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#my art#harry du bois#kim kitsuragi#disco elysium#disco elysium fanart#harrykim#kimharry#or whatever they're called#let this man have happiness or so help me#im a firm believer in harry getting a slow post-recovery glow up alright. it's the least i can do for the guy.#man i was listening to so many banger songs while making this#im still getting back in the flow of painting so most of my stuff is kinda messy still#but i suspect ill find a middle ground between this and my last piece style-wise#gearing up to drawing kim in all his glory too now that ive finished two different side profiles of him. only a matter of time now#also fun little fact. i drew over half of this (~4 ? hours) using just my finger on the trackpad of my laptop lol#sometimes it helps me to just put shapes and colors down. when ive got a pen i get too nitpicky about being perfect/using fancy techniques#sometimes all you need is. finger š«¶#OH!! i forgot to mention someone spotted it in the tagsāyes this is based on that one leyendecker piece!!
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[IMAGE: A screenshot of an article on some tabloid site. The title says: āDRLās Head of Extradimensional Biology Professor Lila Uchuu seen colluding with Aether Foundationās Branch Chief and Acting President Wicke! Ultra Beasts to be unleashed on Populace!ā. Below the title is a blurry photo taken through a window of Lila and Wickeās silhouettes shaking hands.]
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Sigh. Another day, another theory.
I mentioned the āunsavory rumorsā people kept spreading about me when I first joined here and, well, this is one of them. Apparently, Iām in charge of a plot to release Ultra Beasts on to Alola in order to destabilize and take it over or something.
People mustāve taken my distate of the limelight to be a sign of maliciousness. Perhaps my presence here will mitigate this?
#they got my title wrong too#yes i will be nitpicky about this#pokemon irl#irl pkmn#pkmn irl#irl pokemon#pokeblogging#rotumblr#rotomblr#lila talks#beneath the veil
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I love the Percy Jackson show so much. It legitimately brings so much joy into my life each week.
It feels like a GOOD adaptation. Obviously it was never gonna be 1:1 to the books but it has still managed to emulate the story I loved as a smol Cori so well that I feel nostalgic and get so genuinely happy whenever I watch a new episode. Legitimately there hasnāt been a change to the story that doesnāt pay off in some way. It always gives us MORE which is so so nice.
Everyone in this show is amazing and Iām so heckin grateful for each and every one of them for helping to bring this story to life. š
(Also itās really fucking funny to watch new people get into the show. I feel like an old villain watching people simp over you know who, whoās gonna do you know what. BUT ITS HILARIOUS)
#Percy Jackson#Iām like a proud parent wow#also yes I did take twice as long to watch the episode because I was searching for a wild Nico in the background#take my words with a grain of salt because Iām notoriously non nitpicky about things I love#Iām sure there are valid criticisms but my brain is too busy vibrating from happiness to care
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Why I Am Not Coming In To Work Today [abridged], Jess Zimmerman
part one | part two
#me when everybody is posting the maple leafs sad narratives and i am furiously generating this like HOLD ONNNN HOLD ONNNNNNN#honestly i could've been SOOOO MEAN about this because i saw this poem & alexandra got the preview on the poetry blog#where i just reblogged the first half of this poem point blank with the tags#kyle dubas#toronto maple leafs#& got yelled at aksdaksf & it literally only didn't go on this blog bc i usually write more & then it was percolating & i looked up the poe#& it was only the FIRST PART i'd reblogged i didn't know there was more & then brain immediately went brrrrr ok time for an edit.#this is a long one lol & i also have no idea if it makes sense to anybody but me but because y'all know me i will always overexplain so!!#my reasoning for the reasons obvi kyle. that's a given i hope he's doing well i hope he & his family r good but man is not coming in to wor#the second edit took me a stupid amount of time bc i am nitpicky but also i learned how to do the layers & transparency from the claude edi#that actually y'all don't know about lmao but i lost my mind when i saw how perfectly those pictures align i was scrolling getty & was like#ok december i'm gonna do a headline one (in my brain with the november/june quote about choosing to die again) w/ maple leafs playoff odds#how they say at winter break you know who's gonna be in the playoffs & who'll win & they thought they had a shot but it's mitchie overlaid#the 2003-04 team who'd last won a playoff round with the atlantic division stats from dec for 22-23 & how long it's been & dec headlines#i wanted breakup/recent/never loved to be a recent trade acquisition somebody who bounced around & somebody else so i almost had simmer#brodie & zar but then i wanted to make murray for breakup at any time &i forgot zar & him were on the pens together &it hit me like a truc#bc there's a photo of the two of them EXACTLY the same so close it's scary of this one but them as pens so they had to be it & i did always#know never loved again was mitchie. sorry. also mitchie in the penalty box the last game but i couldn't find footage of it & this one works#no i could not find a photo of tyler bertuzzi fighting a leaf for a dog looked at me yes i tried.#i almost made the bunting photo jt but instead it's 'bunting a rat etc' anyway the one i really feel unhinged about is dead pets bc at firs#i was gonna make it the handshake line & look to see if the leafs had drafted anybody on the panthers (dead pet former draft pick)#& they had & it was carter verhaeghe & i couldn't get a good pic of matthews & verhaeghe but it's fine bc i thought about the mo/luke schen#narrative (in which they are a perfect d pair long lost) & schenn was drafted by the leafs & that line fits jut trust me. also how i feel#about the kniesy luminous line that one possessed me it had to be kniesy idk why. i almost put gussy as girls are too pretty though ALSO#did u like my joke. daylight SAVINGS time on the goalie. thank u. also my photo magic on the jt (me very poorly editing in him as an isle)#OK ALSO HOLD ONNNNN there is a part two but i have to wait for the Content i want it will come out as soon as [redacted] or sooner#if i get bad at waiting &everyone will pretend like it is always the way it will be once i have the photos i want. speaking of did the leaf#simply not take a team photo this year?? it Does Not Exist for me i have tried very hard to look for it also i'm excited for part 2#one of them is named oh you're so unhinged for this one & the finished product is you're unhinged in ways you didn't even know u were sorry#liv in the replies
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Rereading the lunar chronicles but I'm an engineer now and I'm being nitpicky
It took Cinder's scanner 2.6 seconds to recognise Kai?? That feels slow, given how much their technology has progressed? Especially because the system presumably has a LOT of data about him?
It should be able to pick up the points of his face pretty quickly, his disguise was a hoodie (so face not covered at all) and decent current tech can do this in a practically negligible time
And then it just needs to go through the database and I guess it depends how it's doing it. If it's doing a manual searching algorithm then 2.6 seconds is probably actually pretty quick but I assume it would use AI so it should be able to recognise so someone that famous very very quickly
#first and foremost you should know I'm doing this because I love these books and this is a fun use of my engineering degree#also yes I am obviously aware that marissa meyer probably didn't know about AI/machine learning when she wrote the books (cinder was 2012)#BUT as I said I'm being nitpicky#the lunar chronicles#rereading the lunar chronicles but I'm an engineer and I'm being nitpicky
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You could've explained this without the holier than thou attitude
I could have, but I didn't want to! Hope this helps.
#answered#Anonymous#yes i'm a gatekeeper and a hater but i'm also roentgen's favorite princess and the smartest girl in the world#in all seriousness anons getting nitpicky on tone in ironically a very snide manner is oddly common when i post about d20 specifically#and it's fascinating to observe. more study is needed. everyone put out weird vibes in d20 posts and turn on anon and see what happens
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why are so many of your ocs super overpowered though??
Ever since I was a really little kid, I've been very frustrated with the fact we invented all these super awesome powers and concepts for story telling purposes, but then, somewhere down the line, decided we actually aren't allowed to use like any of them because it's "bad story telling", or some other such nonsense.
Like, no, if I wanna write an impervious, God-like character with a cheeky personality and barely addressed flaws that everyone loves, then I damn well will, and if you have a problem with that, then clearly you are not the target audience.
Not everything is for everyone, and some of you people seriously need to learn to make your peace with that.
#Is the writing actually bad or are you just not the target audience?#is the writing actually bad or are you just being overly nitpicky about pointless details?#is the writing actually bad or were you expecting a completely different genre than what's listed?#ask yourself those questions more often#now I'm not saying my writing and characters are objectively good all the time#there are flaws to my characters and my writing and I am fully aware of that#but if I'm portraying something in a specific way there's probably a reason for it#and yes ''wouldn't that be cool/fucked up!?'' is in fact a reason#you disliking that choice doesn't make the choice objectively bad
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On Denomination Semantics, Church Authority, Bunny, Marion and Julian
I'll say that much, the Greek class is predominantly Catholic, with it being noted that Richard is a non-denominational Christian and Bunny being an Episcopalian.
"Bunnyās family was Episcopalian, and my parents, as far as I knew, had no religious affiliation at all; but Henry and Francis and the twins had been reared as Catholics;"
This established dynamic is a setup to a later conversation in the book, where Julian questions Richard on the changes in Bunny's behavior, attributing them to a possible conversion of either Bunny or Marion, wherein we learn she is a Presbyterian. All fun and good, we just learn that Bunny is so panicked Julian thinks he's having a mental breakdown, right? This is just foreshadowing to Bunny writing the confessional letter to Julian, right?
Upon closer inspection... why would we need to know, in particular, the specific denomination that Bunny holds, when his social status as a Protestant has already been established, and even less so Marion, who Richard doesn't even know?
Well, that is because the confessions are a metaphor for the structure in their lives.
The Roman Catholic Church is one of the three major divisions of Christianity in the Western World. It has a known structure, and it bases its belief both on the Christian Bible and the Papacy, with the structure of the Church as important as the religious text itself. It is a very rigid structure, and it is indeed, as Julian says, "a worthy and powerful foe".
Episcopalians on the other hand, are seen as a "halfway" point between the structure of the Catholics and the relative interpretative freedom of other Protestants. While the Episcopal Church is a Protestant denomination, meaning it does not hold the Pope as any authority, it has structures of authority (mainly, bishops and cardinals) and holds different views on sin as opposed to Catholics (as Francis ironically points out in the Epilogue).
The motto of the Episcopal Church is "Protestant, yet Catholic!", I kid you not. EDIT: The phrase "Protestant, yet Catholic" has been associated with the Episcopal Church and their beliefs.
Not relevant to the theological discussion, but the Episcopal Church also was founded in the US and is a very American phenomenon, being one of the most common denominations for American Presidents and wannabe DC political larpers as well.
A noteworthy detail is also that... the central book of Episcopalians is The Book of Common Prayer... Which Charles desecrated at Bunny's funeral service by using it to kill a wasp. This shows both the particular lack of respect the other characters have for non-Catholic tradition, but also their lack of connection to the gravity of such an act. Charles desecrated a religious text in a church, and it was a comedic moment. They are very in touch with reality /s.
"Charles had killed it with a resounding thwack from The Book of Common Prayer."
Presbyterianism is not a church, but rather a set of beliefs and principles. It is one of the most reformist of Protestant beliefs, and does not at all recognize the need for any religious authority or church to practice. Presbyterians believe in a personal relationship with God rather than a need for a house of worship or sin to practice. Presbyterians are also stereotyped as low class, again as our judgemental professor puts it "
"He had a habit of attributing all of Bunnyās faults indirectly to herāhis laziness, his bad humors, his lapses of taste."
What this primarily means for interpreting our characters and their morals, is that Bunny finds himself at a middle-point between the strict hierarchy of the Greek class and the personal freedom afforded to him by decentralized beliefs. He has all his life existed in a state of "in between" authority and lack thereof, and Julian is questioning if the main force in his life that feeds the "contrary" impulse in Bunny is gone with Marion's hypothetical conversion.
This speaks mostly to that... our Julian was probably reared Catholic himself (calling it The Church... yeah he totally also was Catholic at some point), but has turned his back on the particular beliefs of the faith to where Richard finds him today. This also implies that of his 6 students, ironically enough, Bunny would be the one that has a relationship to religious authority most similar to Julian's own, and that has been since he joined the Greek class. This contempt would only grow larger as Bunny engages with people who care even less about religious authority than he does, which Julian might not like or respect, but certainly affirms Bunny as... uniquely able to challenge authority, and certainly the most "liberal" of his students on matters of authority. Bunny is the only one of them who indeed, has a girlfriend. A girlfriend that has been a problem to the Greek class that they simply do not want to even address her at all, to the point where Francis goes into prayer that she leaves Bunny.
It's also quite a touch ironic that after Bunny's death, the next one to question the hierarchy of the group, Charles, is coincidentally the one most influenced by Marion herself. Symbolically, Marion represents the "normalcy" and "gateway" from the Catholic-like structure of the Greek class, and Richard, Henry, Camilla and Francis' disregard and mockery of her presence is just a sign that they are quite far removed from any notion of leaving the cult of Julian or challenging why the belief in Classicism needs Julian for a God and Henry for a priest.
#the secret history#bunny corcoran#i adore being fucking nitpicky man#tunglr user barnbridges talking about marion hours#but also.... marion as the prequel character that haunts the narrative#charles' disrespect of the book of common preyer is yes part his own... lapsing catholicism part#marion's disregard for authority and their structure#she's just a Girl isnt she she's a real girl
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really curious to see how people's finale opinions will develop once we get some distance.... personally I feel like I'm still reeling so hard from the gut-level emotional response that it's difficult to really assess or analyze it esp. within the framework of the whole show and I kind of wonder if others feel the same
#I think it was overall EXCELLENT but there are specific nitpicky things i have gripes about i think?#but whenever i try to express them i actually talk myself into liking them lmao#so I think its an emotional response#ngl I'm a little surprised by just how bleak the ending is bc I dont think the show has ever been so unreservedly bleak#usually there's always a silver lining. a glimmer of hope#like the s3 finale - they fail but they fail together#and so even tho I expected a tragic ending I expected. something??? some tiny little glimmer of something positive??#and I think that feeling is amplified by the abruptness of the ending#but like. all the individual plot beats and character arcs are 1000% yes. make sense and are thematically coherent#so im like. i dont actually have a reason for my gripes about the ending beyond. huh. not what i expected#and even then gripe is a strong term because i do LIKE it im just like. wow. that sure is a lot to process#still not 100% sure how i feel about it i think
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Ok stopping the halo for tonight but Iāll finish it tomorrow- so far Iām kind of lost? I mean itās not as much of a train wreck as I expected it to be but itās still a little weird. I have a few questions but at the end of the day Iām a simple person. I see big robot thing, I think theyāre neat.
#the guardians are cool but how have we not heard abt them sooner?#I mean. idk#itās neat#sad about Cortana tho. just. AUGH.#I miss her sm :( I hate that itās coming down to this#also a bit surprised at the lack of Chief#feels very Osiris heavy?#which isnāt that bad I like the team#Buck was a pleasant surprise I missed that fucker#wish they were more talkative tho?#idk very nitpicky thoughts#but ye#Iām intrigued to see where this goes#nebula rambles
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decided to give this article a quick look because i noticed it mentioned fatal twelve but
"there are opportunities for you to explore romantic relationships with multiple female characters" idk why they said this because no there's not lmao
#i know it's a dumb thing to get annoyed about but like. this game is not a dating sim lol#there is one clear ālove interestā (in quotes because miharu is the deuteragonist before anything else) & yes you can sort of control#whether or not they actually end up together (based on what ending you get). but like....it's not like you can just choose someone else.#it's miharu or nobody lol#also this is just nitpicky but every ending that's not the Future ending is bittersweet at best & i#certainly wouldn't describe any of them as a āhappily ever afterā lol ok i'm done now#fatal twelve#š® tag#send tweet
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"You can have sensory issues and still dress however you want!" yes true, some people with sensory issues may not have difficulties with certain fabrics as much as other sensory input which leads to being able to wear most anything they want. but not all people with sensory issue can just wear anything, I have a specific kind of fabric for pants and it has to also be a certain percent since most of the time it comes in mixes and if it isn'tthat or sweat pants i want to cry. I can't wear leggings, I can't wear jeans or just denim in general, I can't wear things that are too stiff or I'll feel like I'm trapped, I can't wear shirts that are too tight cause I'll feel trapped, I can't wear long sleeve shirts because they're often too tight, I can't wear low socks they have to be mid calf or higher, silk feel slimy, and most fabrics are too itchy. but yes uh huh i can still wear anything and this totally does not heavily restrict what I can wear (or at least what I can wear for very long). I can definitely dress in the emo style for a long time and be wear tight skinny jeans and tight shirts and too many belts.
#sorry i just got really upset about this and i don't know why#someone said this abt dressing punk#and like yes most anything could technically be considered punk style if you use it right#but majority of the time really gatekeepy punks (which was what the post was about)#will be extremely nitpicky with what you wear#and it also limits what you can do as a punk#i can't make patch pants because jeans work the best for that and i can't wear those#wearing my battle vest all the time is like impossible because it's too big cause getting a smaller size would be too tight#plus it's made out of denim#and like also punks don't fucking have to have a reason to not dress punk all the time!!!#maybe it's just cause they don't want to or can't because their work has a dress code#and they don't go many places outside of work#maybe it's because they don't have the time or energy to make punk style clothes from thrifted stuff#maybe it's because they don't even have a thrift store near them#there are so many other things#and I'm really ranting anyways point is#not everyone can wear alt clothes all the time nor should they have to fit into that subculture
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ah, I realized a glaring inconsistency in Double, Double
at the beginning, because Chapel thanks Kirk for not reporting what happened to Korby, it feels like it should be set shortly after the episode. Because she was still emotional about it, about Korby, and it also makes ZERO sense to wait three years to mention it....
but the book deals with the Romulans and suddenly "we obtained a cloaking device" was mentioned and like that's season 3 stuff
I mean a lot of TOS novels can be timeless, but when you write a sequel to What Are Little Girls Made Of? and make it seem like it's shortly after (not just because of Chapel, but other things too), you shouldn't really involve the Romulans...
people probably don't care but I do :D
#leni reads trek books#imho the story should be set even before the balance of terror... android!kirk should not know about the romulans or what they#look like or about a cloaking device anyway#unless he studied it but then it should have been mentioned explicitly#i like being nitpicky yes :P
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I respect fantasy authors dedication to absolutely not using any modern irl terms, and I can take when it when they call things hourglass instead of an hour or nameday instead of birthday. But when you publish a book in a country that only uses the metric system, where the absolute majority of your readers are going to use the metric system: why would you measure stuff in feet?!??
#āit sounds historical blah blahā Itās impractical#yes this is nitpicky#to be clear I am not actually upset#I donāt want to have to do math to understand how tall things actually are#I already have to do it when reading american books#thatās like the one thing I appreciate most about reading books from other countries
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Whenever fics give reasons why the character likes the reader, they're always these like angel-like things. Like baking for fun, buying plants, etc etc etc. The quintessential woman stereotype in a fairy tale perfect relationship. They try to make reader seem like "just some person" but use traits only idealized people have.
#analysis#you can create the vibe of dreamy normalcy while r still being normal#what about a reader talks out loud to themselves while grocery shopping#a reader that loses their keys in the most random of places?#a reader that remembers even the most ridiculous nitpicky likes/dislikes of the character#a reader that's terrible at choosing so they ask character for their opinion?#but always ends up siding with the complete opposite of character's opinion#these are very normal traits that are also very endearing that create a very normal vibe#and yes in my post i said 'women stereotype'#bc the reader traits almost always get chosen aee stereotypically womenly traits#men can bake#men can buy plants#but stereotypically that's a woman thing#if your reader is gn like damn at least throw in some more neutral or even manly traits too#like they enjoy getting furniture if that means they get to put it together#or they hate buying things because they always assume they can diy it themselves#just pls stop using soft girl traits to describe an endearing reader pls
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Sometimes I just can't with yalls dennis fanfiction
#im sorry in advance#but#i know his ed is very essential to his character#but as a former anorexic#i am SICK of trying to read about macdennis SMASHING only to get bombarded with usually untagged triggers#im just so tired i have to skip so many good fics#am i being nitpicky !#yes#and its my problem no one elses#but man i have thoughts i must shout them into my void
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