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Chapters: 34/34 Fandom: Top Gun (1986) Rating: Explicit Warnings: Major Character Death Relationships: Tom "Iceman" Kazansky/Pete "Maverick" Mitchell, Nick "Goose" Bradshaw & Pete "Maverick" Mitchell, Rick "Jester" Heatherly/Original Male Character, Pete "Maverick" Mitchell & Original Male Character Characters: Tom "Iceman" Kazansky, Pete "Maverick" Mitchell, Mike "Viper" Metcalf, Rick "Jester" Heatherly, Charlotte "Charlie" Blackwood, Original Male Character(s), Ron "Slider" Kerner, Nick "Goose" Bradshaw, Air Boss Johnson, Carole Bradshaw Additional Tags: Tags Contain Spoilers, Canonical Character Death, We All Know It's Goose, Alpha/Beta/Omega Dynamics, Omega Verse, No mpreg, no knotting, Yes Slick, Non-Traditional Alpha/Beta/Omega Dynamics, Falling In Love, Angst and Fluff and Smut, Angst with a Happy Ending, No DADT, Depression, Protectiveness, Marriage of Convenience, We are Braising Maverick at 275 Degrees for Three Hours, Suicidal Thoughts, Gender Roles, Because Omegaverse is About Gender Let's Be Real, Take My Breath Away Playing in Background of All Scenes, Author Horny for Comments, Discussion of sexual assault, Pining, Implied/Referenced Drug Use, Omega Maverick, Alpha Iceman, Oral Sex, Slut Shaming, Sexual Tension, Everyone Needs Therapy, Awkward Romance, Dysfunctional Relationships Becoming Functional, Rough Sex, Car Sex, Drunk Sex, My Spouse Betas This, Men Crying, Girl Help the Men Can't Stop Crying, Objectification, Dissociation, Panic Attacks, Violence, Boat Sex, Rimming, Love Confessions, Second Time Bottoming, Equitable Wallfucking for All, Canon is rolling over in its shallow grave Series: Part 1 of Hot Thots: Idiots Fuck in a Fighter Jet, Part 5 of Assorted Top Gun Tales Summary:
For much of Maverick's life, he's managed to fly his omega status under the radarâsort of. Illegal heat blockers keep the Navy off his ass, and his best friend Goose keeps off everyone else. But when a tragic accident strips Maverick of protection and uncovers his identity, the world he thought he knew casts him from the frying pan into a life of systematic oppression...and Thomas "Iceman" Kazansky's lap. Maybe the fire would have been better.
#ao3 fic recs#topgunreacts#this is the most incisively comedic and yet gut wrenching heartbreaking commentary on gender and otherness#i learned how to put gifs in comments for this story#definitely read the author notes#top gun#icemav#i laughed. I cried. I had to put it down and just breathe for a bit#now I'm staring at the wall. laying on the floor. just processing things#omegaverse#also the sex between icemav is just. so full oof#*of feelings and really hot#so there's that
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2024 reads / storygraph
Our Lady Of Mysterious Ailments & The Mystery at Dunvegan Castle
books 2 & 3 in the Edinburgh Nights series
paranormal mystery set in a climate-ravaged future Scotland, plagued by ghosts and magic
follows a 15yo Black girl whoâs finally gotten an in to learn scientific magic properly - but it turns out to be an unpaid internship, so she has to take more jobs delivering ghost messages and investigating mysteries to take care of her gran and little sister
in book 2 sheâs investigating a strange illness centred on a magic school for boys
and in book 3 sheâs attending a global magician conference held in a creepy castle - when someoneâs murdered, and theyâre locked in until she figures out the culprit
Zimbabwean magic, friendship, disabled characters, no romance (so far)
#The Mystery at Dunvegan Castle#Our Lady Of Mysterious Ailments#Edinburgh Nights#T.L. Huchu#The Library of the Dead#really enjoy this series!#the worldbuilding is very interesting - kinda combo climate-ravaged future but also in some aspects societally it feels kinda 1800s#(especially with the vibe of the mystery/paranormal elements)#I saw that the author (who is from Zimbabwe) describe it as âif edinburgh was a third world cityâ which actually makes a lot of sense#Also I have to make the wendell & wild x lockwood & co comp again#I felt like book 2 was a little all over the place? I slightly lost track of the other-realms stuff lol#I really loved book 3 though - definitely more direct plot-wise#I like how it explores her journey through learning that the magic society is just as corrupt and shitty as anything else and maybe she#doesn't want it after all. as well as how the stress of everything is getting to her is causing panic attacks#love the scottish accent in the audiobooks!#so many interesting different supernatural elements. yay for sidhe in book 3 (tho only briefly)#hold on. do the book covers reflect the colour of her locs. (ok not quite for book one which is usually blue but there is a green variant)#ok I did say no romance but also I canât tell if Iâm just imagining Something between ropa & priya bc in book 3âŠâŠthey had some moments.#I mean I enjoy them as platonic moments also but just noting here in case it DOES turn out to be intentional and something that happen??#also fair warning the promo for book four seems to spoil somehting that's not even in the blurb??#aroaessidhe 2024 reads
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"Given the marathon that Janeâs uterus had just been through, itâs likely that her uterus would have a reduced capacity to contract and effectively expel the after-birth contents of her uterus; lengthy labours tend to shred the membranes, especially if, like Jane, her membranes had ruptured early in her labour. I believe that here is where the best intentions again contributed to disastrous consequences. Wanting to ensure the best possible outcome, Henry bucked confinement tradition by inviting male physicians into Janeâs lying-in chamber. While we might see a physicianâs help as a good thing, please keep in mind that Tudor era physicians werenât trained in obstetrics. Had Janeâs immediate postpartum been similar to the above description, a physician would likely not have been well-versed in how to manage it. Had the midwives noticed retained tissue, they probably would have known to remove the offending product, manually if necessary, causing Jane further discomfort. To a Tudor physician, this would have been appalling, and protocol dictated that the physicians had seniority. Had they forbade an intervention, it would not have occurred."
â Dayna Goodchild, Jane Seymour and the Birth of Edward VI: A Midwife's Opinion
#jane seymour#mm ... there's literature about the english reformation's impact on midwifery/matrons#that and jane's status as queen - which goodchild notes as a factor that impacted the treatment she received#it's like clarissa atkinson's point that male authorities ''began to compete with women in traditional female work''#i read one article (icr which now!) which talked about the changing theological discourses around the liturgy for baptism#you definitely see evidence of distrust of midwives/cunning women (previously integrated into the event of childbirth) in communities#and iirc there was increasing distrust of midwives performing baptisms#but at the point of jane's pregnancy i think mary fissell has the right of it:#that england's progression from catholicism to quasi-protestantism ''was accomplished through the reform of women's bodies''#and while i don't think it's the most reliable i liked amy licence's point:#''the story of childbirth during the mid tudor reformation is as much the story of the dissolution of the shrines -#- and the banning of catholic practices and folklore that had formed centuries of female wisdom''
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visceral horror book leaves thousands mouths agape in equal amounts of disgust and awe
#personal#just finished chlorine by jade song. AOUGH#its very intense but very good#if you want my shallow end thesis piece to be real: read this in the mean time#definitely heed the content warnings in the authors note though#the whole thing isnt intense body horror but when it goes there. it Goes
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Once again I read fanfiction that seems to have been precisely written to deal psychic damage to me.
#this is about viridian the green guide. you guys actually read this slop?#boring as shit writing#awful plot lines (trigger has been resolved get new material#excessive use of italics and âproblem childâ. has the author heard anyone use a nickname irl ever#I hate bakugou slightly less than I hate Deku but even I could tell they suck at writing him#skipped over a few chapters because the writing was melting my brain but he would never be that condescending to himself#who the hell thinks âIâve decided to not be an assholeâ with total seriousness#back to the bad plot lines. endeavor *checks notes* becomes a nomu and dies? I know the author nerfed everyone in the ground to match Deku#but wtf was the idea here#most successful cases in Japan and the strongest fire quirk ever (besides Dabi) and he gets treated like fodder?#thereâs a certain childish canadence fanfiction writers type in when discussing ideas with others and the whole fic reeks of it.#the general easy going and generic aura vtgg emanates makes it even more insufferable#yeah insufferable is definitely the one word to describe this fic#original fic is ass and it only popularized the concepts. now you have even more bad writers speedrunning terrible concepts#itâs two am so this might not makes sense but whatever. not tagging this as mha because there are a lot of people who like this thing.#also fuck fics with love interests who were pretty happy in canon but actually have two thousand problems in fics#rant#anyways! I need to check into my games#I need to find the fic summarized so I can properly write my fanfic bashing vigilante/quirkless aus. barely any difference anyways.
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I thought youd love to see my live reaction to the final stretch of the new chapter

WHEEEZZEEE, THANK YOUUU. THIS IS HILARIOUS. I CAN'T EVEN TELL WHAT THIS IS OR HOW MANY PEOPLE WERE INVOLVED, AND I DON'T KNOW IF I WANT TO KNOW, BUT I'M GLAD I GAVE YA GUYS A TRIP LMAO

#I freaking warned you guys in the author's note#That it was a r i d e#One hell of a roller coaster#AND IT LOOKS LIKE IT WASN'T HYPERBOLE MAYBE#I knew that final stretch of the chapter was a doozy#And *I meant it to be that way*#I'm very glad that it delivered#I mean#Whaaaat????#Nooooo; this stuff is absolutely wrong; do not worry people who haven't read it#Nothing happens. It's all good#I don't know how to mark as spoiler#It just serves as a âwhat ifâ out of context scenario#Definitely#You trust me; don't you-
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Rating: T
Wordcount: 58,544
Chapters: 12/12
Summary:
Crowley has spent the last two years learning to cope with Aziraphale's absence. So when Aziraphale shows up with no memories, and Crowley is the only one who can help, it's not an easy thing to deal with.
(Crowleyâs perspective of the events of Light the Corners of my Mind)
#good omens fanfic#ineffable divorce#the possible sidequel that I vaguely mentioned in the author notes is here!#sort of#I have not finished a full draft#I definitely intend to#but if you've read Light the Corners of my Mind you already know what happens#and if you haven't read Light the Corners of my Mind maybe you should read that one first instead#to be completely honest this whole fic was an excuse for Crowley and Nina to drink and bitch about their exes together#anyway I have no idea what the posting schedule will be#my current plan is to just post a chapter every time I finish a chapter#which will definitely be more than a week between chapters#especially to me especially if it's you#cyankelpie's fic
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One of my favorite things is getting caught up on a fic and reading the author's notes where they happily proclaim that the chapter count has solidified at x number and then glancing up to the current actual chapter count and it has ballooned well past that
#fanfiction#fandom#fandom culture#ao3#ao3 author's notes#absolutely tickled whenever this happens#I'm honestly the type who always wants more of any given story I'm enjoying#(but also Do Not beg the author's for more unless they've explicitly asked for readers' opinions on them extending the story)#also as a fellow writer I feel this pain and love to laugh at the hubris we all fall victim to lmao#my posts#writing#can't remember if I've made this post before but I've definitely had this thought before while reading
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i think my issue w a lot of umineko fandom takes is the lack of empathy in a story that was structured very much around empathizing with your explicitly shitty family
#people are really bad at empathizing with people they dont think deserve it. power to them but ryukishi definitely wanted you to empathize w#people like kinzo and george and etc. i wouldve said eva but who the hell doesnt love eva#and empathize doesnt have to mean anything other than the empathy itself. its not a justification or a statement of forgiveness#its simply an understanding and an acceptance. thats meant to bring you#the observer or the victim in sayoâs case. a sense of peace. and of course most importantly#LOVE#which is the healing element. and this was very much integral to the Point#just a ramble on why I really value every umineko character especially the worst ones lol#i mean in my own life. i have felt the power that comes with that kind of empathy and sometimes yes forgiveness#so it was a profound read for me on that level#its genuinely such a beautiful story. dont think a lot of authors have hit this note on the head like kishi does#ugh I could go on. because empathy is a huge part of it but theres also an important social commentary in that like#the worst person you know is like that because someone or something made them that way#the tragedy of thinking what âcould have beenâ the different sides of ourselves the way patriarchy harms the women firstly but also damages#the men so thoroughly and completelyâŠ#i dont see any evil in any of the characters theyre all human beings who are so realistic and doing what is their flawed best
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đŠâ Dhampir Hunter V âđŠ
Intros/Profiles Part 2/?: S.C.A.R.E. 'd Straight
[Potential CW for brief descriptions of violence, medical talk. Nothing overly detailed/gory, but just in case]
Inga was a stubborn (at the time) 12 year old. Stories, that's what they were. Tales of beasts and monsters that roamed the night that would either snatch, punish, or harm children, especially the naughty ones. But she wasn't naughty. Or at least, she thought she wasn't. Apparently adults interpret you speaking up for yourself as "mouthing off".
...Anyway...
Schprekenheim had its fair share of creatures. There was this one time there was a knight that was made entirely of birthday presents! But as far as she knew, that one had been defeated quite a while ago. Surely, such a short walk from the library back to her home one night couldn't be entirely eventful, right?
Wrong.
It had happened so fast, but the effects were instant, as was the pain. She was ambushed by a group of what appeared to be vampires: pointy ears, pale skin, fangs...the standards. Only things that were a bit different were the eye colors- red, she did associate with supernatural beasts, but not blue-, as well as the hair colors- primarily red, but some had the stereotypical jet black look. Some even have white hair! She did try fighting back, also protecting her neck as she had been taught to do.
But the creatures laughed at this. They had no desire to suck her blood. They desired something a little more...somatic. And a tad bit emotional.
See, this creatures fed off of pain; the misery and the resulting tears of sadness. So they did what they could to produce it in their victim. In this case, it was ripping the books she had borrowed from the library to shreds and burning them to ashes, physically attacking her...and burning part of her face. For no other reason other then they could. She managed to get away, but obviously not unscathed. Her injuries were treated, but when tried to explain to the librarian and her parents what happened, they dismissed it as her being irresponsible and lying to get out of trouble.
With this injustice, and noticing the ever-creeping-up spike of similar incidents in the area, Inga vowed to seek revenge against these, and any sort of monster, that would harm children.
(...)
It started in a similar manner to Val and her monster hunting. Only difference being, while Val operated alone, Inga quickly gained a partner in her mission. Of course, they almost weren't, as Inga was quick to pin them against a tree and hold a stake to them. But this kid- Andreas, he said his name was- was different. Other than the look of "a little lad who loves berries and cream", he acutally looked...pretty human? Or at least a little more human- the pointy ears, paleness, and fangs (along with a few different shows of power against a swarm of the creatures) kind of gave his true nature away.
That show of "humanness" reared its head when Inga was suddenly ambushed and, as a result, lost quite a bit of blood. Considering they were practically in the middle of nowhere and just...waltzing into a hospital with a badly beat up kid and the vampiric appearance (so one would assume "YOU attacked her! Vampire!! Stake them!!"), Andreas couldn't see conventional medical help...well, helping. Thankfully, though, he knew someone (or rather, two someones) would could help.
(...)
The next thing Inga knew, she was laying in a bed, surrounded by medical equipment...but it wasn't like the ones she had seen when she got her burn treated. Kind of looked like a hodgepodge or some kid's beginning construction project. It was working, though, that's what was important. First one she saw was Andreas, who was fast asleep in a nearby chair. When she saw the door to her room open, she was expecting to see some professional looking adult in a white coat, carrying a clipboard, rattling off all sort of medical jargon. To her surprise, though, a kid about her age walked in. Said his name was Jude, and that he was her "doctor" of sorts. Following behind him was another kid, this one a bit younger and...way more peppy. Said her name was LilliBella (but to call her L.B.!).
With Andreas now awake and her a bit more "with" it, they explained what happened. She was in need of a blood transfusion and Andreas, feeling somewhat responsible for her having gotten ambushed, donated some of his blood. L.B. cheerfully refers to them as "blood brothers", but Inga, initially, isn't as thrilled. Thankful that he was there to help her in her time of need, yes, but...did that mean she was now some sort of creature of the night, too?
Weeell, that's where it gets tricky. No one really knows what sort of effect a blood transfusion with a vampire (or, y'know, mostly vampire) would have on someone who was 100% human. Both Jude and L.B. wanted to keep her nearby to see what sort of effect this would have, if it had any. Inga was initially against the idea and wanted to get back to fighting the monsters that caused her to have to deal with this...but after almost fainting once she tried to get out of bed, that idea went quickly out the window. Intrigued by this "monster hunting" business, Jude and L.B. demanded answers, to which Andreas obliged. Both had experienced some form of injustice from them as well, and wanted in on the fight.
With that, and the recruitment of more members who wished to gain some protection against the uptick in creatures, as well as fight back against them, the Supernatural Children's Association of Reconnaissance and Expulsion (or: S.C.A.R.E) was formed.
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Inga Karnstein/"The Queen"
Voice Claim: Alison LaPlacaÂ
Inga is the head of S.C.A.R.E. and runs the organization like a fine-tuned machine....or, at the very least, would like to. No one's been turned into a monster and switched sides, nor has their base been invaded, so there's at least that.
As Schprekinheim's paranormal problem began increasing and outside help was increasingly becoming a desire, she had gotten in contact with the KND, having heard of their work around pre-invasion. When it was suggested they look into Sector ANTAG- given their status- Inga was initially hesitant, especially with recruiting Val; considering her....unique circumstances. She does have her eye on this temporary recruit of sorts, but so far, she seems to trust her. With her priority target level being so high, the smaller amount of potential traitors, the better.
Andreas Dragomir/"The Prince"
 Voice Claim: J. Michael TatumÂ
Perhaps one of S.C.A.R.E.'s most efficient field agents, Andreas is essentially Val's de facto partner, as the two had (initially) clashed during a homework eating weredog swarm.
After the dust had settled, he told her that heâs from the organization that had sent the letter. According to him, S.C.A.R.E. appears to work similar to the KND- albeit with a more supernatural focus. While the two may be fighting for the same cause, there's still a liiiiiittle bit of tension between the two; mainly shown in the form of snappy remarks. It loosens a bit, though, when they discover that theyâre both not entirely human (Does he flaunt that extra 25% of vampire over Val? Yeeeeeah, kinda). That extra 25%, though, does come with some drawbacks. Prolonged sun exposure, even with sunscreen, causes him 2nd degree burns and a form of âsun poisoningâ. Being a different kind of vampire as well, Andreas does require specific forms of sustenance- in his case, red, sugary substances (juice, slushies, etc)...hangry vampires are a no-go.Â
Having already been through the vampiric puberty process and having somewhat of a better hold on it, Andreas does show a bit of concern for Val when she starts having her spurts....there's a lot of rage behind them, it seems.
LilliBella "L.B." Althea/"Hex Girl"
Voice Claim:Â Kamali Minter
With all the doom and gloom that seems to surround S.C.A.R.E., LilliBella is a little beacon of light that seeks to aid others in their fight. She is the organization's resident sorceress that aids in developing potions, enchanted weapons, and providing knowledge on some of the beasts that are roaming through Schprekenheim.
She additionally works alongside the organization's "doctor", Judas Marlowe. While he may have more knowledge in the more visceral aspects of the body and some of the conditions it goes through, LilliBella has a better understanding of the more "supernatural" aspects the can be associated with them. Heck, she helps him out with his and keeps an eye on Inga and...possibly hers? This sort of power is what leads to her danger/priority target level being as high as it is...who knows what can be done if her knowledge and achievements fall into the wrong hands.
Judas "Jude" Marlowe/"Doc"
Voice Claim: James CallisÂ
Alright, so he's not actually a doctor, but....dude's got a sizable amount of knowledge in the field of medicine for someone his age. Just as good, right? Regardless, Jude is the organization's medical officer and seeks to help others- be that injured in battle or just needing to let something off their chest. Part of his determination is associated with trying to understand his biology a bit better- being considered a "half-lycan" and only just now beginning to enter a time where genetics start fighting over what side is more dominant.
As such, he works closely with S.C.A.R.E.'s resident sorceress, LilliBella Althea, who understands the more "supernatural" aspects of certain conditions. He may have a handle on the more visceral aspects of the body, but she has a slightly different insight that aids greatly...she did develop a potion that appears to suppress more animalistic aspects of himself that appear around and on nights with a full moon, after all. Like L.B., it is his knowledge that makes his danger/priority target level what it is.
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*Jude and L.B. primarily spend their time at the base, but in emergency situations, they do have a similar amount of training/skills that will aid in battle as field agents...hence the double delegation.
#definitely under a read more cuz this got LOOOOOOONG#hoooopefully this all makes some sort of coherent sense? i had a basic framework for the longest time; only just now expanding on it ^^;#and yeeeeah obviously a kid isn't going to have THAT level of medical ability but. suspension of disbelief. KND's a cartoon so.#*waves hands* mAgIc*#next up will be the villains! whether that's just the MAIN villains (for the first 'installment' of sorts)...#... or just a general rogues gallery; i haven't decided yet#secret-sector-antag#secret-sector-antag: Dhampir Hunter V#SSA: DHV#KND#knd ocs#codename knd ocs#codename knd#codename kids next door ocs#codename kids next door#there *are* more than just these four in the group buuut these will be the main peeps#for now at least. one more joins the main lineup buuuut...that's later ;)#as a silly author's note; all of them have at least SOME reference to some horror/fantasy media in their names hehehee#andreas' might be a bit more obscure but...still#lore drop i guess??#mun art
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the best fanfic is written by a variety of people of ages 18-45 in various stages of life with emotionally and thematically authentic insights into the story and characters and who can adapt various plot beats and interpersonal dynamics into new settings and situations and who may be skilled at portraying comedy or tragedy or action or parody or charming domesticity or romance and they usually have at least some writing experience already. but that's not as catchy
#I don't know if I've ever read a fic by those lauded middle aged women#ppl don't rly talk about their person lives in the notes anymore#I feel like that's an early 2000s thing#ALSO i feel like that impression is a holdover from like. the hp fandom explosion#I get the sense that most ppl I read are youngish#I know for a fact that one of my favorite authors is a man and I really like the way he writes jyl so. go figure#anyway#there's a lot of research that cql/mdzs kind of needs esp for canon fics#and idk how many fic authors are doing that#also I feel like there's a common conception that fic authors are white and while I'm sure that's broadly the trend#for cql/mdzs I really think there's a significant percentage of writers who are youngish and chinese#I think they're definitely outnumbered tho...I remember meta blogs complaining abt it years ago đ#cor.txt
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What does Ice (or Mav) think about the Obama gay rumors? Will they be tuning in to hear the story of the man who allegedly fucked Obama? Are they bi Obama truthers? Is Rooster? Is Hangman? Any other Icebama interactions you're hiding from us? His cameo cracked me up and I need to know more...
the obama gay rumors

first im hearing about this
#âwhy would you ask me; a top gun blog; thisâ#r u talking about the guy whoâs claiming to be Obamas brother on Twitter#is malik obama now claiming his brother barack is gay ?#i may be a zoomer but im not sure im quite that terminally online#ice would probably think something diasapproving like#âitâs just like when those damn republicans said he was born in kenya or that his wife is a man. ppl say shit just to say shit đâ#mav would probably be like âhell yeah obama join the club!!! đđđ you me and everyone else on earth!!â#though mav (thinks democrats take too much of his income in taxes) would still be registered Republican#were it not for his liberal husband threatening divorce and the gopâs recurring threats to send the military to invade mexico#would he??? i CANNOT get a political read on tgm mav#1986 mav definitely believes Bill Clinton is an affront to god#2020 mav Iâm not sure#âok fine higher taxes is the price i will pay for marriage equalityâ#does this have anything to do with Obama saying he only was a communist in college just to pull mad pussy? (relatable af ngl)#read the authors note on wwgattai ch 9. i am not up to date on my obama discourse clearly
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(*ă»Ïă»*)bâȘ
#I'm a bit late but :)#Mmmhh lots of thoughts about this episode. Nothing really relevant though lol#I like it... Mostly. Wellâ I like Atsushiâ and I like Atsushi screentime.#I always forget that there's actually a one week timeskip within the Guild arc#I think these chapters were generally better executed in the manga.#But even then it's just...#Why do the make the Guild / Fitzgerald so. dumb. Why do they make them act so wildly irrationally and at the protagonists' advantage#It really gives villain acting entirely mindlessly to make the plot advance and the heroes win. It's really sensless.#I mean especially when Atsushi yielded. Why didn't Fitzgerald take his offer. For real!!#For real. He had NOTHING to gain from proceeding with his plan. He already obtained for Atsushi and the ada to collaborate.#Now they are NEVER going to help himâ and that's agreat loss for him.#And idk. i hear that little Tumblr post in my voice saying âwhy would you complain about characters acting irrationally!#Do people irl never act irrationally?â#And yeah I get Fitzgerald was frustrated for losing Mitchell and his fight with Hawthorne. Okay I understand.#But that's definitely too much. That's him acting downright stupid at the heroes' advantage and it's just pretty underwhelming to read?#That said. It's just general notes I'm not particularly annoyed because like. That's just b/s/d to you. Dumbing down the villains a secondâ#so the author can escape the trap they put themselves into. Very Marvel-esque move lol.#On that exact same note WHY WOULD LUCY HAVE THE DOLL.#The doll is the whole premise for your plan working why would you not protect it with everything đđđ#I'm not getting in the Lucy / Atsushi scene itself. I love Lucy but I swear every time that scene gets played a femminist dies#(it's me. I'm the femminist dying every time.)#Mmmhh a couple more things. I dislike the ost choice in the scene where Steinbeck is torturing Q it feels so out of place#And I really don't get what's the deal with the Hawthorne / Fitzgerald convo it's so confusing to me. Like it It looks like Hawtorne isâ#blaming Fitzgerald for Mitchell's condition (both in health and for her family status) but...#Objectively neither of those things are Fitzgerald's fault? Idk maybe I just have very little media comprehension for this arc becauseâ#a lot of things just seem to happen with no sense. But it's okay#Im complaining a lot lol but its mostly irrelevant things (or like with the dumbification of villains things I've learnt to live with lmao)#But the episode was generally nice. The animation this season is consistently very pretty.#random rambles
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environmental storytelling
#snort#for the record#having seen the tag before reading the fic (and said author's note)#it was definitely the appropriate tag#and i was glad it was there
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god okay actually i might take a small break from âgive all the best to youâ fic because itâs starting to burn me out, not sure for how long but hopefully itâll pass
sorry guys !!!
#zishu speaks#i might also need a bit of time to plan out the next few bits#i need to do some research on weddings and other stuff#sorry to everyone who reads it !!#the last chapter sort of left on a cliffhanger (but iâm sure you can kind of guess who the new characters are based on the tags)#itâs getting harder to write my creative juice is running out#not everyone who reads the fic will see this i think#but i also donât want to update the fic just to say this because i donât like those kinds of author notes </3#creativity and motivation is so dead in me itâs unreal#fr feeling that âletâs shake this poet out of the beastâ#i donât actually know if thatâs what the lyric means but i definitely feel like i have to fight for my life trying to write something#ahh iâm rambling BUT yeah#again sorrys to anyone looking forward to the next chapters :(#gonna try not to let this rot#fingers crossed !!#ava
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[edits a fairly neutral-feeling scene]
[gives the pov character anxiety]
i didnt mean to do that
#rambles#DEFINITELY reads a lot better now#thank you <details> tag for letting me do that and also inspiring me to. make v1 spiral for hours in this scene#OOH I CAN MAKE A JUICY FAKE DEATH SCENE WITH THE FAKE AUTHORS NOTES
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