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I STG this game is the only thing that gets me to actually sit down and write regularly. People asked me for words? Cant let them down! and then I have fun in spite of myself. This is a chunk of my short story Lion from my 2020 NaNo collection. It finished the month as a series of scenes with no transitions, so I have been making a story out of it.
posted for: @tamsinswriting, @asha10100101010, @somefishycat
Y'all got a long snippet; I got caught up in this one this morning.
When 9:30 came and went and the rest of the group had not returned, Emma, started to get mildly concerned. She hoped that they had not gotten lost; the caves were well marked and the side tunnels were blocked form wandering, but if someone decided it was a good idea to break the rules, there were all kinds of potential dangers. By 10:00, Emma was feeling frantic. She stashed her gear in Gillian’s tent and headed up the trail towards the cave entrance in the hopes of finding her friends just running a bit late.
The cave mouth quickly appeared before her, and she saw some foot prints in the dirt heading into the cavern, but nothing coming out again . She started to enter and realized she had forgotten to bring a flashlight with her. As she turned around she noticed a wet spot on the cave floor, just at the point where the light began to fade. She walked closer to take a look and saw it was a smear of dark red blood. Her mind began to race with worry and fear as she frantically patted pockets for her cell phone to call the ranger station. She found it in side pocket of her pants and as she thumbed it open everything went dark as a thick meaty hand slapped a cloth over her mouth and a strong arm wrapped around her waist. She took in a deep breath to scream and immediately felt light headed and muzzy. Her thoughts scattered into a jumble and she passed out as she was being dragged backwards into the dark.
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When Emma woke her head was pounding, She was slumped against the wall of a cave and the world around her was pitch black. She heard small sounds that let her know that she was not the only one bundled against the wall and when she tried to open her mouth to cry out, she realized that she had been gagged and that she was bound hands and feet. She heard purposeful movement from somewhere else in the cavern and two people talking in a language she did not understand. She craned her head trying to see something of what was going on, but the room remained too dark to see anything clearly. Whatever conversation was being had by the people that she imagined must be their captors came to an end and she heard footsteps approaching her. She closed her eyes and pretended to be passed out, hoping that they would assume she was more disoriented than she was. The rough hands she remembered from before wrapped around her arms and pulled her away from the wall and up to her feet, giving her a bone rattling shake. “Wag ough girlie. Ye hev been paid for.“ His accent was unusual with guttural vowels and a rolling r sound that made his English very hard to make out. Bought and paid for? She stumbled a little on her unsteady legs but quickly found her balance and stepped back from that meaty hand. She had to get away from here. If she was compliant maybe this new person would take her somewhere with light and she could orient herself. Was this some sort of human trafficking ring on Cooper Mountain? She sensed another presence close to her and another hand reached out to touch her arm. “Come girl. I will lead you until we are way from these and I can make a light for you to walk.” These hands were smooth and warm to the touch. Their owner quickly scooped her up as though she did not weigh a thing and she felt a breeze on her face. They were running fast and silent through total darkness. She wanted to struggle, but she feared falling and getting knocked out again so she held herself as still as she could, holding back a whimper of terror as her captor carried her through the unrelenting darkness.
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📝"what stages are you currently in your WIPs?" for the ask game :D
Hello! Thank you for the ask! I'll go ahead and do all my WIPs that at least have some sort of scrap laying around, even if they are on hiatus or whatever!
Soft Touches, Godless Hands Book I - First Draft, am editing
Waking into Divinity Book I - First Draft, am writing
Waking into Divinity Book II - Outline
The Tales of Ozoarth, Book I - Outline, some writing
Rane & Korzan's Fantastical Adventures - First Draft, am writing, currently on hiatus as me and my partner don't have the time to work on it together.
The Ghost & The Machine - Outline
Mirroring Shadows - First Draft NaNo novel, currently on hiatus since I changed a lot of the world building and reworked the plot so I may go back and rewrite chunks of it.
Osiris' Trials - First Draft, first chapters currently posted to AO3 here. I've been discovery writing this so there isn't too much of an outline. Will probably eventually get around to it tho.
A Colloquy between Gods - First Draft NaNo novel, am writing, currently on hiatus just because I got a bit bored of writing it and wanted to work on other things. I wrote this during the stay-in-place orders of 2020 to give myself something to do.
The Cadence of Me and You - Outline. Will eventually get back around to it when the plot bunny strikes me again.
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🚀 20 Questions 🚀
Tag game tag game! Thank you @mayarab, your timing is impeccible, for nano is right round the corner (eek!) 🤸♀️
1. How many works do you have on AO3?
27!
2. What’s your total AO3 words count?
197,644!
3. What fandoms do you write for?
Inuyasha and the effervescent No Fandom!
4. What are your top 5 fics by kudos?
1. One Word 2. Homecoming 3. Evermore 4. Members Only 5. Two for the Show
5. Do you respond to comments? Why or why not?
Yes! Though sporadic, I do try (operative) and respond to all of them. It takes a certain set of variables for me to aquire the spoons, but I get there eventually. As for the why, I just like to say thanks :3
6. What’s the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?
Hm. You caught me. I am a compulsive happy ending built writer.
7. What’s the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?
Probably One Word? It's the most picket-fenced ending, at the very least.
8. Do you get hate on fics?
No. Inuyasha is a drop in the fanfiction ocean, and hate in this realm tends to be an echo, rather than a rabble.
9. Do you write smut? If so what kind?
I do! All kinds! Sex positivity is nifty my dudes!
10. Do you write crossovers? What’s the craziest one you’ve written?
I do not. Never say never though!
11. Have you ever had a fic stolen?
Not that I'm aware of.
12. Have you ever had a fic translated?
Yes! The lovely @minakok translated One Word into Spanish, and I am eternally grateful for her and those who have had a chance to read it 😭
13. Have you ever cowritten a fic before?
Technically, yes! I joined in on an AU art challenge that resulted in InuKag as a Reylo role-reversal piece. One thang led to another and before you know it, @boflicker and I went from brainworming to actualising that into a fic, Irredeemable. I've done a fair few art collabs, but this one is extra special to me; not only is Bo an excellent writer, but a stellar collaborater, and we are very often haunted by this story and it's characters while they're out there in the big wild kicking ass and taking names (love you BoBo) :3
14. What’s your all-time favourite ship?
Gosh. This one is so hard. How ever shall I pick? (deadpan, unserious)
15. What’s a WIP you want to finish, but doubt you ever will?
...lower your voice. I have every intention of finishing everything ever, prommy. Sharing is another question though :3
16. What are your writing strengths?
Characters (question mark) and The Hook(tm), possibly.
17. What are your writing weaknesses?
Momentum and retaining motivation via associated annoyances.
18. Thoughts on writing dialogue in another language for a fic?
I mean. Yeah, why not? If it calls for it, it calls for it.
19. First fandom you wrote for?
Inuyasha! Dated November 2020!
20. Favourite fic you’ve ever written?
One that I haven't posted 🦇
Weeheeeee this was a good finger stretch. I'm gonna tag @inussunflower @sin-and-punishment @moonnue @iam-jacks-redacted-information and anyone else that wants to join! ψ(`∇´)ψ
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2023 Writer Year-In-Review
Hi, I’m RaisedonRadio & FortressofmyPast on AO3 and FF.net. This is an on-going tradition since 2015. Check out my past year-end posts: 2022, 2021, 2020, 2019, 2018, 2017, 2016, 2015.
Tagging a few, but if you come across this, consider it an open tag! You’re welcome to tag me back, I’d love to read it!
@writercorianarose @shesailsships @talesofsorrowandofruin @azdesertwillow @goneahead @littlemissfandomworld @dreams-of-kalopsia @halleyuhm
Big change for me compared to last year—in addition to NaNoWriMo, I actually posted fanfics! I tried to add some new questions to this year’s edition, I hope they might even move out of my tiny circle.
Total Word Counts: 51,920 for 2023 NaNoWriMo 15,570 on 2022 NaNoWriMo project 19,193 for July 2023 Camp NaNoWriMo (mostly fanfics) 28,310 in published fanfics (this number is overlapping with camp nano, I wasn’t paying attention, so I’m not going to add everything together)
Total Number Of Completed Works: 10 Total Number of WIPS worked on this year: 10 or so How Many WIPs do you still have: 23
Looking back, did you write more than you thought you would this year, less, or about what you’d expected? I wrote way more than expected! I seriously didn’t think I would do NaNoWriMo again. And I published ten fics! That’s ten more than last year!
Did you take any writing risks this year? The NaNoWriMo project was definitely a risk for me. I basically had an idea and no outline. It was quite a challenge to my perfectionism issues—I had to basically never reread anything and just keep going, fully aware that I can better foreshadow the ideas that came up halfway through in the next rewrite.
Biggest Surprise: I wrote for NaNoWriMo again, which I was pretty sure wouldn't happen lol, and hit the word count, all through discovery writing, and having very little idea where I was going with it.
Biggest Disappointment: I dropped that above mentioned project the moment November ended! I can tell it has potential, hidden in there. I will definitely return to it.
Do you have any writing goals for the new year? I’d love to at least finish the first draft of the 2023 NaNoWriMo project, bringing it to a tentative end so I can actually reread it and go from there. And keep writing fanfic, and maybe even work on the 2022 nanowrimo project…
Fanfiction Questions Below! (if you don’t write fanfiction feel free to skip or rework the questions for your original works.)
Fandoms I’ve written in this year: I wrote fics for 7 different fandoms! For the following kdramas: Island, Tale of the Nine Tailed, Memorist, Royal Secret Agent, W: Two Worlds, May I Help You?, and a little Korean Web drama called Handmade Love.
Your most popular story of the year? That would be Besides You with 327 hits and 47 kudos. However Superhero got the most comment interaction with 4!
The story that was easiest/or most fun to write: I Think He Knows was fun to write! I do just love brooding with a heart of gold formerly immortal male leads.
Hardest story to write: Rescue Me, Superhero, Restore, and Prayers & Promises were four works that I had left for dead, and came back and found them to be basically finished and just needed proofreading. (So just in case anyone wondered how I turned out three of those in like two days: they were actually done and I was hellbent on getting them out of my WIPs list)
Your sweetest story: That would definitely be Superhero. I altered my normal narrative style to better fit the child’s character, and I was really pleased with how it turned out.
Your saddest scene: I feel like I hit a lot of angst this year, but nothing really sad?
The sexiest moment you’ve written this year? *coughs* I wrote five pieces of smut. (Half of my fanfics were smut this year?!) Umm, I’m torn between Beside You and Don’t Blame Me? But also Never Be the Same and Take On Me???
Your favorite tag: (whether you use it the most or just something witty/perfect for the story) My brother announced to me that he reads all my tags (he was trying to embarrass me about one of my smut pieces) so I did a shout out to him in the next fic. He saw it within the day, I was actually impressed.
Most unintentionally telling story: (have you accidentally or purposefully exposed a detail about yourself?) Religious guilt seems to be a reoccurring tag this year. In all seriousness, not quite sure why, but yet it kinda makes sense? (its complicated lmao) And for some reason not one, but two fics ended with marriage proposals?! (I’m so single.)
Are any of your fics named after/heavily inspired by music? I’m RaisedonRadio and it would be concerning if—checks list—less than 8 of the 10 fics weren’t named after songs, haha! (I’m actually just really bad at naming fics…)
Good To You and Besides You are both songs by the band Marianas Trench, and are heavily inspired by the songs. Rescue Me is by OneRepublic, one of those more vibes than lyrics inspired. I Think He Knows by Taylor Swift was definitely on repeat for that fic, as well as Don't Blame Me. (Poems), Prayers, and Promises was more a steal the name of the song by John Denver, for some reason I think Cold by Corbyn was on repeat when writing that one. Take On Me was named more for the similarities between the MV and the series! Never Be The Same was for the vibes of the song by Camila Cabello but not really the lyrics.
What’s your own favorite story of the year? Maybe it’s cheating but I’m not sure if I can really choose? I know it’s not a common writer sentiment but I really do like them all for different reasons.
Like I churned out Good To You and Besides You within ten days of each other in July, after not writing any fanfic basically for a year and a half.
And then I pulled Rescue Me out of the dead drafts pile and made myself work on more description.
I Think He Knows was my first foray into a brand new fandom.
Don’t Blame Me is one of my rare canon divergence fics.
Restore was another dead draft that I found to be mostly complete, and decide to release into the world even if I knew there was so much more I could have done with it.
Prayers and Promises was not only another new fandom, but for some reason, I decided to write for a side character. It’s still sitting on just 1 hit and that makes it all the better that I really wrote it for myself.
Superhero was out of my comfort zone of writing for a kid’s perspective and I was so happy with how it turned out.
Take On Me was a draft sitting at less than 1k words and I challenged myself to finish it before the new year, and got it done in two days.
And then, to finish it all off with the intense desire to have ten fics under the belt for 2023, I wrote Never Be The Same in less than two days for the last drama I had watched, and the speed that the last two fics were actually finished was a huge change for me.
Fanfiction risks you took this year? I wrote fanfic for not one, but two fandoms that I had to create the first tags for on AO3! Also, as I started to slip into just writing for kdramas this year, I’ve basically become my own proofreader and editor at this point. Any mistakes are my own, lol.
My favorite part of fandom this year: That would be getting two kudos and a comment on I Think He Knows, one of the fics that is the first in its fandom tag. To actually connect with more fans of such a tiny project was so cool!
Thanks for reading and here’s to next year!
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20 Questions For Fic Writers
Tagged by @theluckywizard, thank you! 💕
Tagging @lilbittymonster, @bogunicorn, @bdafic, @shretl, @mordinette, @fogsblue, @effelants, @sociallyacceptablemadness and @natsora. No pressure!
1. how many works do you have on ao3?
107!
2. what’s your total ao3 word count?
1,776,919, as of this morning.
3. what fandoms do you write for?
Currently only Dragon Age and Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood. But in the past I've written for Fallout 4, Mass Effect Trilogy, Dr. Who, Borderlands, and The Wayhaven Chronicles.
4. what are your top five fics by kudos?
What a Wicked Game to Play - the Behemoth, the Epic, the...story that ate my life for nearly two years straight. It currently sits at a cool 400K words and will be the focus of my NaNo goal this year. I'd like to have it finished. Solas/OFC, rated E.
Twist - the fic that got me really going in DA. An MGIT re-envisioning of the base game and all the what happens next? 197K words, complete. Solas/OFC, rated E. Fun fact, I started writing this fic before I'd ever played the game. 2020 was...uh...quite a year.
Junkyard Dogs - my very first fic. I started writing this before I really even knew what fic was. Before I even had heard of AO3. My sibspring got me an invite and the rest is history. I'm still incredibly proud of this fic, although I don't write quite like this anymore. 107K words, complete. Hancock/F!SoSu, rated E. (Are you noticing a trend? Yes, I write a lot of smut.)
Twist Some More - you guessed it, the sequel to Twist. My love letter to Carly and Solas and the happily ever after the game didn't give us. Baby included. 67K words, complete. Solas/OFC, rated E.
Humans Are Just...Like That - okay, so there's a story that goes with this one. This is a oneshot for Mass Effect, and it was brought to life via a long, hilarious thread in an ME discord server. I made a comment to the effect of 'someone should turn this into a fic' and everyone told me to go for it. So I did. It's a little bit crack, a little bit everybody lives and a whole lot of yup, humans are just like that. ~3K words. Background FemShep/Garrus, rated T.
5. do you respond to comments?
Yes, always! (Caveat: as long as it's polite. If you're rude, I'll call you on it, then freeze the thread.)
6. what’s the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?
No More My Heart Beats Without You, one of only 4 of my works with the Major Character Death warning. Solas/F!Trevelyan, 5555 words (I didn't plan that, but it's cool), rated E.
7. what’s the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?
TSM, without a doubt. The whole point of it was to write a fluffy, gloriously happy tribute to my first DA OC, Carly Lavellan. It'll make your teeth ache, I promise.
8. do you get hate on fics?
I've gotten some on WG, which is why I now moderate comments on it. It's gotten statistically big enough (in terms of both hits and word length) that some people are just not gonna groove with it. And hey, that's fine. But you don't need to tell me about it, okay? Just hit the back button.
9. do you write smut? if so, what kind?
Yes. And...yes. I've written all kinds. My only rule for smut is consenting adults.
10. do you write crossovers? what’s the craziest one you’ve written?
Nope!
11. have you ever had a fic stolen?
Not to my knowledge.
12. have you ever had a fic translated?
I got asked about a fic being translated, but I don't know if it ever happened.
13. have you ever co-written a fic before?
I have written two fics with my beloved @ir0n-angel. One for FO4 (a Deacon/F!SoSu oneshot) and one for DA (Solavellan modern AU, incomplete, been on hiatus for a couple years. Someday we'll finish it.)
And I've participated in three years' worth of round robin style collaboration with the DAFF server.
14. what’s your all-time favorite ship?
*snort Poly here. Don't ask me to pick a favorite, it doesn't work like that. 🤣🤣🤣
15. what’s a WIP you want to finish, but doubt you ever will?
Just Like Fire. It started out as a prompt fic to get me out of a slump. Actual Solavellan, canon compliant even. So you see where my problem is, right? I mean, I am the one whose blog title is Canon Shall Be YEETED. I've thought about maybe just tying up the loose ends and skipping ahead to the ending I've already written for it, but then I lose interest again after about five minutes. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
16. what are your writing strengths?
Good dialogue, lots of banter. I am routinely told by readers how well I keep characterization believable.
Good smut, realistic without being clinical.
Headcannon glitter. Being detailed oriented means I overthink and come up with some really deep ideas.
17. what are your writing weaknesses?
FINISHING THE DAMN THING. *ahem* I'm okay, I'm good.
Endings are rough for me. Not in that I don't know what I want to do with them, but more by the time I get to them, I've either lost interest or lost motivation. Or both. I know it looks like I'm on top of it when you look at my archive (only three incomplete WIP's out of 107), but some of them caused me Stress(tm) to finish and I've never been really happy with them.
18. thoughts on writing dialogue in another language for a fic?
I do it sparingly so it doesn't bog down the story. I translate it at the end, be that by chapter or oneshot. I know better than to fully trust google translate. And I'm careful with using fanon resources if the language is made up.
19. first fandom you wrote for?
Fallout 4, with the above mentioned JD. I stayed there for quite a while too. To date it's still my second most written fandom.
20. favorite fic you’ve ever written?
Again, poly. But I have some notables that I've returned to time and again. An incomplete sampling:
Maker Damned Fools - this is actually the first thing I wrote for DA. Varric/F!Hawke. 32K words, rated E. Initially it was a Fluffuary fic, but I always planned to expand on it. This year I did. Highlights for me reading it: chapters 4, 7 and 9.
Soft In Skyhold - another Fluffuary entry. Written as part of WG's overarching 'verse. So, Imogen and Solas, Adoribull, Varric and Elly Hawke, Terisin Mahariel and Morrigan. Cassandra and the Sky-Watcher. ~29K words, rated T. Highlights for me: chapters 5, 11, 13, 22, and 25.
She's My Plus One - my Dr. Who fic. Nine/Rose. Written x +1 style. 12K words, rated M. Highlights for me: chapters 4-6.
Unrepentant - a Solavellan oneshot. It's smutty, it's a little bit kinky, it's all in her head, right? Cuz it's the Fade. Look, sometimes you just need a particular flavor of dark!Solas. Not too dark, just like 62% cacao. 3100 words, obviously rated E.
Unexpected - an FO4 fic with a Kellogg/F!SoSu pairing. Yup, you read that right. Don't judge me. This was an early attempt at writing canon divergence and I'm still super pleased with how it came out. It even has a happy ending. 30K words, rated E. Highlights for me: honestly, all of it. I'll read the whole thing in a sitting when the mood strikes me.
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Pokemon/Digimon-Esque Bullshit
Being autistic over Pokemon and writing means taking a hammer to the entire Pokemon Cinematic Universe in three hundred unique ways and getting shit that's basically only united by "there are people and monsters". I've seen more modern takes on mon stories, but I feel like they all wanna be Pokemon 2.0 or they're leaning on Ow the Edge factor. So fuck it- I'll make my own and pretend Temtem and Palwold don't exist.
Because I don't like repeating myself (when I'm really repeating myself) and there's just. SO MUCH. So many different ways to approach Pokemon, and I will turn ALL of them into at least one (1) novel.
In no particular order-
Zunru (vicious deconstruction of the "monster as fighter" concept), which I started in 2020.
I have a WIP about Ash's departure from the anime (which I'm saving along with other short WIPs to get rid of in NaNo).
The Toon-iverse Saga plops Pokemon-esque characters in the real world and skewers the fandom.
FENmons (baby's first attempt from 2016- not very good on the mon stuff, but hey- we get to make fun of the orange cheeto man!)
I have an untitled side WIP that's about the mon genre in general, and focuses more on child-friendly naivety (sort of like Toon-iverse Saga, but different, aka "help my art project is mutating (again)").
(Still haven't figured out how to work Kieran into something yet. I have a lot of feelings about him. He recontextualized the games and how people interact with the player character forever for me. Oh well. Future WIP I guess. Maybe a short story? Novella? Maybe.)
And don't get me started on the Digimon style novels/WIPs. Holy shit.
Toon-iverse Saga (again, same as above)
Singularity (more optimistic source material deconstruction than Zunru. There's a focus on modern tech like social media algorithms and artificial intelligence because I want to throw kaiju at them.)
School's Out Forever (not officially Digimon-esque, but features kids with monsters that react to their emotions- c'mon)
The untitled WIP will hook around to Digimon since it's a crossover (of original shit???)
If it's not here, Tai threw his genes at the protagonist and gave them big hair, goggles, or both. Or I used the Adventure cast as building blocks to make a group of OCs (it's actually a really good base).
TL;DR- I am drowning in hyperfixation-related WIPs.
#writing#actually autistic#pokemon#digimon#sometimes my deconstructions are vicious as fuck#and sometimes they're like#here's a little guy he knows nothing#and will i publish???? ehhhhhh anxiety#i have things that aren't mon-related i want to break the ice with first#mostly small fantasy/sci-fi fantasy/dystopian things that only last one novel#or novellas...those too#i still have a lot of research to do on this...#there is no audience for this bullshit it's just me#ramble#i'm not readmoring this you WILL look at my bullshit#oh#trump dump#because he was running (the first time) when i wrote fenmons and it SHOWS
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SOMETHING ABOUT TEETH ⁄ camp nano 2023
the oresteia of aeschylus, translated by robin bond (2014) / —, @metamorphesque / the great, season 2 episode 10, dir. colin bucksey / the accident has occurred, margaret atwood / the invisible life of addie larue, v.e. schwab / on earth we’re briefly gorgeous, ocean vuong / the funeral of atala, anne-louis girodet de roussy-trioson / hotel orpheus, jason meyers / the pale blue eye, dir. scott cooper, (x) / alone with you in the ether, olivie blake (2020)
genre. speculative + literary + romance. comps. the invisible life of addie larue meets alone with you in the ether, but everything’s more ... messed up ˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶ logline. in a languid tale of love and violence, an immortal turns herself into the only person who can kill her. goal / status. 50k for camp nano, probably around 90-100k total / prepping hypothetical ao3 tags (sourced from the ao3 tag bot). “soulmates”, kinda cracky kinda funky, they clearly want to bang but angst doesnt let them, it’s not established relationship but there is like (?) established romance, rated p for pretentious, there were two beds actually :(, idiots, not even in love bruv just idiots, this whole thing doesn’t make sense.
notes. all i do is start new wips and not finish them. good thing i’m delusional. anyway, if u wanna be friends w me on nanowrimo, here’s my profile so we can cheer each other on <3
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whimsy-of-the-stars: a writeblr re-re-intro!
hey guys, it’s been a minute! I’m whimsy-of-the-stars, and since my main projects have kinda shifted around, I thought it would be a good time to update my intro! ngl it’s a pretty inopportune time to do a re-intro, since I’m close to the end of one draft and planning two more… it’s just overdue!
some info about me:
I’m gonna start college in the fall majoring in English with a concentration in Creative Writing! :D
learning languages is a passion of mine! I’m focusing on Spanish right now but I’ve dabbled in both Esperanto and Toki Pona (yeah I’m a nerd!)
I’m a video essay enjoyer and possibly maker, eventually
fiction podcasts and actual plays slap???
I have “I want to do too many things” disease and want to try making stories in many different mediums!
ttrpgs are really cool but I have yet to play them with other people! does that stop me from trying to make games… no
elements I like to write: Found family! Chosen ones (+ the subversion of)! Big Emotion™️! Organized crime (idk why it doesn’t leave me alone)! Gay people, of course!
genres I like to write (YA and middle grade): high fantasy, low fantasy, different -punk stuff, sci fi maybe, superheroes, fairy-tale esque, romance, coming of age
I also write poetry! You can find it in this tag: whimsy of the poetry
ALSO, I did DraftDash in January 2024, which was fun but I did end up petering out halfway thru. Follow my journey in the tag draftdash!
ok, now onto wips!
I am in a weird stage with a lot of my wips, but a re-intro was overdue so I decided to do it anyway!
wips I am currently writing:
apocalypse story!
status: first draft, 24k (almost done with part 1)
the basics: mg/ya apocalyptic + queer ?coming of age? story and its sequel, except they’re both short so they’re melded into one two-part book! it’s told thru diary entries with lots of extra ephemera glued in! part 1 of 2 is ALMOST done but I’m not inspired to finish it rn! ! I’m not gonna continue with part 2 right after, though, since I still need to plan it!
summary: stressed-out eighth/grader Allison goes to her old hideout in the forest to decompress, but one thing leads to another and she can’t find her way back home. the forest is seemingly ever-expanding, ever-changing, and even when she finds her friends who’ve come to rescue her, they still have to face the actual, real life botanical apocalypse that’s becoming more and more of an issue for the outside world. can they find their way home alive and well? and if they do get home, what will their home city even look like?
extras: fun fact I started this in April 2023 for camp nano and it has taken me this long to write the next 10k words! Also the main character is a bit of a self-insert, but of the person I was in lockdown in 2020!
um. That’s it for wips I’m currently writing rn lol
wips I am “revitalizing”:
(aka taking old drafts/concepts and turning them nice and new!)
Both of these have existed in different-ish iterations for years, however I am currently in the weird process of developing both of these into all-new things from an existing groundwork! Neither of them currently have “statuses” because it’s hard to explain where exactly I am right now!
heist story!
the basics: ya fantasy heist novel (maybe eventually a trilogy?) set in a faerie world that rapidly advanced not too long ago into a dieselpunk/decopunk society rife with corruption and crime!
summary: Logical and inquisitive teen Calliope is relatively normal. Her offbeat parents, however, have raised her in a house full of strange curios and old tomes of faery stories. But only when she starts to exhibit unwieldy shadow magic, and her parents invite a prim woman she’s never met before into their home do things really start to get strange. The woman whisks Calliope away through one of the aforementioned curios to a noir hubworld where ancient faerie bloodlines and newfangled magitech collide. Why? To take part in a high-stakes heist with a surprising trio of other teens who want nothing more than to take down the crime boss who runs their town.
extras: this one’s a weird one imo. it’s one of the oldest wips that I am still working on, tho this one had a break of about 3 years!!! also I originally wrote it in hot pink comic sans XD
new superhero story!
(I am also revitalizing this one, but it’s in a way less put-together state! not much to say yet lol!) (also it’s not very new I just call it that)
it’s a ya superhero thing that features teenage (often queer) antiheroes trying to balance their heroic + civilian identities!
featuring: the shittiest entertainment/hero management company you’ve ever seen, shared trauma, gray morality, two different rock bands, and heroes that are at once government agents, influencers, and corporate concoctions!
considering making a “help me name my characters” post because i desperately have to name/rename like 3/4 of all of these characters!!!
more ideas I have bouncing around:
(lightning round!)
old ya romance wip i need to revitalize about two teens enter a competition to make a demo album and end up falling in love in the process (also they’re lesbians XD)
offbeat, ya supernatural + historical fantasy about a girl university student who is buried alive, and upon getting rescued, starts to transform into a strange underworld creature. also features a cute gravedigger :D
a musical about standardized testing (yeah lol) that’s goofy and queer and explores how seniors + juniors are so freaking stressed out all the time lol
that’s all folks! :D
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🌬️⚡️🌌
WIP Weather Asks
🌬 Wind - What was the easiest part of your WIP to write?
so far? i think the dream/hallucination sequences in blinding neon and stellar parallax have been the easiest and some of my favorites. like jane was off her entire ass on so many sedatives because of her biotics and also like. ancient ai brain damage. and then frankie is literally just not getting any sleep and she is quite literally a ball of stress rn
⚡️Lightning - Have you ever spontaneously added something to your story that you wouldn't have added normally? If so, what made you do it?
answered here!
🌌 Clear Skies - How long have you been writing your current WIP?
oh man let's see.
botls: early 00s, it was started some time in middle school
irregular orbit: i think i started this in 2012? it needs to undergo major rewrites before i'm willing to share like, any of it lol
caught in the crossfire: started like juuuuuust after irregular orbit
what you will i will not name: i've been writing this one on and off in tandem with crossfire because i'm as incredibly autistic about destiny as i am about mass effect
tomorrow isn't promised: 2015, i think. started revamping it in 2020? ish.
arsonist chronicles: this was my 2021 nano project! i won with it and this sucker hasn't even hit the end of act i lmao
blinding neon: 2022!
helix: also 2022, a few months down the line from blinding neon!
xatal: either late 2022 or early 2023
#ans.txt#why yes these are all the longwips i'm working on more or less at the same time#i tend to grab like three to chew on at once and then rotate them out. sustainable farming or something
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i was sure i sent you an ask for that wip game but am starting to think i only did so in my head. apologies if it didn't arrive.
💗📄🗣️
💗Is there a scene you can’t wait to write for a WIP?
oh gosh, so many. i guess in my current nano project i'm really excited to write the initial cannibalism scene, which i'm actually getting close to, and the ending which mirrors the prologue really nicely.
📄What’s a WIP you never finished that you would like to go back and revisit?
ummmmmm....all of them? :') Thread the Needle (our nano project from 2020) comes to mind, though; it needs some major reworking, but the bones are good, and i think i can turn it into a better story if i ever get around to it. it's about mad scientists and wizard apprentices and knitting.
🗣️Talk about your favourite WIP
this is like asking me to pick a favorite child. my favorite WIP changes literally every two seconds i think...so i guess i'll talk about my current nano project??? it is, as i have stated before, a "cozy horror," but cozy in the sense that i'm hoping it instills a sense of belonging for stigmatized mentally ill people with violent fantasies while horrifying everyone else. <3 it's about four dysfunctional siblings, all of whom are serial killers without the others knowing, who have to spend a year in their childhood home in order to inherit it after their father dies under mysterious circumstances. i based the four main characters on my four favorite character archetypes at one point, and it's been through many iterations since then. it's my hope that this year i'll come out with a complete draft that needs minimal restructuring!!!
#THANK YOU CURRY!!!#i did not get any other asks from you so im glad you sent it again#beneath the ask#recurringdragon
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2023 fic roundup
2023 was the year of the comeback. in 2021, i wrote about 25k; in 2022, i didn't even keep track. meanwhile, my total wordcount last year was 119,226 words. while that doesn't come close to my 200k from 2020, i am arguably prouder of last year and what it represented. my writing isn't dead! my abilities haven't vanished! i can have fun making art again :D
as always, the summer was the most productive for me. you can see that i wrote more in the spring than the fall -- this roughly corresponds to how i was doing during those times, lol. i had a Much Better spring semester than the fall. september was very rough, i had a very bad time, and it meant my mental health suffered for the rest of the year. but hey, at least i was writing essays :')
some more scattered thoughts:
i was arguably pretty consistent this year? may/june/july all had about the same wordcount (roughly) and i think that's cool. my goal isn't to be doing NaNos, it's to be writing consistently, so i'm very happy with this
ao3 says i published 67k in 2023. minus the first chapter of something out of a dream, which was published in 2020, i believe that's 65k or so total. i wrote 72k of fanfic last year, meaning that there's about 8k from last year still sitting in my google drive (a rough eyeball at my WIPs folder confirms this). these numbers don't QUITE make sense to me, since i used a fair bit of old material in what i published last year, but i'm not going to think about it too hard
i published fic for a whopping fifteen fandoms in 2023. nine of those were fandoms i'd never published anything for before! i am so, so proud of this stat. i remain multifandom as all hell and seeing that represented in my work makes me really :D
two fics -- be amazed by the sky and i got your back (and you got mine) -- were crossovers! i'd only ever written one crossover before (stay all day in the sun, which i still love dearly) and it was fun to play in these playgrounds (mostly by sticking the librarians into other universes, xD)
i published 25 fics last year! and five of those fics were less than 1k, which i also really love. this year i really tried to let go of my idea that my fics Had to be more than 4k (and super polished) before they could see the light of day. i think my writing has been more fun and less stressful because of that.
i polished off 4 multi-year WIPs last year: but the verse is sweet, something out of a dream, don't wanna see you go (but it's not forever), and all we can do today. it felt so, so good to finally get those out there. the only one i have left from The Great Hiatus of 2021-2022 is éponine de bergerac. i will finish that someday, but i'm letting her take her time, because she deserves it. (i DID make good progress on that fic, which is something at least!)
most popular fic of the year was sit there in your heartache, which. is a spirk fic written right after a relevant episode, so not a surprise lol. the fic that surprised me most is actually the sisterhood of the travelling main character plotpoints -- i kinda expected that one to vanish quietly, but the hatchetfield fandom is WAY more active than i expected! which is very cool :D
the fic with the fewest hits was sidenote, which doesn't surprise me, since the librarians isn't a very active fandom and it's a rareship within the fandom anyway. the people who DID read it were very sweet, so i am very grateful for them. (i'm doing fic with the fewest hits because i feel like it's better to focus on that than What Didn't Get Kudos)
i started 2024 with 5 WIPs. i actually already finished one (and then immediately started its sequel, whoops) (shoutout to the ds9 modern au, i'll make a real post about that sometime). none of these fics are particularly progressed, but i'll keep working on them and try to find the Finishing A Project Dopamine from ficlets if i need it.
i didn't really have any Writing Goals for 2023 aside from doing any writing at all, lol. i think for 2024 i want to try to get more consistent with my writing -- instead of doing x number of words per month (which usually happen over 3-4 Big Writing Days), i'd rather try to write for 5 days out of every week, or something like that. we'll see what i can get done.
in the meantime: thank you guys for listening. i'm proud of what i did last year, and i'm excited to see what happens next year :D
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Get to know your fanfic writer!
I was tagged by @callista-curations and actually got to the end of the week with a bit of energy for once, so... here we go. ;)
When did you post your first ever fanfic?
The first EVER was on ff.net probably around 2000-2004? For a friend, for an obscure show nobody's heard of. My first fic I posted for myself was 2020.
First Character(s) you wrote?
I actually wrote original characters in the Mass Effect fandom. My short thought experiment on machine translation.
Main Character(s) you’re currently writing?
Nihlus Kryik, David Anderson, Commander Rentola
Character(s) you haven’t written about before but plan to write about soon?
Nyreen Kandros, Ashley Williams. Though they might take a bit since I'm still kinda marinating on what I want to do there.
Fandom(s) you’re currently writing?
Mass Effect! Hyperfixation fandom, go! (I write meta posts for Our Flag Means Death, but do not intend to write fic.)
Platonic pairing(s) you’re currently writing?
Commander Rentola and Ashley Williams
Romantic pairing(s) you’re currently writing?
Nihlus Kryik/Saren Arterius, David Anderson/Saren Arterius (yep!).
Your top AO3 tags?
Romantic Comedy (LOL). Good job, barfics!
Current platform you use for posting?
AO3. I've read a bunch of fic for different fandoms over the years and I'm pleased to be able to contribute when I have the energy.
Snippet of the WIP you are currently working on?
So bar!fics are going to have a long!fic sequel. Keep in mind I AM A SLOW WRITER with multiple wips, to the point where the 'easy' one-shots get published first.
I'm not sure about POV or pacing, but it'll be in a different voice and tone than the originals and have actual mission-oriented plot and some developing relationship stuff.
If you don't want spoilers, I've put it below the cut. ;)
This is a Very Rough high-level outline of a fragment of the entire plot, because my 'other' current WIP is maybe gonna be a nano project. I have various wip possibilities dueling it out for my attention and will see you in December. xD
Normally I would tag a few people to play (and if you feel like playing and you are reading this, IT IS YOU WHO IS TAGGED xD), but specifics are beyond my brain tonight.
Outline time~
Saren entertains Nihlus with his own history and experience of the Skyllian Verge, as well as being a sort of guide to the full intelligence picture, as he understands it.
Nihlus (with a snap of intuition) puts together that something bigger and more urgent than Saren thinks is happening or likely to happen, and it makes him restless and want to investigate immediately, because what if his intuition is right?
Saren insists that Nihlus should go as soon as his ankle’s recovered. He has his own authority.
Nihlus declines to ‘rush’ into something and presents an alternative of walking Saren through his process and treats this as a getting-to-know you thought exercise to keep Saren distracted from how fucking miserable the detox process is.
Saren and Nihlus together, working the problem over food and no access to other sources of information beyond what they can recall, come up with a terrible plan.
Nihlus can infiltrate the merc group by having a public falling-out with Saren.
Saren can get sent to hunt down “Rogue Spectre” Nihlus in the Verge.
Nihlus treats this seriously and starts workshopping different options while Saren is getting increasingly agitated about the whole concept of the frame-up.
Saren: I can’t ask you to do this.
Nihlus: Fine, you’re not asking. I’m volunteering.
Saren: I don’t know if I can let you do this.
Nihlus: It’s my decision.
Saren: -can’t dispute this, even if he doesn’t like it-
Saren: -eventually agrees, though he doesn’t like it-
Saren: Alternatives.
They come up with others that have less advantage in discretion, timing, or access.
Saren is forced to admit that Nihlus’s idea about infiltrating a group directly is the best one, since it allows them the most flexibility in cover story and depth of access. Plus, Nihlus is marked.
Saren: I’ve never asked.
Nihlus: -tells him-
Nihlus: What are you going to need for your part to work?
Saren: You, eyes open, and no hesitation. Trust me to manage my end no matter what you hear or what happens.
Nihlus: -kinda loves this about Saren- With my life.
Saren: It may come to that.
Nihlus: We’ll worry about that when it happens.
It will happen.
Saren: A better medical regimen.
Nihlus: I’ve never asked.
Saren: -tells him-
... and that's all you get to see for now. xD Be intrigued! Be very intrigued. If you can guess what canon event this is gonna be AU for, you get bonus points. ;)
#ferus tag games#my writing#mass effect fic writing#ferus chats#i can have a little tag game as a treat#thanks for tagging me!
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NaNoWriMo chapter 3 for the WIP game?? :D
For your sake, Spoon, I'm going answer for Nano 2016 instead of 2020 (which is Yet More MDZS Fic). ;) 2016 is one of the original SF novels I plug away at occasionally:
There was someone waiting in front of Decker's door again as he turned the corner. They were tall, with dark hair, and he was expecting Remington, so his brain took a half second to register the differences and by that time it was too late to duck back into the main corridor. Running would just imply he had a reason to run, so he pinged the guy's ID as he walked up. Felix Grozdan. Age: 46, gender: male, occupation: third shipmate on the cruiser Intervention. Further digging indicated the Intervention had arrived in port a week ago and was scheduled to ship out in a little over ten days. Decker thought about Remington's timeline, and hid a frown.
He stopped a few feet back from Grozdan, hands in his pockets. "Can I help you?" he asked. Slim chance, but maybe the guy was just looking to hire him.
Grozdan looked up, and a nasty grin crossed his face. Oh, that was not a good look. All worry about looking suspicious fell away. Decker turned and booked it down the hallway back towards civilization.
Or tried to, at least. Grozdan was fast, faster than baseline human, and Decker found himself swiftly colliding with the far wall. A hand grabbed him by the collar and flipped him around, holding him so his feet struggled to reach the ground.
"Ow," Decker coughed, grabbing the guy's hand with his left and trying to pry it loose. "What the fuck, dude? Is this really how you greet people, because I gotta say it is not very nice--" All the while his free hand twitched at his side, scanning the local area for anything he could take advantage of. The guy had a near-field connection of some kind, probably connected to the piece of hardware hooked over his ear-- Decker was more than close enough to connect, even with his shitty port, and got through the defenses in half a second. Cheap-ass shit, he thought dismissively, as the guy's life opened up to him. Communications, porn, bank accounts-- there, Decker thought, and slid past the bank's defenses with ease and into the guy's account. It wasn't much of a challenge when the log-in was biometric and he had the guy standing right in front of him. He had a transfer set up to zero out the guy's account when the guy lifted him higher and slammed him back against the wall again. "--with Remington?"
Decker opened his mouth, about to threaten to drain the guy's account if he didn't let him go. Then the last few words registered. "Uh, what?" he said, intelligently.
"I said, what the fuck are you doing with Remington?"
A few things clicked through Decker's mind at lightning speed. The fact that Remington was probably still SF. The merc crew he was so intent on joining. And this guy, from that same crew. Decker wasn't entirely sure what was going on, but he was starting to get the edges of it. And he wasn't sure he wanted anyone to know he'd been associated with the SF just yet.
"Why?" he asked, extemporizing wildly. Only one plausible reason came to mind. "Are you fucking him too? Look, I'm sorry, I didn't know he was in a relationship--"
The guy's eyes widened and he loosened his grip a little in surprise. "Wait, what."
Decker leaned back so he could look the guy in the face. "You know. Remington. Tall, dark hair, the kind of ass you just want to-- urk." He choked, reaching up to grab at the hands that were clenching down on his windpipe. "Okay, so, maybe not," he whispered.
"You're telling me that every time Remington comes here you two are just fucking? The entire time? Last time he was here for five hours."
"Maybe you can't think of things to do for five hours, but--" Decker tried to brace himself, but spaceship walls were hard and so was his skull when it impacted with a resounding thunk. He blinked and found himself sprawled on the floor at Grozdan's feet with no particular memory of how he'd gotten there. "Motherfucker," he groaned, clutching at the back of his head. Christ, couldn't he have aimed somewhere else? It wasn't like he didn't have brain damage to spare already. His hand came away wet and red and sticky. He blinked again, and for a moment there were wailing alarms and the sound of airlock doors slamming, and nothing but corrupt data flowing down his nervestem--
--Grozdan leaned down, getting right up in Decker's face. "If I find out you're lying to me, I will find you again," he said, very softly. "And I know where you live."
"Why, did you want to join us or something--?"
Decker doubled over, coughing. Asshole was wearing fucking steel-toed boots. His footsteps rang on the decking as he walked away.
Decker stayed like that for a long moment, trying to put his world back together. His head spun, which wasn't all that out of the ordinary, but it wasn't usually this bad. His legs didn't seem to want to work with his brain. He slumped back against the wall. This was a low traffic corridor, one of the reasons he'd picked it to live on. No one was going to find him. He could call station security, but this was Harmony, and they were the most useless motherfuckers in existence. Besides, then he'd have to explain what had happened, and he had no desire to do that. He could call the med section, but he had first aid supplies in his room, and it seemed a waste.
While he waited for things to start working again, he sent a quick message to Riley's PCD. Wanna explain why one of your merc buddies just showed up at my door?
The message delivered, but there was no response. Decker let his head sink down against his chest. He'd get up. Eventually.
Time kind of… elided.
The next thing he was aware of was footsteps coming down the corridor at a run, and an indrawn breath. "Shit," someone said. "Decker. Fuck. Are you okay? Can you hear me?"
There were gentle hands on his face. Decker opened his eyes to see Riley up close and personal. His brows were drawn and his mouth was pressed white with worry. He was still stupidly handsome. "Hey," Decker said, a little slurred.
"Hey, there you are," Riley said, kneeling. "How do you feel? Can you tell me what happened?" He tilted Decker's head back and forth, examining his pupils.
"Feels… like the wall 'n my head had a… minor disagreement," Decker said, flinching as the moment aggravated the pounding in his skull.
Riley glanced up at the wall and winced. "That seems pretty accurate." Decker followed his gaze to see a streak of red on the wall-- probably just around five feet eight inches above the ground-- dripping down towards the floor. Huh. That was kind of gross. Someone should clean it up.
"One of y'r friends… stopped on by," Decker said. It seemed important.
"I know. I got your message." Riley smiled a little, though it wasn't precisely a happy smile. "Do you want me to call Med, or is there somewhere else you'd rather--?"
"Room." Decker gestured vaguely. "I've got… stuff."
"Inside it is." Riley slid his arms around Decker's back and under his knees, lifting him off the floor with the kind of ease that spoke of long hours in the gym. Or some kind of technological help. Did he have anything else installed besides the leg? Decker clutched at his shoulders as things spun wildly, pressing his face into Riley's chest. He hurt too much to even enjoy it. "Oh, motherfuck. Ow, ow, ow…"
Riley's arms tightened a fraction. "I am so sorry. Just a little bit further…"
The door read Decker's biosigns and opened for them. Riley maneuvered Decker onto the couch, very careful not to aggravate anything. Decker curled up on his side, hand covering his eyes, and waited for the world to stop tilting. If it ever would. Oh, god, he hoped this hadn't done too much more damage… To distract himself, he listened to the sound of Riley rummaging through his kitchen cabinets. Right idea, wrong spot. "First aid's… in the bathroom," he managed.
He wasn't sure he'd been loud enough to be heard, but Riley's footsteps moved in the correct direction. There was silence as the door swished shut, and Decker let himself drift for the moment.
He came back to a hand on his shoulder and he jerked away instinctively, which turned out to not be such a great idea when he almost fell off the couch. Riley caught him as he was about to go over.
"I got a concussion pack," he said, hands gentle as he rearranged Decker so he was further from the edge.
"Yay," Decker said, muffled by the couch cushions. They smelled weird. Could you wash a couch? Decker wasn't sure. Maybe he should try vacuuming sometime.
…nah.
"You've got like six in there. All military grade." Decker heard the poptab on the pack hiss as pressure was released, and he winced as Riley pressed it to the back of his head. The gel was cool against his skin as the nanoparticles started work on the broken skin, delivering targeted medication that would stop the bleeding and reduce the swelling. "Do you play football or something?"
Decker snorted a laugh, even as it sent a spike of pain through his head. "Yeah, 's me, the football type," he said into the fabric.
There was more rustling as Riley pulled out the scanner. "In that case, I take it you know this is going to hurt a bit," he said, free hand settling on Decker's shoulder and holding him still as he flipped the switch.
"Mhmm." Decker's hands curled in the couch as the high whining noise filled the room, growing louder until it seemed to pass beyond all rational thought, piercing straight through the center of the injury.
Decker rode it out until the medpack shut off, three quick beeps and then blessed silence. He let out the breath he'd been holding all at once, almost a sob.
"Um," Riley said, fiddling with the scanner. "It says there's some anomalies it couldn't fix?"
Decker grunted. Words. He could… words.
"Do I need to be worried about it?" Riley asked.
"'s… normal," Decker managed.
Riley's sigh was barely audible, just a breath of air on the back of Decker's neck. "If you say so."
Decker faded out after that. He could hear Riley moving around his apartment, and the water running, but it didn't seem particularly relevant or interesting. Then someone settled next to him on the couch, cushions dipping beneath his weight. A wet cloth touched the back of his head. He wanted to protest-- he didn't know Riley well enough for this level of intimacy-- but it felt good. And he smelled like blood, and he hated that.
That was the last thing Decker remembered for a while.
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1, 12, and 15?
Thank you for the ask! <3
1. what's the fic youre most proud of?
There's a handful of contenders, but honestly, overall, probably An Open Hand. I managed to accomplish multiple things with it that I wanted to do and hadn't pulled off before, and it's the first fic of that length I've seen to completion (the longest I'd written and edited to posting-level satisfaction before that was 45k). Also it's an "everything and the kitchen sink" of elements and tropes I just plain like.
12. What’s your perfect environment to create/write?
One that doesn't have a lot of other inputs! I struggle with distractions a lot, and fare best when I have a large chunk of time ahead of me (so I don't have to fear getting really into my work and then being pulled abruptly out) and minimal distractions. At home I try to create that by working on my laptop instead of my big computer (the new laptop is not as helpful as the old one in this respect because it can actually have more than one program and/or two tabs open at a time, but the trade-off is it doesn't take 15-20 minutes to open a program or new tab), down in the sunroom where the only potential physical distraction is the cat. I also tend to write quite a lot when traveling because travel naturally creates those conditions for me--plane rides, spurts of not-driving on road trips, boring hotel rooms, etc.
A mug of tea helps a lot regardless of location and circumstance, of course. :>
15. How do you think your writing as improved over time?
Hmmm. I mean, over time in general, it's improved in a lot of ways. Over the last couple of years (a.k.a. the time I've been in the Genshin fandom), I think I've done a lot of improvements on plotting and pacing, though for anyone who hasn't seen my original/older work then those improvements may not be obvious? Fanfic turns out to be a good low-stress space to play with that stuff. (One of the reasons I am so proud of An Open Hand is that I tried a lot of things around pacing in revisions, not just writing, that taught me new tricks, and I was able to bring those into play in the year following as I revised an original novel I'm working on.)
I don't think my prose has improved that much in the sentence level, and in fact I have a number of what I consider Known Bugs in my fanfic prose at present that I'm not putting effort into fixing when I write or revise because I, honestly, like my current prose flow even if it isn't ideal, and so that's the sort of killing-my-darlings I only worry about with my original work. I like purple prose, both reading and writing, and fanfic is where I can just do what's fun instead of what's Good.
But yeah, from a personal perspective, my pacing and to a lesser extent my plot flows have leveled up a fair bit from where I was in early 2020! As an example, I have a novel I wrote the first draft of as my 2020 Nano and obviously a first draft is going to be rough and a Nano one very much so, but I can hold it up against my current longfic and even with the WIPs, sheerly on the planning levels, I can see where I know more and have more of a toolbox than I did when I was slamming that out.
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We Call It Gravity 2.0? 👀👀
oh! oh yeah, my one piece nano project from 2020 that used to be a text rpg player insert adventure that used to be an original fantasy book idea 🙈 yeah, well. this wip has almost 12k words and it is still firmly in the first chapter of the story.
the plot is something like "the main character who is from an opressed class of workers escapes tunnels, swearing to come back and free their people has an adventure in the outside world trying to find the legendary sky home of their ancestors, and while doing this gains allies and unravels a history of demigods and magic related to the current state of their people", and boy. the storyline is super elaborate by my standards, because all the times i've tried to rewrite it some new pieces have fallen into place.
mostly this one is waiting for another nano month (when i'm not recovering from a surgery or too busy to breathe) to roll around at the same time i'm riding a trafalgar law hype. but i'll pick it up! i promise! here a taste:
#thank you for the ask!#and my bad this is not a fandom you are invested in lol#but you know i just have so many fandoms rotating in my brain rip
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Thanks Remi!!
I'm going to use the same words as prev. I don't have very many fic wips because they were all on my hs email (RIP) sooooo I'm taking words from my various nano projects.
Nanowrimo Summer 2020
Jeff slowly positioned his foot over her. In Alice's peripheral vision she could see two men trying to talk Jeff down, a woman in the corner on a phone, perhaps with the proper authorities. Alice prayed to gods she didn't believe in that he would just do it already. It wasn't as if she had any particular reason to be alive, any particular motive, it wasn't as if anyone would care. How could they if she herself couldn't?
Kevin Day fic
Buy a burner phone, leave your smart phone at home, bring cash, but not enough to seem suspicious. Wear a mask, wear a hat, wear a new posture, wear a new life like a new pair of jeans … a pair that flatters your figure rather than looking like a pathetic attempt at playing the cards you were dealt. In the act of hiding you will stop hiding. You will let those habits you try so hard to keep out of view come to the surface.
Nanowrimo Fall 2016
I don't know what I expected, no one was around. No one to hear my cries begging for forgiveness; no one to hear my screams of pain as I laid on the floor surrounded by the flames. I knew there was only one thing left I could do. One favor left for me to do for humanity. I mumbled the words that I knew would make all the difference.
Nanowrimo Fall 2017
I wake up again and hear soft footsteps outside in the hallway. gosh, how I wish I could just sleep forever.
Nanowrimo Summer 2019
She knew nothing of the real world, not even her own voice. would she even recognize her face in the mirror?
I loved this chance to look back at the various projects I've written over the years!!!
Tagging v pressurelessly @themultifandomdisaster and @ghostbusterscantcatchme
Y'all's words are: elevator, sky, orange, Monday, and car
Tagged by @yxlenas to find random words in WIPs.
My words: hell, stop, waist, hour, right
Too lazy to tag but if you want to do it then your words are food, ten, hot, game, angry
All of these are from the trapped between two lungs outline because I have no WIPs right now (haven’t started ch25 yet)
HELL
Steve says “you’re allowed to be wrapped up in yourself, you’ve been through hell.” (Season 5 Episode 4)
STOP
“I will keep coming back. I won’t stop.” (Season 5 Episode 2)
WAIST there is none so instead I did WAIT
Jonathan decides they need to go home and wait for Joyce to land in Alaska. (Season 4 Episode 3)
HOUR
Steve asks how long he’s been out for, Nancy tells him just about an hour. (Season 5 Episode 1)
RIGHT
“He was right to take me. He knew all along” (Season 5 Episode 4)
#madi posting#tag games#ALSO I KNOW THE GRAMMAR WAS BAD IN SOME OF THESE#i was 11 in 2016 so plz cut me some slack T-T
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