sparkiekong

[sparkiekong]

I also do not celebrate pranking people. No shenanigans here either.

None of that bs here. I'm with Eepy on this one.

I do not celebrate April Fools. There will be no pranks or jokes on this tumblr.

[sparkiekong]

Great article. I always want to improve my writing. Now I want to go through and make sure I'm not over adverb-ing.

Let's talk about adverbs!

As Stephen King wrote, "The road to hell is paved with adverbs." In this post we look at how to use them intentionally and to best effect.

[sparkiekong]

Notel Mutts 5/5

"Would you like us to help turn your bad night around?" He ran a gentle finger playfully down the front of her silk robe, but she didn’t move. This was intimidation. She refused to be intimidated yet she couldn't help but feel a slight thrill at their dominating aura.

“If you’re going to try to get me to choke on cocks, you can suck each other off. I’m not going to just lay down like that bitch over there. What the fuck are you?”

Geri laughed heartily, “You have spirit. Let me show you what I mean.” He transformed into his hybrid wolf form and gave her a smile with his fangs visible and his voice a bit graveled. “See, we are wolves…we run in packs, and we like to drink and fuck and fight vampires…” He returned to his human form and asked, "Are you scared yet?" as he pulled her close.

She pushed forcefully away from him, “I managed a strip club full of vampires, a pack of dogs don’t scare me. How can you help me?”

"Join us, and we'll help with your vampire problem," Geri said, circling Kira. She stayed composed as he pulled her in again.

She distanced herself from him, saying, “Fuck that, I don’t want the club. They’re going to come after me and I need the backup if you can do that. I may take you up on that offer, but I swear if either of you try anything that you pulled on that bitch over there…. I’ll bite your fucking dicks off. Are you offering to make me into one of your kind?”

Geri explained, "Well, yes… if you want. We do not bite people forcefully. It only happens if they consent to it.” Freki and the girls chuckle, as Geri moves closer to Kira. He pulls her into an embrace again, except this time she felt the heat and hardness of his crotch next to her stomach. He says to her, “You can visit Moonwood, ask for the Lokinson Pack at the bar, and anyone there will direct you to us. You can see what we do, who we are, and how we protect our members. If you are interested in joining, we will guide you through the process. You have the qualities of a leader, Kira. I would love to mount you, but, for now, I’ll behave myself. Think about it, then come see us.”

He quickly released his hold onto her, and she stood there stunned for a moment. She watched them, unsure of their actions, she retreated to her upstairs room. Standing outside of her room, she noted their carefree, splashing and laughing. They were free, fearless and she wanted to be like that.

[sparkiekong]

Notel Mutts 4/5

“Introductions, yes! I have forgotten myself. I am Geri, that’s Freki and the rest are not important. One of the girls flipped him off and he replied by sticking his tongue between his first two fingers, making a lewd gesture. Freki laughed and jumped up out of the water to a seated position and pulled another girl in close. He pulled his cock out of his shorts and pushed the woman down onto it, she didn’t hesitate and went to work on him.

“She’s cute, we should keep her… I’m getting bored of these ones.” Freki said even as he blew a load into the other woman’s mouth with her gagging and choking. He laughed as she pushed away from him calling him a prick.

Kira took a drag on her cigarette, watching them closely. Something about them seemed off, but she couldn't pinpoint what. It wasn’t that they were openly and blatantly having sex in public that bothered her, she used to run a strip club. No, there was something else. She bluntly expressed her thoughts, "If you're vampires or something supernatural, that's fine. But I'm done with them—I don't like vampires. It's nothing personal."

Geri feigned sadness, "Still no name and you call me a vampire. I'm not a vampire, Little Red."

Kira said, "It doesn't matter to me what you are; what matters is that you woke me up. My name is Kira."

He approached her, and the moonlight illuminated his eyes in such a manner that they gleamed like those of an animal at night. “Sorry, I’ve just had a bad time with their kind.” She spoke softly.

[sparkiekong]

Go crazy peeps...change the fucking world.

Also got it off X...

[sparkiekong]

I do like weird people.

Got this off X...

[sparkiekong]

Notel Mutts 3/5

Kira sat on the guard rail of her room and asked, "Are you ok, Mr. K?"

Mr. Krahbs looked up and nodded, “Yeah, Doll face. I’m good. These mongrels are going to compensate me now that I have a witness to the crimes committed upon my personage, aren’t ya? Kapeesh?”

The individual referred to as "Geri" smiled and sniffed the air before looking up at Kira, saying, "Yes, Dougie. As soon as your friend comes down and greets us."

Kira lit another cigarette. She had faced monstrous vampires; a pack of drunks seemed easy. "Yeah, sure. I’ll be right down."

She tightened up her red silk robe and walked down the stairs to meet, “Alright so now you’ve seen me. You pay this man, and we can all go back to what we were doing before with less yelling, yeah?” She looked up at him defiantly as he looked her up and down.

“You’re a thin one, aren’t you? What's your name, Little Red?" he asked, towering over her. He handed Dougie money. "You can go now. I'm busy."

Dougie grabbed the money and muttered under his breath, he grabbed Kira by the arm and whispered, “You be careful Doll face, these mutts aren’t worth your time. Kapeesh?”

Geri sighed, "That's rude, Dougie. I'm not a mutt, but I'll let it go because I'm more interested in her."

Dougie glanced at Kira before returning to his room, leaving her alone. "You've got me all to yourself now... What did the other one call you? Geri?" She mustered her best purr.

[sparkiekong]

Notel Mutts 2/5

She left the lobby and went to her room, which was plain and unclean. She commented, “Such a lovely place…” She showered and changed into more comfortable clothes when she heard Mr. Krahbs yelling at someone.

“You mangy fucking mongrels need to get off my property or pay me for the fucking night! Kapeesh?”

"Dougie, you misunderstood me. I'm not paying because we are not staying in those rooms. We just came here to cool off after Runners closed. It's hot and this is the only place with water on the way to Moonwood." A dark-haired man held Mr. Krahbs in a headlock as one older sibling might hold a younger sibling.

“Get the fuck off me! You ain’t got any rights to be here! I run a business not a gods damned beach you animal…” Krahbs wiggled his way out of the other man’s grip and the whole pack of people started laughing. He turned around and brandished his baseball bat, “Get the fuck out of here or you could just pay me… I’d walk away and you could swim all night. I’m just a guy trying to live my life and pay my bills, and I don’t get to pay them if you don’t pay me so, fucking pay up! Kapeesh?!”

The red headed man in the water paddled closer to the edge and snickered, ‘Just pay the weasel, he’s been brave enough. Or rip him apart… whatever you want to do, but the more he yells the less fun we have so decide, Geri.” He growled as he pulled a nearby woman into the pool with him. She playfully struggled before relenting to his groping.

[sparkiekong]

Notel Mutts 1/5

As the streetlights came on, Kira put out her cigarette, locked the store doors, and walked back to the Krahbs NoTel. Reflecting on the young man she'd helped that afternoon, she wondered if he'd return or pass on his knowledge. Lighting another cigarette before entering the lobby, she found the owner at the bar. "Heya toots, I see you're back and missing that boy you brought in. Staying another night? You know you could pay in advance, but then I wouldn't get to see your sweet can walk outta my office every evening. It's the highlight of my night, Kapeesh? Would you like me to write that down as your name? Hottie with the can, K-a-p-e-e-s-h" he said writing down the words on the guest book.

“Fuck you, Dougie. That’s not how you spell that word. Anyway, I thought this was a ‘No tell motel.’ Not an ‘ask me a thousand questions and treat me like meat’ hotel. You keep dreaming though. I’ll pay in advance when I can afford it, until then you get your looks.”

She slammed the money on the counter and Mr. Krahbs chuckled, “As you say, Doll face. Thanks for the spelling lesson. You keep paying me and I won’t see a thing, but I promise you I’ll be dreaming of that can of yours! Kapeesh?”

[sparkiekong]

This time we're checking in on Kira. The last time we saw her, she gave Randall a lesson on pleasure.

Upcoming story tags to be wary of...

!!!!! Remember you are responsible for your safety on the internet!!!!!!

I provide the tags, but only you can protect yourself from the things that trigger or upset you. Honestly, if anything on this blog offends you, you maybe better off not following me at all.

Tags are under the cut to prevent potential spoilers for those who like to read without knowledge of stuff coming.

smoking (as usual... it's not going away folks. Accept it or move on. LOL)

groping

public spice

intimidation

bullying

[sparkiekong]

I'm a jumbled mess... I have nearly 4 gig of writing, but it's all over the place and all in various different incarnations and forms of TAC related stuff.

How do you organize your writing? By character? By Event?

[sparkiekong]

Yay! You posted. They are adorable and I like that it looks like a Polaroid. Very cute. Keep posting hun!

Ben is holding the heir, Arya. The girl in the middle is their adopted daughter Arin and Shirley is holding Aiden.

I rolled random to get the amount of kids they would have. 3 was the number, but Ben wanted to adopt. Shirley was pregnant with Arya at the time so I just assumed that the adoption made Arin number 2 and Arya number 3. Currently in my present timeline of them, they recently had twin girls and everyone is a little older.

I will post a backtrack to share what happened during my game time. So you'll see Arya as a newborn before she becomes an infant. I just thought this would be a good starting post. I am going to post from Arya's perspective. She's the founder and her family is just to make her story feel more full to me.

I want to thank @sparkiekong for the list of names that go well with the word Crazy. If anyone has any suggestions for names, please feel free to send them to me. I'm going need them. lol.

Thanks to those who spent the time to look at my blog already! You guys are great!

I guess this could be my official starting post. So maybe if you see this and you like it. You could share it? So other people might see me. I will try to follow back, unless you're interests are beyond gaming and writing. I can't handle lots of news/politics/negativity posts. Sorry.

[sparkiekong]

I'm gonna need to make a writing help tag. Very useful stuff here. Thank you.

Writing Tips

Punctuating Dialogue

✧

➸ “This is a sentence.”

➸ “This is a sentence with a dialogue tag at the end,” she said.

➸ “This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a dialogue tag.”

➸ “This is a sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence. New sentences are capitalized.”

➸ “This is a sentence followed by an action.” He stood. “They are separate sentences because he did not speak by standing.”

➸ She said, “Use a comma to introduce dialogue. The quote is capitalized when the dialogue tag is at the beginning.”

➸ “Use a comma when a dialogue tag follows a quote,” he said.

“Unless there is a question mark?” she asked.

“Or an exclamation point!” he answered. “The dialogue tag still remains uncapitalized because it’s not truly the end of the sentence.”

➸ “Periods and commas should be inside closing quotations.”

➸ “Hey!” she shouted, “Sometimes exclamation points are inside quotations.”

However, if it’s not dialogue exclamation points can also be “outside”!

➸ “Does this apply to question marks too?” he asked.

If it’s not dialogue, can question marks be “outside”? (Yes, they can.)

➸ “This applies to dashes too. Inside quotations dashes typically express—“

“Interruption” — but there are situations dashes may be outside.

➸ “You’ll notice that exclamation marks, question marks, and dashes do not have a comma after them. Ellipses don’t have a comma after them either…” she said.

➸ “My teacher said, ‘Use single quotation marks when quoting within dialogue.’”

➸ “Use paragraph breaks to indicate a new speaker,” he said.

“The readers will know it’s someone else speaking.”

➸ “If it’s the same speaker but different paragraph, keep the closing quotation off.

“This shows it’s the same character continuing to speak.”

[sparkiekong]

Hi. I just recently found you and I love the story and can't wait to read more. Odd question.

Can I steal your ffxiv character name/inspo for my alphabet legacy? I may post it someday when I get enough courage, if that's ok? I really think the name is fun! If it's not ok, I will make something else up. thx

Hey there!

You are very sweet for asking me and I appreciate it. You didn't have to, but you did. That's awesome. Thank you so much!

I am so flattered that you like the name of my FFXIV character! It's sort of a running theme in games I play with my husband. We come up with first names that go with the word Crazy and also sound like real names. The second female viera in my screens is Maybe Crazy and my hubby runs that one. We also have Ben, Justus, Plum, Ever, Raven, Way, Aria, Very, Barry! We're a whole clan of Crazies over there. Maybe comes from a song called Coming of Age, by Damn Yankees.

I see that you haven't posted anything about your alphabet legacy yet, this is your sign!

Post it! Once you start, it'll be less scary and I'm positive someone will like what you're doing. It takes time, but there are some great people out here in tumblr-land.

Use the names and if you get stuck and need more crazy, just send me an ask or a message and I'll gladly help you find more crazy to fill your legacy! I'm definitely excited to see your Crazies!

May your legacy game be long and crazy!

[sparkiekong]

💕Positivity prime time! Share five things you love about yourself, four things you're excited about, OR three people you care deeply about and why. Pass this along to someone whose posts make you smile💕

Hmm... let's see.

I am deeply excited about the upcoming wedding in the KSU that @helenofsimblr has planned. It's been a long time coming and I'm SOOOOOO excited about it.

I get excited about apes, monkeys, simians, primates. I love all kinds.

I'm also excited to reveal more about my character Akiel "Eel" Lucas who is friends with Elita Robinson @helenofsimblr. I look forward to sharing him as well. I hope you all will find him as fun as I do.

Thanks for the ask hun. I appreciate you!

[sparkiekong]

Decent enough reason to keep said Maid... maybe all dragons should grab one.

A dragon mistakenly kidnapped a maid instead of a princess. Expecting the princess to be rescued after going out hunting, instead comes back to all their treasure meticulously sorted by origin, color, and value.

[sparkiekong]