#I change the characters and what their actual backstory is around a lot
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Thinking about: two characters getting sent to an alternate dimension right after their selves in that dimension (who are much older than they are) are killed, so everyone thinks that instead of dying, the event somehow regressed them into their younger selves
Due to how terrifying everyone comes across to them in the new universe, they just go along with it, hoping no one knew their other selves well enough to know that these new people are actually new people and not just younger versions of the people they know
Turns out, in this universe, theyâre mortal enemies
In the middle of a space war
This is nowhere close to how their original universe was.
#convoluted setup because I wanna think about that specific angst and drama in SU#where everyone thinks of St*ven as Ros*/P*nk Diamond#but heâs his own separate person#and I also wanted to think more about the rebellion part of the whole thing#since even tho theyâre still there everythingâs more like post-rebellion#if that makes sense?#anyways this is the plot I think about to get to what I want#itâs two of them because thatâs funny to me#imagine youâre suddenly mortal enemies in a space war with like. your study partner from college or smth#imagine finding out youâre now like. an evil fucking overlord in a new reality when you were just trying to like. ask your crush out#and now your crush is like the leader of the rebellion out to overthrow âyourâ operation#itâs just funny to me#I change the characters and what their actual backstory is around a lot#but whatâs written in the post is like the barebones I keep to#no fandom#hope yâall enjoy these thoughts too
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me two years ago: byan has always been a little bastard. awful nasty child who intentionally used their big doe eyes to manipulate people
me now: byan used to be a soft baby who just wanted love and acceptance, who slowly became hardened and selfish in order to survive when they realized they'd never get what they needed
#'two years ago' I say like I wasn't still holding onto some of these headcanons at the beginning of this year#tbf a lot of the shift has come directly from translating them from their original setting into a more realistic modern one#original byan's setting was a lot more doom and gloom and a lot more pessimism and cruelty consistent across everyone within it#they grew up fully on the streets and taking care of themself so they learned from a VERY young age how to get what they wanted/needed#and felt no qualms bc like. literally everyone was just trying to survive however they could#so they kinda had to be nasty from the start#but NOW...... ironically I feel like their backstory is more tragic bc they're in this 'normal' world where people all around them#have things better than they do. people around them have everything they want and need and they just have to watch longingly#all while being told that lives like those of most of the kids around them are the norm#THEY'RE the outsider. THEY'RE the one who's not normal.#so growing up they actually try SO HARD to be what people want them to be while also trying to fight to be who they are#and it's just. never good enough. THEY'RE never good enough.#it really changes the entire vibe of the character (':#hi good morning don't mind me I'm just emotional over byan's development as a character over the last two and a half years#ââ Ë â° â° ooc âź donât @ me.
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Straw hat women redesigns :) I was trying to doodle some of the crew and came to the realization that I just Could Not with Nami so I wanted to play around with it a little bit
Some more design notes below:
Namiâs design actually went a lot smoother for me than Robinâs! I think canon post timeskip Nami is a very low bar. While you can argue that to some extent Nami being vain and seductive is part of her character, I do feel that there are many more integral parts of her character that can be highlighted in her design, namely map making and her combat. Though not one of the stronger straw hats, Nami does seem to be well practiced with her staff outside of its use for weather manipulation, and I think her being a physical combatant, even slightly, can be better reflected with more loose clothing for better mobility.
For her mapmaking, I wanted her to have constant easy access to her tools and to information about the locale, so around her waist she has one large pouch at the back for books and scrolls and maps in progress and one small pouch to the side for writing utensils and measurement tools. As backup she also has 2 pens in her bun, which also act as pins for keeping her hair up if she ever needs to move a lot.
Iâm not sure how clearly it shows up in the notes, but Namiâs shoe soles are also made from whatever artificial cloud material makes up the weather island she stayed on during the timeskip, so that it both pads her steps to make them soundless and bounces for better mobility. The shoes are naturally shaped like heels but without the actual heel, since she tends to move around on tiptoes anyways- a nod to her epithet as cat burglar and her past as a thief.
I made her shoulders a bit broader because I think they probably get a lot of exercise with her staff, and changed out the bikini top for a more supportive chest wrap, with a loose tank over it for breathability. The compression socks and sleeve are more stylistic than anything, since I like layers, but they might come in handy for her if she spends extended amounts of time sitting down making maps for the crew.
Robinâs was a bit more difficult for me to figure out, and I might go back and revisit it at some point. For Nami, it was a bit easier to imagine what would pair well with her combat methods and her needs as a mapmaker, but with Robin, sheâs an academic who fights almost completely hands off, without a specific weapon to her name. Because her strength lies mostly in her devil fruit, she has a bit more room for style over functionality, but I also still wanted her to have something that made sense with what she was. I donât really think I succeeded in that regard, but itâs also hard to convey what she does visuallyâ sheâs more of like a professor than a field archaeologist I think.
I really really enjoy her cowboy hat but I didnât think it would match with the rest of the outfit so I switched it out for a wider brimmed hat and kept the orange sunglasses on it, as a nod to the revolutionaries with the combination of headwear and eyewear. She deserves a trench coat. I donât make the rules. And the rest of the fit mostly came down to things I think I would enjoy wearing, haha
The trench coat is partially a nod to the scholars of ohara, who seem to wear white coats like lab coats in some screenshots of robinâs backstory. I think also the reading glasses help to make her seem a bit more academic, but arenât prominent enough to leave a strong impression. All in all I do wish robinâs design had more functionality in it but I also think that robin is a character who probably enjoys dressing up nicely like this, especially in the comfort and stability of the straw hats.
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not sure how to put this but does anyone else feel like some of season twoâs writing and the stakes constantly being upped has undermined several important moments and instances of character development from season one?
i donât understand the reasoning behind throwing in so many new conflicts? instead of the story expanding upon and continuing the first season, exploring what it would look like for piltover and zaun to be at war or teetering on the edge of it, how the characters would be affected by it and decisions they would make in response, theyâre being involuntarily flung across dimensions and attacked by eldritch monstrosities.
the piltover vs zaun conflict, the center of the plot that everything else revolved around, was present in act one but is now being gradually sidelined and minimized for the sake of ominous magic drama and painting noxus as the one true villain.
the council attack was a grand finale, the culmination of long standing conflicts and tension that finally tipped the balance into war. but now, nevermind, it only killed a few nobodies with a lot of political power but about 30 seconds of screentime. and the blast radius was tiny.
the charactersâ decisions and internal struggles are either portrayed in an unclear way that doesnât communicate whatâs going on in their heads or flat out explained by them in conversation. flashbacks are, instead of glimpses of the past overlaid with current events while the present version of the character works through their emotions about it, just straight up replays of scenes from season 1. nobody sits with their thoughts and considers what they want because thereâs no time for anything that isnât pushing the plot along at breakneck speed.
vander, as the person he used to be, served his purpose in the story. yes, he was still alive in warwick, but he would never be the same. but now suddenly itâs all family group hugs? one flashback lets him regain full control? heâs mentally back to his past self and making heartwarming comments about his love for his daughters, with no explanation for how but the power of friendship? it felt about as plausible as if silco swam back up and booked a family therapy appointment.
vander and silco knowing jinx and viâs parents and the vaguely implied love triangle is an absolutely egregious retcon. there was no need to add that. it doesnât add any depth, just feels forced and implausible. not everything needs a reveal of âoh these characters were actually already connected before the deliberately chosen circumstances that brought them together and played a large part in defining what they were to each other.â it completely changes their dynamics, the timeline makes no sense, and the world isnât that small.
i get that jinx feeling unmoored and lost might kind of be the point, that not knowing what to do is just where she is right now. but instead of being a step along her way, it ends up feeling like itâs just an excuse to not do anything with her character, because she suddenly doesnât have any relevance to the plot whatsoever? sheâs just been placed in a box off to the side. and the moment she just started to get out of that lost state and begin thinking about who she was and what she wanted, she gets kicked right back into another grief arc and another devastating loss thatâll likely sideline her again with only three episodes left. at this point there wonât even be time for her to do anything outside of her own head but maybe contributing to the final battle in some dramatic action sequence. that just isnât a complete or satisfying character arc in any way and i donât have any idea how theyâre going to end it in a way that doesnât feel cheap or like itâs missing something.
vi is completely adrift too, but that makes sense with the rest of her story, or at least more sense than her immediate flip into wanting to kill her sister. i loved isha but she didnât get a backstory or personality. she was reduced to a vehicle for the plot. caitlynâs anger has suddenly dissipated, which could be explained by the progression of grief and her growing tired of war, but it comes immediately after that sequence where she was set up to be a much more authoritarian character and go on a downward spiral. like i assumed that her donning the cloak was the starting point for the next phase of her character, but then that arc was completely fast forwarded to the end. has ekko had more than two speaking lines? is heimerdinger ever going to be held accountable for his neglect? does jinx genuinely care about being a symbol or hero or is this another attempt at seeking outside validation to reassure herself? does she know what she wants? will she ever get the chance to find out? will vi ever manage to define her identity as anything other than a protector if she only has three episodes left where sheâll probably be busy fighting noxus and god or whatever insane thing is going to happen? has ambessa ever showed any vulnerabilities or human qualities besides her blunt statements that sheâs protecting her family? was it necessary for ambessa to be the evil force behind renni and the chemtankâs attack, when renni had the motivation and ability to do it herself without prompting? where is sevika? what happened with the chembaron war? is zaun completely without a governing body? how are the citizens of piltover affected by noxian involvement? is there time to answer all of this?
also, i canât figure out what itâs trying to say, if there even is anything itâs trying to say.
i donât mean to be excessively negative, and i should clarify, i do still like the second season overall. itâs visually gorgeous and there have definitely been moments i loved. but itâs leaning closer to the enjoyability of a fun action movie than the impact of something that hits you in the feelings and leaves you thinking about it and considering it for months or years after. i would have been willing to sacrifice half the action if it let them focus on making the character writing as multifaceted and interesting as it was season one
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How to Create a MEMORABLE Character
A while back, I released a post about how to write "that" character, which basically highlights a few key aspects found in some of the most popular characters to date. However, a popular character and a memorable one is actually quite different, and in this post, I'll briefly explain how to create a character that people will remember.
For starters, a memorable character doesn't actually have to be well-liked. Yes, popular characters tend to be memorable, but it's not always the same other way around. I'll simply explain how to form a character that really sticks with your audience, regardless of their actual opinion about them! And even better, these following ideas work on any type of character! So, if you're interested, let's dive right in!
~ FIRST IMPRESSIONS MATTER ~
I sometimes talk about the importance of a character's reputation because it shows how others view them and the truths and inaccuracies of their character!
But your character's image isn't bound to your cast's eyes--it actually matters a lot to your readers.
When you first introduce your character, do not immediately reveal everything about them. Instead, focus on establishing one or two core traits of your character instead. This will allow your readers to form their own opinions of your character first, and although they might be inaccurate, when the readers realize their misjudgment, the character will get stuck in their head!
For example, there's Tsukishima Kei from Haikyuu!!. Initially, the viewers may think about him negatively because of his introduction. He first appears as a blunt, mocking, and disrespectful person, but as the story continues and the audience slowly warms up to him, we start to see his real character, resulting in Tsukishima becoming one of the most beloved characters in Haikyuu!!.
Why does this matter? The thing is, when we meet new people, we all make assumptions about their personality, goodwill, and whatnot. As we get to know them further, we realize that some of our initial judgements may have been wrong; it's simply an unavoidable part of life. By incorporating that aspect into your writing, you're forcing your readers to think deeper about your characters!
~ GIVE THEM THEIR TIME ~
This will seem obvious but it's precisely because of how obvious it is that it'll often slip people's minds. Give your character the time they deserve. You can do this by exploring their backstory, defining their motivations, giving them some important action, or simply establishing some kind of critical or eye-catching moment regarding them!
If you can't afford to give them a huge role in your story, then give your readers an event focusing on your character that will come to their mind when they think of said character! Like a defining moment!
It can be dramatic, sad, short, anything works! As a matter of fact, you've probably done this unconsciously before, too!
~ MAKE THEM DIMENSIONAL ~
If you can't tell already, it's incredibly important to be aware of your characters' distinctive traits and how they shape your character. However, there are times that a character will and should break their character.
A happy person can't be happy all the time. A carefree person can't be carefree all the time. Even a cold person will have some shifts in character.
This can help will character development, especially if you're not planning to give them a lot of development, but also really humanizes your character! Everyone will eventually get bored of the same personality; people may change in different situations!
See? In the end, this is really just a simple guide--everything is perfectly achievable no matter what character you're writing! These are some good points to keep in mind if you're looking for a character that resonates with the audience!
Happy writing~
3hks ^^
#writeblr#writing#writerscommunity#creative writing#writing inspo#writing tips#writing advice#how to write a memorable character#character writing#advice on writing a memorable character#tips on writing a memorable character#advice on character writing#tips on writing characters#character writing tips
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That said, I do think that Shadow Generations being such a more carefully cultivated exploration of Shadow's past compared to what the original Generations was for Sonic is... not doing Sonic himself any favors
General audiences are already kind of under the impression that Sonic as a character is fundamentally not that deep or interesting, and Generations was written during a time that really, really wanted to prove that notion right. Sonic "being deep" was what, seemingly, caused so much critical backlash, so to counteract that, they gave us the blandest cutscenes Sonic has ever had the displeasure of being in.
But that's not really what Sega is trying to push for, now. Frontiers wanted to be more serious, with a mature, down-to-earth Sonic. The movies gave him an origin story that inherently makes him a lot more complicated than usual. Prime put the focus on his emotions and gave him a character arc that lasted the whole show. The IDW comics can get extremely serious, and we're treated to Sonic's inner monologue as he wrestles with difficult choices. They clearly want Sonic as a character to be interesting to people, not just a vehicle for action and quips.
But putting the old Sonic Generations in the same package as the new Shadow Generations is inherently portraying them as equivalent experiences. When Sonic explores his past, it's no big deal - just another day on the hero job! Absolutely nothing worth exploring on his end when it comes to meeting his past self and revisiting his memories! Nope! No need to use time travel as a way to explore his core values as a person who prefers to live in the moment and not be bound by his past, no siree!
Oh, but Shadow? Now that's the actually interesting character! Revisiting Shadow's past is such an exciting event that it requires the whole year to hype up, and Sonic's just so boring in comparison, isn't he? Who really cares about Sonic beyond his surface-level characteristics anyway, right? The Sonic Generations remaster is more of an accessory to what's essentially Shadow the Hedgehog 2 at this point, and that bothers me.
Sure, Sonic doesn't have "a backstory" like Shadow does. But the past that we explore in Sonic Generations isn't his literal origins, but all the adventures we went on with him. Imagine how much depth you could wring out of him if you just took those events as being legitimate parts of his life that he has feelings on! Feelings we could explore!
But because it's a remaster instead of a full-blown remake, all of this effort they're putting into Shadow's campaign is nowhere to be seen in Sonic's. Can you imagine how good of a package deal this would be if Sonic's character was given this much care and respect, too? Like, we have two Sonics, but Shadow is getting more than double the favoritism.
And the fact that this is only going to continue to push the idea that Sonic is just. incapable of being interesting, or even really affected by what happens around him is really frustrating. We already have the movies and Prime drastically changing his demeanor and core traits for the sake of making him "able" to have character development, and as much as I love those versions as characters, it's really doing a disservice to who Sonic is supposed to be.
The last thing we need is for Generations to come out again and make the Sonic from the games seem like the least interesting version of him. Bringing Shadow up should not involve dragging Sonic down - they're supposed to be equals. But this game doesn't seem to be showcasing that very well, on account of essentially being two games written by different people haphazardly mashed together.
People being introduced to the series through this game are going to have such a skewed perception of what Sonic is like as a person, as well as what he's like compared to Shadow, and that just. makes me kinda upset not gonna lie
#sonic the hedgehog#shadow the hedgehog#sonic x shadow generations#sonic generations#sxsh generations#Make no mistake I'm looking forward to the new Shadow content with all my heart#but WHEN will my boy Sonic come back from Mischaracterization Hell
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Guess who turned 7 years old?
SPLATOON 2!!!!! Everyone's favourite Splatoon game!!!! Right? Right guys....? We love Splatoon 2 yeah....? It's the best one right.....? Totally not gonna become the middle child of the series that gets overshadowed by the new fresh Splatoon 3 and the nostalgia of the first game right.....?
Okay, jokes aside about if Splatoon 2 is actually good or not. This was the game that actually got me into Splatoon, I knew about the series since it's announcement but I couldn't play the first game because like the rest of general public, I didn't own a wii u. Still don't but I would love to have one to mod. (And play Splatoon 1 online with fan servers...)
I think Splatoon 2 really did bring a lot of cool stuff to the table and it had a lot of quality of life features and interesting weapon, sub and special concepts.
It gave us the dualies!! THE DUALIES! I LOVE THE DUALIES!
It gave us the brellas! Which.... were kinda bad at launch and still are bad till this day....
BUT! I dont wanna talk about weapons because thats BORING! I wanna talk about one of the best things Splatoon 2 gave us...
OFF THE HOOK! PEARL AND MARINA! These girls are some of the most popular characters in the series and for good reason. They are both funny, likeable, charming, witty and have developed backstories by the time Octo Expansion comes around. Plus their chemistry is top-notch and so damn CUTE! It's almost has if they are somehow more than friends and that kind of connection is canon and people who try to deny it are fucking idiots and will never be in a relationship of their own.....
Also Splatoon 2 gave us a pretty solid hero mode at launch, sure it was basically more Splatoon 1 hero mode but hey, the first hero mode was fun so more of the same is fine by me. Plus you get Marie's classic snark too while you go through levels, she's nice company surprisingly. Way better than some old ass crusty dude...
It also gave us....
totally didn't fuck up my mental health this year and last year and caused me chest pain and discomfort until I had to dig and dig AND DIG for knowledge just to salvage it and make sure my favourite character in the fucking series was given the respect she deserves....
....hypno/octo Callie.... totally didn't fuck up this villain arc for her huh Nintendo? Totally didn't throw away the depth you built up (and was shown in concept art) only to try and hastily fix it 2 years later with an obscure relationship chart no one fucking talks about, not even the timeline explainers...
totally didn't use the wrong terminology to describe her situation and made everything so much worse because you wanted a simple black and white story for the kiddies yeah Nintendo? Despite you making stuff grey in the dlc expansion so the both story modes now clash like oil and water theme wise.
And yet you still treat her like dirt. Still using the wrong poorly localised words. If I still gotta repeat to the sky one more time that callie was under hypnosis and not forceful brainwashing I might have a stroke. You can't even fucking brainwash someone with hypnosis because the limitation of hypnosis is that the person under it must be fully comfortable with the suggestion and the suggestion cannot go agaisnt their morals and ideology. AND GUESS WHAT BRAINWASHING IS! FORCING DIFFERENT IDEOLOGIES INTO SOMEONE'S HEAD! DO YOU GET WHY I HAVE AN ISSUE NOW?!?!?! JUST USE THE WORD HYPNOTISED NINTENDO! THATS ALL YOU GOTTA DO!! ILL BE SOOO HAPPY!!!
YOU TOO INKIPEDIA! I CAUGHT YOU USING THE WORD TOO MULTIPLE TIMES! you better change it... just change brainwashed to hypnotised and I would literally kiss you on the lips or something idk... I love you inkipedia but that's all you gotta change okay? Pretty please? With a cherry on top?
ENOUGH OF THAT! I WANNA TALK ABOUT SOMETHING ELSE!!!
Do you know what else Splatoon 2 gave us?
OCTO EXPANSION BABY! I know people love to call this overrated now but I really don't care. It's not overrated, it's perfectly rated. It also gave us PLAYABLE OCTOLINGS! Which was a highly requested thing people really really wanted and they gave us what we asked for! Even though they lacked a lot of customisation options.... still do till this day... (Nintendo is it really that hard to come up with new hair? The community has been doing that for years for you man.)
And of course... the last thing I want to talk about...
This is probably my favourite Splatfest to date. It brought in a lot of actual genuine philosophical discussion on what kind of world is best, a world of chaos? Or a world of order? I chose team chaos because when the youtuber/streamer Etika was still around he chose team chaos and I chose that team because of him... rest in peace...
The shifty station too was phenomenonal as you got to hear Fly Octo Fly and Pearl would come in AND YOU GOT TO USE HER PRINCESS CANON!!!! IT WAS SO FUCKING COOL AHHHH!!!
God Pearl is so cool... i can't believe I actually used to dislike her. I wanna beat up teen me so badly for having such bad takes. Marina is hot sure, but, Pearl is just so fucking funny. Man what was wrong with 13 to 17 year old me....
Anyways, I wanted to ramble about Splatoon 2. It's pretty special to me as it was the reason I am here today, so I can't really criticise it as much as others do. Well... aside from one obvious thing but, I've done that many times.
Also, before I go... NINTENDO!!! BRING BACK SHIFTY STATIONS FOR SPLATOON 4!!! DO IT!!! STOP BEING COWARDS!!!!
#splatoon#splatoon 2#splatoon 3#happy birthday#autistic rambling#ramblings#rant post#text post#callie cuttlefish#callie splatoon#hypno callie#octo callie#marie cuttlefish#marie splatoon#squid sisters#pearl houzuki#pearl splatoon#splatoon marina#marina ida#off the hook#octo expansion#octoling#inkling#etika
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Hazbin Hotel & Helluva Boss Rewrite Ideas #01
I truly believe that both shows have a lot of untapped potential that we'll unfortunately never get to see thanks to Viv refusing to take criticism and the fact that her writers are all yes men. However, that doesn't mean I can't give out rewrite ideas like they're candy to those who wish to tap into either show's said potential. With that being said, here are some rewrite ideas that you could use for Hazbin Hotel and Helluva Boss! ______ #01.) Have Mrs. Mayberry become one of the residents of the Hazbin Hotel. I promise you, this one writes itself. #02.) Have Glitz & Glam be Fizz's rival co-workers to parallel his time in the circus when he worked with the Buckzo twins who acted more like a family to him. #03.) Write some new workers for the Hazbin Hotel since they're still severely understaffed. You could make these new employees a Hellborn, a Sinner, an Overlord, or Goetia royalty if you wanted too. The possibilities for this one are endless! #04.) Let Heaven contrast with Hell based on how they operate. For example, in my rewrite for the Hellaverse, Heaven doesn't use currency at all. It quite literally doesn't exist up there. Instead, they use the Bartering System as they view it to be the most fair exchange of goods and services. #05.) Have there be a character who doesn't belong in Hell but got sent there anyway for whatever reason. I'd recommend using Valoris (my take on renaming Vaggie) if you don't mind keeping her as a fallen angel or using her original Sinner backstory however I feel like Amélie (I renamed Emily solely because her name is so common. It's not bad but you can tell that there was barely any thought put into it either.) could work just as well since she'd be a fallen Seraph. #06.) Make Lucifer and Stolas evil as they were originally intended to be before Viv scrapped the idea in favor of something worse. Stolitz is a toxic ship no matter how much damage control and retconning Helluva Boss tries to do and when initially asked about how Lucifer would act later in the series on an old livestream, Viv originally wanted to have his character be on par with that of Willy Wonka so do with that information what you will. #07.) Allow for Charlie's, "Anyone can be redeemed," mentality to constantly be challenged by those around her. Don't be afraid to have her be in the wrong because we all know that not everyone can be redeemed. Some people (Valentino) truly aren't deserving of it and others won't be accepting to change. You can lead a horse to water all you want but the horse has to decide to drink it. #08.) Create a proper foil ship for Fallen Star (I hate using the ship name Chaggie) cause if even Stolitz can have one in the form of Fizzmodeus then Fallen Star should have one too. Most people opt to use Emilute but I'm a damn GuitarSpear shipper so I opted for a crossover ship that has Emily and another character from Helluva Boss instead. Listen, if a rare pair and joke ship like CherriSnake can become canon over a ship like Sir Pentious x Rosie that actually makes sense when you consider they're from similar time periods, then a crossover ship being in my AU rewrite is the least of my problems.
For context, here's a screenshot for one of the HH mockup episodes before Viv and her team decided to scrap it. Like the majority of the HH mockup episodes. ______ Well, that's all I've got for now so happy writing and good luck!
#helluva boss critical#vivziepop criticism#vivziepop critique#hazbin hotel critical#hazbin hotel rewrite#helluva boss rewrite#hellaverse critical#anti stolitz#anti stolas#anti vivziepop
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This is a fandom related thing. I will say that right off the bat, but I needed a few extra opinions on this since it feels like I am alone on this.
AITA for killing off my OC in a group rp?
For some context, I (using the name Snow for myself) joined a group rp with some other people where we would come up with a plot together. Everyone would be using original characters (OCs) It was agreed that the things that happened would be voted on, but people were not allowed to control what other people did with their OCs. It is the whole "my oc, my rules" thing. For those who don't get it, it basically means that since the oc is yours, only you get to decide what happens to them.
To the story. I had plans I wanted to do with my OC. I wrote her to be someone who was secretly working for the villains and was only tricking the others into thinking she was their friend. The only other people who were aware of this were the moderators, and they had approved of it.
What was the problem then you may be wondering? Well the problem was that another member, I'll just call them Star, had said that they had gotten an emotional attachment to my OC. Which I personally found weird, so I typically tried not to be stuck alone with them.
When it came to reveal the plot twist with my oc, Star had a freak out upon finding out. They started crying and complaining that it wasn't right to do that and they could not picture "their" emotional support character doing that. The other members decided to comfort Star. They always sided with Star and acted like they were oh so special. The others were saying that this was all just a joke and that it wasn't actually going to happen. "It is just a joke right, Snow?" they had said.
And I replied with. "No. It's not a joke. My oc has been working with the villains the whole time."
Star's response was to have a meltdown over it, saying that I was out to hurt them and ruin their day. So I ended up getting a message from the moderators asking me to change my OC's backstory as to not upset Star further. They ended up telling Star that it would be changed to just having my OC be mind controlled the whole time.
This was not something I agreed with, but I pretended to play along begrudgingly. I hated that the group decided to treat my OC like she belonged to Star. But I played along and came up with my own idea. There was a plot point that came up in the rp that would have someone die off, so I took it as my opportunity to kill off my own OC. If I wasn't allowed to do what I had planned for her initially, then she wasn't going to stick around anymore.
After I killed her off, Star logged off and vanished for an entire 3 days. All the other members constantly messaged them to try and get a response from her, but they did not answer until they returned. When they logged on, they said that they had to a panic attack over what had happened and felt hurt that I would do that.
I just responded with "my oc, my rules. I quit this group." Then I quickly went through and deleted every little bit of information I had shared about my OC with that group before leaving their discord. After, I got a lot of messages from all the members, about sending the information so that Star could continue playing with my OC since she was their comfort character and it wasn't fair I was doing this to them especially after their panic attack. I said no and blocked everyone who had asked me that.
Sure I feel bad that they had a panic attack, but I felt betrayed that everyone else was willing to bend the rules for them and allow them to control my OC. Even if I no longer use said OC, I still wouldn't let them have her. This is still my property and I stand by the "my oc, my rules" thing.
So AITA for killing off my OC?
What are these acronyms?
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I did all three backstories for Touchstarved (I have 12 hours on this thing and it's only the demo)
Kuras and Vere don't seem to have red options, but Vere does have a secret ending and Kuras... I don't know, holds you for a bit longer?
For Mhin, it really is just picking The Alchemist backstory. You can call them short or whatever and you'll still get it.
For Leander, you have to take the flowers and keep touching him. It's okay if you hold back the first time even.
For Ais, you gotta tell him fuck you and pet the soulless, and after that red option pretty much all yours.
Differences I found between the three backstories:
It is pretty much like how they tell you, Oracle gets premonitions, Hound has experience with people and survival, and Alchemist has knowledge about magic and science, so there's different things you find out with each one.
The Alchemist:
I may be a little bit biased, but think The Alchemist is the most informative (It's also the first one I picked). There's the expected info of noticing that Vere's collar is enchanted, or knowing about how strong Leander really is when it comes to magic, but it's got the added bonus of MC's mentor having been in the Senobium in the past.
Compared to the others, The Alchemist is more familiar with Senobium, albeit through word of mouth. It's interesting how many times the MC says something similar to "I didn't know the Senobium did that." It calls into question whether MC's teacher was lying, or more interestingly (and what I think might be the case), the Senobium has changed a lot recently. It's talked about, even without the Alchemist backstory, that the Senobium used to be somewhere you could go to for help, but now most of the characters you meet do not like the Senobium, so what changed?
The Hound:
The Hound (the least popular option, apparently) was pretty fun. The Hound notices more about Ais, specifically that he's very suited to be a leader, and that the number of scars he has (one) seems suspicious for his temperament (or "how seasoned he acts", as the MC puts it).
One thing that I found very fun was doing Mhin's route as the Hound. They're somewhat able to keep up! They can (or tried to) recognize tells, and noted that Mhin was one of the few people who was able to sneak up on them. They also weren't sure how Vere managed to get their key. They were also prepared to steal to survive.
The Oracle:
While The Hound notices physical things, the Oracle notices... how do you say, otherworldly things. The Seaspring seems to be hiding a lot (of course it is), but the MC notices a heartbeat. A presence. They feel something from Ais. The name Ocudeus means something, they can feel it. They feel like they can see Ais' tattoo move.
Also, the MC feels something from Mhin and Kuras (in his clinic at least), which is interesting!
If I had to decide which love interest was better with which backstory...
Vere: The fact that the Alchemist thought that they could tell what enchantments were on his collar if only they could touch it feels promising! And both their connections (though I mean connection in the loosest term for MC here) to the Senobium makes it feel like you might very well find something.
The Hound might be one of the few who can actually survive this guy if I'm gonna be honest. (I mean you can still get killed by him but. You know.)
Ais: The Oracle's sixth sense makes going to the Seaspring a lot more interesting compared to the others, and the way they can feel something from Ais is very cool.
The Hound can tell his character better than the others, and I wonder how that will come into play later on.
Kuras: The Alchemist knows their way around spell-crafting and alchemy (When I picked this I wondered if they would be able to help Kuras around the clinic, which doesn't happen, but hey it might).
The Oracle seems to also feel something from him.
Mhin: First things first, their red option literally requires you to have the Alchemist backstory. Mhin's precision is noticed by the other MCs sure, but not to that detail.
Watching the Hound observe where they could be was so fun to watch. It feels like this MC will be able to keep up.
The Oracle feels something from Mhin, something inhuman.
Leander: The Alchemist was able to tell that the flash of magic was a barrier spell, and that most magic (or at least the ones they're familiar with) uses an incantation or spell circle. His didn't.
But either way, there will be things to find no matter the backstory you choose, and all of the character's stories are intertwined, so don't let this dissuade you from a specific backstory! There will always be things to find, you just need to look.
Extra: I found it pretty cool how each MC has a different way of knowing what a Groupmind is. Story-wise this makes sense of course, but each of their reactions to it are slightly different, from I heard this from rumours of people in cults (Hound), to I used to be told I could put people in a groupmind (Oracle), to legends suggest it was possible with a strong enough catalyst but it's never been done before (Alchemist).
Also, it's interesting to know what they each think of surroundings (specifically the Amaryllis district). They all have different opinions from I used to be told bizarre things about this place and now I kinda get it (Alchemist), to it's not that different from the place I grew up in (Hound), to it's VERY different from where I grew up in (Oracle).
And if I'm not mistaken, the reason Vere gives for your desperation is different for all of them!
You can find gameplay from me on my Youtube channel, or watch me getting all the red options and secret ending here:
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I didn't read it out loud cause my mic sorta sucks and sometimes it peaks and gets a bit shrill. Also you see how my mouse moves sometimes? It means I'm screaming. I don't think I'd have been able to keep calm enough for this. Also my reading kinda sucks anyway hope you like it lol
#If you guys watch the 3 hour unedited version and find my friend going online please tell me the timestamp#I cannot find it#There are two and I found one of them#It's a fun little easter egg I guess. If you even care#Touchstarved#Touchstarved game#touchstarved spoilers#I had fun doing this#sweetmountainseeds#Oh btw#I may be wrong#Yes I replayed the game four times#But I might be wrong#There might be things you need/don't need to do#I can't really tell anymore#I mean everything here should be right but do correct me if I'm wrong
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okay watched Cloak and Dagger and here are my thoughts in brief
I don't think showing Ripley's backstory is bad. Part of why Ripley is an interesting character to me in a way that, to use my favorite punching bag, Otohan, is not, is because we had hints of what made her this way - fleeing the Empire; a list of names on Animus that included Bertrand Dwendal. Part of why I mock Otohan relentlessly is because she is a one-dimension villain, and Ripley never was that, which is why she's an interesting villain. Tragic backstory, in my opinion, enhances one's villainy, rather than reduces it: what sort of monster suffers and decides to do the same to others, rather than is driven to work to improve the lot of others? That's essentially why Caleb is in the end a heroic character and Ludinus is the culminating BBEG more so than Predathos.
Glintshore is one of my favorite battles of Campaign 1 and it also would not, in my opinion, translate well to animation. There was a great line in the Midst Messages from Xen in reference to Moonward about how in most rules-heavy TTRPGs, when you enter a big battle, time stretches out significantly, but in a systemless game like Moonward, it goes very quickly, which gives it a very different vibe and makes players make very different decisions. The emotional weight derives largely from how the party enters combat already heavily drained and never regains their footing, and how the cast is well aware and the sense of dread (and belief that Percy might be permanently dead and Taliesin will have to roll up a new character) sets in long before the battle ends. [long tangent about good parasocial vs bad parasocial in actual play put off until I have time to actually read Watch Us Roll, but this is Good Parasocial]. It's actually an interesting test of the challenge we face for the finale of the series: you are not going to get as efficient an emotional punch as Sam saying "Nine" in a show that doesn't have a concept of spell levels. I had struggled with how one might recreate the Glintshore battle and the answer is "you don't".
Ripley's speech was great no notes, love her being fucking awful and consumed with vengeance to the end. I think just as the theme of "your resentment will destroy you" is an enduring one throughout Critical Role, so is "every mortal is in theory someone who could change and become better, but if you shoot the hand that's trying to help you, well, get rekt lol"
The music over Percy's death is corny as hell. However, I am already on the record as someone who mutes It's Thursday Night for being corny as hell and who pokes fun at Matt's more purple prose and I seem to have stuck around regardless. I have made my peace with the fact that a good chunk of the cast spent their formative years just absolutely immersed in anime, and given the Extreme Anime Vibes of Percy in TLOVM I can't say I love it, but I also can't say it's not sort of fitting. Please do cut that scene with different music though, because it would be funny as shit.
I need to watch episodes 8 and 9 (going to now!) but much as I love the glintshore fight, you know what I love more? Episode 1x69 (nice). Real Tragedy Enjoyers know the proof is in the aftermath. If 8 and 9 also suck then I'll be back here in like an hour but if they're good then it's whatever.
Grog is always on some level experiencing a Sitcom B Plot and if you ever find yourself disliking a TLOVM episode, remember you're watching a sitcom where Grog is dealing with a Bird that is Very Here (metaphorical).
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Reimagining the characters in Wish
(Part 1- Asha)
Hey guys! I donât really know how to start this, but letâs just say that I⊠Didnât like how Disneyâs 100th anniversary movie turned out, like at all.
But I can tell there was a lot of unexplored potential beneath this story, that in my opinion felt overly simple and bare bones.
But if you love it, thatâs awesome, more power to you, I wish I couldâve loved it too. And I donât want to rewrite it to show Iâm âbetter than the writers at Disneyâ because Iâm definitely not lol, I have no experience in writing, and Iâm sure they put a lot of passion into the project and I respect them for that. But this movie inspired me with ideas for a different story that I think is worth telling.
But I wonât start telling it today, instead, I'll start a series of blogs sharing my ideas for changes in the characters and their stories, after I get some feedback I will start posting more of the story itself.
If youâre interested, then come along!
Ashaâš
Personality
- Asha is a 18 year old girl, with a passion for drawing and helping those around her, sometimes even worrying more about helping others than helping herself
- Sheâs like a big sister to her 7 friends, always being the voice of reason and acting responsible, but not in a bossy way, sheâs actually very playful with them
- To the people of Rosas tho, she's seen as kind of a weirdo, for you see, she spends almost every time of the day drawing in her sketchbook
- She practices everyday to become a better artist, and the people of Rosas find this to be very peculiar, after all, why would you take so much effort to perfect a talent when you can simply wait to turn 18 and wish for the king to make you an amazing artist?
- Asha doesnât mind these comments, although they have made her less willing to share her drawings with others that arenât her 7 friends
- As the story progresses we see Asha flourish from a shy and introverted girl to a brave woman who after discovering a terrifying secret about the kingdomâs rulers, steps in and inspires others to join her and fight an evil sorcerer king and his alchemist wife (yes, I made Amaya an alchemist, more on that on part 2 when I talk about how Iâd change Magnifico and Amaya)
- Some Disney characters that share similarities with her personality wise are: Belle, Tiana, Pocahontas and Esmeralda
Main Traits:
Calm and mature
Determined
Passionate about her interests (drawing, dancing, philosophy and stars)
Helpful and generous
Perceptive and always questioning things around her that no one pays attention to (like why do all the artists only paint the King and Queen?)
Playful
Compassionate
Backstory
Oooh boy I gave this poor girl so much angst, okay letâs go
Asha grew up with her grandfather, her parents both died in a fire when she was just a baby
(this isnât just to fit the âhaha Disney princess has no parentsâ cliche, thereâs plot relevance in this âmysterious fireâ that Iâll talk about later)
Growing up with her grandpa, heâd always support her dream to be an artist, like her mother, who was an art teacher
Her mother not only drew really well, but she also was able to create the illusion that her drawings could move, by flipping through the pages of her sketch books
In other words, her mom was an animator
Asha saw this technic her mom used as a form of magic, so she would often tell her grandpa she wanted to âDo magic just like my momâ
Her father was a philosopher (this was established in the actual movie but never explored haha whyyyy), who taught people that working hard to achieve your dreams is not only rewarding, but also essential, because itâs part of the human nature to persevere and fight for what we believe, even if we fail, even if itâs hard, just keep moving forward.
This philosophy may sound very âumm duhâ for me and you since we all know and hear everywhere nothing in life comes for free⊠But thatâs not the case in Rosas
In this rewrite the kingdom wasnât created by Magnifico, but rather the kingdom has existed for many generations, being ruled by different kings before Magnifico who also granted wishes⊠but Iâm getting ahead of myself.
The point is that the culture of just asking the king to give you or make you whatever you want to be has been in this kingdomâs culture since forever, so when Ashaâs dad comes out saying âhey! Maybe we should stop just relying on the king to make our dreams come true, right?â Heâs actually being quite a revolutionary⊠and sharing a very dangerous belief to other peopleâŠ
At this point you might suspect what caused that âmysterious fireâ
So, back to Asha, growing up with her grandpa, they shared a lot of happy memories together. Reading her father's books and her mother's art books helped Asha connect with them even tho she never had them in her life.
But as her grandfather grew older, he became senile.
Asha went from being taken care of by her grandpa to being the one who took care of him when she was still around 13 years old, and when she turned 15 her grandfather passed away of old age
Asha went on to live with her best friend Dahlia, the two became like sisters.
Though she managed to move on from the loss of her grandfather, she could never shake the feeling that he died without getting his wish granted... But she had no way to prove that, it was just a feeling
The wish granting system works different in my rewrite, instead of there being a public wish granting ceremony once a month, there would only be a public wish TAKING ceremony, that would work just like in the movie, you turn 18, you go give your wish to the king yada yada yada.
But the wish granting part would work like this: Almost every night the king would release the wishes up in the sky, they would float down like balloons to their respective owners while they sleep, and once they woke up in the morning they'd feel that their wishes were granted, for they would wake up changed.
With this method, there's no way of confirming if someone really got their wish granted or not, unless you went to ask the king.
Asha never did ask the king if he granted her grandfather's wish, but her grandfather would sometimes express how he wasn't feeling completely fulfilled in his life, he felt like there was something... missing.
This feeling of hollowness persisted in him until the very end, no matter how hard Asha tried to help her grandfather, she never knew him as his real self, because he gave part of his soul to the king, the most beautiful part of his soul, his wish.
Asha had no proof that her grandfather didn't get his wish granted, only a gut feeling.
But because of this, Asha wasn't that thrilled to give her own wish to king magnifico, knowing there was the possibility of it never being granted.
Not to mention she didnât even know what to wish for, âIâm just 18 and you guys expect me to already know whatâs my heartâs deepest desire? Iâm still figuring that out, all I know is that I wanna drawâ
Plus she wanted to follow her father's philosophy and achieve her wish on her own, eventually, when she figured out what her wish even was.
Asha never rebelled against the system tho, she wasn't a confrontational person. She just accepted the people of Rosas preferred to rely on the king's magic, but that just wasn't for her.
However, on her 18 birthday, when it was expected of her to give her wish to the king, she simply said she didn't have a wish, and even if she did she wouldnât want to hand it over, she wanted to make it come true on her own. This lead to an argument with the king, and after a series of events (that I don't have time to summarize here, but you can find out about it on my rewrite) leads to her finding out a terrible truth about her kingdom. And that's how her story begins.
Design
- Iâd keep these braid ornaments that Asha had in the concept art
- Since in my rewrite sheâs not that invested in the kingdom of Rosas, Iâd remove all the Kingdom of Rosas symbols that are present in her design (there are a LOT of them)
- Iâd replace these Rosas insignia with more star and constellations themed symbols, to reflect how Asha believes that the stars are connected to people and they can guide us, just like how her father believed.
Final Thoughts
My intentions with these changes were to give Asha a strong emotional hook, and something that makes her feel relatable.
The emotional hook here is how she spent so much of her life taking care of her grandfather that she kinda never had time to worry about her own desires, that alone can be relatable to caregivers of elderly people that watch their grandparents or even their own parents lose themselves as time passes, and end up worrying more about the person theyâre taking care of than themselves.
Asha has this internal emotional conflict where she feels she needs to constantly help others the same way she helped her grandfather, and one of the things sheâll learn as the story progresses is that itâs not selfish of her to want more for HERSELF.
Another thing that would be relatable about Asha is her passion for drawing, and how most people in Rosas would say sheâs wasting her time practicing so much when she can just wait until she turns 18 and wish to be amazing at drawing.
Sheâd never stop believing that taking her time to improve on her talent and trying again and again was worth every second of her time, because let me tell ya folks, drawing is HARD, and animating like Ashaâs mom did is even HARDER, it takes a whole lot of practice, and Asha was determined to keep trying.
Sheâd be much like Belle, remaining true to herself even tho those around her considered her odd, and very passionate about drawing just as much Belle was passionate about reading.
I also find it funny how Ashaâs motivations are fairly down to earth, like in Disney movies you usually have:
I want to be free from these palace walls!
I want to explore the ocean!
I want to open a restaurant!
I want to find true love!
And then thereâs Asha here like
âMy life is fine, I just wanna chill and draw stuffâ
And thatâs it, but, in her environment where everyone is expected to have this great wish that they have to give to the king so heâll make it a reality, sheâs kinda the odd one out, and I love that. Would be a great subversion of the Disney formula.
Of course after she learns Magnifico and Amayaâs true intentions she gets a lot more agency and the desire to save her people, her âcall for adventureâ if you will.
But what are Magnifico and Amayaâs true intentions? Click here for part 2 and find out!
Thank You For Reading!
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the babbit masterpost
HELLO welcome to the Babbit's Blog masterpost!!! On this post you'll find some fun facts about yours allegedly (me <33), some ref's for my different 'sona's, and a couple links to my fics and whatnot! Are you ready? No?? Excellent neither am i let's do this
Meet the Babbits!: the self-inserts/personas
the first ref is for my general/most commonly used persona, Babbit! They aren't really an anthro/furry as much as they are a humanoid with the head of a rabbit. I like to think of this one as the 'me' that's in my head- the purest form of my thoughts and feelings, but not the solid real-life me. The second ref is my self-insert persona, Rabbit, the one i picture using most often when i'm reading a fic or imagining a self-insert scenario lol. This one is like the me that people see and meet and speak to in real actual life, if that makes sense. It's the way I come across to people and all of the things I wish I could iron out of my crumpled up real-self <3 The third is a much more specific 'sona, Hazel, who started off as a FNaF:SB animatronic self-insert. She does have a backstory and lore now, which i think makes her more of an OC than a self-insert, but a lot of her is still me and a lot of what she experiences in her backstory is from my life/instills the same feelings that were taken away from things that happened to me, so I think she kinda counts enough to put a ref for her here sdkjfsdhfj (Why the different names?: makes things a little easier, and they hold meaning to me symbolically, I guess!)
Content!: Here's a short list of my various fics that will get updated as I create more! (it was, in reality, not fine.): FNaF Sun/Moon x Reader fanfic, gender neutral, for general audiences, fluff-fest, idiots to lovers "You're the new tech/repairman at the Fazbear Mega Pizzaplex, unfortunately. Your first task? To make the Daycare Attendant into two separate animatronics. It's an amazing opportunity, really, and there is nothing you love more than getting a chance to really work with such tech! The only bad part is that you don't know how to tell anyone that you just might be in over your head. (You are extremely in over your head.)" After Everything Was Fixed (but you were still broken): AU FNaF Sun/Moon x (Animatronic) Reader, gender neutral, read with caution, angst, harm to sentient robots, traumatized main character, hurt/comfort slow burn, romance slow burn "The virus was gone. Everyone was fixed. You had been put back together. It's a time for a new beginning, to do things right this time, to wash away the past and paint a better future. Their memories of the infection had- mercifully- been taken away from them. Yours had not. He doesn't understand why you try to avoid him. Even if you could tell him, you're not sure you would. You want to be his friend, but it's difficult; every time you see him, you remember the hundreds of times he killed you." A fic where you are a repairman-themed STAFFbot, taking place post-virus. In the past, Moon, infected by the virus, took delight in attacking and dismantling the reader during the night. Now, in the present, you find yourself burdened by the memories of the past while everyone around you has no recollection of the events. It gets more complicated as Sun and Moon, both now cleared of the virus, grow curious of you. This fic will follow a series of arcs, presently on arc one. For anyone curious, feel free to send an ask about the arcs in 'After Everything Was Fixed'! The Sun, the Moon, and the Blazing Comet (title subject to change): AU FNaF Sun/Moon/Eclipse x Reader, gender neutral, teen and up audiences, travel/journey, betrayal, hurt/comfort slowburn, reconciling, themes of breaking the mold, found family (TBA) Hold My Broken Hands (title subject to change): AU FNaF Sun/Moon x Reader, gender neutral, mature audiences, dark romance, dark comedy, severe bodily harm, mutilation, murder, obsessive behavior, possessive behavior, lovesick (TBA)
My AU's!: i'm going to make a Babbit-AUs-Masterpost and then put the link here i swear, i just have so many im sorry jdfhsjdfhs (like more than twenty)
Fandoms!: I enjoy, have been in, made or make content for: Pokemon Undertale FNaF Creepypasta (YEAH I KNOW LET ME LIVE OKAY) My Little Pony (I KNOW OKAY LEAVE ME ALONE) Steven Universe Star Trek Warrior Cats i'm sure theres more but i just forgot everything i have ever liked wheeeeeze
Whomst the hell?: HI I'm Rabbit! Or Bones! Or Babbit! Or Avarice/Ava, if you want to go for a more legitimate-sounding name. I'm 24 years old, prefer to use they/them pronouns, and so, so incredibly ace. I've been drawing as long as I've had the ability to hold a pen, writing since I was in grade school, and being a plague to the ones around me since the beginning of time! If you've seen my art, its probably from the absolute mountain of fluffy-wuffy love-dovey (y/n) x Sundrop/Moondrop/Eclipse doodles I've been sharing for several years now sdfjhsdj. If you've heard of my fics, it was probably the one I made just for fun that's now turned into an actual fanfiction that I enjoy writing, the silly-lovey-fluff incarnate (it was, in reality, not fine.) !
Likes n Dislikes!: I'm a sucker for sap, fluff, and lots and lots of love-dovey bullshit! I also like stories about finding oneself and monsters being befriended or loved. I like space, aliens, robots, the odd and strange, injecting humanity into things not human, monsters, creatures, animals, the fae, concepts of spirits and karma and the afterlife, and more! I dislike 'fanservice', most anime tbh LOL it's not personal I just don't enjoy it im srry, FLY BABIES i know they have an actual name but i hate that word too pls just dont i will scream, sexually aggressive/forceful content/characters, being made to feel small, dumb, or trapped,
Other!: I have a pretty high gross-out tolerance! I also have a pretty high 'wow that's messed up huh' tolerance, in that sometimes I will just say stuff that's super grim or dark or messed up and not realize it lmao. I am full of random facts and anecdotes, especially weird or gross ones! sometimes i get on tangents that can go for actual hours so pls forgive that lol
WARNINGS: THIS BLOG MAY FEATURE CONTENT BASED ON/RELATED TO THEMES OF GUILT, CHILDHOOD LOSS, GRIEF, SELF HATRED, DISCONNECTION FROM REALITY/SELF, TRAUMA, AND SEVERE DEPRESSION/ANXIETY. YES I AM GETTING HELP. YES I AM OKAY. THANK YOU FOR YOUR PATIENCE AND UNDERSTANDING.
bonus persona: crybaby
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Greg Bryk was in episode 25 of Podcast141, co-hosted by Marwen Heni, Mars Lipowski, and Jim Boeven, to talk about his acting career in general, but also and mostly his role as Joseph Seed in Far Cry 5.
Since heâs already shared a lot of anecdotes in interviews and live videos on Instagram, I thought I wouldnât learn anything new... but I did, so hereâs a summary of what he said about his experience playing the Father.
We knew that the dev team (he specifically mentioned Dan Hay and Drew Holmes) had struggled to find the ârightâ actor for the role, but what I donât remember ever hearing before is that, after two years of unsuccessful search, the project was almost cancelled for this reason!
Thankfully, that was when Greg Bryk auditioned. He had already said the script they gave him (and that he thought was âamazingâ) was what became Josephâs monologue in the mission âWe Must Be Strongâ, but he gave more details about what was originally in it. In this early version of his backstory, Joseph was 23 years old and working two jobs to support his family. One night, exhausted, he fell asleep on the couch as his pregnant wife went out to get ice cream. He was then awoken by a knock on the door, told she had been in an accident, and taken to the hospital. The rest of the story is what he says in Far Cry 5: when he arrives, his wife is dead, their premature daughter is âstuffed with tubesâ, he hears Godâs calling, and understands he has to make this sacrifice.
So he got the role, and when they called him again to record a sermon (my guess is it was this one, but Iâm just speculating), he saw what the game looked like and thought everything and everyone was âincredibleâ. Over time, as they got to know him, they even changed the character and partly rewrote the Father specifically for him.
The team was also very accommodating. For example, the scenes are usually shot in the huge performance capture studio, but for the Heraldsâ eulogies, which are much more intimate, they built a small room so he felt like he actually had something around him instead of a big, empty space.
A day before the game came out, the cutscenes were already available online and he watched some of them. He was very impressed by the last eulogy (or, as he calls it, âsnot monologueâ) in particular because of how âvividâ and âhumanâ it felt. It brought tears to his eyes and he recalls his wife was âblown awayâ; it was âspecialâ.
As for the fans, he thinks theyâve been very supportive and welcoming. Some have told him they felt heard and seen by Joseph, and he believes itâs because heâs a character who loves people for who they are. At this point, he and the co-hosts agreed that being an actor was a gift because it gives an opportunity to make peopleâs lives better, especially in video games because thereâs a unique connection that doesnât really exist in movies or TV series.
Marwen Heni mentioned that, while most villains want you to hate them, Joseph, on the contrary, wanted you to reflect and think that he might be right. Greg Bryk admitted that he believed everything he said, especially about family and technology. Sometimes, people are isolated or only have online connections, so having someone tell them, âI see you and I love you for what you areâ is powerful. In his opinion, this message resonated with a lot of players because itâs a simple truth and we all want to be part of a family.
Joseph doesnât control his followers with fear, Marwen Heni commented, but with devotion, and that too makes him compelling. As he was playing Far Cry 5, he started questioning whether or not he (as the Deputy) was right for opposing the Father, which is something Greg Bryk says he saw a lot in comments. He believes thereâs âan intimacy to the relationshipâ between Joseph and the player, a âseductionâ in the sense that we all want to belong. Heâs humbled by the impact his work had on people.
When asked if he would be open to reprising the role, this time, he answered, âAbsolutelyâ. In fact, and this is news to me, he revealed there were discussions about turning Far Cry into a TV show, and the different games would have been standalone seasons. That said, he added that, at a certain point, itâs necessary to let characters go and that he was grateful for what he had already experienced playing the Father.
Marwen Heni then asked if Joseph, who is very complex, was entirely fictional or if it was Greg talking through him. He answered his characters are always him, to a degree, because he wants to connect with the material so he never lies and can work from things that matter to him. He never judges them and tries to think about what he wants to express through them. Heâs interested in their humanity and what motivates them. âWeâre all broken,â he said. âSome are much more broken than others, and sometimes those broken pieces are very sharp and jagged, and they lash out.â
He also revealed he had âvery specific ritualsâ to help him become a character and then let them go. He mentioned a few prayers that one of his friends, who is a Wiccan, taught him. In fact, and all the co-hosts agreed, it can be very hard to âdisconnectâ from a character sometimes because actors arenât just pretending; theyâre using real emotions.
He had already said his son Dempsey had done the mocap for John and Jacob in the Collapse DLC and that he felt carrying Ethanâs body in New Dawn was a way for him to honor his âboyâ, his dead dog Lucky, since he deeply regretted that he couldnât be there to take him to the veterinarian the day he passed. What I didnât know, however, is that it was Greg himself who had asked if Joseph could carry Ethan, and the team made it happen. He also explained that, when it was time to play this scene, he tried to imagine what it would be like to actually lose his son.
But who is Greg Brykâs favorite Far Cry villain? Well, when he auditioned and started researching the franchise, he was interested in Vaas because of Michael Mandoâs performance. He still doesnât know him personally but has a friend who worked with him and who spoke about âhow electrifying his talent wasâ. Thereâs something âunhingedâ and âprimalâ to him as a performer; heâs a âwildâ and âspecialâ actor.
Finally, when told he was born to play Joseph, he confessed he felt he was indeed âcalledâ to play this part but wants to give credit to Dan Hay, Drew Holmes, and Jean-SĂ©bastien DĂ©cant for creating such a âterrifyingly humanâ antagonist in the first place.
#guys... the 'eulogy box' is real!#greg bryk#podcast141#marwen heni#mars lipowski#jim boeven#joseph seed#far cry 5#michael mando#vaas montenegro#far cry new dawn#far cry 5 spoilers#far cry new dawn spoilers#far cry 6 collapse#joseph collapse#dan hay#drew holmes#jean-sébastien décant
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i absolutely adore your designs! id love to hear about your process for making characters who look similar in canon have unique and identifiable features!!
tysm :,) iâve always been really into character design so itâs fun to translate that into characters i love.
as for making similar looking characters look different i drew up a little lineup.
this is gonna be a long one sjhdjsjs
cassie, steph, and mia are all beloved white, blonde, *skinny, teenage girls with roughly the same appearance so i decided to focus in on them.
(*theyâre usually portrayed as being muscular/fit but nowhere near in same fashion as their male counterparts)
i wish there was a fancier way to put it, but honestly i just play around with shape language until i get a design i like. i try to lean into motifs/commonalities. (ex: the robins have larger noses to be sort of bird-like, cissie has a heart face to tie into the connection between archery & cupid, the house of el s-curl, cassieâs pigtails are shaped like stars) overall, doing lineups like these are really helpful when trying to make characters look different because it shows you a side-by-side of all the similarities & differences in how i draw the characters.
especially when they interact a lot (ex: wally & roy, kon & tim, cissie & greta) i donât want them looking like siblings or to repeat the same features between characters who already look similar. unless iâm playing into that (dick & donna <3)
when changing race or body types, i try to factor in the actual character & their backstory. i tend to draw cassie stockier because of her more brawler-like fighting style + her being one of shorter yj kids. but also, i made greta chubby both because i thought it worked well with her shape language and i simply wanted to. the world is my oyster.
as for race, iâm a lot more careful about thinking about how being non-white would affect a character. i have to know a decent amount about a character before hitting them with The Self-Indulgence Beam. making a character black, brown, or asian shouldnât be slapped on like a sticker without any care put into it. i feel like itâs a well-known point, but itâs worth mentioning especially because iâm black & i make so many characters non-white when i draw them.
back to canon portrayals, theyâre some unique features given to them (ex: stephâs freckles arenât always drawn but they do get featured a few times) so i try to make things like that a permanent physical feature. the curls were simply inspired by some other stephs iâve seen :) i typically hc that she straightens & crimps them when sheâs a teenager but i drew her with them for this example. i got very self-indulgent with my steph design because sheâs my girl, but i also tried to keep in mind how she complements the people she interacts with the most (cass, tim, babs).
although iâve enjoyed what iâve read with her, i know the least about mia. so, i just gave her features iâd like to see more on teenage characters like acne. i pulled from some panels for the shape of her nose and adjusted the shade of her hair about a million times. i debated on giving her piercings, but ended up going against it because she doesnât have invulnerability nor a full face mask & she doesnât have piercings in any of the panels i saw of her.
although iâm not the hugest fan of the reveal of cassie secretly being a demigod rather than just having been given her powers, her being not entirely human gives me a little bit more leeway with her design in my head. hence the stark blonde in her lashes being inspired by fantasy design i enjoy.
one more thing i almost forgot was scars. obviously heroes with no powers would have more visible scars. just with the bats: they all have body scarring but i draw cass with more facial scars because of her history + sheâs herself so she wouldnât bother covering them v.s. tim, who doesnât have visible facial scars bc heâs Very Particular about appearances, but he has a crooked nose.
scars can be fun to play with as far as trying to remember what happens to certain characters that would leave them scarred (cissieâs scar where the arrow went through her, any scars kon got from literally dying, wallyâs or barryâs scarring from their âaccidentsâ) theyâre an interesting trait to add & reflects the whole vigilantism thing.
okay i think thatâs all the thoughts i have. ik this got kinda rambley but i hope it was helpful đ
here are some closeups, as a treat <3
#ask and u shall receive#franollie#iâm sure thereâs more but this is all i got rn#hopefully i will get more concise in the future lmao#bart (as in bug art)#cassie sandsmark#steph brown#stephanie brown#mia dearden#dc#long post
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10. hold you from the world and it's curse
Woman | Joel Miller X Female Reader
Rating: Mature/Explicit
Chapter Summary: You begin to come to terms with things. Ellie struggles with the limits of her immunity.
Tags: Joel Miller X Female Reader. Age Gap (13/14 years). HBO Characters. Mostly cannon compliant for show & game. Timeline is changed.
Chapter Warnings: pregnancy related things, angst, hurt & comfort, self worth issues, Character Death, references to canon violence and gore, talk about guns & shooting people (mercifully), lots of grief, anger,
Notes: huge thank you to my constants, my rocks @ramblers-lets-get-ramblinand @janaispunk for beta reading and letting me yell and scream and break their hearts.
If you have checked out Before, I would encourage you to do so for more backstory on our dear reader! The final part is out now!
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When Maria was pregnant, she unashamedly let her bump grow in front of the gaze of the town. It came on with the winter months but she kept her coats unbuttoned and off while inside. She was excited, cherishing it all, marking and sharing milestones as she could. You donât do any of it. You keep your bulky coats zipped and make sure your layers disguise your growing abdomen.Â
Itâs not a secret by any means, but you know even in the tight-knit community of Jackson there are still people who donât know as you approach your 23rd week of pregnancy, even if you feel twice as large at this stage as you did during your first pregnancy. Itâs been getting easier to keep the layers on as the temperature falls and Christmas approaches.
But itâs only a few days from Christmas, and thereâs a dance. Youâve fallen in love with the dances again. While itâs a relatively casual event as everything in Jackson is, youâre not prancing in there in your worn leggings and layered jacket. The body heat flowing between the dancing bodies is more than enough without your layer. With the extra heat youâre producing on your own, youâre sure youâd pass out in 20 minutes.Â
You have one option: the dress with quarter-length sleeves and a skirt that hits your knees. You basically lived in that dress when pregnant with Carter, but it accentuates your condition. Thatâs the last thing youâre ready for, the stares, the questions, the congratulations. You feel a vein of guilt rush through you. You shouldnât dread people congratulating you on this.Â
You rest your hand on top of your swollen stomach. Youâre starting to feel the baby move more often. Itâs just as weird as it was with Carter, but it still sends a little thrill through you each time.Â
Joel walks out of the bathroom to find you sitting on the bed in his sweatshirt staring at the closet like a monster might come barreling out at any given moment. âSweetheart,â he says. âItâs almost time to go.âÂ
You bite at your thumbnail, the closet mocking you. Itâs just a dress. Why does it feel like so much more? âWe donât have to go. Letâs just stay in.â
âAfter you bribed Morgan with heaven and earth to watch Carter?â He crosses his arms, eyebrows raised.
âWe could just stay here? Do other things.â You shoot him a suggestive wink.Â
Joel seems to consider it for a moment. He surprisingly enjoys the dances. Thereâs something about the semblance of normalcy, and the night he kissed you in front of the whole town is a fond memory, but he likes being alone with you more. He sees through it though. Youâre avoiding something.
Easing next to you, his shoulder brushes yours. He gazes at your profile as you keep your eyes pinned to the closet door. His fingertips brush along your cheek rounding behind your ear. âWhatâs actually buggin you?âÂ
Chewing your lip, you finally meet his gaze, unshed tears shimmering in your eyes. âIf I put on that dress, everyone is gonna know.â
He sighs, arm wrapping around your shoulders. You lean into him, your heart rate slowing. âWe canât avoid it forever.â
âI know. I just thought I could for longer.â
âBaby, youâre over halfway there,â Joel cracks a smile. âAnd I promise that most of the town already knows.â
âYeah, but they donât officially know.âÂ
Joel wraps his arm around you, letting his hand fall over the one that rests on your bump. âWe have to face it sooner or later. Maybe even embrace it?â He kisses your temple. He manages to pull a slight smile from your lips.
He rubs your arm softly as your head eases to his shoulder. âIâd really like to spin you around that dance floor, kiss ya for everyone to see. We donât have to go for long, but I think youâll feel better.â
You inhale deeply, nodding softly. âHelp me up. Iâll get dressed.â
âNow I know youâre not that pregnant.â He grins, standing before you and pulling you to your feet anyway.Â
You laugh, arms wrapping around his shoulders. You sway, pressed against him for a few seconds. Your lips press against his and then heâs pressing against your hips, directing you toward the closet. âGet dressed, Sweetheart.â
He kisses your head and slips out of the bedroom. You steady yourself with a deep breath before finally opening the closet. You can do this.Â
Carter is sitting on Joelâs lap as he reads him a book. Morgan preps a light snack in the kitchen. You havenât worn a dress in ages. This is the only one you own. You traded the others ages ago.Â
Carter sees you first, letting out a soft gasp. âMommy, you look so pretty!â
Joelâs head snaps up, the book lowering in front of him. Carter jumps off Joelâs lap, rushing toward you. You laugh, going to your knee to accept his hug. Heâs still small enough for you to pick up and spin around, squeezing him tightly too you. He laughs as you pepper his cheek with kisses. âYouâre gonna listen to Miss Morgan, right?â You stare right into his eyes, keeping him at eye level with you.
Carter nods with a great solemness. His big eyes sparkle in the light, his nose pressed to yours. His bright eyes are so close to yours, so reminiscent of Gabeâs. It sends a soft ache through you that he doesnât get to be here for these moments. âDaddy already made me promise.âÂ
âDid he?â A grin captures your lips as you glance over to Joel.
Joel rises from the couch with a chuckle, adjusting his jeans over his hips.Â
âMhmm,â Carter says, kissing your nose before he slides to the ground. He rushes off toward the kitchen. âMiss Morgan? Is my snack ready?â
Joel laughs, watching the child disappear before sliding his arms around your midsection. âYou look beautiful, but thatâs nothing new.â
Heat floods your cheeks. Once again youâre smiling like a flustered schoolgirl. âYou gonna take me out, Miller?â
âTempted to take you upstairs.â He winks. His hands travel down your back to your ass. No underwear lines, just as he expected to find. One of these days heâs going to figure out what you have against the damn garment. The last thing he needs to know is that youâre bare under the skirt, that when he spins you around tonight and your skirt spins youâll feel the air moving against you.
You let out a laugh, pushing against his shoulders. âToo late for that, Miller. I put on the dress. Weâre going.â You head toward the kitchen.Â
Joel lets out a groan trailing behind you. You give Morgan a few instructions, but sheâs familiar with the routine by now. âI love you,â You kiss Carterâs cheek as he eats at the table. âMommy and Daddy will be back after you go to sleep.â
âI know.â Carter grins proudly, face scrunching up slightly. âLove you, Mommy.â
Joel leans down, kissing Carterâs other cheek. âYou behave.â
Carter cheese again, kissing both your cheeks in quick succession. âLove you, Daddy.â
âLove you too, bud.â He chuckles softly.Â
Joel pushes you toward the door, helping you into your warmest coat before you can find a way to stall. Your legs freeze on the way to the Tipsy Bison, cool air shooting right up your skirt. This might be the first time youâve regretted your commitment to not wearing underwear.Â
Joelâs hand stays pressed to your back on the short walk over as if heâs trying to keep you from making a break to the safety of your home but The Tipsy Bison welcomes you in with warmth and vibrance, drowning out all your fears. When Joel helps you out of your coat, something amazing happens. The world keeps spinning. People go about their evening, seemingly oblivious to your arrival and your announcement. Throughout the night, you get a few stares and a few congratulations, you take them all with grace.Â
After exhausting you on the dance floor, your stamina not what it was thanks to your pregnancy, Joel guides you toward a back corner. Chairs line the wall but few people mill about on the outskirts.Â
âIâll go get you some water,â Joel says, kissing your warm cheeks.Â
You smile at him as he weaves through the throngs of people. Before you can sit down, you catch sight of Ellie further down the line of chairs. She watches, arms resting on her knees, the cheer of the night like an outsider looking in, the rush and thrill of the night ineffective against her armor.Â
You tilt your head to the side before approaching. You ease beside her, letting out a soft sigh. You hook your foot under the legs of a stray chair to pull it closer so you have a place to prop your feet. Ellie doesnât acknowledge you. She makes no movements that indicate sheâs even aware of your presence.Â
You follow her line of sight to the opposing corner. Dina and Jesse are flirting like all of Jackson doesnât have eyes. Cat rolls her eyes at something Chris Lamer says to her, a playful insult likely rolling off her lips. The sight brings a smile to your lips. At least within these walls, they can act like teenagers.
âYouâre not feeling very social tonight?â
Ellie lets out a sigh, falling back in her chair. She shoves her hair behind her shoulder. Itâs getting longer than youâve ever seen it. She shrugs. âJust not feeling it tonight.â
âWish Iâd known that before I bribed Morgan to watch Carter.â You offer a teasing grin. She doesnât return it, crossing her arms over her chest as she shifts in her seat. Your brow furrows. âWhatâs up, Ellie?â
She bristles, taking her time to find words. âYou look nice tonight.â
âYouâre deflecting.â
âPeople do that when they donât wanna talk about things.â
âWhich usually means they should talk about things.â
She glances over at you, unamused. You smile back, but she doesnât say a word, letting her eyes fall back over to her friends.Â
âYou know,â you say. âI didnât want to come tonight.â
She looks surprised. âYou and Joel love these things.â
âYeahâŠâ You nod, eyes scanning over the crowd. âBut I canât really hide this anymore.â You motion to your swollen abdomen. âEspecially not in this dress. Which is about the only thing that fits me now.â
Her eyes flicker over to you, landing on your bump. You catch something in her eyes. âI thought youâd gotten used to it.â
âDonât know that thatâll ever happen,â you sigh.Â
âEven with Joel moving in?âÂ
Thatâs when it clicks. The changes. You shouldâve known, or guessed. Joel brought the last of his things over last week. Ellie decided early on to stay in Joelâs house, or her house now.Â
âEllie, if youâve changed your mind-â
âNo,â she cuts you off. âI havenât- at least I donât think I have.â She bites her lip, frame ridgid. âGuess I didnât think it would feel any different. He basically lived over there already.â
âBut his things are gone now.â
Her eyes snap to yours like youâve hit the nail on the head. Her eyes look shiny under the Christmas lights strung from the rafters. She blinks a couple times.Â
âI didnât think Iâd miss that damn owl mug so much. I used to hate the way its eyes followed me when I was in the kitchen.â
A laugh tips out of your mouth. âGlad to hear it. Iâll smuggle it back over to you.â
Ellieâs head shakes, a smile pushing against the edges of her face. âHell no. I said I missed it, not that I wanted it back in my house.â
The two of you laugh together until a comfortable silence forms between you. You feel like there might be another layer, but youâve pushed as much as you can tonight surrounded by people. Sheâs smiling, the tension gone from her body, and thatâs the most important thing right now.Â
âChange is hard.â Ellie says.Â
âSo damn hard.â You agree. âDonât make yourself a stranger, okay? I know youâre like kind of an adult in this world and a certified homeowner now.â You wink at her and she laughs with a shake of her head. âBut we still want you around as much as we did. Really even more.â
âSo youâre not tired of me?â she asks. Sheâs joking, but you catch the hint of a real question, that soft need for assurance.
Your arm wraps around her shoulders, tugging her close. âNever. I mean, who else is gonna talk to Carter about space. That shit goes right over my head.â She laughs, head falling onto your shoulder. âBut in all seriousness, I donât think Iâd ever get tired of you, Ellie. Youâre my family.â
âGuess Iâm not very good at this family stuff.â
âWeâre all still learning.âÂ
She nods softly, waiting just a few seconds before pulling away. She looks better, lighter. Her eyes land over on her group of friends, seemingly glued to one particular female. You look between them, a knowing grin on your face. âYou know, I think sheâd say yes if you asked her to dance.âÂ
Ellieâs eyes snap to you, confusion dancing in them.Â
âIâve known you for years, my dear. You canât hide much from me.âÂ
She bites her lip as Joel finally materializes out of the crowd with your water in hand. âSorry it took me so long. Adam was trying to rope me into trouble.â
You raise an eyebrow suspiciously.Â
âStayed out of it. Cross my heart, darlin.â He leans down to kiss your cheek.Â
âYou two are gross.â Ellie teases as she stands, stretching her arms above her head.Â
âPromise I can make it even grosser.â Joel chuckles, easing into the chair next to you.
âThatâs not even a word.â You roll your eyes, swatting him away from you. He only laughs more, arm settling across the back of your chair, finger tips twisting and turning lightly across your shoulder.Â
âAs much as Iâd hate to see that,â Ellie says, taking a step back. Sheâs returned to her usual, playful self. âIâm going to join my friends.â With that, she dashes off.Â
You and Joel talk in hushed tones, playful flirting firing between you. Heâs distracting you, definitely trying to seduce you, and itâs working. As he pulls you through the crowd, youâre surprised to see Ellie dancing with Cat.Â
Youâre in the clinic the next afternoon when she bursts in looking wide eyed and terrified. She reminds you of the 14 year old you met two and half years ago. Your heart drops to your stomach. She was on patrol. They werenât due back until tomorrow.Â
âEllie, what-â
She collides with your chest, sobs shaking her small frame. Your arms fly around her, holding her close. Your brain wracks through names and faces. Who was she with? Who did your community lose this time? But your brain wonât work, canât piece together who youâve seen today tucked within the safety of the clinic and who you havenât.Â
Eventually, she pulls away, eye red and swollen, cheeks flushed from crying and wind chapped. She doesnât look any closer to sanity than when she walked in. Her eyes search frantically about.Â
âEllie,â you say firmly, trying to capture her attention. She doesnât seem to notice, slipping through your fingers when you attempt to grab her shoulders.Â
She scrounges through a bin until she feels the cool metal of scissors. The metal flashes in the clinic lights. She slams them down on the counter. âCut it.â
âCut what?â Youâre confused and worried, your mind spinning as youâre still trying to process who was lost today, two days before Christmas. âEllie-â
âMy hair!â Tears stream down her hair. âI shouldâve never let it get this long- I donât even like it- and now-â Another sob breaks through, her voice cracking.Â
You pull her back into your arms. She fights against you. âPlease, just cut it off!â Sheâs desperate, barely hanging on. âI want it gone.â
âOkay.â You say. âOkay. Sit down.âÂ
She plops onto the nearest chair, eyes fixed on the letters of the eye chart straight ahead. Itâs silent, nothing except the snip of the sheers. You could hear a pin drop, can hear her long tresses drop to the floor. You take it to her shoulders, about where it was when you first met her. This isnât the first time youâve cut her hair, but it feels like the most impactful.Â
âShorter.â She says.
You place your fingers midway between her shoulders and earlobes. She shakes her head. You move a little further up and still another shake of her head. You repeat it until your fingers are right under her earlobes. Finally, you get a nod.Â
You hand her a hand mirror when youâre finished. She looks it over. It suits her, you think, makes her look older.Â
âThanks.â
âEllie?â
She hears the question in your voice, knows what youâre asking. Sheâs not sure if she can manage the words to describe the pictures looping through her mind.Â
âWe ran into a couple infected. Got most of them except for one. I- my hair got caught on a bush.â
She holds eye contact with your reflection in the mirror. She shakes her head, the tears return. âI told Chris to go. I could handle it.â
You shudder. These are always hard, no remains to bring home, very little closure. You know first hand what itâs like, but losing teenagers on patrol is the hardest, losing someone Ellieâs age brings the danger too close.
âHe came back. Put his arm in front of its mouth when it went to bite me.â
âFuckâŠâ itâs out of your mouth before your brain catches up.Â
âI told him to leave me. I had my knife. I wouldâve been fine.â It's barely a whisper, her hands shake.
âEllie.â You reach out to take the mirror from her but she slams it to the ground. It shatters.Â
âI wouldâve been fine!â Her body shakes with all the rage it can hold, angry tears stream down her cheeks. âI had to shoot him! I wouldâve been fine, but now heâs dead instead!â
You pull her into you. She tries to fight it, but you donât let go this time, not until her tears dry up and her body stops shaking. When she pulls back, you cup her cheeks. Her voice is hoarse, scratching her throat until she settles for a whisper. âI have to do something. This canât keep happening.â
âEllie, itâs not your fault.â
âI think it is this time.â
Your heart breaks for her, because you see the determination set in her eyes. Sheâs convinced and thereâs not a single thing you can say or do to change her mind.Â
âI could fix this. I could save people! Whatâs the point of everything? Why was I made immune? To watch everyone get infected and die around me?!â
âWhat happened to Chris wasnât your fault.â
âHe tried to save me because he thought I needed it! And then I had to put a bullet in his head. There was no reason!â
âYou didnât kill him. Cordyceps did.â
âAre you sure? Or is that just what you tell yourself so you donât get mad at Maria for killing your husband?â
Your breath catches in your chest. You know she doesnât mean it, but it stings. It digs deep. You had blamed her at one point, spat the words in her face, but you push it away. You apologized. She granted forgiveness. You donât blame her anymore.Â
Her eyes burn with a rage youâve never seen. You see the guilt weighing on her. Youâre not sure sheâll be able to shake this one, another ghost to the host that haunts her.Â
Itâs quiet in the clinic. You canât explain away what she feels. This one was preventable. There was a happy ending in sight. You both know that.Â
âLook at my blood. Iâm ready.â
âNot today.â
âWhy not!?â
âYouâre not in the right state of mind for this. None of us are.â
âItâs a vial of blood!â
âNot today, Ellie.â Youâre firm.Â
âWhat if something happens to you? Or Joel? Or Carter? Or this baby? And I couldâve stopped it?â Sheâs pleading, grasping at straws.Â
âAnother day. When youâre in a better place.â
âI canât do nothing anymore!â
You hold her gaze. Sheâs stubborn, but so are you. Sheâs like a deer stuck in headlights, mind darting between rushing forward or darting back until itâs frozen. Then sheâs gone in the blink of any eye. Only then do you allow room for your emotions to fill the empty clinic.Â
Youâre alone for maybe an hour before Joel finds you face up on one of the cots, tears streaming from the corners of your eyes. He lets out a long sigh, kneeling at your bedside. His hand runs over your head as you turn your head to him.
âI take it you heard?â
âFrom the source herself.âÂ
Joel inhales sharply. âShe wouldnât talk to me when I went over.â
You take a deep breath, chest quivering as you do. You ease into a sitting position. Joel helps you up. Your feet dangle over the side. He sits next to you, arm supporting your back.Â
âShe feels guilty?â Joel asks.Â
âSheâs blaming herself.â You run a hand over your face. âChris put himself between her and the infected. Got bit so she wouldnât.â
âShit.â Joel cringes.Â
You nod, keeping the rest to yourself. It doesnât feel right to share the rest of what happened. You walk home together. The town feels silent. You pass a few people on the street, but theyâre mostly in their homes, holding their families close.Â
Maria comes out of Ellieâs house as you reach your congregation of houses. Unspoken words pass between you and your oldest friend. Joel kisses your head.Â
âIâll go get Carter from Tommyâs,â he says, leaving you and Maria.They nod to each other in passing.Â
âShe tell you?â
Maria nods. You catch the tension in her chest, even under her many layers. Sheâs reliving it too.Â
âYou know that was the hardest thing Iâve ever done.â Youâve rarely heard her voice quiver.Â
Your arms wrap around her. She holds on to you. âI know.â You donât have more tears to shed, but you would if you did. âIt wasnât your fault.âÂ
âI know that⊠now.â Maria sighs, arms staying around you. âShe doesnât. Not sure she ever will.â
âI know.âÂ
The two of you stand in the middle of the street, depending on each other for support until Joel and Tommy pull you inside, worried you might freeze. You spend the evening at Tommy and Mariaâs. Itâs mostly quiet. Joel plucks at the strings of his guitar. Heâs only missing one string now. Elias plays contently in the corner. Carter sits beside Joel, intently watching the way his fingers play across the frets. Youâre doing what the rest of the town is, leaning on family for support.Â
Eventually, the front door opens. Dina and Jesse pull Ellie inside. She looks like a ghost of herself, eyes skirting around trying to figure out who she should sit beside. You get the feeling you werenât the only one who got snapped at today.Â
âWe didnât want to leave her alone,â Dina says.Â
You pick up the blanket on your lap, making room for her next to you on the couch. Her head picks up, looking for permission, like you might reject her after what she said earlier. You only nod your head and sheâs falling beside you, curling up in a ball, head tucked into your side. You wrap the blanket around her.
âThank you.â You smile up at Dina and Jesse.Â
They nod. âWeâll see you tomorrow, Ellie,â Dina says. Ellie manages a small nod.Â
The pair leaves and the quiet settles again. Joel is more thoughtful in his chord progressions, humming a soft melody. Carter makes his way toward you. He peers down at her.Â
âI like your hair, Ellie,â He whisper yells. Ellieâs lips tip up just a little bit, but she doesnât move otherwise. âI hope you feel better soon.â He kisses her cheek before wiggling in between you and Maria on your other side.Â
Joelâs voice starts to raise as he sings. His voice has polished some the past few years, after being dormant for two decades. It reminds you more what he sounded like before the outbreak. Carter is asleep before the first song ends. As Joel transitions into another song, thereâs movement in your womb. Itâs happened more lately, but this picks up. Whatever the baby can hear, it likes.Â
You peel through your knowledge of gestational benchmarks. Youâre approaching the mark that it would be able to hear sounds outside of your womb, your voice, Joelâs. The kicking ramps up. You shift and Ellie picks her head up. âShould I-â
âNo, youâre fine.â You both keep your voices low.Â
But she looks unsure as you shift again. You let out a soft sigh, taking her hand and pressing it into the firm mass just above your hip. Her brow furrows and then she feels it, a firm thud right under her hand.Â
âWoah⊠Thatâs so weird.âÂ
You smile. âYou can hit back.â She looks confused. âJust nudge back. I promise, it doesnât hurt.â
She does, a little soft at first and then harder. Thereâs a pause and then a double tap against her hand again.Â
Ellie laughs. She actually laughs. Joy flashes across her face. Her hand doesnât move for the rest of the evening.
Joel is curled around you in bed that night, holding you tightly to him. Ellie sleeps in the downstairs guest room and youâre 98% sure you heard Carterâs footsteps head down stairs as soon as your bedroom door closed. It would hardly be the first time heâs crawled into bed with her.Â
Joel can feel the baby moving around under his arm. He doesnât say anything about it, but you can feel the faint smile against your neck. Tonight with Ellie, the smile on her face as she essentially played with the baby, your baby sticks in your brain. You meant it to cheer her up, figured it would slide into that category of weird but cool. It seemed to, but it was really the first time youâd embraced the pregnancy, and it felt good.Â
âYou think Ellieâs gonna be okay?â He asks.Â
You bite your lip, contemplating your response. You get a literal punch to the gut, getting out a soft grunt.Â
Joel chuckles. âThat was a hard one.â
Something sprouts in your chest. Heâs never directly acknowledged feeling the baby even though you know he has before tonight. Youâre okay with it.Â
âThe baby seemed to like your singing tonight.âÂ
Joelâs arms tighten around you. His smile grows. âThat so?â
âYeah,â You lay your hand on top of his. âGuess youâll have to sing more often.â
âSuppose I will.âÂ
Silence falls again. You know heâs still waiting patiently for your response to his first question. You give it a minute.Â
âI think itâs going to take a long time.â You roll over so you can face him. He cups your face, thumb running across your cheek.
He nods, mouth opening to say something before he closes it, eyes roaming over your moonlit features.Â
âWhat is it?â
He sighs. âJust thought of something, but I shouldnât-â
âWhat?â
âIf we were out, and I got infected- Iâd take care of it myself. I wouldnât make you do that. Wouldnât make anyone do it.â
You run your finger over the scar on his temple. Itâs a serious conversation, one you hate the idea of, but you canât help the teasing remark that comes out. âYou so sure about that?â
Joel takes your hand in his, kissing each of your fingers. âTo protect you, Iâd do anything, Sweetheart.âÂ
You let out a shaky breath, touching your forehead to his. âI think youâd have to put the bullet in my head.â
âAinât ever gonna happen. Iâll make sure of that.âÂ
You want to shake your head at the chivalry, at the thing he canât promise, but somehow you still believe him. Joel Miller will learn how to turn back time before he lets anything or anyone near you.Â
His hand falls back to your stomach, running over and around your bump. You inhale deeply, feeling drawn toward sleep.Â
âSweetheart?â
âHmmm?â
âIf itâs something else that gets me⊠where Iâm not putting you in dangerâŠâ
âJoel,â You want him to stop. You canât think of that happening. You canât think about him not coming back to you in one piece. Especially after what happened to Paul this summer. Especially now that youâre pregnant.Â
âI want the last thing I hear to be your voice. Not a gunshot. Thatâs all.â He rubs your back.Â
Tears gather under the lids of your closed eyes. Heâs thought about this. You fight the constricting happening in your chest, remind yourself this is all hypothetical.Â
âOkay.â You manage, wrapping your arms around his neck. âWhen weâre both old and senile, Iâll make sure to tell you goodnight so that itâs the last thing you ever hear.âÂ
He chuckles lightly, kissing your temple. âOkay.âÂ
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