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i cannot believe i genuinely have fun playing sims 4 rn?? especially w/o any gameplay mods??? ig ive just been playing w mods for so long that i thought all of the features were just mods but????? they added so much to the game holy shit
#nonsims#maybe its time to remove sims 4 hater from my bio#nah bc its still the worst in the series#imo#but#maybe i need to give the game a lil more credit lmao#the performance is still god awful#glad to see that wasn’t caused by mods and the game is just that bad in that regard
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tagged by my beloved no.1 chappell roan stan @cordiallyfuturedwight thanks my darling <33 i can only apologise for the lack of ms roan here... i swear good luck babe has been on repeat i don't know what happened
tagging the usual suspects, apologies if i've already missed yours: @aprylynn @jiminsproof @thvinyl @cosmicdreamgrl @visionsofgideontheninth @hoseeok @kimchokejin @jihopesjoint @monismochi <333 and you dear reader
oh and see here for more of my self-proclaimed songs of the summer if you're interested in that kind of thing
#director's commentary--#comin' around again - they call her amber MARK because she never misses. this one is particularly delicious#the thrill is gone - it's stunning. listening to raye again to prepare myself for genesis#bring back the seven minute songs i say!!#i'm fighting my own diminished attention span tooth and nail but i'm losing badly because i keep getting distracted#helen of troy - we all moved on from solar power a little too quickly actually this summer we should throw our cellular devices in the wate#whatcha doing - yeah i have this song on repeat to fund dua's next vacation and it's an honour to contribute.#ALSO did everyone see the chris stapleton x dua acm performance? exquisite. they served AND they ate#bodyguard - still my fav. ryan beatty i could find you anywhere#skip to the good bit - rizzle kicks are making a comeback and my god it has been twelve LONG years without them.#nature is healing. i can hear the trumpets#ok love you bye - anyone who decides to use the line 'if you can't see my mirrors - i can't see you' is an instant icon#it's uncanny - hall & oates deep cut. it's obviously fab#so sick of dreaming - maggie rogers i will follow you to the ends of the earth. album is phenomenal. what a loser!!!#aw shoot - cuntry and music global pop sensation cmat has done it yet again. happy pride my queen#honourable mentions - rachel chinouriri's new album is really great. listen to 'it is what it is'#obviously rm made it to the artist list. who else up thinking about nuts and groin rn!!!!!#vampire weekend's new album is like something from a peanuts comic and st. vincent's new album is indescribable#but if i had to try i'd say like something from a peanuts comic but if woodstock had an insatiable bloodthirst#okay i think that just about covers it! thanks darlings#MWAH#receiptify#tag
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Finished Shadow Generations. Honestly, I didn't like it much and if it wasn't for the fact that it came with Sonic Generations, I would regret buying it. There wasn't enough story / character content for me to feel invested at any point—you have to go out of your way to keep talking to characters after each level or else there's basically nothing—and just like in the Dark Beginnings animations, Maria was there essentially to be Shadow's emotional support, which I dislike. I feel like it was a waste to have her there, when we didn't get to see more dimensions from her. She's the same paragon she always was, and it sucks.
I also just didn't have fun controlling Shadow. For some reason, he controls so loosely that it was difficult to steer him where he needed to go. This was especially true for the manta ray surfing; Metal Overlord killed me five billion times because of how poorly that handled. (Though that in turn made it hilarious how quickly Mephiles went down lmao.) It sucks, because I loved playing as Shadow in SA2, but 🤷♀️ his doom gimmicks were just not fun with how out of control they were. The amount of stupid deaths I had because his flight mode clipped through barriers in the last level is insane.
Anyway, I have a feeling that if I cared more about Shadow, I might have enjoyed this as much as others. But I'm past the point in my life where I find his edgy shtick cool, and again, I don't like how Maria was his emotional support instead of the other way around.
At least Sonic Generations is here, though. I do like Sonic Generations.
#sxsg spoilers#sxsg critical#shadow generations critical#also the audio mixing for in-stage dialogue was god awful#and the few times they let songs have lyrics you could barely hear the lyrica#not to mention when it froze wholesale when i tried to open the options menu during the Neo Devil Doom fight#(to adjust volume so i could actually hear All Hail Shadow. it didn't help much at all.)#also Kirk Thornton still sucks. robotic ass performance fr. didn't fit so many of the lines#Rouge's VA also sucks. i wish i knew abt the dual audio before starting the game alas#anyway. i will be glad when the Year of Shadow is over. like ffs he didn't even have enough games#they had to pull in a Frontiers stage & he wasn't even in that game#anyway. thank goodness for sonic gens at least
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t*yl*r sw*ft getting dragged every 5 business days... i used to pray for times like these.
#i'm sorry but i hate her so fucking bad#i must speak my truth#god her music is so mediocre and her performative activism actually fooling a generation of young girls is so pitiful#like... you have a bunch of sw*ft*es actually thinking she is some closeted lesbian... bffr#mind you she only started spewing her fake woke “gay rights” shit after she got cancelled in 2016#like why are you shocked by her dating that awful man? surely her lame rebranding after reputation didn't fool you fr?#god... i miss 2016#back when people realized she was a performative white feminist that only used feminism for her benefit#lmfaoo i remeber swifties trying to defend her about the private jet shit#i wonder if they will claim “misogyny” in response to her dating an edgelord neo nazi#at the end of the day she doesn't actually practice what she preaches like it's all part of her brand#and also she isn't secretaly dating karlie kloss or whatever#in fact karlie is married to a trump in-law like... the jokes write themselves#anyways if you wanna stand a white pop girl so bad ariana is right there#sabrina is also right there#britney is still standing#in fact britney's blackout album is better than anything she has ever released i can tell you that much#i know i will most likely get jumped by her racist cult fanbase but i must speak my truth#maybe i won't have to hear that stupid anti-hero song at the grocery store anymore
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wow, mockingjay was. much more violent and gory than i remembered
#in my defense the last time i've read this book i was. 20 maybe? so almost 10 years ago#i watched pt 2 a few years after it came out#tho it's still not as... vivid and terrifying as the book is#one thing collins always stands out for among ya writers is her descriptions of ptsd symptoms and grief#and war and its awful consequences are well-written. maybe bcs we see it all through katniss' pov but imo they really get you#inside this world of horror and devastation this poor girl is living in (god. no wonder she's so broken!)#i think this is something that was lacking in tbosas (for plot reasons)#and it was sorely missed because it's one of the highlights of the series and as i stated above#one of collins' strengths as a writer imo#she doesn't perform as well when she's delving into complex philosophy about good and evil (she doesn't get above what's basic)#and villain origin stories despite all tbosas' potential. they're a different beast to tackle#just imo obv. tho as you can see from my pfp i still ate the shit out of that movie lmao#val rereads thg#val speaks#txt
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god Mine will always hit
#im giving speak now taylor v another shot and it’s still good but not as good u know#im jammin tho#sad about eras tour again. i’ll go to europe#god sparks fly i remember when all there was was that awful recording#of the one live performance and we bullied her into putting it on speak now#good times
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Officially at so distressed that I broke my stim toy levels of autism
#I don't like thiiis hhh#I'm still at my parent's and it's nobody's fault that I'm not back to my city yet storms and accidents happen#but fuck I was planning four days and it's about to be more than a week#I didn't bring any of the stuff I use to self regulate because it's a bitch to bring with and not necessary in the short term#I'm alone no one I fucking like is here and my parents are trying but I'm apparently too much of a bitch to care#no matter how irrational it is I just fucking hate feeling this vulnerable while next to them so I just lock myself away#I'm gonna miss my friends thesis project presentation and god I didn't fucking see them the whole year just#I'm not supposed to be with anyone that cares about me I'm just not the universe won't let me#I've done everything I have available to self regulate I took a shower I am physically at peak fucking performance#it's just not enough I want to break something for real#I want to eat stuff I'd buy myself not whatever they decide to make#I want a fucking heads up before doing nice things because if it's a surprise it's suddenly not a nice thing anymore#I want to be home and I want people to stop being nice to me and just fucking say what they think#I'm awful it just hurts so much to wait for everything to fall apart I hate feeling so estranged and detached from everyone#delete later
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guess who had a panic attack mid embarking because we we're completely out of bin space and passanger were yelling and cursing me
#I literally broke down crying#and then I started panicking about how little time I had left in my daily flight limit and I had to go on the cockpit IN TEARS#most embarrassing and humiliating moment of my life#everyone in the crew was very understanding but I still felt like absolute shit#it wasn't my fault. it was the ground team's fault#but still. it's me. you guys know how I am#it was fucking awful#worst flight of my life. I'm so exhausted. I just wanted to have an easy last flight before my day off#and I got THIS#and to make things more humiliating the chief purser made my performance avaluation saying I did a great job#because SHE FELT BAD FOR ME#literal corruption#my god I'm so bad at this job. my passanger evaluation is gonna go fucking negative and it's not even my fault#I'm not a fucking miracle worker I can't fit 300 bags in the space of 80#and somehow I still feel it's my fault#I hate it here#rambles*
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they really had choi san breasting boobily for 45 minutes straight
#shrimp thoughts#NO BUT the performance was absolutely incredible some songs were shortened but they STILL performed with fully energy almost#non stop i am in awe and disbelief. if they come to pl i'm gonna have to swallow my concert anxiety and splurge because YOU DON'T MISS THAT#(though idk if they will since the last time they were here was uh. 2019 AND IN PALLADIUM???? PALLADIUM......#god if only i got into them earlier i could have done THREE kpop concerts that year
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Thinking about the frequent iwtv and wwdits comparisons but esp in the context of the past actions of certain wwdits cast members and just. Really chewing on that
#I mean my insight on all that is limited for obvious reasons#but the biggest reason I haven’t gotten back into wwdits since s3 really does go back to all that#not just the actual offenses but like. witnessing the fandom’s reaction to it#like I remember when that discussion was still first gaining traction#and ofc i felt like it was important to talk about#and on one hand you had fans of color and esp black fans finding out about it in real time and just. having to deal with that massive#disappointment#very much a ‘fuck not AGAIN’ moment#felt especially awful when people would find out for the first time from my posting about it. bc it sucks learning something like that from#a tumblr post just sort of always right#and like. of course you need to know if something like that happens.m#and on the other hand it was like. I felt like a lot of other white fans were either a. ignoring it or b. making it their whole personality#in a way that felt very performative#and like. not that I’m Above all that bc I know I still have to watch myself right#but it was like. tags and tags and tags about how upset and disgusted and horrified they were just SHOCKED shocked I tell you#and god it just felt weird.#and then everybody would ofc appear to forget about it all for a couple months until it inevitably came back up and people were Shocked and#Horrified again#anyway. while it’s not perfect I am glad that iwtv centers black perspectives more to at least a degree#it can be limited just bc Louis and Claudia’s world is limited. but still what a difference#like in some ways I am just glad black fans get to have that#I’m also honestly wary of my own parasocial attachment to the cast#bc they’re SO good and wonderful and I find myself reminding myself they’re just people#maybe the fact that none of them did comedy in the 2000s is itself a green flag though. lmao#what a mess that whole thing was. anyway#no point to this really I’m just Thinking#iwtv tv#wwdits
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hey guys. Fun fact. Did you know that you can still vote but you don’t have to choose between the Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum we have?
third parties, baybeeeeee!
for the fucking love of god you better vote, and if when you do, vote Claudia de la Cruz
she:
-has been marching for Palestine
-supports blm
-supports women’s rights
-SUPPORTS LANDBACK
-is PRO-IMMIGRATION
#yea I know that it’s highly unlikely she could win bc of how the electoral college works#but if you’re just gonna fucking give up and do nothing because of that#then you’re just as awful as the people directly making problems#don’t be a fucking performative activist-you have to SUPPORT your other activists#even if she doesn’t win it will still boost her voice and make her known#for the love of god. don’t fucking sit on your ass#go and do the LITERAL EASIEST FORM OF ACTIVISM THERE IS EVER#bella speaks
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'I'll eat his birdpuss nice and rough' - Blitz
MOTHERFUCKER YOU AIN'T EATING THAT BIRDPUSS FOR SHIT WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT GOD AWFUL TOUNGE GAME YOU GOT GOING ON BLITZ
(yes I know that it's because Blitz is in a stressful situation combined with performance anxiety and the memories of Stolas still screwing with Blitz hard. I just thought of that line from the song and thought it'd make a funny post)
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Actually while I'm thinking about it, I just wanna say that the more live-action remakes Disney shlups out like shoveled manure, the more amazed I am that Cinderella (2015) exists. It breaks literally every standard of Disney's LA remakes.
It's not a shot-for-shot remake of the original 1950 animated film, though it does include small references and homages to it, but only when such things can be incorporated organically into the story.
The creators understood and respected the cross-cultural significance of the Cinderella story. They didn't want to "fix" it, or add some wacky twist to it, they just wanted to make the best possible version of the Quintessential Cinderella that they could.
Everything that could be done practically was done practically. The carriage was a real, the horses pulling it were real, and all of the other animals (with the exception of the mice and lizards, since their performance was a lot more involved than the others') were real living animals, the lizard footman and goose carriage driver were wearing prosthetics instead of just having their animal features added in post, the Fairy Godmother's dress had little LED lights sewn into it so that it would actually glow for real, the ballroom set was built by hand and included real chandeliers with more than 2000 total candles that were all actually lit for the scene, and I could go on but you get the point.
There's a ton of attention paid to little details that make the world feel real and lived in. Ella's shoes are always a little scuffed and dirty. Her farm dress is faded and wrinkled. When she breaks down and runs away to the woods, she rides her horse bareback (which, once again, was a thing Lily James actually did, no stunt-double or editing in post), because not only is that something a country girl like her would know how to do, but it also makes sense that with as upset as she is, she wouldn't want to waste time with saddling the horse. When she's dancing with the prince, it's visually obvious that he is leading her and giving her cues because of course Ella wouldn't know the latest ballroom dances, and would need him to guide her through it.
Hey speaking of dancing, y'know what else this movie does that no other LA remake has been allowed to do (at least not to this extent)? ROMANCE. Land sakes alive, this is one of the most unabashedly and yet still tastefully romantic movies I've ever seen. Ella and Kit are just oozing romantic chemistry from the moment they lock eyes for the first time. It all comes down to the fact that these two characters both have the same core values of courage and kindness, which makes their admiration for each other feel grounded and believable. Richard Madden also really sells Kit's feelings for Ella with the way his eyes go all big and soft whenever he looks at her. And don't even get me started on Lily's performance as Ella. Her quiet awe that someone as powerful as the prince loves her. The timidity and fear that she's not really worthy of that. The selfless determination to protect him from her family's cruelty, even if it means she'll never see him again, I'm just-- *banging my fist against the table and screaming into a pillow*
Absolutely god-tier costume design. No notes, I think Sandy Powell's work speaks for itself. Btw, in case you were somehow still wondering, yes, Ella's ballgown is fully practical--those layers upon layers of dreamy silk skirts are real. CG was only used to brighten up the blue color to make her stand out from the crowd more.
Wicked stepmother was allowed to actually be wicked. The movie never tries to make you sympathize with Lady Tremaine, or shift the blame off to someone else. And her villainy is given an extra layer of depth with the reveal that she is a dark reflection of Ella. They've both lost people they loved, but where Ella refused to let her grief get in the way of kindness, Lady Tremaine became utterly consumed by it. She views the death of her first husband as a sort of twisted justification for pursuing all her worst impulses. She despises Ella for her ability to flourish even while enduring terrible suffering, for being everything Lady Tremaine was either unable or flat-out refused to be.
Also Cate Blanchet absolutely SLAYS in this role. Hands-down my favorite portrayal of the wicked stepmother character.
Anyways, TLDR: Cinderella (2015) is the only Disney live-action remake that can justify its own existence and that's because it actively defies everything the LA remakes are today.
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hi love!! I was wondering if you could do Emily x dancer!reader? Like reader used to compete in competitions when they were younger. And Emily visits readers family and their mom is showing off readers old competition photos and awards and reader gets embarrassed? I really hope this made sense!!
Not That Picture!
Emily Engstler x dancer! reader
i didnt know if you meant Emily to be a friend visiting or a girlfriend so i just assumed that you meant girlfriend. hope you like it!
warnings: nothing really
You have lived away from your family for a few years, only getting to see them on holidays. Even though you missed them everyday, you were happy with where dancing had taken you: into your girlfriend, Emily's arms. You stopped dancing years ago, but still cherished the memories of your family coming to watch your performances. Finally, you were able to visit them again, with Emily by your side.
As you step out of the airport, you're met with the smiling faces of your parents'. You run over to them, quickly engulfing them in a hug. Emily follows your lead, attempting to give them awkward side hugs ,but instead your parents pull her into a warm comforting hug.
Your parents drive both of you to the home you grew up in, bombarding you two with questions, funny stories, and dad jokes the entire time.
When you get there, your dad goes to finish dinner and your mom decides that now is a perfect time to give Emily a house tour of your home. She takes her all over the house, showing off the pictures on the wall and trinkets shes collected over the years.
As your mother takes both of you to your childhood bedroom, a wave of nostalgia washes over you(like it always does), seeing that everything is still the same way it has always been. Your mom points to the medals and awards you've earned through dancing.
"How did you two meet?" your mom glances at you "She's never mentioned it." your mom turns to Emily with a smile.
Emily looks to you nervously before finding the words to answer and smiling back at your mom. "I actually met her when we were in college. She was dancing at one of my games." Emily rubs the back of her neck and you can see in her eyes that shes reliving the moment you two first made eye contact from across the court.
"...dancing huh?" your mom looks to the bookshelf with photo albums from your old dance competitions. She walks over to it and grabs it.
"Oh my god. Mom, no." you chase after her trying to swat the book out of her hands before realizing that your mother is going to do whatever it takes to show everyone her "favorite on dance moms" as she liked to call you.
"It wouldn't hurt to show them to her. She obviously likes to see you dance." your mom jokes lightly and both you and Emily's eyes widen as a pink stripe covers over face with a nervous laugh.
Emily sits on the bed next to your mom as she looks at every picture your mom shows her, nodding and smiling to every story and explanation of each picture.
"Here. This one's my favorite." your mom says, flipping the page. And that's how you knew she got to that one picture you were dreading for her to show Emily: A picture of you in a bright purple and neon yellow costume covered feathers. You rub your face with your hands in embarrassment as you prepare for Emily to see that awful monstrosity of a picture.
Though your girlfriend actually finds it quite cute to see you as a little kid in your competition pictures, she has trouble holding her laughter in when looking at this one. She puts a hand over her mouth, trying to stop the laughter that sputters out from between her fingers. You stare at your girlfriend as she repeatedly looks to you then to the picture in disbelief.
"Can you tell why this one's my favorite? Always gets a laugh ouf of someone." your mom laughs.
"You're embarrassing me." you groan.
"That's just my job." your mom shrugs.
Emily leans over to rub your arm "They were cute pictures, really."
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it’s truly crazy how to kpop companies, international fans are just money bags and nothing else. we try to make our concerns heard but they are always met with silence and they just ignore us. seeing situations like seunghan’s makes me upset because the majority (international fandom mostly) wanted him to stay in the group. a lot of people supported him and yet, the minority is what they care the most about. this makes no sense and should make a lot of you mad. i’m so mad right now.
he was a guy with dreams. we just wanted to perform and be an idol but because some people are so god damn entitled and bullies, he had to leave. this is truly not fair. it’s two thousand and fucking twenty four and idols and still being kicked out of groups for dating and partying and smoking in other words: they are being kicked for being human and doing things people their age do. fans shouldn’t have this much power to kick anyone out as they please over minor things.
we have god awful people in this industry who are convicted criminals and some of them still get to have careers but a teenager dating predebut is where you draw the line?? we have ceos who are zionists and spread bigoted ideology and support isnotreal monetarily but again… an idol dating PRE DEBUT is where you are like “this cannot be”? like please get the fuck over yourselves!!
people still wonder why so many wanna boycott companies and it’s because of situations like these. we have zionists getting money and getting to produce music in this industry while these companies are in insane debts so they have to overwork idols and top of that, these idols are also punished for being normal young people. we should be rioting right now and i’m sorry to say but these things should not be happening. this should not be normal. this is not a time to say “this is how the industry is”. this is the time to actually give a fuck and do something.
there’s so much that should be done and people still wanna pretend everything is okay. i hate to break to you but things aren’t okay so i’m asking you all to care and actually want better because enough is enough.
#i can’t man#my head hurts from crying it’s insane#how i even could type all of this out#it’s okay to rb if anyone wants to idk?#tris.txt
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Writing Notes: Horror
Horror is a genre within creative writing that relies on one thing: instilling a sense of fear in the reader.
The horror genre is multifaceted—there is a kind of horror for every kind of person.
For some, the most effective scare is the idea of being trapped in a haunted house. For others, it’s being chased by a serial killer on Halloween.
Some of the best horror comes from scary things that can manipulate an audience’s feelings, creating a sensation of uneasiness and fear that stretches beyond consciousness and permeates deep within the psyche.
Horror writing is sometimes categorized within the broader category of thrillers, but not all horror follows the thriller structure.
Classic horror fiction—whether expressed as a novel, novella, short story, or film—will tap into topics that reliably frighten most humans.
Common topics include ghosts, werewolves, vampires, zombies, serial killers, murderers, and the fear of the unknown.
These horror tropes can often devolve into clichés.
A downside of horror’s popularity is that many horror books and movies recycle old content in non-creative ways, but when properly executed, horror stories can thrill audiences and even provide commentary on the human condition.
Horror Subgenres
1. Apocalyptic - In this subgenre, the world is ending or society is collapsing. When this happens, it’s usually because of some creature, demon, or religious event (while climate-oriented apocalypses are more sci-fi).
2. Body Horror - Involves the mutilation, experimentation, or violation of the human body. It can focus on disease, dismemberment, infestation, sexual acts, or a complete transformation of the physical form.
3. Comedy - Horror and comedy seem so at odds with each other, but they work so well together (kind of like spice and chocolate). A trademark of comedy horror is how the protagonist somewhat stumbles through the story, arriving at the end through luck and ridiculous happenstance rather than skill or growth.
4. Cosmic/Lovecraftian - With its origins largely attributed to H.P. Lovecraft, cosmic horror makes us feel small against a threat that is ancient, massive, and incomprehensible. Cosmic horror looks at intergalactic entities, ancient gods, the machinations of the universe, and how helpless we are against it all.
5. Dark Fantasy - Another crossover, this time with the fantasy genre. In dark fantasy, you have elements of magic, fictional creatures or worlds, and everything else that makes fantasy great, plus you add in a good dose of scares. This can also involve other subgenres, like body horror.
6. Dark Romance - Another crossover genre, dark romance takes the feel-good romance genre and makes it horrific. While this subgenre can simply include morally questionable characters and a grittier tone than most romance, it can also include kidnapping, forced confinement, BDSM, psychological and physical abuse, and sexual violence or sex where there is no consent. Bear in mind that it still needs to include the tenants of romance stories, though.
7. Extreme Gore - Not for the faint of heart, this subgenre includes books that have detailed torture scenes or otherwise disturbing and depraved acts. This genre is all about shocking your audience with how awful your characters act or are treated.
8. Folk Horror - Embraces urban legends and folktales. These range from old pagan gods in the woods to weird rituals performed by isolated groups or villages. Sometimes there is a supernatural element to them, even if the “supernatural” is simply perceived or believed by some characters (e.g., Midsommar).
9. Found Footage/Documentaries - Though this subgenre is more common in films than books, found footage and documentary horror stories are about a crew of people recording their experiences, usually unaware of the true danger they are about to face.
10. Gothic - The great-grandparent of modern horror, gothic horror is the brooding, atmospheric genre containing what most of us would consider classics (e.g., Dracula and Frankenstein). Sometimes you throw in a dash of romance, but these tales tackle topics like death and mortality.
11. Post-Apocalyptic - After some world-ending disaster, how horrifying have things become? Post-apocalyptic horror shows us a world without rules or structure. It can contain unrealistic elements (zombies, demons, etc.) or realistic possibilities (cannibals, gangs, and so on).
12. Psychological - Places the spotlight on trauma, mental health, manipulation, phobias, and everything else that causes you to become stressed and anxious. Home invasion stories (i.e., The Strangers) fall under this subgenre.
13. Slasher - Involves violent horror that is more about a single killer stalking and eventually killing a group of people (traditionally targeting teens and using a blade). This subgenre isn’t necessarily as violent or gory as others, but uses suspense to make the reader hold their breath.
14. Splatterpunk - Is known for its disregard of limits when it comes to violence—both physical and sexual. Gore and depravity are grossly abundant.
15. Supernatural/Paranormal - Some folks separate these two subgenres into different categories, but there is so much overlap that they’re basically the same. If you have to, think of supernatural horror as stories that involve werewolves, witches, vampires, and other monsters. Paranormal horror, on the other hand, involves ghosts, demons, and haunted houses.
Tips for Writing Horror
1. Read more horror. There’s no better way to understand what a good story looks like than to read one for yourself. Read as much as you can so you are aware of what other horror writers are doing.
2. Focus on your own fears. Much like comedy, horror benefits from authenticity. So get personal: If you can scare yourself, you can probably scare an audience.
3. Create three-dimensional characters. Write characters whose character flaws feed the action of the story. All good literature and film contains well-wrought characters with desires, emotions, and a backstory. The more human you make the characters of your story or screenplay, the more their missteps and bad choices will resonate with an audience.
4. Recognize that the real can be scarier than the surreal. Sure, you can make up an army of googly-eyed bad guys or plant a severed head in your main character’s bed, but will you really scare your reader? Not necessarily. In most cases, psychological horror sticks with audiences far longer than a jump scare or gross-out moment in a slasher film. Toying with people’s real-life fears tends to scare them much more than just grossing them out.
5. Use the environment. Scary movies and television shows can use jump-scares as an easy way to frighten an audience, but writing scary literature requires its own method of manifesting fear. Setup your environment in a vivid way to fully immerse your readers into your setting. Vividly describing an enclosed space can elicit feelings of claustrophobia. A dark and quiet house becomes more frightening when a character suddenly hears the creak of an upstairs floorboard. Being an outsider in an unfamiliar place, like a small town with no cell phone service and where everyone knows each other, is already unsettling—and if you add a malicious paranormal force to such a setting, you can enhance the feeling of isolation and ramp up the anxiety of the scenario.
6. Write longer sentences. You can heighten your readers’ fear by writing paragraphs with longer sentences. Periods provide natural pauses for readers to take a breath, but if you stretch out your sentences, you build anticipation for the reader—which they might not even realize until they reach the end of the sentence. By using tactics like this, you immerse the reader into your horror story, making them feel what the main character feels and creating a heart-pounding connection.
7. Make your readers breathe faster. Whereas long sentences can amplify the intensity of a story, short one-sentence paragraphs can force your readers to take more frequent breaths while following your narrative. Crafting abrupt lines builds tension in your scary story writing, making the readers’ eyes move more quickly down the page searching for the relief that the protagonist is safe. This can make your audience breathe faster, contributing to the feeling of panic and anxiety.
8. Leverage fear of the unknown. Fear of the unknown is a common theme that can be tracked throughout many of the best stories in horror fiction and horror movies. When there is something that negatively affects us that we cannot control or properly identify, it creates a feeling of panic and dread. Teasing your readers with something not quite definable or a bad guy no one knows how to stop can increase the level of tension and fear when writing horror stories.
9. Lean into dark imagery and your readers’ collective imagination. Consider what images might be frightening to a reader (and yourself). How much of a description of a clown do you need in order to make a reader feel uneasy? How large and grotesque does a rat need to be? Leaving some of these images more general than specific will allow a reader to fill in the blanks with what is most horrifying to them. Example: If you read the word beast, what do you see in your imagination? Most words carry connotations and personal connections. Allow your words to work for you to create the maximum scare.
10. Want tension? Sprinkle in some foreshadowing. Foreshadowing is a powerful tool in your writing arsenal, but it is particularly effective in horror, especially when writing in third person. Foreshadowing is when an author alludes to a future event by showing us something now. The key to foreshadowing is to use it sparingly. We want to up the tension and the fear our readers are experiencing while they yell at the oblivious protagonist not to open the door. We don’t want the reader to know every single thing that’s going to happen.
11. Focus on the moment where things shift. You should consider a pivotal scene in your story idea and try to build around that scene or that moment where the plot actually “shifts.” Sometimes that could be reflected in a realization by the protagonist. Other times it can be represented in some type of ironic twist at the end. By looking at that singular element of your story idea, you cut away the fat so that the reader is left only with the most resonant part of the story.
12. Establish the mundane. Mundane is just a fancy way of saying normal, but the message still rings true. Most story structures tell you to start by establishing the Ordinary World: what our protagonist’s normal life is like. This is important for showing us how important the larger conflict is, because it threatens the protagonist’s normal. In horror, establishing the mundane is arguably more important. In a story where connecting with the character and empathizing with them over the godawful stuff you, the author, put them through, the reader needs to understand just how bad life has gotten. Then you can take both your characters and your reader from a place of comfort and familiarity and plunge them into whatever shadowy hell you’ve concocted.
13. Choosing your POV. By choosing to write your story from a first-person perspective, you are putting the reader exactly where your character is. There are 2 types of third-person POV—limited and omniscient. It is advisable to stay away from omniscient. Part of writing a good horror story is withholding information from the reader, which third-person omniscient doesn’t really allow for. Considering the pros and cons of the different points of view, choose the right one for your story.
14. Avoid clichés. Clichés are boring and predictable, and a horror scene that is predictable is likely to not be scary. A good horror story can still use familiar horror tropes, but a great horror story makes them its own. Look beyond the obvious when trying to write a scary scene—what is something readers wouldn’t expect? How can you surprise them with fear? Use enough of the existing tropes to be identifiable as horror, but make sure you insert your own originality into the mix. One of the reasons people gravitate to genres in general is because they have certain expectations for what should happen in the story. Look for ways to flip archetypes on their heads.
15. Practice. If you’re struggling to get a handle on writing a good story that’s scary, practice with story prompts (see some sample prompts below). Writing prompts can expand your range of thinking and open up new avenues of imagination that you hadn’t thought of before.
Horror Writing Prompts
A scary doll comes to life.
A scene from a nightmare comes true the next day.
Days go by, and your parents don’t come home.
You feel yourself slowly becoming a monster.
Your friends start to disappear, and no one else notices.
You’re lost in the woods, and you don’t know how you got there.
You’re inhabited by a ghost that controls you and makes you do crazy things.
You have no reflection in the mirror.
The teacher is a monster, but no one will believe you.
You hypnotize your brother, and you can’t snap him out of it.
A fortune teller reveals that you are evil.
Someone follows you home, and it’s your exact double.
You find a diary that tells the future.
Every time you wake up, you’re a different person.
Your parents explain that you are actually an alien from another planet.
You know someone is watching you day and night from the house across the street.
You realize you are shrinking.
While reading a scary book, you realize that you’re a character in it.
Someone is living in your mirror.
Everyone knows the new neighbors are vampires, and the kids invite you over for a sleepover.
All the cats in a small town vanish in the middle of the night….and all that remains is a set of big, scary teeth smashed into a car door.
A group of friends takes on the zombie apocalypse.
Strange things start happening after the grandfather clock starts to speak.
You finally meet your child’s imaginary friend. Who turns out to be a serial killer.
When a local police officer goes to investigate the haunted house down the street, he finds a young girl who died decades ago.
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