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I'm working on Bagge's guide to writing. This is what I got so far.
Know yourself. Everyone writes differently, and everyone has different needs they need to figure out. That goes for how you interact with the rest of the list as well. If a tip is not for you, then don't follow it.
One single damned sentence! Write something every day. One sentence is enough, but writing one sentence will put the story back in your mind, you will pull up the document and find out where you stopped. More often than not one sentence will lead to more, but one is enough.
Celebrate your victories. If all you have written is one sentence, then you should be proud that you did write that sentence. If all you did was thinking about your story, that counts too.
Think forward. When you get to a natural end point (end of scene, end of chapter), write one more sentence, staring the next part, before you end your writing session. That way, you will think of what to write rather than what you have written.
Be careful with editing while writing. Sometimes it's good to catch a pesky spelling mistake, but most of the time you want to keep the flow.
Words on paper! The most important task with the first draft is to get the first draft done. You can fix whatever bugs you in the editing stage, but you want to move on from having only a blank page to work with.
Brackets. If you get stuck on the technical terms for a certain piece of clothing, spelling or how to resolve a certain [something] then, put it in brackets and move on. Sometimes my writing looks like "X said [something sexy] and Y blushed. [Stuff happened]. "Let's do [something more sexy]!" Y said." Keep your flow.
Take micro breaks. If you get stuck, leave the writing space for ten seconds before you continue writing. Sometimes that's all it take
BACKUPS!
When writing a longer story, treat the first chapters as "draft 0.5". You will probably have to rework them once you find your stride with the story properly and figure out all those little details you simply don't know while writing the beginning. That's OK, as long as you make it part of your writing process.
Figure out what's stopping you from telling your story and work on that. Two cakes? Do it scared? Whatever works for you.
What's your favourite writing tips?
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daily infinites 31-40 hes so sillay!! blehhh :P
part 1 part 2 part 3
#engies daily dogs#infinite the jackal#my art#sonic forces#sonic frontiers#sage#metal sonic#shadow the hedgehog#zavok#chaos#sonic the hedgehog#gadget the wolf#reworked my human infinite design a bit. i think i really popped off with the designer sunglasses#i want to change his jacket but i just cant decide on what i want to do so i keep drawing it the same haha#i think it needs more useless belts and otherwise pointless straps and things though#sth
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I see you've changed Shadowstar from being first to die. Sneaky, sneaky. You sly.. cat, you, Bones. Was that on purpose, out of spite for Shadowstar's Life?
B'aww, you got me <3 Yeah I hate that book.
Shadowstar: *breathes in public*
Erins:
#STOP DOING THE SHADOW FAMILY DIRTY YOU ANIMALS#''i love my nephew sun shadow. he reminds me of my dead brother''#Erins coming up from behind with a lead pipe to kill him immediately#bone babble#That's the deepest reason you'll find though. The PRIMARY reason is very simple; it just makes the most sense.#She's pious and keeps to herself.#She didn't have to waste her lives fighting SkyClan#It's why I said FOR NOW in that post though. If I end up having another conflict I want to rework from DOTC I may have Shadow take it.#but I think the... sort of coup was dumb.#I could have my mind changed on adapting it but as it stands I don't really care to give it any love.
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me when i write a character who is prone to dooming themself and then they run off and doom themself. core traits are stubbornness and a willingness to disregard their own humanity gET BACK HERE IM NOT DONE WITH YOU
#rambling#surprisingly this is not about jakob.. im just really consistent about my favorite character archetypes 😭😭#WARNING THE NOTES ON THIS ARE REALLY LONG I STARTED RAMBLING#“ouhh i have a headache i'll just lie down and rotate my blorbos in no general direction for a while until it goes away” and then boom.#serious plot considerations. 2 questions answered 24million new questions raised. this is specifically Not what i asked for.#so now im sitting here STILL dizzy running mental calculations on how i can get this bitch out of peril without reworking everything#but they literally keep dying in every timeline 😭😭 every single plausible road leads to them running off and screwing themself over#“character who doesn't realize they want to live until it's way too late to look back” VS#“character who is forced to live and handle the things they never though they'd survive long enough to deal with” FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT.#fucking hell i have never had this much trouble writing a character as i have with them#they genuinely do just run off and do shit without my permission and then i have to pace for an hour or two wondering#“ok they wOULD do that. but should they. do i feel like i can confidently write that.”#im like constantly in this tug of war trying to get them to CHILL#but also they are absolutely my favorite character from the entire project. but like. FUCK GET BACK HERE#is death the most satisfying end to this arc? is someone who was Set on dying then NOT dying the most satisfying end to the arc?#how many bridges can you burn until you irreparably set yourself aflame too?#would ghost or revival plotline work?? would it make sense with the worldbuilding??#do i just Like Them enough to want them to not die?? where do i draw the line between personal bias and a good arc?#is death not feeling as impactful as survival solely because i've been writing for so long that it's lost the initial impact?#and other such plot considerations...#im gonna have such an easy time writing another character though 😭😭 because THAT character's dynamic in the second act#is to stare at character 1 and be like “why are you like this. i mean i know Why but can you chill. please.” and like damn bro me too#actually wait no i think kaey.a is the hardest character i've ever written i take it back#had to worry about his 20million facades AND his Actual feelings AND canon compliance. shit is hard#i still havent finished the k/aeya fic i started back when the chasm first released which is uhh. two years ago. oops.#i think i struggle writing emotionally repressed liars i think thats what this is 😭😭 anyways.#(voice of guy who has been obsessed with nonlinear narratives and tragedies for several years):#“is it too much to kill this character in a nonlinear exploration game with tragic elements”#like bitch what are you talking about 😭😭 YOU'RE the target audience here figure it out#sorry the notes on this are just my writing journal now apparently
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probably going to rework my human bellum design again
#surprise surprise im still not satisfied with it but i think i have the base down#might just rework his clothing a liiiiitle and maybe like. give him at least slightly darker skin#he still comes off as edgy or some shit to me. i still want to stick with the violent delinquent sorta angle#i just feel like its a bit much or whatever. he just seems too unremarkable but also too detailed#or something. with the scars all over. maybe its bc i cant picture him v well in the game artstyle? but ive never cared much abt that#tho looking at the comms ive gotten of him. he seems fine. the x on the eyepatch might be a bit much#maybe he can customize it when he materializes it idk and the x is a default. its made of sand when you inspect it#it might also help to write him more. force myself to think abt him in situations#in other news im thinking abt damien possible post ph healing magic. i like the idea i have#i really need to fiure out more defined post ph arcs it does bother me how aimless it is#i know vague stuff but very little specifics. it needs a fucking plot#i do want to keep bellums human form making him look closely related to link. i like that#its funny if nothing else#salty talks#damiens fine hes just a guy he doesnt need anything too fancy. if i think abt it too long my certainty dissolves#wow i love being insecure ablut my ideas. i love rsd. ohhhhhhhhh boyyy#now its a minor vent. w/e. at rhis rate im. gonna start talking abt how my job scheduled me on a shift#with the literal bare minimum number of scheduled workers so if its slightly busy its going to be a living hell#at least i get paid for closing so when closing inevitably takes over an hour bc i have to do it alone im getting paid more#if i wasnt motivated by money itd be so fucking over for me in the workforce
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You're more amazing than dreams
Nerfed signposts!
#some of them were really simple nerfs like Seeker of Power only draining once instead of for each attacking modified creature#and on the other end Bestower of Wisdom got so thoroughly reworked it needed a new name#also i reworked Twilight Pegasus right now; my original nerf had it give flying to a creature with lesser power when it attacked#but that would be punishing you for buffing your valiant creatures#and also some valiant abilities buff power which would make the pegasus' ability fizzle#some of these were really bullshit like Awoken Ingenuity killing an opponent's creature and then drawing free cards when it attacks#absurd card advantage machine#Violent Blacksmith maybe wasn't too strong but the mana adding ability felt more green than red#Mutant Bodybuilder giving free stats was pretty strong so now you have to pay mana and it can only buff itself#Faith Given Form gave too many free stats and was an angel without flying so i gave it conditional flying/vigilance#Mutator's Masterpiece had a lot of text so i cut the 2nd ability and increased the cost & base stats to make it more of a late-game card#i also just reworked it right now; it used to draw a card when the 3rd counter was put on it#but even aside from power concerns that's just not necessary. keep it more focused#i think part of why i made the cards more complex is because i felt the need to justify them being multicolor#but i've noticed that's not always necessary#for example Kraum Violent Cacophony doesn't do anything remotely red#anyway i just adjusted Twilight Pegasus again. i had it give a flying counter to target creature when it dies but i cut it#it's enough for it to just be a good cheap flier that gets bigger#i wanted it to also have a way to trigger valiant but nah there's plenty of targeting effects in the set#it's fine for it to just be a good valiant creature
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daeshim thoughts now that we've seen a little more of neve and ik more abt the factions 💆💆
#def going to rework him into one of my rooks BUT his tevinter background works SOOOO much better with this game and i'm very excited abt it#very torn between keeping him a grey warden or having him be a shadow dragon instead tho :(#shadow dragon i think works better with what i have in mind for him currently but i'm also very attached to him being a warden so idk yet#da:v posting#< just going to use that as a catchall for my ramblings#dae does want tevinter to be better but he holds little hope for it#but he also loves to help people so idk. idk !!!!#and him being a warden approaching his calling. GAHH
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organised everything i have for it so far + tentatively cut some things (that i may put back if i find there’s missing beats but otherwise they were kinda unnecessary for the current vision) and refined my chapter two outline so if i have time at work tomorrow i can play around with it and write something like yayyyy i love when past me sets myself up like this
#it’s def a beast of a chapter but I have a better grasp on it now#i already knew this but realising how much the idea of writing long litfic chapters gives me anxiety like#I keep thinking it’s overwriting! that im not being efficient enough!#when it’s like girl craft theory aside this story is for YOU!#I think mainly it’s still not knowing how the balance will be like#ch1 is a mystery bc I’m reworking that but chapter 3 is gonna be under 1k#whereas this is def breaking 7k I think#I will see i like the idea of playing w chapter lengths !#there’s a middle part between parts 1 and 2 that’s just one long chapter which will be so fun#but at the same time I kinda have to be mindful of chapter lengths atm#because I want that one to be effective in its length and idk if it will be if there’s chapters past a certain word count#I will def have time at work to write tho. without elaborating on my job I am there all day + sleep there 💖
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I’m gonna be honest, I kind of really want to re work the dsmp cat au and scale it down a bunch.
I started it right after the Manberg vs Pogtopia war so that was the original center point of the plot, tho tweaked to fit in some other character dynamics. As more lore kept getting added I tried to fit them in but some of it really went against my original ideas which had me constantly reworking things, and it became pretty difficult fitting in new characters as they were introduced despite me really wanting to add everyone.
I’ve been trying to iron out the plot since the dsmp ended and wanted to focus more on the Karlnap/ity plot while I was working on that but well, now all that feels really sour too.
Lately I’ve had little to no desire to work on it and I think the only way for me to enjoy it again is to scale it down, rework the lore to fit what I originally had in mind, make it more dtk+ focused, and cut a whole lot of characters.
I’m sorry if that disappoints some people that might have followed the au for over 2 years now, absolutely feel free to ask about any characters that I didn’t really talk about, because I did have some plot ideas for them all. I would also still like to finish everyone’s design, but probably with less detailed refs.
#pom talks#dsmp cat au#been thinking about this for months now so yeah#sorry#I know the au might not seem messy but with the stuff I have written down and in my head its just way too much to keep track of#a lot of the time I can't even remember what I have or haven't talked about#so yeah I just think it will be better to start from scratch and not feel forced to add stuff just to make it fit canon#like I could never manage to work in the Exile Arc because Dream and Tommy were meant to be FRIENDS in this au#so rework it is#I will probably make a completely different au tag cuz I don't really want to delete things either#quackity neg#i guess just to be sure
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#i really really want to do NaNo this year#I’ve been working hard on an outline and world building and I think NaNo would be a great challenge to get as much done as possible#November is always one of the busiest possible months which is why I don’t do it often#and this year we’re getting ready for the holidays as well as the babies first birthday (!!!)#but I really want to try it this year#I even have two separate fanfic ideas to work on if I get stuck on my main project just to keep up with writing things#I reworked my nano page a bit today and if you’re participating too send me a message! we can be friends over there 😊
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Thinking abt my bndori ocs again... I need to draw them more I love them all sm
#rat rambles#oc posting#band posting#momoko especially drawing her earlier made me remember just how much I adore her#but Im also thinking oh so hard abt kou I need to rework their design for the 50th time at some point#momoko has such a perfect design tho she's like high key one of my favorite designs Ive ever made#I just think her shapes and colors are neat#I should totally make them all furry designs even if I dont rly have any ideas for them#I do generally make momoko a frog in au stuff tho so she can be a frog ig#yuriko is technically sorta a bat in the random card au but thats mostly just a nodd at rokka backstory#the other two do not as of now have any connections to any animals so I fully have nothing for them#I could see yori being some sort of hog or smth and kou could be a mongoose or smth idk#that also reminds me Ive been meaning to make olivia and jackie furry designs for funsies#I mean I already moddled their designs off of animals so it wouldnt be hard#Ive just been struggling to draw thats all#hopefully Ill keep building momentum into getting back into drawing more#although today was kind of rough I am starting to get off my ass a lil#mostly cause I finally found smth that I want to do in the future even if its just seeing my friends#I wanna meet them in person and the fact that thats smth I have to look forward to is making me feel much better#even if it wont happen soon just the fact that Ive added that to the 'thing I will do someday' list helps a lot with my mood#cause its just smth of a future I can get into my head yknow?#smth I can think of thats not just today and tomorrow
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I do need to sit down today and draft a new budget even though it scares me. I need to be realistic about it too. I really don't enjoy budgeting. Neither me nor wifey are especially gifted with it, and it makes us both anxious and avoidant, so it's really unfortunate.
Definitely one of the tasks for the personal assistant chart once I can afford one.
#for any one wondering:#i have an ongoing understanding with my wife that should our finances ever allow it there are two services i want to hire out#household maintenance care and the phone call/mail/email/bills bermuda triangle of disaster#between the two of we are so fucking bad at these things but they are so essential to basic functioning#that it genuinely harms us when we fuck up#so for now we keep chugging along#lots of radical acceptance and self compassion and executive functioning support strategies to try and keep the plates spinning#but some day theoretically we'll have the money to pay a freelancer to come in and spend 1-2 hours a couple of days per week#just.....helping us deal with some of this stuff#i'd pay them very well#i'm thinking something like $100/day for maybe 2 hours work?#i just want someone who will sort and respond to my mail for me and schedule my appts/log them in my calendar and shoot me a text about it#someone who washes all the dishes down to baseline once a week and helps me do organizational planning/reworking once a month#not big stuff by any means but life changing to me#especially if their role is largely body doubling with me while I do other cleaning/organizing tasks so double the work can get done#anyway its purely hypothetical now and for a long time to come but i keep track of what tasks we may need help with#so i can prioritize and understand how many hours of support we would really need each week
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Hi! In your NSR swap AU, does Sayu still go by ze/mer? Since ze is clearly not a mermaid but a tree person… maybe ze/fir instead?
OMFG that would be awesome!
But uh, I'm thinking of redoing my entire Swap AU, so I don't know if Sayu would still be a plant elemental. I honestly don't like the direction I took with Eve, Sayu, and DJSS. Or at least I don't like their designs all that much anymore (Sayu's I do like but the concept itself I want to change).
I feel like I leaned way too heavily on swapping characters with personalities AND themes. Making it seem like characters are mashing together and overlapping in certain aspects, making them seem less unique to each other.
I do definitely want to keep Sayu as a plant elemental, or something close to that, so ze/fir would be amazing pronouns! So yeah! ze/fir plant Sayu for the win! :D
#nsr#eritalks#noart#asks#i really need to get onto reworking that au#i'm fine with y/inu 1/010 and k/u f/yra's things going on#and taking time to think about other AUs#like my frau#has really helped me try to keep personalities and stuff#so hopefully one day i get to reworking everything#especially since i want to draw luna and zuke together some more#and explore their relationship together
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man.
#ya know what. Maybe the kids are gonna be alright....#Im here listening to “the unused content of mario 64” and im remembering back to a time where I would type in on youtube a mario game#that iv never played and just white “top 10 secrets” and go down a rabitthole of content farms#maybe were too pesimistic about whats rotting kids brains#i feel like my parents#hearing stuff like this from my fellow nerd friends#even now im thinking back to when i was a kid and getting frustrated thatadults were not open minded to my humor#i dont wanna be a grouchy fuck#i wanna be open minded#i want to keep reworking my thinking......
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final update of the day
pros; got to finish my book (joy luck club), and movie (love simon) on the flight, gf meals they gave me were actually good, PIZZA I COULD EAT !!!!!!!, did some sketching, and wrote a LOT for my challengers fic
neg; lost my cookies i got in the airport AND the little snack they gave me </3, my dog fell off the counter and lost a tooth, watched a huge fight in the customs line, and my sisters suitcase was left in france
#lee’s bullshit#moral of the week is never go anywhere without at least a weeks rations ever again#Jesus I’ve been so hungry . Cannot wait to have like a fucking Oreo or something this week. A tortilla chip even#also I haven’t had a good gf and df pizza yet and the one today was rlly good and I didn’t get that sick from it :’) rlly exciting#i also ATE w my new reworked fic concept im v excited to keep working on it#(going to be connected one shots !! which is good bc I’m bad at transitions <3)#did not do any big bang work tho </33#oh and yeah my sisters bag never made it on the plane we think. I feel so bad we waited for so long at the baggage claim :((#the dog was fine he’s j old and his teeth fall out easily acc to my gparents. poor guy tho oops#and finally there was a guy who YELLED in the airport that this guy was trying to pull a gun on him like bro be so fr#how could he possibly have a gun in his pocket at this point in the process. crazy town truly#anyway im going to bed even tho i want to do more of my challengers fic bc i hypothesize the time warp will reach me soon#so good night <33
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i started thinking about some of my dnd characters from campaigns that fell through and... god, i miss them so much...
#i kinda want to rework them into ocs and play around with a story for them#the moon will sing is an audio i keep getting content for on insta so it made me think of the tragic lovers thing one of my characters >>>#had going on with a character from their past / a npc we only got to encounter for a second#the relationship i set up for them has got me wanting to rip my ribcage open uGH#that sounds kinda aggressive but like they make me stupidly emotional#i guess i'll think about them some more while i rest a little longer#mj.txt
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