw. "Looks real good." He brings your hand up to his mouth so he can kiss the new addition. If this gets any more tender you might explode, so you surge forward again to kiss him.
"I love you," you say into his mouth. "I love you so much." He moves to kiss down your jaw, your throat.
"I love you," he replies between pecks. "Gonna marry you someday." You groan at his words as he sucks a spot on your collarbone.
"We're gonna be late to your own party, right?" He pulls away to grin wolfishly.
"That's the plan." You can't believe you get to have him forever. You can't wait.
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