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this is a PSA to writers, not just tf ones:
please PLEASE do not overwrite accents. if you’re trying to convey one, add things here or there, drop the g in -ing, say “ya” or “‘a” instead of “of”, but I am BEGGING you to leave it at that. I read a fic with a character’s dialogue that was so over-accented it was unintelligible. It wasn’t even English anymore. I genuinely could not understand a single word they said. Remember. We are not hearing them speak. We cannot ask them to repeat themselves more coherently. Write for the reader
#Sorry but it had to be said#There was a baby involved and I cannot even begin to describe the hell that was those convos#So uh yeah#happy writing guys#This has been unsolicited advice from thatwooshkai#transformers#writing advice
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I genuinely think that If natsuyuu were more popular on here misuzu would have become a tumblr sexyman
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The reason why I can't behind any of the characters or things they do is that they're made into hypocrites.
You got Mina and Eijirou who're against bullies yet are friends with Bakugou don't do anything when he gets onto All Might.
Hawks who had a past with an abusive father and when Endeavor is exposed as one, he doesn't react or say anything about it.
Izuku with his quirkless past yet doesn't offer any sympathy towards those like him, like how he tried to make Nighteye laugh or Aoyama.
And then there's Aizawa... the guy's a walking hypocrite so I don't feel like going into any of the things he did.
All this makes it difficult to really get behind and like these characters when they contradict their characteristics this much all to make the worse characters look good.
Hi @theloganator101 👋,
Exactly this. Hori's characters act how HE wants them to to service the plot rather than what would fit their characters. So we have situations like this where they become hypocrites and bad things are implied about them. We have talked about Aizawa before so I'll focus on Izuku, Kirishima, Mina and Hawks.
Izuku - was quirkless, was horrifically abused by Bakugou for this as well as daring to try to help him out a river once.
Also Izuku - is NOT allowed once to reflect on the similarities between Aoyama and himself. Is NOT allowed to think one bit on his quirkless past or the horrific bullying (abuse) he went through. Does not seek to change the status quo now that he is a part of it. Or think about how HE could change how quirkless are being treated. This in my most charitable interpretation could be Izuku's self hatred coming out full force, he doesn't want to think about when he was quirkless so he doesn't. But this could also be construed as arrogance, stupidity and narrow minded-ness.
Izuku - knows in graphic detail the Todofam situation, is best friends with Todoroki Shoto and confronted Endeav for being a POS when he first met him.
Also Izuku - Acts like a fanboy of Endeavor in the agency arc and defends Endeavor to Dabi's face (another of Endeavor's victims.) - This puts a sour taste in my mouth not going to lie, this reads as Izuku thinking, 'because he's nice to me and he says he's going to change all is good now!' Also (unlike defending Shoto) defending Endeav just isn't necessary here. No one is denying Endeavor's mentorship or heroism skills. Dabi is saying he is an abuser and a shit dad which - you know - he is. Izuku reads as a naive, narrow-minded teenager at best here. There are better ways Hori could have worded Izuku stepping in - this wasn't it.
Mina and Kirishima: 'We hate bullies!' 😠 Very vocally anti bully, their heroism stories each center on it.
Also Mina and Kirishima: look on as Bakugou acts like the BIGGEST bully for all of the academic year and decide to become his besties. - This can be read as them being too thick to work out Bakugou is a bully at best. At worst... They read as cowards and hypocrites. The 'It's ok as long as he's not picking on me or my friends,' type.
Hawks: has an abusive father that was taken into custody by Endeav before being taken by the HPSC and enduring more intense training (likely abuse.)
Also Hawks: Despite his past abuse as an adult licks the boots of another abusive father, Endeav (Endeav's boots must be super shiny.) - Are we still pretending Hawks is an actual character at this point? All he is now is an Endeav Simp with some 'I killed Twice' angst sprinkled in. But I will save the major pieces of salt regarding Hawks for the ask I have about him. Least charitable interpretation - Hawks has LOW empathy thanks to his abusive childhood and latches on hard to a select few (Endeav) who he will protect, screw everyone else. Hawks doesn't care about Endeav's past child abuse, spousal abuse and literal crimes just what he means to him. Most Charitable - Hawks is an abused messed up person who never grew up past his idealisation of Endeav and clung to anything that meant he could keep the 'hero Endeav' in his mind intact.
With all of these deductions in mind, characters we are meant to root for feel flat, hypocritical, OOC and just downright bizarre at times.
Why? Because Hori bends characters to his script rather than writing the script for what works for the characters.
#mha critical#Bnha critical#Anti Ashido Mina#Anti Kirishima Ejiro#Midoriya Izuku critical#Anti Hawks#Sorry but it had to be said#The writing is to blame#Anti Bakugou#Anti Bakugou Katsuki#Anti Endeavor
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if you're a fan of any of the big three and hate on jannik for winning too much against some of your other faves congrats you are a hypocrite
#sorry but it had to be said#be so serious guys#tennis talk#like... i do root against him as well when he's playing one of my main faves#but come on if you're making full on hate posts because he's winning too much for your taste think for a second#or enjoy being a hypocrite i guess 🤷♀️#this is obviously not directed at any of you on the dash who said 'sorry for hateposting' when you were just mildly grumbling#please don't feel attacked 🙈
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thinking about jess blowing a kiss at the camera in the newest epic show. being normal about that. i swear.
#i'm actually so gay for jess#sorry but it had to be said#i also feel confusing things for ross and zach but i don't want to unpack that#off book#off book podcast#every place i cry#jess mckenna
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GRRRRRRR WOOF WOOF BARK BARK BARK ARF ARF ARF RRRR SNARL WOOF WOOF GRRRRRRR RUFF RUFF ARF BARK BARK WOOF SNARL SNARL GRRRRRR GRRRR WOOF WOOF ARF RRRRRRR GRRRRR WOOF WOOF GROWL GROWL AWWOOOOOOOO AWOO AWOOOO ARRF GRRRR BARK GRRR HISSSSSS
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Does anybody else think that Malleus in the canon is a Gary Stu? Outside of having some flaws, he checks off all the boxes. He doesn’t face any setbacks or consequences for any his actions, even when he does some fucked up shit like during the second Halloween event. He’s often used as a Deus ex Machina to swoop in and save the day, even when it isn’t necessary and at the expense of other characters’ intelligence. (cough The endings of Books 5 & 6 cough) Biggest of all, according to the new drop, he's nearly invincible and no one in that world is powerful enough to stop him without destroying everyone's souls in the process. I'm fine with powerful characters, obviously. But that is WAY too far, even for him. He's god levels of OP with no weaknesses. Even characters like Saitama and Superman have weaknesses and ways to take them down. Needless to say I like the UM that me and my beta came up with than this BS.
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x-men hot take time oh boy
I don't like Colossus with facial hair.
There, I said it.
It doesn't really suit him tbh.
It was sexy for like 2 minutes at the Hellfire Gala but after rereading X-Force and seeing the possible deeper meaning...
Yeah, it's not very sexy anymore.
I hope he looses it now that he's finally free from his brother's control.
#i don't#i do not like it at all#sorry but it had to be said#xmen#uncanny xmen#colossus#piotr rasputin
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bruh, I just have a flashback of those Evan's fans believing he is looking at his own belly in the "Adult World" edit, when is barely obviously is ER belly... sorry yall ���😭😂😂
#evan peters#evan thomas peters#evancito#adult world#THAT IS NOT HIS BELLY YALL#sorry but it had to be said
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if you're ruby soho, you're in a situation where you're gonna get beaten up by two british goth dommes
...youve just got to be happy with how your career is going
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roberto ferri is ridiculously talented and I love the mythical themes in his paintings and his style is beautiful but most importantly, he paints INCREDIBLE tits
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https://open.spotify.com/track/7795WJLVKJoAyVoOtCWqXN?si=EeVfIqTIR9yyU7Lb52yXrQ&utm_source=copy-link
im emo
that song is overrated i'm sorry 🥱
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I'm sorry to have a little rant but like
It's not cute or fun or anything to not use capital letters in your writing, it genuinely makes it a nightmare to read, especially as a neurodivergent person.
I've found so many fics that have awesome concepts that I can't read because there's no caps at all, and trying to read it feels like I've sent my brain through the blender!
I understand not having perfect grammar or such, but please don't do it 'stylistically'. It's downright annoying, I want to read your writing!
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to moving forward
#my art#jujutsu kaisen#jjk#jjk fanart#jujutsu kaisen fanart#jjk art#yuji itadori#gojo satoru#fushiguro megumi#nobara kugisaki#itadori yuuji#megumi fushiguro#jjk spoilers#satoru gojo#jjk manga spoilers#hina.comic#before any1 says anything i KNOw his birthday is in december ik ik ik this is just 2 show some post-battle bonding after the trauma#its winter in canon n megumi's birthday has passed and he spent it being piloted like a mech so they need to celebrate Now!!#also this was technically a request lmao anon wanted megumi birthday angst hehehehhe i hope u like it <3 bc it KILLED ME DEAD#im going to collapse remember when i said this wasnt harder than the hydrangeas im having second thoughts#page 8 made me want to bash my head in#could have stuck with one flashback image could have left them monochrome could have done literally anything 2 ease the workload#but noooo the chronic overachiever in me would not allow it#rule of threes i had to include all of them and they Had to be in colour it wouldn't have hit the same if i had kept it monochrome#i needed it to look how childhood memories look i needed it to look oversaturated and hazy and fond but unmistakably Gone#it may have killed me but im so proud of this rn like from an art style perspective these megumis and yuujis r top tier by my standards#personal favourites r the first and last panel of crying megumi like not 2 pat myself on th back but expression?????? hello??????#enjoy your cake megumi you've earned it <333 sorry fr hurting ur feelings it will happen again#oh my god i can sleep tonight bless <333 and i met my 3 day deadline NICE im so good at what i do
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THE NOIR-HOBIE INTERACTIONS THAT I MADE UP IN MY MIND ARE VERY REAL TO ME. SONY PLEASE PICK UP WHAT I’M PUTTING DOWN!!!
#atsv spoilers#atsv#across the spiderverse#across the spider-verse#left the theatre knowing my gf is coming back immediately ofc had to draw this .#written hobie's dialogue here as though someone might incidentally forget he's british. LOL#sorray brits i will never be good at ur slang. i think bruv is a liiiittle old but he also said mandem so whatever#wanker/geezer is rly not used anymore but im sorry . i refuse to keep looking up british slang. its too hard#hobie brown#peter parker#spider-man noir#spider-punk#spiderman noir#spider punk#itsv#spiderman#into the spiderverse#my art
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you dislike Luke Castellan because he disagreed with an oppressive government system and actually took action to change the abusive ways him and his peers have been forced to follow for millennia.
I dislike Luke Castellan because in the Titans Curse he manipulated Annabeth, who he raised as his little sister, into holding up the sky, the FUCKING sky, for over 20 hours and had the audacity to walk away as though he was completely apathetic towards it while she begged and pleaded with him to help her.
we are not the same.
#I agree with Luke’s beliefs 100%#I don’t agree with his actions#but I specifically remember Luke seeming real fucking unaffected while leaving Annabeth to endure being literally crushed to death#the rest of the halfbloods that joined the titans army had good intentions but Luke… oh boy#I’m sorry I can’t help but disagree with his actions#percy jackon and the olympians#luke castellan#annabeth chase#percy jackson#percy series#camp half blood#pjo hoo toa#some ppl in the comments pointed out shit I forgot ty guys#like the way he manipulated Silena and Annabeth because he knew they loved him is literally pedophillia 🤢🤮#I was cautious with my tags at first because I thought Luke apologists were gonna come at me with knives if I said more than necessary#but now I’m brave enough to admit I hate that man and no one can convince me otherwise
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