#tnp ray

[catayms]

Inktober day 26: Camera

[exocynraku]

how do you feel about Honeyfern..... my beloved lady

she's definitely a character that exists (i remember nothing about her personality) . i do like her name

[bonefall]

Might be a slight problem with your Lion, Tiger and Leopard idea. I think in TNP when the traveling cats met Sharptooth they describe it as a lion so evil it couldn't grow a mane. I think however that because it's a Squirrelpaw chapter you could explain that away as Firestar actually knowing what a Lion actually looks like, and thus telling his kits.

Have no fear-- THAT passage is being chalked up to a translation error itself for several reasons, first and foremost because it had been decided in TPB already to translate "Raor" as "Lion" and cut any references to their long ears.

...And second of all because Sharptooth is no longer a cougar! He is a European Cave Lion, because he is a manifested War God now instead of just being some random escaped zoo animal the Tribe couldn't deal with. Tribe's getting a huge buff. Anyway, this means he does actually have a "mane" now, but it's a big baggy fluffy neck... thing.

[Image Id: European Cave Lion. It's like a big lioness with a huge 'scruff' all around its neck.]

(Btw I made a road trip map and some extra detail for how I'm gonna handle the TNP journey if you wanna see that)

LionClan warriors DO have manes, though, but it's the same kind of mane that shows up in ThunderClan cats occasionally. Mapleshade, Lionheart, and Lionblaze are canonical examples of it, but I've given it to even more ThunderClan cats and just made it so those three were particularly fuzzy.

(there are rabbits with manes, also, but the Clan cats probably don't know about lionhead domestic rabbits.)

So they still could, actually, comment on Sharptooth's lame haircut.

Here's the original passage, and I'll follow it up with what's different about it in my rewrite/with reworked LionClan/Clanmew notes.

(So, unreality warning I suppose?)

“Sharptooth is a huge cat,” Stoneteller began, his voice hushed with fear. “He lives in the mountains, and makes the Tribe his prey. For many seasons now he has been picking us off, one by one.” “He looks like a lion,” Crag added, and asked, “Do you know of lions?” “We have legends of LionClan,” Stormfur replied, still wondering what Sharptooth could possibly have to do with him, “Lions are known for their strength and wisdom, and they have a golden mane like the sun’s warm rays.” “Sharptooth has no mane,” Stoneteller meowed, “Perhaps he lost it because he is so evil. He is the enemy of our Tribe.” His voice was bleak, his eyes shining cold with memories. “We feared that he would not rest until every cat of the Tribe had been killed.”

-Moonrise, Chapter 12

First of all, the Tribe isn't detaining the Sundrown Patrol to force them to fix their problems for them. The Tribe helps them cross, Sharptooth interrupts a feast they threw to celebrate the "return of the lost Sun Trail siblings."

They HAVE killed Sharptooth before. Three times. He re-manifests every few generations. And they'll do it again, god damn it!

The Sundrown Patrol decides to help, after seeing someone who helped them get slaughtered. The Tribe was going to handle it on their own but accepting help is one of their cultural values.

Tribe cats who couldn't speak to Clan cats were cut in the translation. There's actually a LOT of cats here, but many of them only speak Modern Tribemew.

Only the ones who are good at speaking Old Tribemew can talk with the Sundrown Patrol.

This causes an insane amount of errors in later books, because 2/3rds of the Tribe population was cut, eliminating the process by which they decide the new Stoneteller. So the writer made Jayfeather do it for them.

Tawnypelt is the one speaking to Stoneteller, she is the leader here, Stormfur plotline was added in localization for marketing along with the change to make Brambleclaw the leader.

Lions aren't known for 'wisdom,' they're notable for their strength, teamwork, and honor. "Teamwork and Honor" is translated as "Wisdom" but that's not totally correct.

Sharptooth working alone is what's noteworthy here, like a lion that takes all the physical strength with none of the honor. You can call that 'evil' but it is missing some nuance.

They also say that he doesn't have a 'mane' so much as he has 'scruff fluff.'

[tama1313]

Hi! About the cat ask game: I'd really like to hear your thoughts on Antarc, James Ratri and of course, my darling dear Ray.

Hiiiii, here they go!

Antarct as a Blue Lynx Point Oriental Short Hair:

(At first I used to see them as a very light silver tabby, but after Cairn's introduction, now I see theme with this pelt because I headcanon both Ghost and Cairn as two colorpoint)

About Jame's Ratri...

I gotta admit that he was anther character from TNP who I remembered his eyes being purplish instead of gray (at least, according to the second season of the anime)

Tbh, I simply see him as a white oriental cat (maybeee... an albino, but that's just a personal headcanon of mine):

(if you're curious, I see Peter as a cream oriental longhair)

Aaaand lastly, but not least important, we have Ray!

Tbh, I have a clear design of him in my mind:

Middle Long furred (possible an angora or oriental long hair mix??) Black cat with low white and a white blaze that runs only on a side of his nose and mustach

(the kitten on the right)

Thank you for asking!

(Maybe... one day I'll sketch all these cats)

[sorroki]

Ray wIP 

[turnupswritessometimes]

I watched it in two days and became an emotional wreck

[sshikigami]

RAY

[kazumirina]

Every time Ray gets seperated from Emma something shitty happens to him, poor guy can't catch a break

[astroloka]

@__@ ray iconZzz

[aishitzruyo]

⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⌕ · 𝗌𝖾𝖺𝗋𝖼𝗁

⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ : ♥︎ the promised neverland.

⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⠀ ヤンド♡₊𖧧🔌

[sanicmegmog]

dustpaw

i never liked him as an apprentice, he was pretty annoying imo :/

[sugasugawarau]

[exocynraku]

meow

[unicornkingpin]

The Promised Neverland is getting a live action film y'all

(Release Date: Winter 2020, aka next Christmas gonna be cool)

[mallowstep]

Sorry, I'm hyperfixating but I just came here to say: maybe in Mistu au, Mothwing becomes a medicine cat apprentice fairly easily? Nobody really wants to go against Feathertail Again, so they may cave-or maybe Hawk does do the fake sign but because he actually loves her and it's Tiger who encouraged him to and holds it over her head? 1/2

Mothwing gets in and sees the Starclan cats and everything and she does believe-and then Feathertail comes back and it's discovered that Feathertail was prophesised to die. Cue existential crisis about Starclan sending cats to their death (maybe she meets Tigerstar once and he mentions that Starclan could have chosen to tell Blue he killed Redtail but they didn't or something). She can no longer see them in her dreams. Her faith in them has been shattered. She believes, but not in THEM 2/2

babe ur so welcome here <3

anyway yeah let's talk about mothwing my beloved <3 she's one of my favourite characters.

so - i'm still working out some of the moth stuff, but she does become a warrior first. in canon, she doesn't Want to be a medicine cat until later. it's a whole thing. and i like stories about characters figuring out what they want later than "normal."

there's definitely no fuss about her becoming a medicine cat in au. that whole bit of manipulation is removed. everyone is on board. after all - she's a riverclan cat.

of course, because the tnp timeline is scrunched, i'm still working out the willow stuff, but i'm not even close to writing that stuff Seriously yet so. shrug.

and you're completely right - if there was fuss, feathertail is like. not a Single Riverclan Cat would tell feathertail no. not even blackclaw.

and they've got mistyfoot on their side, even before they connect:

"One to me," Leopardstar says, "one to Stormheart, one to Blackclaw." Mistyfoot's tail lashes. "You'd apprentice one — to Blackclaw?" She glances over her shoulder. Frogkit and Hawkkit are chasing something — a bug, probably — and Mothkit is staring at the river — waiting for someone to take her swimming, probably. She doesn't look at Blackclaw. Leopardstar blinks in surprise. "Who else?" Mistyfoot's tail lashes. Dawnflower, Mosspelt, she supplies. Mosspelt's raising her own litter, but if Leopardstar is apprenticing one to Stormheart, Dawnflower is old enough. "Not him," she says. "Dawnflower could." Leopardstar sighs. "Two new mentors, both young. It's not ideal." Mistyfoot growls, "Not him," and Leopardstar dips his head.

mistyfoot: i might not talk to the kits but i'll be damned if blackclaw goes within six feet of them

so. you know.

i'm still workshopping a variety of tigerstar thoughts, but hawk doesn't have the same manipulation of moth as in canon. that's just getting thrown out. hawk has problems, he has Nuance, but manipulating his sister? feathertail would be So disappointed in him.

as for, well. i need to, writing about starclan is always hard for me because i never know how seriously i want to take it. cats waking up with injuries from the dark forest is cool, but do i want to confirm that the dark forest is real? i don't know.

what i do know is this:

“Why me?” Tigerstar tilts his head. “Do you think your siblings would do as well as you?” He thinks of Frogpaw. He looks the most ThunderClan, Hawkpaw thinks, and his fighting shows it. But he is too kind to be here. He thinks of Mothpaw. She swims like she is half fish, and hunts accordingly. But she is like a ray of sun. He can’t imagine her here. He thinks of himself. He looks like his father and he is fast and good on his feet. He does well here. He is excelling. He thinks of Feathertail. “They wouldn’t,” he agrees. One day, she will know. At least if it’s only him, she’ll still have Frogpaw and Mothpaw.

this isn't confirmed canon to misty au (nothing is until i post it, but this especially i'm still workshopping the ideas for), but this is. kind of how tigerstar manipulates hawkpaw.

i think what would break mothwing's faith is that starclan did not intervene in the slightest for featherpaw and mistyfoot. one thing all three of the kits have to grapple with is what it means for feathertail to have been hurt.

it's a hard thing to conceptualize when you are a child, that your parents had a life before you, and even harder, that your parents were someone different once. i have posted this paragraph as part of a longer excerpt before, but,

Of course she remembers how Feathertail was. Feathertail has been a constant in their lives. She's been the same as long as they've been alive. Mothwing can picture her perfectly, from the nicks in her ear to the way her whiskers twitched to how her tail was silkiest at the very end.

feathertail just - is. and they all have to learn that she wasn't always. they have a lot to learn and deal with and grow, but how do you...how do you accept that someone you love so dearly was hurt so badly, and starclan never once tried to protect her?

i don't think you do.

[metamorphorestworld]

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Tuhan Hakim paling adil aku ga menye2 pgn ini itu ga ada kalo toh kelak ketemu itu yang akan aku bilang cari cewek mas yg mulus putih sesuai selera mu bukan aku, dan aku akan pergi sdh cukup melihatnya sehat baik2 saja dr jauh, untuk berhubungan kenalan lbh jauh, aku ga mau tahu, aku ga cmn cari pengganti ayah tapi cari "rasa halal" yg sdh dewasa tahu apa yg musti dilakukannya, bukannya childish cmn hobi mempermainkan orang menghina, mainan baterai sgl macem, aku ga suka terlalu kekanakan, butuh imam ga butuh anak TK manja egois yg dipikirkan perasaannya sendiri ga pny simpati empati dan ga berkaca diri atas apa yg dilakukannya dulu, maaf itu ga semudah membalik telapak tangan😭😭😭😭

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Jadi kalo kamu batil maksiat jelas2 salah dan jahat itu adl akan jadi hasil tanamanmu yg kau tebar kau sebar kalo akhirnya malapetaka tak kunjung berakhir ya salahmu sendiri, karena melawan hukum Tuhan, sekali Tuhan membuat hukum lgsg deh bnr2 imbasnya sampe mati ngeri😔😔😔😔 mo coba begitu sesat ya sesat sono sendiri akulah akan tetap di jalan ku jalan kebenaran sampai kpnpun jg akan tetap begitu😊😉😘 aku org yg sangat yakin bahwa siapapun yg berada di jalan kebenaran akan selalu ditolong diselamatkan dgn cara tak terduga oleh Tuhan walo diawal sengsara sebentar tapi kebahagiaan nya abadi 😘😘😘😘😘

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