#conciseness

[codeandcanvas]

Good morning from the studio

The quality of “Prägnanz” that is, conciseness has been appearing in my studies so often, while remaining incredibly hard to grasp.

I need to get to its bottom. I am afraid I like to dig down into it when I find a good spot for a dig.

[dogsuffrage]

Another question for my tumblr census...

Do what you feel is most accurate, even if there is some nuance. If nothing feels accurate enough for you, do other.

[maxlearnmicrolearningplatform]

Mastering the Art of Writing for Microlearning: The Power of Active Voice

Writing style plays a pivotal role in the effectiveness of microlearning lessons. Despite its significance, it remains one of the most misunderstood design principles. A brilliant concept can easily be overshadowed by poor writing style. Thus, writing demands conscious effort to shine. It's an art form that requires nurturing through the right framework and consistent practice.

The challenge amplifies when crafting content for microlearning scenarios. With just a few minutes to convey your message, every word must pack a punch. Your content needs to be slick, informal, and impactful to captivate learners in a short span.

Understanding the Impact of Writing Style

Writing style permeates all forms of microlearning content, whether it's a video, podcast, animation, voiceover, short simulation, or infographic. Each element contributes to the overall learning experience, influencing engagement and knowledge retention.

The Essence of a Smart Script

Crafting a smart script is essential for delivering effective microlearning content. A smart script is concise, clear, and purposeful, guiding learners through key concepts seamlessly. It distills complex information into digestible chunks, ensuring maximum comprehension within a limited timeframe. Moreover, a well-written script sets the tone for the entire learning experience, establishing rapport with learners and fostering a conducive environment for knowledge acquisition.

Embracing the Power of Active Voice

Among the myriad elements of writing style, the use of active voice stands out as a fundamental principle in microlearning content development. Active voice infuses energy and clarity into sentences, enhancing the overall impact on learners. Unlike passive voice, which tends to obscure the subject and action, active voice emphasizes agency and directness, making the message more engaging and compelling.

Unlocking the Potential of Active Voice

Active voice transforms mundane sentences into dynamic narratives, driving learner engagement and comprehension. Let's explore how embracing active voice can elevate your microlearning content:

1. Clarity and Directness

Active voice emphasizes the performer of the action, making it clear who is doing what. This clarity eliminates ambiguity and ensures that learners grasp the intended message immediately. By stating the subject upfront, active voice facilitates smoother information processing, allowing learners to focus on understanding the

content rather than deciphering the sentence structure.

2. Engagement and Impact

Active voice injects vitality and immediacy into the narrative, capturing learners' attention from the outset. The active construction of sentences creates a sense of momentum, propelling learners forward in their learning journey. This heightened engagement fosters a deeper connection with the material, leading to improved knowledge retention and application.

3. Conciseness and Efficiency

Active voice enables you to convey information more efficiently by eliminating unnecessary words and phrases. By prioritizing the performer of the action, active voice streamlines communication, ensuring that every word serves a purpose. In the context of microlearning, where brevity is paramount, this succinctness is invaluable for maximizing the impact of each learning moment.

4. Empowerment and Agency

Active voice empowers learners by highlighting their role as active participants in the learning process. By emphasizing their ability to take action and effect change, active voice instills a sense of ownership and responsibility. This empowerment motivates learners to engage more deeply with the content, driving self-directed learning and skill acquisition.

5. Consistency and Cohesion

Consistency in writing style is crucial for maintaining coherence and cohesion across microlearning modules. By consistently using active voice, you create a unified narrative voice that guides learners seamlessly from one module to the next. This coherence enhances the overall learning experience, reinforcing key concepts and facilitating knowledge transfer.

Practical Strategies for Writing in Active Voice

Now that we've explored the benefits of active voice, let's delve into some practical strategies for incorporating it into your microlearning content:

1. Focus on the Performer

Identify the performer of the action in each sentence and position them as the subject. This ensures that the emphasis remains on the entity driving the action, enhancing clarity and engagement.

2. Use Strong Verbs

Choose strong, action-oriented verbs that convey precisely what the performer is doing. Strong verbs add vibrancy and energy to the sentence, amplifying its impact on the reader.

3. Avoid Nominalizations

Nominalizations occur when verbs are transformed into nouns, weakening the impact of the sentence. Instead of using nominalizations, opt for active verbs that convey the action directly, maintaining the momentum of the narrative.

4. Keep Sentences Concise

Keep sentences concise and to the point, focusing on conveying information efficiently. Avoid unnecessary words and phrases that detract from the clarity and impact of the message.

5. Review and Revise

Regularly review and revise your microlearning content to ensure that active voice is consistently employed. Pay attention to sentence structure and verb choices, refining your writing to maximize engagement and comprehension.

Conclusion

In the realm of microlearning, writing style is a powerful tool for shaping the learning experience. By embracing active voice, you can transform your content from ordinary to extraordinary, capturing learners' attention and driving meaningful engagement. The use of active voice enhances clarity, engagement, conciseness, empowerment, and cohesion, making it an indispensable asset in your microlearning toolkit. By applying practical strategies for writing in active voice, you can create compelling microlearning content that resonates with learners and delivers lasting impact.

[wickedzeevyln]

Elevate Your Pitch Elevator Pitch

There is either dread or delight when people are prompted something about themselves —dread, because in front of a job interviewer, people want to say the right thing, to impress, hopefully to land the role, then there is delight in basking under the spotlight to talk about themselves, an exhilarating experience, right? Of course, in scenario where your goal is to land a job, what you say…

[suntails]

✨ Once upon a time ✨

[theboh3mianraspb3rry]

Here's something!

This is a strange feeling, but I got the urge to write something, and this is that! You see I’ve not written in my voice for quite some time now. I pull together articles on the daily for others but not for me. My voice has been a shitfaced slur for the last 5 years… probably more but that’s not what the something is today! The drive home today was the usual thought pondering in teatime traffic…

[qunaributts]

Gamers this has been on my mind for a while, and I've been Going Through It so I can't thoughtfully articulate it yet but: the little things can, and absolutely will, save you.

[spookyfluffy]

A perfectly normal response to a rage god asking "Why do you not burn?"

[valtsv]

"dipshit" is an underrated insult tbh. there's a certain scalding disdain to it that nothing else can hope to match.

[kimcoxauthor]

Writing Fundamentals Series – Conciseness

Conciseness is a key component of good writing. It means using the fewest words possible to convey your message without sacrificing clarity or meaning. Concise writing is more effective because it captures the reader’s attention and keeps them engaged without wasting their time. In this article, we will discuss the importance of conciseness in writing and provide tips for achieving it. Clarifies…

[meyhew]

In times like these, Black and Brown men are dehumanized and erased. We focus on talking about the women and children of Palestine, but what about the men? Are they not worthy? Are their lives not divine? Are they not deserving of mourning? (x)

[on-leatheredwings]

Mr. Sandman (18+)

Yandere Jason Todd / AFAB Reader

> romantic  > tw/cw: non-con, somno. reader has a vagina, piv sex, creampie(s). > Jason just can't get enough of you when you're awake; why would that change when you're asleep? > a/n: my first jason solo!!! WE UP! im a sucker for simpering, weak, vulnerable jason sowwyyyy . he needs u spiritually what can i say . > word count: 1.1k

Jason knows he shouldn't be doing this.

But who could blame him? You’re just so gorgeous. And so smart, so funny, so generous and so– so perfect. You are his god. He is your faithful acolyte. And your cunt is his altar of choice.

Jason glances himself in the mirror across your bedroom. He’s a hulking mass of muscle on all fours, hovering above your gently sleeping body. It would be a shock you haven’t woken up yet, if not for his stealth. He padded onto your bed, knowing just where the mattress would give soundlessly under his solid weight. Underneath him, you’re none the wiser. Innocent. Ripe and for the taking.

He shouldn't be doing this, he reminds himself, despite his bare erection already weeping precum in anticipation. 

You took him into your embrace, like a savior to a wounded dog. You decided he was loveable, of all things. 

He shouldn't be doing this, he tells himself again, despite his hands starting to wander. Your nipples poke sinfully through his wifebeater, breasts nearly spilling out of it anyway. You’ve dictated it to be your new set of pajamas. It’s much too long for you, falling past the start of your thighs. He peels it up, slowly, carefully. He leaves it to bunch at your collarbone, revealing your naked breasts. He swallows an appreciative groan, leaning forward and suckling on a nipple.

It’ll just be some heavy petting. Just some kissing. Just some marks so people know you’re his – he knows what to say so you won’t mind that too much in the morning. Just– just a few touches.

But then Jason’s hand wanders downwards. And when he cups your cunt with his hand – his throat tightens; he bristles, stiffens; heady desire intoxicates him and fogs his mind – all restraint comes crashing down. 

He was a damn idiot to think he could resist.

“Okay– Just a little. Just a little, I swear,” Jason groans, little more than a whisper, betraying his attempts at being quiet.

Jason, with expert vigilante fluidity, hikes one of your legs over his shoulder. He lowers and shuffles back to an eye-level view of your cunt, waiting prettily just for him.

He draws circles around your clit with his fingers, using his abundant precum as lube. A man possessed, he could watch all day at how easily and nicely you let his fingers in.

Fuck, you were made just for him, he bets. It’s not only his cock your pussy remembers; your body accommodates, obeys, and wettens in response to every part of his own. He’s barely even trying, pumping his digits back and forth. You’re basically drawing him in. 

Your mouth drops open, a soft whine falling out, and he freezes. His fingers are still stuffed in your puffy cunt. After a few seconds, you continue dozing off, although your brows pinch together with pleasure.

If you can wake up at any second, he’ll be damned if he doesn’t at least go the full mile. He slips his fingers out. Another whine from you. I know, I know, baby, he thinks. You’ll be full again soon enough. Jason slides forward and makes you both fit together puzzle pieces, cock against your folds. “Just the tip, I promise,” Jason says again. And so he continues. 

He’s in. He lets out a relieved sigh, nearly moaning. He’s in.

… But it’s not enough.

Before Jason knows it, he’s pushing forward, entering you fully. And every inch is well-earned – your tightness has him choked, panting and gasping. Yeah, he reassures himself. He fucking belongs here.

It takes him no time at all to start fucking his precum into your cunt. A near-frothy ring of cream grows at the fat base of his cock, a product of his speed and fervor. If he had the mind to, he’d be embarrassed at his desperation. But then he grinds your clit down against the root of his cock, frotting against your walls, and he could not be at all fucked to care.

Jason could start laughing, fucking you with wild abandon. As soon as he climbed on this bed, this was out of his hands. How did he ever think he’d be able to stop? He can’t even try to quiet down anymore. There’s the sound of skin colliding bouncing through the room, your mattress creaking from the intensity of him pounding you, and of course, his own heavy breathing. Fuck, fuck. Despite the noise, he can’t help it – he needs this.

Finally, the hot coil in him snaps. He shudders violently, veins visible in his arms and temple, mouth falling open into a moan. Face-to-face with you at this point, his breaths tickle against your cheek.

On his third orgasm, he’s finally spent. He marvels at the mess he’s made – the inside of your thighs is slick with his own makings, pearly white smeared across the canvas that his your skin. Your abused cunt is swollen and so, so pretty. His cock is still firing ropes into your body. 

Jason can't bear to withdraw himself, mind drunk with pleasure. Suddenly drowsy, Jason has to stop himself from collapsing on top of you. He gently lowers himself to lie down facing you. Both of you are on your sides, his cock still buried in your warmth.

You start to wake up, blinking away the blearly tendrils of sleep. You glance black hair and a shock of white. Mm. Jason, your sleepy mind thinks. Good. Great, even. The allure of continuing your slumber calls, as he rocks you back and forth, the motion almost sedative. Hips meeting yours, cock rutting into you…

Wait–

Your eyes fully snap open, body on high alert. You gasp.

“Jay–?” you squeak. Now fully awake, you register the full presence of his length in you and the pleasurable throb in between your thighs. And the utter stickiness of your thighs. 

Startled, Jason wakes up with a jerk. He doesn’t normally fall into such deep sleep. He feels panic rise. He was supposed to wake up after just a few minutes…!

“Fuck–” he begins, fumbling to roll away and unsheathe himself. But you curl a fist around the collar of his shirt, like pulling on a leash. You two stare at one another, both bodies still sweaty and warm. Your cunt is still full with him, his seed. Leaking. 

Fear thunders through Jason at getting caught. 

But then you pout. So cute, his dumb animal brain instinctively thinks. Even though you’d argue to him that you’re nothing of the sort. You smile mischievously, sinking onto his cock an inch.

“Now, Jay,” you say, tutting. “You should’ve woken me up first.”

[languageyeti1985]

Essential Steps for ESL Students To Improve Their Writing Skills…

Writing is crucial for ESL students who want to improve their English proficiency. Writing skills are essential for academic success, career advancement, and effective communication. However, writing can be challenging, especially for those who are not native speakers of English. This guide will explore seven steps ESL students can take to improve their writing skills.

Step 1: Read Widely and Regularly

Reading is a fundamental part of learning any language, and it's essential for ESL students looking to improve their writing skills. Reading provides exposure to a wide range of vocabulary and grammatical structures and helps develop an intuitive sense of how English is used in different contexts. Here are a few additional tips for using reading to improve your writing:

Choose texts that interest you: It's easier to stay motivated when reading something engaging or informative. Find texts that align with your interests, whether fiction, non-fiction, news articles, or academic papers.

Pay attention to structure: When reading, note how different types of writing are structured. For example, news articles typically follow an "inverted pyramid" structure, with the most critical information at the top and supporting details below. Academic papers often follow a more complex system with an introduction, literature review, methodology, results, and conclusion.

Please take note of new words and phrases: When encountering unfamiliar words or phrases, note them in a vocabulary journal or app. Try using them in your writing and conversations to reinforce your understanding.

Consider audiobooks or podcasts: If you're not a fan of traditional reading, consider listening to audiobooks or podcasts. This can still provide exposure to vocabulary and grammar while also helping to develop your listening skills.

Here are a few resources to help you find reading materials:

Newsela: This website offers news articles on various topics, with different reading levels and comprehension quizzes.

Project Gutenberg: This website offers over 60,000 free e-books in a variety of languages.

Oxford Learner's Bookshelf: This website offers a range of English language textbooks, including graded readers and academic materials.

Step 2: Learn Grammar and Punctuation Rules

Good grammar and punctuation are essential for effective writing. While it's true that native English speakers often break grammar rules in casual conversation, ESL students need to learn and follow these rules in their writing. Here are a few additional tips for understanding and applying grammar and punctuation rules:

Use a variety of resources: There are countless online resources for learning English grammar and punctuation. Use various sources to ensure you get accurate and comprehensive information. Some recommended resources include the Purdue Online Writing Lab (OWL), Grammarly, and the Cambridge Dictionary.

Please focus on the most common rules first: It's important to prioritise which grammar and punctuation rules you learn first. Focus on the most common ones, such as subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and capitalization, before moving on to more advanced topics.

Practice, practice, practice: The best way to internalise grammar and punctuation rules is to use them in your writing. Incorporate exercises and quizzes into your writing practice to reinforce your understanding.

Here are a few additional resources for learning grammar and punctuation:

English Grammar in Use: This textbook is a comprehensive guide to English grammar, with clear explanations and plenty of practice exercises.

Grammar Bytes: This website offers interactive grammar lessons and quizzes with a focus on common grammar errors.

The Punctuation Guide: This website offers a comprehensive guide to English punctuation, with examples and explanations.

Step 3: Practise Writing Every Day

Writing is a skill that requires practice and repetition to improve. So even if you don't have a specific writing assignment or project, practising writing daily is vital to developing your skills. Here are a few additional tips for incorporating daily writing practice into your routine:

Start small: If you're new to writing, try writing a full essay or story every day. Instead, start with small exercises like writing a paragraph about a topic of your choice or describing an object in detail.

Use prompts: If you need help with what to write about, try using prompts to get your creative juices flowing. Many websites and resources, such as the NY Times Learning Network or Writer's Digest, offer writing prompts.

Experiment with different genres: Don't limit yourself to one type of writing. Try writing different genres like poetry, personal essays, or short stories to develop other writing skills and techniques.

Get feedback: While it's important to practise writing every day, it's equally important to receive feedback on your writing. This can help you identify areas for improvement and gain confidence in your skills. Consider joining a writing group or finding a writing tutor who can provide feedback on your work.

Here are a few additional resources for practising writing:

750 Words: This website encourages daily writing practice by providing a space to write 750 words daily.

NaNoWriMo: National Novel Writing Month takes place each November and challenges writers to write a 50,000-word novel in 30 days.

The Writers' Workshop: This website offers a variety of writing courses and workshops, as well as editorial services and feedback.

Step 4: Focus on Clarity and Conciseness

Good writing is clear and concise, meaning it effectively communicates your message without using unnecessary words or complex sentences. Here are a few additional tips for improving clarity and conciseness in your writing:

Use simple language: Try to avoid using overly complex words or phrases. Instead, use simple, clear language that effectively conveys your message.

Get to the point: Don't beat around the bush or use unnecessary filler. Get to the end and make sure each sentence contributes to the overall message.

Use active voice: When possible, use active voice instead of passive voice. Active voice makes your writing more transparent and more direct.

Edit ruthlessly: After you've written a draft, go back and edit ruthlessly. Remove unnecessary words or sentences that don't contribute to the overall message.

Here are a few resources for improving clarity and conciseness:

The Elements of Style: This classic book by Strunk and White offers practical advice on writing style, grammar, and punctuation.

Hemingway Editor: This website analyses your writing and highlights areas where you can improve clarity and conciseness.

PlainLanguage.gov: This website offers tips and resources for writing in plain language, which is clear and concise language that is easy to understand.

Step 5: Use Transitions and Signposts

Transitions and signposts are words or phrases that help connect different ideas and sections of your writing. They make your writing more organised and easier to follow. Here are a few additional tips for using transitions and signposts effectively:

Use a variety of transitions: Don't rely on the same transitions or signposts repeatedly. Use a variety of words and phrases to connect your ideas.

Use transitions at the beginning and end of paragraphs: Transitions can help signal the start of a new idea or the conclusion of a section.

Use signposts in longer pieces: In more extended pieces of writing, use signposts like "Firstly," "Secondly," and "Finally," to help guide the reader through the different sections.

Here are a few resources for using transitions and signposts:

Transition Words and Phrases: This website offers a comprehensive list of transition words and phrases, along with examples of how to use them.

Signposting: This website explains the importance of signposting and offers tips for how to use it effectively.

Step 6: Get Feedback and Revise

Once you've completed your draft, getting feedback from others and revising your work is important. Here are a few tips for getting feedback and revising effectively:

Find a writing group or partner: Joining a writing group or finding a writing partner can be a great way to get feedback on your work. You can also provide feedback for others, which can help you develop your writing skills.

Take a break: After you've completed a draft, take a break from your writing for a few days or even a week. This can help you come back to your work with fresh eyes and a new perspective.

Read your work out loud: Reading your work out loud can help you identify areas where sentences are awkward or don't flow well. It can also help you catch errors you might have missed when reading silently.

Consider the feedback you receive: When you receive feedback, take the time to consider it carefully. Don't be defensive or dismissive of criticism. Instead, use it as an opportunity to learn and grow as a writer.

Revise and edit: After you've received feedback, revise your work accordingly. This might involve making significant changes, like reorganising your ideas or adding new sections, or minor changes, like fixing grammar or punctuation errors.

Here are a few resources for getting feedback and revising:

Scribophile: This website offers a community of writers who provide feedback on each other's work.

Grammarly: This website offers an automated grammar and spell-checking tool that can help you catch errors in your writing.

Reedsy: This website offers a marketplace of freelance editors who can provide professional editing services for your work.

Improving your writing skills takes time and effort, but you can become a more confident and skilled writer with consistent practice and the proper techniques. By focusing on grammar, vocabulary, organisation, clarity, and conciseness, you can create writing that effectively communicates your ideas and engages your readers. Remember to practise regularly, experiment with different genres, and seek feedback from others to continue developing your skills.

[halalchampagnesocialist]

I've probably made a gazillion posts of this iteration over the many years but it bears repeating. What frustrates me about liberal discourses on Palestinian-Israeli violence is the implication that violence is sporadic on both sides. It's frustrating because people will act like the only real issue with Israeli violence towards Palestinians is ones that come solely from extremist settlers or from right-wing governments.

You might argue that perhaps Palestinian violence against Israelis is random, sporadic and so on, but that is not the case with Israeli violence towards Palestinians at all. Israeli violence towards Palestinians is systemic but also is a daily occurrence. Not only does Israel kill Palestinians every single day, even prior to the current war, but it acts as a bystander to settler violence, even actively supports the settler violence. Violence does not even have to be murder but just the sheer control over Palestinian lives. The fact that Israel can cut water, electricity, etc to Palestinians at any time without notice. The way that Israel can come into any city and bulldoze streets like it's been doing in Jenin and Tulkarem in the West Bank. Of course, can't forget to mention the land grabs and that Israel can designate any piece of land a closed military zone whenever it wants. Sometimes there is no rhyme or reason to Israel's actions at all but just does so to play with the lives of Palestinians.

The Israeli hostages did not deserve to die but you absolutely cannot talk about the tragedy of their deaths or Hamas' 'brutality' in isolation without also mentioning that Gaza has been effectively turned into a death camp or that Israel holds thousands of Palestinians in its prisons without trial. This isn't mentioning that Israel as the occupier can kidnap any person it wants at any time and treats those prisoners very inhumanely.

The worst part about all this is not just the obfuscation of these facts but so many of these same people acting like the violence is sporadic act so nonchalant towards Palestinian deaths in 'normal times.' Or even towards whoever Israel kills as long as Israel gets their wanted guy. It's also this discourse that leads certain people to deny Israeli culpability, minimise Palestinian suffering, etc.

[meruz]

u kno what it is