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Stg sometimes I just want to sit and rewrite every single 911 episode since S4, maybe some of S3, but not all of it. Make it an amazing alternate storyline.
Spoiler alert Buddie would have been fucking since quarantine only no one knew.
Also buddie got to be openly canon once Eddie broke up officially with Ana.
Coz, you know, drama, denial and shit would have been epic.
And that bitchy break up was the most impressive one and amusing in this whole show.
Also, fires, we would have firefighters fighting fires. I know it's a foreign concept in this show, but hear me out...
#911 abc#rewrit is necessary#if only i had the energy#eddie diaz#evan buckley#buddie#911 AU#it needed to be said#it needs to get done#ffs fight fires#you are a firefighting show not an episode of law and order with a side of firefighters comic relief#i have so many issues with this shows writing
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i don't get all the discourse surrounding the sonic generations rewrite, it's not like the original game had any compelling character interactions, so the rewrite doesn't ruin that, not to say that half of the lines stayed the same while the other half practically has the same meaning, so i really don't understand why people feel so strongly one way or the other (aside from all that, i'm really glad they added sonic responding to the lines his friends say when they get rescued instead of just saying nothing like in the original)
#like yeah it wasn't really necessary but that's because both don't have a whole lot to offer anyway#ian flynn isn't really my favorite writer this series has had but he's good and the way people are talking about him is really odd#the sonic fandom is so negative about everything#like i assure you it's not that deep seriously#sonic#sth#sth fandom#sonic fandom#sonic the hedgehog#sonic the hedghog fandom#sonic generations#sonic x shadow generations#ian flynn#sonic games#sonic rewrite#fandom#discourse#sxs generations#sonic x shadow gens#sonic x shadow spoilers#sxs gens spoilers#sxsg#sxsg spoilers#rewrite#sonic shadow generations#sonic spoilers#sonic fans#fandom discourse#shadow generations#shadow gens
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If I had a nickel for every time a dating game I'm obsessed with ends abruptly, I'd have two nickels. Which isn't a lot, but it's weird that it's happened twice. First The Arcana, now Obey Me. Am I just a harbinger of romance game death?
Honestly, I expected something like this to happen eventually, but NOW?!? It's such odd timing with new songs, features, and merch, coming out right now. But, I guess it lines up with what their "plan" is. I'm too far deep in the brain rot to let this fandom go, though. I'm going to be in my 80s at the nursing home ranting about it to the poor, unsuspecting volunteers.
I mean this is part of why I am still surprised. Just because it seemed like they had a lot of plans happening, like you say with the songs and everything. It feels like something bad happened and they were forced to do it or something. But I don't really know anything about that kinda stuff so I could be wrong lol.
I'm sure the nursing home staff will love to hear all about it~
And even though this is the end, I'll likely still be here for a bit too. I've already spun off into crazy OC time like I have so many stories still to write!
#I'm really curious about how they're gonna end the story#I'm read to rewrite it if necessary ldskfj#obey me#musicologykiss#misc answers
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Ifan for like 80% of the game.
#Divinity#Divinity: Original Sin 2#DOS2#Ifan ben-Mezd#sorry not sorry but I was thinking about his love confession again#''every step of the way I've wanted you‚ since the moment we met''#and there's a meme for everything these days#rewrite with necessary bits for your character if there's a need#I felt like ''thinks about 'naughty bits' in silence'' kinda ruins the flow
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REBECCA!!! DROP A TRIFECTA PREQUEL AND MY LIFE IS YOURS!!!!!
#theyre so interesting they dont deserve getting zero page time#at the same time i dont want to deal with riga anymore than necessary#bro was alive for like 2 pages and was so irritating#but i need to know hanelai do bad like i need to read about herrrr pleasee#seeing baby altan may kill me a bit though#and baby rin 😭#and a fully populated speer#the burning god#tbg#the dragons republic#the poppy war#tpw trilogy#yin riga#su daji#jiang ziya#hanelai#rewriting
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I’m watching one piece, and now I’m wondering do you have any hcs on the world building in the fairy tail universe ? Do you think theirs some crazy kingdom’s , advanced technology in some lands ? Love to hear your thoughts 💗
hmmmmmmmmmmm kinda a bit of a deep question tbh.
Structurally FT has good bones for its world. And that's kinda it lol
There's a fleshed out map of all the countries within the continent that fiore is found on (Ishgar, which has 16 named countries apart from fiore itself) and expanding wider than that we know that there are about 3 named continents (Ishgar to the east being a peninsula connected to the mainland that we know nothing of, Alakitasia to the west where Alavarez is and Guiltina to the north) and a fourth unnamed continent further east that exists within earthland.
But while we have all this info, nothing in particular comes into play as the series had progressed, the majority of the series' arcs all more or less take place within the same country, which for a series that has it's characters constantly travelling for missions looks particularly bad, especially when even the known locations all visually seem indistinct from each other in terms of stuff like architecture. It's a reason why I appreciate edolas in particular because it at least offered something that visually stood out and an insight into how that culture functioned. (and in Phoenix Priestess for the small montage the squad in the city of Rose Garden and showing a bit of the country Veronica)
Like it is frustrating to me whenever I think on it because the solution would be just to change the locations of where they travel to just to expand the background of the places travelled, wouldn't even have to change arc structures or anything to give some life to the named countries like:
Joya despite its small size as a country is the main manufacturers of trains and exports the majority of the transportation other countries use as well as weapons. Wizards are less found here, with treasure hunting being a more popular job choice.
Sin, despite the ironic name, is a deeply religious and faith driven country. Magics that have connection to nature and celestial bodies are particularly revered here.
Desierto mostly deals with trade, having constantly active shipping ports. Enchanted items such as brooms and carpets are popular and easy transport choices within cities and are more widely used than vehicles.
Iceberg's largely uninhabited due to the weather with most of the population sticking closer to the country's borders.
Like this is all just purely flavour text examples to just try and bring some life to these otherwise lifeless locations but you get the general gist of it.
There was clearly this effort to establish these locations by giving then names (and drawing a full on map) so it always boggled me that they were never properly used as a backdrop for the arcs within the story. (Tower of Heaven? Move that arc to Sin, Lucy's arc with Loke? Takes place in Stella, That arc with the giant village? Put it in Minstrel).
Like shifting around major arc locations would easily open up avenues to naturally expand the world as the story moves. And not even just big arcs, but smaller less grand filler arcs (which jesus christ did ft rlly need because it defs need breathing room between all the big events. It's why the story moves at such a breakneck speed without things really feeling as though they've changed in any meaningful ways) would do wonders to make earthland feel like a genuine lived in world (like how it is within the world of one piece that you cited as an inspo for this ask.)
#fairy tail#fairy tail headcanon#i know this ask probably was sent more in the vein of asking for headcanons about the different places#but i am firmly of the belief that if im going to fully rewrite and worldbuild for an existing series#i may as well just create my own thing yknow?#not to knock anyone else who does that ofc but full rewrites and complete changes to an established property arent really for me#bcus all that effort i think could be put into making my own series if i so choose#with regards to your citing of one piece#whilst similar in general tone one piece is purely built on establishing each location#taking time to learn the culture ppl and the political climate of each area#because it in turn feeds into the overarching theme of corruption within that story#so while in one piece it's necessary to know about each land for something lower scale like ft such heavy information#wouldnt be a necessity bcus it wouldnt help to further the base theme of found family and friendship#instead having it expounded on in small drops as the characters go about their jobs (or just general lives) would benefit the story as it i#while also being more than the bare minimum given to us by canon that we have#one piece is a great story with how its world is shaped but that scale is grand and isnt something that should be applied to every story#unless u got time like oda lol
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if i ever don’t tag a fic as not beta read it’s not that i found a beta reader it’s that i simply failed
#i draft my tags way ahead of time#bc it’s fun to me#and then i don’t put like half the necessary ones LMAO#but also i’ve been posting from desktop a lot more which means i have to rewrite my tags#so i usually add more if i need to#i also Love to ramble in the tags lmao#reese’s pieces
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What gets me about GW defenders saying that "Claude siding with Edelgard shows how far he's willing to go to get what he wants, he'll use anyone to further his goals" is that, even if that were accurate to his character... that's not what he does in GW. At all.
Which one of Claude's goals are ever progressed once he sides with Edelgard? And how does siding with Edelgard, specifically, accomplish said goal?
Maybe... killing Rhea? But all of the reasons he says he wants her gone in this game are either completely unproven or blatantly incorrect - there's no proof of the Church forcing arranged marriages, Crests do not force obligations onto those that have them (which Claude himself literally proves), and the Church is helping Dimitri restore Duscur - a foreign nation - meaning they are actively willing to help fulfill Claude's main goal that he came to the officer's academy to achieve.
And... that's it! That is the only possible thing that even POTENTIALLY helps Claude's dreams, and taking a five-second look at it shows that it actually does nothing at all to help anything. But in the meantime? Claude weakens Faerghus through agitating Sreng and invading it himself, forcing Dimitri to fight a three front war; he actively helps Edelgard get herself out of a messy situation, even though not helping her and letting her die would have actually helped him and would have actually been him using her like people keep saying he's trying to do; he and Holst even admit that by the end of the war Edelgard is going to make a vassal state of Leicester after taking the lion's share of Faerghus' territory for themselves, which Leicester can't do anything about because of Adrestia's far stronger military. He is the one saying that! He is the one pointing out that that is going to happen! And yet he just keeps going anyway!
He is the one getting used. Very blatantly, and very extensively. Claude walked himself into a trap and lied to himself into thinking he's the one with the upper hand, which somehow managed to convince a large portion of the fanbase too. There's no gray morality here, there's no cunning being showcased, Claude is just an evil stupid tool
#clyde discourse#doing a read over for what i have for the GW rewrite and just. man.#like. it's hard to even like Clyde as a villain because he is just so incomprehensively incompetent in literally everything he does#once Part 2 hits#like imagine if he helped EdeckyWecky up to the point where she'd ACTUALLY die without his help... and he doesn't give it#he lets her die and lets the Empire crumble without leadership#but Dimitri can't take advantage of that because he still has to deal with Sreng and the Alliance#meanwhile Clyde is sneaking in more and more Almyran forces through Nader manipulating Mr. King of Almyra#until he has enough to take on the weakened Kingdom and force it under submission through the constant pressure he's forcing it under#not through brute force but just through wearing them down to the point where they just can't keep going#and in his zeal to conquer Fodlan he fails to recognize that he's just become Shahid; someone who wants to become king no matter the cost#like imagine it's never said outright but that THIS is how power corrupts once genuinely good people#they're so focused on getting to the end point that they gradually care less and less about how red their path to that end point is#until oops everyone is either dead; too scared/unable to fight back; or are also swept up in the mindset of By Any Means Necessary#THAT'D BE A NEAT VILLAIN. even if it's not *Claude* at all that is a villain i could get behind!#but people keep insisting that 1) Clyde isn't a villain (he is) that 2) he's doing the right thing (he's not)#and that 3) he's in any way compelling (he's just brown Eddy Geddy but stupid)
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guys I think I'm addicted to making WAY too detailed illustrations for all of my fics now
(this one is from chapter one of 'cause I'm still turning out - a fic about Midoriya learning that he's aroace, with Shinsou's help :))
#was it necessary for me to add this much perspective? absolutely not. but I couldn't help myself#also hi yes apparently I'm making mha fics now lol#I have SO many fic wips from 2020 to rewrite so I knew I was going to get to them some point#just not this soon!#my art#fanfic fanart#my hero academia#boku no hero academia#mha#bnha#midoriya izuku#shinsou hitoshi#and the stall attendant is not anybody she's just a random character I made up for this drawing!#ace week 2024#by sheer coincidence! again!
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#well we're just about at the end of my summer writing time#the good news is that i have turned 17 scenes green and one of the remaining yellows just needs two paragraphs of sex#the bad news is that there are still four yellows and four of the dreaded orange scenes#the yellows are roughed out but the orange ones are scenes that are necessary but i don't know how they go#this is the scary part where i have to trust that the story is going to keep telling me what happens#it's worked with every other longfic i've written but this one is the most complicated and unwieldy one i've taken on#the only one i've ever needed a spreadsheet for#the only one where i'm pretty sure i'm going to have to do a round of rewrites before i send it for beta#it feels uncertain to trust this story the way i would be able to trust another story to steer itself home at this point#but hey there's actually no other option so here we go#one sunday afternoon at a time#lafiwrimo
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#anime#manga#vanitas no carte#vnc#the case study of vanitas#lord ruthven#august ruthven#hear me out ! ruthven is one of the most intriguing characters to me#despite being portrayed as an antagonist i can't really see him completely fitting into that role / ruthven's actions are ambiguous#yea yeah he's a manipulative mf and is doing bad things now but i don't think that's what it's all about#i believe ruthven is being controlled by something (?) through his right eye and has no much choice in that matter#in the scene where ruthven tried to put a curse on chloe he looks almost shocked when he realizes what he was doing#he also spoke to someone who wasn't there and it seemed to be an act of desperation / even though the war was already over (?) by that time#the eye shows him terrible things ever since the war (and the betrayal that i'm not sure if really happened or was staged to trick him)#i think the continuous trauma the eye causes on him shaped him to be a colder and more cruel person#the opposite of what his original self showed to be (someone more like noe in beliefs and world view)#i guess he truly believes he's doing this for the sake of vampires / that idea of “sacrifices will be necessary for the greater good”#this could explain the alliance w charlatan who seeks to find a way to create more vampires (moreau's research) & rewrite the world formula#also it's clear that ruthven has a distorted view of vampire's malnomen (what caused that? what he saw in the war?)#both for his speech referring to luca's brother “salvation takes many forms (...)” and for the way he uses his own curse on others#until now we know he cursed queen faustina / jeanne / noe (i doubt he would betray the queen without a reason)#maybe his right eye is a malnomen he considers now as a form of freedom / or maybe that allowed him to finally see the “truth”#and yet i think his character is constantly questioning himself about it (in a very sutil way)#(e.g. when he listens noe talk about his ideals / when he sees jeanne dressed like a normal girl after her date)#in these moments we can see him falter a little bit and his expression changes to something more soft and genuine / introspective and sad#the curse he put on noe i think it has more than 1 purpose: 1)trump card against teacher 2)to not kill noe as monsieur spider had demanded#at first i thought it might be for naenia get noe's true name but if that were the case she would have done it by now#and in that moment naenia regained her form for a brief moment in d'apchier mansion and everyone felt her presence#ruthven looked equally surprised so he must not know naenia's true identity either (is he being used?)#lol i could write an essay about vnc... so many tags... lol sry i got carried away!
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I've finally finished the draft of chapter 16. Now to edit (and hope that's all I've gotta do)
#writing has been very hard lately. reading too#i ended up scrapping nearly half the chapter last week and rewriting it. which was extremely painful but good and necessary#this is where the plot really starts to show itself#plot? in MY fanfic? it's more incredible than you think#fic: familiar#my goal is to update before the end of the month#currently 4800 words but i'm sure it'll rise. it always does when i edit
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i can't stop listening to the 'purpose is glorious' track from this season's ost and thinking about how lovely the title and its meaning are. it's just such an amazing underlying theme in this show, and - while i do have criticisms about some of the choices made for the series finale - i really do feel the writers wholeheartedly delivered in sending that message home. for me personally, loki's ending is so gratifying and a large part of that is solely from viewing their arc's conclusion with the perspective of this theme in mind. to have spent years watching this character i hold very dear to my heart struggle to find belonging, to feel as though they matter and there is reason in their existence, finally get a chance to show - and recognize - their worth was so, so rewarding. and honestly, i think the message behind the phrasing of 'purpose is glorious' is all the more meaningful because of how loki's arc finished. yes, the outcome was bittersweet; yes, we're left knowing loki didn't get the happiness they undeniably earned after everything they'd gone through. it smarts something fierce to know their journey up until they deviated from their timeline and became a variant, as well as seen their eventual intended fate. the ache is only worsened after witnessing everything that happens within the TVA and the entirety of loki's character growth leading up to a redefining moment where they willingly choose to undergo a nightmarish amount of time in the endeavor to do the right thing. of course we want them to emerge victorious when they've struggled for so long, but that's not the point. loki's final moments are them forfeiting their right to a happy ending to preserve the stories of others because all stories matter and should inherently reserve the free will to be written; as sylvie says, loki makes their choice so their loved ones and life across the multiverse still have a chance to belong somewhere and embrace their place in the world. the take away is that even burden can be glorious. even with all the hardships of life - all the inevitable heartache, disappointment, and grief we encounter just by being alive - we have meaning in our existence. there is meaning in the trials we face, and the suffering we endure in order to overcome them. our pain gives us purpose; it gives us the ability to love, to grow from and for each other, and choose to sacrifice our happiness for the benefit of another. loki's purpose was forged in the bonds of those they met in their time at the TVA and the sense of value they gained from their companionship. their sacrifice perfectly conveys how the human capacity to love is one of cosmic greatness, which can ultimately surpass our instinctual desire to preserve one's self. we can move immovable mountains and challenge insurmountable adversity in behalf of the ones we love and their welfare. if that isn't an act deserving of glory, I don't know what is.
tldr; loki's purpose is the friends they made along the way = as the saying goes, 'tis better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all'. or: our own lives have purpose because of the connections we share with others, even when we are met with great loss.
#also this just shows the depth of love loki derived from knowing mobius and how they were changed for the better because of it#how mobius' initial - and repeated - acknowledgement of their potential is what gave them the necessary tools to rewrite their destiny#when loki first watches their fate on the sacred timeline their devastation is palpable; they now know they are meant to die -#at the hands of thanos after failing to save their brother -#after losing one last time#they see their final fate and know they were never meant to win; never to reach the respect and admiration theyve been chasing all this tim#but they're given a second chance at an ending - one they can be proud of and has meaning#and they SUCCEED; they ascend and take the throne not for power or control or even glory but because of the people they care for!!!!!!#loki accepts their burden with grace for the benefit of others; they escape the harrowing demise once preordained for them -#and while they mourn what they must leave behind they are fulfilled by the triumph of saving EVERYONE this time#the parallels between their sacred timeline ending and the finale's makes me way too emotional i am not okay#i have so many thoughts about the ost guahahauffh ignore me#i am obsessed with this track specifically like i want to write even more meta abt the significance of being used during mobius' last scene#okay these tags are way too long i'm shutting up now i'll see myself out#txt: icarus foaming @ the mouth analysis#char tags:#god of stories and faking death#peepaw from outerspace#loki meta#lokius#loki s2#loki season 2#loki spoilers#loki series#marvel#mcu#loki#Spotify
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Do you think Blizzard will ever explain what Fyrakk was trying to create with the Suffusion Camps? Because the Dream Render only went into production after Vyranoth put a stop to his plan to force the Green Dragonflight to grant him entry into the Dream & he allied with the Druids of the Flame to get his ticket in.
like that entire ordeal was definitely not exclusively just to make one dinky axe he didn't even have a reason to make prior to 10.1.7.
#I guess we stopped them from making whatever it was Fyrakk -actually- wanted made?#and they just turned the leftover materials into Fyr'alath and djaradin weaponry ig?#idk I think it's really clear Dragonflight unfortunately got cut to focus on the Worldsoul Saga & the necessary rewrites to pave its way#so we just end up with a lot of these weird hanging plot threads & rushed storylines after a very strong start
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doing the unthinkable (for me at least)
#so i have 10 diff docs open for one (1) story bc i keep rewriting it#so i’m just gonna delete them all#that way i have a 30 day fire under my ass to complete it or bye bye all documents </3#I THINK IT’S NECESSARY THOUGH…#i’m NEVER an overthinker in fact i am an UNDERTHINKER and idk what it is when it comes to writing recently but something needs to give#sigh. it’s only for my benefit#maybe this is good maybe this way i can also just plan + plot properly and get to it#i’ll start this tomorrow bc i’m gonna go eat mexican food now :3#cult leader!geto fic you’re my ultimate beloathed#premonition of love you’re on thin ice but i like you#and then i’m just also gonna try those drabble/onshots in my brain#sigh . :3 <- all i can do#personal
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Last Line Tag Game
tagged by @post-and-out
RULES: Post the last sentence you wrote (fanfic / original / anything) and tag as many people as there are words in the sentence (unless you're like me and write enough run on sentences to where you can't possibly tag that many people for words).
SO MINE is from a third draft, so it's not, strictly speaking, new words, but it is the last line of fic I wrote. So there.
Junko draws a gasp unbidden from her then pulls away, licks her lips, and hums when she says, “You taste like blood.”
Also not gonna tag over twenty people because, ah, nope. BUT. I will tag people!
@raevenlywrites, @eriquin, @princescar, @adhdavinci, @allofthebeanz
#musings#meme#memes#meme response#dr1 end rewrite fic#bandit writes fic#thanks so much for the tag!#eventually plan to come back to wip game#TT.TT#i actually really like this line#i may change it again before i post it on monday though#i don't think the gasp is necessary or relevant#and steals attention from the spoken line#which is the best part of the sentence imo#me? cutting words? WOW#...i'm actually going to go and change this now huh
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