notes from the margin: "he hasn't forgiven you either" (3x02)
man, the way pan would fuck with everyone. telling emma that the two boys haven't forgiven her. asking her if she thinks anna has. maybe anna can be the first "official" lost girl. what does emma think of that? pan wanting a way to get into anna's head. make her doubt the confidence she has in her family. isolate her from the others. add her as a pawn in his game.
neverland would just be a delightful clusterfuck.
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I personally like Thunder's prosthetic. Explained it to my friend (who does use a mobility device, a cane and wheelchair, and listens to me rant and infodump about BB) and they agreed, it's important to know that not every person needs what someone wants to give them. It's another example of "bad ableist person does a thing that hurts a disabled person because they are bad and ableist".
Clear Sky got Jagged Peak killed and would have killed Sunlit Frost! He would absolutely force his disabled son to be "normal" and present it like a privilege. "I wouldn't do this for anyone else, it's special, why don't you want to be helped?"
Thunder Storm should toss it in Clear Sky's face. (I would say toss it into the river but we do not pollute waterways in this house)
Thank you for telling me this, and tell your friend I'm thanking them too! If they have anything else to add please forward what they have to say
Since BB!DOTC tackles some of the heaviest topics in the entire series because its canon equivalent is so dark, I think very carefully about what I do here and how I show it. I take feedback on its sensitive aspects very seriously. If I'm understanding the criticism properly, it's that I should avoid stigmatizing prosthetics by making sure Thunder Storm's not the only one with it-- which he's not! And I'll add even more.
I don't want to avoid something only because it's uncomfortable if the topic is important, and my portrayal is respectful. Ableism IS uncomfortable! There are some situations where a prosthetic is not wanted! I think the rejection of this particular one is both a good opportunity to show a type of ableism and ALSO is very fitting for the characters.
In BB!Clear Sky's mind, the villain, he's fixing an old mistake. He can't admit that he got Jagged Peak killed or take REAL accountability for it (though he will, occasionally, apologize insincerely), but deep in his bones, he knows what he did was cruel. He'll never tell anyone this because he doesn't really cognate it himself, but Thunder Storm NEEDS to take his gift.
If Thunder doesn't take it, it blows a hole in his newest story. You see, throwing Jagged Peak out was All That Could Have Been Done back then. It was a Tragedy and he simply Made A Hard Choice. He regrets it very much, But You Have To Understand.
But now? Now? Well, behold. Look at what he's accomplished since the tragic death of his little brother. His cats are well-fed, cared for, and stable enough to make such incredible advancements. If only Jagged Peak had been able to hold on longer, if only he could be here now, I could fix him.
Just like I can (MAKE YOU JUST LIKE ME) fix you.
"Everything I've ever done is for Jagged Peak. For Fluttering Wing. For you." Thunder Sky is SPECIAL, but if he rejects any gift, tries to turn down the "privileges" offered to him, in an instant that becomes ungratefulness and arrogance. He both forces him to be special, and then leverages it against him if it's rejected. "Spoiled brat, doesn't appreciate what I've worked so hard to give him."
It all goes back to him and his own guilt. He can NEVER be wrong. He can't accept his family doesn't have to be "normal" or reflect his own ability. He won't see himself as a bully, let alone a murderer. It was never about his son's comfort or finding out what Thunder Storm wants or needs, it was about his own ego.
...All that said I'm still taking feedback if there's anything else I should keep in mind, or if anyone has a counter point, especially if you also have experience here.
(In the interest of having a link trail for posterity, here's the critique/call for feedback this is in response to)
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Outlaw!Price is so dangerous and more than a lil bit scary but holy moly is it sexy!!!! Also your writing is incredible, the imagery is so crystal clear in my mind it’s like I’m in the scene, “voice like felled timber. Heavy and firm.” And that last paragraph???? Pure genius 💕
ahhhhhh, thank you!!!! i want him to be an absolute bear of a man in this because scary!Price is the best, imo!! and i took a lot of inspo for how Price deals/interacts with enemies in the games to piece together this particular version of him. he's foul, grizzled, rugged, selfish, and very miserly in the sense that any debt owed to him will absolutely be paid in full (with interest). there's very little room in his heart for altruism, and he sees you - all alone and desperate - as a means to an end and the perfect snack for him to devour.
man's gotta eat, after all.
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THREE MY LOVE
id: page 26 of system collapse, covered in pink sticky notes with ink drawings of three. It’s drawn in an environmental suit with buzzed hair, a round face, almond eyes, short nose, and a scar across its nose.
The drawings show it awkwardly sitting with Karime and the colonists, looking into the distance with a distressed look, and holding a cup of Hot Drink, very unsure of what to do with it.
There’s also a closeup of its face trying so hard to look like a polite human person. Text around it reads “doing a very very good job” and “SO human!”
The second picture is the same drawing as the close-up, but rendered in a digital art program. Three has warm medium brown skin, brown hair, and a blue line in their hair, curving to follow their skull. The background is pink with pink hearts
/end id
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notes from the margin: school (4x13)
so just a few things from the montage at the beginning of 4x13. one, anna is both slightly amused and slightly horrified that apparently their grandmother has decided to be the next mr. feeny and just follow them through their academic career. she clearly started teaching like third or fourth grade and now she's teaching like 8th? (@ghxstwrxter has decided that this is because the old 8th grade teacher got left back in the enchanted forest when the new curse happened).
two, i love how half the time henry walks to school and the other half he takes the bus??? anna, i think, prefers the bus. walking is for dorks.
three, uniforms. ugh. anna is definitely pushing the limits when it comes to what still counts as being in uniform.
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”i was simply frightening sparrows in vain, and pleasing myself with it” “i was simply playing around with both the petitioners and with the officer” okay, Saigiku Jouno.
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i redrew someone’s sketch to give them a final version of their drawing but they didn’t like it :(
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