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The Shape of Truth - Chapter 7: Unit 531
Masterpost
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Knightly Storage required a passcode to get in. The key tag hadnât included that - it just had the name and unit number; 531. And 531 wasnât the code.
The storage building was a tall, stone structure with a side entrance hidden from the street by some towering bushes. An awning over the door blocked the rain as Ambrosius stared at the keypad next to the doorway. Nimona, next to him, shifted into a hulking humanoid with large hands.
âWe could break in.â She said with a grin, flexing an arm.
Ambrosius rolled his eyes.
âThat would be illegal.â
Nimona smirked and shifted back to a teen.
âAs if today wasnât already toeing the line.â
âWe didnât⊠break any laws.â
âSure. We just bent them a little.â
âExactly. A knight must uphold the rules that keep us in order.â
Nimona groaned.
âCome on⊠donât tell me you haven't broken at least ONE rule at least ONCE in your life.â
Ambrosius still looked unamused.
âEven if I did, I wouldn't be telling YOU about it.â
âAw, why not?â
âBecause I still don't know anything about you! I don't even know how old you are, or if âNimonaâ is even your real name!â
Nimona was silent while Ambrosius tried to figure out the door code, punching in several numerical combinations off the top of his head. The keypad flashed red each time.
Nimonaâs voice broke his concentration.
âThey never told you how your dad really died, did they?â she said, seemingly out of nowhere.
Ambrosius gave her a side glance.
âWhat in Gloreth's name are you talking about?â
âI mean you were just a kid - they didn't want you to think he was a bad man or anything - nothing you could possibly blabber to the wrong person about. They told you he went out for a few drinks with his knight buddies, got plastered, and then walked in front of a speeding truck, right?â
Ambrosius looked wary.
âThat's... what happened.â
âThat's what they WANTED you to think happened. That's what they wanted EVERYONE to think happened. They couldn't let Gloreth's name get dragged in the mud, could they?â
Ambrosius didnât look convinced.
âSo you're saying there was a coverup.â
"I'm saying you never saw him drunk before, did you?â
âI donât remember. Maybe?â
âBelieve me, you didnât.â
âHow would you know?â
âIâm telling you - Iâm full of information about your family.â
Ambrosius turned back to the keypad.
âAaaand now you're just sounding creepy. One less reason for me to trust you.â
âThink about it though! The man never got drunk. So how did he get so tipsy that night he didn't see the truck coming?â
âThereâs a first time for everything.â
âHey, you don't have to take my word for it - with your rank, you can go to the medical records building and see the original coroner's report for yourself.â
Ambrosius typed in another combination.
âMaybe I will. Or maybe I won't. What difference would it make? Heâs still dead.â
The keypad flashed red again. Ambrosius sighed. He was quickly realizing he could stand here all day trying different combinations and none of them work. He waved a hand towards the other side of the building.
âCome on, letâs go to the office.â
âI still vote âbreak inâ.â
Ambrosius gave her a weary look. Nimona held her hands up.
âI mean bend, not break.â
~ ~ ~
There was already a woman arguing with the clerk when Nimona, now matching Ambrosiusâs height and age, entered the office, followed by Ambrosius himself. Fortunately, there was another worker passing by whom Nimona was able to flag down.
âHeeeeeey⊠I totally forgot the passcode for the door. Could you let me in?â
The worker pointed to the desk.
âSure, just show them your ID.â
âID⊠yeah⊠you know, I think I left it at home. I just ran over here to get somethingâ she dangled the storage key in her hand.
The worker gave a forced smile.
âTalk to the desk.â
They both looked at the discussion at the desk. It didnât look like it was going to end soon.
Nimona held a hand up, âCome on, me and my brother just need to grab something real quick.â
âTalk to the desk.â
âWhat if I slid you a 20 goldpiece?â
âTalk to the desk.â The worker pushed past her, off on their own errand.
Nimona glanced at Ambrosius with a look that said âok we tried it your way and it didnât work.â Ambrosius shrugged and jerked his head towards the desk. This could still work - his own ID would draw attention, but maybe Nimona could work something out.
âFor the last time, we canât let you use acid on the lock!â The clerk behind the desk was saying, âYou either find your key or find a licensed locksmith to remove the lock for you.â
The woman in front of the desk waved a hand desperately.
âBut what ifââ
âWe can recommend a locksmith for you if you donât want to do the footwork yourself.â
ââ I fill the lock with water, and then freeze it! Water expands when frozen, so the lock should break right off!â
âMiss Bitsmore, there are other people waiting in line behind you.â
âItâs Blitzmeyer! Meredith Blitzmeyer!â
âMiss Blitzmeyer, would you like the number for the locksmith or not?â
âIâm telling you, I canât afford a locksmith! My lab burned down and Iâm living off savings!â
Ambrosiusâs ears perked up. The initials from the sword invoice flashed in his mind. MB!
The clerk didnât miss a beat, sliding a business card across the desk.
âYou can find the number here. Let us know when you plan to come. Next!â
The woman waved her hands in exasperation and stomped out the door, not bothering to take the card. The clerk tapped an intercom button on the desk.
âHey, keep an eye on unit 531 - we might get someone trying to break into it.â Then the clerk looked up at Nimona. âCan I help you?â
Nimona gave a toothy grin.
âHeyyyy, I need to get in but I forgot the passcode. My ID isââ
Ambrosius hurried forward and grabbed Nimona by the arm.
âHey you know what? I think I remember where you left your ID!â He pulled her toward the door. âCome on!â
~ ~ ~
It had started to rain in earnest now. Meredith Blitzmeyer walked hands-free, umbrella balanced on her shoulder thanks to the weights built into the bent shaft and handle. She'd designed that part herself, and more.
âExcuse me missus umbrella lady...â
Meredith looked down to see a small boy suddenly standing in front of her. He was dressed in tatters and looked like he hadnât slept in days.
âI can't find my mommy... She went through that scary alley over there.â the child pointed, shivering in the rain. âCould you help me find her? Pwease....?â He looked up at her with sad puppy eyes.
Meredith glanced around. There were other people walking down the street, but nobody was stopping to see if the child was alright. Nobody except her. She sighed.
âCome on, letâs find your mom.â She took the child by the hand and started down the alleyway.
She hadnât gotten far before she sensed someone else behind her. She glanced over her shoulder. Sure enough, there was a tall, hooded figure barely a meter behind her. Of course. Meredith could have slapped herself for being so gullible.
The hooded figure reached out, but Meredith was faster. Before either the child or the stranger could react, sheâd swung her umbrella off her shoulder, collapsing it and shoving the end into the strangerâs chest. A crackle of electricity rippled through the air and the hooded figured dropped like a stone.
Meredith broke into a run. The street was close. Just a few meters⊠A beastly snarl echoed down the alley as a set of jaws clamped around her leg, yanking her to the ground. Meredith tried to get back up, but the grip on her leg wouldnât let go. It started to drag her backwards, away from the street, back into the dark alley.
The electrified umbrella was still in her hands. Meredith turned and swung it at the beast, electricity arcing at its tip. She almost hit it. It let go of her instead, ducking out of the way. That was all the time she needed to get back to her feet. But before she could run, the hooded figure slammed into her, knocking her back to the ground. Then the beast - a large, pink wolf - grabbed the umbrella in its jaws and yanked it away.
Meredith blinked in surprise. Pink? The next thing she knew, the hooded figure had rolled off her and the wolf was towering above her, teeth bared.
A manâs voice rang out, angry.
âWho are you working for?!â
The question caught Meredith by surprise.
âWhat?!â
âWe know you ordered the sword!â
âI didnâtââ
âWe have paperwork - with your initials on it! You had the sword - the sword that killed the queen - the sword that framed Ballister, that got him killedâŠâ The manâs voice broke.
Meredith tried to look at the source of the voice, but the wolf growled at the slightest movement. The man found his voice again, wavering as it was.
âI should turn you in now. Thereâs enough evidence here. Thatâll be enough to prove his innocence, and then⊠thenâŠâ
The wolf spoke in a female voice.
âHey, keep it together man. Weâve got an interrogation here.â
Meredith, fully bewildered by now, broke in.
âI didnât do it! They ordered the sword in my name and then burned down my lab when I said I wouldnât put the blaster in it! âŠ. I can show you the emails!â
The man sank to his knees next to her. Meredith got a look at his face.
âWait, youâre the Goldenlocks guy!â
Ambrosius didnât bat an eye.
âYeah. Something like that.â
âOhhh no⊠I- I didnât do anything wrong! I swear I thought I was designing mining equipment! Good Gloreth I talk too muchâŠâ
âWhy didnât you say something after they arrested Ballister?â
âI thought he was the one whoâd ordered the sword! I- I didnât want to get in any more trouble!â Meredith blinked several times under her glasses. âThey already killed my friends in the fireâŠâ
There was a long silence. Then the wolf spoke again.
âYou think sheâs telling the truth?â
âNot all of it.â Ambrosius turned back to Meredith. âYou said there were emails. Show me.â
Meredith hesitated.
âAh, you see, I donât have my work email on my phone - I use my laptop for that. And I left that at home.â
Silence. Meredith spoke again.
âSo if you could let me goâŠ.â
âWe found this at your old lab.â Ambrosius said, holding up the misplaced storage key.
Meredithâs eyes grew wide. Ambrosius pocketed the key and continued.
âMeet us at the library. Weâll be in a study room under the name âGoldenlocksâ. Bring the laptop. Otherwise I toss the key and give the sword invoice to Security.â
âBut⊠I have somewhere to beâŠâ
âYou have two hours.â
Meredith looked like she wanted to say something else, but thought better of it. She didnât want to get on the bad side of a noble, much less a knight. She nodded instead.
The wolf backed up. Meredith scuttled backwards, grabbing her umbrella and getting to her feet. She paused to brush the water from her clothes.
"If I can ask... You said you thought Ballister was framed. Why? Didn't he confess to the murder?"
Ambrosius hesitated.
"I don't think that confession was from him. It didn't... sound like him."
Meredith gave an unimpressed âOh,â then flicked her umbrella open and hurried back to the street. Still in the alley, Nimona shifted back to dog form, suddenly dry as she ducked under an overhang. Ambrosius turned away, rubbing his eyes. Nimona looked up at him.
âYou okay, boss?â
Ambrosius didnât look at her.
â⊠It was just yesterday. They published the confession at noon, and he was dead before sunset.â He leaned back against the wall. âI didnât even get to see him...â
Nimona sat next to him, pressing her furry head under his hand. Ambrosius reflexively ran his fingers through her fur, appreciating the softness. He cracked the faintest smile. So that was what having a dog was like.
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#this chapter was so much fun to write!#I'd say more but the tags are visible in the preview and I don't want to spoil anything#nimona#the shape of truth
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how seb and clora get together in my fic đbc what better time and place to confess and share your first kiss than around a bunch of inferi + the dead body of a man you just killed?? đ„°đ
#and they say romance is dead#i remember how excited i was when brainstorming this scene LOL im still so happy with it/how i wrote it and glad i finally drew it#when i got the idea of seb using the relic to make an inferi army and save her BAHHA like...i get it clora. i get it.đâ#id ALSO confess on the spot after seeing that LMAO like it could have been ANY man at that point and id be like... marry me???#obvs i had to shorten it and cut out some stuff BUT i got the gist of the scene#sad i didnt manage to include some stuff but it would have ruined the flow.....c'est la vie#god they really just make out for the entire beginning of that chapter tho LMFAOO god i had so much fun writing and posting every week#those early fandom days........(sighs wistfully and stares out the window like an old man)#hogwarts legacy#sebastian sallow#sebastian sallow x mc#sebastian sallow x oc#hogwarts legacy sebastian#sebastian x mc#hogwarts legacy fanfiction#clora clemons#choccyart#victor rookwood
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I hope you take this as the compliment it is intended to be, but you strike the same chord of irreverence-as-love, jokes-to-showcase-sencerity that I get from Chuck Tingle, and I adore both of you.
You have bestowed the greatest honour upon me.
#poorly drawn mdzs#mdzs#lan wangij#wei wuxian#digital art#ask#Thank you very much; I do take it as the compliment you intended it to be B*)#Mr. Tingle is a legend in both grindset and vibes. To be even 0.1% striking a similar chord is an aspiration of mine.#I also want to honour the effort I put into this parody book cover. Which was a *lot* more than one would think.#Covers were analyzed. I did research and took notes. I learned how to download fonts. 4 different programs were used.#This file is also poster sized (A4 dimensions)! I thought It would make the joke funnier for some reason.#Chuck Tingle's style is very iconic and fun to replicate. Despite the time intensive labour - I had a blast making this!#I admit to skimming most of the chapter this is based off of just to fact check a few details but boy did I learn things.#Wei Wuxian canonically has CAKE. Tiny waist and a fat ass.#I took several more notes but I will warn you now that I can't *not* find smut writing to be very funny.#This was pure chaos. Unbridled chaos. WWX really did shove a sword up his ass to bully dream-LWJ.#The need to be a little shit trumps saftey I guess.#There is a 99.9% chance I will not cover the extras so this is likely all the fans of those chapters will get from PD-MDZS.
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Presale Open!!
Link to âMy Deer Nannyâ Letâs Dance Acrylic Standee:
#thank you for your interest!!!#I had so much fun creating the letâs dance chapter of the nanny au#itâs so special to me to be able to have this standee as a way to celebrate that chapter#I look forward to writing and drawing more adventures in the nanny au
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I am very sane and normal :D
#my art#sonic the hedgehog#sth#IAMDID#shadow the hedgehog#captain shadow#pirate sonic#sonic pirate au#pirate au#sonadow#this is technically a spoiler but itâs a small one and from early chapters so eeeh#drawing this scene because Iâve been stuck in a meeting for four hours and I canât write it#I have fallen so deep into the sail ship rabbit hole#my hyper fixation for sonic is dragging me into an hyper fixation for pirates and ships#and idk how to feel about that#I mean itâs super cool but I have been neglecting so much stuff for the brain worms#hyper fixation is fun until you canât work anymore because the only thing you can think about are sails#HENDHAKDNHAHAHAHA
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I would be lying to @wishgraanted if said I wasn't hopelessly dependent on the Toby.
#great god grove#ggg click clack#ggg thespius#sorry i didnt quite do his shapes justice#hes so so shape i love this guy and how u write him so so much#i was not joking when i said i was meaning to draw him i already had his reference open in my art program when i got pinged#Also encore has done nothing except hurt me and i still walk back like every time i reread the chapter i wont immediately shrivel to dust#/silly /pos#i joke w the one image here about the mirror convo w huzzle scene but that scene DEVASTATED ME.#though i need to confess a silly:#my friends make fun of me now for quietly reading fanfic voice call only to yell âHES JUST LIKE MEâ and it was about. THE brownie.#sorry for the tags rambles [thumbs up]
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The Last Midnight
Chapter 18.
#fiyero tigelaar#wicked fiyero#boq woodsman#wicked boq#dorothy gale#wicked dorothy#wicked#wicked fanart#wicked fanfiction#ankh art#ITS HERE#15k words just for you guys#holy shit I wrote too much#one more chapter guys#thank you all for being here and enjoying this fic with me#itâs been so fun to write#despite the drama that came with it lmao
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more ravi because after talking about him today i wanted to keep working on his argument scene(s).
#previews#(sort of)#ravi#i love writing him so much y'all#just a small scattering#of bits and pieces#removed from context#having a lot of fun with that last choice#idk if it'll survive to the published chapter but it made me laugh#so#we'll see
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this fat liberation month I'm wishing for every british author to be visited by the ghosts of fatphobic characters they've written past present and future
#this book I'm reading just hit me with a suckerpunch of VIOLENT fatphobia chapter#just like the most vile shit which is such a shame because I was having so much fun with the book up to that point đ#it's just like the way JK Rowling writes fat people like the same style of fatphobia#for the record I specified british because for some fucking reason there's always fatphobia in every book I read by a british author#but this is a lesson authors of every nationality need to learn#lyla's talking again#tw fatphobia#fat liberation
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This entire chapter was so hard to write AND draw... until you grasp that one thought and pull hard on it. Envisioning Nevarro like you're a gunslinger, an outlaw, wandering into a town clinging to the frontier really helped me crawl past artist's block.
My second thought after "guess I know what scene to conceptualize" was "Kendrick Lamar in the 'Humble' mv" and when when I dove into Shotdeck's archives for "beam of light", the very first image was from Kendrick Lamar's Humble mv. Are you shitting me.
I think I could've done more to emphasize how alone Din is in this chapter, but I may have played it too safe with the setting and that put limits on my ideas of what feelings I wanted to capture. Still think I nailed it, though.
I'm so excited for the next chapter, though. I sat on how I want to write and draw it for almost as long as I sat on how I wanted to write and draw chapter 7, so hopefully I'll have a much better time with that one.
#shirozora draws#shirozora writes#din djarin#the mandalorian#star wars#story: the stars#series: dangerous dreams#cara dune#i had as much fun with this chapter as I did the 7th chapter of The Suns#which is to say not so much fun and more like just grinding through the words and lines like it's work#one of those 'nothing is happening but a lot is happening because a lot is getting set up'#it's a huge fucking stage a massive chessboard spanning the stars#and i have to set everybody up#i haven't written anything with such massive size and scope since I was in the Kingdom Hearts fandom in the early aughts#don't look at me and all the paper and ink i wasted printing multiple disney movie scripts for accuracy's sake#when you're older and smarter but also more fucking tired and busy surviving
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Lavender Letters
To those of you who celebrate, who have something worth celebrating⊠happy Thanksgiving. To everyone else, happy random Thursday!
Part 8
âS-something else?â Steve parrots.
âThatâs right. Iâm going to put my hand on your body.â He grabs Steveâs wrist, grins at the gasp that gets him. âAnd you tell me if you like it there. Okay?â
âO-okay.â
âSo how about here?â He tightens his grip, smiles at the whine Steve lets out.
âY-yeah.â
âOh, I know you do, sweet boy. Youâre so expressive.â
âEddie-â
âMhm?â He pulls back a little, enough to see Steveâs face. Steve just gasps, little breaths in and out. âYou like sayinâ my name, sweet thing?â He pulls Steveâs hand behind his back and nudges forward, causing them to brush together. He inhales shakily as Steve moans quietly. âYou got an upstairs we can go to, sweetheart? Somewhere I can take you apart?â
Steve sways forward, catching himself just before their lips brush. âIâve- Iâve got a room upstairs,â he says. âBut Iâm not- I canât-â
Eddie pulls his hand to his side again, locks their fingers together. âYou canât?â
âTheyâre gonna hear.â
âHow do you feel about gags?â
Steve shakes his head. Even the thought seems to clear his head some. âNo gags. Or- or blindfolds. Or restraints.â
âBut my hand around your wrist?â
âThatâs fine. Youâre touching me. But- but no restraints that arenât you. Or, um. I could try? If you want me to grab the headboard and not move. I could try.â
Eddie hums. âNah, I think I like you touching me too much. But weâre out of luck until the partyâs over, huh?â
Steve turns sad eyes up at him, nods.
Eddie smiles, touches his finger to Steveâs chin. âThatâs alright. We can take it slow for a couple of hours. Get to know each other even better.â
Steve smiles. âLike what?â
Eddie hums exaggeratedly, tapping his finger on his chin. âFavorite sound?â
Steve laughs. âI have two. First is rain. I love hearing rain, especially as Iâm falling asleep.â
âNothing better,â Eddie agrees. âAnd your second?â
Steve colors. âWhen Robin sleeps over she talks in her sleep sometimes, and Iâll wake up to hear it. And it reminds me that Iâm safe.â
Eddie smiles. âMy favorite sound is Wayneâs snoring. Itâs not overly loud, but sometimes Iâll sit just behind my door and listen to him sleep until Iâm close enough to get back into bed and drift off. I think itâs sweet that Robinâs yours.â
Steve looks down. âWould it bother you if I could never listen to your music? Or never learned how to play DnD?â
âWould you let me rant to you about it? You wouldnât even have to pay attention, really, or remember anything. Just let me talk at you about it, and donât get annoyed when I want to talk about it.â
âOf course.â
Eddie grabs his hands, smiles. âThen I promise to do the same about whatever you want.â
Steve grins. âEven if itâs sports?â
âIâll even watch it with you,â Eddie promises.
âYou will?â
âI mean, Iâll at least sit in the same room. No promises that Iâll remember anything.â
âThatâs okay. Robinâs the same way. Lucasâdid I tell you about him? L?â
Eddie hums. âI think so⊠most polite? Wicked sharp tongue? Is that him?â
Steve beams. âYeah, exactly! He likes sports, basketball, and sometimes weâll play together.â He angles a thumb over his shoulder. âIâve got a hoop in the back. Heâs getting really good.â
âI should hope so, if heâs playing with you. How about football?â
Steve hums. âI like watching it, but playing it wouldnât be a good idea. Not with the concussions I have.â
âWayne likes watching it, too. Maybe you could come over, watch a game with him. I know heâd appreciate it.â
Steveâs eyes shine. âReally?â
âMhm.â He leans sideways against the counter, facing Steve. âCan I ask about the concussions? Or NDAs?â
Steve deflates. âI want to tell you.â
âSo whatâs stopping you?â
âBesides the fact that I fully believe the governmentâs got ears here? I donât think youâll believe me.â
Eddie hums, leans closer. âWell either way, Iâd like to take you out one day in my van. Somewhere out in the middle of nowhere, where you can be as loud as you want.â He leans in and whispers, âor say whatever you want.â He pulls back with a smirk. âWhat do you think?â
Steve takes a shaky breath. âI think I want to kick everyone out,â he murmurs, âbut I also think Robin would never let me live it down if I did.â
Eddie chuckles, pulls away. âDrink your water,â he suggests. âLetâs take some time, dance a little. Socialize. Let Robin know Iâm here for a good time and a long time.â
Steve takes a few big gulps of water. âI think youâre going to ruin me,â he says slowly. âIn the best way possible.â
Eddie grins sharply at him. âThatâs the plan, big boy.â
He winks.
Steve gulps.
This is going to be fun.
#stranger things#steve harrington#eddie munson#steddie#robin buckley#platonic Stobin#this is the most r-rated part of the entire fic#and itâs not even r#I honestly donât know what it is#Eddieâs having so much fun with Steve I love it#Lavender Letters#starambles#also I DID write an 11th chapter because I have no self-control#so uh. thereâs that to look forward to
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Sailing the seas in search of adventure, beaches, babes and international treasures is all well and good in theory. But the Stan'O'War II has an uninvited guest tagging along inside Stan Pines' mind.
@jellynut has inspired me with the BillStillAU. Iâve had a few ideas of my own about Bill sticking around in Stanâs head, and this AU has sparked my muse and motivation enough to start writing something! Enjoy!
#wren writes#gravity falls#billstillau#this chapter is a slow start#the next chapter gets into it#hopefully will post that soon but wanna stay ahead of where i'm posting#we shall see how this goes#long time fans will know i'm not GREAT at doing longfics consistantly#but i have INSPERATION so. I believe#and this AU is so much fun#also this isn't a DIRECT adaption of the billstillau i think#it's more jumping onto the idea and building my own thoughts into it
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Ride 784: The first day's mountain
Pag 1
3: We're passing through the riverside road
4: I see it
6: Kaka
7: Ah!!
8: Teh!
9: It's the first day's
Pag 2
1: âmountainâ!!
Pag 3
2: As we âpromisedâ!!
Pag 4
3: It's the âfirst day's mountain stageâ!!
4: A year ago
6: Manami-kun said it after the finish line, on the third and last day of the Inter High, when both of us were all worn out and barely still on our bikes
Pag 5
1: But having our race at the end on the final stage is too much pressure
2: Next year, if we both have the chance to run in the Inter High....
3: âŠ. yeah
4: Let's race for the mountain stage on the first day
Yeah
5: Like Toudou-san and Makishima-san last year
Onoda!!
Manami-san!!
Pag 6
1: Manami!!
Manami-san!!
2: Onoda!!
3: He collapsed!!
Manami!! Take off his helmet
It's okay, I caught him
Onodaa!!
Onoda-san
Do we have a towel?
Danchiku, water!!
4: Next year... the mountain stage on the first day.... yeah
5: Got it....!!
Pag 7
3: When you run along a river....
4: the water only flows if there's a difference in elevation, either uphill or downhill!!
5: Here it's definitely uphill!!
Even if it looks like a flat at first glance, it's gradually climbing!!
Pag 8
1: Toward that mountain!!
Reading the map, it says that it's 5km until the base of the mountain!!
2: 5km!!
3: Don't lose sight of it like last year!!
Yes!! Sorry!!
4: Hold on tight!!
5: 'Cause I'll carry you all the way to the foot of the mountain!!
Pag 9
1: Thank you!!
2: âPositioningâ....!!
3: When going from a flat to a climb you need to âpositionâ yourself
Each team accelerates from the flats in order to bring their climbers to a good position
4: It's the so called âmountain's launching padâ!!
5: There will be a difference of several hundred meters in the first stage between a climber who was launched near the front of the group and a climber who was made to run up from the back of the group
Pag 10
1: Bring Onoda to the best possible position, Naruko!!
Oh-
Sohoku is moving up!!
Pag 11
1: -ruaaaagh
Ugh!! Sohoku's Naruko is so fast!!
2: I get what you're tryin to say, Hotshot!!
I'll take him!! Definitely!!
3: That's why I left the first result to Kabu!!
4: On that winter day, with an apologetic face
5: Ah....
6: Ah- uhm, I have something to tell you, but
Onoda-kun, who told us like it was difficult to say....
Pag 12
1: Ah the stove? You can just turn it off, we're the last ones
Yeah, please. Woah, look outside, it's snowing
Seriously? It must be cold
2: That's not it!!
3: Th-th- this morning... I got a text
4: What was that, an acceptance letter?
The proficiency exam?
5: It's a reply to the text I sent....
6: Three months ago!!
7: Uhm... really, I was worried that back when we made that promise it was right after the race and we were tired, so I thought maybe he had forgotten
Three months?
It was a long wait
So I sent him a text to ask him if he remembers?
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1: And I received it this morning
Must be the proficiency test
Shut up!!
What are you whispering idiot
âBack whenâ, when was it?
No idea
2:He said only one word, âof courseâ
4: So, uhm... this time
5: Is it okay if I run for the first day's mountain stage during this summer's Inter High?
7: Is that so? Kakaka
Onoda-kun's eyes, like he couldn't contain his excitement...
Pag 14
1: I haven't forgotten it!!
2: I can't forget it!!
3: Onoda!!
Onoda-kun!!
Pag 15
1: 2km left until the foot of the mountain!!
2: Do your beeest....!!
Aren't they climbing at an amazing speed!? Each team is getting in line!!
Yeah, you're right!!
3: Every team is trying to âpositionâ themselves for their climbers!!
âPositionâ!?
4: Also, look closely
Right now, the cyclist in the second position in the ranks
Pag 16
1: is the one who will race in the mountain stage!!
Pag 18
1: Oi, are you kidding me? Hakogaku is sending Manami?
From the first day!?
Manami is in second place
2: He's the âfinal bossâ....!!
3: My dream of getting the red bib has been destroyed even before reaching the foot of the mountain....!!
4: Oi, look over there, that's not all!!
For Sohoku....
5: Naruko is pulling the âKing of the mountainâ!!
Wa- we're done for!! Completely!! My mountain prize!!
Pag 19
3: Manami-kun!!
4: Sakamichi-kun!!
Pag 20
1: It's time for our promise!!
We're almost at the foot of the mountain!!
#yowamushi pedal#yowapeda#yowamushi pedal translations#yowapeda manga#yowamushi pedal manga#yowamushi pedal spoilers#ride 784#im sorry i meant to post yesterday but i completely forgot ;A;#ahhhhhh ive been looking forward to thiiiis#please gimme a low stakes battle between Onoda and Manami!!! They deserve it!! They promised each other!!#I dont care who would win (even tho i hope manami tbh) i just want them to have fun while racing eo ;A;#is that so much to ask watanabe!!! please let them have this#i hope nothing happens and they really can do this :')#i mean it seems like midosuji also plans on participating but its okay#and if kiji wants to have a go too that fine to#the important thing is that both manami and onoda are there#also lemme have my imanaru moment bc#why are they literally so boyfriends coded wtf agsfdsgdcaskdf#like literally whispering to each other when onoda says he needs to tell them something???#naruko literally reading imaizumi's mind??? please theyre boyfirends okay#this chapter is pushing me to write yet another imanaru#and also a sansaka why not im not gonna lie#i love this so muuuuuuch#i need more im so happy#1st day's mountain stage my beloved
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damn this next chapter got hands,,,, when i responded to that ask i expected it to be out by at LEAST today and here i am. 7k words and i have just gotten to the climactic scene. not even remotely done. if this thing passes 10k words i have no idea what im gonna do with myself
#personal#canary continuity#fun fact back when i was writing chapter 7 i was suffering so much i procrastinated via reading the communist manifesto#karl marx is sounding so appealing rn.....
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Chapter 3: A Much Kinder Gold
You request just a simple, familiar day for your own sake for now, and Sun has no complaints with that. At least you have a friend for the first time in awhile.
Chapter word count: 8,423 | fic total so far: 28,644
#pillowspace writing#pillowspace art#celestial sundown au#sun x reader#dca fandom#OGH I FINALLY GO MAKE BREAKFAST bye#chapter 4 isn't finished yet but im having so much fun writing it#[csd art tag]
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terranigma, a cool game
#terranigma#terranigma ark#terranigma elle#terranigma meilin#art tag#im going to write a little review in the tags bear with me#first the negative:#the magic system is weird to use and basically useless apart from one boss thats almost impossible without magic#it has some weird racism like most old games where you travel around the world. a little more egregious since its supposed to be real earth#i found the main character to be slightly insufferable for about 3/4ths of the game. i came around on him by the end tho. he grows up a lot#and i found whats by far the largest section of the game (chapter 3) to be the least interesting#im not really into helping cities develop and trade quests tho so it might just be me#oh also it is STUPID easy to permanently lock yourself out of like 15 sidequests#and theres a lot of mandatory things that are really hard to figure out. you need to use a walkthrough for this#anyway thats what i didnt like#what i DID like tho. i dont want to get into too much detail but#its a genuinely beautiful game for so much of it#there were so many moments that left me speechless#its high-concept and thoughtful and fun to play#you dont really need to do much grinding either#at its worst its obtuse and cliche but at its best its breathtaking#and i really recommend more people check it out#special shoutout to my friend seona who modded my 3DS and downloaded a bunch of roms including this one#so in conclusion. terranigma is an underrated gem. play it if youre a 90s jrpg junkie like me#just have a walkthrough open also lol
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