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Exploring Non-Linear Narratives: Writing Out of Sequence
In the realm of storytelling, the traditional sequence is but one path to follow, a well-trodden road where events unfurl one after another, much like dominos carefully aligned, ready to fall. Yet, in the shadows, there exists another path, a web of narratives intertwined, where each word, each sentence, is a piece of a puzzle not yet complete. This exploration seeks to dissect the notions of…
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getting into both of these games at the same time is pretty funny
#I considered making both of them dark castles but from what I understand isat has a much happier ending (after much of the horrors)#the big difference is that in one the main character(s) takes absolutely no responsibility#and in the other they take WAY TOO MUCH#also “caused” by the main character in sif’s defense he did not know that would happen (and it wasn’t just his wish)#yes I’m only in act 3 but I have been spoiled for a chunk of stuff#time fuckery in mw’s case is the non-linear narrative#though there is a ton of time travel fix it fanfiction#in stars and time#isat#mouthwashing#sorry if the text is hard to read idk how to make it outlined :(#…do I need to tag isat spoilers#whatever sure#isat spoilers#I don’t think I need a mw one#mid-act 5 update: they both have hallways that are Longer than you remember them being#and dreamlike fucked up journeys towards the end
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“Noona!”
The sound of sneakers squeaking on the floor fills the eerily quiet corridor of the hospital as Jihoon skids to a halt in front of his sister.
He takes one look at the somber faces looking up at him, and immediately feels his body break out in a cold sweat as his stomach plummets. “Noona…?”
He hears how his own voice sounds small and shaky—not unlike the time when he was just a kid and he had just found out that he would be living with his big sister now as his legal guardian.
“He’s currently undergoing surgery,” Jihwa answers Jihoon’s unspoken question as she runs a hand distractedly through her hair, and Jihoon’s heart twists at how exhausted his sister sounds, not unlike all those nights she’d come home late from pulling double shifts to support them both because their mother had a new family.
The relief that instantly courses through Jihoon makes his body sag weakly as he falls onto the nearest seat, followed by the immediate dread that they’re not out of the woods just yet. “What happened?”
“Car accident,” Hyeok speaks up from beside him, and Jihoon can’t help but marvel at how calm the prosecutor sounds. Lawyers’ nerves must be made of steel, Jihoon muses.
He furrows his brows as the words sink in. “But…” Jihoon says slowly, “he always drives safely.”
“Yes. He does.” This time, Jihoon can detect the grim bitterness of Hyeok’s tone. “He wasn’t the problem.”
The seat across the hallway creaks as Jihwa flops down on it with a heavy sigh. “Drunk truck driver beating the red light crashed onto him at a crossroad. The other driver is also currently undergoing surgery at another operating room, and Dosoo-ya is conferring with the medical team there regarding the DUI case.”
“DUI…”
Jihoon trails off as his gaze finally lands on the lone man slumped over at the other end of the corridor. The fluorescent light directly above is flickering, casting the despondent figure in shadow.
“Dongsik-hyung…” Jihoon trembles. “Why are you here?”
He feels both Hyeok’s and Jihwa’s gazes turn to him in silent, outraged disbelief, and Jihoon swifty shakes his head.
“Why are you here—” Jihoon whispers as he gestures at the bleak corridor they’re all stuck in, “—and not in there with Joowon-hyung?”
He feels a hand on his knee, and his gaze snaps to his sister, who has reached across the hallway to touch him tenderly.
“Inspector Han is in critical care,” Jihwa tells him softly. “Strictly family only.”
Jihoon opens his mouth.
“And to answer your question, Jihoon-ah…”
The words die on Jihoon’s lips as Dongsik finally raises his head to meet Jihoon’s eyes.
Dongsik has never looked so—lifeless, like this.
Not since Yuyeon was finally cremated.
“According to the law, I am not family.”
A thunk beside Jihoon makes him jump, and he looks over to see the back of Hyeok’s head hitting the wall as Hyeok stares balefully at the ceiling, chuckling bitterly.
“And neither am I.”
—
The beeping pattern that has lulled her into a fitful sleep suddenly changes, and the sound breaks through the haze of her semi-consciousness.
Blearily, Jaeyi uncurls herself from the tiny sofa bed to peer at the monitors—and then at the patient to whom all of it is attached.
The drowsiness instantly disappears. “Inspector Han!” she gasps as she throws away the blanket draped over her legs and sways a bit on her feet from the dizziness of standing up too quickly. “You’re awake!”
Her instinct to go to him is immediately overridden by the memory of the nurses’ strict reminder to contact them as soon as the patient regains consciousness, and Jaeyi quickly reaches for the call button.
The fingers that curl around her wrist are weak, but insistent.
“Wait,” Joowon rasps, voice hoarse from being previously intubated during surgery. “Not yet.”
The herculean effort to speak seems to already drain so much out of Joowon that it makes Jaeyi relent. Instead, she pulls out a chair to sit close by his bedside. “How are you feeling?” she gently inquires, trying her best to mask her worry.
Joowon lolls his head to the side to look at her with a swollen face full of bruises and stitches, and manages to offer a small smile. “Like I was just crushed by a giant truck.”
Jaeyi smiles back tremblingly despite herself. “Your doctors don’t have to worry about psychological damage to your brain, considering your sense of humor remains the same.”
“Hilarious?”
“Non-existent.”
A soft gust of breath escapes Joowon’s lips before the laughter is quickly smothered by a grimace of pain. Jaeyi bites her lip anxiously. “Should I be calling the nurses now?”
“No,” Joowon repeats firmly, and Jaeyi is a little taken aback at how vehement he sounds. Joowon must have registered her surprise because he then quietly, shamefully confesses: “I don’t like being around medical professionals.”
Jaeyi’s eyebrows rise dubiously, but she holds her tongue, respectfully—smartly—waiting.
Eventually, Joowon takes a deep breath and, as if the admission pains him, closes his eyes as he explains:
“They were often at our house when I was a child. Their presence meant my mother has once again attempted to kill herself.”
Jaeyi doesn’t know if Joowon is keeping his eyes firmly shut for his benefit, or for hers. Either way, she is immensely grateful for it, because Joowon doesn’t need to see the cold waves of shock, rage, shared grief and unwanted pity that slams over her in quick succession, the vicious intensity knocking the breath out of her lungs.
Right now, Joowon needs her to be strong—so she will be.
“Would you like me to call someone else then?” she instead gently suggests. “Prosecutor Kwon has been waiting to hear from you.”
She pauses, letting the weight of her next words hold meaning as she softly adds: “And so is ahjussi.”
Joowon’s eyes flutter open.
And it takes Jaeyi’s breath away, the way Joowon’s entire countenance changes. His features soften, brows crinkling with concern, as he once again turns to her and worriedly asks:
“Has he eaten?”
And it says so much about how far Joowon has come in opening up his heart, because he now completely understands—and fluently speaks—the love language of Lee Dongsik.
She swallows against the lump that suddenly forms in her throat—and lies.
“Yes.”
—
“Ahjussi...”
“Jaeyi-ya? Why are you crying?”
“Ahjussi… I’m on my way to the hospital right now… please… you have to come…”
“Are you okay? What happened?”
“It’s—It’s Inspector Han.”
“… What? You—how—”
“I don’t know why, ahjussi, and I found out just now when the hospital called my number unexpectedly, but—Inspector Han listed me as his emergency contact.”
—
Not for the first time, Hyeok wonders how he somehow always finds himself sharing a table with all of these strange people.
It hasn’t been that long ago when they were all mere strangers to him—just another list of names in his ever-growing pile of case files.
Now, however…
Jaeyi arrives with a tray laden with so much food that it makes Hyeok’s eyes widen at how heavy it all looks. He scrambles to his feet and tries to help, but Jaeyi merely shoos him away, leaving him standing there awkwardly as she begins doling out the soup bowls.
“I can’t keep lying to Inspector Han,” Jaeyi proclaims resolutely, “so you all better eat.”
Dosoo peers at the huge serving bowl Jaeyi is ladling from. “Your budae jjigae looks much more appetizing than this, Jaeyi-ah.” He wrinkles his nose. “Smells much better too.”
“And no doubt tastes better too,” Jaeyi smoothly adds, which makes everyone at the table crack a smile for the first time in a long while. “But this is all the hospital cafeteria has to offer, and we have to eat this in honor of Inspector Han.”
Hyeok blinks. In honor of—
“It’s Joowon-hyung’s favorite,” Jihoon says softly when he sees Hyeok’s visible confusion. His voice is a little warbled, his eyes still red and puffy, shoulders trembling as he tries to stifle his silent sobs.
Tightly cradled in Jihoon’s hands is a letter envelope he’s clutching preciously close to his heart.
The sound of stainless steel scraping over wood pulls Hyeok’s attention, and he finds himself staring at a bowl of steaming budae jjigae that has been pushed towards him.
He looks up—and Dongsik smiles warmly at him.
“Eat, Prosecutor Kwon. Joowon-ie would have all of our heads if he finds out we’ve been starving you.”
No, he wouldn’t. He never used to care about whether or not I eat.
The bitter thought comes to him unbidden, and the sting of it makes his throat tighten.
He slowly returns to his seat as everyone at the table digs in, hunger finally overtaking worry and fatigue as the need to replenish their energy makes itself known if they are to continue their vigil.
It’s going to be a long night ahead for all of them.
Hyeok stares at the bowl in front of him as he cycles through his haphazard thoughts, desperately trying to reconcile what everyone else is telling him with what he knows.
Han Joowon hates any food with broth. He hates Korean food. He hates anything that has to do with Korea, because he has always hated coming back here.
Because all of it reminded him of his father.
When did all of that change? Do I even know him at this point?
Who even am I to Han Joowon?
“Don’t take it against him.”
Hyeok nearly leaps out of his skin—since when does Lee Dongsik have the power to read minds?
There’s a knowing glint in the other man’s eyes as Dongsik smirks at him. “And don’t take it against her either,” Dongsik adds as he juts his chin towards Jaeyi, who looks startled at being singled out. “You know why Joowon-ie couldn’t have made you his emergency contact, Prosecutor Kwon.”
No, he thinks sourly, I don’t.
The table falls silent as Dongsik continues to slurp and chew with gusto, oblivious to the sudden tension in the air. Unable to take it anymore, Jihwa lets out an exasperated sigh and Dongsik jumps beside her.
Hyeok’s mouth quirks despite himself; Jihwa appears to have kicked Dongsik under the table.
“What?” Dongsik grumbles as Jihwa tilts her head meaningfully towards Hyeok. “He knows he once worked for Han Kihwan, that’s why Joowon-ie is publicly distancing himself from Prosecutor Kwon.”
Chills run down Hyeok’s spine. Whatever he’s been expecting, it isn’t this.
Slapping him across the face would have hurt far less.
“Ahjussi,” Jaeyi says softly. “You should word that better.”
Dongsik looks up from his bowl and finally realizes all eyes are on him. He swallows the mouthful he’s been chewing and eventually fixates his gaze on Hyeok.
Beneath the table, Hyeok’s tightly balled fists are shaking.
Dongsik puts his chopsticks down.
“Emergency contact records are private data that can only be accessed in crises situations by healthcare providers or by authorized representatives. And that includes family.”
Dongsik pauses to let the weight of his next words sink in.
“Han Joowon’s actual family.”
Dongsik spits the word out like vile poison—and the realization slams upon Hyeok.
“The public records of you consistently meeting with Han Kihwan were plenty. Aside from the official logs at his office and the traceable calls and messages on both your phones, there were a significant number of CCTV cameras proving you had been meeting with him even well beyond office doors and office hours. You had even been spotted several times at the Han residence.”
Hyeok’s blood runs cold—because he suddenly, truly understands.
He does know Han Joowon. Far, far too well.
“Han Kihwan is currently undergoing appeals to lighten his sentence,” Dongsik is saying. “And one of the ways he can do that—“
“—is if he can prove he has an accomplice,” Hyeok finishes quietly.
Their table has become a silent, unwitting audience to the tense stalemate between them. The rigid set of Dongsik’s shoulders suddenly sags, and Hyeok knows, with a pang in his chest, that the hell on earth brought upon by Han Kihwan is still burning.
And at the center of the pyre—are Han Joowon and Lee Dongsik.
“Han Kihwan knows he can’t beat you, Prosecutor Kwon.” Hyeok’s gaze is arrested by the way Dongsik reaches for his water glass and lets out a humorless chuckle. “Nor can he defeat the son that you raised. He knows far too well that you are both far too smart for him. So instead, he’ll do the next best thing.”
Dongsik takes a swig from the glass, wipes his mouth with back of his hand, and slams the glass back down on the table, spilling water everywhere.
“Han Kihwan is going to bring you down with him, Prosecutor Kwon.”
There’s a reason, Hyeok abruptly realizes with terrified awe, why Lee Dongsik is Han Joowon’s chosen partner. Why Lee Dongsik has never feared the pyre Han Kihwan has lit.
“And Han Joowon will never let that happen.”
Those are the eyes of a lunatic who will follow Han Joowon straight into hell.
—
“Can I see him?”
“Name, please?”
“Lee Dongsik.”
“Relation to the patient?”
“I’m his partner.”
“… Han Joowon-nim’s business partner?”
“His partner. He’s listed as my dependent on my medical insurance.”
“… I’m sorry Lee Dongsik-nim, but unless you’re listed as Han Joowon-nim’s emergency contact, the hospital cannot let you inside critical care because the NHIS doesn’t recognize your claim.”
“The fuck am I letting you stop me from—”
“It’s alright, nurse, I’ll take it from here.”
“Get your hands off me, Prosecutor Kwon! I have every right to—!”
“She’s right, Lee Dongsik-ssi. According to the law, you are not Joowon’s family.”
—
Gwangyoung pulls a grimace as soon as he takes a sip from the styrofoam cup. “Coffee from vending machines always tastes terrible.”
Ohsub rolls his eyes. “Seoul has made you even more pretentious, Senior Inspector Hwang.”
“Caffeine is still caffeine,” Dosoo says tiredly as he drinks from his own cup. “God knows we all need it right now.”
Jihwa silently agrees as she feels the night’s exhaustion seeping through her bones. She turns to Seonnyeo and musters up the strength to offer her a small smile. “How’s Huimangie?”
“I dropped her off at my parents’ place before coming here.” Seonnyeo returns the smile, and once again Jihwa marvels at the calm and comfort Seonnyeo radiates; there’s no one else more suited to motherhood. “Dosoo-ya will pick her up tomorrow since his shift at work is later than mine.”
Jihwa’s features soften. “You didn’t need to come tonight.”
Seonnyeo’s own gaze is kind but firm. “I wanted to.”
“And we needed her expertise,” Dosoo pipes up, a note of pride in his voice as he beams at his wife.
“So,” Ohsub leans forward in his seat, and all the police officers gathered around the hospital vending machine instantly snap to attention. “What do we know so far?”
Seonnyeo flips through the case file in her hand and begins to explain. “According to the records of the company he’s working for, the truck driver had been going through his usual route at his usual delivery time, so there was nothing out of the ordinary in his routine tonight.”
“Except for the fact that his medical records reveal that his blood alcohol concentration was at 0.306% at the time of the collision,” Dosoo remarks dryly.
Gwangyoung whistles lowly. “That’s the highest ever recorded number for a DUI case in history. Even if he survives tonight’s surgery—”
“Gwangyoung-ah,” Jihwa warns.
“I’m just saying,” Gwangyoung raises his hands in appeasement. “After he recovers, he’ll definitely be going to jail.”
“There’s something strange about the truck driver though,” Seonnyeo murmurs, lost in thought as she peruses the case file; Jihwa has to prompt her gently with a hand on her arm to encourage her to share her theories.
“A BAC of 0.250 to 0.399% is a dangerously high level of intoxication. It can already cause alcohol poisoning and even loss of consciousness.”
She turns to her husband. “We’re going to need to access the truck’s dashboard camera to be sure, but with this level of BAC, it’s entirely possible that the driver actually fell asleep at the wheel.”
“Which explains why he didn’t stop at the red light,” Dosoo affirms.
“Doesn’t really help his case,” Gwangyoung mutters, “although the defense can lobby that at least he didn’t purposely beat the red light.”
Seonnyeo bites her lip.
Ohsub sees her obvious hesitance and sighs. “Just say it, Officer Im.”
Instead, Seonnyeo turns to Jihwa and wordlessly hands over the case file to her.
Jihwa skims through the company records. “The truck driver has been consistent in his routine,” she comments. “No previous records of any road violations whatsoever.”
“Exactly,” Seonnyeo’s relief shows on her face when Jihwa confirms her observations. “If he knew he had a delivery route to go through tonight, why would he purposely get himself drunk before his shift?”
“Not just simply drunk,” Dosoo grumbles. “It’s like he ingested a whole liquor store with that amount of alcohol in his system.”
“It’s almost suicidal.”
Everyone turns to Jihwa at her somber words.
“But if he wanted to kill himself,” she says quietly as she sees the alarming BAC numbers for herself, “why would he go through such a roundabout way of doing it…”
She looks up and catches Ohsub’s penetrating gaze.
“… through crashing into another vehicle?”
Ohsub’s eyes narrow. “Inspector Oh—are you suggesting foul play?”
Jihwa shakes her head slowly. “There’s not enough evidence.” Not yet. “But if it is, then…”
She turns to her partner, and it’s a testament to how long and how well they work together that Dosoo’s face immediately clears as the realization hits him at the same time.
“… it falls to our jurisdiction,” Jihwa concludes quietly.
A tense silence abruptly settles in the air.
“A case for the Violent Crimes Unit,” Dosoo confirms grimly, “for attempted murder.”
—
“Remember that highly controversial case that no one else is taking?”
“… You’re seriously calling me in the middle of the night to talk about this?”
“I’m taking it.”
“Why—you—first of all, they can’t afford you.”
“I’m taking it pro bono.”
“You’re—Prosecutor Kwon, you do realize what this will mean for your career?”
“Yes. I absolutely do.”
“This is career suicide.”
“Good. I’m ready to be reborn.”
“… What are you saying?”
“Tell the client I’m ready to meet them.”
“It’s the middle of the god damned night!”
“Wake them.”
—
Jaeyi blinks when she returns to the table she has just cleared and sees it devoid of its previous occupants—save for one.
“Where did everyone go?”
“Prosecutor Kwon went outside to take a business call.” Jihwa runs a hand through her hair distractedly as she offers Jaeyi a reassuring smile. “I think I saw Dongsik-ie following him.”
She steps closer as Jaeyi takes some paper towels and begins wiping down the table, much to Jihwa’s amusement; Jaeyi doesn’t really have to since this isn’t her restaurant, but Jihwa supposes habits are hard to break, and Jaeyi will always have a butcher shop owner’s penchant for sanitation.
“Everyone else hurried to Inspector Han’s room,” Jihwa adds as she takes a paper towel for herself and starts to help. “They were all way too excited to learn that Inspector Han is finally going to be relocated from critical care to general medical care and can now receive visitors.”
It makes Jaeyi crack a smile. “I can imagine Inspector Han may be annoyed enough to actually speed up his recovery just so he won’t have to deal with any more of their well-meaning nagging.”
Jihwa chuckles. “Well, if there’s anyone who can achieve the impossible, it’s Han Joowon.”
Her remark is only met with silence, prompting her to look up. She stops, tilts her head thoughtfully, and softly asks:
“You know why it’s you, don’t you?”
Jaeyi pauses. Her bun has become loose and her bangs are falling in front of her eyes, making it easy for Jaeyi to deliberately avoid Jihwa’s searching gaze.
“Of course I do. I was the only logical choice left.”
Jihwa raises her eyebrows when Jaeyi starts rubbing at a non-existent stain on the table with much more vigor than is necessary. “We all know it should have been Prosecutor Kwon or Dongsik-ahjussi, but Han Kihwan remains to be a fucking bastard even from behind bars,” Jaeyi bites out.
Jihwa’s mouth quirks; Jaeyi will find no disagreement with her there.
“But I also understand,” Jaeyi says quietly, “why it couldn’t have been anyone else.”
She stops and leans heavily with the heel of her palms on the table.
“It should’ve been you too, eonnie, but you and Jihoon-ie have to look out for each other too, and you’re already each other’s emergency contact. Everyone else is either affianced, married, has kids, or—”
The next words catch in Jaeyi’s throat. She takes a deep, shaky breath.
“Or has parents to take care of.”
There’s a profound sadness and resignation in Jaeyi’s eyes when she finally looks up to meet Jihwa’s gaze.
“So I understand why Inspector Han chose me, out of everyone. It couldn’t have been anyone else other than the only one of us who has no family left to lose.”
Just like him is left unsaid, but heavily understood.
There’s a soft intake of breath when Jihwa places her hand over Jaeyi’s, gentling the tightness of her fingers by threading theirs together.
“Inspector Han chose you,” Jihwa says softly, “because he knew without a doubt that it’s Dongsik-ie you would call first.”
Jihwa reaches out to tuck stray wisps of Jaeyi’s hair behind her ear, revealing Jaeyi’s beautiful eyes, shimmering with the tears she’s desperately trying to hold back.
“He also knew that you would not make any important medical decisions without consulting with Prosecutor Kwon first.”
Tenderly, she caresses Jaeyi’s cheek with the back of her hand; her fingers feel cold and wet as Jaeyi closes her eyes and the tears begin to fall from beneath those long lashes.
“And Inspector Han knew that just like you always have, you’d find a way to gather all of us here together—for him.”
Jihwa is ready for it, her arms already open to catch Jaeyi as she finally collapses against Jihwa, her whole frame shaking with broken sobs, the weight of everything she’s been carrying since receiving the call from the hospital finally crashing down on her.
Jihwa gathers her close; Jaeyi tightens her arms around Jihwa’s waist and buries her face in Jihwa’s neck to hide her tears.
“Uri Jaeyi. Han Jowoon chose you because you are our home. Because even someone like Han Joowon knows…”
Jihwa presses her mouth against Jaeyi’s hair and murmurs:
“Home is where he will always find his family.”
—
“Prosecutor Kwon.”
Hyeok stiffens at the all too familiar voice behind him. “I have to go,” he mutters quickly and ends the call.
He pockets his mobile phone, takes a deep breath, and turns around.
The lone, imposing figure at the top of the stairs is watching him, silhouette backlighted by the harsh, bluish-gray lights coming from the hospital doors from which he has just exited.
Hyeok swallows. “There’s—somewhere I need to be.”
Dongsik considers him for a long moment. “I know for a fact that you’re not going home,” he finally says quietly. “What’s so important that you need to leave in the middle of the night?”
“Work.”
Hyeok determinedly holds Dongsik’s gaze. He isn’t lying.
“I see.”
Dongsik makes his way slowly down the stairs of the hospital entrance and stops right in front Hyeok.
And it takes Hyeok’s breath away when Dongsik’s entire countenance changes at his next words—as if the weight of the world has finally been lifted from his shoulders as he regards Hyeok with a gentle smile.
“Uri Joowon-ie is finally transferred to general medical care,” Dongsik tells him softly. “He’s asking for you.”
The unexpected revelation sends Hyeok reeling as he sways on his feet. “Good—that’s good,” he stammers. “Tell him—”
Tell him he’s an idiot, tell him he doesn’t need to protect me because that’s my job, because I’m the big brother even though he has never, ever accepted me as his , because it’s my job to give him everything he needs and this, this is the one thing I can do for him, so tell him—
“Tell him… I have work to do.”
Hyeok adamantly tries his best to not flinch under Dongsik’s penetrating, piercing gaze.
Please, he silently, desperately begs. Please let me do this.
“Okay,” Dongsik assents, much to Hyeok’s surprise. “But before you go, Jihoon-ie asked me to give you this.”
Hyeok watches as Dongsik reaches inside his own jacket pocket. He takes something out and hands it over to Hyeok.
He immediately recognizes what it is—and his throat tightens when he sees his own name written on it.
“Uri Joowon-ie made sure you have one, too.”
Dongsik smiles at him.
“Looks like you’re stuck with us, Prosecutor Kwon.”
—
“Please make sure to feed that idiot too.”
Jaeyi’s mouth quirks, knowing she doesn’t need to clarify who it is. “I promise to feed them all. I think I saw some budae jjigae at the hospital cafeteria earlier.”
She pauses, considering. “Does he even like budae jjigae?”
From his position lying prone on the hospital bed, Joowon lets out a snort. “That man has ostentatious tastes. He’d do well to humble himself and expand his horizons.”
Jaeyi clamps her mouth shut as she tries not to smile at the absolute irony of that statement coming from Han Joowon, of all people. “He really is the one who raised you.”
She grins when Joowon glares at her the best he can from beneath all those bandages. “Speaking of Prosecutor Kwon,” she adds, “he told me something interesting about you.”
“Dear god,” Joowon mutters.
Jaeyi laughs. “He actually talks very fondly of you, you know,” she reveals, smiling a little sadly at the way Joowon looks at her in disbelief. “He told me that you’re eligible for citizenship in England.”
Joowon’s gaze is contemplative as Jaeyi lets the weight of the implication settle between them. “Why are you bringing this up?” he quietly asks.
Jaeyi hesitates. “It’s legal there, isn’t it?” She bites her lip. “If you and ahjussi ever were to get married.”
It’s the way Joowon’s expression remains impassive and unsurprised that tells it all.
This is not the first time it has occurred to him.
“Ahjussi fought hard to be in here,” Jaeyi tells him softly, choosing not to expound on how Hyeok had to physically restrain Dongsik from charging through the doors of critical care. “He fought so hard for his right as your partner.”
“But according to the law, he is not my family.”
Jaeyi swallows at the way Joowon tonelessly repeats Hyeok’s earlier statement nearly word for word. “He can be.”
Joowon turns his head on the pillow to look straight into her eyes. She holds his gaze as the smile she gives him is bittersweet. “He can be your rightful family in England. That’s why I’m bringing it up.”
“I’m not going to do that to him.”
That is certainly not the fierce declaration Jaeyi expects. “What?”
The wires and tubes connected to his body all jangle at the heavy sigh Joowon heaves. “I’m not going to bring Lee Dongsik to England.”
Jaeyi furrows her brows. “Why not?”
The smile Joowon offers her with his wounded and bruised lips is gentle and warm. “Because Manyang butcher shop doesn’t exist there.”
It feels like Jaeyi has been stabbed straight through her heart.
“I love him.” Joowon’s no-nonsense statement is powerful in its simplicity and sincerity. “And it is my sole purpose in life to make him happy.”
Whatever doubts Jaeyi had in the past about Han Joowon being deserving of Lee Dongsik’s love and devotion is now completely obliterated in the wake of this vow.
Because Han Joowon isn’t just someone who will move heaven and earth for Lee Dongsik.
“I will never take Lee Dongsik away from his own family.”
For Lee Dongsik, Han Joowon will go through hell.
—
There’s a sharp intake of breath from Gwangyoung. “Attempted murder?”
“Wait.” Jihoon finally speaks up in disbelief at the direction of the discussion and the unwanted gravity of the implication. “Why are we even considering foul play?”
His sister then looks straight at her boss, who’s startled by her sharp gaze.
Ohsub clears his throat. “As you may all very well know, as police officers, we have the duty and responsibility to avoid speculation without hard evidence.”
Jihwa crosses her arms—and Jihoon recognizes that look immediately.
It’s the look of his big sister—the woman of the house—not letting anyone get away with any bullshit.
Ohsub purses his lips and finally relents.
“Ever since I’ve been promoted to Superintendent,” he begins hesitantly, “I’ve been rubbing elbows with a lot of higher ups in the force, and I’ve been privy to a lot of their conversations. Even the ones they never meant for me to hear.”
He turns to face Jihoon gravely. “They all hate Inspector Han.”
Jihoon frowns, instinctively defensive. “Joowon-hyung is not a bad cop.”
“Inspector Han is indeed a very, very good cop,” Dosoo easily agrees; Jihoon furrows his brows, noting the austerity of Dosoo’s tone in what’s supposed to be praise.
“Inspector Han follows the letter of the law and enacts justice on everyone without exception,” Seonnyeo says quietly. “Not even his own self. Not even the one person he loves beyond all measure.”
They fall silent at her words. Dosoo intertwines their fingers together in empathetic solidarity.
“Not even,” Jihwa adds quietly, “his own father.”
“Not even the wealthiest and most powerful cop in the country borne out of a law enforcement dynasty spanning four generations,” Ohsub clarifies morosely. “The Han family network is a systemic power that’s vast and deeply rooted in the force. It’s how they kept the power in the family for decades.”
Ohsub looks grimly at them.
“And Inspector Han just dismantled it all.”
Jihoon’s gaze is arrested by the way Jihwa leans her head back against the wall at her apprehensive words. “It’s always been an open secret that the Han family dynasty had steadily built and strengthened their influence within the Korean National Police Agency until the third of their generation finally reached the very top.”
“Only to be brought down by their own fourth generation.” Dosoo presses his lips together. “The best and smartest of them all.”
Jihoon swallows. “Han Joowon,” he whispers.
Ohsub sighs and rubs his eyebrows tiredly. “Han Kihwan had his dirty fingers dipped in a lot of pies and had plenty of cronies in the force, most of whom lost significant power after his arrest.”
“I bet they lost a hell of a lot of money too,” Gwangyoung mutters.
Ohsub inclines his head in agreement at the point. “Which means Inspector Han has an ever growing list of enemies, and all of them are in the police force.”
“And word on the grapevine is that they’re planning to take him out.”
Jihoon holds his breath at his sister’s words as she looks at him straight in the eye.
“Through whatever means necessary.”
Jihoon’s hands curl into fists as he turns back to Ohsub. “Hyung—Superintendent Kwak—can’t you report them?”
“For what? Talking smack about a coworker?” Ohsub snorts bitterly. “I can’t even record their conversations because it won’t hold up in any court, and I have no evidence of them actually acting on their threats.”
“Until now,” Seonnyeo interjects quietly. “We don’t have any evidence for the act just yet, nor do we have any leads for an actual suspect, but we certainly have plenty of motive for the attempted murder of Han Joowon.”
Finally putting it into actual words makes the declaration weigh heavily upon all of them.
“Wouldn’t his father protect him?”
Everyone turns to Jihoon at his despaired whisper. “Joowon-hyung is still his family.” He looks at them all desperately. “How much of a monster would Han Kihwan be to allow his own son to be killed?”
His throat tightens as his sister leans forward and lets her face fall into her hands.“In the recording Inspector Han submitted, Lee Changjin can be heard asking Han Kihwan if he’s willing to kill his own son.”
Jihoon watches as Jihwa slicks her hair back, lips pressed tight at the mention of her abominable ex-husband. “It’s corroborated by Lee Changjin’s own statement afterward, when he confessed.”
“And later on, after Han Kihwan’s arrest,” Dosoo adds somberly, “Dongsik-hyung and Inspector Han separately submitted their own statements about what really happened that night at the Han residence.”
“And their statements matched,” Ohsub affirms.
Jihoon swallows.
“Han Kihwan pointed a gun at his own son’s head,” Jihwa viciously reveals, a quiet rage simmering beneath the bitten out words. “A loaded gun. With the safety off.”
She screws her eyes shut as she fights to calm her breathing. “We don’t know if Han Kihwan is the one behind this attempted murder—”
“Allegedly,” Ohsub firmly interjects.
“—on Han Joowon’s life,” Jihwa finishes anyway. “What we do know for certain is that even if he isn’t, Han Kihwan is the kind of father who doesn’t care whether or not his son dies, if it means saving his own ass.”
The resounding silence is suffocating.
“Dongsik-hyung should know.”
The loud, bitter laughter Jihwa lets out at Jihoon’s quiet declaration startles everyone in their seats. “No. Dongsik-ie absolutely should not know. There’s a very good reason Inspector Han did not list him as his emergency contact.”
“Emergency contacts are accessible by police authorities during criminal investigations,” Ohsub explains grimly. “Killing Inspector Han is like killing two birds with one stone, because it opens up a case.”
Jihoon feels like he’s going insane at how he can actually follow the deranged train of thought. “And it allows cops access to private records, including that of Dongsik-hyung, if he’s listed as Joowon-hyung’s emergency contact.”
“Yes,” Ohsub affirms. “Because everyone in the force also knows that Inspector Han didn’t bring down Han Kihwan singlehandedly.”
“He had a partner,” Jihwa says quietly, “in Lee Dongsik.”
Jihoon stares at them, unwilling to accept what they’re all implying. “Are you saying that Dongsik-hyung needs to be protected?”
“No,” Ohsub says wryly, “the problem is precisely the opposite.”
“Lee Dongsik brought down the most powerful cop in the country and put an end to a family dynasty just to bring justice to Lee Yuyeon.” The look his sister gives Jihoon is tinged with a strange mixture of bittersweet sadness and fearful trepidation. “How far do you think Lee Dongsik is willing to go this time just to bring justice to Han Joowon?”
Jihoon inhales sharply.
“The whole world,” Jihwa quietly declares, “might as well burn.”
—
“The damn truck driver is alive?!”
“Currently in surgery as we speak. Apparently that bastard Han Joowon swerved just enough in time to avoid most of the impact.”
“Pests really are such a headache to exterminate.”
“What are we going to do if the driver talks?”
“What’s he gonna say? He can’t prove that we drugged him.”
“And Han Joowon? There are so many other ways to get rid of that pest, why are we doing it this way?”
“It’s fitting, isn’t it? The father had been brought down by a DUI. It’s poetic that we bring down the son in exactly the same way.”
—
“Doesn’t Joowon-hyung deserve that?”
Jihoon’s hands are tightly fisted on his lap as he looks up at his sister. “After having a father who won’t think twice about throwing his own son into hell, doesn’t Joowon-hyung deserve to have someone who will instead burn the world for him?”
Everyone falls silent at his breathless question. Jihwa tilts her head to one side, watching him thoughtfully.
“Yes,” she finally assents. “He does.”
Jihoon stares at the way his sister unexpectedly smiles.
“Just—not right now,” Jihwa comments dryly, “while Dongsik-ie is still under probation.”
Jihoon blinks.
Dosoo grins wryly, backing up his partner. “Dongsik-hyung can’t protect or fight alongside Inspector Han if he ends up in prison.”
Whatever Jihoon is about to say next dies on his lips as everyone’s attention is arrested when the doors to critical care suddenly swing open—
—and out walks Jaeyi.
Everyone scrambles to their feet in surprise, anxiously watching her amble towards them with unsteady steps; Jihoon notes how she has her arms wrapped tightly around herself, the tremors in her frame betraying how she’s fiercely trying to control her quiet sobs.
Jihoon feels the ground reeling beneath his feet, dreading the absolute worst. “Noona…?”
Slowly, Jaeyi raises her head, and Jihoon’s chest twists achingly at the sight of her: Jaeyi’s clothes are rumpled, her hair is disheveled, her eyes are haggard and red from crying—
And she’s staring straight at Jihoon.
“Inspector Han is awake. You’re the first person he’s asking to see.”
From his peripheral vision, Jihoon sees the way his sister sharply turns to him in undisguised alarm.
“Me?” Jihoon breathes, heart in his throat. “Why me?”
With shaking hands, Jaeyi reaches inside her jacket and takes out a letter envelope.
The smile she offers Jihoon is trembling.
“He wants you to have this.”
—
“Did you even calculate the route correctly?”
“The timing of the crash was supposed to be perfect. We even planted the road detours they were both forced to take and timed the traffic lights to malfunction at the precise intersection.”
“It should’ve been enough to indict the truck driver for beating the red light. He was supposed to be our scapegoat.”
“Except the idiot actually lost consciousness. The spiked alcohol in his system was way too potent.”
“Go through the crash site and get rid of the dashboard camera so it can’t be submitted as evidence.”
“We can’t.”
“What do you mean we can’t?”
“Someone got to the footage first.”
“Who the fuck would want that footage?”
“That meddlesome fool from Team One of Munju Police Station’s Violent Crimes Unit. Assistant Inspector Kang Dosoo.”
—
This is what a heart attack must feel like, Jaeyi thinks as she rushes forward in a panic, heart hammering violently against her ribs.
“Inspector Han!”
She shrieks, a hand firmly on Joowon’s bandaged chest to stop him from rising from the hospital bed; the insistent warning beeping of all the machines connected to his body isn’t helping her already jangled nerves. “Please let me call the nurses now.”
“Officer Oh,” Joowon says hoarsely instead, and it makes Jaeyi’s gaze snap up to him in surprise. “I need to find Officer Oh.”
Jaeyi furrows her brows. “… Jihoon-ie?” Tendrils of worry color her tone as a creeping sense of dread begins to overtake her at the completely unexpected name.
“Please,” Joowon whispers as he lies back on his bed, and it’s a testament to how utterly weak his current state is that he can’t even put up a physical fight against Jaeyi.
It makes her simultaneously ache for him and feel utterly enraged on his behalf.
“Please find him,” Joowon is begging her. “I need to give something to him.”
Jaeyi squeezes her eyes shut. Calm. Inspector Han needs you to be calm, damn it. “Okay,” she relents, “but only if you behave and stay still.”
He has the absolute audacity to smirk at her. “All right, mother.”
“I am not—!”
Jaeyi takes a deep lungful of breath and lets it out slowly as she runs her hands over her face. “Dear god, ahjussi really is the only one who can match your insanity,” Jaeyi mutters between her fingers.
Joowon blinks at her innocently.
Jaeyi scowls. “Fine. What is it that you need to give to Jihoon-ie?”
“It’s in my coat—”
“I just told you to stay still—”
Joowon seems to finally take pity on her—that, or the way she inadvertently pitches her tone incredibly high with worry really does sound like a mother scolding her wayward son. “Forgive me,” he murmurs, looking appropriately chastised. “I just—need to know it’s there.”
Jaeyi sighs, heart softening despite herself. “I think the nurses put away the clothes you were wearing—”
—when you almost died and we almost lost you—
“—when they found you. I’ll see if I can find your coat.”
Joowon is compliantly quiet and still as Jaeyi turns her back on him. She rummages through the pile of clothes she vaguely remembers that the nurses have set aside by the bedside drawers when they first wheeled in the hospital bed—with Han Joowon lying on it deathly still.
Jaeyi firmly presses her lips together and staunchly refuses to let her attention linger on the bloodstains still caked on the clothes, refusing to even think about how much blood Joowon has actually lost.
She inwardly vows to get rid of the stains before Dongsik finds them. She refuses to think about what will happen if he does.
Maybe she should just burn the clothes entirely, before Dongsik ends up burning something else.
“Yoo Jaeyi-ssi,” Joowon speaks up softly from behind her, pulling her wandering thoughts back to the task at hand.
She finds the coat at the bottom of the pile, the dark color thankfully camouflaging whatever bloodstains still managed to splatter on the outer piece of clothing.
“It’s inside the pocket,” Joowon murmurs. “You’ll find a letter envelope.”
Jaeyi begins patting down the coat and reaches inside the first pocket she finds.
She ends up pulling out Joowon’s wallet. It falls open just as she fully intends to put it aside.
Jaeyi stares.
She recognizes the background with how often she’s been at Okcheon lake. She recognizes that it’s summer too, with how clear the skies are and how glaringly bright the sun is shining, as well as the thin tank top worn for the heat.
It’s the way Lee Dongsik is looking back at her that takes her breath away.
His curls are caught in a frozen summer breeze—it’s obviously been a while since this photo has been taken, since Dongsik hasn’t had his haircut yet in this one. The sunshine from above highlights the fond glow of his eyes as he looks lovingly at the camera, the corners of his mouth softened by a tender smile.
It doesn’t take a genius to figure out who has taken the photo. There’s only one person in the entire world whom Dongsik ever looks at like this.
Like he’s looking at a piece of paradise—his deliverance and salvation all at once.
Like Lee Dongsik has finally been allowed inside the elusive gates of heaven.
“Did you find it?”
Jaeyi drops the wallet on the bedside table as if it scalds her. “I—no—a letter envelope right,” she stammers, feeling weirdly guilty about accidentally discovering what she knows for sure is meant to be kept private.
“Yes.” Joowon sounds amused. “It’s in the other pocket.”
“Right.” Jaeyi responds distractedly. Pull yourself together, she silently admonishes herself. “Here, I think I found it.”
Her fingers close upon the envelope and pulls it out.
Behind her, she hears Joowon draw a sharp intake of breath. “Can you check if it’s all there?”
Jaeyi blinks. Check what?
She opens the envelope—and is entirely taken aback to see all of their names printed on each one.
Han Joowon. Lee Dongsik. Oh Jihoon. Oh Jihwa. Yoo Jaeyi. Hwang Gwangyoung. Kang Dosoo. Im Seonnyeo. Kwak Ohsub.
Her eyebrows rise at the last name she finds.
Kwon Hyeok.
Slowly, Jaeyi turns around to face Joowon once more, the envelope carefully cradled in her hands.
She’s thoroughly nonplussed.
“Concert tickets?”
Joowon looks relieved. “Music festival tickets, to be precise,” he clarifies. “Officer Oh told me that he once promised to take her when he was still an idol trainee, because he wanted to perform for her at a music festival when he debuted. Unfortunately his idol career fell through, so he wasn’t able to fulfill his promise to her.”
Jaeyi’s brows crinkle in confusion. “Her…?”
“I figured the timing is now right,” Joowon murmurs, “considering the date of the festival.”
Jaeyi’s gaze falls back to the tickets. She takes one out—the one with her own name printed on it—and inspects it carefully.
Her knees suddenly wobble and she falls back to her seat as soon as she recognizes the date. Her hand flies to her mouth to silence the shocked cry that threatens to burst forth.
“It’s a celebration,” Joowon says softly, “of Kang Minjeong’s birthday.”
—
“ Kang Dosoo? No wonder he sounds familiar. That’s one of the names.”
“What names?”
“On the tickets Han Joowon bought from me.”
—
“Lee Dongsik.”
Hyeok feels the other man’s eyes on him as he carefully pockets the ticket close to his heart.
His hands are surprisingly steady.
“Find the fuckers who hurt our Joowon,” he whispers fiercely, “and leave the rest to me.”
The iron grip on his arm is unyielding when he turns to leave.
“Hyeok-ah,” Dongsik hisses through gritted teeth. “What the hell are you planning to do?”
Hyeok’s gaze travels from Dongsik’s hand all the way up to his eyes. Privately he notes that the fire burning in that gaze is flaring much in the same way as Joowon’s eyes once did when he implored Hyeok to cut off the rotten rope tying him to Han Kihwan.
It’s almost like looking into the eyes of another brother.
“I told you inside that hospital that according to the law, you are not Han Joowon’s family.”
It satisfies Hyeok immensely to see Dongsik looking so unsettled and taken aback at the slow, wolfish grin that creeps across Hyeok’s face.
After all, Lee Dongsik may be forgetting who actually raised Han Joowon.
“It’s time to change the law.”
—
Supreme Court recognizes rights of same-sex couples to receive spousal health insurance coverage
Korea's Supreme Court recognized new rights for same-sex couples Thursday, saying the state must provide health insurance for a gay man's partner in a landmark ruling that left activists weeping for joy.
"National Health Insurance should recognize spousal insurance coverage for same-sex couples," the court ruled, with activists breaking into cheers as the verdict was read out.
The verdict, which cannot be appealed as it comes from the country's highest court, means common-law spouses of the same sex can now register as dependents on their partners' health insurance.
"It is discrimination based on sexual orientation to exclude the couple just because they are same-sex," the court ruled.
"It is a discriminatory act that violates human dignity and values, the right to pursue happiness, freedom of privacy, and the right to be equal before the law, and the degree of infringement is serious."
—
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Text Message
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Common-law spouses?
What happened to hi, hello, good evening? Do old men like you really forget your manners as you age?
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Hi, hello, good evening Prosecutor Kwon. I’m also only six years older than you, you little shit. Common-law spouses?
De Facto Marriage in legal terms, yeah
My client sued the National Health Insurance Service because it terminated benefits for his partner after discovering they were a gay couple
The NHIS is legally required to grant spousal coverage benefits even to common-law partners, and both the Seoul High Court and the Supreme Court mandated that the NHIS reinstate my client’s dependent benefits
JOOWON’S LUNATIC I didn’t know De Facto Marriage in our country was also applicable to queer couples
It is now
JOOWON’S LUNATIC I see
JOOWON’S LUNATIC So how exactly can a De Facto Marriage be legally established under the law?
(i) Mutual intent to form a marital relationship
(ii) The existence of substance of marital life
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Can you possibly elaborate on that without all the legal mumbo jumbo?
You know, normally I charge clients for consultations like this
By the hour
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Eh, just put it on your brother’s tab
The court looks into various factors such as the duration of cohabitation, the existence of a marriage ceremony, and relationship with other family members
My client already had a public ceremony with his partner three years ago, which was attended by all of their friends and family, and they’ve also been living together since way before the wedding
JOOWON’S LUNATIC So you’re saying the relationship needs to be publicized as akin to an actual marriage
Yeah, basically
JOOWON’S LUNATIC I see
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Prosecutor Kwon
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Prosecutor Kwon
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Hyeok-ah
For the love of god Lee Dongsik it is three in the fucking morning and I have a court hearing in five hours STOP BLOWING UP MY NOTIFICATIONS I NEED TO SLEEP
JOOWON’S LUNATIC How do you feel about officiating our wedding ceremony?
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Are you there? Yah, did you actually fall asleep on me?
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Prosecutor Kwon
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Prosecutor Kwonnn
JOOWON’S LUNATIC Hyeok-ahhhhh
I’m putting all of this on your husband’s tab
Also
It’s about damn time
—
“What made you say yes?”
“Technically, he said yes.”
“It’s not a competition of who loves the other more, you know.”
“I certainly don’t want to lose.”
“So that’s why you asked him? The last time we talked, you were adamant about keeping your distance to protect him.”
“That was before I made the unforgivable mistake of failing to be by his side when he needed me the most because of a miscalculation I made last year.”
“You mean when you almost died.”
“Don’t be dramatic, I made a full recovery in record time, according to my physical therapists.”
“Again—not a competition, Inspector Han. So what made you decide to finally publicize your relationship?”
“The law changes everything.”
“It’s amazing, isn’t it? What Prosecutor Kwon did for you.”
“He charges me by the hour.”
“Well, you and Dongsik-ie will legally have joint finances soon, so I’m sure you’ll be able to afford Prosecutor Kwon’s rates.”
“Dongsik-ssi is actually not happy about that. He said he doesn’t want access to my finances, and while I understand that it’s because he also doesn’t want to have anything to do with my father’s dirty money, the fact remains that he of all people deserves to be paid reparations by Han Kihwan. Why are you grinning like that?”
“Only you, Inspector Han, will blackmail Lee Dongsik into becoming filthy rich through a De Facto Marriage because he won’t accept your money otherwise. You two lunatics truly deserve each other.”
“… I’m trying to ascertain whether that is a compliment or an insult.”
“So—joint finances, joint custody of properties. You’ll also now legally be the co-owner of the Okcheon lake residence. It’s all just a formality anyway, since you two have been living together there for years now.”
“How did you—”
“Jihoon-ie talks. A lot.”
“Finances and property aren’t my main concern anyway, because unlike legal marriages, common-law spouses aren’t automatically granted inheritance should one of us die.”
“Pretty sure neither of you are going to let that happen in the first place.”
“I’m certainly not gonna die before him.”
“Not really a competition Inspector Han, considering you’re thirteen years younger.”
“What I mean is that I simply won’t survive without him. Because I don’t want to.”
“That’s—Inspector Han—”
“And because common-law spouses are still legally mandated to uphold the same vows of fidelity, I am looking forward to him keeping his vow to spend the rest of his life with me.”
“You’re—blackmailing him to keep himself alive for you.”
“That is the gist of it, yes.”
“Huh. Well, whatever works to keep him safe, I guess.”
“It is a grave lesson that the unfortunate situation last year—“
“You almost dying—”
“—has irrevocably taught me. It is better to protect him by keeping him close instead of keeping him at a distance.”
“And the privilege extended to common-law spouses in legally refusing to testify against each other has absolutely no bearing on your decision to ask for Dongsik-ie’s hand in marriage? Publicizing your relationship like this makes you even more of a target.”
“From what’s left of my father’s fallen network?”
“No, I don’t think Han Kihwan’s men will be a problem anymore. I’m more concerned about the homophobic vultures inevitably swarming you both because of your soon to be public marriage.”
“De Facto Marriage. The spousal privilege is not automatically granted in the same way as legal marriages, because every protection and privilege granted to common-law spouses will have to go through further legal proceedings to be granted by the court.”
“It’s a good thing you have a cutthroat lawyer on your side.”
“Whose exorbitant rates are preposterous.”
“It’s worth it though, isn’t it?”
“For Lee Dongsik? Always.”
“I’m really happy for you, Joowon-ah. Both of you. You’ll show me the photos, right?”
“Of what?”
“The wedding ceremony. I’m sure it’s going to be magical.”
“Why would I show you photos?”
“I—I just thought—I mean, you don’t have to if you don’t want to—”
“Why would I show you photos when you can take them yourself?”
“… What?”
“You’ll be out on parole soon, won’t you? For good behavior.”
“How did you—”
“I have, shall we say, a ridiculously overcompensated lawyer working on it.”
“… But why? Why would he—why would you do this for me?”
“There’s a reason we set the date of the wedding ceremony after your prison sentence has ended.”
“I—Dongsik-ie didn’t invite me.”
“You’re not his guest. You’re mine, Park Jeongje-ssi.”
—
“I see,” Gwangyoung murmurs. “I’ll take note of that. Thank you for informing me.”
Jihwa looks up as Gwangyoung ends his call. She sees the way he frowns when he sees precisely who’s missing.
“Where’s Dongsik-hyung?”
“Where do you think?” Jaeyi looks incredibly drained but the smile she gives them all is much more weightless now. “It’s going to be an impossible challenge to pry ahjussi away from Inspector Han’s bedside from now on, unless someone has a pretty compelling reason.”
“Nothing less than the apocalypse happening,” Seonnyeo says amusedly as the tightness of her shoulders finally relaxes.
Dosoo grins at his wife when she lays her head on his shoulder. “Maybe not even then.”
“We’re going to have to ask the nurses to bring in two trays for every hospital meal,” Jihoon chuckles, puffy eyes still red-rimmed but brighter. “And two changes of clothes every night and day too.”
“The hospital bill will also definitely double,” Ohsub says wryly. “Too bad the NHIS doesn’t recognize Inspector Han as Dongsik-ie’s dependent, though I’m sure Inspector Han can afford to pay for everything anyway.”
“It’s not really the money that’s the issue,” Jihoon protests, “but the principle of equality. Especially in the eyes of the law.”
“Yeah well,” Ohsub shrugs as he leans back with a sigh. “The world has never treated everyone equally and that’s never gonna change, kid.”
“I am not a kid,” Jihoon grumbles.
Jihwa smiles and reaches out to ruffle her baby brother’s hair affectionately. Across from her, she notes the way Gwangyoung takes his seat with a sort of quiet tension, and it makes Jihwa pause.
“Everything okay, Gwangyoung-ah? Who was that on the phone?”
He looks up at her with uncharacteristic seriousness. “A friend from the force. Someone who has access to the traffic cameras.”
Jihwa feels her pulse begin to quicken.
Ohsub narrows his eyes. “Can this friend be trusted?”
“Yes,” Gwangyoung says firmly, “because I asked him to review the route Inspector Han had taken tonight before the collision.”
The mood in the hospital corridor instantly changes at his words.
“And what did he find out?” Jihwa prompts impatiently.
Gwangyoung presses his lips together. “We all know that Inspector Han is someone who sticks rigidly to routine. Whenever he gets off work, there’s only two routes he ever takes for either of two destinations: Manyang butcher shop, or Okcheon lake.”
“Wherever ahjussi is,” Jaeyi murmurs.
Gwangyoung tilts his head. “Tonight however, he made a detour.”
Jihwa’s eyebrows rise. “To where?”
“That’s where it gets strange,” Gwangyoung says in frustration. “The cameras coincidentally malfunctioned just as he started to break away from his normal route.”
That’s not a coincidence.
“The tickets.”
Everyone turns to Jaeyi in surprise; Jihoon clutches the letter envelope a little tighter against his chest.
Jaeyi meets Jihwa’s gaze. “Inspector Han told me that he went to pick up the tickets tonight.”
“Where though?” Dosoo pipes up. “Ticketing offices are already closed by the time his shift is over.”
“That’s not even the most questionable part.”
Jihwa turns at the way her brother hesitantly speaks up; his brows are furrowed in contemplation as he gazes at the envelope in his hands. He takes a deep breath and meets Jihwa’s eyes.
“The tickets for the festival were already sold out months ago,” Jihoon says quietly. “I’ve been wondering how Joowon-hyung got these tickets in the first place.”
“Some government offices actually get free complimentary tickets from entertainment companies who want to cut through the red tape,” Ohsub points out. “It’s technically bribery, but unfortunately it’s common practice for crooked officials taking advantage of the perks. Maybe Inspector Han’s department got a hold of these tickets.”
Jaeyi swiftly shakes her head. “No, Inspector Han definitely said he bought them.”
“Also—” Dosoo’s eyebrows fly to his hairline. “Han Joowon? Accepting bribery?”
“… All right, well, point taken,” Ohsub mutters. “It was just a theory.”
Government offices…
“Seonnyeo-ah,” Jihwa calls her out. “Can you go through the list of clients the truck driver delivers to, and see if there are any government offices along his route tonight?”
Ohsub furrows his brows. “What are you up to, Inspector Oh?”
“Gathering evidence,” Jihwa answer simply, startling all of them when she starts rattling instructions. “Jihoon-ah, if it’s true that the festival is already sold out, and Jaeyi says that Inspector Han only got the tickets tonight, it means he bought them secondhand.”
She gestures to the letter envelope in Jihoon’s hands.
“All tickets have corresponding control numbers that are unique to each one. You and Jaeyi should go through the secondhand market online to see if anyone posted photos or screenshots of the tickets with these control numbers and find out who the seller is. Ask Prosecutor Kwon to send you photos of his own ticket too. Dosoo-ya, I need you to get the footage of the dashboard camera from both vehicles involved in the crash, asap. And Gwangyoung-ah.”
Gwangyoung snaps to attention at being addressed.
“Your informant.” Jihwa narrows her eyes. “Who does he work for?”
—
“There’s just one thing I’d like to know, Park Jeongje-ssi.”
“Anything, Joowon-ah.”
“What exactly did you mean when you said my father’s men won’t be a problem anymore?”
—
Dongsik’s grip on Hyeok tightens.
“I know you won’t appreciate hearing this from me, Hyeok-ah,” he hisses, “but I will never forgive you if you make Joowonie go through the agonizing pain of losing the only sibling he’s ever known—”
Even through several layers of clothing, Hyeok feels the way Dongsik’s fingernails dig sharply into his skin.
“—because I know exactly what that feels like.”
Hyeok heart spasms.
“Then you’ll understand precisely what I’m about to ask of you.”
He grasps Dongsik’s arm with equal fervor, his gaze burning with equal intensity.
“I beg of you, Lee Dongsik,” Hyeok invokes beseechingly, casting away all of his pride for the one person he’s risking it all for. “Please don’t let me lose my brother.”
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Jihwa stares at all the undeniable, irrefutable evidence in her hands.
It all points to a single entity.
Slowly, she raises her head—and sees her family, her team, all watching her.
Waiting.
Jihwa takes a deep breath and looks at her boss.
“Superintendent Kwak,” she says solemnly, “I formally ask for your permission for Violent Crimes to pursue and prioritize this case.”
She glances at her partner. Dosoo nods once—firmly.
Resolutely.
Ohsub’s expression is grave when Jihwa turns back to him.
“And I’m going to need a search and seizure warrant for—”
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“The Community Safety and Traffic Bureau will be welcoming new employees today, so you all better be on your best behavior.”
“Why? These newbies are going to go through our hazing anyway.”
“What are their jobs?”
“Management changed agencies due to budget cuts, so there’s going to be new custodians on board.”
“You mean glorified janitors.”
“A lot of them are ex-cons who are out on parole or probation, so it’s not like they have the best career options to choose from.”
“Who would willingly choose a career in cleaning toilets, right?”
“Ah here comes one of them now. According to his file, his probation just ended, so he’s now a free man once again.”
“Free to once again commit crimes and land himself back in prison.”
“Who knows, maybe this one isn’t a lunatic for once. You over there, you’re new, right? What’s your name?”
The man in question stops. Slowly, he takes off the cap of his custodian uniform, revealing a wild mess of curls underneath.
Everyone takes an unwitting step back at the maniacal glint of those eyes as the man takes a deep, ninety-degree bow.
“My name is…”
The man straightens, his mouth stretching in a wide, serpentine grin of a psychopath, rivaling that of a serial killer—
—and they collectively feel their heart stop as they all instantly recognize who he is.
And somehow they know, without a doubt, that they’re all about to burn.
“Lee Dongsik, at your service.”
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모든 게 다 타 버리고 남아있는 한 줌이여 Ash, ash, ash, ash 방주를 새롭게 지어 나아가 저 세계로 Ash, ash, ash, ash
Oh, the handful that's left from everything burning Ash, ash, ash, ash Let's build a new ark and go out into the world Ash, ash, ash, ash
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Also posted at AO3
For @eonni92, whose multiple, precious gifts of artistry I wholeheartedly treasure, and for whom I can only humbly offer this story as my gift in return.
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Title and lyrics from "Ash" by SEVENTEEN
References:
The landmark Supreme Court ruling recognizing the rights of same-sex couples is based on factual events in South Korea, as publicized in July 2024. A portion of the article from The Korea Times is lifted word for word for the purposes of this story. You can read the article in full here. The only fictional aspect in this story with regards to the actual lawsuit is who the prosecutor in charge was 😉
Both the Oh family background and the Han family background are all canon, based on the character backgrounds in the official script book by Beyond Evil writer Kim Sujin herself. You can read the English translations of the script book here, as translated by @rumpleteasa, who is a remarkable gem of a reliable resource for the fandom.
Thank you so much for your time in reading this story, and always remember:
It's not "blood is thicker than water" but "the blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb".
May you all find your own Manyang butcher shop, and may you all redefine what it truly means to be family.
#beyond evil#my fic#괴물#jwds#주원동식#season 2 or a series special if it were to happen#because the case isn't over just yet#manyang family ensemble#non-linear narrative#case fic
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#one of the best spn episodes up there w red meat's non linear narrative but objectively better#mine#samdean#dean winchester#sam winchester#spn
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⚠️Blood!⚠️
Left -> right
#i werent meant to write angst#i did not rewatch that scene i would explode#non-linear narrative is cool!#i was like how about one of them doesnt believe in the afterlife but eventually does because it'd be a happy thought for both of them#i don't like yuichiro i love him#kny fanart#demon slayer#muichiro tokito#kimetsu fanart#kimetsu no yaiba#demon slayer muichiro#demon slayer tokito#artists on tumblr#yuichiro tokito#kny art#kny spoilers
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Humans can be heard yelling from one of the bedrooms. An alien crewmate, nicknamed Bob, goes to check it out, fearing the worst.
"plus 4, Uno."
"you bitch!"
the humans are gathered in a circle on the ground with colorful cards. one of them notices him.
"oh hey Bob, wanna join us? we're playing Uno."
Bob shakes his head and backs out of the room carefully.
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#my first contribution to#humans are space orcs#brain barf#not beta read#non linear narrative#humans are space capybaras#humans are space badgers#humans are space raccoons#humans are space australians#humans are space oddities#humans are deathworlders#humans are confusing#humans are scary
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#the odyssey along with the Iliad are The literary works that ancient greek culture-- arts worldview cosmology morality-- developed around#as well as works that created the idea of a greek identity and an aegean/mediterranean history from the fragmentary traditions and memories#of the bronze age and earlier that managed to survive through the fucking dark age#if chaucer and the bible had a baby that's how important these works were for greek identity and understanding of themselves and the world#the odyssey on it's own is an incredible preservation of regional folk tales and trickster culture heroes#and a priceless glimpse into ancient greek understanding of their past as well as the political and social structures of the archaic period#and also an incredibly pioneering narrative structure that mimics the circular travels of its protagonist with its non-linear format#if a forgettable children's book series that doesn't even represent the mythology well is That for you then you need help frankly#and if it's not then shut up about it already#(just say you're a 28 year old with a 4th grade reading level and go)#like I dislike these books for a variety of reasons but it's takes like this that make me HATE them#SHUT UP about these GODDAMN BOOKS#greek mythology#ancient greece#anti pjo#anti percy jackson#lore and more
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see i dont think you can blame meat dirk for killing candy dirk when they were both the same guy until 10 minutes before dirk went suicide mode. that being said we can probably blame gamzee for this
that one is tricky. dirk was so scared of existing on the same timeline as gamzee because of the pre retcon memories that he suddenly remembered of him getting his ass handed to him
#d talks#ask#that is true story wise#but at the same time someone's supposed to be writing the story#idk what rules the narrative is supposed to have or if it can be non linear#the gratuitous method of suicide both is a symptom of candy dirk being unhinged with it but also adds fuel to the idea that meat dirk#is gleefully writing this
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tbh i dont need every important detail about a character to mentioned in the main story. im okay with certain details being "optional"/"missable" side content. does it break the flow of the story? does it fit in with the themes? is the creator willing to devote as big a pathway as certain stuff would need in a main narrative to be explored as seen fit? or - does the relatively greater obscurity of the character detail within the story allow the "missable" nature of the trait to connect the reality with the fiction? in a game, would you have to put a lot of work in to find out this trait because the character would never say it outright? is the character relatively minor? or - is this a great reward for people who seek out more things to learn about the story/characters/world? are you rewarding interested readers for caring and for reading? not everything has to be immediately accessible in the main text. some things are fun as optional content, and being so allows that and the main story to breathe easier.
#chirps#<- guy who enjoys learning about secrets and potential non-linear experiences of the narrative#like it's good to reward people when they read/explore more. and hearing whispers of those rewards compels other people to read/explore mor
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twenty-two
That year, the seventh month dies on a Wednesday and they leave town.
for dearest @turanga4, if a little belated. thank you for being so wonderfully you.

preview below the cut, full piece on AO3:
It has them both feeling like kids again, like sneaking out— stuffing his rucksack with shorts and sun cream after work in the dead of night, rolling the top to force it closed around a broken drawstring. By the time he’s shouldering the bag she checks her watch and it’s gone midnight. Twelve minutes into the thirty-first.
She doesn’t acknowledge it, but now he’s looking at her with his brow furrowed and a question forming on his mouth. She kisses it away, sweet and nutty from leftover Thai. Takes his hand from her hip, locks the flat behind them. She’s thinking they just might Apparate somewhere way out west this time— Charlie says California’s beautiful— they could nudge right up to where yesterday’s only half gone, buy him another day before he’s older than his parents ever got to be.
But they won’t.
He leads the way down the steps and around the corner. There’s hardly a breeze, but the night is cool on the back of her neck as the street slumbers under orange lamplight. A block away, back doors of pubs are clanging open for closing staff, bin bags thrown in the skips, keys and change jangling en route to bus stops. The light over the mouth of their usual alleyway is burnt out, so they slip into the dark.
He’s looking at her now, tugging her close till she can smell the soap and linen from his shower, something a little richer in the crook of his neck like the cologne on his top shelf. He’s motionless, concentrating— it’s always like this for a second before Apparating so far. Last week for a laugh she offered to book a Portkey this time instead, something about him getting on in years. Earned herself a spatter of marinara flicked from a spoon.
“I can do it,” she offers now. She’s already picturing cobblestones and stucco and a blue door.
“S’fine,” he murmurs into her hair.
He twists, and for a long moment they’re somewhere between here and there.
#this one's for when we don't care much to celebrate#yet another birthday by the sea#hinny#harry potter#ginny weasley#summer 2002#non-linear narrative#drabbles
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Deadfire is a game of all time, that's it, that's the post
#hablaty#is it perfect? No#does it suffer from being a non-linear game with a looser structure than its predecessor which had a tight and strong narrative structure?#yes#Is it also one of the best rpgs to come out in recent years? Absolutely yes#It deserves all the love and all the recognition that game is something special#and devs could learn a lot from it
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any recs for fics with unique formats/elements (non-linear narrative, second pov, epistolary, etc) and fics with flowery language / good prose ? hope this makes sense lol
thanks for the work you do on the blog, i hope you have a great day!
Hi, this is a very interesting ask! We love unusual elements in stories and tried to put together some very different examples. Hope you have a great day too and happy reading 💕📖
what the night does to the day - Ian and Mickey have been best friends since childhood. Sometimes things just fit together perfectly.
Thicker Than Forget - Ian is a poet. Mickey is his recently-corporal muse. They eat an absurd amount of stupidly named ice cream, try to find beauty in things, and fall hopelessly in love.
Suncatcher - He grins. “Maybe, but you still wanna find out if it’s true.”
Unsent - Five emails that sit in drafts for over a year. One reply.
and all the moments in between - When people look back at the past, they're only seeing the standout moments, never the whole fucking picture.
a lot like love - Ian wants more than what Mickey is offering. Mickey doesn’t believe he deserves to be loved.
Minutes - A moment of life post S5, canon divergent.
There is no me (without you) - An exploration of Ian and Mickey's respective insecurities and past trauma as we follow them through a tough couple of weeks as newlyweds.
the sun, chasing the moon - Ian waits for Mickey.
The Art of Maintaining Moral Ambiguity - AU in which Mickey was raised in a shitty New Jersey beach town and Ian just wanted to see the ocean.
Postcards From Mexico - Everyone likes getting postcards.
Chapter 8: Hey Mick - A letter from Ian to Mickey in juvie (set between seasons 1 and 2).
The Buzz Under His Skin - Ian's manic thoughts, set in early S4 after he runs away.
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Ok last bit of TOTK saltiness for now but can we agree that trying to tell a linear story via the same collecting memories system was fucking dumb as hell
#fires posts#ramblings#totk#tears of the kingdom#It works in BOTW for a multitude of reasons#The story is non-linear and we KNOW what happens. We just don't know WHY#it serves more like snapshots of Link and Zelda's life than an overarching narrative. Meaning it's fine to get things out of order#and ultimately... the past is behind us. BOTW is as much about the future#MEANWHILE#TOTK is trying to tell a linear timeline of events in the most un-linear way possible#You HAVE to do the glyphs in order or risk being confused af#I can't imagine getting the 🗡 glyph early and having that plot turning point completely spoiled for eg#So you pretty much have to just traipse round the map to find the glyphs one by one (a boring chore)#Literally such a dumbass decision im sorry. At least the glyphs are pretty ig
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💙 foliage by antebunny
💙 foliage
by antebunny (@antebunny)
G, 7k, Wangxian
Summary: Wei Wuxian surrenders in Nightless City. Jin Guangshan, knowing that he's coreless and weaponless, organizes a night hunt with 1,000 Jin disciples where Wei Wuxian is the prey. He shouldn't have underestimated Wei Wuxian. Kay's comments: This is the most BAMF Wei Wuxian story out there and I absolutely adore it. He surrenders and has to fight 1000 Jin disciples an then he comes out on top and vanishes. In the meantime, the world changes. The non-linear narrative worked really well in this story and I loved the shifts in perspective as you learn more about what happened after Wei Wuxian surrendered and why he surrendered. There's a second part too, about his return. Excerpt: “A-Xian, please…stop. Just stop,” Jiang Yanli begs, spending the last of her breath gasping out a barely coherent sentence to her little brother. “Okay,” Wei Wuxian says, desperate as always to make her happy. “Okay. If that’s what you want.” He raises his flute to his lips, calming the fierce corpses currently rampaging around Nightless City. Jiang Yanli feels the world going blurry, but forces herself to focus for her brother. Wei Wuxian gently picks her up and passes her to Jiang Cheng, who came running over as soon as he heard her. “A-Yuan,” he says to Jiang Cheng urgently. “Please, Jiang Cheng, A-Yuan–he’s just a child.” Then he backs away, hands at his side, and turns to face the assembled cultivators. “Wei Wuxian!” The sharp voice of Sect Leader Nie. “What is this? Are you surrendering?” Wei Wuxian looks back, once, at Jiang Yanli. No, she wants to say, don’t do it. A-Xian, I came to tell you that I don’t blame you. I know it’s not your fault. I know you would never. Don’t surrender to them, A-Xian, there’s something rotten in the heart of Jinlintai and they’re not interested in justice. But she can’t. She’s losing consciousness in her brother’s arms, and she can do nothing but watch as Wei Wuxian looks away with resolve on his face. She’s never hated herself more for being weak.
pov alternating, non-linear narrative, canon divergence, somebody lives/not everybody dies, angst, hurt/comfort, angst with a happy ending, jiang yanli lives, bamf wei wuxian
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(Please REBLOG as a signal boost for this hard-working author if you like – or think others might like – this story.)
#Wangxian Fic Rec#The Untamed#Wangxian#MDZS#Kay's Rec#Kay's Favorite#November 2023#short fic <15k#Gen#foliage#antebunny#pov alternating#non-linear narrative#canon divergence#somebody lives/not everybody dies#angst#hurt/comfort#angst with a happy ending#jiang yanli lives#bamf wei wuxian
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"the harsh sun beats down on dirt roads full of pebbles and dust.
its harsh rays peel the paint on the slowly decaying houses. all of the grass has long since died in the heat.
most of the houses are empty, and they have been so for a long time. some of the houses have sun-bleached curtains flapping in empty wind, shattered glass from once clean windows now littering the ground in thousands of dirty, yellowed shards like fallen, tarnished stars."
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or, squiddo and ashswag go ghost hunting.
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#where have i been? ive been ill#this isnt a drawing but i think its cool enough to be a daily >:)#i was going to copy-paste it into tumblr but the formatting is really important to the Experience#red-green-blue au#writing#non linear narrative#horror#(?) i guess#creative writing#short story#i guess???#poetry#(but not really)#squiddo#the real squiddo#daily squiddo#mcyt#ashswag#lifesteal smp
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"that's literally impossible for me to pronounce, I'm calling you Bob now." The new human, Mia, stated looking at the repair man of the ship. "Y'know, like Bob The Builder?"
The newly dubbed 'Bob' did not infact know. Their technician, another human named Kaya, seemed to find this amusing.
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#humans are space orcs#non linear narrative#not beta read#brain barf#humans are space raccoons#humans are space badgers#humans are space capybaras#humans are space australians#humans are space oddities#humans are deathworlders#humans are confusing
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