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Speaking of toxic yuri.. (I actually lied I haven’t even asked a question on this blog before, I am a fraud.)
Toxic polyN25 from Kanade’s side would be a bit.. silly to put it. (Or at least any ship that has toxic yuri with Kanade, I just put polyN25 because it made the most sense.) Because like Mizuki probs is one of the best adjusted in the group I think. Family wise at least.
(I don’t remember if we ever saw her parents but I know her relationship with her sister is healthy at least.)
I def know that she would have moments gen wondering if the whole relationship is fully non toxic. Maybe Ena and her would bewondering if they accidentally built a co-dependent relationship. Cause it would be suspicious after many dates altogether yk? (I include Ena because let’s be real, Mafuyu probably wouldn’t see anything wrong with how kanade is acting.) This probably would equal to situations like this:
MZ: “Hey I’m gonna head out now! Do any of you need something?”
EA: “Oh can you pick you some *insert random as s thing idk*?”
KE: “Actually, can we come with you? I feel like it would be good for us to take a walk..”
MZ (who probably would be going to work): “Okay..?”
And then when it actually comes down to it they rarely even separate.
Anyways gang this is just the insane ramblings of a mad person don’t be shy to share your thoughts. This whole thing was spurred because I saw one of your toxic yuri posts from kanades side after starting to rewrite a fanfic where I kill Mizuki, what am I even doing. Really nice aus btw.
WHERE ARE YOU GUYS COMING FROM 😰😰 (really silly btw tho I love hearing yalls sporadic thoughts ASDLKJHSJKF)
Glad my flipped toxic kanamafu has an effect on yall :3 also ty (about the AUs) !!
Toxic polyniigo would be like . insane tho honestly- Like I can agree with Mizuki and Ena being more aware of where their entire relationship is going, while Kanade and Mafuyu get too absorbed in their Everything to really look at what's happening clearly.
I could even amuse Ena falling off herself from the events of Mizu5 and Ena5, becoming clingy and such
Mmm but one can also amuse ☝️the entirety of Nightcord sticking together after everything to an unhealthy degree because they cannot, or ever do not, want to fathom the idea of losing any one of them. They do not want this safe space that they have built amongst themselves against the rest of the world to fall apart, to leave them vulnerable and back in their state of hurt.
Because of how much they understand each other (possibly combined with their previous pain of being misunderstood and the guilt they carry with them), who knows if anyone else gets them? And with any comfort they've given each other, they're not going to want to lose that feeling.
They need to be by each others side, always, to know they're still there 💥
#bwaahh i feel like some of this is redundant but i tried my best to rotate it in my brain ☝️(pardon me as its almost 2:40am)#anyway good luck w/ your rewrite anon 💀hope it goes well and also ty again for the ask DSJFHSDF#project sekai#nightcord at 25:00#polyniigo#idk how i should tag this so have w/e i guess erm JDSHFSJDKF#ash chats#ask
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I feel somewhat bad about Arcane being disappointing, but Riot fumbling godtier storytelling/worldbuilding is on par for the course of their decade long relationship of retconning foundational aspects of their characters and plot that just "didn't work out". Sorry you all had to find out this way.
#to me arcane s1 already rewrote a lot so i was entirely checked out from the beginning as a LoL fan#Vi and Caitlyn from League vs Vi and Caitlyn from Arcane are basically entirely separate entities and its fine! really!#I have zero investment in a sideplot made mainplot that drastically rewrites so much that you might as well not associate it with LoL#anyways i know people who are fans of arcane hate LoL so i guess we're both unhappy now 🙃
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The episode where Lance's Lion gets taken except they take Lance too and he has to get out and for some reason the only plan they have is having Keith in Yellows Mouth as they desperately try to catch up with them and they have to do the scene from The Runaway Bride from Doctor Who cause Lance absolutely does not trust Keith will catch him
And later Hunk yells at him cause he's known Lance a while and there's no way with the trust issues he displayed at the very beginning that he wouldn't have kept his beady eyes trained on Lance so it ended up with Lance having to track Rolo instead and they have to switch up their plan
#its the stupidest and most derivative rewrite episode i wanna do but i so want for this to a little bit#be the very beginning of Lances bi arc#where Hunk is like no nope i domt trust these people and ik how easily youre distracted by pretty girls#and demands he keep an eye on everyone#so rolo tries to tell pidge he and the robot need to collect some supplies and thinking he has this handled takes the bait#and offers to go in pidges stead#then rolo begins to flirt with him and lamce gets dazed 1. by being flirted with and 2. cause hes lowkey into being flirted with by this guy#and rolo takes the opportunity to get him and the lion who hed taken with him as back up#and then the runaway bride scene happens cause it gives lance and keith the opportunity to restablish trust#after they bonded and then Lance joked it never happened#the chance to show their rivalry is well and truly behind them and that they trust each other#and also allows hunk to be like lance what the hell i put you in charge of the not the girl how the hell.did you get caught unaware#and lance is like... i guess i got distracted csuse i totally thougjt i could handle in a fight... thats it... yeah#and that explanation flies with mostly everyone except shiro an elder gay and keith whos like... yeah i got distracted by that guy too#but idk why you wouldve unless....#voltron#vld#voltron: legendary defender#lance mcclain#lance vld#the klance in the tags is mostly platonic its like at the stage where its not being hinted at... yet
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maybe i can get bold & work out an au where he doesnt die at all but tbh with the tempering its like. he kinda needs to die to be freed from that doesnt he. although i could bullshit an explanation where clashing with the wol & the wol "absorbing his darkness" or whatever also overcame the tempering somehow. Eats your darkness god influence yum
#ffposting#emey selchie tag#issue is that i would need to rewrite some scenes to make them still have impact#i dont think i can do anything about sos. nothing can keep the exact tone & impact &i shouldnt expect that#if emet intervened there itd feel more like lamaty'i in interphos honestly which is good too but different#as for the end of edw... ah.......#well i do have an idea but it would include an entire extra plotline...#like. if hermes showed up instead of emet itd be really fucking cool actually. but aitiascope.#i guess i can void the end of that cutscene. lol. what purpose did it serve anyway. quenching the 3 asahi fans? get off my dick#hermes showing up to help face meteion after making peace to a degree w his actions & beliefs. it would be cool.#especially since. idk it would be!!! ugh im. sorry i dont want the ancients to be dead put me in a box & shake it really hard#'you have to let go' im the number 1 necromancy guy & its not bc i like necromancy but bc i like characters. No#the extra plotline wouldve been abt doing something about that aitiascope cutscene but like#it would feel a little forced & like oh of course amon/hermes is showing up to help now since we helped him more overtly#voiding asahis presence doesnt change much to the narrative & makes things run more smoothly in the hypothetical rewrite#& then edw ends & all my ancient friends are back bc of a miracle of life right :) ya yayyay yayyy#yeah you got me i dont like character death. whatever
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potential sonic 3 spoilers incoming if anyone cares. anyway . apparently there was an official survey about the knuckles show/scu in general and one of the questions was about what name you would use for an eggman/shadow/gerald teamup. which is a weirdly specific question. and also one of the name options was team dark …….. ?? even though rouge isnt mentioned in the question and theres no sign of her being in the next movie in general ? i was willing to accept amy being introduced a little after knuckles and tails but between there still being no sign of her being in the next movie and now this if they actually have gerald time travel or something and have him be the third member of the dark story trio instead of rouge then i will be fully convinced that theyre going out of their way to exclude as many already existing girl characters as possible. like i get cgi is expensive which could be part of the reason rouge might not have made the cut. but damn . assuming this is real anyway it could just be another fake leak but idk
#im not saying the writers hate all the girl characters (iirc they have said they like amy and rouge and shown interest in adding them)#and i also dont think the movies have to be complete copies of the games in terms of stories and characters#but some of the decisions being made here are so weird and kinda show a lack of care for those characters ..#its especially odd that iirc theyve said that part of what influences the choices on what characters to use is popularity/recognizability#both to fans of the games as well as more casual viewers#yet they might be rewriting a major part of the story just to include gerald over rouge?#and they wanted a character who was a ghost echidna that guided the living characters and they picked pachacamac#instead of tikal who both already fits that description And is more popular?#okay well i doubt casual viewers would know who tikal is but they dont know who pachacamac is either#and its also an objective fact that tikal is more popular among fans . Man .#also theres the thing of knuckles being given a connection to iblis when thats already elise (and blaze)'s thing#to be fair knuckles is way more popular and recognizable than elise. and i really doubt sonic 06 would get adapted#but still#maria IS confirmed to be in the next movie though#but idk if i would consider that to be a win for girl sonic characters#considering shes the only one known to be in it AND she dies#sonic movie spoilers#sonic movie 3 spoilers#i guess idk#also again considering the whole cgi thing i would have been willing to accept no rouge even if its disappointing#but to have gerald of all characters replace her is just so. what .... cant you just use agent stone or a new character or something#i dont hate gerald its just the idea of bringing him back to life instead of including rouge is weird .#anyway . we also dont have full context so maybe its nt as bad as it sounds. or maybe theyre hiding rouge and amy from us . IDKK#but also every new info about this movie we get has me like that one picture of a guy holding a cigarette and looking reallytired#and i hate feeling this way when i was so excited about the first 2 when they came out#sad ! well theres other sonic media
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that one scene in atbb where russ is being a tall asshole to karma on purpose but instead of squatting down to his level he pulls this shit
#karma isn't THAT short. but god that would be a good bit#in the rewrite i might have to put that scene in karma's pov tbh. just so you can feel how much he's holding himself back#because y'all best believe the amount of restraint it took him to not kill russ immediately when he did that was fucking astronomical#i've already talked about how being underestimated & patronized bc of his size is one of his THINGS. so combine that with a LV spike#he did not see russ as his little brother in that moment he wanted him dead on the ground in the dirt fully unrecognizable#i was thinking of maybe having the swapfell fic switch between fluff & karma's pov for different scenes/chapters anyway#i think it would establish a lil better that karma is an Important Character for the overall story instead of just another side character#especially since pretty much every other sans that will ever show up IS a side character lol#idk if i'll switch according to a pattern like 1 fluff chapter -> 1 karma chapter etc or if i'd just go on vibes. does anyone care abt that#the few times i've attempted a pattern i lost interest in keeping it up immediately but that was w/ the lightbulb fic so. its been a minute#sometimes certain scenes are better from certain povs and the pattern fucks with that I CANT HELP IT#THATS WHY THE LAST 2 CHAPTERS OF SELF HATRED SWITCH TO RUSS POV IF THEY WERE STILL EDGE IT WOULD MESS IT UPPPP#well i mean i guess the final chapter could MAYBE work from edge's pov & show how confusing russ is to him a lil better#but i also think seeing how russ is actually thinking is better just for the audience's understanding of him. yaknow. idk#plus it Would be more jarring to have 4 chapters of edge 1 chapter of russ and then immediately back to edge again#i think it'd make russ's part feel more like a weird interruption or something rather than a natural switch to hide edge's intentions#oh my fucking god i just looked back at the actual post i got so off topic YOU GET THE IDEA GOODBYE#KARMA#RUSS#LOOKING AT THAT GROWN ASS MAN LIKE A BUG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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If you see me active on tumblr today, tell me to gtfo. I just keep opening the app bc im running away from writing a critically important scene i dont have enough notes fooooooor
#SUN WHY DIDNT YOU WRITE MORE NOTES FOR THIS SCENE#ARGH#see. my problem is i need to subtly imply the crux of the issue in their relationship#but absolutely NOT doing therapy speak. but also not being so subtle it just flies under the radar#.....which okay i guess it would be okay to fly under the radar.... dont pressure yourself too hard....#-muttering to myself like my own hypeman- its just fanfiction. its just fucking fanfiction man. just write it poorly. then rewrite it well#and then you dont even need to write it that well..... its FANFICTION. COME ON LETS GO#sun writes fic
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i've been rereading/revising redacted au today and when i checked the project word count of the parts i'd already gone over it was exactly 13,313. serendipitous
#redacted au#<- i guess it should be its own tag now???#overall kind of enjoying the reread so far!#slightly tempted to post as chapters instead of like. finishing the whole thing first but that. um. historically has not gone well#(rip ain't born typical lmao)#(sorry to anyone who once heard me say i'll rewrite and repost it)#(like... years ago. this has Not Happened)#(YET)#maybe chaptered fics is another skill i could stand to learn but#i do enjoy the big chonky ones so perhaps this is fine
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Me: Ah man drawing Transformers is hard, haha, oh well, I will just have try my best to draw them and look up refs of them.
Me yesterday: Man I'm in a funk, maybe I should drawing. I have been plagued with the idea of throwing Getaway into the horrors so maybe I should attempt drawing him with some refs or at least this version of him I have in my head.
Me, staring at the sketches of him that came out good: hey what the fuck-
#transformers#maccadam#rambles#mtmte getaway#idw getaway#tf getaway#transformers getaway#BITCH HOW COMES YOU SO FAR ARE THE ONLY TRANSFORMER THAT HAS COME OUT GOOD#I A SMACK YA WITH A ROCK#yes i am mainly refering to idw's getaway design (since its the one I know the most)#can't get his armor correct will admit#his helm and everything else? yeah perfect wtf#hate him /hj#sir you did not get permission to share free headspace with the others how did you get in here??#is this payback because I torment you in my head?#for making you go through the horrors and rewriting you?#well guess what fuck you //kills your not boyfriend (atomizer) again
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i cant start another tdwt rewrite i cant start another tdwt rewrite i have to finish amicus curiae and the time travel au and do an mkulia rewrite ive already started working on one impulsive competition fic this week I CANT START ANOTHER TDWT REWRITE FIC
#sigh#im about to start making notes for#you guessed it#another tdwt rewrite fic#i swear my wips are 65% tdwt rewrite fics#the ones i do post are just the tip of the iceberg#well. slippery slopes counts as a good chunk of the iceberg.#but even then we've barely scratched the surface#telling myself it's okay to start another tdwt rewrite if its in script format NO BITCH GO TO BED
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I have TWO where I've written the ONLY fanfics for the pairing. (Also, just fair warning, these are Adult Only fics lol.)
1: Mass Effect - Commander Shepard (Nonbinary)/Mako (the vehicle used in Mass Effect). Shepard's gambling problem runs their budget dry and they have to get creative to fundraise for more supplies. Shepard decides to cam it up since they're a famous hero now.
2: Homestuck - Dirk Strider/Dammek ('Antler Troll' before he was named). Shipped solely for the fact that they both wear sunglasses, soon after Dammek's appearance (only his appearance) was announced. He wasn't even named, so that was something I had to work around, along with giving him a blank slate personality. Dream bubbles make anything possible.
This was written after I already pulled notes for my lightning fast Antler Troll cosplay 1 hour after the announcement was made where he was shown. I love having a claim to fame.
Honourable mention: I was the second person to write Borderlands - Claptrap/Reader, but since then, the tag has exploded to a whopping 6 works. You'd think there would be more.
Reblog and put your rare pair in the tags/comments! I want to see the depths people will go to create, for the most random two characters in the most obscure media.
#i know the poll ended already but i love mentioning shepard/mako#in the notes i mentioned i wrote it bc i read someone say the next ME game was gonna have 'sexy' vehicles#and i was obviously offended on behalf of my girl Mako#also fair warning i wrote dirk as cis in the homestuck one ive been kinda wanting to rewrite it where hes trans#trans dirk was my hc back then but i was too chicken to write it bc i was having bad dysphoria#the claptrap reader one is still hilarious to me lmao i usually dont like reader fics but when its claptrap... theres no one to ship w him#so it had to be reader in order to happen at all#fanfiction#fanfics#fanfic#fan fic#like lmao these arent even obscure media its just... well i guess it technically counts as crackship versus rarepair#but only the mako one is written really cheesey the other two are played straig- i mean gay#also technically the claptrap/reader is the only one bc every 'reader' character is different not to mention the different claptraps#mine is... obviously... the officer claptrap from Elpis#also i was not only the first dammek cosplay but also the first god tier dirk cosplay bc i went fabric shopping the same day..#..as calliopes drawing of him came out in the upd8 but it wasnt the best cosplay so i did not pull notes on that#man i miss upd8 culture tho
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ugh. tfw u figure out what you SHOULD HAVE done to write your fic's main/first sex scene but only realize it AFTER you've already posted it with mediocre smut.
#ax rants#Like okay yeah the actual sex is secondary to the role that it plays in the narrative and character development.#which probably sounds deranged to say.#But that doesnt' mean it has to be BAD#and yes Im aware that some people liked it but I think it's depressingly bland and being carried by the dialogue which is only doing so muc#anyways I realized that while the overarching story is more interesting from Roy's PoV#The sex is more interesting from Jason's bcs there's a LOT going on in his head.#Also bcs I the writer am more attracted to Roy so like writing it from the perspective of ogling him is an easier mindset.#So I guess I'm going to rewrite the whole scene From Jason's PoV and then go back and use that as a template to improve Roy's side.#It's not like a major priority esp bcs I've been chomping at the bit to push the story along & bring Jade & Damian back in.#But Ive already got 950 words of the next chapter so Ill probably work at that off an on while doing the rest and go edit whenever its done#Oh well. It's good to realize now bcs it's not the last sex scene in this fic so I can use this later.
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the reason i dont talk as much about jjba cecio is bc he is very strongly a piss take of the 'one good pig' because he is the 'one good cop' but hes actually so much worse. hes using a mask of humor and kindness and relate-ability to help aid in murder blackmail wrongful imprisonment and all manner of massive power abuses, but because he does the bare minimum of pretending to be a 'good' person [in the right way] he gets free license to do all that and is seen as sympathetic. so actually hes not worse, hes just an average fucking pig with slight different motivations it doesn't matter if he answers to the police or criminal organizations, because the fucking pigs are their own gang just under the guise of 'upholding the law' and hes betraying his community and ruining peoples lives over and over for power either way
#thebirdspeaks#oc: cecio#essay in teh tags about crows self doubt about how well they handle mature topic and if ppl will think badly of them if they dont do it per#perfect so they dont post shit bc they r worried about the piss on the poor reading comprehension of the internet or worse#being seen as sympathetic 🤢 to cops 🤮#in 1... 2... 3...#im not spilling my personal shit#but like. i worry about sharing more of what he does bc im worried people wont understand how im writing him#bc shits subjective but im writing from my own experience with abusers and cops and just authority in general#its why hes hands down the worst of Celia & Co. they are all awful#but him especially so.#ive debated rewriting him cause its hard to write but i like how it affects his character even when its uncomfortable to write and even mor#so to share#idk. maybe i will end up just make him into a mortician or forensics guy#but like. him abusing all the ways the law is corrupt for his own goals and using all the defenses even better than the other pigs#positioning himself as the good one while making sure none else is and being the worst#is my own commentary on the joke that is the justice system. and i find it interesting#idk i think a lot of it is my personal discomfort. and i would hate to be labeled as like. 🤢 supporting pigs. in my writing#idk#this might get deleted idk i think im to sensitive to potential criticism from bad faith reading#but idk if i do handle it well or not#but then again im not a major fucking tv show let me fuck up a lil#i guess i just scrutinize how people write cops a lot#and thinking the internet has bad reading comprehension is not a baseless anxiety#eh fuck it i think i can do my lil fukcing thing#i just dont want people to see it as in poor taste#cause i worry they would be right? but like so many ppl in fandom be wilding maybe i can get a pass for maybe being a lil clumsy?
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hearing that they did make some changes to the writing of the original sonic generations with the remaster and if thats true idk how to feel about that.. on one hand sonic generations doesnt have much going on in terms of the plot and from what we've seen of sonics campaign its very obviously the same story. so its not like theres much they Can change here. but im still not sure i particularly Like the idea of the story content of existing games being changed like that especially if they plan on remastering any of the more story heavy games in the future . i dont knowwww
#well the only specific thing i saw was a youtube thumbnail showing one of the dialogue changes#and it was just a very minor rewrite of a line that doesnt really impact anything at all#and if all the changes are like that i guess its fine . but whats the point in doing that in the first place#i dont think its inherently bad to make changes and add new content in remasters and rereleases btw#im just specifically on the fence about the whole. rewriting the dialogue thing#because thats weird and i dont think theyve ever done that before with other re-releases... ??????#sonic x shadow generations#sonic x shadow generations spoilers#idk spoielr tagging just in case
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tell me why i only remembered AFTER i posted that fic that i want to post the kmha prologue/introduction i have written too

#writing#im so dumb Its fine its whatever. unless i say jk i will probably post it 2nd and just order it right in the series….#the way its all written its just the editing and formatting and cleaning up but also doing that is so Not my priority……#pointy objects lockdown interspersed with finalizing commission stuff which includes posting writing samples i GUESS#my main rewrite is gonna be on pause for a minute. right at the end of chapter 4 + the next time i open the game its komaeda 💔 well u know#im rambling ok starting work now bye bye
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so whenever DDVAU comes out I screenshot everything that makes my brain itch and then send it to my friends with an explanation of why the particular bit makes me happy and I was looking through my scrumped list and I was like “oh wait, artists (@kitsuneisi and @xmaruu11 in this case) actually like knowing what people think and like about your art especially specific details maybe possible perhaps” so I���m being brave and pasting exactly what I said to my friends into here with no rewriting for the sake of keeping them as my raw thoughts. Let the post go where it does I guess (all art is from DDVAU if that wasn’t obvious)

Favourite faces collection (impeccable art style that I will never stop complimenting oh my god I love all of the lil fellas)

I like the little pinky/yellow tones or tint or smth it all seems so peaceful and domestic and a little warm and it’ll be absolutely fine and lovely and sweet slice of life for the whole comic right? right? right? right? right? right?

Already said I love how they’ve designed speaking over. It’s just so effortless and clear idk. Also little note of appreciation for grian’s hand, that’s a shitfuckery perspective and a very well drawn hand. Also really realistic and fluid pose?? They’re just incredibly believable characters and movements, sometimes I genuinely forget they’re still frames and not an animation when I think about it. Do you think they actually pose and use that as a reference or do they just know exactly who their blorbos are and how they present themselves without actually acting it out???? Geniuses. Geni-i. Like octopi but. ok I’ll leave I know when I’m not wanted

Look at this happy and relaxed guy with his cousin he’s so himself and at ease. Seeing grian happy and human and totally himself means so much to me (favourite faces collection)

Favourite faces collection

HI CORNER GEM I HOPE YOU FEEL LOVED (me) (I’m the one) (ily corner gem) (and centre gem presumably idk she’s not here)

I know it’s tango. You know its tango. I don’t even need to say it. Camptain ombvious. however I am very happy they included ranchers thank you doody and maru sending you angels wherever you may be

Oh he could be a father so good I don’t usually see things and go “they’re parental potential”, not because they wouldn’t, it just isn’t something that crosses my mind. He, however, would make a great father and this frame made that thought fizz into my head

Thoroughly enjoyable section, made me smile

Love love LOVE how the thing grips the actual corner of his comic panel as it drags itself forwards

I’ve never not been in awe of this comic, but this is one of those times I’m especially in awe. Hi. Hello. Hi.

Love how the room zoom out was used, he looks so isolated and quietly afraid even though you don’t see his face, especially with the speech bubbles drifting around like that. Very well designed top tier 10/10
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