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this one panel in issue #50 and it's, like, not THAT bad alright
fuck it im tired and had a long day this is my treat to myself. im talking about that panel. yes, THAT panel. which one?
THIS ONE. alrighty this is off the cuff and terrible, lets go.
so this panel isnt like, that bad in context when it comes to Sonic. i think specifically "ive made peace with enough enemies to know there is a better way" is a really interesting line here, because it calls back to the amount of times that the "villain" hes fought has just been a person whos hurting, and how hes been able to help those people. it makes sense that eventually hes more keen on trying to figure out someones whole story before deciding if theyve gotta go (which is rare).
but i want to talk about the FRAMING of this panel, and specifically the larger context of this issue in particular. theres a lot of flip-flopping in perspectives. usually, IDW is told through Sonic's perspective (loosely, this kind of thing is up to interpretation a lot), but in issue 50, it switches rapidly between four different groups -- Sonic and Surge, Tails and Kit, Eggman and Starline, and Belle and Metal. within these groups, the perspective its being told from changes a few times, but never as much as Sonic and Surge's do
i actually love these two when they interact as a storyteller myself, and one that has handled scripts too often for my own liking. Sonic and Surge do this thing where they push and pull the pacing of the script to fit their motives -- Surge keeps trying to escalate things, whenever shes in a panel everything starts pushing rapidly and it feels like the panels are tumbling off the page. when Sonic does anything, though, its slow and deliberate. hes having fun fighting, sure, but he can very much tell that Surge is trying to kill him and hes not having any of that. Sonic keeps things slow and focused, Surge tries to push things faster and unfocused. i could get into how this reflects her motivations and stuff but thats not what this is about i already lost track of what i was talking about fuck hang on
ok so. Surge knows shes supposed to be Sonic, to be BETTER than Sonic. its all she knows, really, and thats the problem. shes traumatized and full of rage and Sonic has been put on this high pedestal, not just by her, but by everyone. she cannot stand this.
this panel is how SURGE sees Sonic, specifically the composition. hes shrouded in light and physically above her -- its not even that subtle of a metaphor, they use it all the time in idw.
the entire overpowered saga shows Surge clawing for control of herself, her life, her freedom... this issue sets all that up in the main story. the way Sonic is framed here isnt how he sees himself at all. weve seen him do this exact same thing from his own perspective before, where everyone is on even ground. he doesnt see himself as above anyone, this instance of him being depicted as such isnt alluding to how Sonic feels about himself, its how Surge feels about Sonic.
and, look, its not the most well-done in the world. this issue has a whole host of problems, evident by the constant switching of focus from one group to a next (a problem that i think they did better on in the Phantom Rider saga). i literally forgot about Belle and Metal in this issue bc theres just so much more going on, i wouldve loved for them to slow things down a bit, maybe splitting it into two issues, but hey, what can you do, yk?
as an aside, i think its really weird how people narrow in on this specific panel of Sonic as being "so out of character", which i sorta like, 30% agree with (i think some phrasing could be better), and then ignore the page right after it...
...in which he pretty much says "you dont get freedom if youre gonna be a problem". funnily enough, on twitter i have this flow chart saved whenever i need a quick guide on Sonics morality and stuff, its really not that complicated
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none of this is new imo, we see he has the same philosophy in sa1 and satbk. Chaos was blinded by rage and pain after being trapped for thousands of years RIGHT after they were attacked by the echidnas. Merlina was so scared of death (implied to be because she had lost family members and wasnt able to cope with it well) that she became a monster in an attempt to never let anything change ever again. these arent very different stories in my head i guess, just cases of Sonic seeing people who are hurting and doing his best to free them from that.
uhhhh anyways. all this is disorganized i forgot what i was talking about like 5 times while writing this but. people on twitter are ripping into this issue again. like its a b tier issue stop acting like its an f yk Q_Q i will defend anything if people are too mean tbh
thanks for making it this far if you read all this. i love idw a lot and i think that it does have some flaws, theyre all really blown out of proportion.
have a great day/afternoon/evening wherever you are yall :) bye bye
#sonic analysis#i guess#sonic idw#sonic the hedgehog#surge the tenrec#<eh idk i feel like surge fans could back me up on this?#or critique me if need be#its been a while since i really thought about surge a good bit. shes very interesting but also so complicated that i dont think i could eve#do her justice in like 10k words let alone like. less than 300 lol#ummm please dont bully me for this its just my onion thumbsup. if you wanna have a civil discussion about it tho you can come to my ask box#im nice
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Maki week, day 4 — Guns / Knives
Something about Maki being blinded by false memories hatred and desperation in Ch.5
And something about Maki and Kokichi being similar in a lot of ways, both like reflections of each other.
#my art#artists on tumblr#art#danganronpa#danganronpa v3 killing harmony#danganronpa v3#drv3#drv3 spoilers#ndrv3 spoilers#maki harukawa#drv3 maki#kokichi ouma#kokichi oma#drv3 kokichi#i was considering fully covering her eyes with the knife but didn't like how it looked#and the composition looked better this way#anyway do you guys know that i love chapter 5?#i was gonna draw everything in time but my body betrayed me yesterday#so i guess i'm gonna continue to be late#makiweek2024
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saw some mangy dog on the outskirts of town
#my art#oc#els#werewolf#furry#anthro#illustration#you would not believe the hassle this gave me lmao....i want to do more with it but i have to wipe my hands of it#idk if this looks good but it has to be finished i have to be finished with it#WORD OF ADVICE that allows a small glimpse into the horrible time i've had: PLAN YOUR COMPOSITIONS#GOD. initial drawing of els: 1-2 hours at most. trying to find a composition that doesn't suck: 100000 hours and ongoing#i think my problem is this els looks better zoomed in but finding a way to keep it zoomed in....mission impossible#i love this els face though. i will admit. i had to persevere to get SOMETHING that at least vaguely worked so i could show off this els#okay. okay. anyway it's greengage season again. big ups to greengages for making life just that much brighter#also the owls are goin crazyyy outside my window rn they are speaking and i am listening. in a delirium
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The stain of red that colors the pavement Painted with blood of somebody you love (x)
Inspired by Banana Fish's 2nd ending (that's where the lyrics is from too. Lyrics made me think of smallidarity and the wheat field made me think of bread bridge. sigh)
Im done with banana fish now. totally
#Was gonna give Jimmy his glasses but I felt it messed with the colors and composition too much but its finee he's still bad boy#although looking at it now I think it would look way better if I'd put Joel more to the left. girl the composition..... oh well#tubby art#smallidarity#trafficshipping#trafficblr
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Dora-posting
Lyrics from the second pic are from "Apricots" by Findlay
#disco elysium#my art#catori draws#hdb#de harry#de dora#dora ingerlund#dolores dei#harry du bois#been frustrated with the way I color my stuff recently#idk it just looks really...bland? muddy? to me#I want the colors to be a bit more expressive? or complex maybe#this is a bit better but I don't think I'm where I wanna be at yet in regards to color composition#described#image desc in alt text
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riz redraw!
side-by-side comparison under the cut :-)
#i didn't try very hard to mimic the vibe or tone or whatever but ehhhh#riz gukgak#fantasy high#dimension 20#d20#fanart#my art#illustration#i believeee that this riz is the very first piece of art i ever posted to this blog#back in ye olden days of three and a half years ago#look at how i've improved!!#the colours are way more cohesive#the general shape and body language is less stiff and more stylized#the composition in general is better imo#and you can see i've gotten a way better handle on perspective when you look at the floor and how riz is positioned#all in all. feeling good about this :-)#i am returning to my fantasy high roots
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A bunch of webcomic Ralseis! I've been wanting to do fanart for all of these comics for a while and I've got an upcoming page of my comic that requires a mix of styles/shading, so I thought this would be good practice!
Eldritchrune by @lynxgriffin
Looking Glasses by @ferronickel
The Chara Timeline by @lilybug-02
Reconnecting by @purplebehittindifferent
Twin Runes by @akanemnon
Flat colors under the cut because I think you can see some of the stylistic differences better without shading.
#deltarune#utdr#looking glasses#ralsei#ferrousart#sorry recon!ralsei and tr!ralsei I think you're probably not that short but the composition worked better this way#this was so fun! it was really cool trying to figure out everyone's styles#there are bits of all of them that I really enjoyed getting to play around with#and working out ways for my absurd lighting to work in different styles was a fun challenge#I still need to do proper fanart for some of these comics but at least this is a start#lg!rals looks a bit uncanny next to all these cartoony styles. I'm glad er!ralsei is looming back there to balance things out
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shoutout to his “RCG3” vanity plate!!!
#in many ways he would never#like if he were to have a vanity plate it would be like GLNDWR but#still very excited for all the tiny silly details like this. genuinely the best part of comics#graphic novels#also this composition kind makes it look like ronan is the main character and i’m curious if that was intentional#in like a marketing way? cuz everyone luvs ronan?#but in general. god it’s so much better than the normal cover#would’ve loved something blue centric… it’s ok… at least she’s on it!
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okay yeah yeah villain but the diagram is so cool you guys
Wall I made for this (featuring: Russian, Spanish, toki pona, DNA code, women's script, a few alphabets, some geometry and arithmetic, and a language that I invented, among other things. I had fun with this)
#what is composition anyway#ugh this is such poor spacing. COMPOSITION AAAA#but hey! it's the only thing I've drawn that looks BETTER when you zoom in!#you know. except for the image quality. um. I'm sure there's a solution to that and I just don't know it#oh well. here have crazy guy#but anyway yeah I've been rereading and I just couldn't resist#maybe more coming? maybe? MAYBE.#brandon sanderson#words of radiance#arts arcanum#rhythm of war#stormlight#my art#way of kings#cosmere#cosmere fanart#taravangian#stormlight archive#wok#wor#oathbringer#idiot king#is that a tag?#the diagram
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@glitchysquidd pov: bunny man giving you a lecture on how to PROPERLY repair animatronics
#fnaf#springtrap#frighteningly intriguing#william afton#dave miller#fnaf 3#cloud creations#yes i know he's kinda backwards but the composition looked better flipped so i just kept it that way#can you tell i adore sassy screwdriver pointing#style is heavily inspired by skeletoninthemelonland
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"I like eating my meals here sometimes. That exotic scent..."
#my art#digital art#harli art#gnosia fanart#gnosia#remnan gnosia#this composition has actually been in my head for like a year and i finally put it down in a way that looked right#i just posted a bunch of art on my bluesky page and looking at some of it made me go 'yknow what i can do better'#its not perfect but its the best illustration ive done in a while imo
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Excited that I can finally share the finalized cover for Sableheart, my upcoming webcomic.
It's about an alien knight who sold his soul to interdimensional demons ending up in the spacefaring future, and fighting for survival in the unfamiliar realm of space as he tries to escape their grasp. He eventually finds it to be a fight for his lost happiness and those he loves as well, as he forges strong bonds with others along the way.
Contains: violence/blood, heavy themes, occasional strong language.
I've made a lot of progress with this project lately and I'm excited to share/launch it when I've got a backlog of pages ready to go. There's drama. There's funny alien demons. There's ace rep. There's existential terror. And a few other things maybe.
#i feel very good about this project and the progress i've made. i feel like i'm finally approaching my creative endeavors 'the right way'#the script progress was going so well that i started worrying about cover art and wanted to have one ready to go#i don't want to talk about how many drafts and composition ideas i went through before finding one that spoke to me LMAO#i wanted this weird artsy looking direction for my covers#weeeee i'm hoping to have it ready to go soonish but i know better than to rush myself too hard these days#what's important is i'm working at a good steady pace which i believe i am. consistency over speed was an important realization#sableheart#oc: arctos#oc: cruxia#wildeart
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re:kinder doodle dump part three !!! drawings with wildly different moods www they are more polished ans complete than my other doodles because. why not🥺!!!
#re:kinder#rekinder#fanart#ryou re:kinder#mami re:kinder#takumiel re:kinder#yuuichi mizuoka#i will now provide commentary ...#the first one i did was the takumiel one lets start with him#that one was done in ms paint MERELY for the sake of me making a speedpaint in the style of 2010's speedpaints#turned out great . put some nightcore on it... not placing it here because tumblr does not take it kindly to me putting speedpaints here#(im still petty about that)#the chie one as you can see. is not a line from re:kinder. it is a line from “If...” another game by parun#where the girl who says it has the same sprite as chie. so i drew chie based on the line. chie in the multiverse...#mami was because i just dont draw her enough for being one of the characters with a drawn portrait and why not#ryou candy because i can ive been meaning to draw him more properly for a while outside of silly little projects i just never got to it#so there he is with the layout of clip studio paint because the drawing looked bland. and i didnt know what to use as a background#i do not use clip studio on light mode. i just thought itd look better with the background. all for composition sake...!!!#now about the yuu drawing i did that this morning its funny actually... if you see it that way i prefer seeing things as comedic if possible#today's morning dread would simply not leave so i decided to draw rekinder because its my go to for whenever im feeling low#and i decided. i will channel my feeling into this drawing because i can i will channel it outwards so i dont have to deal with it#so at first i was very dreadful and sad drawing. but then as i was finishing it#and the drawing looked more gloomy than it had ever had I HAD GLEE ONCE MORE!! IT WORKED!! i did channel it outwards im a genius#so i totally would recommend if you dont want to deal with dread and are in a state where you can draw#you should make your drawing feel it so you dont have to. its great#its like when one manifests their period cramps onto goku from dragon ball z.... at least i do that#i do love goku. what kind of latinoamerican would i be if i didnt id be a disgrace but im not strong enough i know he can fight it
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PARO(Parvati Sinha) from A Shade Darker Thank Red by @morally-gayy
#my camera is so dead istg i hate it#it looks way better irl TwT#plus i need so much work on body compositions and shadows ahkfhkgjfhg#but i enjoyed painting this a lot (my fear to paint dynamic poses and saree is very much decreased lol it was sure a challenge)#it turned out pretty well ig idk? anyways#now if i must say everyone seeing this go read the series#its so niceeeeeeeeeeeeehkjhkjhlkjhgklf#zeuge draws
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traditional gouache mixed with digtial painting of gerard <3
#this is a digital editing#of one of my gouache paintings#from last year#i just get composition better now#it was practice for my photography class#with editing pictures#and i didnt like how it looked to i edited it all lol#i get drama better now#mcr#my chemical romance#my chem#mcr fanart#mcr art#gerard way#my chem art#gerard way art#painting#my art#gouache painting#mcr return#mcr reunion
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people who kiss
#tonytxt#my art#htf#petunia htf#flaky htf#flaky x petunia#happy tree friends#i think im getting better at drawing more than one character per composition#been inspired by my friend who does a lot of ship art and i was liek . yknow what . i guess thats a way to improve it LOL#also yeah petunia's tank top looks weird but oh well
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