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So I was watching the trailer of WHA and that got me thinking about the length of the first episode because of how dummy thicc Chapter 1 is and so I looked it up because I don’t have my copy with me at the moment and OH GOD—
I knew it was long, but 63 fucking pages?!??? By comparison, here are the lengths of the other chapters:
Chapter 2 — 67-104 (37 pages)
Chapter 3 — 105-136 (31 pages)
Chapter 4 — 137-172 (35 pages)
Chapter 5 — 173-204 (31 pages)
Chapter 1 is twice the length of the rest of the chapters in volume 1.
#witch hat atelier#wha#wha anime#anime#why this chapter gotta be so long#like I knew it was long#but my brothers and sisters in Christ#it’s dummy thicc
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It's not easy being a villian's fan, lemme tell ya 😔😔
#in a way gege subverted our expectations again?? yay? idk i liked the chapter but i dont know if Yuuji still UNDERSTANDS Sukuna#because for all that yap to work you actually need to know a thing or two about the other person yknow? and not just forcing your own#philosophy on the other person without understanding their life experiences i guess#but the hatred between them is so real lol#but also yuuji's “leave fushiguro and come back to me then I'll spare your life” you're telling this to a man who doesn't give af whether#he lives or dies as long as he gets a good fight also Also!! WHY would he want to be trapped in a vessel like that again??THINK Yuuji THINK#I'm also a bit sad because i think this is the start of Sukuna's conclusion phase siiighh ina way i hate that 😣😣#sukuna#yuuji#itadori#ryomen#jjk 265#jjk leaks#manga#jujutsu kaisen#being a sukuna fan ain't easy 😔 but somebody's gotta do it#ryomen sukuna
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Hey, I just found out about your LIAB fanfic and lemme tell you, I almost finished it all in a day >:)
But I had to study and go to bed, so only a quarter of the fic is left unread.
Ngl I'm not a fan of reading long fics but THIS CAPTIVATED ME <333
Love it so much, can't wait to read the 2nd part soon!!!
yayyy!! So happy you're enjoying!! (I’m cackling because this is like the longest long fic you could have picked for someone who doesn’t like long fics)
part 1 can absolutely be read on its own but I do continue the journey through part 2 & 3! The final installment is otw to being completed but it will probably still be unfinished by the time you get there! You seem to read fast!
GOOD LUCK ON STUDYING & SLEEPING!!! Thanks for the sweet ask!!
#This next chapter is being a B R A T#too long damn it#I got too excited & wrote too many words and now I gotta do a stupid pt 1 & pt 2#Good news is that it’ll all be written so not a long gap in chapter updates#PART 1 LIAB MY BELOVED#I miss the prison#Why couldn’t we have 1 million words in just the prison haha#I think zukka would be dead if that happened but still I miss prison#*twirls around boiling rock jetsuki zukka fic idea*#I mean maybe I’ll do it just because I love prison fics haha#I was trying to avoid being the prison ao3 authors but…. Maybe I should just lean into it haha#THANKS FOR THE ASK ANON SORRY FOR RAMBLING IN THE TAGS#liab#leaving it all behind#ITF#ask
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for gort about mmy fic im losing my mind a ltitle
#how did it become 3 in the nmorning...#ah....#help#yawn yanw im so o tired#mrpgh#i wish i could be a little less slow at the things i do because it's like#i wanan do them#and i wanna finish them#i have a tendency to just not do things#im not sure why#i have other fic ideas tooo theres the panty crack fic#and then this long fic or . Atleasrttt chaptered fic i wanna do#but im just So bad at sititng down and. Doing it.#so bad so bad#one day ill just set aside all my things and go “no im too busy i have to stare at my screen and try to finish”#im just too perfectionist over my writing.#spend so much time looking for the right word#and it's a sign of love but damnit could i love you a little faster please#sigjjjhhh#me when creating means Ive Gotta Create... so mean to me#micetalk
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#it has been a blast writing the pregnancy fic but I gotta say#I reread the last few chapters of no mere mortal this morning and#I love my girl the most at her most divorced#part of why the next update has taken so long is because I keep flopping between that and different veilguard-era one shots……#so many wips but so much time still til oct 31
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Authentic Story of the Shining Force - Saint Fencer Max - Chapter 4
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This is the last boob joke. We're free at last.
Here's the retranslation of every scene with the Spring of Recollection in the game. Overall, her speech here is fairly close to what she says in Waral in-game, with a few details from her final appearance sprinkled in, like her care for Cain. It does misses a few nuances though, like the Legacy being more than just Dark Dragon.
I don't think I've ever seen art of the Spring, but notably, she gets a portrait in the GBA version, and it looks a lot like the manga design, with the slightly wavy hair and especially the blank eyes.
Obviously, the manga rushes through the plot since it's short, thus a lot of places are skipped. I didn't even feel like pointing them out before. However I will point out Waral not being here this time, because Waral happens to not be in the beta map either, and it has very contradicting lore between the ASCII guide and the World Book, meaning it might have not been well developed. Besides, Chapter 5 is very weirdly structured. You get two ship battles that are basically the same, you get to Waral by accident, you advance the plot by going to Ring Reef for no reason and everyone telling you it's off-limits while letting you waltz in anyway, and hardly anything happens in the shrine besides you hearing about the Manual, which is not even a big deal because you get to Rudo by accident later (two ship accidents!! why repeat this plot point!!) and would go to Dragonia anyway to help Bleu. Basically, I obviously can't prove it, but it wouldn't surprise me if the ocean shrine was initially thought off as only a plot scene, and the battles/town added much later for gameplay reasons.
Perhaps worth mentioning, the GBA version also makes a point to mention that Max got lost in the shrine alone, and everyone was worried about him, which does remind me a lot of the ship scene here.
uh oh. i hit image limit for the first time and i don't wanna remove either of these pics. more notes on a reblog later.
#shining series#shining force#saint fencer max#saint fencer max translation#sfm max#sf cain#so. gamers. fans. friends and followers. are we good? are we normal? are we normal about the last pages? i'm not#unfortunately my typesetting does not do it justice but at least i put up a fight#those unending creaking noises mess me up so good#it's just. so good. all of this#why did the gba version wasted time with boring villain epilogues#when it could be giving me the Good Stuff (angst of a long haired anime man)#also is his hair dyed? the eyebrows kinda imply that. i'm not sure i like that but i'm not sure i dislike that either#his hair is so good tho#anyway i could talk about him forever and i will but i gotta talk about the spring too#i really like the sword of light being here. it works aesthetically at least. the mishaela plot is very dumb#i had a whole thing about the sword of light typed but i took it out for later cause it doesn't have much to do with the manga#will probably come though! the three max cain plots are the same basically but there have some difference in the details#that has mashed together in my brain#so i wanna pick that apart at some point#anyway back to the mango. i dearly miss the nuance about the legacy even though it took me a while to notice it in the game#between this and the pseudo-magic introduction the manga does suck a bit at portraying the ancients#but i like how despite the weird pacing of the manga this part kinda flows better#with the spring's revelations all here in the middle#instead of popping in manarina like 'yeah boy you're hero of fate wait three chapter until we elaborate on that though'#naturally the game has good battle content to keep you happy through it#but the manarina scene feels kinda useless to me#anyway i probably had more to say about this while translating but i'm very sleepy#i will never shut up about this chapter though. mark my words
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hi tumblr im pyrr pyrriax and im in my trimonthly artist arc, lord help me and all the projects that are currently sitting in my drafts while i am lured in by the siren song of drawing
#haunted ecosystem#this is not helping with how much my hands hurt on a daily basis this is why i type and dont handwrite/draw very much.#im lured in regardless and i really need to find an artform that doesnt Hurt but for now. digital art <3#like theres a difference between my dumb doodles (quick easy not much different from regular computer usage) and actual art#but im an artist at heart i spent sooooo long being an artist and thinking i was shit at writing. that is wrong! im actually kinda good#im rambling in tags today because i have been not social (my partner is in genshin hell and my beloved is. somewhere.)#okay but on another note i reread the first. couple chapters of wtds this morning? the pacing is a little weird and the tense is fucked#but its actually a lot better than i thought it was? you can tell i was fleshing everybody out in my head and i totally forgot about how#i described the watcher [who i am STILL redacting the name of until we get there] and just. ough. pandora being very logical#and then jumping to the latest chapter and fucking sobbing because i forgot about how it went and just. pandora and his.#whatever the fuck is wrong with him.#i have gotta start recommending people read that again. its surprisingly friendly without context because of how i approached it#that fic has taught me so many things its actually a little comical. it also made me relearn how to make and write ocs so thats fun#once i finish that main fic (and i WILL i am actually planning to sign up for a thing. im finishing it i swear.) i finally get to show off#more of the world and characters ive crafted. showing backstories and what-ifs and all these oneshots ive been keeping close to my chest#for like absolutely ages because i dont want any spoilers on my tumblr#and. im finishing that fic in pseudo-memoriam of somebody who deleted their accounts everywhere. still miss you dane!#ok this has completely gone off topic ily tumblr im going back to drawing and i might make a new pfp#it'll still be lavius but it'll be fray lavius since i think about him a lot and i like his color palette.
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Me: This is their first kiss in over three years. I'd better make it epic.
Also me: On it, boss! *writes a kiss that goes on for over 1k words*
#well it's definitely epic you gotta give me that#i just noticed how long this goes on uninterrupted#and i wondered why this chapter got so out of hand#this is genuinely an accomplishment for me who doesn't like writing kisses though#my wips#writing#fallen love#griffin x valtor
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*crawls out of my isolation cave. slaps a 10 thousand word document on the ground. passes out.*
#Seven’s Celestial Commentary#Everything Stays#I FUCKING DID IT#4 days and 10.6k words later chapter 4 of ES is finally fully written. holy shit why was that such a struggle#turns out returning to a story after 4-5 months of absence means it takes a little while to really get back into it! who’d’ve guessed!#like. i didn’t mean to abandon it like that!!! but once it’s been a while it’s easy for A While to turn into A Very Long Time#writing is like playing Animal Crossing. miss one day and u don’t do it again for 6 months#(or. not quite that extreme but u know what i mean)#anyways. i’m excited!!! like i still gotta do the final edit and get it drafted up on Ao3#but the hard part is over! and it’s done in time to be able to post it on the date later this month that i planned!!!#so yeah. ES Ch.4 coming at u all Quite Soon™️#(i mean if ur a big enough DCA fan u can probably guess what date i’m waiting to post it on. but i’m still gonna act like it’s a surprise)
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Some1 voicing interest on Libero a Due.....🥺
#speculation nation#ladue shit#ive been very occupied with itnl but i still do have the 18k words WIP for ladue chapter 3#and i. should finish that up to post it. at some point.#i think i really should decide whether theres any chance of actually continuing it after chapter 3#bc it's a reasonable conclusion to the thing. conclusion to the arc at the very least#but i also had so much more in mind for its future.#but im not even working on discacc rn man i have NO idea how long it would take for a potential 4th chapter of ladue...#so do i wanna keep it open on the off chance ill pick it back up eventually? or be honest with myself and call it here?#either way ive been sitting on 18k words for about half a year now#and i think they should be posted before Too long...#i gotta remember wtf i was doing with it lol. i had only a tiny lil bit left to write too...#aaaagh life is so hard. why must i be a chronic longfic writer. too many things i want to focus on. so little time and energy...
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WE GOT ENGAGED?!?!
#It's been a long time since i last played and i'm not caught up with the main story at ALL#i got Marius's new kitty ssr so i was doing the card story and wuh. huh? married?#fuck yeah due thats awesome. when did he propose though 😭#hoping its in his character stories (maybe this blossom chapter thing?) and not in a card i dont have...#i got so excited about being married i realized the Artem card probably also has an engagement so in a fit of lust i spent all my chips lol#i only had enough for 2 ten rolls left so hopes were low#I did get an SSR tho- another copy of Marius#boy really said you're engaged to me and nobody else#i gotta save up my chips now (i have literally none left) i need a newer Artem ssr so i can enjoy being married to him as well#i like them both i cant pick a favourite. this is why i never have any money in this game#post: misc#game: tears of themis
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Noah’s going to get a caretaker who cares enough to spend ten thousand on him but not enough to sacrifice their office to turn it back into a guest bedroom
#he will consider himself lucky if they’re nice enough to give up the pantry#it’s going to be a long time before that happensthough#still a lot of plot to come#edit because I want to talk about plot:#I think I know what I want to happen#Declan’s gotta go bye-bye at some point#it’s the only way#I need to actually start writing chapters#but that’s a lot of work#chapter 14 is like halfway done#but really it serves no purpose to the plot#like there’s no good reason for declan to put a tracker in Noah except for psychological whump purposes#like he’s not gonna run away or ever leave the compound w/o declan knowing#so like. why
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also chapters and chapters of continuity about Rhae’s injury now being able to payoff in shared experience of recovery with Aemond>>
#Yay for long term payoffs to decisions you made in the first chapter over a year ago!!#Haven’t left driftmark yet but I’m really excited to dig into the chapters leading up to the ep. 8 time jump#I was kind of aware that i did this but i switched tenses sometime last chapter and ive been stuck in present ever since#It took me way too long but I realized by the end I’d done it but never really identified where it happened#But i went back and i think its from when Baela says ‘what do you want’ on#Which was unintentional? But kind of an interesting place for it to happen.#I think this is because i was following the episode so heavily and it started ~feeling~ more present because of that#But like i shouldn’t have done that and I’m trying to find a good place to switch it back LMAO#Im sorry if people didn’t notice that and it didn’t bother them but i let it ride last chapter and now its really bothering me#Deluding myself into thinking it’ll count as a stylistic choice if I switch back in an interesting way#This is why i think whenever i actually finish i want to do like. A remastered version#Where i do some editing with the full knowledge of what the story ended up being#Just gotta get to that point first lololol
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Hi! I hope you’re doing good in life! So it’s spooky season so I have an ask related to that. I don’t know if you play horror video games, watch horror movies/shows, or read horror books, but if you do, I have to ask: What is the most disturbing book, or video game or show/movie that you’ve played/watched/read? In my opinion, there is two types of horror: the ones that scare you, and the ones that traumatize you. If you can think of any book, movie, or game that really kind of fucked you up, I’m curious to know if you feel like answering. I hope you have a good day and a good life.
Hey, I’m doing good and I hope you are too!
the answer ended up being really long lol
Woof, this is honestly a pretty hard question, since I can't really name any horror (or otherwise) media that actually left me kind of fucked up for a bit, at least not to the degree where it affected me for a while. I probably haven't been really fucked up by anything since I was a kid, so I'll try and recall what a few things fucked me up back then...
Off the top of my head I know that two different spongebob episodes got me bad, the first being one with that tunnel of love thing (tho tbh i havent seen it in a while so it might still spook me today) and the one where i'm pretty sure for whatever reason squidward gets locked in some small locker and has some kind of fucked up dream, whatever that was. I remember there was an eagle in that one. the eagle terrified me. (i looked them up, and the first episode is titled 'tunnel of glove' and the second is 'squidward in clarinetland'. with how badly that second one got to me, i'm surprised i ended up learning to play the clarinet at all)
other than that, i think the courage the cowardly dog episode 'the house of discontent' got me pretty bad, too, but i think everyone who saw any amount of that series as a kid has at least one episode that got them fucked up.
there's probably a handful of scooby-doo stuff that got to me when i was a kid, but i could not name any specifics (asides from charlie the robot's original episode, christ) because i think i managed to see just about every bit of available scooby media around that time.
nowadays stuff still does kinda fuck me up, but it's usually only for brief bits of time. the most recent example I can think of is cowboy bebop's 20's episode, pierrot le fou, which is honestly some great horror, especially how it uses the show's typical format and flips it on it's head, but i wouldn't necessarily say it got to me because of it being scary, more because of the way the ending disturbed me for a bit. it was the only episode that had me stop afterwards and really look into it for anything other than clarifying a character's gender, lol.
the endings of both neon genesis evangelion and end of evangelion had me shaken, the latter more so than the former, but not really due to horror aspects, though. i did have to take a walk after finishing end of evangelion. i don't really watch horror movies, i just... read the wikipedia plot descriptions of them.
honestly, i think some of the more popular youtube analogue horror series have gotten to me worse (likely due to the fact that they can get a bit more fucked up than, say, a tv show or movie), specifically the walten files (which i did watch) and the mandela catalogue (which i just watched wendigoon's vids on), and those two and mostly because facial distortion is generally just an incredibly effective form of horror imo. a lot of the time (esp with the childhood examples) the way i was 'fucked up' was that id be in be visualizing the stuff that scared me, and both the mandela catalogue and the walten files had me doing that for a bit.
now that i remember it, i was really scared of fnaf when it first came out. i first learned of it second-hand from seeing some other kids looking into it, and the bits and pieces i put together about it really scared me.
honestly, it's usually straight-up disturbing sequences or imagery that gets to me the most, and i know my limits well enough to generally identify and avoid that stuff, which is probably why i don't have too many recent examples. i've got one or two examples of non-horror movies that fucked me up as a kid, but that's mostly because they were wildly inappropriate for someone of my age (at the time) to be witnessing, so that's a different sort of topic.
i mean, i think i generally have a decent tolerance for fucked up stuff in media, anyways, i mean, i enjoy berserk and haven't really been too upset or disturbed by what happens in it (look theres some nasty shit in there im not saying its not that bad) so there's definitionally some kind of line that media needs to cross to really get to me nowadays, or it just needs to be a specific kind of fucked up. books generally don't do that for me so i don't have any book examples. no games, either, though shadow mario and the haunted house segments in super mario 3d world scared me so much that i had to make my mom do the levels for me, and i'm pretty sure scooby doo: first frights scared me a bit when i first played it on ds.
other than that, though, I just think that, in pokemon x, the story that an npc tells you during your first trip to route 14 and then the strange office building encounter with the animation-less hex maniac creeped me out pretty bad.
yeah, it's kind of hard for me to think of anything (recent) that actually really fucked me up or anything. most stuff just scared me, never really fucked me up or figuratively traumatized me in recent years.
#asks#zeldanamikaze#salty talks#i think for media to really fuck me up there has to be some kind of intense emotional aspect to it or have some specific visual stuff#my enjoying of berserk is proof that it takes specific stuff to really get to me. the way i tested if id be fine reading berserk is so#fucked in hindsight. i straight up looked up the two most infamous eclipse chapters online and read them to make sure id be fine#what the fuck. i just dove in head first fucking god#anyways yeah. like berserk is generally fine for me but cowboy bebop episode 20 did have me a lil fucked up. its so good#ive been looking more into horror stuff recently and i have a lot of respect for (well-executed) horror games like damn. i wanna play#silent hill 2 so bad. it's a really interesting genre when pulled off effectively on a level deeper than just 'oh look at this scary thing'#anyways. i recently watched mononoke and its not really horror just kinda unsettling. its so fucking good#tbh tho there are some fanfics ive read that did actually fuck me up (which is why i kinda have an aversion to angst)#but i didnt want to talk abt those bc i dont want to name names or anything. theyre good fics they just affected me pretty negatively#generally its more like. freaky irl things that fuck me up but thats not fun to talk about its just like. depressing#sorry it took so long to reply to this i hadnt really sat down to write it or anything an just. couldnt think of much lol#anyways ig bottom line is that its more likely for non-horror stuff to fuck me up? or its gotta be specific stuff idk#i played a few hours of portal 1 at a friends house years ago and for some reason it creeped me out a whole lot#strangely enough i dont think scooby doo mystery incorporated fucked me up when i first watched it#i think there was like 1 episode that scared me more than the rest but it was never too bad#and that show is regarded as likely the most actually scary scooby thing. its rlly good#im pretty sure scooby doo was my first (or one of my first) special interest#also (similarly) i dont really get nightmares too often my dreams are just kinda really weird most of the time#i did actually have like. a scary dream recently but i dont know if id fully call it a nightmare
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who cares if there’s a midterm for it next week. what if i wrote twin peaks gay fanfiction during my 400 level biochem lecture tomorrow morning
#i keep on getting into bed to read my lil nighttime fics and being like#damn i wanna read some more of what i wrote too. cause it appeals Directly to me#but im always too fuckin tired to write anymore. like i have over 10k i think of the long overdue manslut luke chapter#i just gotta finish the other parts but i havent had the time or energy to write lately. which Also means im outta practice. im gonna scream#litchrally why i was like ‘i wanna write a harry truman dale cooper fanfic’ and then sat down and wrote an academic paper#not entirely but it took me over a thousand words talking about the eye to be like ‘hm maybe i should split this into scenes with the actual#characters themselves so readers know this is actually in fact about the characters and is not just some fucked up wikipedia article’#im so fuckin tired. why is my chronic exhaustion coming back already. can i Please do well in classes and also not mentally die#mandont
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Going from Ancillary Sword into August Kitko and the Mechs from Space is such like... whiplash to my brain. Ancillary Sword was challenging to read in a way I wasn't expecting but man was it rich as hell, the depth of the worlds and characters in that book are insane. Meanwhile reading AKatMfS is like... the premise is so cool and seems right up my alley but something about the writing is just not gelling with me for whatever reason. I want to get through this book so badly because I am interested but like... part of me is just wondering is this it?? Is this all there is to it?
#cat rambles#spoiler talk in the tags now because I'm just thinking about this too much#like... I think around the same points in either book is when the big bad is revealed or like... shows up more prominently I think#and in AJ it's like FUCK that's Anaander Mianaai and holy SHIT she's such a huge threat but she's really only a threat to the main characte#she doesn't become a bigger civil war threat until a lil later and thats like god damn okay now people are really dying because of that#then in AKatMfS the threat is humanity ending like it wants the humans to go extinct and like SHIT that's pretty intense and it wants#humanity's knowledge and memories and shit which thats cool!! I enjoy that!!#Why the fuck does that not feel like as intense of a threat in my mind as like... the Lord of the Radchs????#it's weird... it's so weird because I WANT to enjoy this book I really do#it reminds me of pacific rim in all the good ways but also it just like doesn't go over the details I'm really interested in#and maybe it's just that I'm not as into Gus and Ardent as main characters as I am Breq but then again how the fuck do you top Breq#i also don't think it helps that the creator of the mechs/what is killing humanity was revealed so fast in AKatMfS#Like I started reading that chapter and.... I felt udnerwhelmed???#the twist was kinda neat like we've known about this AI since the beginning parts of the book#but idk.... it's like.... okay... AI knows it's going to be archived once it's no longer useful bc it was built on the corpse of its#predacessor and THATS INTERESTING!!! I LIKE THAT!!! so why then does it feel like such an old cliche#maybe I just gotta read more but I just feel... underwhelmed I guess for lack of a better term#fucking mitchells vs the machines did this shit and that had so much heart in it#back to the pacific rim comparison#this book is also about climate change and war and how bad humanity is and like???? fuck man.... idk do you have anything else to say#besides humans do bad shit and are unredeemable???#I'm sure it does I'm like so sure it does but god#anyways at least I get to read another Andrew Joseph White book after this :]#sunk cost fallacy has my ass unfortunatley#wow this got to be long
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