#cinderella rewrite

[starry-blue-echoes]

Oh I had. A thought for the Cinderella Rewrite AU. Because now there's a girl out there who is extraordinarily pissed at Yukako, right?

Well that's great for Yoshihiro Kira who is trying to find people willing to distract the Morioh Gang from hunting down and finding his son. And this girl already has a grudge against one of them? Perfect Enemy Stand potential!

There are so many ways this plotline could go which is amazing. Does the girl learn the error of her ways or remain stubborn, becoming a shadow archetype to Yukako, someone unwilling to settle her feelings in a healthy way? Does Koichi beat her or does Yukako? Does this happen on The Thursday? If so, does Yukako reluctantly drag in someone like Hazamada to help or does she try to go it alone only to fail and need the help of, say, Joseph or Tonio?

Speaking of which, if it isn't on The Thursday, where is Yukako during All Of That?

OOOOOOOOOOO THAT'S A FUN IDEA TO GO WITH AND A GREAT WAY TO TURN THIS INTO A THREE SECTION ARC 👀👀👀

While I have no idea what her Stand could be, I LOVE the idea of her being turned into a Stand User and getting involved in The Thursday. Maybe she ends up teaming up with Terunosuke in the kidnapping of Koichi and it sorta skews how everything goes. What her Stand is will definitely impact how things are going, but with how we've created her there are. So many possibilities and I'm not sure which would be best. I do think it should be more inclined to trickery than straight up power but other than that I've got nothing

ANYWAYS tho, as for how this ties into things and redirects them: maybe the girl (also, we really need to give her a name don't we) was set up to work with Terunosuke, but under the condition that Koichi and Yukako were hers. Teru does his thing and kidnaps Koichi and Tomoko, but he ends up passing Paper Koichi off to the girl

Josuke, Okuyasu, Yukako and Yuya are all going to temporarily be together and chasing after Terunosuke, but maybe somewhere during the chase the girl ends up jumping them and goads Yukako into a fight. Yukako tells the others to go on ahead and keep chasing after Teru and that she'll catch up later. It only after they've left that Yukako learns Koichi is actually here. I'd imagine their fight is a lot of chasing and shouting, and personally I really like the possibility of Tonio and Joseph getting involved, though I'm not super sure how

Koichi definitely gets freed at some point, and when he joins the fight there's a noticeable difference in the tide. After all, out of the four of them Koichi has the 2nd most combat experience (plus, Joseph's gotten a bit nerfed because of his age) and isn't afraid to pull his punches if he genuinely believes he's in danger. He's had like. Three near death experiences at this point, two of which could be argued were just flat out death, plus who knows how many other fights where his friends were in danger. Koichi knows what's at risk here and he's not going to let anyone else get hurt if he can help it. (Now, he's not going for lethal shots, but he's definitly aiming to hurt)

and maybe that's how Tonio and Joseph get involved? For safety and potential back up, Koichi and Yukako ended up running to Tonio's since it was the closest place and Joseph just happened to be there (Shizuka is fine tho, she's Jotaro at the moment), and they end up getting wrapped into things

for the resolution of this, I'll admit I really want to play into the fact that this girl has no IDEA what's actually going on or how much is actually at stake here, and how her ignorance to it has consequences. She's far from blameless of course, she did do some really fucked up shit in the past and now, but she also had no idea she's gotten involved with serial killers who are looking to do far worse than high school bullying. She'd been so wrapped up in her own little world of getting revenge that she hadn't thought to think Hey Maybe The Weird Picture Man With The Arrow Doesn't Have My Best Interests At Heart

Now does this mean she gets off scott free? No, and to be honest given the amount of property damage and kidnapping and manipulation she's done she's definitely going to be on the Foundation's radar, double especially because she's a User who was again, working for a known serial killer (albeit unknowingly)

but finally, after weeks and weeks of all of this happening, she finally gets to see how there's more to this world that her immediate circle and there are going to be concesuqences for her actions

[annymation]

LOOK AT THESE CINDERELLA CONCEPT ARTS I JUST FOUND OH MY GOD IM GONNA CRY!!!

THIS IS EXACTLY WHAT I ENVISIONED FOR THE “AT ALL COST” SCENE IN MY REWRITE!!! ITS SO PRETTY!!! THEYRE DANCING ON CLOUDS IN THE NIGHT SKY!!!

AM I REALLY GONNA SAY “WE WERE ROBBED” WHEN TALKING ABOUT A 74 YEAR OLD MOVIE???

[descendantofthesparrow]

ROR teen Ella redesign; aesthetic board

she gives upcycled/thrift store fashion vibes

[alexismcknight25]

“Consequences when you mess with time”

Oh no my brain is going crazy again. I such a good idea for my sequel to rewrite the past.

Red and Chloe’s new time travel adventure. Two years later.

Spoilers for my story under line

So we know how Chad was bad guy. The original time travellers came back to stop him but he tried it again aka their consequences.

Also i have this idea that's been stuck in my head what when Queen of Hearts asked Cinderella to kneel she did. I've read lots of bad Red stories with Chloe in them still. I love Bridget and Ella’s friendship. So what if she stood by her old friend.

But anyway after what happened with Chad and how the OG time travellers didn't tell Chad or his parents about the future they came from and his future repeated itself. But they told Queen Leah and eventually Audrey about hers and she didn't repeat her future. So they decide to tell Bridget about theirs.

Bridget, Ella, Charming work together and re-create the coup. Leading to a civil war. So that could be when Chloe and Red go back for a second time.

[lizzieheartsdeck]

I just want to see opinions to help with something for my EAH Rewrite

[quincy2729]

Descendants 4 Rewrite: Part 2

Chloe's Arrival:

Chloe is about to enter her second year at Auradon Prep, and she's excited to see what the new semester holds. She can't wait to run into her friend Melody, daughter of Ariel. She hopes they'll be roommates again this year.

When Chloe spots Melody, she squeals, runs to her, and gives her the biggest hug. They talk about what they've done over the summer and spoke about their experiences and hopes for the school year.

The Roommate of Truth:

Once Chloe and Melody walk to their assigned dormroom, Chloe looks at the list gleefully, only for her smile to immediately drop. She sees an unfamiliar name on the list. "Red D'amore?" Chloe wonders. Chloe asked Melody if she's heard of her, but Melody shrugged her shoulders.

Chloe notices Fairy Godmother walking down the hallway and begins to stop her. She asks about Red in confusion. Fairy Godmother explains that Red is the daughter of the Queen of Hearts, and she's going to be Chloe's new roommate.

Chloe and Melody were disappointed when they realized they weren't going to be roommates but thanked Fairy Godmother for answering their question. After Fairy Godmother walks away, Melody starts to pace in disbelief. "The Queen of Heart's Daughter!" She yelled. Chloe immediately shushed her and looked to make sure Fairy Godmother was gone.

Chloe tells Melody that she knows it sounds crazy, but she decides to remain optimistic. She continues to explain to Melody that Cinderella and the Queen of Hearts used to be friends. Melody is still not completely convinced and tells Chloe that there's a reason the Queen of Hearts is the way she is. Melody pushes her judgment further by insinuating that the apple doesn't fall far from the tree. Chloe rolls her eyes as the two walk to the front of the campus.

Red's Arrival:

After a long carriage ride, Red is finally relieved that she's at Auradon Prep. She studies the view of the campus and appreciates its beauty. The Queen walks out of the carriage and gives Red some advice before she goes. The Queen proceeds to tell Red that she didn't send her to Auradon for fun but to prepare her for the real world.

She lectures Red that she hopes sending her to Auradon would make her tougher and less kind-hearted. Red proceeds to tell her that there's nothing wrong with her heart. The Queen scoffs and responds that kindness will only cause people to take advantage of her.

Red couldn't help, but let her intrusive thoughts get to her. "Who hurt you?" Red realizes what she just said with a shocked look on her face. The Queen had a look of displeasure on her face before it went back to normal. The Queen starts to sing her verse about how love ain't it.

After the verse is over, the Queens' words begin to build some doubt into Red. However, Red remains optimistic. She didn't forget the real reason she wanted to go to Auradon. She wanted to be somewhere else besides Wonderland, have new experiences, and make some new friends. Red sees Chloe and Melody at the front of the campus and walks up to them.

The encounter:

Before Red greets them, she couldn't help but study their appearance. She thought they were both beautiful and had a sweet demeanor. "Remember to be nice." Red tells herself. Red greets Chloe and Melody with a warm smile. Chloe and Melody began to engage in the conversation. Once they were in the middle of their conversation, Red asked about their parents. Melody tells Red that she's the daughter of Ariel and Eric, then Chloe proceeds to tell her that she's the daughter of Cinderella and Prince Charming.

Red immediately freezes. There's an awkward silence between the three of them. "You're Cinderella's daughter?" Red asked. Before Chloe could respond, Red abruptly walks away, which leaves Chloe confused.

Melody starts to speak about Red's attitude. She continues to speak about how her mood completely switched and how rude it was of her not to excuse herself. Chloe couldn't help but agree that Red's reaction was a little rude, but she couldn't understand why Red seemed so bothered who her mom was.

Dormmate:

Red walks to her assigned dorm only to realize that her roommate is none other than the Chloe Charming. "Great." She thought. As if things weren't already awkward, now she has to deal with Chloe being her roommate.

Red begins to open the door and sit alone in her dorm room. She thinks about how of all people, she has to share a room with the daughter of her mother's enemy. She doesn't take a liking to the idea and even starts to develop preconceived notions about Chloe. But Red immediately stops herself and realizes that it's not fair to judge Chloe for something she didn't cause. She realizes that she was judging Chloe the same way others would probably judge her, and guilt starts to take over her thought process. Red recognizes that she acted like a jerk.

Red knows she has to make things right if she wants a good semester at Auradon. She plans to find Chloe and apologize to her.

Red vs. Blue:

Chloe and Melody meet Nathaniel, son of Tiana and Naveen, at the school gym. They're all practicing fencing, and Chloe wins once again against Nathaniel. She continues to boast while Nathaniel remains salty. Melody talks about their encounter with Red earlier, and Nathaniel begins to chime in. He jokingly says that he hopes that Red won't chop his head off. Chloe goes along with Nathaniel's words by saying Red probably won't spare him since she seems to inherent her moms lack of heart.

What Chloe didn't realize was that Red heard part of their conversation when she was approaching the gym. Something about that last statement stung personally. Once the trio was about to continue fencing, Red approaches them and ask if she could fence with them. Chloe initially tells Red no, then Red taunts her by asking if she's afraid to lose.

Chloe is a prideful individual who never backs down from a challenge. She agrees, and they begin to fence. There's a singing montage while they're still fencing. Both are taking this game outside of the gym and into the school hallway. They're so invested in winning that they didn't realize that half of the kids in their grade were watching them. Once Chloe looked around, Red used this as an opportunity to beat Chloe.

Chloe is irritated that someone finally beat her at fencing, and she tries to strike Red back. Red swiftly moves, which causes Chloe to accidentally move into the case with Principle Uma's statue, causing it to fall and break.

Uma's Punishment:

The music montage finally stops when Chloe realizes what she's done. Everyone cleared the hallway when they saw Principle Uma show up. Uma asked both girls what happened, and they started to point fingers at each other. Annoyed, Uma sends both of them to the principals office.

As Chloe and Red are waiting in the office, they both glare at each other for what felt like decades. The tension was immediately cut when Uma walked in. Uma threatens to notify both girls' parents. Chloe eyes widen, and then she pleads for Uma not to call her mom.

Uma is curious as to why Chloe is so held bent on not notifying her mom, but she agrees on one condition. Red and Chloe have to not only remain roommates but share all classes together. Red objects to this, but Uma tells Red that if her and Chloe can get along as roommates and classmates, then she won't tell her mom. Red reluctantly agrees.

Goodnight:

At night, Red and Chloe get ready for bed and completely divide their room into two sections. Red tucks herself to bed and tells Chloe, "Goodnight spoiled princess." Chloe replies."Goodnight wannabe tyrant. " and both girls go to bed.

[houseofthelilypads]

Shrek Princesses Rewrite Edition 🐸👑🍎👡😴💇

Based on my own headcanons & plans for their roles in my rewrite of Shrek 3. Because if I can redeem Artie and Charming then the ladies deserve that same chance!!

AND DORIS TOO >:[

Fiona

Had a private tutor during her time at the tower

When food wasn't available she took to eating lava bread and smoked rats and bugs

Is heat resistant

She did venture out the tower when dragon was away

Studied martial arts through books and watching on the magic mirror

Her friends often stopped by to visit her, but as they got settled in adult lives grew too busy

Fiona loves kids and hopes to give her own children a childhood she never had

Does carry some resentment towards her parents she only vents in private tho

She can sing but on a normal range. Any higher it well... The bird scene in the first film

She loves swimming and water activities partly due to being surrounded by lava half of her life

Her favorite colors are green and blue they remind her of nature and to her, nature = freedom

Has bleached her hair a few times

She makes mud based beauty products and sell them on the side

Still listens to Sir Justin's music and has been to his concert

Knows of Artie's existence; they bond a lot over their parental issues

Fiona mentors artie how to defend himself, he has some proficiency in martial arts

Inherited her red hair from her grandmother

The reason Fiona was an ogre is partly due to her father being the Frog prince and guess where frogs live?

It's also believed that one of fiona's ancestors actually married an ogre but VERY long ago; the curse just brought out her genes

Fiona loves to stargaze; she also collected obsidian and volcanic rock

Sleeping Beauty

Is in a long distance relationship with the Sandman

Her dress is green because that's the color her disney counterpart never wears

Is the last one to arrive at a ball and the first one to leave

She has beds in every room but is usually found sleeping on the floor

Doesn't want children because she's too exhausted and fears any potential kids might inherit her condition

She actually understands Fiona dating someone who isn't human nor royalty, she dates the freaking god of SLEEP

Has the most patience with Snow because she sleeps through her nonsense anyways

Just like the video game adaptation of the third movie, she has the power to summon an army

Was the most hurt by Rapunzel's betrayal, they were the closest due to their similar backstories and lack of a biological family

Rapunzel

Used to date another prince but he never came back to her tower so she eventually rescued herself. This is why she latched on to Charming in canon (and Bruce in my fanfic)

After getting charged with treason Rapunzel is made to serve community service. She hates it but considers it better than exile

She wears gold to match her hair

She owns a lot of wigs after suffering loss of her real hair (which she shaved off).

Cinderella

Cleans her own home

Lives in a smaller house compared to the rest

The others tease her for it but understands it's to make it easier for her to clean; having spent her whole childhood cleaning a giant estate

Is a master at blacksmithing and glassblowing; what she didn't JUST clean her home she had to do repairs too

Carries some cleaning supplies

Is VERY careful in leaving crumbs

Dislikes rats and cockroaches; she has a cat named Chandelier for this reason (my twist on Disney's Cinderella)

Is working to unlearn her people pleasing

has a better relationship with her stepsisters as adults

Her prince suffers from face blindness and as such gets her confused with other ladies. He even mistook Shrek for her

She doesn't mind kids but she rather work on reconciling with her stepfamily and heal from the abuse than pass down any baggage

The third strongest princess due to years of heavy lifting

Had the closest relationship with Fairy Godmother; was even considered a potential suitor for Charming but Cindy didn't like his vanity and immaturity.

When Cindy finds out about their plan to break up Fiona's marriage she is saddened but not surprised given Charming's past behavior

Snow White

She's my least favorite but I can explain why she acts like that

Developed an Ice Queen persona to protect herself

Living with seven bachelors rubbed off on her

Love rock music

Trained her animals to fight; found the larger animals surprisingly easier to tame

There's another Snow White but she is younger and has white hair.

If she ever sees her MGA doll irl she would be impressed that it's the only doll that managed to stay the most accurate to how she looks. She'd cut the hair

Does feel a little guilty for her mean girl attitude especially after it pushed Rapunzel away so post canon she works to be a little nicer

Her prince is actually the huntsman sent to kill her; he disguised himself as one to warn her of the evil queen

Still visits the dwarves time to time and even lets them live with her

Doris

Chose to reconcile with Cinderella after taking a good long hard look at herself

Is the girly girl of them all

The first thing she brought with her first paycheck was a purple dress, she couldn't afford the color after losing her home

Doesn't like to talk about her mother

After Fiona she is the 2nd physically strongest Princess

Knows every beauty trick in the book, every ingredient, foundation shade, even which brand of Lead

Shaves her legs using a sugar and lemon wax method, she doesn't use razors

She knows my OC Gwynn from when Gwynn was a teenager first arriving at the Poison Apple

She still has a crush on Charming, but tones it down after he starts dating Gwynn

Her friction with Mabel started after Doris expressed desire to make up wth Cindy, Mabel didn't see what they had to apologize for.

After Shrek 3 Doris works at the Candy Apple, which is an extension of the Poison Apple but FOR KIDS

[patheticbatman]

Win a Commission! Guess the book, win a drawing!

To be fair, this is a fanon interpretation of the above characters. The book covers usually depicted them as white. However, a friend often imagined Addie to look like her, and Meryl to look like her older sister. So to give you a fighting chance at guessing while I enjoy drawing my fanon, here are some hints to help.

The first day’s picture has more hints, but here is today’s:

1. There is a curse laid by a dragon’s dying wish that created a plague upon the land

2. Addie likes to pretend to be sick while Meryl pretends to search for the cure to the plague.

3. Meryl is inspired by a mythic hero from her world, Drualt.

[bastart13]

(i might be jumping to conclusions here but i think i missed something-) so you're fiddling around w renpy? are you making a visual novel? :3

I learnt python in university for my degree and I've always wanted to know how to make a visual novel so the past year I've been learning how to apply my skills to ren'py

I've practiced writing with 7 chapters of a Lovestruck rewrite, practiced coding by converting some IFs into visual novel format, and I've practiced drawing visual novel sprites.......... unfortunately I haven't found an idea to piece it all together yet. I feel cursed, in some ways, that I can never find something that combines all my attentions

Ideally, I'd do a visual novel jam or something similar just to get something out there but rn I'm struggling for ideas

[midnightmah07]

Rewatching once upon a time due to nostalgia but ending up getting a random daiggie idea for a proposal??????? Hello?????????????

[starry-blue-echoes]

finally some well deserved cinderella hate on my dash!! couldn't agree more with your post (though even yukako literally losing her face didn't feel satisfying cause her biggest flaw wasn't *forgetfulness* for fucks sake)

so I was wondering how would you fix this episode if you could? I'd say get rid of it entirely but I really like aya as a character :(

I'm not a writer so it's hard for me to figure out

though I like to imagine a scenario where after aya's death cinderella stops working and koichi comes to his senses and it turns into a big complicated mess real fast ^^

I ACTUALLY DO HAVE A REWRITE FOR IT that I really want to make into a proper fic :DDD

In almost every scenario of Yukakoi I kinda just. Mentally replace Cinderella with this even though it technically ends on a more platonic note but still djrbvjbvs

basically, aside from Aya and Cinderella The Stand (which I've made some minor changes to) I've almost completely scrapped the whole episode and rewritten it in a way that I think fits way better. This is my Cinderella Rewrite :D

So it's been a few days/weeks since everything went down, and Yukako's been doing a lot of self reflection. She's been thinking, questioning, really just trying to figure things out. Admittedly it's a bit hard because she doesn't really have any friends to bounce her thoughts off of, but She's Trying Her Best

then she meets Aya. Hears her promises of love and how with her Stand, she can make it happen easily

and Yukako does accept the changes, albeit hesitantly. Cinderella changes her body, and for those precious 30 minutes, Yukako gets to experience Koichi loving her

......only she doesn't feel the happiness she thought, she hoped, she would. Doesn't feel the euphoria of love and care being given back to her and reciprocated

instead, it makes her sick to her stomach

because this isn't real. The glimmer in Koichi's eyes, the flush of his cheeks, the stutter of his words, none of it is real. There's a sense of wrongness to it, and deep down she can't help but feel like he isn't acting like Koichi would. His eyes, normally so sharp and clear, have a hazed over look like he isn't actually seeing her, and his smile is sweet but blank. It's not genuine and it makes her sick that such a terrifying expression could ever be on his face

this isn't love. This is a trick, an illusion, a false reality

when the effects of Cinderella wear off and Koichi looks at her the same way he did before, when he looks like himself again, she can't help but feel relieved. While his wariness hurts, it's far preferred to the sickly sweet smiles and dazed eyes

and this is when everything finally clicks for Yukako. It comes crashing down all at once and she begins to slowly, properly understand what she did. And with this realization comes a sort of acceptance. She draws connections between the reaches she was willing to go and Cinderella literally manipulating reality to make these things happen, and starts to see that it..... really wasn't healthy

For the first time, she finally puts Koichi's feelings before her own and stops pursuing him

........but as I said before, I said this episode was being rewritten. Not completely averted. And with Yukako chilling out..... who will be the antagonist?

Well :)

remember way back before Yukako kidnapped Koichi and was being unhealthily possessive she set that one random girl's hair on fire?

Yeah. Yeah her

She was pretty upset after everything that happened and ends up concocting a plan for revenge

I kinda want to play with her and Yukako and their reactions, but specifically in how similar I can make them, specifically in a "your feelings by themselves are fine and valid but the things you are doing to satisfy them are not" way

It wasn't hard for the girl to put together the pieces and realize Yukako had been the one to set her hair on fire, and understandably she was really pissed about it and went about planning some kind of way to get back at her

more or less, it boiled down to Get Hirose Have A Crush On Me And Lead Him On To Crush Yukako's Heart

now, there are three important things about this girl:

1) she had no idea about 95% of the stuff Yukako had done. Her knowledge was pretty much limited to Yukako Likes Hirose, Yukako Didn't Like I Was Talking Shit About Hirose, and Hirose Doesn't Reciprocate Yukako's Feelings. If she'd known just how far Yukako had been willing to go and what exactly she'd done to make Koichi so wary of her, she would've hard noped out of the situation

2) She is Just A Normal Person. She has no idea about any of the magic or Stand things going on. Because of this, she also assumes that Yukako lighting her hair on fire had been a preplanned thing instead of an impulsive decision

3) She Is A First Year In Highschool and first years are petty assholes who can be kinda dumb sometimes when trying to be petty assholes

so yeah, that's going on now. Maybe in between Yukako's first episode and "this episode" there could've been moments where the girl made slight background appearances and stuff as a sort of build up

Unfortunately (for her at least), Koichi doesn't have much interest in her and mostly brushes it off. Plus...... he's admittedly a bit on guard after everything that happened with Yukako, and so are his friends. This is then how Aya and Cinderella tie into things again. Fast forward a few more weeks to when the episode actually happens, and this girl pays Aya a visit. Now, she had no idea Aya was actually magic, but she didn't really question it because it got her the results she wanted. And Yukako..... actually does notice Koichi's "affections" for this other girl, and while it does hurt she stays firm with herself and stays away. She should be happy for him after all

.......but then she keeps noticing things. It wasn't on purpose, but given their proximity in school they're bound to pass by each other every once in a while, and what she sees.... she doesn't like. Koichi's behavior is...... off and weird and familiar for some reason, and the way his affections are received is even worse. This other girl brushes him off, disrespects him, her attitude almost seems mocking at times, but Koichi seems either completely oblivious to it or entirely uncaring

Yukako is then given a bit of a crisis. How this girl is treating Koichi feels so wrong, but she genuinely isn't able to tell if these feelings are lingering jealousy or Hey Something Is Actually Wrong Here, and she really doesn't want to risk it being the latter because that will just hurt Koichi even more. Following Koichi around to gather evidence is exactly what she's trying to avoid doing, but she also doesn't know any other way

so after a lot of mulling and debating and trying to figure out what the hell is happening, she ends up going to Josuke and Okuyasu

and while at first they're on edge and suspicious...... they can't deny they've noticed what she has as well. Have noticed it for a while, but they haven't been able to do much. They think Koichi's acting weird, but the girl isn't a Stand User (they've tested it a few times already) and they're really not sure how to go about this. They don't trust her, not by a long shot and they're honestly not completely sure she isn't going to stab them in the back when it's over, but they're willing to work with her on this for Koichi's sake

Yukako's honestly fine with their suspicion, she's just happy she wasn't making things up like she feared

so they set up a trap of sorts. Yukako's going to confront the girl (without violence, just verbally) alone about this under the guise she's still in love with him while Josuke and Okuyasu hide nearby to eavesdrop

So they do! And this was exactly what the girl was waiting for. She tears into Yukako, insulting her, pointing out how Koichi was nervous around her, maybe bringing in her home life (which I headcanon to be Nonexistent At Best), and really just pointing out every single one of Yukako's insecurities and throwing it in her face. Josuke and Okuyasu feel...... really awkward for that part of the conversation, but then Yukako finally manages to steer it to the whole reason why they were here

Yukako points out how the girl clearly didn't love Koichi, hell she didn't even seem to like him, so why was she keeping him around?

And the girl just flat out admits to what she's doing. How she couldn't care less about Koichi, how seeing him trip over himself to try and get her to like him is hilarious, how the whole reason she's doing this is to hurt Yukako, and how despite the fact she's said everything she wouldn't be able to do a thing about it because Koichi's wrapped around her finger and no one would ever believe her :)

so she leaves Yukako slightly shell shocked in the middle of the room with a VERY murderous Josuke and Okuyasu, all still reeling at what this girl just said

so now they're a bit stuck. None of them had the foresight to record the conversation because they didn't think she'd spill everything like that, and if Josuke and Okuyasu hadn't been able to convince Koichi before, Yukako joining the mix wasn't going to make it much better. The two boys were honestly surprised there weren't any Stand Shenanigans going on. They knew she wasn't a User, but it was still wild that this was all happening naturally

.......and it's with that comment things finally click with Yukako. She recalls the Stand User beautician she had visited all those weeks ago, how Koichi's behavior is almost exactly like what it had been during that half hour, how this girl would've had access to Aya's services, and everything falls into place

the three of them BOOK IT over to Aya's and prepare for a fight...... only they don't get one. Aya's naturally really confused about what's happening and asks, but when she learns the situation?

oh yeah, she's P I S S E D

after all, Aya does genuinely want people to find love. She wants to be their fairy godmother making their wishes for love come true, wants to give them a happy ending as long as they're willing to put the time and effort into making it happen. So learning this girl was using it for revenge? That she was toying with Koichi's feelings to get back at someone else? Yeah she's ready to go fucking ballistic

she cancels Cinderella's ability on the girl immediately and they all run back to the school to see if it worked, and it did :D....... but both parties noticed immediately and are now having a rather loud argument because Koichi's understandably freaking the fuck out because his mind was being messed with and the girl is pissed that Koichi's finally realized what's going on. For a second things looked like they might escalate even further, but the gang steps in, call her out on her bullshit (maybe the girl tries pinning some of it on Yukako but they shut that down quick), and take Koichi home. Aya explains to Koichi about her Stand and profusely apologizes for her unknowing role in all this, and tells the kids they're welcome any time

and they finally just. Have a moment of calm to take a breather. They all start walking home with the three explaining everything Aya didn't to Koichi and making plans for the next day to make sure the girl didn't try anything else

and..... I'll admit, I'm not too sure how, but eventually, Koichi and Yukako are going to be left alone, and the following dialog is said:

“W-wait…… look, I won’t lie…. what you did before wasn’t okay. You hurt me, and I was scared. But….. but you have changed. You’ve grown, and you listened to what I told you. You saved me because it was the right thing, not because you wanted me to give you anything or because you wanted anything and….. thank you.

I…. Before, at the cafe when you confessed to me….. I don’t hate you, and I don’t think you’re ugly. Actually, I think you’re very beautiful. You just…. caught me off guard. The last thing I was expecting was a love confession. I didn’t know how to respond, and suddenly you were yelling and I-"

*a deep breath and a moment of silence*

"....I don’t know if I’ll ever love you like that, and I'm sorry. But.... maybe we could try to be friends?"

and after everything that had happened throughout the last few weeks. After learning more about herself. After learning about how..... nice it could be to have friends who you could trust to look out for you

Yukako accepts with a few tears and a soft, happy smile

(also, if in retaliation for using her Stand in such a way Aya ended up rearranging the girl's face into something much less attractive..... well, no one needs to know it was her :))

[thegrimdog13]

Halloween Day 6! 👠

Jane the killer as Cinderella

Look at her ❤️😌

hope this is good enough ❤️

[descendantofthesparrow]

ROR is not apart of the Part of your world-rewrite universe as that version of the queen never leaves the isle when the barrier is altered.

[wings-of-sapphire]

Hello, loves!

So, people seemed to like my Wish rewrite; and actually, I’ve written rewrites of a bunch of movies before. Well, like four

I was wondering, since Disney’s Snow White comes out next year, would you want to see my adaptation of the story? It won’t be exactly like Disney’s, but it will still have a romance and actual dwarves. Prince Florian still exists, but he’s more present in the story to form a relationship with Snow (and he isn’t like three times her age). Some Princess Bride inspiration, but mainly follows the plot of the original Snow White.

Thanks for participating, darlings~

[princess-ibri]

I'm a huge fan of yours. The brainpower it takes to worldbuild the Everrealm is insane. I have a question, tho. Did you ever do a Canon Descendants post for Cinderella's children? And if you didn't, which fairytale would it be based on?

Thank you so much!

I did! Right here: