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Elwing's goodbye, for @nolofinweanweek filling both prompts for Day 4 and for Day 5 (Elwing, Elrond, Elros). Double posting today because I'm working the rest of the weekend and I don't think I'll get around any more prompts this year.
This hurt to paint lol. I need to go lie on a cold floor for a while.
#nolofinweanweek#nolofinweanweek2023#listen i know she left them in a cave or whatever but i made up my hc for sirion wayyyyy before i read that piece of info#and it has stuck with me#in my head Elwing hid them like in a closet or something#there wasn't that kind of prep to leave them outside of the city or somewhere more secluded#and she just told them to wait for her#and then mae and mags found them while searching the house for... whatever#blind oath rage and all that y'know they weren't thinking straight#but i think she was hoping that if she jumped off that cliff they'd jump off after her and drown#and then it would finally be over and Elrond and Elros wouldn't have to deal with this shit#haha...well...#anyway#elrond#elros#elwing#sack of sirion#my art
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Imagine for meâŠ
Itâs a cold, winter night early in the twinsâ time with Maglor and Maedhros at Amon Ereb
They try to escape in the middle of the night, taking what they can with them
Maglor and Maedhros wake up to the twins missing, and a blizzard blowing in
Maedhros is the first one on the track, his fur cloak on his shoulders as he searches, a different set of twins on his mind, ones with snow-white hair that were only a little younger than Elrond and Elros, ones that he never found
Maybe he calls the wrong names once or twice
The twins are eventually found, red-faced and shivering up a storm
Maedhros has them wrapped in cloaks and in his arms under his own cloak, so very relieved as they walk back
Nobody will ever say whether he was crying or not
The twins catch a cold after this stunt, and Maedhros just huffs a laugh, relieved that theyâre alive to have to worry about a cold, more than willing to look after his little peredhil
Only Maglor sees him later as he collapses against the wall, silent tears he doesnât bother wiping away
#maedhros#maitimo#nelyafinwe#nelyo#maglor#makalaure#kanafinwe#elrond#elrond peredhel#elros#elros tar minyatur#elrond & elros#kidnap fam#kidnap dads#elurĂn#elurĂ©d#elurĂn & elurĂ©d#sack of doriath#sack of sirion
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Elrond Week Day 2 - Grief and Growth
Elros could hear nothing but the blood roaring in his ears and his own panicked breaths as he stuffed himself deeper inside the craggy rock hollow he and Elrond had always used as a hiding place during play. They were not playing anymore. Elros had followed his nannethâs instructions and ran for the woods as soon as he was out the window.
He had lingered there on the forestâs edge, waiting for nearly a minute, but his mother had not come out of the house. Nor had Elrond.
He tried to quiet his breathing lest someone come across his hiding place and discover him and did his best to quell his tears. Nanneth and Elrond were almost certainly killed, Ada was away at sea, and Elros was entirely alone. No one to protect him, no one to pull him out of the spiral he had fallen into.
Just as he was about to lose the battle with his tears, he heard a scuffling outside of the hollow. His heart skipped a beat and he clamped a hand over his mouth to stop his squeak of fear from escaping, but as he listened more closely, the scuffling sounded⊠strange. Unsteady, lightfooted, not accompanied by any clank of armor or weapons.
Elros chanced a glance out of his hiding spot only to see Elrond! He called to him in a harsh whisper, beckoning him towards the hollow. As soon as he was within reach, Elros pulled him inside and pushed the both of them as deep in as they could go, so that they could only be seen from above.
âWhat happened?â he asked in a soft whisper. âWhere is Nana?â
Elrond didnât react, staring directly at him with wide eyes and uneven pupils, not registering a thing in front of his face. A cursory glance revealed the probable cause of his brotherâs condition: a massive bruise blooming in the middle of his forehead to complement his still sluggishly bleeding nose. That wasnât good. If Elrond was hurt so obviously, he could be hurt elsewhere. But if he could not speak, he couldnât tell Elros where and how he was hurt.
Gently, Elros took Elrondâs hand and pushed his sleeve up, checking for injuries like Nana had taught them. As he searched, he spoke to Elrond, trying to get some kind of response from him. âWeâll be alright. We are outside of the village and away from the kinslayers where they cannot find us.â
No response. Elros tried a different tactic. âWhat⊠is your favorite plant today? I know that changes all the time. Is it something edible? Something pretty? Something⊠venomous?â
Still nothing. The damage was clearly far beyond anything Elros could treat if Elrond would not even correct his simple mistake of poisonous vs. venomous. He needed a healer
Elros kept up a constant stream of quiet chatter as he finished checking Elrond for wounds and made plans for how to get him to a healer. They would sneak out of the hollow at nightfall - surely the kinslayers would be gone by then - and find other survivors. But what if there were no other survivors? Elros immediately pushed the thought away- it was unhelpful and, if it were true, they were doomed.
All of a sudden, a shadow fell over them. Elros fell silent immediately, praying it was just a cloud or some large bird.
His prayer went unheard.
Above him loomed a monstrous figure, stained with blood and impossibly tall, staring hardly down at him. Elros hit, kicked, and bit as he was dragged out by the scruff of his neck and handed off to another kinslayer, but was unable to do any real damage.
He took no notice as he was handed to yet another murderer, this one on a horse, and taken to the nearby FĂ«anorian camp. He took no notice of his home burning behind him. He took no notice of the dark-haired FĂ«anorianâs calls for a healer.
He did take notice when Elrond began to scream as if stabbed when they passed a stretcher bearing a redheaded corpse.
What would become of them?
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I also wrote what happened to Elrond (this is technically chapter 2) but it was a little gory for this challenge week. If you want to read it though, you can find it here.
@elrondweek
#silmarillion#fanfiction#elrondweek#elros tar minyatur#elrond#concussion#whump#sack of sirion#third kinslaying#elros is trying to be a good protective brother#but he's 6
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a wip from my maeglin of sirion au, where he survives and is a lord of sirion. this is him when sirion is sacked, at least his mental process. who can be calm when a ten foot red headed elf comes in swinging his sword
but dont get me wrong maeglin puts up a fight, he is a skilled warrior!
yeah he doesn't make it this time but he's not upset about that.
#lemme tell you - in my aus sirion is a political disaster#everyone hates each other -survivors of doriath having to live with kinslayers#elwing and idril & earendil do nawt liek each other#coming the sacking of sirion it's a shit fire#i need to expand on my world building for sirion because it's actually hell to live there#maeglin also has visions of the sacking of sirion but because of the tension no one really listens to him#and he also is the attempt peace keeper#which he gets told to just shut up quite often#idril and elwing's feuds are something#and maeglin has to play peace maker to each of them but not to much#anyway he dies in the sacking#which he isn't to sad about because it's just been a bit too much for him#maeglin#the silmarillion#silm art
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do you think tolkien was "evil cackling" writer while working on the narn or do you think he was "staring at the wall rethinking everything" writer while working on the narn
#sometimes i feel what's called âa kinship of writersâ towards tolkien when i remember he worked on his work all his life#how many different aus so you think he had. how many detailed scenes#what to us is 'sack of sirion' to him was probably an insanely detailed battle with so much pain stored into it#how many secondary unimportant characters lived in his brain?#idk sometimes i just remember people who woere writing books were *writers* and i think ohhh buddy i get you
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And I donât think Elwing deciding to let Elrond and Elros die, considering she made that choice for herself too, was a bad thing. She was ambitions and stern in what she wanted, and she wanted control of her and her childrenâs lives.Â
She and her family didnât have that since Doriath (even prior to that, think of Luthien and Thingol).Â
Elrond and Elros were extensions of their mother, and the choice to let them die may have been her way of controlling what she couldnât. She could have sent them to Lindon, but what would they have learned about the Feanorians, how close in proximity would they be to Celebrimbor.Â
Elwing lives in a world where the Feanorians are still Noldorian nobility, where they have supporters and family members in most existing elven kingdoms. What would her children learn of her and her people if she sent them away?Â
Perhaps she thought death was a better choice for them than being sent with their oppressors or people who spoke highly of them.Â
And despite being saved, Elwing did intend to die and take the Silmaril with her. It might have been extreme, but it may have been an act of resistance.
It doesnât make it right, especially in terms of how it traumatized Elrond and Elros, and how their choice was taken from them, but it does explain it. And how Elrond and Elros had relatives living who would have taken good care of them (Gil-Galad). But itâs also easy to understand how angry Elwing was, and how this impacted her choices.Â
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Here grass is still growing, And leaves are yet swinging
@imladrisweek : day four
Okay, so headcanon time again. (Idea taken from one of my mutuals who always has good takes) here's Erestor, originally a Sindar elf from Doriath and student of Daeron. I think after the fall of Doriath he accompanies Elwing and settles in Sirion and stays there until the third kinslaying. After the sack of Sirion he moves on to Lindon and eventually follows Elrond and ends up in Rivendell.
I figure he probably met Glorfindel in Lindon and they were both part of the initial group Elrond founded Imladris with. I like the idea that he always had some attachment to the Doriath royal house (I know at one point Tolkien played with the idea of him being a kinsman of Elrond). He was probably overjoyed when Elrond and Elros showed up alive. He and everyone else who survived Sirion probably assumed they were dead after what happened to ElurĂ©d and ElurĂn ( and most of Thingol's direct descendants).
Anyway, I think he and Glorfindel were definitely drawn to Elrond because here is the legacy of the best of Sindar and Noldor, the heir of Thingol, of Turgon, of EĂ€rendil and Elwing. I think they bond over that and their respective love and loss.
You decide what their relationship is, I'm not the boss of you
(This outfit/ styling is I think more of how Glorfindel dresses in the Second and Third Age, a little more laid back. He's tired, he already died once)
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Who knows now the counsels of Morgoth? Who can measure the reach of his thought, who had been Melkor, mighty among the Ainur of the Great Song, and sat now, a dark lord upon a dark throne in the North, weighing in his malice all the tidings that came to him, and perceiving more of the deeds and purposes of his enemies than even the wisest of them feared, save only Melian the Queen? To her often the thought of Morgoth reached out, and there was foiled.
hm i think i tend to see lots of characterization of melkor as a destroyer first and foremost who's good for nothing other than raw power and breaking things left and right, but that's really a severe disservice to him imo. in the silm here it is stated point-blank that he can be good at reading his enemies. he's good at predicting the ways that they think, and he's good at using that to his advantage. and it's not just a case of show-don't-tell either, because he has pulled off manipulation and deception spectacularly before. before the darkening, he's able to fool most of the valar into trusting the sincerity of his repentance, enough so that he's clearly given, if not free roam, something pretty close to it, in valinor. he successfully makes feanor distrust the valar and does it so well that even after feanor realizes how malicious he really is, he's still believing and repeating the lies melkor told him in the past. and it's not just feanor either -- melkor spreads his propaganda against the valar to other elves, and he does it with enough tact and finesse that nobody traces it back to him until it's much too late. i do think that his subtlety and people skills degenerated quite a bit over time throughout the first age, but he still knows very well how to read people. on top of the excerpt from above, wherein he is stated to be thoroughly aware of his enemies' actions and motivations, this passage comes to mind:
But Morgoth thought that his triumph was fulfilled, recking little of the sons of FĂ«anor, and of their oath, which had harmed him never and turned always to his mightiest aid; and in his black thought he laughed, regretting not the one Silmaril that he had lost, for by it as he deemed the last shred of the people of the Eldar should vanish from Middle-earth and trouble it no more. If he knew of the dwelling by the waters of Sirion, he gave no sign, biding his time, and waiting upon the working of oath and lie.
he knows the sons of feanor will attack sirion. he knows they will once again cave to their oath and commit more violence against other elves, despite having come to beleriand as his enemies. this is right after the fall of gondolin -- almost thirty years before the third kinslaying occurs -- and he's already aware of what the sons of feanor will choose to do when even they themselves likely aren't sure. it's an impressive display of astuteness and insight and i don't think it gets discussed in the specific context of what it means for melkor's character. yes, he is deeply arrogant, self-centered, and spiteful, and that blindsides him a lot of the time. (look no further than the lay of leithian, where he massively underestimates luthien.) but he can also be extremely shrewd when he wants to be.
also! i like the fact that he is explicitly noted to have laughed at the notion of the feanorians attacking other elves. they've already caused the fall of doriath, and now he's correctly predicted that they'll sack sirion in the future. melkor has a sense of humor, people! a very dark sense of humor that probably always comes at others' expense, but it is a sense of humor. and it's a good one at that, because the feanorians' actions are deeply ironic. i can't blame him for giggling tbh, i would too.
another thing i find significant is that melkor does not regret losing the silmaril to luthien because he knows it will ultimately lead to another kinslaying. he of course miscalculates in thinking that that will spell the irreversible end for the eldar in beleriand, and he couldn't have known that earendil would actually try to sail to aman to plead for the valar's help, nor could he have known that elwing would bring the silmaril to vingilot and enable the success of earendil's voyage. but in my experience at least, melkor is perceived and portrayed as somewhat silmaril-obsessed, and he's really... not? he's capable of being outright fine about losing one since its loss contributes to his overall aims. imo, he's actually quite rational about the whole thing. he cares more about the usefulness of the situation -- and the black humor in it -- than he cares about the silmaril. and compared to what i've seen him get credit for, he has several instances across the silm where he's pretty smart.
p.s. the last sentence on that first passage is funny as hell to me. "often the thought of morgoth reached out" to melian, "and there was foiled." melkor stretching telepathically out across beleriand like "psst hey melian--" only to be stonewalled every time with
#she really said he is never passing the vibe check huh#melkor#morgoth#fall of gondolin#fëanor#sons of feanor#sons of fëanor#melian#melian the maia#tolkien tag#tolkien meta#the silmarillion#lotr#jrr tolkien#the lay of leithian#beren and luthien#lord of the rings#the fall of gondolin#tolkien
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Elrond Week Prompts
Hello everyone! Here are the official prompts for the upcoming event Elrond Week (July 10th-16th)
Day 1: Childhood and Peace - Sirion, Family, Lifestyle, Elros, Elwing and Earendil
Day 2: Grief and Growth -Sack of Sirion, Maglor and Maedhros, Abandonment, Forgiveness
Day 3: Mortality and Immortality -Lindon, The Choice, Learning, Separation from Elros
Day 4: War and Leadership -Sauron, The Rings of Power, Leadership, Battle, Establishing Imladris
Day 5: Family and Love -Marriage, Fatherhood, Celebrian, Elladan and Elrohir, Arwen, Rivendell
Day 6: Darkness and Loss -Siege of Imladris, The Necromancer, Losing Celebrian
Day 7: Sanctuary and Departure -Third Age, The Hobbit, The One Ring, Legacy, The Undying Lands
Bonus Prompts: -Relations with Men vs Elves -Artifacts -Healing -Home
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Legolas and the twins âhelpingâ little Aragorn prepare for his history test
Aragorn : Valar, it's morning already! What am I going to do?
Elrohir: Well, maybe we could start with calming down.
Aragorn: Calm down? Iâm still on the Sack of Sirion! We haven't so much looked at the War of Wrath
Legolas: You've got the gist. There was a war, people were mad
Aragorn: Well, I still can't remember which Aduanic ruler names match up with which Quenya ones
Elladan (getting stressed): And whose fault's that? If your lot had just stuck to one naming system itâd be a lot less to remember!
#silmarillion#lord of the rings#incorrect tolkien quotes#estel#aragorn#legolas#elladan#elrohir#imladris
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Even more in the older kidnap fam fic
At Amon Ereb, accommodations for the twins do get marginally more comfortable.
It is, after all, a proper fortress complete with prison cells. All the Feanorian fortresses have them; for criminals, or captured orcs they want to interrogate, or for the rare occasions the sons of Feanor were aware they needed to be stopped.
The cells have solid stone walls and floor, with metal gratings for doors, so the prisoners can't escape by setting a fire or digging.
Some of the cells are missing doors, where the metal bars were taken down and reforged into armor or weapons, but there are still several in good shape.
And the Feanorians are putting both princes in one cell, anyway. It will be easier to guard one place than two.
Elrond and Elros are very agreeable to sharing a cell, rather than being put at opposite ends of the dungeon, with who knows how many days or weeks before they see each other again. And it's not like they'd have actual privacy with their own cells, there's going to be a guard outside constantly.
They are marched down by a half dozen guards, with their arms tied. Once Elros is untied, he has to stand his facing the wall opposite the door before the guards will bring Elrond forward and untie him.
Elros kind of wants to laugh at how intimidating he and his twin apparently are, to warrant this hassle, but it's not funny with swords inches from his brother.
Still, eventually all the guards leave, except for one who locks the door and stands across the hallway.
The cell has a bed, a chamber pot, a bucket of fresh water, and a bed roll designed for camping. There's room for one person to pace, if the other sits on the bed.
Elrond and Elros can talk to each other. Not unobserved, but without a sharp deadline. Better than since they left Sirion.
After reassuring each other that they have no serious injuries, they compare their experiences of the battle, particularly the end.
Elrond and Elros conclude that Elwing is dead, but the Valar sent an eagle (or perhaps another bird, Elrond is unsure of the species he saw) to retrieve the Silmaril.
The Valar have sent eagles to help the house of Fingolfin twice before, and retrieving Fingolfin's body was a lesser favor than saving Maedhros's life (as evil as he is). It's reasonable that the third aid from eagles would be even smaller, not saving the queen's body but saving only her jewel from her enemies.
Elros and Elrond are still confident that it's better than the Feanorians having the Silmaril, though. Who knows what evil they would be able to accomplish with its light?
They are very sad though that their mother is dead. And it's been over a year since Earendil left on his latest voyage, so he's probably dead too, though Elwing hadn't admitted it where they could hear.
That makes Elros king of Sirion, heir to Gondolin and Doriath. Elrond kisses his brother's hand and pledges his fealty.
In practical terms though, Elros and Elrond aren't sure this changes the situation at all. Sure, Elros is king - of a people he can't reach.
They're still prisoners, and there is no Silmaril to trade them for - though of course they are brave warriors who would rather die than give such a holy object over to the evil Feanorians.
They seem to be just here as hostages, so Gil-Galad doesn't sack Amon Ereb, and because the Feanorians still have enough pretense at honor not to kill enemies who surrendered.
The first of those conditions has no end date, and the second only does if they're unlucky. Elros and Elrond will be prisoners until they learn if peredhel can die of old age.
Meanwhile: Maedhros has commanded the guards to keep a watch on the cell, feed the prisoners from the same food as the soldiers, and stop them from escaping. Preferably non-lethally, but if the prisoners reach the courtyard go ahead and shoot them.
He's taken a report from the seneschal, confirming nothing has changed at the castle in his absence.
Maedhros has made his own report of names of the dead, so their work can be redistributed among the living. He's passed on news of Elwing's escape with the jewel, and the signs of orcs they saw on their way. No one pursued the army from Sirion though, which is good.
Maedhros does all the tasks that need to be done to settle his army back in the castle, or at least all that can't wait a day.
He then locks himself in his room to cry over his dead little brother.
Pretty soon it turns to screaming. Wordless cries of pain, insults to the Valar and Eru, curses to the idiocy of child queens.
It's audible outside his room, but he doesn't care. Let them think him mad, being sane has never won him a battle. (Nirnaeth Doriath Sirion, never achieving his goals, and always those he loves dying for him.)
The soldiers are uneasy, but tell each other loudly that it's just his nightmares. Lord Maedhros is sane while awake, and none of them will judge for troubled sleep. Definitely that.
From the prison cell, all that can be heard is the occasional scream. Elrond and Elros thought they were the only captives, but is someone being tortured?
Maglor sleeps for a day straight on arriving at Amon Ereb. He's the best rider left, and switched between advance scouting and Singing their trail cold as needed for the whole journey. It's not literally true that he hasn't slept since Sirion, but he hasn't been fully rested since they marched out from Amon Ereb.
He's still the first one to approach the twins for conversation though, late the next evening.
He's done diplomacy with Fingolfin after leaving him to die, how much worse can it be?
(Okay, he didn't actually get any concessions out of Fingolfin. And he gave up his entire city. But no one died! And people unassociated with the royal family were exchanging small items and food with each other! He's sure it would have taken less than a century to create an actual formal relationship.)
@tar-thelien asked to be tagged for updates!
#silmarillion#my fic#older kidnap fam#my writing#kidnap dads#silm#older kidnap fam fic#<- sorry that's the tag with the rest of it
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Hi! I'm bothering you with questions. What's a Tolkien headcanon that makes you chew drywall?
Elrond and Elros did not go with Maedhros and Maglor quietly. They didn't cower in fear and simply hold still while they were scooped up. They were scared for sure. Terrified. But they didn't go quietly. Elros kicked Maedhros in the shin and bit him when Maedhros tried to scoop him up to get a better look, and when Maedhros dropped him in surprise he scrambled for the door as fast as his little legs could carry him. And Elrond would've clawed Maglor's eyes out if it weren't for his helm. They spit and they kicked and they screamed because they knew who these guys were and they'd heard the stories about their uncles and they absolutely thought they were about to die.
And man does it make me absolutely feral. I think all headcannons about Sirion are valid and I love reading everybody else's interpretations, but the idea that Elrond and Elros fought with every inch of their tiny bodies against the last sons of Feanor and actually landed a few hits? That Maedhros got a new scar from Elros that day? I have art planned and in the draft stage for it right and now and someday I will manage to write my own version of kidnap fam, but in my head they didn't go quietly. They thought they were going to die and also even in their young minds they understood that there was an implication that, if the sons of Feanor were here dragging them out of their hiding place -- and their mother hadn't come for them? There was absolutely the understanding that they'd murdered her (even if, in actuality, that's not what happened) and these little six-seven year olds would not stand for it. That's their mom, and they will avenge her, and also? They'll avenge themselves. If the sons of Feanor want to kidnap them or kill them, Elros and Elrond were gonna make it difficult every inch of the way.
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Ransom of the Fairy Twins (1/4)
Fandom: The Silmarillion
Relationships: Elrond & Elros, Elrond & Elros & Maglor, Elrond/Gil-galad
Summary: Maglor and Maedhros trade Elrond and Elros to King Gil-galad in exchange for a Silmaril, but they have miscalculated.
A fill for this prompt on the Silmarillion Kink Meme.
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           When Elrond and Elros were six, the Havens of Sirion went up in smoke. Their mother kissed their foreheads and sent them upstairs with Evranin their nurse, who had been her nurse before, and promised to see them soon. It was the last thing she ever said to them.
           Instead of Mother, a pair of flame-eyed, blood-streaked Elves threw down the bodies of the guard stationed outside the room, and one held Evranin captive while the other ransacked Motherâs room. These invaders took nothing, but threw the screaming nurse aside, and left with the children.
           The last time they heard from mother was inside the house, but the last time they saw her was on the cliff-side, where those towering men of ash and blood tried to make a deal with her. When Elrond and Elros were six, a man held a blade to their throats, and promised to spare them in exchange for something else.
           It had been a long time since they had heard mother say the names of her brothers aloud, those uncles they had never metâwho had died younger than they were then: ElurĂ©d. ElurĂn.
           The last time they saw mother, she was there: and then she was gone.
           She didnât scream, but their captors did. The leaders, and the ones who followed them, all howling and wailing and cursing and running to the edge of that cliff, to burn their stares into the frothing salt water as it battered itself against the rocks. They nearly missed the seabird that went wheeling overhead, out towards the water, out west.
           The boys were loaded up onto a horse in front of the dark-haired second son of FĂ«anor, and so they could not look back and see the ruins of the Havens still smoking. For nearly an hour they rode in complete silence, and then one of the boys tilted his head back, looking up wide-eyed and trembling at the man behind them and asked: âWhere are we going?â
           âHome,â replied the killer.
II.
           When Elrond and Elros were twelve, the sons of FĂ«anor finally succeeded in making a deal. Gil-galad had come into a Silmarilâand the methods of which do not pertain to this taleâand, by suggestion of his councilors, was willing to offer it to the FĂ«anorians, in exchange for the lives of EĂ€rendil and Elwingâs two children.
           The parchment nearly smoked of how fast they accepted this offer.
           Gil-galad sent a small core of trusted advisors to transport the holy jewel, but being unwilling to enter the fortress of Amon Ereb, they left it some two miles out. The land was flat enough the two parties could still see each other. Once it had been deposited, Gil-galadâs men retreated to a safe distance. They watched the sons of FĂ«anor, the only two left, ride out and examine the jewel. When they had presumably satisfied themselves, they departed, and when Gil-galadâs men returned to the spot, the boys were there waiting.
           Each was supplied by Gil-galadâs men with a pony and provisions, and a message was sent ahead to the king. They anticipated the need to travel slower with the children in tow, but the king should be made aware as soon as possible that the plan had succeeded.
           âHis Grace King Gil-galad offers welcome to the sons of EĂ€rendil,â announced the deputy. The two boys stared dully up at their new compatriots. They each bore some makeshift luggage, ragged sacks and bits of things hanging from their tunic belts.
           âWhere are we going?â one of them asked at last, almost wearily, as if it were a necessity.
           âTo the isle of Balar, in Lindon,â said the deputy. âTo your new home, we hope.â
           âWe hope?â echoed the other boy. âWhat do you mean by that?â
           âHis Grace offers you a place in his home: you may refuse it, if you wish,â said the deputy.
           âYou mean we may leave?â said the first boy, narrowing his eyes. The Elf blinked at him, as though they were having a discussion about pink skies and cows with wings.
           âYou may,â she said. âKing Gil-galad does not take prisoners.â The boys exchanged a long look.
           âVery well,â they said at last, together. âWe would like to meet him.â
III.
           The capitol of Lindon was now, for all intents and purposes, the isle of Balar, whose separation from the mainland gave it some minor additional protection from the forces of Morgoth. It was unlike anywhere Elrond and Elros had been before, but for the comforting wash of the waves on the shore, which seemed to reach back into hazy, half-remembered recollections of their childhood, stirring something they couldnât quite grasp. Balar was an established Elven city, with stone walls and towers and glinting glass windows, and people. Anyone who could get to the island from the nearby lands had, and they were piled on top of each other trying to eke out some measure of safety in an increasingly terrifying world. The twins gawked as they rode through the streets, and were gawked at in return by Elves who had never seen a Peredhel before, only heard tales of those rulers of the Iathrim, but who had heard of the cruel capture of the boys at the sack of Sirion, and of Gil-galadâs plan for rescue.
           âWhy do they all look at us so?â whispered Elros loudly to the deputy. In their days of travel, the boys had relaxed somewhat around their guards, apparently determining it was unlikely they intended any immediate harm.
           âThey have heard tales of the last queen of the Iathrim, and of the lord of the Havens at Sirion, and its destruction,â replied the deputy. âAll of Lindon hoped that we would be able to bring you out of Amon Ereb.â
           âBut why?â Elros asked. âWe are strangers to them.â
           âOneâs heart may still bleed for a stranger, yes?â said the deputy. Elros frowned thoughtfully and sat back on his pony. Elrond rode alongside him, and they kept so close together as they wound up to Gil-galadâs castle that their knees were bruised by the end of the day from bumping together.
           When they reached the castle, their ponies were led off (they needed no help dismounting) and the deputy gestured for them to follow her inside. The twins shuffled after her, clutching each in one arm his belongings, and with the free hand clasping his brotherâs hand.
           The architecture of Amon Ereb had been Elven too, finely wrought and carefully planned, but gone to ruination. It had been decades since anyone had properly cared for it, and its present occupants seemed to take joy in spoiling it further. Rarely did anyone of its sparse staff have time to clean, and when they did, the effort was half-hearted at best. Occasionally the boys were set to it, but with no skill or enthusiasm.
           Gil-galadâs castle was at the prime of its life, and kept clean to boot.
           The twins expected to be led to the throne roomâfor they had heard such things existedâbut Gil-galad met them in a small salon, dressed not in his royal regalia, but something less formal, with only a simple circlet to indicate his office. There was food laid out on a table, which both boys looked to immediately, before turning their attention back to their new lord.
           âIt is wonderful to finally meet you,â said Gil-galad with a smile. He was fair of face, with oak-brown hair drawn back into a knotted braid, and eyes that seemed both green and brown. Heavy earrings weighed down his earlobes and polished jewels winked at his fingers and his breast. Like all the Elves they had seen thus far in Lindon, outside the soldiers, his dress was splendidly bright, as if Yavanna herself had painted on the colors. âPlease, eat.â He gestured to the table, and the young boys decided further introductions could wait: they fell upon the food.
           It was hearty and rich, if a less extensive spread than might have been there in years gone by, though this the twins did not know. They dipped soft, white bread in bowls of soup shining with fatty oils and snatched fistfuls of fresh vegetables. They had grown unaccustomed to the taste of seafood, but now they happily scarfed down baked fish, fried oysters, and strips of raw tuna on beds of greens, barely pausing to evaluate whether they liked one dish better than another.
           âWe were nearly short on supplies,â the deputy remarked to Gil-galad, who responded with faint surprise.
           âA miscalculation,â he said. âI trust all else went wellâŠ?â
           âIndeed, my lord. Easier than anyone expected, truthfully. No fight at all.â
           âAre you Gil-galad?â Elrond demanded as soon as his plate was clean, his small shoulders hunched as he spoke. His mouth and chin shone with grease.
           âIndeed I am,â replied the king. âAre you Elrond, or Elros?â
           âElrond,â they both replied.
           âThen you must be Elros,â said Gil-galad to Elros, who glanced around as if it was possible there was someone else the king might take for Elros.
           âWhat are you going to do with us?â Elrond asked. Gil-galad blinked a moment, but quickly selected his answer.
           âFeed you, I think,â he said with a smile. âIt seems there needs to be more of that!â The twins continued to stare soberly at him, and the smile disappeared from his face. âI mean to offer you my home,â he said, gesturing with a hand around him. âIt seems to me more suited to childhood than Amon Ereb. You shall have teachers too, and there is someone in Balar who can teach you nearly anything you might like to know. And when you are grown, perhaps you will decide to stay.â
           âDid you know our parents?â Elros asked after a long silence. Gil-glad again considered before answering.
           âI did not,â he said. âI did not have occasion to visit the Havens at Sirion beforeâŠbefore its end.â The twins looked down at the table. âBut there are some who did,â Gil-galad added, studying them. They looked up. âYou may not have been awareââ He could see that they had not been, ââbut there were survivors of that event.â Immediately the twins were sitting up ramrod straight, their eyes alight, and Gil-galad realized he had spoken carelessly. âI do not mean your mother and father,â he said gently, and their disappointment was visible. âBut others. They have settled in a place called Greenwood forest, and they are led by a man called Oropher. Do you remember him?â
           Elrond and Elros shook their heads.
           âIf you wish it, I will write to him,â said the king. âHe may agree to come and visit, and you may ask him any questions you have about your parents or Sirion.â He could not tell that the boys had any reaction to this.
           After food and introductions, the twins were given rooms, one for each of them. They chose between them one room, and fated the other to merely gather dust. They were bathed, and measured for new, properly-fitted clothes (although they were permitted to keep what they had brought), and directed to a few adults they might seek out if they had need, then they were left alone.
           âDo you think we could ever find him again in here, if we wanted to?â Elros asked with idle curiosity as he lay stretched sideways over the soft bed. âThereâs so many rooms.â
           Elrond, seated at the window, arms wrapped around his knees, shrugged.
           âThereâs so many people,â he said with a faint shudder. Elros made an uneasy noise of agreement.
           âThereâŠused to be people,â he said uncertainly after a few moments. âIn Sirion. I remember that. There were other children, do you remember? There were Men children. We used to play. We used to play a game with little round stones.â
           âThat was a long time ago,â said Elrond.
           âPerhaps it will feel normal again,â Elros suggested. Elrond shrugged again. They went silent. Elros stared up at the ceiling, which had been painted to look like a summer sky, edged with rolling sea waves. Elrond watched the city beyond the window, and the horizon further out behind the shimmer of the mainland.
           âWhat do you think they shall do now?â Elros asked at last, lowly, voicing the question neither of them had been able to ask while still amid company.
           âI would not know,â said Elrond tightly. âGo away, hopefully.â
           âThere remains still one Silmaril, isnât that right?â said Elros.
           âI donât care,â Elrond snapped. âThey shall probably do something stupid trying to get that one back and get themselves killed in the effort.â
           âProbably,â Elros agreed with a shrug. He stretched his arms out over his head. âAt least we neednât trouble ourselves with it anymore.â
           âIndeed,â Elrond muttered, hugging his knees a bit tighter.
           Gil-galad had expected to see the boys explore the castle, but they remained in the space that was given them until they were called for dinner.
IV.
           Gil-galad had not intended for Celebrimbor to still be on the island when the twins arrived. In fact, he had done everything to conceal it from them. The jewel smith had been supposed to be gone more than a week ago, but a broken wagon axel and a squall had kept him around, and it was yet another thing for Gil-galad to wring his hands about. Nevertheless, in the interest of politeness, as Celebrimbor had come at his behest, Gil-galad paid him a last visit after the twins were settled in their beds.
           âHow are they?â Celebrimbor asked as soon as he had let Gil-galad into his room, twisting his thick-fingered hands together. Celebrimbor was not a small man, and it might have been comical to see him so physically express his anxieties, if Gil-galad didnât know that he was genuine.
           In response, Gil-galad sank into one of the chairs at the hearth and pressed a hand over his eyes. His head tipped back against the chair.
           âI do not know how I shall manage this,â he said. He dragged his hand down his face. He rested an elbow against the arm of the chair and cradled his head. âI know not what Iâm doing.â
           âSurelyâŠanything here is better than there, Your Grace,â Celebrimbor said, settling on the edge of the other seat. âAre theyâŠare they hurt?â
           âPhysically?â said Gil-galad. âNo, I donât believe so. Can you tell me anything else?â Gil-galad asked, raising his head.
           âEverything I can tell you, I have told,â answered Celebrimbor, shaking his head. âAs I said, I never spent much time with Maedhros and Maglor. They did not much like children, especially Maglor, in Aman. They were adults; they had not time for me.â He pulled at one of his earrings. âBut here in Middle-earth, I have seenâŠMaedhros brings out the worst in them. He is the most determined of all of them, perhaps even more than my father. He will not allow Maglor to wander off this path they are on.â
           âStars.â Gil-galad rubbed his eyes again.
           Celebrimbor, a step away from actually wringing his hands, got up and went to the nearby table to pour two goblets of wine. More, Gil-galad suspected, to have something to do with his hands than any desire to drink. Gil-galad took the proffered goblet and set it down undrunk.
           âHave you had any word from the survivors?â he asked. Celebrimbor gave a bleak laugh.
           âMe, heard from the Iathrim?â he asked, bitter rue tinging his tone. âI would not reach out to them even if I knew how; they ought to have some peace. I have heard nothing of them since you left for Sirion, except that I understand they have moved into the Greenwood?â He sipped at his wine and his shaking hand dribbled it down his chin; hastily he swiped it away.
           Gil-galad stared brooding into the fire, drumming his fingers slowly on the arm of the chair. Then, abruptly, he brought his fist down on the table between the seats.
           âWe should have been there sooner!â he raged. He squeezed his eyes shut. âWe should have been there sooner. We could have had the twins then, and spared them the last six years.â His muscles were a knot at the corner of his jaw.
           âYou did what you could,â Celebrimbor said softly. âAnd believe me! You have done the right thing bringing them here. No child deserves to live in Amon Ereb as it is now. Not with them.â He shuddered.
           Gil-galad said nothing, but lapsed into stillness, gazing into the flickering firelight. Celebrimbor shifted uneasily in his seat, debating, and then said:
           âWill you be alright, having them here, when they have grown?â Gil-galad looked questioningly over at him. âI only meanâŠas direct descendants of Turgon and therefore of FingolfinâŠdo they not technically have a better claim to the crown of the Noldor than you, Your Grace?â Gil-galad exhaled and rubbed his eyes again.
           âYes, I suppose they do.â
           âAndâŠdo you think they mightâŠwant it?â
           âThey are mortal,â Gil-galad emphasized.
           âYes, butâŠso was Dior.â
           âWe are not the Iathrim. What is your point, Celebrimbor?â Gil-galad snapped, his nerves worn thin.
           âIf they chose to challenge you for the crown, what would you do?â
           âGive to them and wait,â said Gil-galad flatly. Celebrimbor was quiet, but evidently not satisfied with this answer, and Gil-galad went on: âWe do not have time for these squabbles among Elfinesse. How can we think of coups and usurpations at a time like this?â His hand curled up on the arm of the chair, and then he drummed his fingers again, and then crossed and uncrossed his legs, finally sinking once more into stillness under the thrall of the fire. At length, he said, very quietly, almost as if he feared breathing a curse into the world: âWe are losing this war.â
           The fire popped and crackled in the hearth.
           âI know,â Celebrimbor replied, equally soft.
           âCĂrdan still has seen no sign of Elwing, nor of the return of EĂ€rendil.â In response to Celebrimborâs silence, he added: âIf they cannot succeed at bringing help from Valinor, I think we are only waiting for the end.â
           âThey cannot,â said Celebrimbor gently, as one might speak to a dying pet. âThey are mortal, Your Grace. That path is closed to them.â
           âThey must,â Gil-galad replied. âIf they do notâŠif no aid comes to usâŠthen this war is already lost. If there was a time when the free peoples of Middle-earth had the strength to unite and overthrow the Enemy, it is gone. Without the CalaquendiâŠwithout the ValarâŠI fear the continent will soon go dark. And soon.â
           Celebrimbor said nothing.
Gil-galad sighed, and nodded to himself, and rose to his feet.
           âThank you for coming, Celebrimbor,â he said.
           âOf course, Your Grace,â said Celebrimbor, rising with the king. âAnything I can tell you which may be of help I am glad to do.â
           âI pray we may recover some of the damage,â said Gil-galad, shaking his head. âBut only time will tell.â
           The next day, Gil-galadâs men hustled Celebrimbor and his small retinue out of the city and no more was said of his visit. It was the last time Celebrimbor came to Balar.
V.
           The Iathrim survivors of the sack of Sirion had not been seen since. It was known their small band had traveled east, and settled in the Greenwood, but they had gone quiet after their relocation, and no one had sought them out. It seemed best to let them be; by the measure of Elves, it had been a mere blink of an eye since that terrible day, six years only.
           But when Gil-galad wrote, the answer came promptly, and Oropher came forth from the wood.
           He would not enter the city, but established a camp on the shore of the mainland, along with the retinue he had brought. In concession to his guestâs understandable wariness, Gil-galad did not summon him to the castle, but brought the twins out to Wood-elvesâ camp to meet with Oropher there. The effect on the assembled when they entered the tent was immediate.
           One man began weeping openly. Several others covered their mouths and looked away; some others appeared to visibly restrain themselves from more overt reactions. The twins walked forward, pressed together at the shoulder.
           In the seat at the back of the tent was Oropher, newly-crowned king of the surviving Iathrim, though he did not title himself as such, preferring to attach his kingship to the Greenwood. He made no claim to be any heir to the kingdom of Elwing. He was perhaps slightly taller than average for the Sindar, with golden hair and blue eyes, and he bore no crown the children could see but a thin wreath of wood and leaf. He held himself placidly, but there was a shadow on his mien, something unspoken, but imminently present. Facing him, Elrond and Elros clasped hands.
           âElrond,â said the king of the Wood-elves. âElros. My name is Oropher. I have come because Gil-galadââ He glanced past the boys to the king of the Noldor behind them, ââhas said you wished to speak with me.â
           âKing Gil-galad saysâŠâ The boy trailed off.
           ââŠyou knew our parents,â the other finished for him.
           Oropher tilted his head from side-to-side, saying neither yes nor no. It was a gesture that suddenly and aggressively reminded Gil-galad of the Sindar Wood-elves who had joined them in Nargothrond, but he had to push that memory aside.
           âI served the house of the Greymantle,â he said. âBut my personal acquaintance with Queen Elwing was little, and less still with Lord EĂ€rendil.â The twins shuffled, and squeezed hands, and looked at the floor, then back at Oropher.
           âDo youâŠâ
           ââŠknow where they are?â the boys finished together, gray eyes turned hopefully on this new king, though the tension of their shoulders suggested they were braced for disappointment. The shadow on Oropherâs face deepened, and he cast his eyes askance, and shook his head at last.
           âI do not,â he said softly.
           Elros bit his lower lip, and Elrond swallowed hard.
           âI cannot answer this question for you,â Oropher said, leaning forward. âBut others, I may. And I shall. Anything of Sirion or Doriath is your right to know. I do not imagine yourâŠprevious guardians knew much of it.â The effort with which Oropher restrained himself from snarling was immense. He looked up at Gil-galad. âPerhaps we might speak privately.â
           Gil-galad hesitated only a moment, before he determined no harm could come to them there, and nodded. He departed with his guard, and might have gone off to other kingly affairs, but he chose to wait until Elrond and Elros emerged with Oropher from the tent. They filed obediently back to Gil-galadâs side, like a dog returning to its master.
           âI will leave some individuals here, though we cannot spare more than one or two,â said Oropher, âthat they may act as tutors, to teach you things the residents of Balar are not likely to know.â
           âYes, that would be ideal,â said Gil-galad, choosing not to take offense that Oropher did not ask the kingâs permission to add to his staff. It would be good for the boys to have teachers that knew the Iathrim traditions and history; certainly Gil-galad knew little enough of it, and he imagined Maedhros and Maglor had known less still. Gil-galad at the least had had a Sindarin mother (though she had been of the Falas, and not the woods). âWe would be most grateful.â Oropher nodded.
           Gil-galad never knew what Oropher said to the twins in the tent, but they were quiet the rest of the day, speaking only between themselves, and quickly hushing up the moment someone else appeared within earshot. If their hearing was weaker than Elves, they must have learned already the approximate distance at which an Elf could hear them whispering.
           At dinner, they were still silent, until one of themâOropher believed it was Elros, though he could not say whyâannounced: âWe wish to go with Oropher.â
           âWe were told we might leave,â Elrond added, his small body tensed as if for a blow.
           âWe were told you take no prisoners,â said Elros.Â
           Gil-galad, taken aback, stared for a moment, and then said, slowly: âIf you wish to depart with Oropher, and he would welcome you, you are of course, free to go. It is not my intention to keep you here against your will.â
           âHe said we were welcome to accompany himââ
ââif we wished it.â
           âVery well,â said Gil-galad. âWe will prepare supplies for you to take with you.â The twins exchanged a look, then stared back at Gil-galad, but when he said nothing else, they spoke again.
           âYou really meanââ
           ââto let us go?â
           âJust like that?â They finished together.
           âAs you heard,â said Gil-galad, slicing a bit of pork loin, âI do not keep prisoners, and certainly not children. It was my desire to ransom you away from the sons of FĂ«anor for your own sake, not that I might keep you in their stead. I spoke truthfully when I said you are welcome to stay in my home, but you are welcome also to leave, if that suits you better. I trust Oropher and his people will take great care in looking after you.â
           âOh.â Some fight seemed to ease out of them, and they began to share more frequent looks, and jab at each other under the table, though they remained quiet, and quickly stilled if Gil-galad looked directly at them.
           After dinner, he sent a runner out to the camp of the Wood-elves. Not that he did not trust the twinsâ reportâbut it would not hurt to verify with his fellow monarch that this was agreed upon, before he simply sent two children off with them.
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why do you prefer that maglor only (as opposed to maglor and maedhros) acts as a parent/guardian for elrond and elros? saw you mentioned it in one of the ask games and i was curious!!
(In reference to this.)
Thanks for the curiosity, Anon, I'm happy to expound.
I used to have a very pedantic answer to this, which was: "Because it's not canon." Strictly speaking, nothing is said in the published Silmarillion about Maedhros being involved in the twins' fostering.
For Maglor took pity upon Elros and Elrond, and he cherished them, and love grew after between them, as little might be thought; but Maglorâs heart was sick and weary with the burden of the dreadful oath.
Okay, but so what? I asked myself, in one of my more reasonable moments. It doesn't say Maedhros wasn't. In fact, in the earliest drafts of the Silm, it is Maedhros who takes pity on and fosters them. And regardless, he was probably around, right? So what's the big deal? Let him be involved, who cares!
But still it bothered me, so I asked again: Why? And I'll tell you why. Because it's something that makes Maglor special. There is so little Maglor does alone in the Silmarillion: he kills Uldor, he fosters Elrond and Elros, he questions the Oath, and he casts away a Silmaril. The last three in particular are to me his defining moments as a character. They are the reasons 13 year old me latched onto him and did not let go.
I don't want him to share any of that with Maedhros. Maedhros gets enough to make him special. So I feel very protective of Maglor's role as Elrond and Elros' captor-fosterparent.
Now, my point here is not to argue that my preference is the right one, but I can't resist making a little pitch for my case: I think if Tolkien meant for Maedhros to be involved he would have said so. He would have said "Maedhros and Maglor" like he does in a dozen other places. But he doesn't, because the whole Fostering - Questioning - Casting is a linked set of actions belonging to one character. Some drafts it's Maedhros, some it's Maglor, but it's always only one of them. It's what sets him apart, and sets him up as different.
For me, the idea of Maedhros being equal to or even supplanting Maglor as that complicated parental figure washes him out and diminishes the importance of a major element of what makes Maglor unique and compelling. To me.
Not to get emotional about it. I mean, they're just characters. Obviously.
Um. Anyway. If anyone's interested in how I've dabbled in kidnap fam dynamics given this sentiment, I have a few fics.
And Love Grew (T), canon-compliant WiP about the aftermath of the sack of Sirion
Ungoliant's Bane (G), contrasting Earendil and Maglor through storytelling
Scorched (E, Elrond/Maedhros), a psychosexual unfamily drama from four povs
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Why Pengolodh of all people is able to stoke such rage within me on his behalf is so bizarre. Like, he's a non-character, a name and some facts Tolkien came up with in his carousel of in-universe authors to keep the layers of narration he loved, but the way he is maligned in this fandom is tragic.
I've touched on before that treating the Silmarillion as if it were written and relayed by a single author is entirely incorrect so I won't go into that here, and honestly I'm sure I've said this all before BUT
The idea that Penny is for some reason *least* suited to write most of the events of the Silmarillion is PATENTLY ridiculous, and I would challenge anyone who says that to a duel, either intellectual or physical (even in my current weakened state... Tulkas is on my side I cannot fail). First of all, the one place where nobody else knows anything about what happened is GONDOLIN, so I think if anyone is going to be writing about most of the events of the Silm, they either need to be from Gondolin or need to live in Sirion with survivors.
OH WHAT'S THAT.... SIRION?!?
Yeah, Sirion! The place where not only are there survivors of Gondolin, but there are survivors of Doriath and Nargothrond AND any remnants of the Beorians, Hadorian, and Haladin. Like, I can think of no other place where the Mannish legends would be able to be recounted, and put on the same level, as the Elvish ones.
"But the Feanorians," you squall. "He's so *unfair* to them, and how could he know ANYTHING about them? That's why we know sooo little about the Feanorians and why they are soooo unjustly maligned."
Ok, first of all, ya basic. Second of all, HE HAS ACCESS TO FEANORIAN SOURCES TOO.
There is Celebrimbor, and all the other former followers of Curufin and Celegorm that could of course tell Penny what was up in Himlad and afterwards while he was in Gondolin. Also, there were probably Feanorians who lived after turning on Maedhros and Maglor during the sack of the Havens who could fill in what happened after The Luthien Incident. So, actually, Pengolodh had multiple sources to literally all of the essential events of the Silmarillion.
OH YEAH THE SACK OF THE HAVENS. Despite living through what is described as the worst atrocity of elf v elf, despite having people we KNOW were friends with him KILLED during that fight, despite having his home destroyed by fellow Noldor, he *really* gives Maglor and Maedhros every excuse. "they felt bad, they're so tired, love grew between them and their victims" etc etc. The Silm is sympathetic to the Feanorians and you can't convince me otherwise (you're not some crazy rebel because you like them!) (They are also Doomed by the narrative, but attributing that to an in-universe author requires getting into the territory of events that occurred not actually occurring and... what's the point if you're going to say that the things that the book is about didn't happen? why are you even here?)
I see people say that the bias is against the 3 Cs, Caranthir especially, which is an ABSURD statement to make in conjunction with the 'Pengolodh, sole conveyer of the Silm' theory. Like, Pengolodh most likely never met any of the 3 Cs or if he did he was very young -- why would he dislike them more than the brothers that massacred his friends? I think the theory here is that he's just such a huge Turgon fan and just absorbed Turgon's opinions on the 3 Cs, which is just conjecture on top of conjecture with no solid footing.
I think there is more credence to him being biased against Maeglin on account of the Fall of Gondolin. But, I ask you, is it really *bias* when the guy is partially responsible for the sack of the city you spent most of your life in and likely the deaths of most of your friends and relatives? And Maeglin too in the published Silm is not without his good qualities! If you hate someone, it can be very hard to admit they're handsome and smart, but Penny does not have that issue.
Anyway, justice for Pengolodh. You didn't write the whole thing, Penny, but what you did write was I'm sure fucking fantastic.
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I Read The Silmarillion So You Don't Have To, Part Ten
Previous part.
Chapter 21: Of TĂșrin Turambar, Part 2 In which our angsty tragic hero tries to outrun his curse, kills people he shouldnât, sleeps with people he shouldnât, and fights a dragon.
Picking up right where we left offâŠ
Itâs been four hundred and ninety-five years since the first rising of the Sun over Middle-earth. Two Elves arrive at Nargothrond from the south, Arminas and Gwindorâs brother Gelmir. (Gelmir, as in Volcano Manor? I see you, George R.R. Martin and FromSoft, with your giant glowing tree, and your âNumen,â and âMorgott,â and your volcano named after a completely random Tolkien character!) These two Elves have been living with CĂrdan, and they bring news of a prophecy from Ulmo, the Vala of Water himself!
Hereâs the message: Because Morgoth controls the River Sirion, Ulmo is losing his power in the north of Beleriand. He foretells that doom is coming to Nargothrond. His advice is that the Nargothrond Elves swallow their pride, lock the doors, and hunker down.
King Orodreth listens to the warning, but TĂșrin is too proud and too stubborn to heed the words of a literal god. Heâs used to getting his way, and isnât about to hide away in a hole again just because two randos claim to speak for a Vala. He stays out in the open, and doesnât bother to destroy the great bridge he built across the river that leads straight to Nargothrondâs gate. Thatâs basically rolling out the welcome mat for Morgoth. Meanwhile, Morgoth creeps southwards, defiling the magic spring of Ivrin and heading straight for Nargothrond.
When Morgothâs army arrives, the Elves ride into battle, with TĂșrin beside the king. Morgoth brought a trump card, Glaurung the Dragon â the Elves donât stand a chance. Orodreth dies, and Gwindor is mortally wounded. TĂșrin rushes to carry him to a safer place.
As he dies, Gwindor tells TĂșrin that he both loves and hates him, and that he regrets the day he rescued him from the Orcs. Who can blame him? TĂșrin basically ruined his life. Itâs entirely TĂșrinâs fault that Nargothrond is doomed. Gwindorâs final wish is that TĂșrin protect Finduilas.
Yes, a powerful and ancient Elven kingdom fell because of the stubbornness of one Man who isnât even from there. Is anyone surprised?
TĂșrin Turambar and the Fall of Nargothrond by breath-art
TĂșrin rushes off to find that the city is being pillaged and destroyed by Morgothâs forces. He tries to find Finduilas, but runs straight into Glaurung. Unexpectedly, the dragon speaks, greeting TĂșrin. Glaurung mocks him for all the bad things that heâs caused, directly or indirectly: âThankless fostering, outlaw, slayer of thy friend, thief of love, usurper of Nargothrond, captain foolhardy, and deserter of thy kin.â (Canât you just hear that in Benedict Cumberbatchâs voice?) As a final twist of the knife, Glaurung brings up TĂșrinâs mother and sister, who are poor and miserable, dressed in rags while TĂșrin lives like a prince. (This is a complete lie; theyâre in Doriath, and theyâre fine, but TĂșrin has no way to know that.)
Petrified by the dragonâs gaze, TĂșrin is horrified by his own behavior (which isnât the worst thing? My dude needs some self-awareness). While heâs literally frozen in a mental health spiral, the Orcs finish sacking Nargothrond. They drag Finduilas away with them. Glaurung twists the knife again, pointing out how useless TĂșrin is to either his family or Finduilas.
The Sack of Nargothrond by Donato Arts
TĂșrin can finally move, and lashes at Glaurungâs eye, but misses. Glaurung spares him, letting him live with his guilt, but leaves him with the sadistic Gwen Stacy choice: He can either save Finduilas, or his family, but not both. TĂșrin immediately runs off to save one of them. Glaurung crawls inside whatâs left of Nargothrond, makes a pile of all its treasure, and lies down on it as his dragon hoard.
Following the sack of Nargothrond is a winter so bad, itâs known as the Fell Winter. TĂșrin goes to his birthplace of Dor-lĂłmin to rescue his mother and sister, only to find an empty, ruined house. He asks around to find out where theyâve gone (and by âasks around,â I mean âthreatens people at swordpointâ). Once he learns the truth, he starts killing people out of sheer rage.
The only silver lining is that it was his own actions as âThe Black Sword of Nargothrondâ that gave his mother and sister a window to escape. That means he actually did something good for someone! By accident! TĂșrin decides itâs best not to follow them to Doriath. He muses that he destroys everything he touches, and he doesnât want to subject them to that. After what happened in Nargothrond, he doesnât want to risk the same thing happening to Doriath, for everyoneâs sake.
So, TĂșrin goes off after Finduilas, but itâs already too late for her. He hears from one of the Men of the Forest of Brethil that the Orcs killed Finduilas by pinning her to a tree with a spear. Her last words were to ask the Men to tell âthe Black Swordâ where she died. The Men lead TĂșrin to where they buried her. Distraught, TĂșrin throws himself on the mound. Realizing who he is, the Men of Brethil pity him, and take him in until spring. TĂșrin renames himself Turambar, âMaster of Doom,â thinking that he finally outran his curse. Thatâs very hubristic, but of all TĂșrinâs many epithets, this is the one that stuck.
The last refugees from Nargothrond find their way to Doriath. They reveal who Mormegil the Black Sword was, and assume that heâs either dead, or still frozen in place by the dragon. Morwen rides out into the wilderness alone, desperate to find out what actually happened to her son. Thingol sends his captain Mablung after her to guard her, and her daughter Nienor sneaks out after them. (The narration pauses to inform us that this is a choice point, and if Nienor hadnât left, a lot of suffering could have been avoided.)
Morwen and co. make their way to Nargothrond, but Glaurung is still there, and eager for some more destruction. Some of Thingolâs Elves are killed, and Morwen goes missing. Mablung boldly sneaks inside the ruins of Nargothrond while the dragon is absent. Nienor gets caught in the dragonâs gaze, and he makes her forget who she is and why sheâs there. When Mablung finds her, she canât see, hear, or speak. Mablung tries to bring her back to Doriath, but they donât get far before she runs off into the wilderness in terror.
Nienor makes her way to the Forest of Brethil, living like an animal in the wilderness. One night, during a storm, she throws herself on Finduilasâ mound. The Men of Brethil and TĂșrin find her there, and nurse her back to health. Because she doesnât know her name, TĂșrin calls her NĂniel, âTear-maiden.â In the next couple months, Nienor learns to live and speak like a person again, but she still doesnât remember anything from her former life.
You can probably tell where this is going, canât you? Nienor has amnesia and canât recognize her brother, and TĂșrin has never seen his sister before. They slowly fall in love, and get married in the summer. TĂșrin thinks that he might finally have some happiness! Youâre just braced for the impending trainwreck.
In the intervening years, Glaurung hears that the Black Sword is alive, and goes to Brethil to kill him just for shits and giggles. TĂșrin goes to fight him, saying a tearful goodbye to his wife. Nienor makes the same mistake she made last time, and goes after him.
TĂșrin comes up with a strategy to sneak up under Glaurung from a narrow gorge, catching him by surprise. He successfully makes it across the gorge, and stabs Glaurung in the belly with the meteorite sword. Glaurung screams and writhes, throwing the enormous bulk of his body across the gorge, breathing fire as he dies. All the forest around the gorge is burned to a crisp, but Glaurung the Dragon is finally deadâŠ!
The End of Glaurung by Coliandre
TĂșrin crosses the gorge again to recover his sword, and mocks Glaurung in an ironic echo of the dragonâs words to him in Nargothrond. As he wrenches the black sword out of Glaurungâs body, a spurt of black blood covers his hand, burning it with venom. Then Glaurungâs eyes open â heâs not dead yet! He smashes TĂșrin, and TĂșrin passes out from a combination of the blow and the venom.
The Men see the burning forest, and assume that Glaurung must have won the fight. They turn to flee, except for Nienor, who insists on seeing her husband again.
She finds TĂșrin lying, seemingly dead, beside the dragon, and cries over his body. Glaurung, who still isnât dead, puts two and two together and laughs in Nienorâs face. He reveals her true identity as a daughter of HĂșrin, and that her husband is actually her brother. He also lists off all of TĂșrinâs other crimes for good measure. Then he dies. Finally.
The Death of Glaurung by Elena Kukanova
When Glaurung dies, his evil spell breaks, and Nienor finally remembers everything. Horrified, she says her farewell to TĂșrin, and throws herself over the gorge. That spot becomes known as Cabed Naeramarth, the Point of Dreadful Doom â no plants grow on it, and all people and animals avoid it.
The leader of the Men of Brethil, Brandir, returns to his people, and fills them in on what happened with the requisite tragic Messenger Speech: Glaurung is dead, TĂșrin is dead, NĂniel is dead, and also TĂșrin and NĂniel were siblings the whole time. As the people mourn, TĂșrin himself shows up â he wasnât actually dead, just in a faint. Brandir tells him the terrible news, and TĂșrin blames Brandir for Nienorâs death, assuming that âyouâre actually siblingsâ is just another one of Glaurungâs lies. TĂșrin does his usual thing and kills Brandir in a fit of rage.
TĂșrin escapes into the woods, finding Finduilasâ grave. He prays to her for advice about what to do next. Clearly, he couldnât outrun his fate. His only options are to go to Doriath and risk more destruction and sorrow, or to go die in battle. As he cries there on the grave, Mablung just happens to show up. TĂșrin tells Mablung that he killed Glaurung, and Mablung is very impressed that TĂșrin could kill Glaurung when generations of Elves failed.
TĂșrin asks after his family, and Mablung tells him the bad news â Morwen is missing, Nienor is a delirious amnesiac, and neither of them have been heard from in years. Thatâs when TĂșrin realizes that his wife really was his sister. On top of that, he just murdered a man in cold blood for telling the truth! In fact, he just murdered the leader of a tribe that was kind enough to take him in! TĂșrin laughs like a madman, curses Mablung, curses Doriath, curses everything, and runs away into the night (again).
He goes to the gorge where his sister died, and takes out Gurthang, the black meteorite sword. He asks the blade if it will kill him, and the sword speaks with a cold voice: âYea, I will drink thy blood gladly, so that I may forget the blood of Beleg my master, and the blood of Brandir slain unjustly. I will slay thee swiftly.â Ahhhh, thatâs so creepy! The black sword was sentient the whole time!
TĂșrin stabs himself with the blade, and dies at the same point where his sister did. Mablung and his Elves find TĂșrinâs body, and Mablung blames himself for TĂșrinâs death, because he told TĂșrin the truth about his sister. Mablung, the Elves, and the Men of Brethil bury TĂșrin on that point, alongside the shards of the black sword, which snapped in half. They mark his tombstone with both his name and Nienorâs.
The Death of TĂșrin by _yidany_
Wow, what a classic tragedy! You know, some people hold up A Song of Ice and Fire as the anti-LotR â Game of Thrones is high fantasy story thatâs dark and gritty and more cynical than idealistic, with realistic effects of war, a massive amount of character death, and lots of gore and incest. What those people donât realize is that Tolkien already wrote that story, and here it is! You think Tolkien is an idealistic kindly grandpa who only writes about cute hobbits, pretty elves, and dark lords getting defeated? Try this on for size!
Honestly, it shouldnât be surprising to anyone who knows anything about Tolkienâs source material. This is what mythology is like. I applaud Tolkien for his authenticity. He combined parts of the Volsung Saga, parts of Oedipus Tyrannus, and maybe a bit of Beowulf with his own lore to create a brutal uber-tragedy. And, bonus, he also gave us our requisite angsty pathetic man as a protagonist.
TĂșrin by LÄ«ga KÄŒaviĆa ***
Chapter 22: Of the Ruin of Doriath In which HĂșrin is finally released, and Thingol makes the most colossally stupid decision of his career.
Well, we all knew that Doriath was too good to last. Looks like its time is up.
But first, we need to know what happened to HĂșrin. HĂșrin is TĂșrinâs father, and heâs been imprisoned on a mountaintop this whole time, tied to a chair and forced to watch the tragedy of his sonâs life. Morgoth finally lets him go. Morgoth claims that heâs acting out of pity, but thatâs obviously a lie â he knows that if he lets HĂșrin go, itâll start a domino effect of bad stuff that will make everyoneâs lives worse.
HĂșrin tries to go home to Hithlum, but heâs unrecognizable after almost thirty years in Angband. His own people think heâs one of Morgothâs goons, and shun him. Feeling resentful, and having nowhere else to go, HĂșrin tries to find Gondolin again. All he finds is a forbidding wall of sheer rock. The eagles notice him, though, and Thorondor, the king of the eagles himself, goes straight to King Turgon to tell him that HĂșrin is at his door. Turgon doesnât believe this, assuming that Morgoth is up to his old tricks again. Thorondor snaps back with, âif the divine eagles made mistakes, Gondolin wouldnât have lasted this long.â After thinking about it for a bit, Turgon agrees to let HĂșrin in. But when the eagles go to look for him, heâs already gone. Thatâs what Turgon gets for taking his sweet time.
As the sun sets, HĂșrin screams in despair in the direction of Gondolin, imploring Turgon to remember their friendship. But Morgothâs spies have been on him since he left. Now Morgoth knows where Gondolin is! He still canât do anything because of the eaglesâ protection, but the clock is ticking.
HĂșrin dreams of his wife Morwen. In his dream, sheâs crying somewhere in the Forest of Brethil. So, he heads in that direction. The men of Brethil think heâs the ghost of a warrior, thatâs how terrible he looks. He finds TĂșrin and Nienorâs gravestone, but doesnât look at it; he already knows what it is, from having seen the whole story play out with Morgothâs supernatural vision. In front of the stone, an old woman with tattered clothes is mourning. She looks up into HĂșrinâs eyes, and he recognizes her as his wife, Morwen. They reunite briefly, and sit together in silence in front of their childrenâs grave. When the sun sets, Morwen dies.
HĂșrin and Morwen at the grave of their children by steamey
HĂșrin sits there, numb, until his grief is replaced by anger and a desire for vengeance. Because if youâre a man whose wife and kids are dead, what else is there to do besides revenge? He adds Morwenâs name to the tombstone, then goes on his way.
As for the tombstone, according to a bard, nothing will ever topple it. Not even Morgoth. Not even when Beleriand sinks into the sea, and nothing else is left of it (which the narration reminds us will happen in the near future). The stone still rises up out of the sea, far off the coast of Middle-earth.
HĂșrin goes to see whatâs left of Nargothrond, and finds MĂźm, that dwarf whom TĂșrin had lived with for a time after killing his son. MĂźm moved in after Glaurung left, and took all the treasure for himself. None of the Elves challenged him, because theyâre all afraid that the dragon is still there. MĂźm believes he has a rightful claim to Nargothrond, because the Petty-Dwarves lived in those caves first. Heâs got a point there, but HĂșrin still declares that he will take back the caves, as payback for MĂźm having betrayed TĂșrin that one time. MĂźm begs for his life, but HĂșrin ruthlessly kills him.
HĂșrin lives in the ruined cave palace for some time, but itâs pretty dismal. When he leaves, he only takes one piece of treasure with him: the Nauglamir.
Remember the NauglamĂr? You probably donât, so hereâs a refresher: Itâs a necklace that the Dwarves made for Finrod, as a thank-you for giving them treasure from Valinor. The NauglamĂr is as light as spider silk, and itâs set with the Valinor gems. Iâm almost certain that Tolkien based it on the Brisingamen, a necklace belonging to the goddess Freya. There is a myth in which Loki steals it, and Heimdall fights him over the necklace (according to Snorri, they were in the shape of seals), but most of that story is lost. Despite the lack of surviving information about it, we know that the Brisingamen was a common folkloric trope in Germanic mythology, because itâs referenced briefly in Beowulf and a few other sources.
HĂșrin travels east towards Doriath, and is captured by Elven scouts. They bring him to King Thingol. HĂșrin resents Thingol and Melian for having failed to protect his wife and kids. He blames them for everything bad that happened, instead of blaming Morgoth, who literally cursed his family to his face! This is because Morgoth made sure to paint Thingol and Melian in an especially unflattering light. Thingol and Melian are some of the only people in Middle-earth who stand a genuine chance against Morgoth, so from Morgothâs perspective, the sooner theyâre out of the picture, the better.
HĂșrin throws the NauglamĂr at Thingolâs feet, declaring it his payment for having done such a great job at keeping TĂșrin, Morwen, and Nienor safe. Thingol feels genuinely bad for HĂșrin, and doesnât say anything. After HĂșrin vents a little, Melian speaks up to say that HĂșrinâs perspective has been skewed by Morgoth. Seeing through Morgothâs eyes is always going to twist the truth a little. She and Thingol loved TĂșrin, and Morwen and Nienor. It wasnât their fault that HĂșrinâs family all left Doriath and went to their respective dooms.
The magic of Melianâs wall helps protect Doriath from Morgothâs magic, so HĂșrin finally sees that sheâs telling the truth. Ashamed, he picks up the necklace and gives it to Thingol as a sincere gift.
Then he leaves. No one knows where he goes, but itâs assumed that he throws himself into the sea in shame and despair. He did Morgothâs bidding, without even knowing it. Itâs a pathetic end for the greatest warrior of all Men.
After HĂșrin leaves, Thingol stares at the necklace for a long time. Then he has the bright idea to have it reforged, and to set the Silmaril in the middle. If sending Beren to get a Silmaril in the first place was a dumb idea, this is the dumbest possible idea. Remember, just having a Silmaril puts a target on Thingolâs back, because the sons of FĂ«anor are all magically bound to repossess it. But setting it into a Dwarven artefact is going to piss the Dwarves off, too!
Thingol almost canât be blamed. The Silmaril is like the Ring in that it exerts an influence over the mind of whoever possesses it. Thingol no longer wants to keep it confined to his treasury, he wants to wear it and show it off, like FĂ«anor once did.
Elwe Singollo and the NauglamĂr by K.Mendou
He summons the Dwarven blacksmiths who work in his court, and tells them that he wants to set the Silmaril in the necklace. The Dwarves are immediately struck with the same desire to have the Silmaril for themselves, but they put it out of their minds and do the job. Itâs a long and difficult process, and Thingol personally goes down to the forge to look over their shoulders as theyâre working. When the necklace is finished, the Dwarves present it to Thingol.
As Thingol goes to take it and put it around his neck, the Dwarves suddenly take it back from him. They demand to know why Thingol thinks he has a right to it, since it was made by Dwarves. The only Elf who had a right to it was Finrod Felegund, whoâs dead. HĂșrin stole it from Nargothrond, so, Thingol doesnât have true ownership of it.
Thingol sees that what they really want is the Silmaril. Without thinking, he insults them (paraphrased): âHow dare you of the uncouth race demand anything of me, Elu Thingol, Lord of Beleriand! Iâve been here since the dawn of creation, long before the stunted people!â (Note that he proclaims himself the lord of not just Doriath, but all of Beleriand.)
You can imagine how well the Dwarves take that. They straight-up murder him, on the spot! And thatâs how ElwĂ« Graymantle, king of the oldest Elven kingdom of Middle-earth, the only person to have married one of the Ainur, and the only Sinda to have seen the Two Trees of Valinor, dies. Racism and sheer hubris.
NauglamĂr by breath-art
As the Dwarves escape with the NauglamĂr, Thingolâs warriors chase after them. They get almost as far as the river at the edge of Doriath when the Elves kill all but two of them. The remaining two Dwarves make it all the way to their home in the Blue Mountains, and tell the Dwarves there what happened. Or rather, they lie about what happened. They say that Thingol ordered their comrades killed for no reason, and that he cheated them out of their rightful reward. The Dwarves mourn for their lost craftsmen, and plan to wage war on Doriath.
The Elves bring the NauglamĂr back to Queen Melian, who grieves for her husband. I can only imagine how sad and frustrated she must be. She warned Thingol this would happen, but couldnât do anything until it was already too late. She sits beside Thingolâs body and cries, thinking about their first meeting in the forest under the stars. In her grief, the magic wall that she maintained for centuries dissolves. Melian tells Mablung to tell the resurrected Beren and LĂșthien about the Silmaril. Then she disappears out of Middle-earth. In her true divine form, she returns to the garden of LĂłrien in Valinor, where she can cry in the company of other spirits. And thatâs it, thatâs the end of her story.
Without the magic wall, thereâs nothing protecting Doriath from the Dwarves. They march straight into the Thousand Caves and slaughter as many Elves as they can find. Mablung dies in the battle. The Dwarves ransack the place, and steal the Silmaril.
Now you know why Elves and Dwarves hate each other!
I didnât expect Beren and LĂșthien to be part of this story again, but here they are. They hear about the terrible battle, and Beren leaves with his son Dior and a bunch of eastern forest Elves to ambush the Dwarves. When the Dwarf army comes back east, Beren and co. rain arrows down on them. Then ents, of all things, show up and drive the remaining Dwarves away.
Beren steals back the necklace from the Dwarf lord, and kills him. The Dwarf lord curses all the treasure as he dies. Beren just stares at the Silmaril, the jewel of FĂ«anor that he himself had stolen from Morgoth. He washes the blood off of it in the river, and the rest of the (now cursed) treasure is thrown in the water. Beren gives the NauglamĂr to LĂșthien, making her the most beautiful thing this side of Valinor. And thatâs not subjective: LĂșthien wearing the Silmaril produces such good magic that, for a while, Ossiriand becomes almost like another Valinor.
Dior, the half-human, half-elf son of Beren and LĂșthien, is Thingolâs grandson and the rightful heir to the kingdom of Doriath. So, he leaves his parents to take his grandfatherâs throne in Menegroth. The Sindar donât have any problem being ruled by a half-elf. Theyâre just happy to have gotten a new king so fast, and to finally have something to celebrate.
One night, an Elf from Ossiriand knocks on the door of Menegroth, and gives Dior a chest with the NauglamĂr in it. When Dior sees it, he knows that his parents have finally died naturally. He stares at the Silmaril and thinks about how his parents retrieved it from Morgoth. Itâs said that they died so soon because the light of the Silmaril around LĂșthienâs neck wasnât meant for mortal eyes, but Dior clasps the necklace around his own neck. At that point, heâs the most beautiful person in the whole world, because heâs descended from Elves and Men and Maiar.
Dior EluchĂźl by @vinyatar
But wait! Remember the baggage that comes attached to the Silmaril wherever it goes? Thatâs right â the sons of FĂ«anor! LĂșthien was so magical that no one dared to attack her, but Dior has no such luck. Once the sons of FĂ«anor hear that heâs wearing a Silmaril, they come after him. Dior could have just given the FĂ«anorians the Silmaril, and avoided a violent conflict, but of course it doesnât work like that. The seven brothers sneak into Doriath in the middle of winter, and attack. What follows is called the âSecond Kinslaying,â because itâs only the second time the Elves have fought each other.
Celegorm, Curufin, and Caranthir all die, reducing the sons of FĂ«anor down to four. Dior and his wife Nimloth also die. Celegormâs servants kidnap their two sons and leave them to freeze to death in the forest, which is especially cruel. That was a step too far for Maedhros, who looks for the boys in the woods for as long as he could, but he doesnât find them. No one knows what happened to them.
The Second Kinslaying by Jenny Dolfen
And thatâs the end of Doriath. Thingolâs kingdom lasted a good long time. Now Gondolin is the only safe place leftâŠ
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