#felix rewrite

[miraculous-metamorphosis]

Hello again, it's been a while! So, we managed to find another big find! What looks to be a screenshot of the synopsis of the series, as well as designs for the main characters and the miracuclass! We recognize some old faces here, but we see at least two new faces in the crowd!

We also found a season 1 sheet of all the characters, with their names too! Including superhero forms and the villain of the series!!

We'll keep you updated if we find more! Especially if there may be some season 2 designs ;)

(Inbox is open if you have any questions about our au!)

[nightmare-foundation]

Couple of gripes I have about Restorations writing:

-There was hardly any reaction from the others about Tucker being the Meta. Not even Wash blinked at it, and I highly doubt he knew Tucker was the Meta. The others... didn't seem to have Any form of emotional reaction? Just ":0 he's the meta??" And that was it

-literally no one tried telling Carolina or Tex that they were fighting Tucker (they seemed to just,, know?? Somehow??). I expected someone to yell "THAT'S TUCKER! ITS TUCKER, DON'T KILL HIM!" And there was just. No moral dilemma when it came to fighting him??

-Building off the last one, they were all so... split up? It was like all the development kinda just disappeared. They didn't seem to really care about each other like they had previously.

-Tucker himself seemed. Entirely unaffected? Despite getting psychologically tortured IHNMAIMS style. Like,, huh?

-The tone was so off at times I couldn't take sarge's death seriously.

All of these are things I 100% would've changed. Really the biggest thing I liked was Wash being system-coded.

[lucydoodlessometimes]

I just think the miraculous should give you long and colorful hair. even if youre a boy. even if youre an angry little sentimonster who has big feelings about pottery and magic tricks. even if i completely overhaul what a miraculous even is to get my brain to generate serotonin. even if ive already posted a very different version of this design lately. so what. hes literally a bunny rabbit?? Grow up

[ourmurdermassiah]

Imagine/rewrite:

The clock tower scene from Twilight: New Moon with a Reader! that takes the place of Bella Swan, 'cept: she doesn't immediately forgive or excuses the actions of edward & fam! and now is just a hater-

*!! Dividers by @enchanthings !!*

*having just been fully kidnapped to Italy by Alice, Reader! does not run to save Edward. Alice has to drag her through the back alleys and 'gently' push her into Edward's now bare chest.

Reader! immediately bounces off of edward, it's like running into a brick wall, who looks at her amazed.*

Edward: "Carlisle was right... Heaven..."

(reader! frowns and grumbles, side stepping Edwards attempt to hold her)

Alice, whispers gently: "No, Edward, she's here... Alive..."

(looking at reader! confused) Edward: "You're... not real."

Reader!, sniffing softly and gagging: "*retching*, guh- I wish..."

Alice: "she doesn't mean that- look at her... My vision was wrong- oh.."

*Alice trails off as Edward kisses Reader!, stepping back into the shade. As Edward stops walking, reader! does not. She pulls away as fast as one can, wiping her mouth and heaving. Edward looks at her happily, she glares lightly with reflex tears in her eyes.

Edward steps closer to reader!, with the intent to kiss her again. Reader! plots to divorce his head from his body.*

Edward: "you're here..."

Reader!, grumbling: "regrettably. And not by choice!-"

*Edward stiffens and quickly pulls reader! behind him,-*

Reader!, surprised: "woah-!"

*-Alice zips in front of reader! as well, as two hooded figures emerge from the alley under the clock tower: Felix and Demetri. Reader! gazes at the two new men appreciatively with a soft 'ooh' of admiration, while stepping back and away from Edward. Edward glances at reader! with heartbreak, then at Felix and Demetri with distain.*

Edward: "I won't be needing your services after all, gentlemen."

Felix: "Aro wants to speak with you again."

Edward: "No rules were broken."

Demetri, smiling: "We should take this conversation to a more appropriate venue."

Edward: "Fine. Reader, why don't you stay and enjoy the festival?"

Reader!, dismissively but with an eager smile, already turning to leave: "'kay-"

Felix: "The girl comes with us."

Reader!, whisper-yelling, returning to her spot: "damnit!"

Edward: "That's not going to happen-"

Alice, interrupting, attempting to deescalate the situation: "Come on, guys, it's a festival. We wouldn't want to make a scene."

Felix: "There won't be any scene. And we'll still win."

Edward: "But not easily-"

*out of sight* "enough."

*A very tiny, young woman appears. She also wears a dark overcoat, her face peering out from under the hood. Felix and Demetri are back off immediately. Edward and Alice step back, as well.*

Edward: "Jane."

*Jane tosses an overcoat to Edward, who puts it on.*

Jane: "follow me."

*she turns and walks away. Felix smirks and gestures for Edward, Alice, and Reader! to follow. Edward turns around and walks over, grabbing Reader!'s hand and pulling her to his side.

Reader! heaves twice before shaking her head and violently pulling away from Edward. She brings her hand, the one not touched by Edward, over her mouth and rushes over to a nearby trash can. She vomits. She wipes her mouth with a tissue from a travel pack she had in her pocket.

She throws the tissue away and returns to the group, trembling in revulsion as she walks next to Demetri instead.*

Demetri, amused, chuckling: "are you alright?"

Reader!, disgusted: "so bad... He smells so fuckin b a d..."

*reader! looks over to Edward suddenly.*

Reader!: "why do you smell so bad? Did you not fuckin shower since the last time I saw you?"

Edward, smiling guiltily: "I was so distraught without you by my side, I couldn't find it in me to do anyth-"

Reader!, immediately looking sick: "oh my god- that's disgusting- *retching* *retching again*"

Felix, curiously, also amused: "how long has it been since you two last met?"

Reader!: "six months- *retching*"

*Jane leads Edward, reader! and Alice through several narrow dark alleys. Felix and Demetri bring up the rear. Their path dead ends at a wall of brick. Jane just strides forward and, without breaking pace - drops down into an open hole in the street; it's a drain. Alice follows Jane.

Reader! looks down curiously, sees nothing but blackness.*

Edward: "It's alright. Alice will catch you."

Reader!, shaking her head: "nuh-uh..."

*Reader! looks to Felix and Demetri, focuses on Felix.*

Reader!, hopefully: "catch me?"

Felix, chuckling: "I'll do you one better."

*he scoops her into his arms, bridal style-*

Reader!, smiling: "oh? Oh my-"

*Felix drops down with Reader!. Demetri and Edward follow, landing as Felix sets Reader! down. Edward tries to pull reader! close as they follow Jane through the sewer. Reader pulls away. Finally, they reach a folding iron elevator door. Jane easily pulls it aside.*

Reader!, looks to Demetri hopefully: "are there stairs? Please tell me there are some stairs..."

-reader! does not want to be in a solid box with Edward, as he smells terrible-

*Demetri shakes his head in faux melancholy. Reader! lets out a dramatic sob before trudging into the elevator. The door closes with a clang. She stands next to Felix, diagonally across from Edward, with her arms crossed and an angry expression.*

*!! Dividers by @enchanthings !!*

[g-babtqftim]

Hai Hai Hai >_< !!! I’ll be trying to attempt a rewrite of the comic babtaftim, I’ve always loved the concept as it was really cool, but the execution was poor as the original comic lacked good writing and suchhh. Since I was 12 I’ve built my own version of this story up in my head, and im hoping (if procrastination doesn’t strike) I’ll be able to create the story I wish I was reading back then. Whilst im not the best at writing, I’ll still be trying to do this, as it’s just a fun project to do!!!

These are the first pages I’ve worked on. Im undecided if they’re the official first pages or just taster pages of what’s yet to come. Either way im very exited to continue as I plan what’s to come next.

If you haven’t noticed yet, I’ve redesigned the characters slightly! Here are my redesigns and headcanons that I will be using for this comic (may change or be adapted later on ^_^)

I just love babbling lol. My main is @garfield0-o

[imthepunchlord]

Possibly How It Should Have Been

Gosh, I've just thought about it sometimes, as I'm largely trying to turn my creative focus onto something more enjoyable than ML (hence less writing for ML fics), but sometimes I just can't help but focus on it. Cause it's a great concept and it's butchered and that bothers me so much.

And there's SO MUCH that could've been done to improve it. Some of which could be easy tweaks. Some of which needs massive overhauling. Some of it is just picking a lane, staying in that lane, and you follow the road to progress.

It's a great concept with a LOT of possibilities and ways it could've been done. I've actually thought about possible ML Rewrites a few times, I even reached out to a friend to try and help develop a Rewrite that we could've collabed on cause I was struggling to much to decide, and we both just got stuck cause there's so many options for characters and what could possibly be done as we could see so many pros for each option.

And of course, part of the pondering that came to my mind was seeing promising improvement with kwami swaps.

Like, Marinette and Adrien may have developed better if they had each other's miraculous. Plagg could've been the ideal foil to Marinette as he's the opposite of her in every way, addressing her overworking herself, prioritizing others over herself, and caring so much about her responsibilities that it just weighs and stresses her out. And with Adrien and Tikki, she could've helped him develop as an actual, step up in responsibility, learn to take on duty, to care about others over himself. She also would've helped him get the plot rolling, as Adrien is a stagnant character but Tikki is not. She's going to get him involved into the Agreste plot whether he wants it or not, and in turn, he's going to get Tikki to learn to be more attentive and considerate of her holders cause things can go south for Adrien very quickly if she pushes too much.

Gosh, another great kwami swap that could've been done that could've improved a lot was switching up who are the leads. I always wondered if Tikki and Plagg TRULY would've picked Marinette and Adrien, also if they were even the right picks now that we know that Fu doesn't know everything and is running on limited knowledge. As far as we know, they ARE the wrong picks for these two. And considering there was an ep of Tikki and Plagg picking their own users, I now wonder if Alya and Nino should've been our actual leads.

How Alya was initially as Scarabella screams to me that it would've better served in the Origins as a starting hero. Alya also has promising potential arcs as a starting hero, especially as being a superhero is her living her dream:

There's the struggle of balancing her civilian and hero life, she can learn that the civilian life is just as important.

She can learn that being a hero isn't all glory and isn't always easy.

She can learn the importance of secrecy, and what happens if she exposes herself to the public or to a friend (probably Marinette).

And a lot of the lessons Tikki is involved with would make more sense with Alya, who does get tunnel vision and isn't good at listening to others and isn't so considerate and can be very pushy with her own agenda. Alya naturally aims for the leadership position and Tikki wants her Ladybugs to be leaders, so Tikki can help guide Alya to improve as a leader. Lastly, Alya will challenge Tikki on her call outs, which could at certain points help established that Tikki isn't always right and is open to learn and adapt too. And Alya could busy herself looking into HM, making her theories and being nosy about his identity, which Tikki would readily be apart of and encourage. Which Alya should've done in the show than recklessly trying to expose the heroes identity to the public and help HM win. Which, if Adrien wasn't a hero, maybe that should have been his role instead, which Gabriel could encourage and Adrien is even more excited cause he thinks his father is taking an interest in what he does which can be some later Adrien angst for you.

With Nino and Plagg, the BIGGEST plus is that it would actually give Nino SOMETHING outside Alya and Adrien. It would've prompt him to get more focus, and based on what's seen, he's 2nd to Marinette in having the most friends, meaning he can be more engaging and present with what happens to his classmates. Plagg also could bring some needed chaos to his life. You can even expand upon what's seen in Horrificatr where Nino can be controlling, strict, and harsh so Plagg can work on that. Nino does have some similarities to Marinette where he does care a lot for his friends and is hardworking, so there's something there to make Plagg a bit of a foil to him. To expand on Nino's role as Alya embraces being the big hero and savior, could even do the fandom popular idea of him getting Guardian training.

With those two taken, this nicely opens up others getting the Five.

Marinette can work with either Bee or Fox. If you want to work off Chloe vs Marinette, it works best if Marinette has the Bee. Though I think Pollen's personality should be overhauled, but if not, at least there's a perk that yes man Pollen going to force Marinette to take initiative and decide things for herself instead of seeking advise from her kwami. And with Fox, that can work off Marinette being a meddler, schemer, being creative, and her more inclined to work from the shadows. There could also be a fun twist to explore with Marinette not liking liars and she has a miraculous tied to deception, plus her and Trixx could've been an interesting pair to see interact, especially if working off what's seen in Sapotis where Trixx is very observant and manipulative, but also a bit of a chaotic gambler (from what I've seen, later seasons seem to ruin Trixx as a character). And of course, Marinette having Fox could work off her vs Lila, you could even dabble in her vs Felix.

Arguably, Chloe MAY grow as Alya and Nino would NOT have been so tolerant of her unlike Marinette and Adrien, so Chloe could've gotten the Bee and actually be a good hero and character for it. But that can also come down to preference and how you want Chloe to go.

Adrien could've gotten the Turtle, which I think could've been one of the best miraculous he could've gotten as he naturally likes to be a protector, and this miraculous works off that while also giving him protection. Wayzz also could've maybe addressed Adrien readily sacrificing himself, help him learn to be more cautious instead of rushing in, or at least think and be smart about how you go forward. There's even a possibility of Adrien having Turtle full time, as Nino could share his suspicions with Fu about Gabriel, so Wayzz could be there as a spy to check things out, which would have Adrien eventually get involved in his own plot, but still allow things to be at a slower pace. And as Wayzz, ideally, seems to be serious and dedicated but also playful and open minded, I think he would be very engaging with Adrien, which in turn could mean that when Adrien needs a call out, he would listen to what Wayzz had to say more (as most of the time Adrien ignores what Plagg says).

As for the leads, both would have an equal neutral involvement in the plot that can explain why things don't resolve quickly (looking at you Adrien who won't even ask questions about the suspicious book your father has). Alya would be a hero and lead for glory and self-righteousness, Nino would be to genuinely help others. Neither would have a super close tie to Gabriel, allowing him to sit under their noses for a while.

Also, gosh, you even could've had a lot of fun with color coded rivals/foils/personal antagonists for Alya and Nino.

If you really wanted to do Alya vs Lila, let Lila actually have the Fox or maybe she bought the Fox in Volpina, and this has Alya and Lila having the miraculous the other is color coded for. She could work off being a hero initially for the wrong reasons, just like Alya who starts for the glory too, as well as integrity vs deception.

Something could also be done between Nino vs Felix, with Nino really color coded for Peacock while Felix is color coded for Cat. Could play off both being ambitious to a fault and being selfish and nosy, but Nino cares more for others vs Felix is more exclusive.

And if expanding to others...

Of course could do Marinette vs Chloe if Marinette has the Bee, Chloe could have the Mouse, which could be funny to see Chloe deal with herself. That might humble her.

As for Adrien... could do him and Max being foils, work off Max getting Horse while largely wearing green, and I think Adrien is most color coded for Horse. Could work off both being perfectionist and could delve into the shared interest of gaming, with Max trying to bring out the competitiveness in Adrien. Could be thinking vs action.

Either way, ML is frustrating cause it's a show with potential and great concepts and it's irritating that it got butchered so. And the most frustrating thing is that there is just so many options to how it could've been done better. And kwami swap wise, these are my top two picks that would've been better.

Thank you for coming to my TED talks.

[garfield0-o]

I’ve had a rewrite in my for at least 1 or 2 years when me and a bunch of friends tried to do so together, but we all collectively forgot/lost interest. I may not continue this, but I may do so. I am unsure!!!

[faiirygrahamdevanily]

🦚🐈‍⬛Two characters looking identical save for the hairstyle so they switch places. Both desire to be free but are controlled. One lives in a gilded cage the other one is trapped and has to follow cruel orders all day long. There's bird and butterfly symbolism. There's dog and cat symbolism. While switched one falls in love with the person the other one is supposed to be together with in a arranged relationship. The other one can finally be with the person they actually love although it's a commoner. There's a white haired villain doing a random musical number and later capturing one of the identical looking characters to fulfill their plan. The fact that both applies to the senticousins / miraculous AND barbie princess and the pauper is one of my favorite things!!🧵👑

🦚🐈‍⬛🧵👑 senticousin coded barbie princess and the pauper songs tumblr post

[narusakufantastic]

[festering-bacteria]

Lila, Felicity (Felix, she’s transfem in my au), & Sabrina! (Ik Volpina isn’t an actual miraculous user but it’s the closest I had to one at least until chrysalis’ design is revealed 💋)

[miraculous-metamorphosis]

I kinda remember an episode where there’s an evil copy of Adrien that tries to take his place but in the end he becomes good and becomes an hero…

Maybe it was a prototype of Felix.

Mod Chat Noir- We couldn't find any art of Argos yet... But we found an interesting re-work of the season 1 episode "Copycat"

[miraculous-magicalconnections]

The Chloé Vs Félix Double Standered

Chloé: *had a terrible upbringing which led her to be a bully and proceeded to help a terrorist because the only good person/role model in her life was a bitch*

The show/fans: SHES HORRIBLE!! SHES IRREDEEMABLE!! SHE DESERVED TO BE REPLACED!!! I HATE HER!!

Félix: *had a terrible upbringing which led him to be an anti-social jerk and actively aided a terrorist and the destruction of Paris for his own personal gain*

The show/fans: Hes a baby! He didnt mean it! He deserves to be a hero!

Do you guys see what I'm getting at here? The point of the matter is both of them are horrible people!

Chloé was a bully to try to win her mothers approval, and when the only other good role model in her life just tossed her off to the side with no regrade for her own emotions (especially because Ladybug was actively abusing her power and role as Ladybug) she decided to go to Hawk Moth because he was the one giving her what she wanted! Not to mention he's always been good at manipulating people, so OF COURSE Chloé is going to agree with him!

Félix was abused by his father and was only ever freed when he had died due to using the Peacock Miraculous. He then proceeded to actively HELP A TERRORIST for his own gain! Sure it was for a reason (to keep himself and Adrien safe) but he was the reason for someone to have a mental break, cause hundreds of people to be hurt emotionally and physically, and HE DID NOT CARE for the safety of an entire CITY! Thats not even mentioning the fact that he KILLED THE ENTIRE HUMAN RACE!?!

Point is: If Chloé, a mentally and emotionally abused 14 year-old who only ever wanted to be loved, is irredeemable then so is Félix, given he didn't have a valid reason to betray Ladybug as if he truly wanted himself and Adrien to be safe, all he had to do was tell Ladybug who Shadow Moth was.

Don't get me wrong, I adore both of these characters, but if you claim Chloé can't be redeemed but will defend Félix, then you're holding them to a double standard. The same could be said the other way around.

I'm not saying that they both deserve to be thrown into the sun or both should just get off with only a slap on the wrist; but I AM saying that I hate seeing people claim one is better than the other when it's just not true.

The show either should've given Félix a proper punishment for not only aiding Shadow Moth but, and I cannot stress this enough, KILLING THE ENTIRE HUMAN RACE. Or they shouldn't have gotten rid of Chloé's character development.

On top of that, at least season 2/3 Chloé had SOME kind of character arc, Félix just kind of... existed? He didn't really prove himself to be better besides explaining why he did what he did. (Which, again, both he and Chloé don't have a valid excuse for what they did)

But anyway, small promo: In my rewrite Chloé's getting a redemption but she WILL face consequences for her actions and Félix will just not be that horrible of a person, so he doesn't technically need a redemption.

[lucydoodlessometimes]

happy bunny and egg day! have a bunny to celebrate

(Lapin Blanc is my fanon rewrite version of Felix! theres marginally more of him on my blog <3)

[lemoonthetwink]

Felix sticker

Small but deadly man

[sethdomain]

ive come to a hprrohble conclusion

[halfling-myth-lady]

know what, please ask me act my miraculous Rewrite.

just send in the name of a character and I'll give you a small drabble/oneshot with that character either as the center or whose povs we follow. it can be any character but I'll put in the most important ones in the tags.