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Drives me crazy that Katniss will be called an unreliable narrator (when she's not) but Coriolanus Snow skates by without anyone saying boo about him being an unreliable narrator.
Like all it takes is being written in 3rd person? Our girl gets called unreliable for having opinions and whiny nepo baby Snow isn't for the exact same thing??? And his opinions contribute to continued violence in Panem???
Oh but it's in limited 3rd, it's soooooo different. 3rd person is always so reliable! 🙄
#the hunger games#katniss everdeen#coriolanus snow#to be clear even if written in 1st person tbosas likely wouldn't have an unreliable narrator either#my point is that you should always be aware of what you're reading and what perspective the narrative is taking#whether that's first or 3rd#and it's only unreliable if you have reason to doubt that the events are not be relayed to you accurately#otherwise it's just an opinion!!!!#none of which can be “true” or “false”#so it CAN'T be unreliable#spring ranting about the misuse and overuse of “unreliable narrator” again
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I do think some of the handwringing I've seen about "hate" is funny because from what I can tell, even on twitter people are being surprisingly civil. The cast hasn't even had to make a big announcement clarifying a situation because everyone misinterpreted something and worked themselves into a furor. It took less than 12 hours after the c2 finale before Matt and Liam were like, "Uh, what do you mean, we literally said on stream Caleb and Essek get together." But there's also been a significant shift online since then to the point where anything short of "the precious baby blorbos were treated so niceys :3" is considered vicious hate, for some reason*, so I can't say I'm really surprised.
#*narrator voice: the reason was anti-intellectualism.#god tbt when everyone was like 'I CAN'T BELIEVE THEY DIDN'T COMMIT TO THE GAY SHIP. COWARDS'#WHILE beauyasha existed. first of all.#and then when they clarified suddenly everyone was like 'UM HOW WAS I SUPPOSED TO PAY ATTENTION TO THAT I WAS SLEEP DEPRIVED'#and it's like look. at a certain point if you know you're exhausted and prone to crankiness you gotta take a step back my dude.#you have to be like 'well I will check if I missed something later when I am not falling over' and then like. go to bed.#instead of spiraling out of control on the dash and getting everyone else worked up#like you are allowed to do that you are your own person on the internet and I don't control you but#if you get defensive when called about it I am allowed to tell you you should take some fucking responsibility for your choices#and also grow the fuck up.#cr spoilers#cr discourse
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guys I got so inspired by y’all’s pieces of the dtiys that I drew a dtiys of my own dtiys
anyways combat duo >>>>
#undertale#mun art#frisk#ut ask blog#chara#undertale ask blog#act x: memories.#im still recovering from a trip so im giving myself one (1) day to chill ADHINCSI#anyways. chara is v observant during fights actually#im tryina give subtle nudges to the way they seem to narrate combat during no mercy run —-#succinct and to the point.#they were not this blunt back when frisk first fell underground. but like#after 11 years of slow EXP and many morally questionable choices a person tends to change lmao#they’re both quite numb to violence! both due to LV and life in general#mmmm vibrating to draw another fight scene fr (will regret saying this)
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had an idea come to mind where stanley used to be able to talk before being in the parable. and the shock to come when any sound from him is blocked off entirely
#the stanley parable#tsp#tsp stanley#crows art#DOES THIS??? MAKE SENSE??#god i hope it does otherwise this is just for me fkgjfdkgjh#UM BUT YEAH. this is. a concept#listen i merely worry about being incomprehensible often but thats besides the point!!#but yeah this is essentially taking place like in the beginning days#and stanley actually goes to speak against the narrator for the first time#kinda follows along with the real person ending#like speaking is not a mechanic in the game for both the player AND stanley#why would you need to speak when your narrator does it for you? :-)
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L'amica geniale | Season 1 (2018), Saverio Costanzo
#l'amica geniale#my brilliant friend#loved the books a couple of months ago so of course i had to watch the show#good adaptation though it loses some of the mystique of the first person narration of the book#the choice to keep the same actors through most of the show even if it spans decades is understable#especially with such a large cast of characters#but it takes away the impact of some scenes#like Lila is supposed to be what... 14? 15? on her wedding day#but the actress is older and it looks kinda normal#tv 2024#i made this#i just want a tag for the things i personally put out into the world
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thinking abt a nensai soulmate AU where everyone gets their soulmates first thought about them written on them. Like those first words AUs but with more flavour I guess. so saiki thinks he doesn't have a soulmate bc he has no first thoughts written on him and this further solidifies in his mind that he's not human/he's broken bc he's not normal/that his powers are a curse. Until he realises nendo is his soulmate and he has no words bc nendo has canonically never experienced a thought.
#nendo has saikis first thoughts written on him but its on his lower back so he's never read it#he already thinks that theyre dating though#how does nendo think theyre dating if he's never had a thought?#not a fucking clue bestie#my personal headcanon is that saiki cant read nendos mind bc he has no internal narration or minds eye and thinks completely abstractly#but idk!!!!#no i do not take criticism#nendo posting#nensai#saiki k
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Examples:
Second:
It’s one of those days, today.
The kind where you wake up, and the sight of Mom cooking with fire magic in the kitchen makes the smooth, shiny, red burn scar on your shoulder ache. The kind where, when you take a bite of butterscotch-cinnamon pie, you taste coppery blood mixed with the spices.
Third:
It’s one of those days, today.
The kind where Frisk wakes up, and the sight of Mom cooking with fire magic in the kitchen makes the smooth, shiny, red burn scar on their shoulder ache. The kind where, when they take a bite of butterscotch-cinnamon pie, they taste coppery blood mixed with the spices.
If you answered the poll, please consider reblogging for visibility! Thank you!
(And if you want, share in the tags if your pov preference is a hard limit—do you prefer third, and refuse to read second? Or are you willing to read both but just have a preference?)
#undertale#undertale fanfiction#frisk#frisk undertale#frisk the human#frisk dreemurr#Undertale is one of the only fandoms I’ve been in where second person is a common pov for a main character in fic#by nature of the way the game is actually written/narrated I think#it’s really cool honestly#I love seeing the fics in second person pov for frisk and even sometimes from other characters povs#though I don’t have a preference#I didn’t bother putting first person pov on this list because I don’t think I’ve ever even read a Frisk PoV fic in first#they’re not exactly common#polls#my polls
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My writing/reading question of the day:
Do you prefer present tense or past tense? Or something entirely different like future tense? For writing AND reading🫶
The more I write (I wish I realized how fun it was before this year😭😭😭) the more I realize I like to play around with language & tense choice can have such a profound impact on how your writing comes across & even how I feel as I’m writing. With my oneshots I’ve been playing around with only present tense & my main fic is past tense (but present during the flashbacks - idk don’t ask it just felt right😆).
Or does nobody else think about tense and I’m just alone in this😆😆😆 LANGUAGE IS JUST SO COOL !!!!
#I’m not even getting into POV😆😆#like I prefer third person limited where you don’t have all the information#but I LOVE first person when the narrator is super unreliable (lolita secret history American psycho great gatsby etc etc)#plus#omg I just remembered the cortazar short story where he’s getting strangled by his sweater that one makes me SO claustrophobic#and I doubt it would have been successful in third person#maybe you can answer pov too I just want to start a conversation about it bc I’m interested#I read something once in future tense and it was SO COOL#it was all kind of hypothetical and at the end of the story you realize that none of it had actually happened yet#I just love reading talk to me about it😭😭😭#I liked the conversation a lot about my confusion with the perfect tense#(in my defense I don’t use it when I speak in spanish/bable bc🤪 it doesn’t exist in bable…)
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spuffy fic rec
part 1 - part 2 - part 3 - part 4
Puppy Problems by SzmattyCat [6k]
Buffy and Spike just want to spend some time together. Is that too much to ask?
Ghostly by untouchable [8k]
Six months after Sunnydale collapses, a grieving Buffy is startled to find Spike, feral and without any idea who she is, in her backyard. Is he real? Or just another ghost?
Dreamless by feliciacraft [9k]
Buffy woke up the same way she always did these days, a blank alertness overtaking sleep, without the harsh interjection of an alarm clock whisking her into action, without the dying whispers of a dream urging her to stay. Neither sudden nor gradual, instead it felt inevitable — like birth; yet always decidedly out of place. What was life after death in a nutshell, if not that? (Early season 6 AU story with a canon opening and a happy Spuffy ending.)
What Remains by MrsAkers [15k]
As the lone survivors of the final battle with Glory, Buffy and Spike run away from Sunnydale. Battling with guilt and an unfulfilled death wish, Buffy finds solace in Spike's company while the vampire just does his best to keep her alive.
Falling by kally77 [30k]
After The Harsh Light of Day, Angel loses his soul and Buffy finds an unexpected ally.
East of Nevada by Blissymbolics [42k]
The answer comes to him in a spark. Relief engulfs every nerve as he realizes Buffy is safe. He can save her this time. He wasn’t smart enough before. He made so many stupid mistakes. But this time is different. He may not have magic, but he can save her in a way no one else can. Spike sires Buffy to save her life. Now comes the hard part.
A New Dawn by kally77 [42k]
Rewrite of season 5. The monks made Dawn Buffy's daughter rather than her sister.
Midway of Speech and Thought by TheHousekeeper [63k]
Six months after the Battle of Sunnydale, Buffy is trying to settle into her new life in London: patrolling, training new Slayers, and studying English Literature. But it's not great for her grades that strange demons are appearing all over the city – and it's not great for her sanity that she's suddenly dreaming about Spike. And she only dreams when it rains.
In the Dark of the Night by norik23 [138k]
Saint Petersburg. 1920s. Rupert Giles, a fallen watcher, and Spike, a cursed vampire, are an unlikely pair of conmen struggling to make ends meet in a city overrun by demons. Together, they hatch a plan to find the long-lost slayer... or at least a decent approximation. A road trip adventure love story, loosely based on the plot of Anastasia (1997). Featuring a motley crew of misfits – Buffy, Spike, and Giles – who’d much rather bicker for 2000 miles than admit they’re all a bit lonely. Good thing it’s a long way to Paris. They’ve got time to figure it out.
Death Wish by Sigyn [190k]
“World is what it is. We fight and we die. Wishing doesn't change that. You can believe in a better world. I have to live in this one.” Anyanka’s wish was broken, but the world it created continues. Now Buffy must join forces with rebel vampires to create a world they can all stand to live in. But can Spike, Drusilla and Angel actually work with a hardened slayer, who would just as soon see them all dust?
#'in the dark of the night' (the anastasia au) is still unfinished but getting regular updates and i think it deserves more attention!!#it's so good guys#also i know 'falling' is first person narrator (not my favourite thing either) but give it a try still#spike x buffy#buffy x spike#spuffy#spuffy fic#spuffy fic rec#spuffy fic recs#spuffy ficrec#spuffy ficrecs#mine
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The day the PJO fandom realizes that Percy is an unreliable narrator and one should NOT take the things stated in his POV as objective truth is the day I can die in peace.
#pjo#luke castellan#percy jackson#luke castellan apologist#pro luke castellan#pjo fandom#any first person narrator is inherently unreliable and requires the reader to emotionally detach themselves to properly analyze things;#and I will die on this hill
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Y’all remember when I started that Cantripped AU where it was like,,, 1920s mystery noir? 🧍
I miss that- I should do more with that-
#I didn’t forget about it#totally not#I just never settled on a concrete first person narrator#cantripped#cantripped podcast
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So I’m reading veil of Darkness now…
and figured those with the Cato fleas would enjoy this snippet:
“At the command of the apothecary, a serf entered the room from a side chamber and began scraping the remaining amniotic gel from my skin”
truly a gift for the serf Astartes shipper. for context: this is after Cato woke up from a wound that should have killed him and then got in one of the bitchest back and forth with his self proclaimed “rival”. I feel like I can’t discribe the drama here properly so this is what the dramatic guy did after waking up, from what should have been a killing blow:
Woke up and started beating on the draining casket demanding to be released.
tried to escape the apothecary and only let the apothecary check him out beavuse dude was already running the test. And then “refused the proffered hand” and crawl out of the casket by himself.
hear bad news and destroy medical equipment.
realized his rival had been weirdly hiding in the shadows, of his coma room. Purposefully piss him off.
get pissed off at the same treatment. Internally diss Agemman CAPTAIN of the first company, his rival.
find out he has to attend a debrief for the disaster of a mission that they just survived, get pissed about it, insult Agemman again.
think the phrase “ Agemman had every right yo strike me. To my irritation, he resisted, but he spoke though clenched teeth I knew he’d come close.”
Awkwardly asked about his weapons while a serf scraped his naked ass clean.
man is a god damn delight, but I would hate to meet him. So far veil of darkness 10/10.
#Veil of darkness#Cato Sicarius#warhammer 40k#great book#It feels like reading a teen diary#in a good way though.#Sicarius is a delightfully insufferable character.#This section is in first person narration and it’s just amazing to behold#I’m not even half way through chapter 1#I do hope we see more of scipio.#And his sgt buddies#I like them.
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ok ok okokokok ok but the part of the read where reece says 'my devil had been long caged and he came out roaring' is maybe the singular sexiest thing i've ever heard heLP
#personal#i'm genuinely going insane#it's at 53:37 if you wanna relive it btw#reece shearsmith#the read#dr jekyll and mr hyde#i dont think ive been this deeply affected by someone narrating one line before holy SHIT#also v glad i decided to not watch this w/ my mum#i dont know if i'd want her to be in the room when i heard that line lol#like me listening alone now and i literally screamed at it at first pfft
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idk, crowsx3 design??? sdkjfh
the heads are all made of porcelain, and can rotate like that one horror short film with kevan brighting voicing in it
#artswin#quick sketch up#idk#tsp#tspud#crowscrowscrows#crowsx3#the stanley parable#stanley parable#the stanley parable ultra deluxe#ik im probably not the first one to come up with this but i have an idea for smth so i wanted to make a vague idea for a design first#my current idea rn is that. at least for my au. since theres three crows. there needs to be three sort of proctors for the game#and since proctors are people who oversee exams/officer with responsibility at a school#what im thinking is that narrator and curator are both proctors who “oversee”/“admin the game" (according to oxford)#or “one who is emploied to manage to affairs of another”/“person who takes charge of or acts for another” according to wikipedia#they both at least have control over the game (ie. narrator writing the script n stuff/curators museum etc)#but they need a third.#in 2013 tsp 432 goes missing. sees that the wheel needs to keep turning#the crows see him understanding the situation. and how he wants to keep the game going. so they appoint him as another proctor#thus timekeeper. who gets added on to manage the settings and time in ultra deluxe#i have more to say but idk just yet sdkjfhskdf#i feel nervous just bc idk if im stealing someones idea or concept for this. or even getting it wrong even if its just an interpretation#maybe later ill explain idk sdkjfkjsf
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from Exit Strategy and Network Effect by Martha Wells
#the murderbot diaries#this series just uses first person narration in a way that is so 👌#anyway this is a Lot
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Imagine we get to the Paranormal Orphans chapter (410) in the anime, and instead of a normal narrator like Midoriya or AFO, it's just- Present Mic.

*Present Mic*
DAMN MAMA-RAKI! YOU REALLY GAVE BIRTH TO THAT?!
If only he was swept away by the river at birth and drowned- COUGH!!!
#the concept was funnier in my head#present mic spites afo at every turn and pities yoichi#has no idea about ofa and midoriya he just thinks yoichi is a poor person to be this guys younger TWIN brother#mic: *checking the papers* wait theyre twins?#the scary resemblance of Kudo to a known student (bakugo) but this kudo guy looks much nicer than “FIRST PLACE IS NOTHING” “DIEEE”#the raging Bakugo the public always saw#bnha#mha#boku no hero academia#my hero academia#yoichi shigaraki#afo#all for one#spoilers#bnha spoilers#mha spoilers#almost forgot those had to be separate tags#present mic#hizashi yamada#i think that when we go to the past AFO should be the narrator#because then we get to see AFOs perspective twisting everything from what we actually see and later understand#that to fit everything into his Demon Lord persona everything must match the narrative#so he looks and things and changes it around to fit his being Demon Lord rather than a lonely man#“I loved my brother” ‐> “Hes my possession must keep alive” (quirk makes him want things he likes or is interested in)#(which influences how he shows love too. but it does say he was born an arrogant hubristic baby)#(so. is that afo talking or the facts)
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