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just read the plot summary for Wrath of the Triple Goddess and. wow this is. painful this just sounds painful to read.
Why is Grover the incompetent inciting incident character? That is not his narrative role ever, really. That's like, the fanon conceptualization of his character where he's reduced down to comedic relief and nothing more. He's mostly exposition and support. Why not have the inciting incident be something about Annabeth's hubris - something that has gotten the gang into situations tons of times before in a way that doesn't put down any of the characters? Heck you could have even tied it into some Sea of Monsters stuff, like Circe having told Annabeth that she'd make a good sorceress. That'd be perfect for how this book literally just exists to be advertising for s2 of PJOTV. Or maybe call-back to Percy's introduction, where he talks about how he doesn't try to cause problems but problems tend to find him. Or use the established personalities of Hecate's animal companions from HoO, since we know they have attitudes. Just what are you even doing here????
#pjo#riordanverse#wrath of the triple goddess#wottg#cotg trilogy#percy jackson#grover underwood#annabeth chase#you're advertising your mischaracterization of characters now!#dont do Grover dirty like that!!!!#i mentioned on discord that this plot summary sounds like a fanfiction plot to me. not in a means of ''oh fanfic inherently bad pbbbt''#cause fanfic not inherently bad. i know many fanfics way better than this. but fanfic-like in this is not consistent with canon#(cause fanfics dont need to be. versus canon stuff which does) and characters are being reduced to flat archetypes more often#which has been a sort of trend ive noticed recently in the franchise. a lot of characters in canon are getting treated more and more#like their fanon counterparts. which is WEIRD! cause we're all aware of how the fanon counterparts are vastly different from canon#and it just kind of goes to show how little the canon is keeping track of their own stuff cause it implies theyre just going based on fanon#just entirely lifting characterizations and concepts and such from the community. which is bad!!!! there's a reason you don't do that!!!!#like aside from it just being bad practice THERE'S LEGAL SHIT YOU CAN GET INTO WITH THAT#this is why you make a series bible Richard!!!!! copying the community's homework won't make them like you more!!!!!
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berryheart getting a comparatively happy end where sunbeam is satisfied to know berryheart despite being a horrible fascist loved her (and not any other family member) and all of berryhearts remaining family come together to bury here as sunbeam thinks about wishing berryheart was still alive while curlfeather is reduced to just stubborn and power hungry and unwilling to even apologize to frostpaw/dawn is just so. so
erin hunters' vc i can excuse fascism but i draw the line at atheism
#lamb.og#asc spoilers#why does sunbeam get to unnuancedly love her fascist mother to the point of being willing to die fur her#while frostpaw completely rejects curlfeather at every turn even in death#sunbeam gets to be satisfied knowing her fascist mother always loved her and wanted her by her side#but curlfeather doesnt even apawlogize to frostpaw or take accountability. youve got to be kidding me#both berryheart and curlfeathers actions resulted in cats dying. in their daughters getting hurt#but curlfeather didnt like starclan so shes an infinitely worse purrson and characterized as way more flat and stubborn. come the fuck on#warrior cats
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can i just say. and this is probably a niche hill to die on. that i am so gobsmacked every time someone vaguely hints at the idea that jotaro doesn't care meaningfully for the other crusaders, usually particularly kakyoin and joseph, when those two actually tend to be the ones he reacts to being hurt the hardest
like he cares for his loved ones!!!! that literally plays into his character motives in every single part he shows up in!!! stop lying to me!!!!!!!
#me.txt#jjba#i'm going to ramble in tags actually. excuse me#ok. rereading sdc and so confused at the general perception of jotaro and his friends/family. he's not NEARLY as flat or as dickish#i understand that the anime (particularly the dub) tends to slander him but even then he still clearly cares for them! i'm confused#i also understand that a lot of people dig against jotaro and kakyoin as a dynamic because 'they're popular' and that generally disliking#popular things across media is a thing that i've seen consistently everywhere but the discredit to them simply as a DUO and not even as a#pairing is so..... odd..... like they're considered to be a duo that clicks for a reason. i enjoyed them even before i got into the fandom#every time i see someone say jotaro is overrated/dull i take a shot and assume they're an anime-only or only read the manga like once btw#joseph and jotaro also have a neat dynamic and they obviously both love and care for each other. like they're not going to go around loudly#or anything but literally the entirety of the lovers and the prelude to the dio fight IS jotaro being worked up over joseph getting hurt#equally i don't know if it translates to the anime as much but joseph is VERY complimentary when it comes to jotaro. like he sings his#praises so often and reminds everyone that he's his grandson so frequently (d'arby the gamer is a good example of this). either way it's so#peculiar....... there's not enough avdol and jotaro content btw (also in canon) because jotaro obviously looks up to him and avdol jokes#around with him on the occasion they interact after their intro which doesn't start very well. it's very cute#i do think an important thing to note about jotaro's character is how he acts AFTER his intro because he's so drastically different. early#jotaro and later jotaro aren't the same character and i do not mean this in a character development way. excluding the jail incident he's#completely different and probably shouldn't really be taken into account (especially considering the amount of slapstick in araki's intros)#and i think that's really???? what people center on for his character? Which sucks balls bad!#anyways. i could ramble more about this if asked i have so much to say but sigh. jotaro cares so much for his friends and family he's not a#flat fully cold asshole character regardless of whether you watch the anime or ova or read the manga. you just have poor media literacy#i wouldn't recommend watching solely the anime for his character though. the dub also changes a lot so it's... questionable#i love the anime and it's still important for him though. also adds neat stuff. i need to stop myself. i have many thoughts on the matter#jotaro kujo#joseph joestar#noriaki kakyoin#adding in case anyone sees: i am not saying that he is perfect about this. in fact he is very ass about it with jolyne and holly and that's#very important. he also is in fact an asshole sometimes. NOT as much as you guys are making him though!#please don't get me started on how much of a dick etc people make kakyoin to veer away from the 'woobified' characterizations of him#in fact i think that's bad if not worse because it CLAIMS to be in character. hes a prim asshole at times but not that angry or dishevelled
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saying Bakugou's fluctuating hero ranking placements is because "he doesn't gaf about the hero rankings unless izuku isn't there with him" is making my ass itch really badly 😭 completely losing the plot over Bakugou's character sorry are we talking about the same bakugou.
#bakugou katsuki#mha#bnha#katsuki bakugou#shippers seriously make my ass hairs stand up#not saying he doesnt want to compete with deku#but hes also like his own person now that his character arc w deku is completed#like bakugou is allowed to want to be no 1 hero and chase that dream without sitting around and doing nothing#the flat fanfiction characterization
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It’s really really interesting that they left El’s feelings to be resolved in season 5.
The last time we hear about El’s feelings towards Mike it’s in her letter: “I have gone to become a superhero again. From, El”. That is quite literally El saying she doesn’t love Mike anymore.
She considers writing love to be the bare minimum. “You can’t even write it, Mike.” She thought Mike not saying or writing it meant he didn’t love her anymore. So, she stopped writing it too. While it wasn’t necessarily a breakup letter, that was her telling Mike that she is done waiting for him.
That would’ve immediately lead to their breakup if it weren’t for Will. (That’s why she doesn’t even try to kiss him during their reunion in the desert.) Will talked Mike into giving that monologue, Will lied about who had his feelings. The same feelings that Mike was reassured by and called back to in his monologue to El. The relationship we’ll see Mike and El in at the beginning of season 5 will be built on a lie.
How long this lie lasts is mainly based on the painting, but also on El herself.
Will’s feelings are solidified. Mike’s seem solidified. El��s are unconfirmed. (But, last we saw it seemed she’d lost feelings.) We never see how she responds to the monologue, but we do know some things about after it.
She’s distant. Will has reason to believe that Mike and El haven’t talked at all since the monologue. He asks Mike, kind of timidly, “has she talked to you at all?” and Mike says “not much”. He then reveals that they talked about the supernatural stuff, about her loss. We don’t hear anything about the state of their relationship.
They choose to have Mike and Will have another heart to heart at the end of the season instead of Mike and El. They choose to have El walk out on that hill independently with Mike staying by Will’s side behind her.
I don’t think they’ll pull an off camera breakup for them. But, we saw from how El acted in the desert reunion that she won’t be hostile to Mike after a mature breakup. In the pizza place right before the monologue, she holds his hands and appears to be trying to gently tell him something. I’ve never gotten anything but breakup vibes from that moment. They get interrupted, then the monologue happens. If they didn’t let it get interrupted, Mike and El would’ve broken up.
They’re set up to start yet another season with a rocky relationship built on a lie and an I love you. We saw from the way seasons 3 and 4 happened, that is a recipe for disaster.
I can’t wait to see how they decide to reveal El’s feelings and the painting. In what order? How? How long do Mike and El stay together? How does Will react? How does Mike react? How does El react? There’s so much volume in this love triangle it’s insane.
#byler#byler endgame#anti mileven#i know this has been talked into a wall by now#but its just so interesting to look back over everything#i tend to talk about byler and milkvan at the same time#because i really do care about all 3 characters#and byler endgame would actually make milkvan a really interesting relationship#and this entire arc of theirs so interesting too#milkvan endgame would just make all of the mike characterization fall flat#and make everything feel pointless#woah gay guys feelings reinforces already canon straight relationship#so interesting😍#i cant imagine a world where all their individual arcs#and their combined one#somehow end up in a milkvan endgame#it just doesnt make sense with how they set everything up
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forgot I still knew how to do art traditionally
#song is Me Vs. Your Friends by The Flat Stanleys btw#I like to characterize In Trousers with like a million indie songs#indie songs that are deeply distressing#obviously#anydoodle#ART#i think#byebye#falsettos#trina in trousers#marvin in trousers#in trousers
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like the whole point of jin's creation was that he's supposed to be a foil to kazuya, not the same. like kazuya was supposed to look at jin and see everything he could've been. jin was NOT supposed to look at kazuya and see himself because they've both hurt people. no, that ruins the entire point. that ruins the point that jin was raised with love, that jin knew what compassion was and kazuya didn't, that jin is what kazuya could've been had kazuya been given the same nurturing as a child.
the fact that tk8 had the whole jin looking at kazuya and sees himself, remembering the war, actually does ruin his character and everything he was supposed to be, and it's always mind boggling to me that a lotta ppl can't see that or some ppl legit believe that tk6 "improved" jin's character.
love him or hate him in the earlier tekken games, but it's objective that tk6 ruined everything jin was. what was once something original and different was made into something repetitive and frustratingly inconsistent.
#✏️ - ᴛʜᴇ ʜᴏsᴛ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇ ᴍᴏsᴛ // (ooc)#// i'm RLY passionate about this#// and i think that's why ... no matter WHAT ... i can just never truly acknowledge the canon of tk6#// not on this blog nor in my writing#// 'cos it RLY does destroy everything i adored about this beloved character#// not even exaggerating on that either#// just completely destroys jin's character and ooh boy it destroyed it permanently#// like beyond repair rly#// even if his characterization is better in tk8 - feels more like the jin we love#// the actions of tk6 still ruins it ... it can't be fixed by just saying he's sorry & everyone loves him now#// like him ever being LIKE kazuya ruins him#// him ever killing INNOCENT PPL ruins him#// the only way out of permanent damage was thru retcons or reboots which neither happened so#// still ruined :)#// don't wanna hear the 'all mishimas bad' excuse either#// uhh jinpachi? uhh lars? like it's an argument that quickly falls flat lmao
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Which one do you dislike more? Himbo adult Dick Grayson or Tiny angry baby Dick Grayson?
oh hmm, good question anon
the thing is is that i can appreciate the pros and cons of both. i like it when dick grayson, this big, lean, athletic looking man has kind, humble eyes and an easy smile and a "devil may care, im just here to have a good time" attitude. it's sweet and i think it plays to his character well- but only as a general persona and not as his like "one true character" bit. he has facets, he has different faces he shows to certain people, and that doesnt make any one of them any more real or false than the other. he's not going to bring the same level of intensity he might have with batman to a random civilian. he's not going to make silly mistakes and laugh at himself like he would with the titans in front of batman (well sometimes, but i think there's a difference in how he feels/acts around both that it can be percieved)
and i also like the abstract concept of a much younger, freshly traumatized dick grayson. it's a very compelling first look at his character, the first one anyone ever gets to see of him, including himself! i like the idea of this raw, potent, violent anger being something dick is also newly discovering. i like the idea of self-realization through anger and grief as a propelling force, not only between himself and bruce, but also how he chooses to act to and in the world from then on. it's a beautiful progression of horrible grief, aching, festering anger, and then a gradual evolution into someone who still feels things powerfully but can now decide how he wants to portray those feelings and how to act on them. it's especially compelling when he reverts back to that instinctual anger again when he's overwhelmed and stressed, something that doesn't happen frequently in his adult self
however.
if we are describing these qualities as flat "himbo adult" and "feral baby", then i would just never interact ever again because they are so lacking and so boring-- ive always wondered if people who genuinely enjoy such basic character interpretations even enjoy complexity and how that affects how they interact with people irl
but, ultimately, to answer your question anon, i dislike himbo adult dick grayson more. it infantilizes him so much and disregards his years of expertise, ability, and emotional growth to the point of making him an entirely different character. i honestly am not sure when this characterization of him got started or got popular because its so absurd and different from his real character. i get the feeling it was just another instance of people wanting to assign each of the bat-family members a certain role, and since "intelligent" was relegated to tim, "brute/strong" to jason, and then "feral" to damian, the only "personality" left over was cinnamon roll. eurgh
#i dont like either of them but i dislike the himbo one more#i like the potential of what could have been for both flat characterization -as i wrote earlier- but they just arent compelling#asks#anon#dick grayson
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I'm doing really badly chat I may need to take a small break from posting as much to this blog again for a bit, the deeply rooted misanthopy I was raised with is violently flowing forth out of me again like an overgrown blister hitting the corner of a table the wrong way and my god it is a mess and hurts like hell
#sludgetalkz#apologies for the gross analogy but thats my specialty#my entire being is characterized by overwhelming levels of empathy which unfortunately is once again just flat out killing me
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"ohhh Sonic's so powerful, wouldn't it be fucked-up if he abused his power? nobody could stop him."
okay but he doesn't. so the point is moot, ya walnut.
#this is why stuff like 'evil sonic' just doesn't appeal to me period. neither scourge nor surge's crybaby backstories could change that#could it happen? no. would it? no. should it? no. not if sonic's characterized properly#what even is the point of a hypothetical thought experiment whose premise is fundamentally flat-out wrong?#yeah you could imagine schroedinger's cat climbing out of the box and tap-dancing a jig too#doesn't mean it's ever gonna happen. it's just a waste of time
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I just saw that post about character misconception in fandom and Adam and I just realized• isn't it weird that Lute doesn't receive the same treatment? Like most of the times, people will agree that she's a bitch and a genocidal monster, but with Adam it's the "he had every right to act like this for x and z reasons" from the (chronically online) fangirls or the religious conservative fanboys? Why is that?
It's the sexism <3
#Answered#NO FOR REAL#The reason that happens to Adam is because he is subjected to “Draco in Leather Pants Syndrome”#(term from TVTropes)#Which is almost EXCLUSIVELY applied to male characters#Particularly male characters who are considered attractive#Hence the massive turnaround in how Adam was seen perceived and treated by the fandom once his face was shown#Lute is female#So she doesn't receive the same treatment#It's the same reason why Alastor is put on a pedestal while Vaggie is largely ignored#And Vaggie is critiqued as flat#When she actually had MORE character development than Alastor#Who did not receive a drop of growth in the entire first season#And had about the same amount of characterization#Hazbin Hotel
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i think. everyone should stop reading my most popular fics that aren't really that good and start reading the ones with 18 kudos that are significantly better
#this is about (just wanna be) somebody i'm proud of#yes i had fun writing it. but it's REALLY NOT THAT GOOD#also i cannot stress this enough: that fic was a fluke#it's NOT a good example of what i write. guys i'm so much better at the angsty character study fics#i promise i actually can get proper characterization. i had to sacrifice some of that for the light-hearted stupid cheesy premise#alas#no one in fandom actually cares about characterization#ngl sometimes i even wonder what the point of writing stuff in-character is if the flat#'characters reduced to a single trait that they may or may not even possess'#fics will ALWAYS end up being more popular than the ones with good characterization#anyway i know why the 18 kudos one is so low. it's the mcd tag. AND it's a gen fic centered around a character no one cares about#i wasn't expecting that one to do well#but it does suck that like. my most popular fics will never actually be my best ones#it's the same with bsd but THAT'S a whole other story#that's the phenomenon of everyone reducing bsd to the skk show and not giving the time of day to fics centered around anyone else#do u guys realize there are SO many other INCREDIBLE characters and dynamics????#like i was doing that bsd fic rec event on twt and almost all of the fics recced were skk#meanwhile i was searching for anything NOT skk bc idk other ships and characters deserve appreciation too??#and i don't even read much skk bc it's so hard to find anything that's. like. ACTUALLY good.#anyway. i don't actually care if you read somebody i'm proud of#but i hate that that's like. one of my most popular fics by a longshot#i have stuff that is so much better that people won't even glance at bc it's not tagged with the most popular m/m ship in the fandom#hello grace here
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Men will open a fine dining restaurant and change the menu every night in opposition to sound financial advice instead of getting therapy.
#just finished the new season of the bear and Carmy is pissing me tf off#I also wouldn’t be surprised if Claire turned out to be a figment of his imagination cause her characterization is so flat#which is wild cause the other women on that show are written really well?? like I know there is an eldest daughter in that writing room
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Hunter's Drawings
I wish I had a better screenshot of the ones hanging on the wall in the last picture but they really don't get shown very well.
#yes I am saying he drew the stuff on his cast himself - fucking look at it#metal lords#hunter sylvester#metallords#metal lords hunter#I find these all very endearing btw#tag rambles#the mental image of him just doodling away and liking it enough to put it on his wall is just- idk that's adorable to me#not like I don't have my own drawings on the wall but like#it's a slightly quieter side of him than he puts forward throughout most of the movie - yaknow?#there is stuff you can interpret about his character if you include these kind of things I mean maybe I -overdo it- but there's stuff there#he's not that flat of a character imo#but maybe I'm too stuck in my own hcs and characterization and projection#also when I call him adorable please know it's in a “looking at a slightly younger version of yourself without hatred for once” kind of way#and very much not attraction#I relate to him too much I just couldn't#my post
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I feel like Martin could’ve been a really interesting character in tma but so much of the content about him is about jmart and being like “oh he’s so nice!”. Character who should be put on a high up shelf for a tiny bit while the fandom considers it a little maybe. He has a bunch of moments I really liked but I’m not a huge fan of the interpretations most people have.
I got somewhat more rambly than usual and most of my mutuals probs don’t want to see this so:
YEAH SO TRUE!! He is literally so compelling in s4!! There is so much to like about him!! There’s so much I want to know more about and an arc I wish so badly that he’d had!!!…..
But then he just. Kinda didn’t? Like they put a bunch of cool ideas for him on the table then pushed them all off in s5 by giving him nothing to do except nag at Jon which did nothing but make him sound really annoying. Plus like…. He was framed more righteously than before y’know? Like the narrative was leaning into those ‘cute little UwU bean’ interpretations and it just came across as so…. !!!! Like!! Annabelle Cane literally talks about how good of a web avatar he would make so why didn’t we spend ANY of s5 exploring that!! Why did we barely get to explore him at all outside of like 2 lonely based episodes!! Why is everyone convinced that he’s both super smart AND the epitome of moral righteousness!! We’ve only seen him be manipulative once (which lead do the end of the world) and then got a whole bunch of lip service about it and we were straight up told that a lot of his fluffier qualities are a straight up lie!! And nothing interesting comes of this AUGHHHH!!
Sorry for rambling a bit, I just remembered how much wasted potential Martin had and it hurt.
#Martin negative#TMA critical#like I literally loved all the s5 statements that were focused on him why couldn’t the rest of his cha#characterization in s5 been like that aughhhh.#me bwood I love you but I hate you but I love you#Please explore him. if you’re going to have JM then at least use it to explore their characters a bit more like it could be so interesting#it canonically *is* interesting it’s just also framed as the most boring and flat thing by the narrative#which is also how I feel about s5 Martin#TMA negative#anti TMA#anti Martin#Martin critical#discourse#fandom critical#trying to tag everything I can think of so nobody who doesn’t want to see this does
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Started watching Helluva Boss because of your ideas and writing... I don't quite like it but I'll keep watching just for Striker
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Awww
That’s very flattering but at the same time I wanna caution you to not subject yourself to disappointment like this 😅😭
#it’s a downhill ride my friend#tbh my writing for it is mainly done out of spite and I’ve flat out ignored a lot of the characterizations from Season 2#I have some friends that I enjoy talking about it with tbf#but they are the only reason I still pay attention to HB#I would give it up otherwise bc it’s actually elicited anger in me
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