Can u do the scene with eden finding out about grace. Thank u and I am in love with ur writing, I've read Dark twisted fantasy about 3 times already and will read for a 4th time, I love how u write the black women in ur stories, how u show their emotions and how u portray them. ♥️♥️
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BETRAYED
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1919
“What is it? What’s wrong you had everythin’ fuckin’ planned.” Eden stressed, after being told they had been betrayed.
Ada had left the room, with baby Karl and an anxious Inara in tow, whilst Eden and Tommy stayed. The Dawkins woman watched as he paced, gulping and tugging at the roots of his hair, wanting to say something but couldn’t spit it out.
Black Star Day was their day. It was planned, everything was going according to plan, and Tommy said so. Prayers had been said, drinks had been poured, and Eden and her newfound friend Grace even chatted, buzzing about it all.
But it went to hell when Jeremiah informed Arthur that Billy Kimber was spotted, with an army full of fuckers rallying behind him. There was no God in Small Heath. With every War that ended, another started up.
“It was Grace,” Tommy finally blurted.
Eden froze, face full of confusion, “What was Grace?”
“We’ve been fuckin’ betrayed.”
Tommy had been so stuck on the why, he didn’t focus on the how, how the Irish Barmaid they befriended so quickly could accomplish all of this in such a small frame.
“No,” Eden, of course refused to believe it.
And just like that, she began to pace and he watched, observed with a pained expression as she struggled to come to terms with the truth.
“Eden,” Tommy exclaimed.
“No, she’s our friend remember,” Eden gesticulated. “She was in the Garrison, fuckin’ seconds ago, pouring pints, celebrating with us all.”
Tommy breathed out, more steadier than before, “She gave us away.”
His voice was calm but he was anything but. He had to keep it together, for her. For his Edie, who was on the verge of spiralling.
Eden gulped as her heels slammed against the floorboards, creaking and cracking.
“You said we could trust her,” she whispered, but he heard.
It was like shrapnel to his chest.
You were wrong Tom, was what she meant. You didn’t think.
“I know,” Tommy nodded, standing still, silently raging.
She turned to him, gritted her teeth, “You said we could trust her Thomas.”
He shut his eyes, “Don’t you think I don't fuckin’ know that.”
“You said we could fuckin’ trust her!”
Eden wrung out her numb hands as she choked back a sob. All that happened, all that has been going wrong since that fucking inspector came to their city, their town of Small Heath. She felt the work of a wretched soul at play but she didn’t expect to think it would come from such a nice girl like Grace.
Huh…
Nice, she certainly pulled the wool over their fucking eyes.
Eden had just felt so lonely, Tommy had returned home from the war and her best friends were either dead or in London. She needed someone other than her husband to speak to, preferably anyone without the last name Shelby. And there Grace was, singing her way into the Garrison with her soft and trusting voice.
Oh, how they were wrong.
Eden’s face scrunched up as Tommy’s eyes quickly opened having heard her shuddering breaths.
You said we could fuckin’ trust her. Tommy had his suspicions. He knew the barmaid lied about where she came from and why she moved. He didn’t trust her at first but his wife did. He too, missed the comfort of a friend. Freddie wasn’t one anymore, not after the war, they were on two different paths, racing like trains that wouldn’t come to a halt at any time soon. His other good friend was dead and had been for years. The war took more from him than he thought and his little ‘Nara was the light of his life, his Edie was his heart. But Grace… she was something new, something calm that settled both him and his wife. An outsider, a new friend.
Oh, how she played them for a fool.
“She’s the reason why ‘Nara was almost taken,” Eden’s glossy eyes darted to him, as he stood there in shock. “That fuckin’ inspector tried clawing our daughter out of our hands. For dirty dealin’ Moss said. He got the fuckin’ social on us, claimed that we were a pack of animals.” Eden remembered it all like it was just yesterday. “But they — they trashed our houses, turned it all into a tip, framin’ us like we did it all and they tried… oh Tom they scared us good they did. They scared our little girl even more.”
Tommy’s jaw clenched, recalling the day, hearing his daughter’s screeches and his wife’s wails… Christ, they were louder than the shovels against the wall. Pat. Pat. Pat. He almost wasn't there to stop it. They claimed that Eden was too erratic, too primitive to look after a child like theirs. Daddy! Inara’s shaken voice will always stay with them.
Being dragged and kicked back to that day, neither parent saw or heard Polly enter the room, full of grief and torment.
The Shelby Matriarch's stomach dropped once more, it scarred her brain just like it did when her children were taken from her.
Eden rasped, “I need to see her.”
“No, no you won’t.” Polly shook her head, “I'll deal with Grace. If either one of you set eyes on her again, you might kill her.”
Eden hung onto that blissful thought.
When Polly left, Tommy turned to his wife, sighing when she gripped her Black Madonna.
“I thought we could trust her,” Eden wanted to cry.
She wanted to scream, stab, shoot, fuck anything.
“I know love. I know,” Tommy slowly nodded.
The two exchanged a dark look, one that read, that they’ll talk later.
“Tommy?”
“Yeah.”
“Please be safe.”
And with that Tommy raced out of the house, needing to end this all one and for all.
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a/n:
If I ever wrote the canon plot, Tommy wouldn’t cheat on Eden, but because of who he is he would do other things to fuck up their relationship.
In this though both trusted Grace as a friend because of how they lost friends in my headcanon
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Headcannons!
Nico does gymnastics- he's super flexible.
Will is the complete opposite-stiff as wood but strong.
Jason (who is definitely not dead) loves teamwork games- football (soccer for the americans) basketball, rugby, volleyball, cricket, etc.
Sally and Paul legally adopt Jason and Thalia, and Jason stays in Percy's room when he goes to college.
Annabeth used to read Artemis Fowl and got a lot of tricks from the books.
Nico likes to play DnD, and is always pestering Hades to play with him.
Nico learns how to braid afro hair for Hazel, and does cute braids for her whenever she visits camp.
Leo and Calypso break up and part as friends (manifesting for a future book)
Jason and Leo get together (more manifesting)
Rachel is pan or ace.
Nico and Rachel are beasties, and he goes over to her house to listen to Olivia Rodrigo and MGK
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leo deserved better. he deserved so, so much BETTER. i mean, he fucking sacrificed his LIFE to save the world, and yes, even though he was always meant to come back, there was always that lingering chance the plan WOULDN'T work out.
but what did he get when he finally made his way back home? hugs? maybe a huge welcome home party? NO. instead, everyone got into a fucking LINE and proceeded to hit him, WITH FULL FORCE, immediately upon his arrival back home.
and then there's the issue with calypso. i just HATED the way she treated him in the dark prophecy. like, he was the only dude who BOTHERED to come back for her. he gave her the chance for a new life. but instead, she COMPLAINS about how leo "treats every problem like a machine" when he's working SO hard to fix things.
then later, at the end of the series, we find calypso has become counsellor for a band camp pretty far away, and we learn that part of the reason was "so she could take some time away from him". i mean, what the hell is up with THAT?!
leo's done so many amazing things for so many people, but just how many times do you hear him praised? like honestly, he deserves someone who loves him unconditionally, someone who showers him with love, someone who can fill up the gaps his mother's death left in him. and that someone is NOT calypso.
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I just finished ToA last night and here are some things I don't see nearly enough people talking about, specifically about the end of ToA so if you haven't read it this is your spoiler warning!!!
• Apollo not feeling right in his godly form and uncomfortable around the other olympians (not including Artemis)
• LEO CALLING JO "MOM" 🥺 (and Emmie and Jo in general) BUT HE HAS TWO MOMS NOW I LITERALLY STARTED CRYING ABOUT THIS LAST NIGHT
• Apollo visiting Percy and Annabeth in New Rome!!!
• AND they talk about Jason!!!!!! Annabeth cried herself to sleep
• honestly Apollo's whole battle with Python that shit was so cool
• obligatory fuck Calypso
• REYNA CALLING LEO "HERMANO" 🥹
• Meg standing up to Nero in his throne room!!! I LOVE HER SO MUCH
• Rick's infallible ability to put EVERY. SINGLE. FUCKING. CHARACTER. in a relationship 💀 PEACHES HAS A LOVE INTEREST NOW???????? LET CHARACTERS BE SINGLEEEEE
• HAZEL'S CURSE IS GONE AND SHE CAN JUST LIKE USE HER JEWELS NOW!!! and Frank wants an engraved diamond necklace that says "H+F Forever" I love him so much...
• while we're on the topic of Frank!! WHY DOES NO ONE EVER TALK ABOUT HIS SACRIFICE AT THE END OF THE TYRANTS TOMB??? Like I knew that he would be fine but I still started like tearing up
• THE ARROW OF DODONA!!!
• how completely unaffected Zeus is by Jason's death??? Fuck you Zeus.
• Apollo's new kids at camp!!!
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