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Rayman Fan Characters: Kahli The God-blessed
this characterās story includes major spoilers to the events of games especially around hoodlum havoc.
this is a VERY long post:
Kahli classified as a plot important fan character within Rayman Retold but she was scheduled to come later down the timeline, specifically during and after the events of Rayman 3 Hoodlum Havoc. she appears quite often after the in game events, and does have significance within certain story plots.
Kahli was the lady that would act as advisor for the knaaren royalty. she was especially close with Gumsiās mother, who was the previous ruler of the Knaaren, their queen. Kahli is also one of the most important knaaren ladies in the social status. She is the lady that was the mid-wife for any knaaren females during childbirth.Ā
Knaaren women have extreme difficulty with childbirth. The norm in most cases is that the mothers will die. Knaaren are not born with their fabled invincibility and grow into it, so children are vulnerable.
Khali is a soothsayer. Knaaren soothsayers tend to act as voices for the Leptys and a small number could foretell events in the future. Kahli could communicate with any of the Rayman universe gods telepathically. Not just the Leptys! She could communicate with gods like Polokus, and Jano the first nightmare would constantly reach out to try to corrupt this woman into his puppet.Ā
Her soothsaying allows her to peer into events that have taken place in the past, or are planned to take place in the future. She has a little spot within the ruins that she uses for these event scryings. Normally she does not tend to get involved on the events that are planned to happen, however it doesnāt mean she never does. she DOES get involved and tries to change, but it really depends on the circumstances. She canāt change the past, but she can try to change the future ones. Most times she allows the event to happen and is forced to suffer in silence over it. She gets a lot of fingers pointed at her going āWHY DIDN'T YOU STOP THIS!?ā This treatment has lead to her as coming off as a grouch or uninterested in interacting socially.Ā
When Gumsiās mother passed away due to the complications their kind have with childbirth, his father never came forward to claim him. Kahli searched for him, but he was never found. His fate is currently unknown. A massive line started so others could try to adopt Gumsi due to his status as the next in line for the throne. When Kahli made it known that she had intentions of adopting the child herself, she became unchallenged and Gumsiās care was given to her uncontested. Kahli adopted Gumsi as her grandson.
Gumsi calls her Mee-Maw. He gushes over her being the coolest grandma in the universe. Always goes on and on about her powers and abilities. Gumsi admired her more than he did with Reflux, who was another of his idols.
Gumsi knows the details of what happened during his birth. He is incredibly protective of his Mee-maw and will threaten to fight you if you claim you are seeking her guidance out.
She might not be able to die from physical means or age, but sheās not un-killable. Her weakness is consumption of poisonous materials. She has been victim to assassination attempts via poisoning before and has survived. Gumsi was forced to witness the poisoning assassination attempts.
Gumsi does NOT react well when he knows his Mee-maw is in distress. Gumsi is a child; A very emotionally fueled child. These attempts have left Gumsi with trauma. His greatest fear is something happening to Kahli that leads to her death, and him being alone. It scares him to death. When Kahli was poisoned and they were trying to cure her, he would go to her side, crying, screaming, begging her to not leave him. She has survived every attempt.
Kahli later made the decision to gift Gumsi the scepter of Leptys. It originally belonged to her. Kahli was going to raise Gumsi with a close connection with the gods, especially Leptys. It was her way of passing down her legacy to him. This also helps Gumsi with combating his fears of one day being alone.
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Kahli and Polokus are considered the bro-sis of the god/mortal regard. One of their gags are when Murfyās going off at a person and is making jabs about appearances. She just looks all annoyed, but gets an "Aha!" moment likeĀ āWait! I have just received a message from Polokus to pass along to you, Murfyā Murfy grins goingĀ āWhatās that, Grandma?ā and Kahli proceeds to smack Murfy hard enough tto knock him out of the air. When Murfy goes complaining to Polokus, the bubble dreamer just looks annoyed, bubbling away on his pipe, and respondsĀ āIn this household, we give thanks to big noses!āĀ
Kahliās humor can sometimes come off on the more dark or crass side, sometimes at her own expense. One of her go to personal jokes is when she sees something she just wants to forget is she will just make a comment āYou know. some days i wish i had dementia. I want to forget I ever saw thisāĀ
Sheās been witness to so many mothers dying, and the fate of babies that are seconds born becoming questioned. This lead to her completely swearing off the possibility of one day producing young. Her position was too important for that. Now she can no longer produce young. She has become infertile due to her age.
Kahli is considered ageless. No one knows if this is true, but she has lived to be at least one thousand years old. She is elderly, but still in shape.Ā
Khali has incredible magic abilities. These abilities surpassed Reflux in power. She could have easily taken out Reflux for the title of champion, she simply chose not to. She already had enough on her plate. She NEVER liked reflux. At all. Sheās never been fond of pit fighting in general but attends matches because Gumsi oversees them and is fond of watching them. She also knew Gumsi idolized Reflux.
Kahli ventures out of the ruins frequently due to her often being called to attend serious matters over in the fairy council. It's why Kahli tends to use her hooded robe as her main attire. She also brings jars of moisturizer with her when she leaves the ruins to tend to her skin in the event it starts to dry out and crack.
Kahli has a voice head canon too. Females don't have that gravelly accent that the knaaren tend to have, but their voices are still a bit on the deep side.
the voice head canon for Kahli here is a woman named Renee Victor.
Renee victor has been known for voices such as Abuelita in the movie Coco. but the reason i did her was for her role within The Elder Scrolls: Skyrim. She was the woman that did the Argonian females such as Keerava, Deeja, And the marriable Female Argonian, Shahvee When you hear Kahli speak, she tends to sound like this:
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Bonus to the re-uploaded version of this post: A commission I ordered from user @nausinoisette a long time ago that features Kahli for reference.
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Hereās where things dig into her part within Rayman Retold:
Andre and Reflux were able to steal the scepter from Gumsi during Rayman 3 Hoodlum Havoc. How did that happen without Mee-maw knowing? Kahli tells people this often: She does not instantly know about the future events. She has to peer into these events herself. She must have been curious and go to the process of peering in. SHE DID NOT KNOW THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPEN BECAUSE SHE NEVER PEERED INTO THIS SPECIFIC EVENT.
Reflux and Andre attempted to take the scepter from Gumsi by force.
Knaaren are dangerous if you make them mad. They go into full rage and blood lust that they can level entire buildings, and the most dangerous is a knaaren parent that knows their child is threatened.
Kahli could have EASILY murdered Reflux and Andre. They knew she could. They planned for that. All they had to do was have Reflux hold up Gumsi by the collar of his robe. The child was failing at trying to strike at them. Andre offered Kahli a deal. If Kahli let them take the scepter and go with their plan, they would not kill Gumsi.
Gumsi still had not grown into his invincible status, so they could easily carry that threat out. Kahli could only growl and she handed over the scepter in exchange for her grandsonās life. She lives in regret to this day that she allowed what happened to the Leptys to occur, but Gumsi is the most important person in her life. Even more important than her faith to the Leptys.
Reflux is of the deceased status after he crystalized and broke in the final fight within Hoodlum Havoc. Kahli cursed him to be forever known as Reflux the Blasphemer, and the knaaren call him that to this day. The scepter was recovered by Kahli after Refluxās defeat and is back in Gumsiās possession.
Rayman officially meets her after the events of Hoodlum Havoc. Rayman would often go to visit Gumsi and just pal around the kid. Gumsi introduces his Mee-maw to Rayman all starry-eyed like āISN'T MY MEE-MAW COOLā
Rayman has likeā¦ 3 different people he considers moms at this point in his life. Kahli became the woman that he would call āGrandmaā affectionately. Kahli loves this and just starts chuckling going āI love this kid.ā
Rayman ends up rubbing off on this woman in a positive fashion. her normally grumpy and lack of social interaction improve during their interactions and she becomes a woman of jokes and all smiles.
#Rayman#Rayman Retold#Rayman Fan Characters#Kahli the God-Blessed#Very Long Post#Reuploads#I had to completely re upload the post since stuff got cut off after I rebranded to the fun house.#I changed it up from the original quite a bit#Such as fixing grammar#Paragraph adjustments#and the inclusion of the commission I ordered years ago as a reference#The post was still on my personal blog#But I decided to completely move it over to this blog#the old version is now gone as far as I know
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I'm watching this video on the guy who came up with the concept of third places and this is nuts where on earth did he get this from. "Eroticism is almost always absent in all-male groups" source: my beautiful mind
#the misogyny of his theory was interesting too because it's like paragraphs upon paragraphs of bemoaning how men have lost#camaraderie because their bitch wives want them to be at home and force them to domesticate the man cave or w/e. and then when the question#is 'what are women's third spaces' it's like oh they're good at home. like of course women being isolated & lonely is the natural order!#oh yeah the point of all this was that lack of third spaces = ill adjusted men = more homosexuality = bad
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TUMBLR ATE THE ASK WHEN I SAVED IT AS A DRAFT SO IM SORRY IT WONT NOTIFY Sorry for taking so long to reply! If there is ONE thing I need to stay with you from this, it's study your own body. Its the fastest, most accurate, most easily available way to study anatomy. Crouch, touch your shoulders, hug your legs, raise your arms above your head and try to notice the differences in size between limbs. Put your hand on your face. Look at your reflection in a mirror/window. Especially since we are talking about proportions, those are about the same in all bodytypes and need just minor tweaking to get the feel of a different build. And if you dont draw your bodytype, who will? Disclaimer: I'm very honoured you asked me for tips, but I usually dont think abt proportions, since I internalize the things I learn by observing, so its a bit hard to put into diagrams. I will do my best!
Since the ask is pretty general, I just tried to give the first advice that comes to mind.
When drawing the body standing up, the top of the hip is the middle of the entire height. Also when standing, the elbows would align with the waist and the wists with the crotch.
Try touching your shoulder with the hand of the same side. The forearm is shorter than the upper arm, but combined with the hand it exceeds the length. Same for legs (thighs are the longest part) when the foot is pointed down. When you measure from the base of the foot though, the knee is around the middle. When the arm is held above the head, it can bend at the elbow around 90 degrees and then it will touch the top of the head with the forearm. A hand will take up the face of a person, from chin to eyebrow tips, but hand sizes can be pretty varied.
The bodies can have different muscle and fat masses and be exagerated, but the ratios above will still be about the same.
Also when drawing sitting down and hollding the legs , I've found its easy to kinda align the collarbone with the top of the knees (this works because the spine is bent so the torso has less length than when standing). The tips of the limbs (hands and feet) can be exagerated a bit bigger if you are unsure (or just want to) and they still look correct, whereass being drawn smaller makes them feel off.
Personally I draw hands MUCH bigger than I should because I like the way it looks, it is very much not the right proportion. I also tend to stretch the bodies much more, but it is very important you understand how bodies work and what the proportions are before you start stretching and exagerating the limbs. This is already my interpretation so studying real life is better still. I hope this makes sense, I'm bad at explaining Thank you for the ask, and have fun creatingš
#also i screenshot ur ask bcause it stroke my ego n i wanted to brag#asks#anonymous#art tips#anatomy#also the torso is kinda small here but shhhh#i hope this is decent#ALSO i dont believe in gender you can adjust these depending on who you are drawing but no proportion is gender locked thats just silly#Oh oh forgot but personally i do tend to align the shoulder width with the hips too#you can exagerate this too obv#also I learned this anatomy alongside horse anatomy so its such a mess in my brain Im trying to explain it normally#me normally:...#me when i get asked sth art related : a billion paragraphs
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without a doubt the funniest genre of post online is when someone introduces themselves as a chill and/or sweet individual only to follow with a never ending list of DNIs
#misc etc#āim super well adjusted and fun to hang with btw dont breath near me if you like *insert media of choice*#preaching about love and acceptance while the next paragraph has casual threats#truly my fave
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Iām pretty sure that I am supposed to be writing a paragraph on nature but nature=poetry in my mind
so the poem is below the cut
There are wilting flowers on my nightstand
The leaves fall off the trees outside
warm colors can be seen all around
Fall has begun to sprout
The rose bushes in the yard are losing their petals
a reddish pink color litters the yellowing grass
Everything is dying
Everyone is excited
The birds have started to flee
My heart is racing
Time always passes too quickly
When the world rotates
and the seasons change
the days grow shorter
And the hours move slow
Sooner rather than later
snow will come to be
coating the ground
while weāre both asleep
covering everything
Forgotten by summer and Fall
itās a winter wonderland for all
Waiting for things to stay the same
Itās like playing a losing game
We arenāt made for change
But we were never meant to stay the same
The seasons come and go
and then come once again
I long for whatever comes before
Iām missing summer before it has even gone
I miss what I have long before itās lost
Where are the pools and summer fun
where are the kids playing in the yard at noon
No more flower reaching for the skies
Now they are pushed down by gravity
drooping from the weight
@local-lover-boy @urlocalmanicpixiedreamboy
#I got an 88 after some adjustments to it but it was supposed to be a paragraph#my poetry#poetry#writers and poets#poem#edgar allen poe#original poem#poets on tumblr
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told my professor iāll totally be able to have a draft of this paper by tomorrow and now i have to actually meet with him tomorrow to show it but ive only got topic sentences for the rest of the paper barring four paragraphs so guess whoās probably gonna have dreams of an ominous raven that only chants ānevermoreā when i ask it about my ex tonight
#this is the poe paper btw#and tbf he did say that itād be fine if i only got to 6-7 pages instead of the final 8-10 and my introduction is like 3 pages#so in the worst case if i canāt chug a bit more out after spanish tomorrow i should hopefully be at that#because i am very long-winded in paragraphs lmao#oh and btw the draft tomorrow deadline is actually an extension it was supposed to be due today š#but i was fucking grinding on that stonewall presentation for most of the past week#but he said it was fine actually and that he wonāt mind adjusting the final deadline for us#i am at the mercy of this man hereās hoping the english ātism to ātism connection goes well at our conference tmrrw š#grace being stupid#text post#personal
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i am officially, FINALLY all caught up again in both the manga and the anime for bsd and OH BOY there are thoughts and opinions but also WHO CARES because my tags are finally FREE to be unfiltered
#hnnnnnn#i am SO happy#i am BEYOND happy#i love the arc even if i complain about it a lot#but i am also hnnnnnnā¦ā¦.displeasedā¦ā¦..with a few things#the anime fr about to catch these hands#i already KNEW they were rushing it from the few episodes i had watched#but the anime is usually SO good at pacing#that i fully trusted that certain things would be slowed down for significance/impact/etc#but instead the pacing just stayed WAY too fast for me#and they ended up cutting SO many small moments that had SO much importance like im going crazy about some of them#some of the lines they cutā¦ā¦.#or even adjusted slightly that it drew away the impact#ugh i KNOW there was a LOT to balance and a LOT of content to get through#but i am a little disappointed that so many emotional scenes were what ended up suffering for it#this is why i donāt usually like reading the manga for animes i watch#i always end up getting disappointed by the limitations of adaptations#that being said though regardless of general limitations i donāt think some of the rushing is above criticism#and i am going to go and eat glass while seething over the particularly offensive rushing/cutsš¤#OKAY DONE thatās the last iāll say about it i would just go crazy if i didnāt vocalize it somewhere#in general i was VERY happy with the arc in both the manga and the anime i have SO much love for it#definitely a favorite for me#and THAT concludes my very vague no spoiler review#i swear one of these days my self control is going to snap#and im just going to start posting my full essays and content analysis shit about everything i watch here#but for now weāre safe and all my rants will stay spoiler free tag paragraphs instead godblessš
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sigh
#more than anything i just miss being your friend#i want to talk to you all the time and i wish you wanted to talk to me too#about normal things and funny things. i miss my friend i just miss my friend#it didnāt end on bad terms i know and thatās good but every time we do talk itās like trying to catch a really slippery rock or something#maybe not catch. just. i have to refrain from sending you insane paragraphs because i catch myself because i know itās weird and not cool#and itās weird and not cool to do this too but like. what can i do#i just wish we could be friends again. the void gets smaller every day but then..#i just wanna tell you everything i wanna tell you about my friends and my life and what iām doing and i wanna know what youāre doing and#whatās new . and itās stupid because i never did that before . but i guess these things make you realize a lot#and itās like#i donāt Know whatās okay. i donāt know . i donāt know if i can make a joke i donāt Know if youāre ignoring me on purpose#and itās fine if you are i know you donāt want to talk to me ever again probably. and itās fine because iām well adjusted and i understand#and i respect you and iām honoring that. but i also just. can you blame me
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"I want this character to get therapy" why so they're boring?
#inb4 the six paragraph reply: characters who are well adjusted do not move the plot forward#at least not in a way that matters#80% of huge plot points in stories could be avoided if the people involved were well adjusted#that doesn't make a good story though#paska
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today's exam was good. restored a tiny bit of my faith in humanity
#that's what happens when a professor is a human being with emotions and understanding for another person#everyone is happy people pass or people will retake and pass on the retake#mr soil mechanics guy why can't you teach also other subjects#the durability of materials was a fucking joke#and PSB that i'll take on Wednesdays makes me unable to sleep at night#but it's the final boss it's the only thing that's left#the best scenario would be to absolutely obliterate the exam and get full points#gosh the satisfaction would be so amazing#but rule 1 of civil engineering studies do not be greedy when it comes to exams so a 3.0 will be perfectly enough for me#while i still remember i gotta do the surveys on lectures#i gotta write a whole asa essay on one guy in particular#dude failed my friend because she hadn't adjust one paragraph properly#and kept on being a sexist mysoginist and racist during the whole semester#fucking insane when after two girls ask where is one dude they have labs with he suggests they're looking for him to fuck#writing complaints probably won't get him fired but it's better than not doing anything
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anyway I do thing itās pretty funny that sister started out the fic not really thinking thereād be romance and that itād just be a ghost story and Iām in the background frothing at the mouth like ITāS A LOVE STORY!!!!! I Always Win
#writing ramble#not mine but yknow#anyway WHATS more romantic than a mutual haunting#writing paragraphs of comments in the drafts suggesting how to adjust the trajectory of relationship development#This Is My Domain#editing tag
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Got my employment contract and it sounds so annoying already
#im selling my body and soul to serve the company#for minimum wage#and there's some really sloppy mistakes in there too#they didn't even get the paragraphs in order#they go 9 10 11 12 11 14#get it together#and one paragraph just says 'the employee has to undergo an exam upon request' and while this is infuriating enough#someone didn't even proofread that sentence because it doesn't make any sense grammatically#and the beginning and the end of the sentence don't match#you'd either have to adjust the beginning or leave out a word in the end in order to make sense#and that's currently bothering me the most because wtf this is a legal document and you cannot even proofread it#if i make an mistake like this im sure id get some very angry feedback#also decided that i don't want the job badly enough to undergo anything i deem unnecessary#im sure it's nothing dramatic but if they wanna do something i don't want ill accept getting fired lol#also gotta inquire about whether it's okay for me to have another mini job in April and May or if they're against it#('the employee has to dedicate their entire work performance to the company and has to get permission to have any#other paid or unpaid (!) commitments including volunteer work')#(what. should i also ask whether i can function as a 'buddy' for international students since it's a commitment and not technically#free time?? (i understand the not having other paid jobs part but UNPAID stuff? like it's any of their business. killing them honestly)#anyway#i'll shut up now#(my mother has been feeling sick and last year this also ended up in Me throwing up for 3 days straight#and guess what#i can see how tonight is gonna go ā” i will be complaining ā” (not me literally wishing for something like this when i had my#little ed relapse recently. im sorry body. i take it back. this sucks so bad i do not actually want it)#vois screams
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I'm struggling so much with how to start chapter 3 of can you feel the sun.....ive spent (checks notes) 2?? Days??? Just staring at the same three sections because the pacing feels so wrong to me but ive kind of put myself in a Situationā¢ here so. Ugh. Gonna have to rewrite already š
#sighs heavily#maybe i'll open up a separate doc and see how the slower version goes because i have been thinking about it#but i really dont want to spend more time in octovern than i have to. i want them to go already šš#but the current version i have is way too fast i feel like i need to give them time to adjust before throwing even more changes at them#being a writer is so fun! i say through frustrated tears and gritted teeth#jk i do love it but when i get stuck like this its The Worst.#anyway i just needed to rant </3 none of my friends have watched/read trigun so i cant ask for their opinions sadly šš«#the worst part is i have paragraphs i really like in both sections that i dont think i'll be able to keep in the slower ver#without it being awkward :c oh well. im sure ill figure something out
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okay naturally my so-calledĀ āficletā (the sheer hubris of thinking i could go sub-1k words) has turned into something that will likely sit around the 6k mark instead
#it is also breaking my whole heart to write bc this is very much an alternate ending to the fic#but the ava x lilith x bea vibe is really fucking gorgeous#why did i decide to do this to myself?#on the other hand#i have ended up reading the entire 'magnetic compass adjustment handbook' from the national geospatial-intelligence agency#which is FASCINATING#but also for the sake of one goddamn paragraph casper get it together bro#avatrice star wars au#the au of the au#it is okay to heckle me for this
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*bashing creative slump with a big stick* go!! Away!!! Free!! My!! Ideas!! >:(
#captainderyn rambles#all the ideas no ability to do them lol#sketches turn out awful and paragraphs will not be written y a y š#itās probably just because I started my new job full time this week#so itās adjusting to a new schedule and commute but still#frustrating as fuck to have all my ideas pinging around
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You know you're a nerd when you're switching all your stories from Microsoft Word to Libre Writer, and you notice that the lettering looks slightly different despite being in the same font and size, so you do a little screenshotting and zooming to figure out what the difference is.
#top is MW bottom is LW#also I didn't realize how picky I am about page and line/paragraph spacing until I had to adjust LW's to match MW's#the one thing I can't figure out is why on JUST ONE of my lines one word is at the end instead of being at the beginning of the next one#but it's the same way on Docs too so idk Word is the odd man out on that one#this is what procrastination looks like#writer problems
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