Putting the Puzzle Pieces Back Together - Part 2
PART 2: Black Sheep
and finally, after two months… here it is!! this is part 2 of my amnesiac jay fic (which is now officially an au), featuring jay’s experiences in the secret agency the administration!
thanks to the amazing @inspectorghoul for beta reading, and especially for all the latin :D
now for the people who asked to be tagged (if you also want to be tagged next chapter, tell me!): @giftofjay @ninjagokata
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As he studied his reflection, Jay noticed again the pinkish-white scars on his hands, branching out like miniature trees. The sight of them tugged something in his brain—these weren’t new scars; they were old scars. From before. Carefully, he reached out to trace them, pushing up his jacket sleeve. His skin tingled at the contact. The scars ran up his arms in streaking patterns and faded at his shoulders.
And there were other scars, too: nicks and scrapes and scratches and burns scattered all over. Not to mention the notch in his eyebrow.
It was scars like these, and reports of falling mechs, that made Jay question what exactly his past self had been doing with his life. And what his past self would think of him now: joining an agency he knew next to nothing about, all because of the chance to do something good and the possibility of remembering who he once was.
“I’m sorry,” Jay confessed quietly to his past self, voice barely above a low whisper. “I won’t forget you anymore than I already have. I’ll find out who you—who we were. I promise.”
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im exploding him with my mind if u were wondering
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At one point Wally kept getting 'nightmares' of crazy potential futures. They were seriously freaking him out because most of them were bleak and apocalyptic.
He was especially freaked out by how detailed and real they felt. But he wrote them off as stress dreams because they were just too crazy to be true.
I mean, come on. Barry Allen actually being alive in the speedforce and returning to be the Flash? Clearly, that wasn't happening.
... Yeah.
At one point Wally dreamt of an alien creature before he had actually encountered it in real life and he used the knowledge he had gained in his 'dream' to understand the alien in the present.
And you know what this storyline should have ended with? Wally realizing that he was seeing various potential futures. You know what didn't happen? That.
The storyline ended with Wally chalking it up to stress and deciding to take more time off with his family.
Because he's a dumbass. A lovable dumbass but a dumbass nonetheless.
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I know cc would never tell Lelouch she's 90% sure I was whatshername 500 years ago or whatever. But he's observant and he knows she's being weird abt me lol. Like she doesn't rly like being near me but is also kind of fond (and weirdly defensive) of me. He has no idea why tho
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my senior dog has been acting up so much since our family dog died since she was raised w her since she was a puppy and now i think shes really lonely, whenever i look up solutions ppl r like 'get another dog!' but im hoping to move out soon and i cant with 2 dogs lol (and its just a bad time for me to get a puppy, even if i want one <3). trying to give her more attention isnt really helping especially bcuz my dog is very standoffish and independent and doesnt WANT the attention a lot lol. she loves extra training time but i can only give her so much food. idk what to do
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my english teachers could only dream of getting me to read 17k words in a day yet here we are (i caught up on PtPPBT and have transcended) -zaptrap
(the zaptrap, in my lockbox? mindblowing)
agagsgsgsg i’m so happy you love ptppbt!! i told myself it wasn’t going to be that long but chapter 2 took it up to 32k and here we are, with no sign of stopping. chapter 3 is going to be… (glances at outline) something, that’s for sure!
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i think i love stranger things so much because it's like one big puzzle
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CHAPTER 2 - page 13/?
original word count: 3940
revised word count: 2145
click for ch 2's full comparison document.
original:
I set down the fork and watched the flames of our meager fire dance along the remaining logs, stretching out my aching legs beneath the table.
I turned to my sisters. As usual, Nesta was complaining about the villagers—they had no manners, they had no social graces, they had no idea just how shoddy the fabric of their clothes was, even though they pretended that it was as fine as silk or chiffon. Since we had lost our fortune, their former friends dutifully ignored them, so my sisters paraded about as though the young peasants of the town made up a second-rate social circle.
I took a sip from my cup of hot water—we couldn’t even afford tea these days—as Nesta continued her story to Elain.
“Well, I said to him, ‘If you think you can just ask me so nonchalantly, sir, I’m going to decline!’ And you know what Tomas said?” Arms braced on the table and eyes wide, Elain shook her head.
“Tomas Mandray?” I interrupted. “The woodcutter’s second son?”
Nesta’s blue-gray eyes narrowed. “Yes,” she said, and shifted to address Elain again.
“What does he want?” I glanced at my father. No reaction—no hint of alarm or sign that he was even listening. Lost to whatever fog of memory had crept over
revised:
I set down the fork and took a sip of hot water. We couldn’t even afford tea anymore. Nesta continued telling her story to Elain.
“Well, I said to him, ‘If you think you can just ask me so nonchalantly, sir, I’m going to decline!’ And you know what Tomas said?”
Arms braced on the table, Elain said, “What?”
“Tomas Mandray?” I interrupted. “The woodcutter’s second son?”
Nesta’s eyes narrowed. “Yes.”
“What does he want?” I glanced at my father. No reaction—no hint that he was even listening.
“He wants to marry her,” Elain said dreamily.
Nesta cocked her head. “Problem, Feyre?”
I sometimes wondered if her unrelenting steel would’ve helped us survive better if she hadn’t been so preoccupied with what we’d lost.
I barely kept from rolling my eyes. “You can’t chop wood for us, but you want to marry a woodcutter’s son?”
“I thought you’d be happy,” she sneered. “Don’t you dream of a day when Elain and I are out of the house?”
“When you want to marry someone worthy, I’ll be the first one marching to his door and handing you over. But the Mandrays are barely better off than us.”
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