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Hi Elli!
I saw that you've started editing on Till Death - congratulations! Do you find that you follow any particular process when editing? Have you come across any lines or sections that made you proud or happy to have written them?
Hello! :)
Uh, except for running around in a circle, screaming and crying.
First, I do a read-through directly after I've finished the last chapter, taking care of all notes I left along the way. (The dress was green, remember there's no glass windows, remove reference to x, should she buy lamp oil?)
If I am aware of any particular quirks that found their way in, I might try to kill them already. This time, I had an ungodly amount of "by the time" and "attempt", on top of normal culprits like again, still, almost, that.
Unfortunately, and don't take that as advice, I already stick it into InDesign at this point, which is a bad idea, 0/10, every further change has to be done there AND in my doc, and can mess up my layout. (I guess it does help to see it in other formats for a read — epub and pdf, but still too early.)
Then I try my best to let it rest for a while, but success is questionable. This time, I could leave me hands off it for almost all of October! :D
I usually don't have beta readers like I did this time, because before, stuff has been posted directly on Tumblr. So now I have a lot more notes to take a look at. (I do have 1-2 people who can crawl around in my google docs almost as soon as it's written, but those are also the same people who get relentlessly spammed during writing, so it's probably harder for them to tell if X makes sense, when I have talked about X to them nonstop for weeks.)
I fix whatever came up in the meantime, and pay closer attention to formatting already, because the last step is gonna be checking for widows and orphans and stuff. Sadly I do not have the attention span to do a whole check for commas etc, at some point I start just reading 😭 oh well.
I will re-read it half a year after I put it up for download and find a dozen more things I know better now and want to fix 🥺 Sometimes I do. Like today with HmW.
As for the second question, if I am fully honest, almost every single part of this WIP is something I am happy about. This is really pure self-indulgence. Every bit of pain, and suffering, and sadness, and fluff, and hope.
I liked this paragraph I came across earlier:
Instead, she reached into the pile of fabric and picked up the bracelet she had made. In the dim firelight, the glass beads looked dull, their colors barely distinguishable from each other, and her plan that had been so clear in the afternoon sun now lacked confidence. She lifted the bracelet, took a deep breath, and hoped that at least this idea of hers was going to work out.
#salad-ask#sarandipitywrites#wip: till death#I mean 'usually' is a strong word#considering Thorns and its process are a hot mess#and everything else except Till Death has been posted on Tumblr before I put it together in a book-shape#so there was a 'post it' step squeezed in somewhere#but the rest was roughly the same#also I should probably look into a better program like atticus but#it works. and I am lazy.
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Not really a gang but- part 2
#might change a lil because I want them all roughly a similar size#and- looking at you Wesker- might be annoying with the rest of them#him and Leon are the same ish size#maybe if I stragically place stars it might work#resident evil#albert wesker#ada wong#carlos oliveira#rebecca chambers#sheva alomar#resident evil fanart#re fanart
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Thought to myself that I haven't given the newer emotions a lot of attention... That MUST change. So here's my (updated) humanized takes on them!
#inside out#inside out 2#inside out embarrassment#inside out anxiety#inside out ennui#inside out envy#embarrassment#anxiety#ennui#envy#gene art#sorry emby's spread is a little weird/cramped#his was the the first i made and i .. wasnt planning on doing the rest#couldn't really edit it much but i still like it a lot :] he's so fun to draw GRR#also i wanted ennui to look a little different than my human fear#since they have roughly the same silhouette... i think shes different enouf. smiles
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Can you do gender fluid bi flags thranduil?
Here he is!!! Back on my indigenous Sindar agenda hehe :D Thank you SO much for this request, I always love drawing him especially for Pride because I get to design the most fabulous outfits. I used the bi flag colors mostly in the crown, and the genderfluid flag colors in his outfit.
I finished this one on stream so if you'd like to watch me color and render it, here it is.
Pride Request Guidelines
#thranduil#pride#pride requests#bisexual#genderfluid#love me a bi thranduil#and genderfluid is also so perfect for him#if you guys are wondering his outfit is mostly based on traditional Nimiipuu dress for both men and women#though I pulled in a few things from the Yakama and Paiute nations as well#I tend to go with those three when thinking about the Sindar bc their inhabited areas on turtle island are similar climates and biological#environments as Greenwood the Great and the rest of Rhovanion#also they all three live in the same area of turtle island roughly and have cultural exchange with each other#and I tend to envision the Sindar not as a uniform group but as more of an umbrella term#for several different nations of indigenous elves#i was so excited to do this bc I haven't drawn him since last year#and my headcannons for him have changed quite a bit since then
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ive been working on a VERY large pjsk event series (If You Know You Know) and i keep circling back to these two card side stories which is just. vbs being idiots. and i keep wondering "why are you still like this? you are college students why are you still like this? (affectionate)"
the idiocy (affectionate) in question:
and if you're wondering what toya's gone through, well. let's just say canon was not As Fun for him.
(if its unclear, vbs is all first years in college.)
bonus: toya and their friends
(theres also a haruminoshihosaki one here, but the context is Too Strong)
#zero songs#project sekai#proseka#pjsk#prsk#project sekai: prismatic stage#prismatic stage#<- the tags for said event series#aoyagi toya#toya aoyagi#aoyagi touya#touya aoyagi#shinonome akito#akito shinonome#shiraishi an#an shiraishi#azusawa kohane#kohane azusawa#vbs#vbs toya#vbs akito#vbs kohane#vbs an#vivid bad squad#i could tag the others but they're only here for like 2 seconds#if you're curious: the first 6 are from akito's ss1 (roughly 1/2 thru prismatic stage)#the 7th is from his ss2 (same as ss1)#and the rest are from toyas ss1 (which is post-canon for prismatic stage)#implied polysquad#its supposed to be really professional but honestly
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We all know about the fuss around Pluto, how many decry its "demotion" to a dwarf planet, and how it's still an honorary planet in the hearts of many, and I totally get it, but I don't think any of you out there are taking it far enough.
What about the rest of the so-called "dwarf" planets, huh? where's their justice? what about Ceres? Haumea? Makemake? Eris? fucking Quaoar?! why have just eight planets when you can have 18?! Why only invite Pluto to the party if you're already gonna expand the guest's list?!
you know what should be "demoted"? fucking Phobos and Deimos, the two "moons" of Mars. these two motherfuckers are proof that the barrier-to-entry for moons is too low. they're barely visible, they don't effect mars in any meaningful way, they aren't even round since they aren't big enough to round themselves under their own gravity, and one of them isn't even in a stable orbit of Mars! Phobos is gonna get ripped apart by mars' gravity in just a few dozen million years!
the concept of a "Dwarf Moon" is too good for them. they should be called, like, sateloids or something. Lunoids at most. fuck em
#all of this is a joke btw#I know why Dwarf Planets are defined separately from the rest of the solar system#but tbf we as a society are sleeping on them hard#if Pluto was discovered after the concept of a dwarf planet was defined#we wouldn't even know it existed#which is a shame because it's a fucking Baller!#you see those close up images we got?!#That Data About It?!#Fucking Sick!#cool and interesting as fuck!#but nobody'd care enough to know if we'd found it after coming up the idea of Dwarf Planets#imagine all the cool & interesting shit out in the Kuiper that'd be common knowledge#if they got the same attention pluto did for being 'The Ninth Planet'!!!!!#also fuck phobos and Deimos#we gotta come up with subcategories for moons fr#bc as it stands right now#a second earth orbiting jupiter#and a mcdonald's-sized boulder orbiting mercury shaped roughly llke mitt romney's dog#would be the same type of celestial object under our classifications#and I feel like there are some SIGNIFICANT DIFFERENCES THERE#like the only thing they'd have in common is orbiting a planet the way a planet orbits a star
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some ideas from an au where maglor just keeps living in britain (/himring?)
especially in the earlier eras he had to put a lot more effort into styling/dyeing his hair to cover his ears & the blueness/Elf Sparkle. he also wore glasses for a while to dim the Treelight Eyes (because even as badly faded as he is, it's still really obvious with how old he is).
#silm#silmarillion#maglor#seventh age stuff#<- adjacent au#weirdly modern maglor feels the closest to maglor-maglor?#but he also looks like a lawyer in a tv show for some reason?#like edwardian maglor's outfit is pretty similar structure wise (high collar/waistcoat/long coat) but the hat & hairstyle really affect it?#but modern maglor has roughly the same silhouette with the jacket and definitely the most freedom with the ear and hairstyle#early 1900s maglor has a sort of beard thing to not look too young but it looks weird on him i think#it probably wouldnt look as out of place if his hair was shorter but he needs to cover his ears somehow#honestly merovingian maglor looks pretty maglor-y the hairstyle is just not blue enough#the front curly bits on baroque maglor are very maglor-y despite being even less blue#...huh i guess maglor is just 80% Hair#the rest is just fancy clothes; sad harp; and depression#baroque maglor did turn out really well though#maybe because maglor-maglor already borrows a lot from the baroque composer style outfit wise? like he is for unknown reasons#the only YT-FoA elf with a waistcoat i think#through all of this he has remained mysteriously wealthy#(probably because he knows where all the treasuries are in himring)
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local man haunts (me) open practise yet again more news at 11
#txt#what an experience#i didnt go alone this time which means shenanigans heightened by 20#and by that i mean we were by the glass drinking mate (that security thankfully let us bring in)#and ___ kept going (lifts mate up to the glass) quieres? to all the players that skated by#and i had to just go STOP THAT#and they went they dont want our mate hmph what do they know about mate and i went. well thats the thing. they dont 😭😭#theres was a bunch of kids next to me which meant a lot players over to our side and ekky trucked over#and knocked the glass w his stick on a driveby and scared the shit out of me I ALMOST DROPPED MY MATE he had this shit eating grin#maffhew also kept doing little toodle-loo waves at the kids behind him it was so cute 😭😭😭#but anyways i think its so funny ___ kept focusing on ekky too and i didnt realise why until they just drop the bombshell of#“they remind me of your brother” and i went “DONT FUCKING SAY THAT WHAT THE FUCK MAN DONT SAY SUCH SACRILEGE”#the rest of the convo was in spanish and i dont know how to like fully convey 🇦🇷 banter in eng but it roughly went#“no he does. he has the same dumb face when he starts shit (because he kept bodily bumping into boqy and forsy)#the same 'was that me? did i do that?' troublemaker face. hes a shit stirrer but never answers to it. hes sleazy in that way.#he has the same beard too dont you see it“#and then i promptly spent the whole time going god he is just like my older brother oh this is a horrifying revelation oh god#anyways they kept saying look at his dumb face look at it just like your brother the whole time in spanish when he crept near#and i had to go SHUT UP PLEASE HE CAN HEAR YOU to which they snorted and went you said its fine if we spoke spanish here theyre not gonna#understand us and i was like OKAY BUT IM SURE 11 YEARS HERE HES GONNA PICK UP#SOMETHING AND WE KEEP CURSING SO FOR MY SAKE CAN YOU SHUT UP#mikksy and schmidty were super playful with eo. tuomo ruutu kept messing w mikksy. and ekky was like a damn bumper car bumpin everyone#maffhew ofc was very dramatic when he couldnt get a goal in against knighter and he did the horse headshake in front of us#and i went “you can tell whos number 19 because hes the most dramatic person on the ice always”#ekky was super vocal i know he wanted to practise against the empty net but aj was practising tipins and he goes#MOVE OUT OF THE WAY. MOVE OUT OF THE WAY. and aj so confused just moves like ???#and ekky notches one in goes over to him and waves his glove at him to move#also dmen + lundy were practising on my side of the ice afterwards (lundy ekky uvis kuli. kuli was practising solo. lundy was feeding ekky#for some slapshots uvis got some passes in with them) and anyways i did not fucking realise swaggy was still out because i was so focused on#the dmen until he shot a puck straight at my face and like man i know its not personal but damn did it feel personal with the lookback
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“Which bat is the most cop like?” If you wised up a bit maybe you’d know to cross the one that doesn’t actively cooperate with law enforcement off the list
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Last day of Hollvania Mall silliness (until WF 1999 releases in December).
There was just one single Mall instance for me to load in during the week. It was pretty much always totally deserted, save for one or three different random players once in a while. (I play on EU servers buuut my irl geographical location - an island - makes it really hard connecting to more in game instances)
Soooooo....I had to get a lil' bit creative with the fun today. >:) And brought Arthur *coughs*guesswhomydrifterisgonnaromance*coughs* aaaaalllllllll the balloons I could find lying around to cheer him up. >u<
#warframe#I spent roughly a whole hour and half in the mall#going back and forth to gather all those balloons#and seeing the (few) players loading in do visible double takes too#I would've happily done the same for the rest of the Hex gang#but you try getting those lil' bouncy things to get NOT stuck somewhere under a table or a chair or in a narrow corner#because they can and they WILL#A LOT
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Every now and then I remember the times I would mention to my flatmate that I was thinking of buying myself something reasonably expensive (that I had been eyeing up for months and had budgeted for) and she'd tell me that I shouldn't spend that much money on something I didn't need and it would be stupid etc etc while she regularly impulse bought things that cost at least as much and she would use once (while complaining that she was under a lot of financial stress and couldn't afford <$3/week for 2 months for a rental washing machine when ours broke). She is... perhaps not my first call for financial advice
#like I get that you're financially stressed but also it feels a bit rich to complain about it when you're on student allowance (not loan)#and your parents still contribute to things for you even though allowance is supposed to be for people whose parents can't afford to help#and you get multiple scholarships a year even though you're technically not eligible for half of them anymore but then as soon as the money#comes in from those you spend it all on a brand new dress for your sister's hen's do picnic because you can't wear the same dress as you#will for the actual hen's night or the wedding. Better buy a full price one at an expensive store instead of looking in a single op shop or#borrowing one from one of your three sisters who are all roughly the same size#god life must be so tough for you getting the same amount of money as the rest of us on student loan except you only have to pay back half#like the only money you have to live off is the same as what the rest of us get + scholarships (plural) plus what you earnt in your summer#internship? how could you possibly survive??#anyway I am NOT a fan of people who are like 'oh you say you have no money for rent but you have a phone?' because that's bullshit#and the whole 'millenials need to stop eating avocado toast so they can buy a house' thing is also bullshit#however. If you pay $60/week for a gym when you have access to the free uni one (or any other gym in the country is like $20)#and you buy uber eats multiple times a week for like $30+ each time despite having a premade meal in the fridge. and you get multiple#scholarships which mean you are arguably among the more well off students. AND you impulse buy things that cost over $100 regularly#then maybe the problem is not that you don't have enough money to split the rental costs of a washing machine (<$3 each/week)#maybe you are just bad with money#which is fine like it's not like it's unfixable it's just annoying when you act like you're worse off than people whose only money is what#they get from student loan each week so they eat beans on rice for dinner for a week#because that's all they could afford (yes I know people who did this. Yes she complained more than them)#so no I don't think I'm gonna be taking financial advice from you babes because one of us has entertained the idea of a budget to help with#finances and it's not you xx#(she turned down offers of financial help/advice/books to borrow from multiple people multiple times. I 100% get that you might not want to#talk to people about it especially your friends but we had multiple books on finances lying around the flat which she always said she didn't#need. And then she'd continue to complain that she didn't have enough money#god forbid you suggest something like going to a cheaper gym (or worse. The perfectly fine free uni gym!)#again. Her gym cost $60/week for most of last year until they brought in a student discount which was 'only' $45/week#the next most expensive gym chain I can find costs maybe $30/week for the highest membership level#to get what she was getting she would only need like a $20 membership#BUT to be fair she wouldn't get such strong culty vibes at any other gym#lol anyway sorry for the rant. I could keep going but apparently you can only have 30 tags and this is the last one
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💭 Since we're here, thoughts from Nillan on the whole party too, and on the vampire gang
Send 💭 for a thought my muse has had about yours
@undyingmedium
"And they did this all themselves, just the five of them..." She walked with a gentle slowness, watching the blood splattered across stone, kneeling to inspect the ruined corpses, and frowning at the horrible experiments that were stopped. The Meat Forge was now devoid of life, inhabited only by the legion of vengeful wraiths that were unleashed upon it. "Good riddance. Quite very impressive though. I would have needed a small army for this, maybe 10 handpicked and involve the troll too. In fact, that might not even had been enough, depending... hmm..."
She took a little chain of praying bones hanging on her waist and looked for an important-looking corpse. "Let's see how they did it, and where the rest you rotten filth are."
(CONTEXT: The "vampire gang" is a young vampire girl and 4 (now only 3) vampire kids that my players befriended and brought into the current city, then the players left for a few months, during which Nillan found them and helped them in the background.)
"They seem free, but Avi won't speak the name of who turned her, and that silence doesn't seem entirely voluntary. It makes no sense to keep her bound unless her master plans to later come back for something... curious..."
#Nillan#My players assaulted and wiped out a cultist base in the forest that focused on creating monsters from people and creature parts#in the end they disabled a seal that prevented the vengeful wraiths of the victims from manifesting#thus the base got overrun by angry murder-ghosts right after they left#they ALSO put Nillan on the closest edge of the city for completely unrelated reasons at roughly the same time without knowing she's a necr#Nillan being a Death Shepherd and hiking for a hobby sensed the now obscenely haunted place in the forest and went to check it out#seeing that the place was a good base with a legion of angry wraiths already protecting it and full of fresh dead to be raised#she moved in with the rest of her undead and started hunting the remaining cultists in the area#because she saw the horrible things they did and yeah fuck those guys#THEN my players informed her that they also called essentially the inquisition on the place and they are coming in probably X days#So now that Nillan essentially gathered an army in a fortified base she has to flee the region asap and hope the inquisition won't track he#she didn't even plan on building an army and now my players made her a genuine threat with 90% indirect actions#Being a GM is fun
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on the one hand, i think it's kinda cool that i literally created an entire new tag on ao3. a character tag. that's a rare achievement or at least i'd like to think so.
on the other hand, I WANT MORE OF THIS CHARACTER AND THERE IS NOT. A SINGLE. THING OUT THERE. except mine.
#well that means i can do literally whatever i want BUT STILL#on the bright side tho that fic is going very well#its been what. a week? and im halfway through#and i know roughly what the rest will look like#and then two more fics in the same series :D#i am so normal about this#anyway. who cares. that is my character now and he needs content so GUESS WHAT#a biscuit's rambles#this is about jean dewolfe if it wasnt obvious already lmao
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its been like 6 years and im still not sure if the yuri on ice guys were gay for real or not
#txt#i mean i think there was a kiss. but it might have been just a hug. and they also exchanged rings too but. huh. what was up w that#my reaction to tg going 'canon' would be roughly the same i think i would spend the rest of my life confused abt it
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...I hate the limitations of the human experience sometimes
#hetalks#theytalk#Most likely the last time I talk tonight.. but#The idea that we need to sleep? That we need to rest any part of ourselves? It's tiring (no pun intended)#Beyond that.. that any part of our body needs rest at all? It's exhausting (again.. no puns). It's frustrating that we even need to rest#Makes me wish it just weren't a limit of keeping our form in roughly the same shape
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“𝐉𝐄𝐀𝐋𝐎𝐔𝐒𝐘 𝐉𝐄𝐀𝐋𝐎𝐔𝐒𝐋𝐘”.. 𝐖𝐈𝐓𝐇 𝐀 𝐒𝐈𝐃𝐄 𝐎𝐅 𝐂𝐑𝐄𝐀𝐌 𝐏𝐈𝐄 𐙚˙⋆.˚ ᡣ𐭩
—gojo finds out that you’re baking a pie for some stupid co worker of yours, shows you that he’s the only one deserving
pairing: gojo x fem! reader
content: smut, tit slapping, pussy slapping, degradation, hair pulling, belly bulge, breeding, finger sucking, spit swallowing, mean teasing
When Gojo strolled into the kitchen to find you baking one of your signature cream filled pies he hummed. Pressing up against you with his arms around your waist while placing soft kisses to your neck.
“That smells delicious baby, who’s it for?” He had seen the text from your coworker asking you to bake one for him.
“Oh thanks baby! It’s just for some coworker at work. Been begging me for one of my pies for a while now.” You shrugged. “Hmm.. and would that co worker happen to be the same one who’s been flirting with you for ages?” He whispered when his lips reached your ear, hot breath fanning against your skin as you swallowed hard.
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“Don’t fucking run from it baby, take it all like a good girl.” Gojo growled out, a grin spread across his face as his cock drilled meanly into your cunt. His hand in your hair yanking your head back to look up at him. Blue eyes seemingly darker when he groaned.
“My little slut’s so fucking pretty.” Grinding hard against your ass, a loud mewl escaping your lips when his tip grazed roughly into your gummy spot. “You feel that?” He rolled his hips again, his eyes never leaving yours as his hand pressed against the bottom of your stomach. “Feel me deep in you baby?”
You let out a shaky cry, your body being jerked back and forth with each of the man’s harsh thrusts. His hand pointing out the bulge of his tip against your skin. “Nngh— Satoru.”
“Open that pretty little mouth for me.” Gojo breathed, your back arching deeply as you sniffled. Doing as told and opening your mouth with a whimper, allowing Gojo’s spit to fall onto your tongue with a hum. Two of his slender fingers finding their way into your mouth, resting on the back of your tongue before he was lightly thrusting them down your throat.
“That’s it. That’s the good slut i know.” he smirked, your lips enclosing around the digits as your eyes closed with the shiver of your body.
Your loud moans were muffled as Gojo bullied his fat cock deep into your tightness. Eyes pooling with tears as your stomach burned with heat. Gojo’s hand finding its way to grope at your tits, pinching at your hard nipples making you let out a choked whine.
You yelped when your boyfriend’s large hand landed softly on your breast, mewling messily around his fingers when it landed harder on the other one. Your body trembled as Gojo’s finger trailed down your stomach, stopping at your clit to rub on the sensitive nub. Pulling out a string of moans followed by a cry when he slapped down at your clit.
“Gonna show you a real cream pie baby. Gonna stuff that pussy full of me.” Gojo grunted, one hand remaining on clit while he removed the one in your mouth with a string of salvia still attached. Using it to knead the flesh of your ass, red from the constant slamming of his hips onto it.
“S-satoruu, you’re so mean— ahh,” you mewled when you felt a harsh smack stinging through your skin. Your boyfriend’s hand reaching to your neck as he pulled you close, increasing the speed of his thrusts with a chuckle.
“Hmm, am i? Could’ve decided to leave this pussy wet and needy if i wanted to.” Pressing his chest flush against your back, his breath hot on your ear. “Could’ve left you to go bring you that stupid pie to that stupid boy, baby.” He scoffed in faux offense. “I’m hurt, i’d say i’m quite nice don’t ya think?”
You could only whimper as you felt yourself getting close, pussy clenching around Gojo’s cock when his grip on your neck tightened.
“O-oh, Satoru— ‘m close,” you cried, your eyes rolling back and your legs shaking.
“Thought i was mean huh? Why’re you coming on a mean man’s cock?” he teased, his finger’s movements on your clit speeding up to drive you over the edge.
Cumming hard with the scream of his name, your sopping pussy gushing onto his cock. Gojo groaned deeply, his thrusts noisy as heavy balls slapped against your folds. Basking in the feeling of your perfect pussy before he was bottoming out in you.
“Gonna stuff this pussy nice ‘n full with my cum.” His movements stilling as he pumped ropes after ropes onto your walls. Painting them from red to white with a smile. “Look at that, greedy pussy’s swallowing it all.” Pulling out of you ever so slowly and watching as his cum spilled in tiny spurts as your hole spasmed.
You let out a breath, allowing your body to fall limp into the sheets as you panted. You should have seen that coming.
#jjk smut#jjk x reader#jujutsu kaisen#jujutsu kaisen smut#jjk x reader smut#jjk gojo#jjk#jujutsu kaisen x reader smut#gojo x reader smut#gojo smut#jujutsu gojo#gojo satoru x reader smut#gojo satoru smut#gojo x reader#gojo satoru x reader#gojo satoru#gojo x you
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