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tatck · 1 year ago
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soooo what is the vagabond au what is like the concept of it how do things work
It's my fun little doll house where i can do what ever i want :) 1st chapter here It originally started as the question "what if instead of luffy it was sonic in the first episode of one piece", because i was thinking about how the theme of freedom is handled with their characters. That concept evolved into a comic and a world with a little history, which would include inspirations from treasure planet and the sonic boom lore & world. I like how mysterious sonic booms world was.
As to why it is called sonic the vagabond hedgehog? no deep reason. Sonic is a vagabond and i needed a title. He might eventually be called that but not sure yet.
The actual machimations of the world will be shown slowly, but there are a lot of sonic concepts too, like rings, loopdeloops and checkpoints too. Some things will just be background props.
The issue i'm working on right now will show off a little more of what the world is like and how things work, but mostly how eggman effects it. And I want to show off the sonic concepts, like warp rings, special zones and chaos emerald stuff in the knuckles issue if i get to that.
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support needs… expanded! (part 1)
[pt: support needs… expanded! (part 1)]
low/medium/high support needs (& everything in between) get more awareness n talk about here, which great! you may able now remember support needs as amount of support someone need for basic & instrumental activities of daily living (bADLs & iADLs), n more n more of you able explain what bADLs iADLs are. if so, then, congrats, you graduated support needs 101! now, you need take next mandatory class… support needs 201 >:) where we talk about more concepts n expand on old concepts with more nuance.
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adaptive functioning skills
[pt: adaptive functioning skills]
this very well known word in intellectual/developmental disability (I/DD) services circle, but think there things people with start-as-adult neurological & cognitive disabilities n people w physical disabilities can borrow too. this a thing talked here a few times briefly, but never know how explain it.
adaptive functioning skills are conceptual, social, & practical skills need for independent daily life. it includes bADLs & iADLs, but also bigger wider than that, n also include skills need for do these ADLs. some examples:
conceptual skills
reading/literacy & writing
understand numbers, money, time
self direction, plan, organize
social skills
listening & understanding others (communication)
talk to & communicate with others (communication)
recognize danger, avoid harm
ask for help
social responsibility, follow rules n laws
practical skills
personal care (bADLs & beyond)
caring for home (iADLs & beyond)
being in community
manage money
& so much more! sometimes skill belong in multiple category, move between category, different people group them differently, but this general idea.
each bullet point can (&often is) broken down to even smaller skills, from most basic skill many people don’t even consider it learned skill (but is! n many I/DD n otherwise disabled people struggle with), to more advanced ones. example:
under personal care > feeding (orally)
open mouth when fed
eat solid food
suck or chew food
feed self with spoon
feed self with fork
(now do those without spilling)
spread soft things like butter n jam with not-sharp knife
cut easy to cut food with knife (e.g. pancakes)
cut hard to cut food with knife (e.g meat)
under listening & understanding
looks at (familiar person) when hear their voice
looks when someone call own name
understand (e.g. at least 3) basic gestures (head nod yes, shake head no, reaching, waving, clapping, etc)
understand at least 10 words
look when other people point
point to (e.g) at least 3 object when asked
follow one step directions. then two related directions. if-then directions. then two unrelated directions. then three step directions. then directions for do something a lil later. then directions for something much much later. etc
pay attention to story for short amount time. pay attention to show for medium amount of time. pay attention to information talk for short amount of time. n understand it. etc
some examples of be in community skills
understand money used to buy thing, clock used to tell time
communicate with familiar people on phone/computer/etc - when other people place the call. n start by self
respect privacy, like use bathroom change clothes, not go through other people stuff
look both ways when cross road
understand symbols for danger, like 🚫, ⚠️, skull n crossbones for poison
follow cross road signs like walk/don’t walk
know how make call in emergency
use money buy small things. big things. use credit debit card. have bank account. have own credit debit card.
keep money n phone save when out
consider price n quality when buy things
travel independently to place been many times before. travel independently to new place.
buy grocery n household stuff when need. pay bill on time.
you see list start with easy, basic-of-the-basic skills. then get more complicated, next skill often depend on n build on previous skills. because it idea from I/DD services n professionals, list tend focus on development & developmental skills, & tend have cognitive focus. but, again, can see these be help for non-I/DD disabilities (& many I/DD people have comorbid physical & neurological disabilities to begin with!).
also because of I/DD focus, may see first few bullet points (or maybe most of the list) as easy, “well duh” skills you not think twice about, skills babies & toddlers learn that have nothing do with teens n adults. because this, you may see adaptive functioning as infantilizing or childish. but, they not infantilizing or childish at all—it reality that I/DD (& other disabilities), it affect babies n toddlers n children, developmentally delayed children who don’t have n struggling with n learning these skills. and, there plenty teens and adults (including older adults) with I/DD, cognitive disabilities, n other disabilities who do not have these skills.
—so, think it really helpful, even much needed, for disability allies & advocates & disabled people (if can) to read through more detail list of adaptive functioning skills. n while do that, remember, there people your age & older than you, who not able do these.
personally find this a lot more helpful than just bADLs & iADLs. because adaptive functioning more accurate include ALL skills need for daily life, from very small to more advanced. it more well rounded, n group in way make sense for own brain. (but that also make idea infinitely harder to explain for my brain for some reason)
next part, want talk about amount of support, & supported independence/modified independence
(edit: part 2 link here)
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novantinuum · 9 months ago
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Pink Onyx AU- An Analysis and Theory Post, Part 1
[Part 1- You are here!] | [Part 2] | [Part 3] | [Part 4] | [Part 5]
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Howdy! Those of you who have followed me for a while have probably been seeing my reblogs of the @pink-onyx-au comic made by @ceephorsshitshow. Well, today I wanna share with you something a little different than my usual SU meta… because today I’m gonna analyze this really cool fan work with the same level of seriousness as I do canon. (Like. Seriously. This first post alone is really, really long. I put most of it under a cut.)
This particular comic is a very special one for me to watch unfold, because it’s evident that a lot of deep care and attention to detail has been poured into its creation. There’s fascinating bits of expanded character development to chew into here, as well as plenty of mysteries and lingering questions for us readers to muse and theorize over. If you follow me for Steven Universe and haven’t read this AU yet I highly recommend you check it out. The most basic pitch is that it explores what a fusion between Steven and Jasper might look like, and does a LOT of deep-diving into the similarities and differences of both of those characters’ psyches.
Here’s the episode masterpost on tumblr.
And you can find it on Tapas, too! 
(Note: For the purposes of these posts, I was given permission by the comic artist to post screenshots of various pages where relevant in this discussion. For each frame used I will list the episode and page number for easy reference. Additionally, this post and all future ones on the topic will contain full spoilers for the comic thus far.)
Now with all that introductory stuff out of the way, here we go!
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So, on the final page of the most recent update, we get one hell of a visual plot bomb for Steven as ol’ Onyx unfuses:
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(Episode 9: Page 22)
He’s now visually expressing remnants of his corruption, where before he was not.
And it’s this mysterious plot point in particular that got me wanting to analyze this comic more deeply in the first place. This is completely new for him in this story. Thus far, he’s never expressed any of these remnants when he’s just himself- not in the way Jasper does. So it made me wonder… how might this shift in his appearance play into the ultimate trajectory of the plot? How does Steven suddenly showcasing corruption scars integrate into the larger story that is being spun here about him and Jasper and how they relate to each other?
Well, there’s a lot of comic details and story lore we need to unpack first before I can take my best theorizer’s stab at this. Let’s dig right in.
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Prelude: The analyst’s treasure is in the speech bubbles
Anyone who’s been a fan of this comic for a while has probably noticed these fun visual details already, but I’m going to take a moment to break down what I believe each speech bubble style signifies for folks who may not have context. It’ll make some of my analysis later a bit easier, too, ahah.
So. Speech bubbles. What kinds do we have here? 
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(Episode 1: Page 6)
Style number one: Solid with black text
This style is standard for non-fused characters, and is also utilized when a fused character is speaking whilst in a state of internal harmony.
Steven is pink and Jasper is orange, of course. Onyx’s speech bubbles are a distinct darker pink, and the main three Crystal Gems get their own colors as well. More minor characters get white bubbles.
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(Episode 1: Page 10)
Style number two: Scribbly pink lettering overlaying black text
Whenever you see this type of speech bubble, it’s a sign that there is some level of internal discord going on within Steven or Onyx that is related to their diamond side. It usually shows up when one of the two is in pink mode, but from what I can tell this is not a solid rule.
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(Episode 2: Page 12)
Style number three: Pink/orange mixed bubbles
This is how we see Onyx talking for a good portion of the early comic. Their speech bubbles are a clean mix of Steven’s pink and Jasper’s orange. And most vitally, the color on the top and the tail signifies which of them is “fronting” at that moment.
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(Episode 3: Page 11)
Style number four: White bubble with solid pink text
So far, this style has only been used to represent dialogue that is being spoken by Steven’s gem half exclusively. Which makes things very interesting, as in Steven’s own remembrances of shattering Jasper on the very first page of the comic, the line “I have been holding back!” is shown in this specific style, instead of the scribbly pink lettering that signifies internal discord.
There is one additional sub-style here- and this is the one moment where we get Onyx’s mixed bubble but WITH the solid pink text. 
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(Episode 3: Page 11)
I believe these two styles pretty much mean the same thing… only, the white/pink text is either viewed within memory or a metaphoric fusion mindscape where we the viewer are actually “seeing” Steven’s instability, and thus can “see” his gem half as a separate entity there. While, in reality, this is an argument Onyx is having with the disparate pieces of themself.
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(Episode 4: Page 9)
Style number five: Pink/orange tye-dye mixed bubbles
When you see that darker shade of pink start dappling into the standard mixed bubbles, this indicates that there are small whispers of Onyx’s true personality beginning to surface, instead of them constantly being wrested back and forth between Steven and Jasper’s conscious control.
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(Episode 4: Page 16)
Style number six: Pink/orange mixed bubbles, but with a darker pink tail
From this page onwards, Onyx’s speech bubbles always have their darker pink shading the tail no matter who is fronting. Sometimes there are little lines of another color etched out of it, and sometimes the tail is solid dark pink. I like to believe that when it’s solid, it means that Onyx is just a little closer to reaching a fully harmonious state than when it’s not.
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(Episode 9: Page 6)
Style number seven: Onyx speech/thought bubbles with a hint of pink/orange underlying
This style seems to signify moments where it’s still Onyx fully in control of themself and their actions/words/thoughts, but they’re taking subtle influence from their components or accessing their memory a bit.
These are all of the distinct styles I have caught so far, but quite honestly, it would not surprise me if I am missing something. All of this to say… pay close attention to the speech bubbles. They can tell you a lot about Onyx’s state of mind throughout the story.
Now with all this established, I’d like to finish off this first post with my first big discussion point.
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Question One: What does Jasper actually know about Steven’s “meltdown,” if anything?
The AU author recently solidified this comic’s placement in the SUF timeline in an ask response, saying that the first episode takes place just a week after Steven’s corruption event.
I’m glad this point was clarified, because it was super vital information which deeply influenced the way I analyzed Steven’s actions and responses in my recent re-read… it means this experience is still super raw for him. This is VERY important and we’ll get back to this in more depth later in future posts. But first, let’s explore what Jasper knows of this event.
The full extent of her knowledge is unclear-
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(Episode 1: Page 6)
In Episode 1, Steven briefly alludes to his corruption as seen above… referring to it as “[his] meltdown.” Notably, Jasper does not seem to ask any questions about this stray comment. This COULD suggest that she knows what happened to him a week prior via hearsay, but given the context of the rest of the scene and the fact that she’s as isolated as she is out here I genuinely wonder if she thinks Steven’s so-described “meltdown” is his shattering of her.
This idea would make a good deal of sense, as she doesn’t start to make any commentary on the topic of corruption at all until they’re actually fused- with Steven bringing it up first.
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(Episode 2: Page 14)
On this page, Steven takes note of Onyx’s very visible spikes (which are Overtly in the same placement as his own when he was corrupted), and initiates the musing upon his own corruption himself.
With the way Jasper phrases her response, the vibe I get is that she somehow gleans a bit of ambient shared knowledge about what happened to him through their fusion.
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(Episode 2: Page 15) 
“That human form you wear must have been hiding your markings.” This quote is SUPER vital. We’ll come back to this later on in this post series, too.
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(Episode 2: Page 15)
It’s clear that Jasper doesn’t REALLY understand what he went through or what caused it, since she then outright mistakes the casual woes and body pains of organic life as corruption. (As seen above.) 
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(Episode 8: Page 4)
But later on, she outright relates to him over their shared experience of past corruption, so she must at least know enough from mere ambient thought-sharing by this point to recognize it happened.  
It’s obvious that she’s barely scratched the surface on fully understanding her fusion partner, though. Neither of them have. It’s gonna take a lot of fusion, comedic mishaps, and genuine conversation to get there. All in good time, I’m sure.
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Please do join me tomorrow at 7am PST for the next post in this series! This has been a blast to write up and muse upon.
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verysanebsdfan · 6 months ago
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𝑲𝒊𝒍𝒍𝒖𝒂 𝒁𝒐𝒍𝒅𝒄𝒌 𝒙 𝒎𝒊𝒔𝒂!𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒅𝒆𝒓
Request: And also one where reader is very similar to misa misa from death note !! She's a famous model w kira as her nen and she joined the Hunter to try and see what else she could do!!
Hii!! This is a story to a second part of this request, I hope you like it.
Also i havent watched Death note since like 3 years ago so it may not be all so accurate, the personality i mean !!
tw: mentions of murder and manipulation, headcanons so if dont like it dont read, okay it feels more like a story but kshssksksj
Its longer than i like and expected
Idk if i understood it correctly, but your nen will be an entity of sorts, Kira, who owns something like a death note but the person doesnt have to die, they can just do whats written in it and then go on with living.
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ꨄ︎ Getting tired of your modeling career was something to be expected, the toxic beauty standarts were very annoying, also having people behind your back constantly was just draining, so you ran away.
ꨄ︎ You being an exceptional child learned nen at a very young age, thanks to your nen teacher, so you figured you could expand your abilities and go to take the Hunter exam, I mean people say it's hard right?
ꨄ︎ Upon arrival you immediately notice some interesting people, so far, mostly number 44, who's aura is very interesting, however its pink!! How cute !!
ꨄ︎ Waiting for some time bored you very much, but more interesting people started appearing like number 301, 99 or 294. Only 301 and 44 appeared to know nen though !!
ꨄ︎ How boring !!
ꨄ︎ You bet you could fight and win against all of those people, using your nen ability of course, you might be wondering why did you choose an ability like this, well it is really simple. In the world of modeling and acting, you need people to like you and do what you want, whether it's to not go through some stuff you don't want to, or to higher your pay, maybe just living comfortably. But from whatever point of view you look at it, it's useful.
ꨄ︎ Waiting for few more hours, and being in a room with other 404 applicants was honestly suffocating. You could basically cut through the tension in the air. Everyone was so tense, guys chill it won't be that hard !!
ꨄ︎ I mean i am sure it is the stares that everyone is giving Tonpa, who is currently trying to poison some newbies, number 403, 404 and 405. How interesting...
ꨄ︎ Being led through a very long tunel was also very interesting, i mean, the people here are dropping like flies, losers.
ꨄ︎ But being approached by a green kid who told you that you look strong was something you didn't expect, you thought you hid your strenght well !!
ꨄ︎ But he was fun to hang out around, so you stayed, getting joined by another kid your age later on, number 99, one of the interesting people here.
ꨄ︎ And that is when your life finally started getting interesting.
(why is the beggining longer than headcanons i usually do ;-;)
ꨄ︎ Exploring the airship with the two boys made it really interesting, especially hearing their bacstories, why is everyone here fatherless or has a toxic family...including you, the stare you got from Killua when you told them your parents were assassinated was wild...He might know, you figured, but of course it couldn't have been him, he is not strong enough for that yet...
ꨄ︎ Then getting separated from them in the third and partially fourth phase too was very boring, it was so quiet without them...
ꨄ︎ After you passed the exam, and went to save Killua from his crazy family, you were all together again, and training to get stronger. Mostly on the punching bags in the Heavens Arena...uhhh Humans
ꨄ︎ Unfortunately many people have recognized you, since you were a model and acted in a lot of movies, how annoying, so Killua started being protective over you, subconsciously though. (too ooc?)
ꨄ︎ Months after that, while you guys were on the Whale Island, Killua decided to tag with you and Gon while he finds his dad and you find the person who murdered your parents. Sweet.
ꨄ︎ During the Yorknew arc having been recognized by even more people was so annoying, i mean you couldn't even partake in Kurapikas plan !! At least not like Gon and Killua, what a shame...you could just write some stuff and the boss of the Phantom Troupe could come to you !!
ꨄ︎ Either way, surviving all this while slowly catching feelings was very good. As you got into the game, Greed island and later reunited with your nen teacher, Bisky, everything seemed ideal, at least until you had to leave, it was so fun here !! No anoying 12 year olds fawning over Killua when you walked on the street, it is wrong to kill children after all, no perverted men eyeing you up and down- that was a lie, but still... it is wrong to kill people in general but the latter was fun
ꨄ︎ And now you had to fight some stupid BUGS ?! no.
ꨄ︎ Of course you will, you cannot just leave them, i mean the only thing stopping you are your feelings, but that doesn't change anything...
ꨄ︎ Of course after all this mess you were brought into, you weren't able to confess either. It hurts. It really does, but Gon...he is in bad condition so you gotta set the priorities straight.
ꨄ︎ In the end, Gon met his father, and you met Alluka, how cute, blurting out that you love her brother wasn't so cute, but hey, she supports you !!
ꨄ︎ Telling Killua that you love him right before leaving to kill his older brother who killed your parents wasnt cute either. But hey who cares right ?? We only live once, and you want to kill Illumi Zoldyck you might not live much longer, what do you have to lose.
ꨄ︎ Him trying to stop you wasn't very flashy either...
ꨄ︎ But you cannot leave him now can you ?? Illumi will wait, after all, who can kill him if not you ??
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I don't like it a a a a
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rei-ismyname · 2 months ago
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Giant-Size Wolverine retcons
Marvel, famously, loves having Wolverine as a cash cow, to the point it has its own entry on TVTropes. This manifests as a LOT of Wolverine #1s being released as well as the clawed-one showing up on deceitful covers and guest starring anywhere they think they can justify it. Less common (but still frequent enough) is Forrest Gumping him into historical events or rewriting events he was there for as a character study cynical profiteering.
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Sunfire is still great - 'banal prattle.' You tell em
This is the latter, foregrounding Logan in Giant-Size X-Men to the detriment of almost everyone else. In the original Giant-Size X-Men, Logan sits at the back and says very little. Here he takes charge and uncharacteristically identifies that the new squad lacks synergy and a sense of teamwork. He opens with 'it's your first day as new X-Men, people. I'm going to show you how this works.' Uh, isn't it yours too? Did I miss a meeting?
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Poor Kurt. Eddie Munster is just mean
So he starts a fight, telling everyone there's one too many people. Colossus objects for sexist reasons (not objection to killing lol) and Storm puts him in his place. Sunfire and Thunderbird both have little patience for white people or bullshit and Logan catches a fireball...
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... and an elbow to the spine. Ororo goes off with electricity and Kurt just doesn't want to die, so he BAMFs behind her and starts choking Storm from behind. Logan turns the tables on Proudstar and drops a one liner about metal conducting electricity. I'm no wizard, but I don't think it interacts well with human flesh, either, especially if they have a metal skeleton. Obviously he takes everyone down and has the biggest dick in the world.
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Yeah... about Thunderbird.
Banshee bursts in and reveals Logan is acting against Chuck's wishes. I'm generally in favour of that but I'm not fond of its narrative function at all . He has an open shirt, a toothpick in his mouth, and looks oh so pleased with himself. I'm not some reactionary purist who worships the sacred texts and pushes back against retcons. Quite the opposite, in fact. Additive retcons are fantastic when done well - Magneto being a Holocaust survivor stands as one of the best in fiction.
I don't think that's what this is, or at least it's not successful. In Giant-Size X-Men #1 there's no time for this pissing contest because all the other X-Men need rescuing ASAP. Chuck rounds them up and handles the basics then defers to Cyclops, the field leader of many years. They leave immediately and nobody is getting along. Sunfire leaves then comes back. Scott is all business because he's worried about the folks on Krakoa and there just isn't time. If they respect the chain of command in the field that's good enough. Team building can come later.
What's achieved here besides sidelining everyone to centre edge lord Logan? Not a lot, in fact I'd say it minimises Logan's character arc most of all. He was a grumpy loner who eventually learnt to trust people, came to see the X-Men as family, and committed to the team. Logan knowing half this stuff already and having this degree of social confidence just undermines that, as well as Cyclops' leadership of this ragged band. Not sure what Whedon was thinking tbh.
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That wasn't the end of it, though. Interestingly, this is Chris Claremont writing here. Again, I'm not a purist and I'm under no illusion about CC's later X-Men work. He'd worked with these characters for a long time but Giant-Size was Wein & Cockrum, so he's choosing to expand the origin story. Thunderbird is still alive so they're still pretty new here. Anyway, Cyke is running a danger room training session - Storm vs Thunderbird.
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After some kinda bizarre ethnic posturing Ororo is pinned.
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Unsurprisingly, she starts to wig out due to her claustrophobia. Logan picks it up with his advanced senses and jumps in. Scott owns the mistake and ends the training session.
I find it hard to buy Scott would feel like his authority was undermined here. Logan is being as paternalistic as ever, but Scott blames himself for failures. He doesn't externalise it and he understands he's not leading children anymore. It's Chuck who has difficulty adapting to this specific dynamic. Also, Logan had zero interest in leadership. None. It was Ororo who was a friendly rival to him and ended up succeeding him as leader. He also didn't especially trust or show respect to anyone. Everyone else has problems but the focus and Charles' confidant is Wolverine. That's silly as hell.
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Okay, private insecurity and self-doubt, totally Scott's thing. I'm just going to ignore literally everything else that's happening, especially 'damaged goods.' Ugh.
The second story came out in 2005 in Giant-Size X-Men #4. Aside from the Wolverine oversaturation and other weird shit I've pointed out, I feel like there was a concerted effort to bring certain characters closer to their FOX movies counterparts. Chuck started looking like Captain Picard, Scott was Flanderised a bit but moreso deemphasized, and Logan started to look and act more like Hugh Jackman. He joined more teams, regressed in social growth yet became way more important to the X-Men. More important to the very fabric of the Marvel universe.
I get why it happened (capitalism) but I think it was executed poorly in many instances. These are particularly egregious, but Wolverine was and is fucking everywhere - under many different writers. There's always going to be a sense of asynchronicity under those circumstances. I've actually come to really dislike Logan lately. Obviously it's an issue for most long running characters, but his particular regression to the mean every new book bores the shit out of me. He's not growing at all, even when everything around him changes. On Krakoa he was mostly just gruff and stabby, monologuing about hell, beer, time, nature, poison, and being the best he is at what he does. 🙄
He'll usually find someone worse than him to point at and call out with transparency he never applies to himself. Magneto, Scott, Beast, Scott, Chuck, teenage Scott, Sabertooth, Omega Red, Beast, Chuck, and Scott again. Someone please deconstruct this guy! Send him to therapy, break him down to his base components and examine them. Fuck his moping or running naked with wolves or fighting the W-digo - give him a messy boyfriend and force him to get the fuck over Jean Grey.
He can still fight ninjas and mentor troubled teens and sulk about whatever his latest thing is - just have him grow! His books will still sell, people will still cheer when he says bub, and snikt isn't going away. Hire Al Ewing to do it like he did with Loki, Hulk, Magneto, Sunspot, etc. Some of those changes actually stuck and the characters are more popular than ever! Is that too much to hope for? Almost certainly, but one can hope.
Boy I got carried away on that outro, lol.
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nondelphic · 5 months ago
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Hiiii! May I ask for some advice? After a really long time of not writing fan fic, I recently started getting back into it but have been struggling… So I started using a little bit of the chat.ai help me but I feel icky about it but at the same time, I’m constantly struggling with writers block and being burnt out… What should I do?
i'm actually really glad you asked this because i've been preparing a post about using ai responsibly for writing, might just post it here lol:
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tldr: this post isn’t about using ai to generate your story for you. it’s about how to utilize ai to enhance your writing process while still keeping your voice and creativity at the forefront.
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the rise of ai has stirred up a lot of talk about ethics, originality, and how much tech should really be in our creative space. as writers, our work is highly personal, it's a reflection of our thoughts and experiences. so it’s totally normal to feel icky about bringing ai into the mix.
here's a hot take, though: ai isn’t here to replace your creativity. it doesn’t get the deep, emotional layers that only a human writer can bring. sure, ai can generate text, but it doesn’t really understand what it’s saying. that’s where some of the ethical concerns come in—if we rely too much on ai, we risk losing that personal touch that makes our stories resonate.
on the flip side, when used thoughtfully, ai can actually boost your creative process instead of taking away from it. think of ai as a helpful assistant, it can take care of some of the boring, tedious stuff, giving you more space to focus on what really matters: writing your story, your way. it’s not about letting ai take over, but using it to support and streamline your process.
this is not a post about my experience with ai, but i have to say, that as someone with adhd, ai has been a game-changer for me. it helps me keep track of my ideas, organize my thoughts, and even manage my writing schedule when my brain is all over the place. it's like having an extra set of hands (or, you know, a brain) to help me stay on top of everything, so i can focus more on the actual creative part of writing.
the key is to make sure ai never overshadows your original voice or creative vision. ai should be a tool that helps you bring your ideas to life, not something that writes the story for you. if you’re curious about how to use ai in your writing process while keeping your authenticity intact, here are some tips to do it responsibly:
brainstorming ideas: when you’re stuck on a plot point or character development, use ai to generate prompts or ideas. these can spark new directions for your story, giving you fresh perspectives to explore.
dialogue experimentation: if your dialogue feels flat, try using ai to generate conversation snippets based on your characters. it might not be perfect, but it can give you new ideas for how your characters might interact.
synonym suggestions: tired of using the same word over and over? ai can help you find synonyms or alternative phrases, keeping your writing fresh without losing your voice. i've found this very helpful as an ESL writer!
outline generation: got a rough idea but need a structure? use ai to create a basic outline, then tweak it to fit your vision. it’s a great way to get a head start on organizing your story.
character backstories: use ai to brainstorm character traits, backstories, or names. you can take these ideas and expand on them, adding the depth and personality that only you can create.
quick research assistance: save time by using ai for quick facts or historical details. it lets you focus more on storytelling and less on getting bogged down in research. (disclaimer: never 100% trust what an ai generates, fact check everything). i've found it a great starting point if i have a very niche question for my research.
editing help: use ai for basic grammar and spelling checks to speed up your editing process. just remember, it’s your judgment that will shape the final draft, not the ai’s.
plot analysis: use ai to scan your draft for plot holes or inconsistencies. it can help identify gaps in logic or missing links in your storyline, giving you a clearer idea of where to tighten things up.
tone consistency: ai can help you maintain a consistent tone throughout your story by analyzing your draft and suggesting adjustments where the tone shifts unexpectedly.
pacing adjustments: ai can review the pacing of your story, highlighting sections that may be too slow or too rushed, helping you find the right balance.
character consistency: track your characters' traits, behaviors, and dialogue to ensure they remain consistent throughout the story, preventing out-of-character moments.
theme reinforcement: use ai to analyze how well your themes are being conveyed across the narrative, suggesting areas where you might strengthen or clarify your message.
draft comparison: if you’ve gone through multiple drafts, ai can compare them to highlight what’s changed, what’s been improved, and what might have been lost in the revisions.
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to answer your question more personally, i think we can never please everyone, and ai will continue to be developed and get better and better. i understand feeling icky about using ai, and you might get judged for it, but do what you need to do, tbh.
i have found myself in a writing routine where i use most of the advice above in my writing process. i write most of my work myself, but i use ai as a tool to bounce ideas off of, and it's been a life changer. i managed to finish my first novel draft with the help of ai, and it fuelled my creativity to have "someone" (or rather something) to feed my ideas and help them identify what i could do better.
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artist-heart83 · 1 month ago
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You know what? Today I wake up to yap about my smg4 fanfics, about the process and stuff, so get ready guys, prepare to read a lot.
SMG4 Fanfics made by Lilac_Heart, aka, me but with a different username
Disclaimer. They’re 8 fics at moment, but only gonna talk about 6, mostly because there is nothing special to say about the first one and the new gen fic is still uploading, so it’s not finished.
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I care about you (BoMG1)
The idea came out when I was brainstorming comics ideas, but I only got this funny drawing:
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Then I got an idea: “a comic where Bob got badly injured and One heal his scars, that’s sound like an amazing idea”.
Buuuut, I was brainstorming the ideas of how the comic should go A particular idea made me realize this work better as a fic, I say: “fuck the comic, let’s make a fanfic”.
Can’t remember if the idea that Bob could get badly injured in one of his business was based in Guns Don’t Scare Me from @briandraws, but I do know I have a few bomg1 fics from him as reference for descriptions and other stuff once I did the english translation.
Bob bring back the nickname of “pretty eyes” to One, is a reference to Glowing Eyes.
Scrap content that I found in the spanish draft!
Instead of Smg2 going by himself to find some pills for Bob, originally it was Smg1 who sent him.
A lot of scenes were extended: Bob and Smg2 conversation about the blades; the “confession” of smg1, which was thanks to Two; Two constantly teasing the couple; the ending.
An actual conversation about if the date would happen, which was between Two and Bob.
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Human touch (Marware)
Marware but they just start their relationship. Also, Puzzles touch starved.
Original title from the spanish draft: “Besos para ti” translated into “Kisses for you”, which the original idea was Mario kissing Puzzles.
Just because I really need more fanfics where they are just being soft, and when Mario kisses Puzzles and hugs him ough… So that was the main idea, but I need a “how?” And “why?” Then boom, touch-starved Puzzles.
Obviously I made this fic way before we know about Puzzles family, so let’s pretend when Puzzles have affection of his dad was when he was very young, alright?
The idea of Puzzles not having a hug or any kind of affection since long time ago was based on a prompt I found on Pinterest, and I have a bunch of tabs of how to write a touch-starved person.
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Desiring to become a human, so I can kiss you properly (Marware)
Before anyone ask. Yes, me putting the HDR Trio was necessary for many plot reasons as you can see in the fic.
Also, first time I straight went to doing the english version instead of doing a spanish version to then translate it. Huge thanks to my uncle who give a huge boost of confidence when he told I managed english perfectly hehehe.
This fic was a pure excuse just to finally write them making out, so imagine my surprise when people love it and one of my favorite artists made fanart and I swear to god every time I remember it, it feels like this:
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Also hi @lizaluvsthis
The illusion disks are from fnaf and I had to look up for any info that could explain to me how they work, just understand the basics and then I did whatever I want because I couldn’t understand it correctly.
Also, I don’t if it’s just me, but I feel the fight was forced for some reason, is either that or I just feel like this every time I reread the fic:
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The Dilemma (BadgeHunter)
The biggest one at the moment, and this one have a lot to unpack here.
Original idea from @ominus-potato, which I expand and change a few things:
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List of the headcanons that were used for the story:
Mirror headcanon, come from this post. Huge thanks for @izbiz12 for coming with this one.
Hal Jr. having a body comes from the idea of @blu193, which was the high inspiration to him give him a body.
Hal overworking himself is a common thing I found out scrolling in both Blu and Bear profiles, bring by IzBiz.
With “fresh scars” I really wanna implied that Shroomy already have some previous scars, another call back to Blu because she was the one who have the idea of Shroomy having scars for the bear encounter.
Junior being in scouts is actually an idea from Potato, which cool idea.
In the scene when Shroomy and Hal went to the office of the police officer, there was meant to be a scene where Shroomy looked at the picture frame that was on the desk, which was a family picture of Hal, his wife, and Junior. Cut off for unknown reasons.
Shroomy, Hal, Karen, Swag, and Chris being friends is a personal headcanon of mine. Also, Hal leaving Junior to Karen to take care of him is my favorite headcanon, and Brian and I share the same brain cell lmao.
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Cozy and soft (BoMG1)
Purely made this because I was craving for BoMG1 content, thanks to this drawing I got inspiration as well, Brian marware fic which has the same concept.
It’s the shortest fic I made after a while, which was the main idea, didn’t want to do something long.
A few references to Glowing Eyes (again):
One got scared by Bob eyes.
Bob getting a copy of the apartment keys.
The mention of a broken window.
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Nightmare and Comfort (BadgeHunter)
Idea that I got when I wake up at 7 am. Which the general idea was Hal comforting Shroomy about a nightmare/memory from his past.
This is time I used @bear-boi-5 headcanon about how the aftermath of the bite was. Nothing like Shroomy told in Mario Babies, of course.
I decided that Anti would have control of the body, mostly because he was the most affected of the accident for obvious reasons, also I love Anti, so I would used this opportunity.
I have to avoid mentioning any alcoholic drinks name, because I drink but I have zero idea what are they, soooo… yeah only beer was mentioned because is the one with less alcohol by volume, at least what this post say.
Anti laughing when he gets drunk, is actually based in one of the effects that happened to me.
The dynamic between Anti and Hal is quite complicated, considering the personality of Anti. They tolerate each other and they have to resolved their differences because of Shroomy and Hal hanging out more.
Important to say that after this, Anti would start having feeling for Hal after he understand what Shroomy see on him. Would this cause problems? Not sure, but until further notice, probably yes :)
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Hahaha I just love yap about my fics and all the process behind them, is super fun and I actually wanna share this with all of you because you guys are cool and also there is a inspiration behind those stories.
Now, if you excuse I have to get back to do some stuff :]
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asleepinawell · 4 months ago
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I've seen a lot of back and forth about the latest chapter of firmament and the conclusion I've come to is that people who have a basic knowledge of some specific parts of fl lore are more likely to have enjoyed it. the problem here being that fl rarely outright tells you big lore things but instead tries to give you bits to piece together, some of which are in ES or the sunless games. and then the lore continues to build on top of that lore. and you end up at lore point 5 where you don't know anything about lore points 1-4 and are hopelessly lost
you then have people who haven't played the other games or gone through the wiki or reddit not having a solid foundation to start from in terms of understanding not only what is going on but why it's important and what the implications of it are
i rambled about it before once somewhere but i think fl would greatly benefit from having a codex that filled in as you went through the main story. something that's an optional storylet at your lodgings with a disclaimer that you can safely skip it if you prefer not to use it. the codex would only give you very basic info (the great chain 101) and could even say things like hey if this lore point seems cool check out the sunless games or these specific ES for more story about it (obligatory statement that this is just wishful thinking and i know the devs are very busy and don't have time to implement everything)
i really enjoyed the latest chapter of firmament, but I've also done the wiki deep dive AND saw a spoiler about what certain things were before i hit the end of the chapter (and to be fair to the people claiming the writing was hard to follow, I'm not sure i would have put the pieces together on my own there) and it greatly increased my enjoyment of the big final conflict in it because i had some grasp of the stakes and the players involved. i don't know what will come of the decision i made (which is good!), but i do understand what decision i made. that's the key bit to me
like i was saying in the first paragraph, it feels like some of the frustration with firmament is partly coming from the fact that fl is a game that rarely outright explains big lore points and rather expects you to suss them out as you play (which probably worked great way back at the start), and that as the game has gotten bigger and longer, people are going to spend less time delving into things from the early game as they rush to get to the cool later stuff and get increasingly more confused when the game bases story off those lore points later on if they haven't stopped to research them. the more the end game lore expands, the more this becomes true. thus my codex idea, a 'here's what you need to know in order to be immersed in the next layer of mystery' guide
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comicaurora · 1 year ago
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Hi! I'm a big fan of your work. Thanks for taking the time to read this.
 I'm an artist who's been working on a story with a close writer friend of mine since the pandemic. Together we've outlined a webcomic that we're both very excited and passionate about, and it's been a great experience. Late last year we started actually making the comic itself, and a little less than a year later we're 37 pages in. 
I wanted to ask you how you're able to somehow push out three high-quality pages every week? I work full time, and most days I'm too drained when I get home to immediately start working on the comic. Plus all the other stuff I have to take care of to be a functional adult. I'm not even that slow of an artist, but it just doesn't feel like there's enough hours in the day. At my current rate, I get about one page done per week. I'm 24 now, I don't want to be in my 50s still working on this story. Do you have any advice for increasing your output as an artist without completely overwhelming yourself?
Sorry for the wordy question. There's a reason I'm the artist and not the writer.
Oof, that's a tough one!
I mean, to start with, a fundamental difference in our schedules is I don't work full time. Everything I do for a living is very self-scheduled, and I can work far in advance to meet the deadlines I set and take entire days or even weeks off when I need them. Back when I was in college, dealing with outside schedule requirements, I definitely wouldn't have been able to keep up everything I do now.
That said, there are still methods to streamline and speed up the artistic process. I don't know the details of your methods, but I'd recommend sketching and storyboarding larger numbers of pages at a time and finalizing them at a more leisurely pace, rather than taking one page of comic at a time from a total blank to a finalized, polished version. The storyboard can be very basic; many of mine are little more than color-coded scribbles showing the characters and text boxes showing their dialogue. It's just enough to be readable to me so I can go in and edit it for pacing and timing, but it looks like absolute chickenscratch to anyone else. On the production side, that makes it much more feasible for me to work on multiple pages at a time, since I don't need to finish polishing one page before I can start boarding another.
This method can be expanded into a bit of a factory production line, allowing for a two-pronged approach of progress - one for finalizing older pages, the other farther along for storyboarding new ones. And once you have multiple pages done at a time, you can schedule them well in advance, which takes a lot of deadline pressure off and can make it less mentally daunting to work on. This also diversifies the space of things you can work on, depending on your headspace and energy levels - which is a useful option to have when you're wiped from outside responsibilities.
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frogpols · 2 months ago
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You talked about many AUs, but i would like to know if you have a main idea you think about how kiraboss met for the first time, is kinda hard for me to think about it without putting a lot of casuality on it
Also this is bassist kira and drummer boss!
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LEL That is a brilliant gif, litcherally them, thankies for sharing this peak.
And that is a brilliant thingie to talk about. I may go on about AUs just because there are many ways (whether fairly believable and canon-compliant, or just silly and casual) that Kira and Diavolo could meet, and a bunch of various ideas in the way they'd actually interact in said meeting (or beyond). But of course, that's a given for ships involving characters that are never shown to have met. I do find that huge amount of room for creativity very intriguing.
Anyway, if I were to put something at the top of what seems believable (ie, what'd seem like a natural extension to the source material, less random), it'd be post-canon Kiraboss. In their latest depictions (I'm fairly confident DMQ is canon), they're both shown to be in a very peculiar purgatory state that no other named character from what I recall is fated to, let alone among the main antagonists (they just float to the sky (die), be entirely erased, or literally stay alive on the same existential plane forever). Given that unique inherent connection between those two major characters specifically, I thus think it wouldn't be super random/casual(?) for them to... well, be connected or perhaps form some deep kinship in a hypothetical JoJo spinoff. There'd be purpose in a story like that since there'd be the opportunity to expand upon the ghost/afterlife logic in the overall JoJoverse. (Not to mention kira and boss redemption if we may sympathize with them...)
Now, if we were to go earlier so that we can have the original Kira and Diavolo as Kiraboss, they can very well meet pre-canon, maybe even be close, and their correspondence (casual or deep) wouldn't have to interrupt their main stories. But while I don't believe anything is stopping Diavolo from going to Morioh through Doppio (since I'd reckon they can travel pretty easy with mafia swag and moola), I don't know what reason he could have to do so. A super flimsy stretch I could make is Tonio Trussardi/Antonio Volpe since he is adjacent to Passione's Massimo from PHF, but obviously PHF is not very canon and you'd still have a lot of stuff to fill out to justify Diavolo's connection to Morioh, all to potentially encounter Kira. In other words, pre-canon Kiraboss may be more random than post-canon Kiraboss, at least story-wise and not just for their given (huge) list of similarities. Buuuut at least it is possible. It's a whole other thing on whether or not they'd get along. Since they have to be alive for their story to happen, they'd have to not kill each other in the pre-canon meeting instance. This is where an old fanfiction idea I had a long while back comes in...
Uhhh, I guess briefly(?) going over that (since I reckon it's as close to what my 'main idea' for what feasible kiraboss looks like), the fic was going to be called "Yoshikage Kira and Diavolo's Bizarre Backstory" and combine both of the above ideas in this post: pre-canon and post-canon Kiraboss (with focus on pre-canon). The idea for the fic would be that they both meet, develop feelings (super slow burn style), and heavily influence each other to act the way they do in canon (so that there would be a convenient difference in their behaviors between when they initially met each other vs. when they'd meet another stand user in the future separately). Basic plot was: They meet in Morioh (Kira likes Doppio/Diavolo's hands) -> Stand battle (whole thing with Diavolo initially struggling with Kira's stupid SHA, but he learns quickly) -> They form hesitant truce (Diavolo thinks Kira could be very useful, and Kira surrenders) -> They are very stubborn (Kira doesn't want to join mob, and uhh somehow Diavolo's convinced he needs him LUL) -> Insert very ambiguous kind of tsundere/tsundere relationship here, perhaps they have sex (they wouldn't be very good at it) -> Diavolo goes back to Italy and Kira never snitches -> Ensue canon and they die -> They meet again not remembering each other at all and post-canon kiraboss begins. I know I have the ability to sit down and write a proper fanfic ....but I don't feel like it as of now, just as I am with projects. :d Hell, I started that Kosaku-Doppio swap fanfiction (idea I put some time ago on this blog), and plots completely written out, but only at barely two chaps, 4.7k words. Oh yeah, I believe that old animatic I just posted on this blog too was meant to reference the fanfic concept where Kira's just yearning after Diavolo's left.
Sooo yeaah, hehe
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tadpolesonalgae · 4 months ago
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have a feeling that cbmthy azriel's constant insistence of "i don't love you and you don't deserve my affection" (whether or not he means it in a malicious way) is gonna come around and bite him in the ass when he starts to develop feelings for reader (which i assume is bound to happen if we're getting an az x reader ending)..... 😃😃
he's basically constantly reinforcing into her that he'll Never fucking be romantically interested in her (and he keeps doing it unprompted too 😭) to the point that when we start to get around the romance arc of these two, it's gonna be near impossible for reader to believe he's attracted to her and rightfully so 💀
he brings it up constantly to the point of like,,, 🤨 it's kinda sus, yk? it's one thing if reader kept coming on to him and was acting like she was entitled to his feelings but?? 90% of cbmthy she's literally scared of even just talking to him in case he can Tell how easily flustered she gets around him????????? if reader so much as BREATHES in his direction bro is like "girl it's not gonna happen 🙄" um. no one asked??????????????????? maybe YOU'RE the one who's actually obsessed with the concept of being romantically involved with reader since it seems like the only thing on ur mind when ur talking to her??????? 🤨🤨🤨🤨 tf is up with that, az???????????? 👀👀
'have a feeling that cbmthy azriel's constant insistence of "i don't love you and you don't deserve my affection" (whether or not he means it in a malicious way) is gonna come around and bite him in the ass when he starts to develop feelings for reader'
Really? What makes you think that? 🤭
(Of course it's going to bite him in the ass and enjoy itself while doing so. What would be the point of reader internalising all the stuff Azzie said at the beginning if he doesn't get to hear those words repeated back to him? He needs to have a moment of 'oh. I did this.')
'to the point that when we start to get around the romance arc of these two, it's gonna be near impossible for reader to believe he's attracted to her and rightfully so 💀'
Talking about their romance feels forbidden at this point in the story. Like, it's not a spoiler because obviously it's going to happen but like...
I can say though I'm so excited for their trip to Summer and Autumn!! Summer more the vibes but Autumn more for the plot if that makes sense? I mean, we haven't been to the Summer Court in cbmthy so far so I'm excited at getting to write a new environment and stretch my imagination for all these new creatures reader will inevitably be wanting to chat Azriel's ear off about <3
But I think even if I hadn't said I'm excited for Autumn for the plot, you probably would have been able to guess stuff is going to go down one those two reach the Autumn Court :)
'he brings it up constantly to the point of like,,, 🤨 it's kinda sus, yk?'
Right? Like, it's weird. 😭
Though that will be expanded on hopefully a tiny bit more during Summer's section? I'm hoping to start sprinkling in a few more paragraphs every now and then from Az's perspective? I doubt they'll be very long sections but it'll be nice to get to see some stuff through Az's eyes - particularly on stuff concerning reader? Also I think it'll be fun getting to see Azriel seeing reader out and about in the forest where she'll have so much more specified knowledge! 🧡💛
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thegreatyin · 1 year ago
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Elaborate on your beef with Typhon
it is Extremely Petty and Extremely Personal
tldr, it's a combination of a bunch of factors:
i do not enjoy what ive seen of her kit and think it's actively boring. we do not need a 27th bosskiller. we peaked with ebenholz. we can be more creative than that. why does she need to deal so much damage and track things across the map. who let her do that
i do not enjoy her design, like, from a personal standpoint. this is just extremely messy and cluttered and bad and does not feel at all like an arknights character. this feels like if you described how ak characters dressed to a blind man and told him to go off designing one. why are her thighs out. why does she have a giant incomprehensible bow. why do her horns look like headbands instead of actual horns which exist in this world completely normally and without issue. she's just a visual mess and i cannot tell apart any part of her aside from blurring together in my mind as visual garbage. she feels like she's trying too hard to appeal to a crowd i am very much neither a part of nor member of
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especially extremely pettily: i do not like lm7's arknights stuff in general. they're clearly very talented and this isn't meant to be a jab at them as a person but i really don't think they make any of their operators work. they all have the exact same moe blushing squinted face and it's both extremely jarring and extremely hard to take seriously. why is ceobe giving me bedroom eyes when she's basically an escaped looney toons character. i, personally, Do Not Enjoy It and it's an entirely subjective opinion that stops me from liking typhon even more than i already kinda didn't
arguably equally as petty, i don't like that she's basically the star of is4 in the same vein as phantom and mizuki are for their own modes? there's tons of already existing characters you could make a sami arc around. mallagan is literally right there. why do we have to get a new purple girl just for this when there's tons of operators with stories just waiting to be expanded on. im expecting some kind of explanation for this in her event when it hits global but for now it's just really bothersome to me
finally, most petty of all: her skin fucking sucks im sorry
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this is mid as hell. worse than mid. this just sucks. this is the exact same visual noise i feel when i look at her base art but in full force. it's bad and very samey palette-wise when you compare it to her og form and i don't like it and i already don't like typhon so that bias certainly doesn't help. i don't like a perfectly good opportunity for mallagan to get some much-needed love with an l2d upset by some big breasted purple girl who released like yesterday comparative to is4 going live
TLDR; i think typhon is badly designed and boring and i do not like her or her weirdly emphasized tits and moe eyes. that's not to say either are strictly bad, they just do not appeal to me whatsoever and i will be skipping her banner unless her event story COMPLETELY wows me with her lore
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ktownshizzle · 25 days ago
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Can you tell me your writing process ? Do you outline ? Braindump? Write on your notes app? Just curious. Also your fav authors and comfort books. I always start something but never finish. So many unedited drafts of ideas but very little fruition.
Hi lovely anon! Sorry it took me a while to respond to this.
First of all, I hope you get the chance to write and find the inspiration to share your ideas to the world. I for sure would want to read them!
My writing process under the cut, in case anyone else is interested.
On writing
While I’ve been trained to write fast from news and sports writing in my previous jobs, when it comes to fic writing, I am not methodical at all, I fear.
Tldr; when I’m inspired, I write; when I’m tired, I stop.
I rarely force myself to write unless I am at the final editing stage and just want to finish it already. But generally I need to be in the correct head space to write. This might go against some of the usual advice, but since this is not my full-time job, it's important that I dictate my own pace and keep it fun, otherwise, I might stop.
So the way this goes is whenever I get inspired with something… I write. Honestly you guys sending me Yoongi photos or like wanting to talk about random Yoongi moments or theories have given me heapssss of inspiration! You have no idea! So keep sending those asks! 🤗
Basically once I have the big idea for the story, I try to do a general outline: bullet points of the characters, key moments, specific dialogue I want, etc. Then when I get inspired again, it’s a literal brain dump, typos and all, using Google Docs. I used to only be able to write using my laptop, but now I trained my brain to write using my phone, too, and this has increased my output because now I can write anywhere especially when I'm feeling insane.
Then I edit and expand the scenes. Finally, I work on the key moments that need to pack a punch which is the lead, the main conflict or the main tension point (first kisses are my fave!) and the ending. If there’s a smut scene, I write it last.
On managing your WIPS / drafts
Honestly, my WIP list is insane. I try not to let it bother me so much. but sometimes it pokes me like I'm a bear.
I do have a couple on ongoing/multi-chapter stuff so I pick up on what MC I feel like being at the moment then go from there. Or which MC y'all are really vibing with based on interactions and see if we can push the story further along from there.
Since you mentioned you have lots of unedited drafts, I suggest pick the best one you like and really envision that story and how you want it to go. You can even do a moodboard like what I add in my stories because it really helps set the tone and the vibe for me.
Oh, I wanna add that watching the boys on background like an MV or Run or whatever content also helps me. Instant serotonin boost.
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I am sorry if this so long. I hope this answered your q. I am not sure if my methods will be of help to you, but I pray that inspiration strikes for you soonest! My DMs are open if you wanna brainstorm! :)
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wriheart · 6 months ago
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Raven Queen, Apple White, and A Bit About Magic
Welcome to part two of my Ever After High rewrite ideas. These next few posts will focus on expanding the world building and introducing a bit about the characters that inhabit it.
Raven Queen has always been my favorite character. She’s just so relatable and I like what she stands for. Her, Apple, and Darling are going to be the main characters of this unwritten rewrite. Other characters will still have a big role and will be focused on with their own chapters (like Cerise and Lizzie), because I think that every character at Ever After High has an important story to tell. They each have a piece of the puzzle to explaining the unfair system that Grim has created.
If you missed part one, I talked about the world building so if you haven’t read it, it will help you understand this post.
In the world of Ever After, the magic system is presented to most as very cut and dry. The only people who can use magic are those involved in a fairytale. Maybe once upon a time there were other magic users, but not anymore. There are two types of magic: light and dark, and in order to master one’s magical abilities, they must choose one side to fill their heart.
Light magic is fueled by goodness. The desire to help those around you, to change the world for the better, to make people happy, to simply use magic: that is the core of light magic. Dark magic is fueled by evil. The desire to harm others, to ruin the world, to accomplish things that are otherwise unnatural: that is the core of dark magic.
While light magic is meant to help the hero grow and change while overcoming obstacles, dark magic is always meant to teach a cruel lesson.
You can not use either side effectively unless you have pledged yourself to one side. Even basic spells that fall outside of light and dark, such as teleportation and levitation can become impossible to master without fully accepting light or dark magic into your heart.
As you can probably guess, Raven Queen has not let either type of magic fully into her heart. On the one hand, she can’t bear the thought of using her magic to harm those around her. But if she accepted light magic, there would truly be no going back. Would she even be able to accept light magic if choosing her own destiny is as selfish and cruel as everyone thinks it is?
Now, in the original Snow White (at least, the version that I have a copy of) the Evil Queen dies when she goes to Snow White’s wedding. She is forced to wear red-hot shoes and dance herself to death. In my version, she shows up to the wedding and Prince Charming stabs her in the heart and keeps it in a box as payback for what she was going to do to his wife. (I’m also including that the evil queen tries to kill snow three times before it succeeds: lace, comb, apple.)
Fun stuff.
Growing up, Raven Queen has always had the feeling that she’s being watched. Even when her noble caretakers aren’t around, she feels some sort of presence all around her.
The presence? Her fairytale mother.
Raven’s mother is named Opal Queen (black opals look cool, ok?), but almost nobody remembers her real name. After all, she became one of the most infamous Evil Queens in all of Ever After history.
I really want Opal to be an anti-hero/gray character. Yes, she really leans into her role as Evil Queen, but she has a gut feeling that destinies are a load of bs. She spends a lot of her time investigating, researching, etc. but it isn’t until Alice comes to her that she finally finds herself with a lead. (We’ll come back to Alice in her own post).
The Evil Queen has many bad and good intentions. For example, she wants to free people from Grim’s control because she recognises the cycle of violence, pain, fear and mistrust he has cultivated to keep himself in control. However, she is more than willing to hurt and manipulate anyone she needs to in order to achieve her own goals.
At the end of the day, she is able to fake her own death. When she’s stabbed in the heart, her spell takes effect, and she’s banished to the mirror dimension. In the mirror dimension, one isn’t really alive or dead, so she doesn’t really need a heart to survive.
Anyway, Raven grows up under the nobel family with her mother constantly watching her. Anyone in the mirror dimension can easily see out of any mirror, but only enchanted mirrors are able to see into the mirror dimension. And enchanted mirrors are few and far between since they are hard to create. I’m thinking that later in the story, Raven is able to create an enchanted mirror to contact her mother, but her mother has a grand plan, so she isn’t willing to give Raven all of the answers so easily.
Would you guys be mad if I renamed Apple? Cuz that would be a little sad for me lol. Apple is such a cute name but I never really liked it. Who names their kid after the thing that almost killed them? Her new name will be Frost White. pls don’t be mad :,(
Frost grows up under the strict eye of her mother. She needs to be perfect at every moment so that she can live up to her mother’s image. After all, The tale of Snow White is the most important in all of Ever After.
Apple in my version is going to go through a lot more character development than the original gave her. I feel like they never truly addressed her selfish tendencies. She was the center of attention and the only happily ever after that mattered was her own. She’s not really considerate of others.
In my version, I want to make these characters' flaws very apparent in the narrative instead of sweeping them under the rug like the original does. She’s going to take the time to learn and grow to empathize with others and realize that she is coming from a place of privilege and that those around her have valid reasons to not want to go through their destinies.
Frost and Raven will go from enemies to friends. They are not going to be friends at the beginning. Raven hates Frost’s guts (for valid reasons, Frost is kinda a passive-aggressive bitch and because of her, Raven is destined to die).
Raven will go through a character arc too but I’m not quite sure what yet. I haven’t really identified any character flaws that I want to address quite yet.
Raven Queen has never wanted to be evil, yet the only people who seem to recognize this are the Wonderlandians, Maddie specifically. Raven might not always understand what Maddie is trying to tell her, but she knows that her friend is trying her best to listen and communicate.
This is the first year that the Wonderlandians are attending Ever After High, so they’re struggling greatly with the culture and the language. Raven is happy to help them out, grateful to finally have people in her life who don’t cower in fear.
Personal issue I had with Maddie in the original: I felt like she never truly listened to Raven. She was Raven’s best friend and was nice don’t get me wrong, but I always felt she was so flippant, not taking anything serious. For example, in the first episode, when Raven is talking to her about her issues and how everyone is scared of her, Maddie simply tells her it isn’t true before sitting down for tea. I get that Wonderlandians are supposed to be mad and random and whatnot, but I think she should be serious enough to listen to her friend’s troubles and help out. I also want to give Maddie some troubles of her own (not sure yet) so that Raven can help her.
Raven truly likes the three Wonderlandians that she knows. Lizzie might be prickly and hard to get to know, and Kitty mischievous tendencies can get on one’s nerves, but Raven knows that these are her people and feels a bond with them.
The story starts with Legacy year, when Raven decides that she’s going to find a way to escape her destiny. Raven spends the year digging for evidence, finding allies, and mixing up the status quo.
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kurenai-works · 7 months ago
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Hello everyone, today is my 29th birthday.
With that in mind, I figured it would be the best time to talk about this, so I'm proud to present to all of you 東方雷秘儀 ~ Strike in the Holy Apex, my very first Touhou Project fangame!
The game's story will be centered around a mysterious thunderstorm that's raiding the entirety of Gensokyo, so it's up to a group of heroines to investigate the situation and save the day.
As some of you may know, around November of last year, GameMaker has become free to use for everyone, which prompted me to take the opportunity to create an engine that looks roughly similar to ZUN's original Touhou Project games. I showcased it in greater detail on YouTube sometime around late February and I was very pleased by the generally positive feedback it got.
Taking that into account, I continued to expand the work I've done and it has grown a lot during the past four months; menus function properly, game settings can be modified, controller support has been added, several gameplay tweaks have been implemented, and so on. There's still a number of things that need to be ironed out by the time I'm writing this post, but considering the progress I have done on it so far, I have faith that a trial version for the game will be ready for release soon. This has to be the biggest project I've worked on... by a country mile. Speaking of the trial version's release date, that will be disclosed at the very end of this post.
GameMaker being free to use has given me a joy I genuinely can't describe, and I bet my inner child would’ve been happy too by hearing those news. After all, I've had experiences with GameMaker for well over 15 years, basically almost half of my entire life!
So, what should you expect by the time the trial version is released? First things first, it'll obviously consist of only three stages.
Secondly, you'll be able to play this adventure as the usual duo; Reimu and Marisa. More playable characters will be available in the full version.
Thirdly, the game's main mechanic. It's called the Brave Gauge, and it has functionality almost similar to the Season Gauge found in Touhou 16: Hidden Star in Four Seasons. It's not the most original idea I've had, but for the record, and coming back to my familiarity with GameMaker ever since my teenage years, this system was taken from a very old draft which dates all the way back to 2014, while making some adjustments to it. Here's a little bit of proof:
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I'm going a bit off tangent here, but seeing these filenames kinda makes me feel embarrassed. The game has "Ascii" on the name because all of the graphics in there were made using ASCII characters, which was done during a time when my artistic talents were non-existent, so they looked quite messy and overall made the game have a goofy aura to it, haha.
And lastly, considering that I'd like this game to be played by a wider demographic, it's gonna be available in three different languages: English, Spanish (my native language, hooray!) and Japanese. These can be selected anytime via the options menu.
I don't know any people who are fluent in Japanese, and the few friends that I have don't seem to know much about the language either, so that translation is gonna be handled 100% by myself using tools like DeepL. I know that translating all the stuff in one go can lead to heavily mistranslated results, so I'll be making sure to convert my game's text as meticulously as I can. If there's anyone out there who understands Japanese fluently and is willing to translate the text for me, please hit me up because that'd be really appreciated. In case that happens, I won't be able to reward the translation financially, but I will be adding your name to my game's end credits.
So yeah, I don't have much else to say. The game's trial version will be available on Itch.io this August 30th.
The game has a long way ahead from being completed, so anticipating a release date for the full version is not feasible, at the moment. Regardless, I'll make sure to update on that once I have made abundant progress on it.
Both versions of the game will be released as pay-what-you-want. In simpler words, they'll be available free of charge with the optional choice of depositing a sum, in case you're feeling generous. After all, not to brag, but it goes without saying that I'm handling every detail in the game; not just the programming, but also the art, music and writing. While I have used some code libraries to facilitate the inclusion of certain aspects in my game, most of the heavy lifting is carried out by me, so it'd be really appreciated to have some compensation for the work I have been doing for almost half a year. It's not by any means mandatory, so it's fine if you can't for whatever reason, hahaha.
Anyway, I hope you look forward to this game of mine as much as I do! See you then!!
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truthseekerthedragon · 8 months ago
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Thoughts on SANABI
So. I want to talk about SANABI. 
For those of you wondering, SANABI is a Korean indie platformer released in November 2023. The platforming revolves around a grappling hook mechanic that you use to swing around levels. In a dystopian cyberpunk world, you play as the General(1), and you’ve been tasked with hunting down an elusive entity known only as Sanabi; it’s responsible for the disappearance of the entire population of Mago City, an independent city run by the conglomerate Mago Group. You, along with a hacker named Mari, slowly uncover the secrets around… pretty much everything, but Mago Group especially. 
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While the mechanics, visuals, animation, and OST are great, what really grabs my attention is the game’s story. The storyline is absolutely fantastic, I love it to bits, and I need to talk about it or else I’ll explode. It’s unfortunate that the game isn’t well known; one of the reasons I’m talking about it is because I want more people to know about this gem, gosh darn it! (And it'll be a nice change of pace from my other long posts, which are mostly me being angry and insecure respectively.)
First, a quick rundown of non-spoilery things. All the juicy stuff is behind the cut. 
Many Western cyberpunk stories heavily feature elements from Japan or Hong Kong (such as Japanese corporations or the aesthetic of the former Kowloon Walled City), and some of these stories have been accused of being “techno-orientalist” by promoting fears of East Asian dominance in the West. Yikes. However, SANABI utilizes what can best be described as… KOREAN CYBERPUNK! The game combines elements of traditional Korean culture with cyberpunk, which in my eyes makes for a refreshing take on the genre. The enormous neon signs are Korean, the characters wear traditional Korean clothing, and the architecture incorporates Korean elements. It’s all super great to look at. (And as someone who’s partially Korean, it brings me personal joy.)
The characterization and interactions in the game are excellent; sometimes the dialogue is strange or clunky, but I’m chalking it up to translation and localization issues and I’m not blaming the team for that. This game is heavy on cutscenes, but I didn't mind because the story is so well written; in fact, they’re almost a relief because gameplay requires a lot of concentration and cutscenes provide an opportunity to unwind. 
I’ll mostly be talking about the storyline, since that’s basically my specialty as a writer and all, but I may dip into talking about other aspects of the game, such as the visuals or music; I will also be looking at the cultural and economic context behind the game, which (if you ask me) explains a lot about Korean media in general. 
Content warnings for terrorism as well as in-depth discussions of death and grief. I will post screenshots of the game, a few of which are quite bloody (rendered in pixel art). 
One last thing. SANABI is one of those games where it’s best to go into it knowing as little about it as possible due to the nature of the story. If you have not seen or played SANABI, I highly recommend playing the game or watching a playthrough before reading this post. (If you’re looking for playthroughs, I recommend Dan Floyd/PlayFrame’s Let’s Play, which can be found here. It was actually a one-off before Dan decided to expand it to a full playthrough, and it’ll probably be complete before this post goes up, because I am very predictable.) (Edit: Yup.) I do not wish to rob anyone of that first-time experience. If you want to read this post before checking out the game, I can’t stop you, though I strongly dissuade you from doing so. 
Laaast warning! 
When you boot up the game, you’re greeted with the main menu (because of course that’s where I’d start, not by immediately jumping into the game proper or anything). The menu song, ��SANABI,” utilizes a distinctive melody that we’ll hear throughout the game—a leitmotif, if you will. I will make sure to point out this little motif whenever it appears given how thematically important it is. By the way, this game’s soundtrack is excellent, so expect me to ramble about it every so often. 
Anyways, let’s start the game, shall we? The game offers four difficulty modes, the hardest of which you unlock after beating the game. The easiest difficulty makes you invincible and is for the casuals who are just here for the story, and that’s perfectly fine. Of course, my sibling saw this and immediately said, “Who would play the game with invincibility?” (They’re a Celeste speedrunner, you see. They’re 100% a hardcore gamer.)
Okay, let’s start the game for real. 
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The game starts with a girl telling her father, among other things, that “Getting all the way to the end is not important!” This phrase is a motif throughout this game (aka Arc Words), so remember it. 
The General wakes with a start, so apparently what we just saw was a dream/vision. When he checks on his daughter, she runs over and hugs him and it's the most adorable thing ever. 
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The animation and designs do a lot to convey character in this game. The General's outfit is black and red and the brim of his hat always cover his eyes, which gives him that mysterious badass look. (By the way, that hat is called a jeonrip and was historically worn by Korean military officers, so this outfit should immediately tell its Korean audience, as well as anyone who watches enough historical K-dramas, what this guy’s job is.) He walks, and runs, using a steady, professional gait. His daughter, in contrast, is dressed in a bright yellow and red hanbok. She bounces up and down, practically radiating energy, and she has sparkles coming off her. It's all very cute. 
Strangely, the game offers dialogue choices in this prologue. We don't see this anywhere else in the game except for one scene far later, which I’ll get to when we get there. This is probably a relic of an earlier iteration of the game that had dialogue choices, but I'm glad they scrapped it. It suits this game better. 
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The daughter wants to play with a box of “fun objects,” so she and dad head into their small, remote shack.(3) The interior is based off that of traditional Korean homes, or hanoks; feel free to compare to this image. The furniture has a distinctly Korean feel, down to the blankets stacked against the wall and the black lacquer closet decorated with designs of birds and mountains. I also spot lots of vases and what looks like calligraphy on the wall, as well as several medals and certificates. 
The daughter rifles through the fun objects, aka her father’s military stuff, and says she wants to play soldiers with him. “Can I be the general? Can I?? I want to be the general!!” she cries, jumping up and down like she doesn’t have a care in the world. Her father immediately obliges, even letting her borrow his general’s Steel Tiger medal. 
Our General has been tasked with rescuing Agent Raspberry from “the hill in the back,” which is filled with dinosaurs and lava; he’s the only one who can do it because he’s an “inbincible elite soldier.” Of course, there's no actual lava, and the General even points this out, but he’s a good dad, so he sets up a red visual overlay over the grassless areas. Might as well be the real thing. 
This starts a fun tutorial that teaches basic gameplay, including how to use the Chain Arm, the grappling hook mechanic. I’ll skip over this part for the sake of time, but it's very cute. (You can pet a cat named Agent Meow, and if you don’t touch the “lava” while he’s watching, he applauds you—wait I said I’d skip over this part shoot—)
The General successfully “rescues” the raspberries and brings them back to his daughter. She’s asleep, but she’s drawn something for her dad. 
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To her we are the “invincible soldier.” Which is pretty sweet! 
Our kid wakes up later and pulls out a walkie-talkie, which she had gotten earlier from the box of fun objects/military gizmos, but she's only brought one, whoops! So she gives the walkie-talkie to her dad and heads to the house to grab a second one. 
The radio crackles to life, and the daughter says there’s a large clock in the house. That’s a bit strange. There's something written on it, and she reads it aloud. 
“Sa… nabi. What's a Sanabi?”
The game starts off slowly, which is probably a large turn-off for people who want to cut straight to gameplay. This intro follows in the vein of Korean revenge films, where there’s often an introductory scene showing the protagonist going about their usual life with loving family members that the plot will take away from them, starting their revenge spree. I’ll discuss Korean revenge thrillers later on.
The General abruptly stands up, radio in hand. 
“Love, listen to daddy. Get out of the house right now. RIGHT NOW.” 
But she can’t hear him over the radio. He runs towards the house, only to be thrown back by an explosion—cut to black.
When consciousness returns, the world has faded to gray, and the only thing that can be heard is a distant ringing. The General slowly gets up, and a QTE prompts you to get him to slowly move towards the house. (More on QTEs later.) Turns out the house is completely destroyed, and the General falls to his knees. 
Aaand smash cut to title! Welcome to the game. 
I love the abrupt tone shift here. I'm willing to bet a lot of you were jaded enough to expect something to happen to the daughter eventually, but still! Darn. This shift reflects the General's outlook on the whole ordeal—he had a great life, with a great daughter, until all that was snatched away from him. Yikes. 
17 days later, we’re in an extravagant office in a highrise building; most of the screen is dark, obscuring our view, and we can only see two robots standing next to a window. (This game plays with perspective in this way a lot, as you’ll see.) One of the robots, a bodyguard named Cheol(4), approaches someone we can’t see with the intent to kill him—only for a metal claw to attack from the darkness and completely wreck the guy. We all know who it is. 
The other robot, who appears to be the boss of some kind of weapons company, panics and says they have information on Sanabi, but as it turns out, the General has already tracked those leads and found nothing. When the boss makes the mistake of asking what he wants, he grabs the boss and suspends them over a broken window; the boss offers all their money as compensation for whatever the General lost, and he responds by dropping them out a window. 
When you take him to the door leading out of the office, he opens it, revealing a corridor lit by a flickering emergency light. The walls and pillars are covered in enormous rake marks, the paintings are askew, and the body parts of robots litter the ground. There’s a red haze in the air. 
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I love the environmental storytelling here. It’s efficient, for lack of a better word—with one glance you can infer what happened here. It’s a powerful mood-setter, too. 
Now this right here is in line with Korea’s revenge thriller films, one of the country’s main exports besides rom-coms about shy teens and K-pop. This genre is native to our favorite peninsula, featuring brutal levels of violence, villains who are usually rich people, and an inept police force. Emotional catharsis not guaranteed! 
I did a lot of reading to trace the roots of this trend, and over and over I came across the term han, a Korean concept that’s difficult to translate to English but can be described as a sort of grief or unresolved anger at societal injustices. The feeling can be traced back to Japan’s colonization of Korea and has been refined, if you will, by the Korean people being divided by the 38th parallel and the South subsequently being ruled by a string of dictators. So basically, the Korean fixation on revenge films comes from an innate anger at the unfairness of the world and the desire to lash out. Fun! 
If you want more information about the historical context behind Korean revenge films, click here. And for more information about Korea’s long, often troubled history, click here or go to footnote #8 for the extra-long version. 
Now I know what some of you are thinking. “Truthseeker/Thunder, you spent several months writing an essay about a boring game with a fridging that’s setting up a clichéd revenge plot? I’m so disappointed in you.” And to that I say, “Listen, this is one of the best games I’ve ever seen or played and I do not say that lightly. Just trust me on this, alright?” And those of you who are reading this and know what’s up are nodding knowingly or something. I dunno.
Anyways, back to the game. The General takes the elevator, telling the operator to take him to the first floor; the understandably terrified operator obliges. As the elevator slides down, it passes by rows and rows of similarly devastated hallways. To put it in Dan Floyd’s words, “We’ve been busy.”(5)
There’s a servant on the first floor who aims a gun at the General, but loses his nerve and runs for it. When you enter the lobby, the servant appears again. A thin laser appears that goes through both your bodies, and the servant is confused, but not for long. The laser fires, vaporizing half the poor guy’s body. You survive, though, presumably because the servant took the brunt of the blast. 
An extravagantly dressed guy saunters into the lobby. This is Kang Seon(6)(7), and he has a gun for a head. This game utilizes rule of cool a lot, but never in a way that breaks immersion, at least for me. It’s one of the things I love about it. 
Kang Seon kicks the servant-bot’s corpse and complains about, if I were to guess, him not opening the entrance. The characterization in this game is excellent, by the way, even for minor characters like this. 
When the General attacks him, Kang Seon is impressed, excited to fight “someone who’s got chops.” It’s time to put your skills to the test. 
My sibling (who’s played a bit of the game as of my writing this) felt the need to say that the timing of Kang Seon’s laser attacks was “extremely generous,” by the way. Don’t have much to add to that; this guy is the first boss you encounter in the game. 
Once you defeat Kang Seon, he threatens to blow you up along with him, but a cannon blast from outside kills him. Leaving the lobby reveals a military helicopter parked outside. An officer is waiting for you—Colonel Baek. 
At first the General isn’t interested in what he has to say, but Baek tells him, “Sanabi reappeared.” This intrigues our murderous, rage-filled, inbincible elite soldier and he gets into the helicopter. The boss slowly gets up from the pavement and tells Baek to shoot his comrade, but Baek shoots them instead. 
Before I forget, I should probably mention the architectural style of the game—the classic cyberpunk look we all know and love mixed with traditional Korean architectural elements such as tiled roofs, dancheong, and a distinctive bracket structure. Those brackets painted with colorful patterns can be seen within the military HQ. 
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The General gets a mission briefing. Apparently Sanabi has resurfaced in Mago City, a city owned by a company known as Mago Group. The base wants to assign him a specific mission because he’s apparently the only one who’s ever met Sanabi in person.
Mago Group is a megacorporation reminiscent of chaebols, a Korean term used to describe enormous companies run by a person or family (Samsung Group is the largest of these). In South Korea, chaebols dominate politics and the economy and have enormous influence over the country. They’re essentially monopolies with close ties to the government and are comparable to Japan’s keiretsu.(8) 
If you’re familiar with Korean media in pretty much any capacity, you’re probably aware that rich people, companies, or both often appear in an antagonistic capacity in such media. SANABI is no exception. Mago Group has some connection to Sanabi, but it’s not clear what exactly that connection is. At least not yet. 
Another nifty fact: Mago Group is named after Mago, a creator goddess from Korean folklore. Is this a thematically appropriate name? We’ll see. Heck, I’d even argue that Mago Group’s logo—a triangle overlapping with a circle, resembling a mountain silhouetted against the sun—is also thematically relevant. Everyone jump on the overthinking train! Our destination is, um, I dunno. I hadn’t thought this far ahead. Aaaugh. I’m gonna curl up in the corner now. 
The General agrees to start the mission, but only if he orders something called Operation Zero, which seems to be a big deal. He also plugs in a chip, which causes something called “S.O.S” to appear on the HUD. 
Our General also wants to do some limb maintenance, and Baek directs him to the supply area. There we meet Major Song. Compared to the soldiers who stiffly salute the General, Song is a lot more laid back, slouching off the ledge she’s on to give a casual-looking salute. She’s much more relaxed but still respectful around our inbincible soldier than the other guys. This is because, as we will soon see, Song is utterly fearless and someone who is not to be messed with. 
Song says the parts for the chain arm can’t be found on the base, since it’s pretty out of date, and she recommends her superior check the black market for parts. We also head into Training Ground #17, where we have our tutorial the second. 
This tutorial is more comprehensive than the first one where we were dodging the “lava,” introducing how to fight enemies, dash after taking damage, etc. Unfortunately it’s also more boring because there’s no fake lava we have to avoid for our daughter. This seems to be some kind of design limitation that comes from having to introduce the player to concepts like fighting enemies that realistically won’t come up when roleplaying with our daughter, but it’s still not ideal. 
We also have a training test at the end of the tutorial to evaluate how fast the player can navigate the course. If you beat it in under 26 seconds (the General’s old record), which is quite tricky, you get an achievement! The fastest I’ve seen it completed utilizes speedrunner methods. 
After that, we return to Major Song, who’s heard about the whole Operation Zero thing and is skeptical. We don’t hear what exactly Operation Zero is, only that it’s presumably something that’ll deal with Sanabi. For that matter, we don’t know what Sanabi is either, only that it blew up our kid. Whatever Operation Zero is, it’s clear the General isn’t planning on coming back alive. 
Song tells the General to leave behind what he wants to leave, and he pulls out a piece of paper. We saw him with the same paper earlier when he was issuing Operation Zero. Song picks it up and reads aloud, “Invincible.. the elite soldier…”
The General heads to his quarters and pulls out his Steel Tiger medal, which looks a bit scuffed. We flashback to a time when the Steel Tiger was pristine, where the General is explaining to his daughter that it’s a medal given to generals. The daughter hugs him and calls him the coolest in the world. We return to him in the base where he’s crying stoically, which is incredibly sad(9). Don’t pull on my heartstrings like that :(
Next up is the briefing. We’re now in a helicopter in Mago City airspace, and a hologram of Colonel Baek tells us something highly confidential: after a network blackout in the city, every citizen in the city vanished into thin air. It’s almost certainly Sanabi’s doing. We’re given the task of retrieving Mari, a member of an investigation team who’s sent a distress signal and reported she found information. 
An artillery blast hits the helicopter, and the General prepares to jump out of it, but it crashes. We see the same scene from the very beginning of the game, complete with our daughter telling us again that getting to the end isn’t important. However, the memory—if it can be called that—seems a little off. The HUD seems a bit different, for one. And at one point our daughter, instead of giving normal dialogue, starts talking in censored boxes. That’s not how language works, kid! 
Oh, and our S.O.S doesn’t work. Yippee. 
We are a short distance outside Mago City’s gates. This is where the prologue ends and the game proper starts. It was a long journey, but we’re finally here, people! There are five more chapters to go. I have to analyze all of it. Lemme just add weirdly titled headers for my personal convenience. 
Chapter 1: Program
And off we go! 
Well, you probably know how platformers work. I don’t think I need to explain how you, as the Brigadier General, have to swing around and avoid stuff that will kill you such as the volt potholes (the red bits of floor). I do want to say, though, it is satisfying as heck (evidence: every time I cheer loudly after defeating a tricky boss or navigating a difficult area). 
Once you reach the first gate, you encounter a speaker that says it’s best to evacuate the city. Huh. What is with this place, anyway? What happened to everyone? These are questions we will slowly unravel throughout the game. 
Inside the first gate, we encounter turrets and robots. Mago City is suspiciously well armed, as we will soon find out. Yes, megacorporations having private armies are a genre staple, but seriously, why is there so much security? Yet another question to throw onto the pile. 
Right after the General enters Mago City proper, we see a floating orange drone tailing him. This little guy’s name, we later learn, is Mufin. Not Muffin, Mufin with one F. I decided to investigate the original Korean, and its name is “머핀” (pronounced “meopin”), lit. “muffin.” So if this guy’s name is Muffin, why is its English name spelled with just one F? Who knows, it’s probably a small mistake. Trust me to get hooked up on a tiny detail like this. Moving on! 
We can see Mufin make appearances here and there as we platform. Weirdly, I never catch these appearances while watching a playthrough, but while playing the game itself I was constantly like, “I see you there!” Does playing a video game make you hyper-aware of your surroundings or something? Probably. Definitely. 
After a while the General decides to hide in an alley as Mufin passes by, then grabs it. Turns out Mufin is Mari’s drone, and it gives the General her coordinates. Off we go, then. 
Some platforming/robot-destroying later, we find Mari hiding under a sack. 
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Quick note on Mari’s design: her clothes are blue and yellow. The daughter wore red and yellow clothing. Read into the color symbolism as much, or as little, as you’d like. For my part, I couldn’t tell you how much “Mari wears blue, which represents hope and the future in Korean culture” was an intentional design choice on the devs’ part; for all I know, they made her clothes blue because they liked the color. How much am I overthinking things? You be the judge! 
Mari is terrified. At first she asks who’s there (the Brigadier General), then asks if we’re human (yes). The General tells her he was sent to protect her, but Mari has serious doubts on the capability of one person. After all, what can one person possibly do?
The General informs her that he’s killed all the murder bots(10), but this makes Mari freak out even more. Turns out there’s something beneath the floor of the city. Something very large and very hungry. 
It’s a giant metal worm. 
It erupts out of the ground, leaving behind a volt pothole where it chewed through the floor. Mari immediately hops onto Mufin, flies off, then returns to the General and shouts, “Why are you just standing there?!! Run!!” You should heed her advice, because the worm is now chasing after you. 
After a narrow escape from the metal worm of death, our characters get a chance to relax. As it turns out, the network blackout we heard about earlier actually meant the city’s data has been wiped. Mari doesn’t actually know anything; she only said she had information because no one would’ve come otherwise. 
I’ll add something real quick here. Throughout the game, Mari refers to the General as “mister.” A bit odd and overly formal for an English speaker, but we’ll have to turn to the game’s native language for the full picture. In the original Korean, Mari uses the term “아저씨,” romanized as ajeossi, to address the General. This term is used to politely address a man older than the speaker. If you’re wondering why I’m bringing this up, besides for a fun piece of trivia, it’s because I’m gonna bring it up later along with a longer explanation. You’ll see why when it comes up again. 
So what’s the plan now that we have zero information to go off of? Luckily, Mari has a plan that involves… fishing? 
We’re then shown a presentation of sorts that feature Mari drawing out pictures as she explains the plan. These are absolutely fantastic, not just because of the music that plays during these scenes (appropriately called “Mari’s Theme,” which also includes the SANABI leitmotif) but also because stopping to make drawings while explaining the plan is such a Mari thing to do. 
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Right, the characterization! Still love it. Mari is very talkative and energetic, especially in contrast to the quiet, no-nonsense General. In writer speak, placing contrasting characters next to each other like this is known as foiling. It’s a good technique is what I’m saying. I love my foils. 
Anyways, Mari’s plan is to pull the Writ of Execution (the crusher’s official name) out of the ground using a crane hook, although the power source has to be disabled first. Unfortuntately, the worm’s power source is located in its mouth. When the General hears this, he immediately turns around and leaves, which I find hilarious. 
Luckily, Mari has a plan for that also. How does she come up with these so quickly? Her plan is to hack(11) Mago City’s internal network and overload the crusher when it connects to the network for maintenance. 
Fun fact, each time after Mari draws out a plan you can actually see the drawings on a nearby wall where she drew them. I love small details like that, and the game is full of them. 
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There’s a network hub nearby, so we have to get there to hack the worm. Oh, and Mari’s gonna follow you around by riding Mufin, which is very cute. 
Our grand cast of two characters (I am not counting Mufin, sorry folks) reach the station. Mari tries to engage in small talk, asking the General what he does and why he has a claw arm, but he isn’t gonna say anything. Mari then tells him that she did unsavory hacking work, got caught, and is now working for the government. Interestingly, when the General tells her to live a normal life after all this is over, Mari responds with, “Well.. that’s not really something I can control. But, well… Okay. I could give it a shot…” 
In response, the General gives her a card and tells her to look for Colonel Baek once they get out of the city. He says Baek will be able to give her a fresh start. Interesting move, considering the two haven’t known each other for long. 
It turns out there’s some interference preventing Mari from hacking the crusher; we have to shut down three transponders. Mari offers to split the work, but the General immediately says no; he’s gonna shut off the transponders by himself. Mari is annoyed, pointing out she’s not five, and when the General is insistent she says she can handle herself, adding, “It’s not like I’m your daughter or anything!”
Ohh. I see. Let’s see where this goes, shall we? 
While we’re off to shut down the transponders, Mari talks to the General via comm. She sends him the transponders’ coordinates and snarkily tells him he’s welcome, and he tells her to cut the chatter. You see what I mean with the characterization? I can’t stop talking about it. Help. 
Interestingly enough, there are a couple lines here where Mari mentions that the slums lack any sort of housing. This seems to be a reference to an earlier version of the game where the plot was a bit different. A lot of things about SANABI changed during development; for instance, the game was originally supposed to be a metroidvania—you could choose different chain arm upgrades through the black market and explore a non-linear map—but the devs had to scale back their ambitions because they realized a metroidvania was well beyond their scope. (Here are the sources in Korean if you want a look.)
After destroying the second transponder, Mari realizes we’re smashing them instead of, you know, just turning them off. (I mean, when all you have is a hammer, or in this case a giant robot claw…) And the General’s like, “You talk too much. Tone it down. I can’t focus.”
Shortly after this, when a large steel door shuts in front of us, Mari takes the opportunity to say, “You’re like, dry AF you know that?” and starts complaining about how he never lets her do anything, and he responds to this by blocking her on the comm. I love this game. 
After we destroy all three transponders, we return to the station, but Mari is missing. Turns out she left to investigate something, but the General didn’t hear because… you know. 
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Mari takes him to a ledge overlooking the crusher’s maintenance center, because it looks less like a maintenance center and more like an enormous hole in the ground where garbage is disposed of (aka dumped). Oh, and apparently this spot is the cargo drones’ default dump point, too, so pretty much everything was being dumped here. The General wonders if this is part of the terrorist plans, and Mari responds with, “Terrorism..? What terrorism?.. Oh, never mind. This was found from within Mago Corporation.” Mari points out how strange this is, but the General doesn’t care. He’s more preoccupied with the, you know, three million missing citizens and Sanabi. 
A light appears in the distance, which turns out to be a missile, and the General pushes Mari out of harm’s way before he gets exploded off the ledge. Ouch. 
Don’t worry, he’s still alive, just falling into the giant pit that’s also the Writ of Execution’s maintenance center. Mari manages to grab him mid-fall, but Mufin’s not strong enough to pull them back up, so the General tells her to follow through with the fishing plan; he’ll figure out a way to weaken the crusher. He also tells her to stay discrete, since whoever fired the missile is targeting them. 
We land in the bottom of the pit with nothing but a giant murderous worm for company. Yup, it’s boss fight time. Luckily for you, you can defeat the crusher by attacking the power source in its mouth that it sticks out when it tries to eat you. The game doesn’t really explain why the worm exposes its weak point like this other than for gameplay purposes, unfortunately. (My headcanon is that it does this to prevent the power source from overheating, heh.)
Mari helps out by sending down explosives (or, as she calls it, a “wombo combo happy meal”), and once it’s weakened enough she sends down the crane hook. When the crusher refuses to be pulled out, Mari tells the General to grab the hook so she can pull him out. And he does so, but with the plan to whack the worm real hard using a few QTEs. People often complain about bad QTEs, but I really like how they’re implemented in SANABI—they appear during dramatic moments when the character is expected to exert a lot of effort, such as during boss fights like this one. The animation during the boss fight QTEs helps a lot, too. 
The Writ of Execution has been defeated, and its upper body is hoisted out of the ground using the crane. Mari opens it up and doesn’t find a black box, but something better: a Golden Key, which is basically the city’s equivalent of admin privileges. She calls up a lift and we get in. 
If you’re wondering what’s next, it’s a flashback with our daughter. Dad is posed heroically while wearing a paper hat, and it looks like his daughter is drawing him. Aww. She even says she’s drawing the happiest moment of her life, because every day she’s with her dad is the happiest she has—then we get an abrupt cut to Mari shouting in the General’s face. Looks like he was lost in thought for a second there. It’s a jarring moment and I love it.
The two are in a giant underground chamber close to the Mago Construction exec’s office. This chamber also houses a lot of crushers. What, you thought there was just one? Nope! Seriously, what are all these worms even for? 
As our characters ride the elevator up to the exec’s office, they have a little chat. The General wants to know why Mari’s accompanying him on this dangerous mission, especially when she already has her out. She says it’s because she’s worried about him, but the General can tell she’s not telling the truth. Mari also adds that she thinks he’s obsessing over something. 
Oh hey look, the office has a giant portrait of Mago Construction’s CEO. 
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“Na E-lon,” huh? You know, this guy looks kinda similar to—oh my glod.(12)
Within the office proper, we find a magnificent view of Mago City and an interface. Mari accesses the interface using the Golden Key and opens a classified channel, but there’s no information there either. The VIP hotline is partially corrupted, but Mari manages to catch the word “Sanabi.” 
The General grabs her in response and warns her about how dangerous Sanabi is, but Mari doesn’t seem to get what the deal is. Then the interface announces the activation of something called the penultimate solution protocol: “As per the manual, all VIPs are required to delete all of their personal data.. and then terminate their own lives. Have a great day.”
Mari checks the log. Apparently the protocol is activated when the city’s security can no longer be maintained; all data is to be deleted and the city’s nuclear fission plant is to commence meltdown. We are now on a time schedule, even though the uranium fuel in reactors can’t explode like a nuclear bomb can. 
As the two are leaving the office, Mari insists on continuing the mission with the General, even throwing away the calling card that will wipe her slate clean. She tells him, “I just have a feeling. This will be my last chance. Give me this chance, please.” And when the General inevitably says no, Mari starts addressing Sanabi directly (and loudly), saying she knows they’re hiding on the topmost floor of the city. He grabs her again, but as Mari puts it, “You know, I actually managed to read everything back there. Now I’m also a dead man, or gal, aren’t I?”
Chapter 2: Manufacture
We enter the city’s evacuation tunnels. Since Sanabi is somewhere in the top floors of the city, we’re gonna find a vertical train and ride it all the way to the upper levels. Since Mari still wants to stick around with the General, he decides to give her one chance to prove herself. He also has one condition: Mari has to follow his instructions, even though she points out a little freedom might produce better results.(13)
This chapter also introduces large red zones that cover areas of the map. When we encounter one in our way, Mari insists that they’re harmless and even demonstrates by sticking her hand in, but when the General tries to run into them, this activates an interception system (read: giant laser). Apparently interception’s triggered by a high electrical output, but to quote Mari, “You would need to have a really high output to trigger it.. Like reeealy high..”
Apparently our giant mechanical arm prevents us from traveling through what I can only assume are anti-robot defenses, but luckily we can mask our electrical signal if we travel through these red zones using supply convoys, basically giant hooks on rails. Yippee for platforming! Now where was I? Right, the plot. 
After spending some time traveling through the evacuation tunnels, we find ourselves in Mago Business District. If you were wondering which part of the game exudes the strongest Blade Runner feel, it’s here. Towering skyscrapers, enormous neon signs, everything—although there are still plenty of Korean architectural influences, such as in the designs of the archways. 
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There’s a black market nearby, and the General heads there to get new parts while Mari gushes over limited-edition merchandise.(14) The General notices an advertisement for memory manipulation and is thrown into another flashback, where we’re introduced to the hookshot mechanic. Oh, and our daughter gives us a birthday cake. 
When the flashback ends Mari is quoting lines from a fictional anime at us while wielding a “Neo-Data Blade,” a piece of merchandise that’s also a real hacking tool. This game is amazing. 
Oh, remember the memory manipulation that was mentioned moments ago? Turns out that’s a thing! Mari even says she messed around with it when she was younger, but adds it’s obvious whenever a memory is false. Feel free to pull out the tinfoil hats, because introducing the idea of false memories immediately shakes things up. Have fun theorizing! The people watching PlayFrame’s playthrough certainly did.(15) 
While platforming through the business district, we encounter Mago City’s worker bots, which have all been destroyed for some reason. Turns out these robots are being destroyed by the city’s security robots, who seem intent on making sure these workers are completely destroyed. Is there a reason for this extreme prejudice? Who knows. 
During our adventures through capitalism land(16), we eventually encounter a mech suit piloted by a girl. This is Justice, a famous elusive, wandering hero of the people. Mari immediately rushes in to snap a selfie with Justice, but the General is more suspicious. 
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Unlike the other characters, Justice’s design evokes Japanese aesthetics. She has a hime cut (which you can see better in this image(17)), and she’s meant to invoke the image of the lone wandering samurai/the modern conception of ronin. The thing is, due to historical reasons that are beyond the scope of this essay and continue to influence culture and society up to this very day, Japan is viewed extremely negatively by Koreans. It’s more of a hatred for the country than any individual or cultural export like anime, uber-nationalistic Koreans aside. I have to wonder if Justice’s design is meant to deliberately invoke a level of distrust in the player as a clue-in that Justice may not necessarily be a good person. (You know how Cold War-era media often feature Russians or Germans in an antagonistic capacity? It’s similar to that. The Korean horror film The Wailing, for instance, features supernatural events that seem to revolve around a mysterious Japanese man.) Again, this is beyond the scope of this essay, so I won’t talk about it much. 
Well, either that or I’m overthinking all this and the devs designed Justice this way because it was cool and/or to tie the design into Mari’s love of anime.
Back to discussion of the fun video game! Justice tells us, “I’m watching,” then vanishes into thin air. Mari explains that Justice is a famous wandering hero, but the General already knows who she is. The problem is, why is Justice in a city where everyone vanished into thin air? He also adds that Justice has a class-3 camouflage unit, which is the kind used by the military; a civilian shouldn’t have that kind of thing. 
We come across another giant portrait, this time the one of Mago Products’ CEO, Choi Gyeon. She’s not a famous person reference, unfortunately. There are also some security force-owned mech suits present, and it looks like Mufin wants one, but it ain’t getting it. At least for now. 
Remember how we were looking for a vertical train? Well, we’ve reached the subway and we’ve found them. They’re not moving, and Mari heads out to reactivate them, but the shutter doors close and security bots with rocket grenades and shields appear. It was a trap all along! 
After defeating the robots along with a rocket grenade that we hack using the Neo-Data Blade from earlier, a police mech grabs the General. It looks like the end, but Mufin in the mech suit from earlier busts through the door, followed by Mari. Mecha-Mufin powers up a laser beam, but the police mech whacks it with a baton before it can finish. The rainbow shades fall off Mari’s wide-eyed face before she shouts, “Hey!!! You’re not supposed to attack during a powerup sequence!!!” (I love this game—) The General then destroys the mech, says he’s fine, and immediately falls over. 
We’re back in the formless void with our daughter (what is going on here? Is this a subconscious flashback or something?) while a haunting melody plays. Mari’s playing the harmonica. 
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According to Mari, the trains aren’t functional, and the General says they were never designed to be used.(18) 
A beat passes. The General says, “Mari. You almost died back there.” Cue the emotional music (the leitmotif appears here too!), because it is deep discussion time. You even get an achievement after this scene! 
The General asks why Mari’s doing all this despite the risk. It’s clear he wants her to be honest this time. In response, she pulls out the harmonica she was playing earlier. “Can you play it for me?” she asks. She’s being serious—what’s the deal with the harmonica, anyway?—but the General doesn’t know how to play it. 
He also tells Mari he’s not planning to leave the city alive. Sanabi took everything from him, and he has no reason to live besides getting revenge. After a pause, Mari says, “Me too.” She reveals her father was killed by Mago Group and she’s here to find out why, adding that she’s already decided on this and doesn’t want to hear any “you’re too young to die” comments. 
A pause. Then she says, “Hey now! Sheesh! What a downer! I wasn’t gonna say anything because I knew it’d end up like this.” Holy mother of mood whiplash. Hey, does anyone else think Mari’s only pretending to be silly and that we just got a glimpse of what she’s really like back there? 
After getting that off our chests, it’s time for another of Mari’s plans! Our goal is still to reach the top levels, so her plan is to grab a flying car from a nearby warehouse and fly it to the top. What a flawless plan! Mari can’t drive, but that isn’t important. She has plenty of experience playing racing games, after all. 
Our merry duo reach the warehouse, but all the cars have been destroyed. Turns out this is Justice’s work, and the General tells Mari to leave the warehouse. “I’m watching,” Justice says, and it’s time for another boss fight! Great jams, too. 
During the fight, it turns out that there are multiple copies of Justice that decloak and attack you; apparently Justice can duplicate herself at will. When you destroy them, their mech suit bodies pile up on the floor, which is a very nice detail. Really solidifies how many you’re fighting. 
At the end of the fight, the General asks Justice why she’s working so hard. In response, she says, “Watching.. And watching.. And watching.. And watching…” Something’s clearly wrong. Do I even need to explain that something’s wrong? Am I being an annoying rambler right now? Moving on! 
“I hope you won’t hate me for this,” the General says, and with the help of a couple QTEs from the player he whacks the mech hard enough to send it crashing through the warehouse door. 
Once we leave the warehouse, Mari is very concerned about the Justice mech we just hit. She asks the General if he killed Justice, and he says, “Kill? Was she even alive?”
Our samurai-hunting soldier demonstrates Justice’s cloning feature, even opening their cockpits to reveal that each mech contains a Justice duplicate. (I dare you to find an essay that uses the word “justice” more than this one.)
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Justice is a program, something that used to be human whose personality has been digitized and copied to be used by Mago Group. Not only is this highly illegal—who knows how the Royal Court(19) will punish this—but is also just a “congratulations, you are absolutely terrible” move on Mago Group’s part. It’s even explicitly stated that there was an original Justice who wasn’t like this, but Mago Group took this Justice, then digitized and copied her and made her a corporate lapdog. Kind of like how companies will take a people’s movement and alter it to suit their own ends without realizing why the original worked in the first place. You know, like the corporation-fabricated Saw Patrol trying to ride the coattails of Barbenheimer. 
After that unsettling revelation, Mari checks the warehouse for any operational flying cars. But since all of them have been destroyed, there’s only one way to reach the top of the city now. And that’s through the enormous Mago Electronics factory. 
Chapter 3: Installation
Good luck on this chapter. So here’s the thing: certain sections in this level require a high degree of precision timing. Trust me, you’ll need that luck—wait, you’re telling me that the devs altered some levels to be easier after there was a lot of discourse around the factory being too hard? Alrighty, then. Well, uh, keep the luck, I guess. 
The factory is in an emergency lockdown mode. Nice. Oh, and Mari says she’s heard all kinds of ghost stories about this factory. Clear nonsense, right? The plan is to undo the lockdown in the control room, then take an elevator to the top of the factory. 
Mari still looks worried, so the General says, “No matter what happens, I’ll…” and SURPRISE FLASHBACK TIME! Yes, it’s time for another one of these! This time we’re in a dinosaur costume, because yes,(20) while our kid is cosplaying as Justice. It’s all very cute until the daughter runs towards the house and it blows up. Oookay, then. The General snaps out of the memory zone and, after Mari asks him why he stopped talking, completes his sentence: “..get you to the top level.” It seems that he intended to say “I’ll protect you,” based on what the daughter says in the flashback, but then he got distracted. Whoops. 
Now after all these flashbacks, I'm sure you all have a burning question in the forefront of your mind, one of the biggest mysteries of the game: WHERE THE HECK IS THE KID’S MOM? 
Our dynamic duo (how many nicknames can I come up with on the spot, I wonder?) make our way through the factory, which is absolutely enormous. There’s also a large machine called the Overseer that manages everything, but it’s pretty far away. At least for now. Once we reach the control room, our characters start talking about Mago Group and how it seems to be trying to destroy Mago City in its entirety; every aspect of the city’s destruction is running smoothly, meaning it must’ve been planned out over a long time. Mari says that this couldn’t have been accomplished by people outside Mago Group, meaning that it’s Mago, not Sanabi, that’s destroying this city. 
It’s right around this time that the lights in the factory turn off. Mari orders the lights to turn on, but she doesn’t have sufficient authority despite having admin access. Apparently the Overseer turned the lights off for whatever reason; undoing the lockdown turned it on, it seems. Luckily, the elevator’s still working. 
While we ride the elevator up, Mari explains that hackers discovered that this factory was using way too much power than it was supposed to, even with its absurd size, and anyone who dug deep enough into things ended up disappearing. And then the elevator stops going up and starts falling instead. Isn’t that just pleasant? 
The elevator stops on the same level we started on. We step out of the elevator… and the Overseer is staring at us. 
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And here begins the horror movie section of the game. 
According to the devs, it was extremely difficult to incorporate the Overseer as a 3D element in a 2D game; it required months of editing the model, lighting, colors, etc to get it to look just right for those horror points. I love how the end result looks, so good job, devs! 
Mari has a breakdown and the General tells her to get out of the city. “You can let me win just this once, can you?” he asks, and Mari leaves. 
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Time for analysis, which is the whole reason I started writing this (and there’s been very little of it so far for some reason, which I need to change). There’s a constant push-pull dynamic between the General and Mari, with the General constantly prioritizing Mari’s safety and asking her to leave the city, with Mari wanting to be able to act more independently. It’s a simulacrum of parent-child dynamics, which you probably already know isn’t uniquely a Korean thing—although family drama is quite common in Korean media, all things considered. Think of all the K-dramas where the heroine has to deal with her overbearing mother. Not really a surprise when you consider the culture’s strongly Confucian values and how strongly they prioritize a good family dynamic (this is called filial piety), an aspect of East Asian collectivist values. 
It’s pretty clear the game is pushing this familial dynamic with these characters. There’s a father who’s lost his child and a girl who’s lost her father, and it seems obvious where this is going. But then there are the holes: memory manipulation, the whole deal with Justice. Things definitely aren’t as they seem. 
Back to the game: it’s on to swinging through the factory while a giant death robot watches us. The whole deal with this part of the game is that if you spend too much time under the gaze of the Overseer, you’ll die. Luckily, the game’s pretty generous with hiding spots (at least for now). The game also introduces new mechanics in this section at a manageable pace, which include: 
Stationary plasma beams
Moving plasma beams that target you if you enter their radius
Batteries that you can control like an enemy and throw at obstacles
Worker bots that you can take control of to hold down buttons or hit buttons that are otherwise inaccessible
Wait, the General can control robots? And the robots come equipped with a grappling hook? Isn’t that kind of weird? Eh, I’m sure it’s just a fun gameplay mechanic thing that totally isn’t foreshadowing. 
There’s a point where the Overseer nearly kills the General, but Mari comes in to the rescue in a flying car. “Did you miss me?” she asks. 
Once everyone’s been driven to safety, the General asks Mari why she came back. She explains that the Overseer is equipped with a Medusa processor, which is a device used to hack and permanently delete data, then says that she can’t stop what she’s doing now, not when she’s waited her whole life for this. Mari also adds that he has to keep his promise of getting her to the top level. 
Oh, and she’s stashed a bunch of guns plus a boxed totally-not-a-Nintendo Switch in the car trunk (this factory makes a ton of stuff, apparently), but unfortunately she forgot to bring bullets for anything. That is, except for a handgun, but the General tells her not to use it. Guns are dangerous, you know. 
The General also manages to say “thanks,” which is pretty neat! He’s loosening up and all that. Mari also offers him a present: a harmonica. She tells him to try it since her father used to play for her; unsurprisingly, he doesn’t know how to play it. Shrug, I guess. 
Now it’s time for another one of Mari’s plans! She says that the factory is being powered by a backup core; if they can reach that and limit its output the Overseer will lose power and they can get out of the factory safely. The General is skeptical, because literally none of Mari’s plans have worked out thus far, but we all have faith in her, don’t we?
Unfortunately the flying car is in a less than optimal state, so Mari and Mufin will take the vents. The General will just have to traverse the factory the more dangerous way—namely, platforming via grapple hook and feeling amazing. 
Once we’re done, we find a lot of worker bots all neatly lined up. Mari pops up out of the vent and, uh, starts talking to one? She’s curious about the General’s robot-possessing ability, but it’s weird that she’s addressing the robot. And later she plays it off as a joke, but I think we all know something’s up. 
Anyways, on to the next CEO portrait! This one’s of Director Sylvia, a reference to a prominent Korean Twitch streamer who backed the game. 
The characters reach the backup core, which Mari observes is an older model, ten years old at least. The General seems to think it’s the newest model, though, which is odd. Then the core’s guardian, another giant robot, shows up. Things get weirder, because the giant robot directly addresses the General as “Worker 17287,” then tries to kill him with a photoevaporation plasma when he’s designated a “malfunctioning project.”
It is now time for the plasma beam parkour boss fight. While Mari tries to hack the guardian, you have to make your way behind large training panels before the plasma beam can reach you. A neat element of game design I really like is that once you’re hiding behind a panel, the plasma beam speeds up so you don’t have to wait as long. 
The General nearly dies (again) and Mari saves his life (again) by replacing the guardian’s program with, and I am not making this up, the Morning Star Teacher. Since its original program was completely replaced(21), the whole “Worker 17287” thing will have to remain a mystery. At least for now. 
The guardian abruptly shuts down and the platform beneath the characters begins to lift up. Behind them, red lights turn on, revealing dozens, if not hundreds, of cores that are powering on. Beethoven’s Egmont Overture(22) begins to play; a drone appears and addresses the characters in the kind of dull corporate language that you’d expect, but there’s a bit of a twist here. 
“Executives and staff members remaining in the factory, how are you? We would like to sincerely thank you for your service to Mago Electronics. Please be informed that as of this moment, the central factory of Mago Electronics is completely closed. According to internal company regulations regarding to factory closures, all objects, equipment, structures.. and humans remaining in the factory will be eliminated. If you believe this process is in violation of your human rights, we will inform you of the appropriate response through our legal representatives.”
All these cores are what’s responsible for the factory’s abnormally high power usage, it turns out. The platform rises through a floor; we’re about to see something big. 
“In accordance with the factory elimination process, the Overseer has entered Obliteration Mode,” the drone continues. “The elimination process will be executed through the de-ionization plasma accelerator. If you experience any damage, aside from death, eradication, or evaporation, please submit a letter of explanation to the Damage Compensation Center with documentary evidence of the facts related to the damage. A representative will inform you of the appropriate compensation.”
The characters turn around to see the Overseer behind them, its plasma beam being affixed to it as the emergency lights flash. The classical music is utilized very well with the scene, and the devs have stated that this is a sequence they’re quite proud of. 
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The music winds down. The drone says, “There is nowhere to run or hide. Please make sure to meet your demise with integrity befitting a member of Mago Corporation. Thank you. This was Mago Electronics.” It self-destructs shortly afterwards. 
You can watch (or rewatch) the scene I just described, and definitely didn’t do justice, here. It’s in Korean; you can find the English version in the playthrough I linked at the top of this post or in another playthrough video. Flashing lights warning! 
The Overseer is trying to kill you again, but this time with a giant plasma beam and with even less time to get to safety. It’s quite tricky and a lot of people struggled with this section. And the thing is, bumping down the difficulty doesn’t help since the plasma beam is basically an instakill.; this section of the game got a lot of flack from players, which I completely understand, and the devs have tweaked the level design post-release. The track that plays is titled, rather appropriately, “Meet Your Demise With Integrity, Please.” Please go listen to this game’s music, it’s fantastic. 
Mari manages to temporarily take out the Overseer by using the emergency batteries, but the General is pretty tired. So tired that Mari has to drag him to safety. 
Turns out he’s getting another flashback, but this time his daughter is telling him it’s important to make it to the end. They’re an altered version of the Arc Words. 
The elevator’s been destroyed by the Overseer and Mari says there’s only one way out of the factory, but the General’s gonna have to trust her on this one. She instructs him to jump off a ledge when she tells her to, and when he does, he lands on Mari’s flying car, which is barely holding itself together. It’s nice to see their rapport improving throughout the story like this. 
Mari’s plan is to ride the central ventilation shaft out of the factory; given the amount of energy this factory is currently producing, the ventilation is in overdrive and the wind speeds are akin to a tornado’s. Unfortunately the car’s steering wheel snaps off, so you have to steer the car and keep it from colliding with obstacles. Yes, this is a gameplay segment, meaning you can ride a flying car out of the factory. This, my friends, is pure distilled awesome. 
The car crashes through the ceiling and into the sky. Nice view from up here. 
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Unfortunately, the car’s not working and we’re about to plummet to our imminent deaths, so the General grabs Mari and uses his claw arm as a brake against the side of a building. And with that we’ve reached the upper level. 
Chapter 4: Unraveling
Unfortunately, Mari’s gone comatose. It’s flashback time for her, it turns out! 
Mari, turns out, lives in an apartment by herself. The window is shuttered and the room is filled with garbage bags. She hasn’t been taking care of herself, like, at all. 
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Mari puts her face in her hands. “I killed him,” she says. 
We see events that happened a few days ago from Mari’s perspective. She’s been investigating Mago Group for quite some time to the detriment of… living, as she’s dropped out of school to put all her efforts into hacking. She’s gone full hikikomori, basically. 
A colleague of hers on the computer asks if Mari’s been using the memory converter again, which reinforces her statement earlier that she’s used false memory implantation before. It probably has something to do with her statement that she killed someone (who? her father?) and is trying to forget the incident or something like that. It doesn’t seem to be working, if I’m honest. 
Mari and her colleague have been investigating personality digitization technology by hacking Mago Group’s networks. The colleague has uncovered a top secret project—the Sanabi Project. Mari recognizes the word “Sanabi,” but it’s unclear what it means or represents. 
This seems to be the digitization tech Mari’s been looking for. Strangely, the project is about controlling personality data through indirect means, but there’s nothing in the project about creating said digitizations; this personality data seems to have come out of nowhere. 
Personality digitization technology/brain uploading is a Class-1 forbidden technology; even possessing or researching it is highly treasonous and can result in the deaths of everyone involved, their family, friends, and even neighbors. How pleasant. 
Unfortunately the colleague didn’t take the right security protocols, so Mago security agents show up at her house and… take a wild guess. When the agents learn the Sanabi Project has been shared, they decide to activate something called the final resolution protocol. 
Mari wakes up in the upper floors of the city. The General asks her if she’s really after revenge or answers like she said back at the train station, because it sure doesn’t seem like it. Mari doesn’t want to answer, but eventually reveals she’s helping him because she wants to keep a promise with her father, whatever that means. 
Also, Mufin is dead. The General found a similar drone with a cloaking feature as a replacement, but Mari really isn’t happy about the fact that her drone companion died. “Are you serious right now?!” she asks. 
“Mari. Come on,” the General says. “That’s just a robot. A tin can that mimics a human. A machine can’t become a human just because it can mimic one.”
“It.. Mimics a human?” Mari asks, incredulous. 
“Yeah.”
Mari sets down her drone, pulls out her harmonica, and holds it out. “Play! You know how to play the harmonica!!! Come on and play!”
“Mari,” he says. He’s gentle but insistent(23). 
Mari raises her sleeve to her eyes. “Please.. Please play for me..” she says, her voice weak. “You know how to play… You have to know..”
“Mari. What do you want from me?” the General asks. Mari tucks away the harmonica, her head still lowered. She turns from him, starting to walk away. 
“I’m not your father.”
A pause, then Mari laughs. It’s a hollow, joyless sound. 
The General is… concerned, to say the least. “Mari?”
“Never mind. Yes, you’re right. You are not my father. It’s so simple now that I think about it.” She doubles over and laughs even harder. It takes several moments for her to regain her composure, and she clears her throat. “Sorry, Mister. I just got a bit emotional.”
Okay, so Mari, um, definitely needs a hug. 
Mari tells us that Sanabi is at Mago HQ. She herself also has to go there to do something. “So I guess we just happen to be going the same way again? Shall we go together?” she asks. She also insists she’s okay, so she’s gotta be. 
Mari also adds that since we’re here to find Sanabi, “we have to make it to the end.” She says this phrase twice, by the way. We see that twisting of the Arc Words again. First we’re told that making it to the end isn’t important, but now it is? 
I’ve heard a really good suggestion/hypothesis that “you have to make it to the end” is a trigger phase. Like a sleeper agent kind of thing. Pretty interesting, huh? 
We proceed through the upper levels, though we don’t get far before encountering the national army’s combat robots—specifically the Tomb Troops, presumably some kind of special ops or elite combat unit. They’re here now, probably because of Sanabi, and they brought giant turrets. 
Our protagonist isn’t strong enough to face the army’s turrets, so Mari gives him a plugin chip and tells him to plug it in. And now it’s flashback time again. 
We’re back at the training course, but our daughter is here with us too! Somehow she made her way into the top secret military base and wants to watch her dad train. After we finish the course with our new charge attack, Major Song drops by and plays with our daughter. She reveals that our daughter managed to get in here because the base was hacked, but only the base’s barrier was raised with no apparent motive; that was what allowed our daughter to get in. But before Song can finish her train of thought, the memory glitches out and ends. 
Turns out that the chip is an overpower chip like the kinds used in the army. How did Mari get her hands on such a chip? She says she got it from the black market, but that’s an obvious lie. When the General tells her this, Mari responds with, “Sanabi!!! Don’t you want to go after Sanabi!” before telling him that ignorance is bliss, she can’t really explain the situation, and it would be best for him to focus on the original goal. 
After encountering several hazards, including an off-screen sniper trying to blow us up and a floating cargo box that explodes, our characters finally hitch a ride on a flying train headed straight to Mago HQ. Mari plays that haunting familiar tune on the harmonica again, then our characters have another heart-to-heart. The General tells Mari to leave the city again, Mari tells him to stop since she’s not his daughter, then she asks him: “Did you.. love your daughter?”
Clearly the General answers yes, but Mari responds to this by saying, “Then you must really hate Sanabi.”
“Mari…” the General says. “Did I tell you that Sanabi killed my daughter?” (He didn’t. Mari just knows.)
Mari responds by telling him he’s… well, something, but whatever she said, it manifests as visual noise in-game. She says something else too that’s also censored. As the General puts it, “[t]here’s a noise on the voice.” He physically can’t hear some words. 
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Unfortunately, their troubles aren’t over yet. A giant military helicopter, the Firebird, appears and it’s time for another boss fight. The General tells Mari to separate the flying train cars so they don’t all get destroyed at once, so you have to fight the Firebird while holding onto floating trains as platforms without falling to your death. Also, the Firebird is shooting at you, dropping bombs, and shooting missiles, destroying the train cars; and as Dan put it, “replacements [new train cars] come, but never as fast as you want.” You have to beat it by launching the exploding cargo from earlier at it, which come from destroyed train cars. Fun fact, this is also the most annoying boss according to speedrunners. 
Once you’ve defeated the Firebird, the conversation with Mari resumes. Mari’s up to something, and she keeps being all, “Haven’t you figured it out already?” Whatever’s going on, maybe it’s obvious to her, but it certainly isn’t obvious to the General. He asks if Mari’s colluding with Sanabi, and she says she isn’t, but when asked to explain, Mari says it isn’t easy. Given that the General can’t even hear certain words, she’s right. 
The train car they’re on lands in Mago headquarters, and shortly after landing Mari sees something that horrifies her and makes her throw up. Whatever it is, we can’t see it. Mari says she needs some alone time and leaves. 
By now I’m sure you all have your suspicions. I absolutely love how the game foreshadows the reveals later on, by the way. I was watching Dan’s videos as they came out and paying close attention to the speculation in both the YouTube comments and the unofficial fan Discord. I was surprised by how close the guesswork was to the truth, and I have to commend the game for laying the foreshadowing so well. The hints are never too revealing, just enough to allow you to put the pieces together before the reveals proper without it being too obvious. At least that’s how I see it. Some people like Yahtzee Croshaw didn’t like how the reveals were handled, but clearly these people are wrong and I am the only correct authority in all media.(24)
When the General finds Mari, she tells him she’s sure Sanabi is somewhere in this building. Then the S.O.S activates. Yeah, remember that from the beginning? The program opens a door in HQ, allowing us to access it. Inside is a room full of computers, but only one of them is active, and it’s talking about an abnormally activated project or the like. Apparently “Worker 17287” needs to be reactivated, so the General hits the shutdown button on himself. (Don’t ever do this to yourselves, people.) He gets knocked unconscious, the S.O.S tries to reboot but fails, and when he wakes up, there are corpses now! Wait, what? 
Yeah, there are now corpses scattered throughout Mago HQ. When the General runs back to Mari to tell her about this development, Mari says, “It looks like the filter got turned off.” She then tells him she’s located Sanabi: “It’s in the basement. Sanabi, what you’ve been looking all over for. Isn’t that all you cared about?”
The statue in the main hall activates, revealing itself to be a robot, and instructs any remaining Mago executives to commit suicide according to the final resolution protocol. Mari states that Mago Group is destroying the city because it’s committed high treason, which is punishable by the death of ten generations(25). It would much easier to just kill everyone and erase all evidence. What’s the crime, then? Mari tells the General, “Your mere existence.”
She also tells him to question himself, saying “Who are you?” Around this time the statue comes to life and is about to kill the characters for disobeying the final resolution protocol, but before anything can happen the statue’s head is promptly smashed in by a large metal sphere. It’s Major Song from the army, from the prologue. She’s here to save the day, right?
“Long time no see,” she says. She walks towards the General and passes by him, stopping in front of Mari. “Miss.”(26)
The two have a terse conversation. Song tells Mari she’s here to take her out of the city. A nuclear explosion is imminent, and that’s why the army is here. 
Our General is very confused and asks the two to stop for a moment, even putting his hand on Song’s shoulder. In response, Song grabs him by the chain arm and throws him against the ground. “How dare you put your hand on me?” she says. 
So remember when, way way earlier, I asked you to remember that Mari refers to the General using the title “아저씨?” Well, now is when it comes up again! Sorry to interrupt the scene, folks. 
You probably know that Japanese utilizes a complex system of honorifics to properly address other people; many of you are likely familiar with the -sans, -samas, -chans, and -kuns of the Japanese language thanks to the prevalence of anime. Well, Korean, being a language that is closely related to Japanese, also uses a ton of honorifics and titles (as well as different verb endings depending on level of formality, but that stuff is beyond my extremely limited Korean). I will point out a few titles that are relevant to this essay. 
“아저씨,” romanized ajeossi, is—like I mentioned earlier—used to refer to a man older than the speaker. The honorific -ssi (pronounced “shee,” despite what the romanization thinks) in particular is used when the speaker is addressing someone who is of the same or of a higher social status. It’s an honorific that’s used for acquaintances, basically people you’re not very close to, and it’s rude to use this when addressing someone you know well. 
So when Mari uses this title to address the General, what does that tell us? It’s fairly simple: Mari is respectful but distant. As she said earlier, the General is not her father, and her manner of address reflects this. Hang on to this idea of her being distant, I’ll bring it up later. 
Another title we see in the game is “선배님,” romanized seonbaenim; it’s used to address a senior or elder in a given organization. The honorific -nim is used to address people of a higher rank than the speaker as well as people whom the speaker respects. 
We see Major Song and Colonel Baek address the General this way in the prologue. This isn’t out of the ordinary given their military ranks. 
Now here’s the kicker. Here, in Mago HQ, Song does not use honorifics at all when addressing the General. While this kind of thing would be acceptable between close friends or family members, this kind of language is completely inappropriate—like shockingly rude levels of inappropriate—given that Song is talking to someone who’s supposed to be her senior officer. 
Now I know what you’re thinking: “I can already tell Major Song doesn’t like the General! She literally threw him! I didn’t need that explanation!” Well, what if I told you I’m so fixated on the game I decided to write an essay about it, and one of its main goals is to give the reader some cultural context behind the game? Korean is a high-context language, and stuff like this is innately understood by Korean players. I want people who don’t speak Korean, including myself, to experience it a bit like the Korean speakers would. That is why I went off on a whole tangent about the Korean language. 
So given all that extra linguocultural context, let’s get back to the game. Anyways, Song is about to straight-up kill the General when Mari says, “Wait! Just let the mister (ajeossi) go.”
“Mister? Did you just call him ‘mister?’” Song asks. She turns towards the General, then back towards Mari. “.. Are you role playing or something?” Here, Song cannot comprehend why Mari is using a polite term. 
Song says she had to break a lot of rules to get here, and Mari pulls out a gun. Yeah, remember that? When Song asks what Mari’s gonna do with the gun, she presses the muzzle against her own jaw. 
“Let him go. He.. needs to go. To the basement.” Mari pauses and addresses the General. “Mister? It’s confusing, right? I’m sure… nothing makes sense right now. Just remember one thing. Sanabi. Remember. You’re here to find Sanabi. Find Sanabi.. And get your revenge. What’s important is making it to the end.”
And then Major Song picks him up and throws him away.(27)
We find the General in an elevator. Once it stops, he gets up and slowly makes his way to the door, after which he tumbles down a flight of stairs illuminated by the glow of the elevator. It’s a metaphorical fall from grace: he’s been rejected by Song, and even Mari has told him to leave. There’s nothing left, and this is our lowest point. 
The tumble/flop is kinda cute, actually. I am enjoying these animations way too much. In fact, these animations are so good this game appeared in a video about the best game animation of 2023! (28)
The General tries to get the chip to work again, but to no avail. He’s slumped against the wall, defeated, and a ghostlike memory of his daughter runs past him and away from the stairs leading up. That’s when the lights leading downstairs flicker on. 
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I think everyone who’s existed on this earth can tell this is symbolic of heaven and hell, with the stairs going up illuminated in white light and the stairs going down cast in red. Even the small details are telling: the stairs up look more polished and are lined with flowers, while the stairs down are more industrial, complete with a railing and pipe. The track that plays here is titled “The Final Crossroad,” and our good ol’ SANABI leitmotif returns. 
When the General approaches the stairs leading up, he sees a memory of sorts. It’s a ghostlike image of the daughter behind him, almost as if she’s compelling him to go down, to descend into hell, and find Sanabi. To take his revenge. For her. 
Here you’re given a choice: you can head back upstairs to figure out whatever the heck is going on, or head downstairs and destroy Sanabi. 
And if you approach the stairs leading down, you see another “ghost” memory, but this time of Mari, who’s been your companion throughout this game. You have to choose between the past and the present. Revenge or salvation. Heaven or hell. 
This is where the dialogue choices come back, by the way. When you reach the foot of each stairwell, you’re basically asked to confirm your choice—you can pick “…” if you haven’t decided yet and “Going Up/Down” to confirm your choice. The game is essentially telling you to choose wisely, although I have a pretty good idea of which direction most players wind up taking. 
While the upstairs ending is the true ending, let’s take a look at the downstairs ending first, since it’s fairly short. 
We open on a group of Mago personnel in a large control room, illuminated by an enormous white screen, discussing the overheating nuclear reactor. Their plan is to keep it overheated so it’ll eventually explode and wipe Mago City off the map, leaving no trace of anything behind; apparently it’s “the only way Mago Corporation will survive.” We can surmise they’re talking about destroying their city to cover Mago Group’s tracks.
The door bangs and the security personnel immediately train their guns towards it. “Who goes there?!” one of them shouts. The door opens and a person, stumbling and bleeding, runs out, managing to scream about “the project” before a mechanical claw grabs him and pulls him back through the door. 
What follows is a sequence that looks as though it’s pulled straight from a horror film. The enormous screen turns red and flickers intermittently as the General slaughters everyone in the control room. The scene is absolutely terrifying, in no small part thanks to the music that plays during the scene, the sound effects, and the excellent animation. I cannot praise the animation in this game enough, it seems. 
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The last person who hasn’t yet been crushed into a pulp says, “You’ve been deceived. Sanabi doesn’t even exist.” 
The General kills him. “I don’t want to hear it,” he says. He surveys his handiwork, then pulls out the Steel Tiger medal. It’s heavily scuffed, with its eyes in particular being completely blacked out. 
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We flashback to when the Steel Tiger was unmarred. It’s another memory with the daughter, but something’s wrong. The screen glitches heavily, the daughter’s words break down and repeat—then she says, “Sanabi eliminated. Mission accomplished. Terminating project.”
We return to the control room. “It’s important…… to make it to the end,” the General says, presumably his last words. And that’s it. The game takes you back to the menu after this. 
You can find the scene here. The video does contain flashing lights. 
The achievement you get for picking the downstairs ending, by the way, is “What’s important is seeing this through to the end,” with the description “Chose the lie you want to believe.” At this point in the game it’s clear that things aren’t as they seem, but if the General decides to head downstairs and continue his original mission, he’s ignoring these developments in favor of giving in to his rage. The Steel Tiger’s blacked-out eyes in particular represent the General choosing not to see the truth in favor of, as the achievement puts it, the comforting lie. (And Sanabi doesn’t exist? What is that supposed to mean? We’ll see.)
While I was surprised the downstairs ending wasn’t longer than this—maybe I was hoping for a longer wind-up and thus more suspense—perhaps this was the best way to go about it. It’s befitting of a Korean revenge story: bloody, brutal, and not quite as satisfying as one might expect. And besides, I can’t really think of anything I want to add to this ending. A level, perhaps? A boss fight? Those would’ve detracted from the ending, and it seems to me that the devs’ intent wasn’t to make revenge glamorous or appealing, as gameplay would make it, but rather… deeply unsettling, and perhaps a little sad. 
Now let’s double back and take a look at the upstairs ending, the golden ending, whatever you want to call it. Here we’ll find the answers we crave. 
We head upstairs, where Major Song is waiting for us. She doesn’t seem to understand anything we say, and she tells us she’s impressed by everything we’ve done in the city. 
And that’s when she drops the bombshell. 
“Advanced combat bots are targets of concern for their mere existence.”
There’s a pause, then she adds, “Yes, I’m talking about you. You.”
“I’m a combat bot…” our General says, lowering his head and raising his hand to his hat.(29)
Song tells him, “I know you saved that girl a couple times. And I’m grateful for that. Truly, I am. But that’s that, and this is this. I can’t just pretend I didn’t see you.”
She activates her metal sphere. It floats into the air and starts spinning. It’s also on fire. Oh, and the boss music kicks in, too. 
“What you are… Why you are with the girl… I have so many questions, but I won’t ask. Because we’re not supposed to be curious.” Song pulls out her shotgun and spins it in one hand. “I shall execute the king’s orders.”
Major Song’s boss fight is the final one in the game, and it comes with an appropriately intense soundtrack: “The Execution of The King’s Order,” which you can find here. The powerful beat is complimented by Latin chanting, which according to the composer doesn’t have any particular meaning; it’s simply using the voice as another instrument. Wish I could tell you more, but again, music theory really isn’t my strong suit. 
Song has an immediate counter if you try to grab her; you have to use your charged attack if you want to land any hits. After enough hits, she transitions to her second phase. And like all good sequential boss fights, she has a cutscene between phases. 
She staggers onto a platform. “You.. What are you? How are you fighting exactly like the general?” She removes the military goggles on her head. “Yes.. I see. So that’s what it was. I sensed that something was off from [a] long time ago. There’s no way he would’ve died so easily.”
Her fist tightens. “You… You must have something to do with the general’s death.” The goggles break in her fist. “Forget about dying an easy death. I’ll chew on your limbs into a mulch, and then tear your head off and see for myself.”
And that’s the transitional cutscene. Fun!
Once you manage to beat her, the game transitions into QTEs where our General and Song engage in a close-quarters fight. The animation conveys the physicality and brutality of the fight very well, and I love it. 
Once Song is defeated, she tells us, “Do you even know who you’re mimicking?! A tin can like you shouldn’t dare do that!” So the General was a real person, and we’re a digitized copy. Like Justice. 
It’s around this time that Colonel Baek shows up(30), along with a squad of military bots that have surrounded the area using cloaking technology. He tells us not to move, but our General stumbles towards him anyway. He’s confused and hurting from Song’s apparent betrayal, he just learned he’s a robot, and he’s looking for something, anything that’s familiar to him. 
Baek punches him, of course. Hard enough to send him flopping onto the ground. It’s a physical and metaphorical gut punch. 
Baek tells Song that the military has been ordered to withdraw from the city. An explosion is imminent and the Royal Court has arrived to use “it,” which appears to be a floating palace/airship/superweapon, although the game never clarifies what it is exactly. When Song asks where Mari is, it turns out she left military custody and has chosen to stay in the city. 
When our General tries to talk again, Baek says, “There’s an encryption filter on its voice.” So this is the reason the military couldn’t understand us, but Mari had zero problem with that, presumably because she’s a hacker. So if she knew we were a robot the whole time and not an actual person, why did she act like we were human? What’s up with her?
Song removes the filter and our General addresses the two by name. Baek asks, “How do you know our names?”
“I guess… the memories aren’t all fake,” our General responds. He then addresses the two as “Special task force of Uigeumbu No. 17. Colonel Hotae Baek. Major Isun Song.”(31)(32) He then adds, “I have a question for you instead. What are you guys doing here? The order for Operation 0… Is this fake, too?”
They decide to knock him out for interrogation later, because honestly, if you found a robot copying your dead superior officer, you’d have a lot of questions. 
Chapter 5: Reunion
Scenes from the prologue reappear, but they’re… wrong. Visual glitches occur, there’s a distinct lack of music, and the General never speaks in these replayed memories. The dialogue is different, too.
“Sir, the operation has been confirmed. The briefing will commence. This helicopter is currently flying above (SNB_target_location). Approximately 24 hours ago, (SNB_target_situation) was established. Even though the tech department has concluded that it’s a (SNB_target_possibility), no other news so far.”
Other lines of dialogue follow in this vein. We even see our daughter tell us that making it to the end isn’t important, but her words promptly glitch out. 
After this we get a little scene in the military plane; our General is still knocked out. According to Song, he has a so-called cognitive restraint preventing him from recognizing humans, meaning that from his perspective, the world is completely devoid of people, although she doesn’t quite know why. She also adds that this filter doesn’t seem to include herself or Baek. All she can do for now that won’t cause the digital personality to reset is lower the security level; only the digital mind can remove the restraint from themselves. 
“If this is really the general… then I know he can do it. He’s always done the impossible,” Baek says. 
We return to the void with our daughter for—what, the fifth time? I wasn’t keeping track, so I actually have no clue. Our General realizes something is off, though. We’re taken back to the beginning of the prologue yet again, but this time, when our daughter runs towards her dad to hug him, she glitches out instead and says “Memory replay was denied.”
“Is this… A dream?” our General asks himself. He runs past his daughter, then stops and turns around as the world abruptly turns into a computerized, blue-green landscape. 
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Our General sighs, then proceeds. He’s gonna figure out what’s going on here, and so are we. 
The music of our memories, titled “Digitalized Dreams,” also includes the SANABI leitmotif—albeit in a distorted form. I only noticed because I listened to this composition about eighty thousand times. This track is great, by the way. There’s a slight sense of dread that permeates the track, and the computerized sound/glitch effects really help sell the setting. I know like next to nothing about music theory, by the way, so feel free to enlighten me about… any of this game’s tracks, honestly. 
In this part of the game, you platform through the computer system and find recordings about a certain project, which you can now access because lowered your security levels, allowing you to access files you couldn’t have otherwise. While this is sort of infodump-y, video games are a preferable medium for this kind of thing: games are interactive, meaning the player feels like they’re discovering information rather than having it be spoonfed to them. 
And if you’re thinking, “Well, still not ideal,” that’s what the devs think as well. Like I mentioned earlier, this game was intended to be a metroidvania, with different abilities unlocking different areas of the map and the player slowly uncovering the mysteries that way. When they realized they couldn’t make such a game, they had to restructure the reveals in this way. Personally, I think this still works decently, but like I said, interactivity is key. 
However, since this is a blog post (and I still have to recap the game to refresh people’s memories as well as for the folks whose first exposure to this game is through this post), this key element will be lost here.(33) So I’ll just bullet through these recordings real quick. Or, you know, as quickly as I can given I’m the kind of person who just will not shut up about things they like. The length of this post is, I believe, demonstrative enough. 
Record 1. Meeting: Some of Mago Group’s CEOs and a group of researchers discuss starting a project Mago Group has wanted for a long time. The researchers are basically forced into this high-risk, extremely illegal project with no choice. The head researcher also asks where the personality data for the project came from. 
Record 182 Regular Report: The head researcher clarifies that digital personalities work the same way as a fleshy human would, so they can’t just give an order to the project and expect it to be perfectly obedient. Attempting to control personalities directly resulted in failures such as Justice, so the researchers have decided to indirectly control the project using the desire for revenge. 
Record 478 Regular Meeting: Simulations of the project repeatedly gives up on getting revenge, so the head researcher suggests changing the target of the bombing from the project’s wife to his daughter, since his daughter provides mental support. It’s easy to tell when a memory is fake, however, so the head researcher suggests limiting and reordering the project’s memories. 
Record 1190 Regular Report: The memory alteration was successful, causing the project’s rate of giving up on revenge to drop drastically. However, there’s a concept known as “Sanabi” in the project’s psyche that serves as an allusion to not having to make it to the end that also causes him to give up revenge. Also, more Elon Musk slander! 
Record 2379 Urgent Meeting: The researchers are looking into Sanabi, trying to figure out its source, but they can’t find any information about it in the project’s memory. That’s because whatever memory it was, along with the memories regarding the wife’s death, have been purposely removed from the project since its creation.(34) Sanabi is a concept from a deleted memory. Oh, and the person who made the project was said project’s daughter, Mari. 
Record 2801 Regular Report: The head researcher tells the execs that the best way to deal with Sanabi is to make it the target of revenge, thus weakening it as a concept.(35)
Secret Wiretap Record 283,951 Research Team 1: A researcher brings up the Final Resolution Protocol, which will destroy the city if the project is ever leaked. In addition, Mago Electronics has released a new product, the Worker robot, which has a wire arm that behaves identically to the chain arm used by the project. These workers are being mass produced, and the researchers suspect Mago Group is planning a coup. 
Record 3777 Ad-hoc Meeting: The head researcher explains to Director Choi that a cognitive filter, meant to be a mental stabilizer, has been added to the project. This filter prevents the project from being able to see human beings; it’s intended to a) produce an inexplicable situation where Sanabi has caused humans to disappear, thus making the project’s incongruities seem unimportant by comparison, and b) to prevent the project from receiving information that contradicts the false narrative the researchers have made. However, the filter includes a few exceptions—presumably because those people already appeared in the project’s memories, or something along those lines.(36)
Record X. Completion Report: 10 years after it was started, the head researcher presents the completed Sanabi Project to the Mago execs and is promptly shot by the head of security. All the researchers have been killed to prevent them from leaking information, and security has been ordered to kill anyone that finds out about the project. Mago Group’s CEO, Director Kim, then makes an anime villain speech about how Mago Group deserves to rule Joseon instead of the Royal Court. 
These records also come with so-called source memories, i.e. the unmodified, original memories, i.e. what really happened. 
Basically: 
The memories of the project were reshuffled, as stated in above. Kid Mari didn’t die in the explosion. 
The General on his little revenge spree is somehow even scarier, as other characters point out he’s basically working outside the law. He also calls the enforcement bureau “[the weapons dealer’s] best friends,” which I’ll bring up later. 
The General was the one who ordered Operation Zero, an operation to wipe out multiple criminal organizations. He also seems to blame Baek for the death of his wife. 
Later on, he later decides to retire from the military to support Mari, since her mother is dead and all that. 
In one of the source memories, Song confirms that yes, it was Mari who hacked into the military base because she wanted to see her dad. She adds that Mari has seemed anxious since the death of her mother, though she’s not sure why. 
Alright, now let’s go over these points. 
First: So that’s why we never saw a mom in the flashbacks! 
Second, this explains a lot of the bizarre mysteries that have been floating around this game. Why did everyone in the city disappear without a trace? They haven’t, we just can’t see them. Why does Mari act so weird around us sometimes? We’re not really human, we’re a messed-up copy of her father. Why can’t we physically hear certain words? They’re filtered out as part of the program so we can’t figure out what we really are. Do the interception lasers target us because we’re entirely robotic as opposed to being heavily augmented?
Still doesn’t answer what Sanabi is, though it’s related to the repeated phrase about not getting to the end. Memories not fully erased and linked to the subconscious, mayhaps? Neither does it explain why Mari made a copy of her father sans her mother’s memories. 
Earlier I mentioned I’d discuss the corruption of the enforcement bureau, which was only mentioned once in a throwaway line… but I’ll still talk about it. It’s quite common in Korean media, like in the aforementioned revenge thrillers, to have the police force be incompetent or corrupt. This is rooted in—you guessed it—Korean history, where incidents such as the Gwangju Massacre in 1980 gave the populace a very dim view of the government, martial law, and enforcement of the leader’s will. 
Something I’ll note here: The researchers changed the target of revenge because otherwise, the project would give up quickly to take care of his daughter instead. This is something I absolutely love, by the way. Perhaps in a story made in the West, the General’s pursuit of vengeance would lead to his daughter turning bitter about being neglected, leading to a confrontation of sorts. But not here, not in a game from Korea, where devotion to family is so deeply entrenched in the culture. Here the General will always drop revenge to take care of his only child instead. It’s sweet. 
A quick note (I have a lot of these, holy moons) of clarification from me: The Final Resolution Protocol was activated when Mari’s colleague uncovered the Sanabi Project as part of security measures. Using and altering a digital personality like this is basically the most illegal thing anyone can do, and judging from the info we got from the bad ending, we can figure out that Mago Group decided to purge its executives and destroy the city to get rid of evidence and ensure the corporation’s survival. 
After all that, our General sees a memory of Mari and recalls the promise he made to her: that he’ll get her to the top floor. It’s an echo of the first time he said it, back at the factory, but with added weight and meaning this time now that he knows who both himself and Mari are. 
After this, our General wakes up from coma (hibernation?) land and looks into a mirror. He finds a robot staring back. 
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The old members of the unit acknowledge the robot as their General when he completes the army motto—“We are owls that never cry and tigers that don’t leave footprints.” If you recall the Steel Tiger medal that appeared several times throughout this game, we get… TIGER SYMBOLISM! The tiger is a powerful guardian in Korean folklore(37), so yeah, I can see the military incorporating them as a symbol of might. 
Anyways, before I get too distracted I have to finish writing this post that’s already a gajillion words long, but, you know, we’re in the home stretch. Our General’s told he’s been dead for ten years and that the Royal Court intends to use “it” (i.e. their unspecified WMD that can make Mago City literally vanish) before the reactor explodes. Our General decides to return to the city to see Mari one last time; he made a promise to her, after all.(38) Baek gives him his own hat, and Song returns his worn, scratched Steel Tiger metal. “You.. You’ve gotten rusty,” our General says. He asks them to take care of Mari—he doesn’t expect to make it out of the city alive. And with that he’s ready. He steps out of the helicopter. 
The thing that I love about this is that it’s reminiscent of the mission briefing from the beginning of the game, but with a few key differences. Such as, for instance, the General getting angry at Baek for letting his wife die in the source memory, and later telling him in this scene that there was nothing that could’ve been done about his wife. We have the briefing, of course, but this time it’s real and our General acknowledges his true identity. And most importantly, while the General’s helicopter is shot out of the sky in the beginning, here he falls out of the helicopter of his own volition. Now that he knows who he is, he’s been freed from Mago Group’s influence. It’s the first real decision he makes. 
Here’s a neat little fact. As we plummet from the sky, we pass the different levels of the city; its different color palettes have been emphasized here. The upper levels are mostly shades of pink, the factory is yellow, the business district is blue, and the slums are purple. Pretty neat, huh? The different color palettes really help make the levels feel distinctive. I love it. 
Our General lands in the slums, removes his limiter and breaks it, and looks up at Mago City. Yes, we’re going to ascend the city again but much faster, Celeste-style. 
The SANABI leitmotif also appears in “The Rise” and “The Long Voyage,” the latter of which also brings in phrases heard in other tracks. All in all, the leitmotif appears in a total of seven tracks if we include the title song. 
Between the occasional glimpses our General gets of real humans and, you know, gameplay, we’re also treated to black-and-white child drawings accompanied by explanations. It’s Mari!(39) For the second time in this game, we’re gonna get to see things from her point of view (the first time was when we got to play as her character).
Unfortunately Tumblr has an image limit of 30 per post. Which means I have to be economical for once, so here’s my favorite of Mari’s pictures. 
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Mari tells us that her mother died in a terrorist bombing aimed at her father, and Dad was never the same afterwards. Mari wanted to help him, so she studied programming and used the army’s data to construct a digital copy of her father, all at the age of eight. All she had to do, she thought, was remove the memories of Mom’s death from Dad’s memories. That would make him happy again, right?
Mari finished the digital personality and presented it to her father. And, according to her, it “was the first and last time I saw my father in a fiery rage.” The thing is, just possessing a digital personality is extremely illegal, so Mari’s passion project could literally get her entire family killed for treason. That’s when gunmen enter the house, opening fire. Mari’s dad is killed trying to protect her. 
Mari’s computer, she later learned, had a backdoor. And the only thing missing from the house after the attack is a computer hard drive, the one with the personality data she had made. She entered a downward spiral, convinced she’s responsible for her father’s death, and used her genius computer skills to find who took the personality data. She found out that Mago Group was in possession of the technology and had altered her father’s data, turning him into a weapon Mago Group could turn on their enemies. 
As Mari herself puts it, “Innocence is a sin. And ungovernable talent is a curse. When these two meet… life becomes hell.”
When Mago Group discovered the leak of their top secret project, they initiated the Final Solution Protocol (we saw this in the Mari POV scene from earlier). Mari decided to grab a copy of the Project and place it in a worker bot. 
“What’s the point… Even I don’t know why I’m doing this. The Sanabi project is no longer my father. I know that better than anyone else. […] He won’t be able to remember me no matter what happens.” She later tells us that she struggles to remember her father with each passing day. “If I try… If I can show him my old self… Maybe he’ll remember me. It would be wonderful… for him to miraculously remember me. Will he be happy to see me? Will… he forgive me?”
So. Analysis time (again). 
SANABI, you see, is about grief. Our General sees his daughter die at the start of the game and lashes out violently in response; later on in the game, when we see his source memories, we can see that his wife’s death profoundly affected him. Mari herself says as much when she tells us that her father was never the same after the bombing. Then Mari sees her father die and becomes withdrawn and isolated, madly seeking out her father’s killer while her pain and guilt threaten to crush her. 
The developers have have stated there are plenty of inspirations for SANABI, citing Ghost in the Shell and Interstellar as being the strongest sources in the theme department. Ghost in the Shell is… complicated, but has a central theme about the nature of humanity as it collides with technology, exploring what it means to be human in a mechanical body. There is also memory alteration and a sentient computer program developed under the name Project 2501, but if I listed every similarity between this film and SANABI we’d be here all day. 
The film provides no definitive answers to the questions it poses about how human Motoko Kusanagi is—though the characters frequently bring up the idea of the ghost, or the human soul/essence, that remains intact even after one’s physical flesh has been largely replaced by machinery. The sentient program tells Motoko that he has a ghost, which makes him… human? Ghost in the Shell isn’t exactly easy to parse. 
Then there’s Interstellar. Yes, Interstellar, the Christopher Nolan movie about flying into a black hole.(40) This film’s link to SANABI is hard to intuit until you remember that Cooper’s arc is about connecting with his daughter and how love is the one force that transcends time and space and all that. So yeah, there’s clearly a thematic connection. 
According to Wonder Potion’s head developer Yun Seung-Hyeon, “Ghost in the Shell in particular is kind of the father figure that brought cyberpunk so far, and there's always this point where there's this incredible humanity in a technologized future where there's no humanity, and that's what I wanted to convey. […] Similarly, in Interstellar, I think it's humanity that saves the protagonist in the end in a universe hundreds of millions of light years away. There's a paradox of being saved by humans when you're so far away from them. I guess you could say that SANABI is also a story about humanity.”
What he is talking about is the irony of humanity, specifically what makes someone human, persisting even in the absence of physical humans. That humanity is exemplified as love and compassion. Even when surrounded by a noticeable lack of humanity thanks to the cognitive filter, the General—a machine—displays more humanity than the Mago Group executives who weaponized him. This game has a very strong sense of dramatic irony, especially on a second playthrough; for instance, Mari’s breakdown at the start of chapter four is immediately thrown into clarity if the player knows the General is a robot. Feel free to scroll back up to the part where I wrote it out, even if it’s several thousand words away by my estimation. 
Because SANABI, you see, is about connection. The General ascends Mago City for the second time because he made a promise to Mari. Mari placed the Sanabi Project into a worker because she hoped against hope to see her real father again, and even after that hope is dashed and dashed again, there’s still a connection, and when they see each other at the end of the game—whoops, we’re not there yet. 
It’s time, folks, for the ending. Which there is no way I’d do justice, so I’ll just leave a link here for you to watch and write up a recap. I’ll see you at the end.  
Mari programmed her copy of the Sanabi Project to stop the nuclear reactor from exploding, but even when said project realized who he truly was and returned to her, she doesn’t see him as her real father. He’s only a tin can that mimics a human, after all. A fake. 
Remember all the void flashbacks the General kept getting? They were from his subconscious, which finally dredges up the memory that makes Sanabi so important to him. He’s trying to play the harmonica, but his daughter tells him that getting to the end isn’t important if he gets all the notes wrong. But it’s alright. It took Mari a while to learn this song from her mother. 
Mari admits she’s sad about her mother’s passing. She tells her father that after her cat Mufin died, her mother would play a song on the harmonica for her, and her sadness would fade. Her mother also told her that with every hello comes a goodbye. 
Mari tells her dad she knows playing with her must be physically taxing, especially after work. But she appreciates that he still goes out of his way to make her happy.
Mari says she wants to be a soldier like her father and recounts imagined adventures that parallel the events of the game (fighting the Writ of Execution, taking a selfie with Justice, avoiding combat with the Overseer, and riding a flying train). 
She then asks her father to make her a promise to play this song, Sanabi, whenever she feels sad. The song is, of course, the leitmotif that’s present in multiple tracks throughout the game. 
We return to the present, where the General plays Sanabi on the harmonica. Mari hugs him, finally recognizing him as her father. She tells him how scared she was of acknowledging he was really dead. She tells him how sorry she is for giving up on him. He tells her it’s alright and there’s nothing to apologize for. 
In order to save Mago City, the General decides to shut down the reactor. He, the Sanabi Project, started this mess; it’s time he puts an end to it. Mari begs him not to go, tells him she’ll try to fix him, that she can’t live without him. Why does she have to lose him again, and so soon?(41) He tells her that with every hello comes a goodbye. Getting to the end is not what matters; what does is that we spend the time we have with each other. 
The General gives Mari the Steel Tiger medal and salutes her, calling her “my commander.” In the original Korean he says “나위… 대장님 [daejangnim].” Daejang is a rank that literally translates to “grand commander” and corresponds to the rank of general; it’s the highest rank available to an officer in the South Korean army(42). The honorific -nim(43), like I said earlier, denotes respect for a higher-ranking individual. This is a callback to the scene at the beginning of the game when Mari says she wants to be the general when playing with her father(44); it’s a reminder of happier times, one last opportunity for the two to connect before the General is truly gone. 
The General leaves to shut down the reactor and Mari slumps against the wall. She pulls out the Steel Tiger medal, which glints in the light. 
I cried. 
It is now analysis time. 
Here we have two individuals who are forced to let go of the past. The General may be a robot but it is still very much him, something Mari only recognizes when he plays the harmonica for her; up until then she only sees her father as the smiling figure in her childhood, a father she first lost when her mother passed away and he became a shadow of his former self. The General only recognizes Mari as his child once he lets his daughter, and by extension his past, go by choosing the upstairs route. They have to let go of their lost loved ones in order to see them again—and yet the game refuses to give us the happy ending. The General has to tie loose ends; he can’t stay with Mari, no matter how much both of them want to. Now they have to let go of their present for the future. 
The General giving his daughter the Steel Tiger medal is a metaphorical passing of the torch. He is entrusting her with the task of carrying on his legacy, to remember him. Not only is it a reminder of Mari’s father, it’s a representation of their connection. It’s scratched and battered, because that connection has been tested, but it still holds firm. (Remember how the Steel Tiger’s eyes were scratched out in the downstairs ending? Then it represented how that connection was twisted and severed.)
A quick note on the game’s music, and this will be very quick because I know nothing about musical composition: I firmly believe the game wouldn’t have nearly as much emotional impact as it does if Invader 303 hadn’t done such a fantastic job on the game’s track. It’s that damn leitmotif, the one that represents the real Sanabi. It plays during the title screen, it’s in Mari’s theme song, it appears during emotional moments. Where it doesn’t appear is whenever something happens that the General thinks is due to Sanabi, such as right before his daughter dies in the beginning cutscene. Instead, we get “An Old Foe” (I like to refer to this song as “threat music”). No leitmotif to be heard here. It’s brilliant if you ask me. 
And here’s something I noticed: for the most part, whenever we hear the leitmotif it’s in B flat major. When we hear it played on the harmonica—in the subway, on the train, and at the end of the game—it’s in B major. This scale shift, known officially as modulation, serves to make the melody more cheerful-sounding and hopeful. 
I would also like to add that during this scene, the screen in the background cracks in a way that visually parallels the peach tree that is present during flashbacks. 
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Some time later, we see Mari again, standing over a grave in the idyllic hills where she used to live. She leaves a flower there. 
The ground shakes and Mari looks up as a military helicopter flies overhead. She puts on a gauntlet of some kind, closes her eyes to collect herself, and runs off, shooting a grappling hook from her glove. She’s moved on from her father’s death and has chosen to follow in his footsteps, joining the military and even designing a grappling hook reminiscent of her father’s Chain Arm. It’s a great conclusion to her story. 
After that we see the title card and credits roll to Ending Means Starting Again. We see some scenes of events occurring after the events of the game, like Mago City being evacuated once the factory is deemed too dangerous and Mari joining the military and cleaning out her apartment. 
Overall, SANABI is a fantastic game and I was glad to talk about it with y’all. If you don’t have the game, I hope you’ll consider picking it up or watching a playthrough, because to me it’s a masterpiece. I’m really excited to see what the game’s studio Wonder Potion will do next. Speaking of which, where’s the DLCs they announced? People on the official Discord are already making Silksong jokes—[PROGRAM HAS BEEN SACRIFICED TO TEAM CHERRY TO SPEED SILKSONG DEVELOPMENT]
Footnotes
(1) “산나비” in the original Korean, lit. “mountain butterfly.” The game’s English release was originally gonna be titled “SANNABI: The Revenant,” matching the Korean title’s Revised Romanization, but the game publisher’s localization expert told them that “SANABI” was better. 
(2) Officially known as the Brigadier General. The General is never given a name in SANABI proper.(*)
(3) If you try to walk away from the house multiple times, the daughter will get fed up and just drag you to the house. This nets you an achievement, by the way, titled “There is nowhere to run.”
(4) ㅓ, written as “eo” in Revised Romanization, is designated with [ʌ] in the International Phonetic Alphabet and is known as the open-mid back unrounded vowel. It is pronounced similarly to [ɑ], the same way “o” in “got” is pronounced in Standard American English. It is not pronounced “ee-ah” or “ee-oh;” it is one vowel sound. If you know Koreans with “eo” in their name, they are probably endlessly annoyed by English speakers mispronouncing it. 
(5) Honestly, if PlayFrame hadn’t covered this game in a one-off (later expanded to a full playthrough, which is the same one I linked at the beginning of the post), I would not be familiar with it. It was Dan’s praise of SANABI that compelled me to check it out, and now here I am, writing an absurdly long, rambling essay about it. By the way, when I learned Dan decided to do a full playthrough of this game, I actually screamed. Like out loud. 
(6) Reread footnote 4. Yep. Go back and reread it. 
(7) Kang Seon was namedropped by Cheol and the boss earlier. The achievement you get after you defeat him confirms his name. 
(8) If you’ve seen this video about the prevalence of god-killing in JRPGs, Korean media’s all-consuming hatred for the rich applies a similar principle but minus the false god metaphor. Moony also made a two-parter about the Korean gacha drama and explains Korean culture and history far better than I ever could, so make sure to give those a watch. 
(9) There’s this whole system of rules about funerals and grieving in Korean culture that I don’t want to get into, which were an even bigger deal in the days of the Joseon dynasty to the point where how long a royal wore mourning clothes was a huge political deal. Really. I made this footnote just so I could bring this up. 
(10) You have no idea how tempted I am to call them murder drones. 
(11) *ahem* Intelligence acquisition, as Mari would insist. 
(12) “나일론,” romanized “Na Il-lon.” Elon Musk is known as “일론 머스크” in hangul. Cheeky. Apparently the reason why this game has a reference to the evil overlord of Twitter is because one of the game’s Tumblbug (basically Korean Kickstarter) backers thought Director Na’s original design wasn’t memorable enough. (Source if you want it. It’s pretty funny.)
(13) The General also tells her to cut the small talk, but Mari points out that’s two conditions. She’s right, you know. 
(14) There’s merch for Mach Hedgehog, the Legend of Greenhat Boy, Mega Uario, and Time Samurai. The last one’s a reference to Katana Zero, from which SANABI draws inspiration in the form of dialogue presentation and art style. 
(15) Watching people hypothesize about a story that you already know inside and out and seeing what they get right and what they get wrong is so immensely entertaining. 
(16) This includes a scene where Mari gets attacked by pigeons. Are the pigeons in Korea particularly nasty? (Yes, apparently.)
(17) This image also mentions a haetae (해태) in reference to Justice’s mask. A haetae is a mythical horned creature that represents… you guessed it… justice! 
(18) I’m pretty sure this is another early development thing like the missing houses from earlier. 
(19) Since the setting of SANABI is some kind of cyberpunk alternate history where the Great Joseon State is still a thing, we can safely assume the Royal Court refers to the government. As we will later see, the Royal Court is terrifying. 
(20) Unfortunately we won’t see him swinging around as a dinosaur. I’m still holding out hope for the DLC. 
(21) According to Mari, it was faster to replace the whole program than to stop the attack function. But that sure is convenient… 
(22) I timestamped the link to line up with what plays in the cutscene. 
(23) Well, at least that’s how I choose to interpret it. And I’m writing this dialogue in a semi-prose format because yes. 
(24) I don’t really mind Yahtzee or other people not liking this game, because everyone’s allowed to have their opinions and if they don’t like this game then fine, whatever, it’s not the end of the world. On the other hand, this is my comfort game and anyone who says it’s bad can duel me at high—[PROGRAM DELETED]
(25) Presumably like the nine familial exterminations, but worse. An unthinkably harsh punishment, even for the historical Joseon State, which is saying a lot. Joseon monarchs were up to all kinds of weird and horrific nonsense. 
(26) “아가씨,” romanized agassi, is a polite way to refer to a woman younger than the speaker. “Young lady” or “miss” would be a rough English equivalent. 
(27) This is followed by her grabbing Mari’s gun, breaking it, and giving Mari a slap upside the head. 
(28) Yes, this was made by the same person who did the LP I linked above.
(29) He strikes this pose a lot. Like to the point where my friend and Tumblr mutual Some started calling it his prissy head tilt. 
(30) While live reacting to the game, Some noticed how short the General was compared to the other military folks, so on a whim I decided to calculate the heights of some of the characters based on the height of an average Korean 8-year-old girl. The General comes out at 177 cm/5’10”, which is slightly taller than the average Korean man. Baek comes out at 225 cm, which is like, nearly 7’5”. That’s like basketball player height. Of course, that’s assuming the daughter is average for her height, and given her small stubby legs I have reason to assume she’s short for her age. We’ll never know unless we’re given a canon height for one of the characters, in which case I’ll be ready. 
(31) “의금부,” romanized Uigeumbu, was basically Joseon’s judiciary police and were responsible for arrests and interrogations of high crimes such as treason. They operated directly under the king’s control. 
(32) “Hotae Baek” and “Isun Song,” according to the original Korean, would be pronounced [ho:tʰe̞:pe̞k] and [i:sʌ̹n:soŋ] in IPA respectively—although keep in mind the surname comes first in Korean, so really it’s [pe̞k:ho:tʰe̞] and [soŋ:i:sʌ̹n].
(33) Lost in translation, if you will. Hehe, get it? Cuz this game was translated from Korean, and—[THE PROGRAM HAS BEEN DELETED FOR MAKING A LAME PUN.]
(34) The researchers always knew there was a gap in the project’s memory, of course. They had, however, assumed it was dissociative memory loss. A subsequent analysis revealed the pattern of memory loss was different from that of dissociative amnesia, as if the project’s memories had been purposefully removed. 
(35) The head researcher says that removing such an important concept could cause the personality to collapse, and making them forget the concept is nigh impossible. However, creating a sense of inconguity is fatal to the stability of the character (is this what happened to Justice on top of attempting direct control?), but the head researcher is confident that the project’s sheer hatred will cause him to ignore the incongruities. 
(36) Director Choi doesn’t like these exceptions, but the head researcher is like, “There’s, like, five exceptions in the filter out of all the human beings that exist. What are the odds of the project encountering these exceptions during operation?” Well… 
(37) The Republic of Korea’s national animal is a tiger. Tigers are everywhere in Korean art, too; feel free to browse this at your leisure if you’re interested. 
(38) Plus, you know, the fact that our robot here is super illegal, meaning that if anyone helps us it’ll constitute treason. He has to make this journey alone. 
(39) Far as I can tell, these are Mari’s thoughts and/or ventings. Feel free to interpret them however you want. I’m also just… incredibly tempted to try and mentally recreate whatever the devs’ vision for this game was near the beginning of development to try and figure out how they’d fit in these segments in the context of a metroidvania. But I won’t spend too much time on these hypotheticals, because at the end of the day, SANABI is the game we got. 
(40) There is also a giant sarcastic robot. 
(41) Arguably for the third time: first when her father changed after her mother’s death and second when her father died. 
(42) Not counting the five-star rank of 원수, or “General of the Army of the Republic of Korea,” because it has never been given. 
(43) I just realized that the honorific Szeth uses for Nightblood (“sword-nimi”) in The Stormlight Archive is probably based off the Korean -nim. This would make a lot of sense given Brandon Sanderson learned Korean when he was doing missionary work in the ROK. This comment has nothing to do with SANABI, I just wanted to say that. 
(44) I checked the Korean just to be sure, because the connection isn’t obvious in the English translation. Mari does use the term “대장님” in the intro cutscene. 
(*) This isn't technically true. If you're here because you followed up on the asterisk from footnote 2 and have not seen/played the game in full, I suggest you scroll back up, read the entire post, then come back here and place the following text through a ROT13 cypher: Va gur tnzr’f bevtvany Xberna, Znev vf xabja nf “금마리,” ebznavmrq nf Trhz Znev. Fvapr fur’f gur Trareny’f qnhtugre, jr pna nffhzr gung uvf fheanzr vf nyfb Trhz.
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