#it’s the craziest whiplash ever
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slendershift · 5 months ago
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shifting is so weird sometimes cuz why is one of my closest friends in one reality also my biggest enemy in another ..
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theghostofwilburtheworm · 6 months ago
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Today our school pastor said being in favor of marrige equality was the same as being in favor of death and it was making war on god right after his sermon on how you must respect and love everyone even your enemy or smth
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kezcore · 1 year ago
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why is furry drama always the most insane shit
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o-sunny-day · 2 months ago
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OKAY, SO.
@forgettable-au by @sunsestart :D
mainly intended for me ranting about how much I love the series, but also GIMME YOUR RANTS. WE NEED TO TALK. WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT????
I came into this, expecting Alphys, yes! NOT SANS??? So that was already whiplash.
Then we see THEM BEING FRIENDDDDSSSS AWWWW 😭 I LOVE THEIR DYNAMIC I WISH WE GOT MORE DETAIL OF IT IN UNDERTALE
But then… oh..going..somewhere…to eat… WWWAAAAAAAAA😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 STOP IT.
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but THATS ENOUGH OF CUTE CHARACTER DYNAMICS! WE GOTTA GET TO THE LORE
when I tell you. my jaw was. AGAPE. SANS??????!?!?!?!? WHY ARE YOU SO CHILL?>!?!?!?!?!
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HE UNDERSTOOD THAT????? WHY WAS HE SO SCARED??? DISTRESSED????? WHATS WRONG WINGDINGS???????????????????
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ok then I kinda just lost it on this last page.
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SO. THESE PAGES. JUST LIKE THE LAST UPDATE. WAS THE CRAZIEST WHIPLASH IVE EVER EXPERIENCED. BUT THESE I HAVE MUCH MORE TO SAY BECAUSE LORE???????????
So glad Alphys got an explanation now, makes me happy :3 shes learningggg
but also OH G O D IM SCARED. MORE SCARED THAN USUAL. Sans does not know about the secret compartment. ALSO THE SECRET TAPE??? Dont think he knows about that either. GOD DAMMIT W I N G D I N G S 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 S T A W P
also hmmm I wonder why digital audio just doesn’t like when he talks, poor guy.
OK BUT YKNOW WHAT GETS ME THE WORST??????? Sans and Alphys are chatting it up and being silly, while WINGDINGS. LIKE A GODAMN SUPER VILLAIN. IS CHILLING ALONE IN THE DARK LIKE NOOOOO
also poor Alphys being caught in the middle of this family drama like “oh- i mean- alr! i guess bro just wants to lie to you, thats chill ig.”
I FEEL LIKE I HAVE SO MUCH MORE TO SAY BUT I CANT SHAKE IT, THIS UPDATES GOT ME CHEWING ON IT FOR A WHILE. I L O V E I T
me when fprgblt Au brothss lie to eac other
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lorkonsghost · 7 months ago
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another post okay giant Jason relationship with the bat family.
Dick Grayson/nightwing
Talks about as decent brother when around other,
Dick
when they talk about jason like he's a baby a big angry baby who can do no wrong and everyone thinks he's crazy since Jason is easily the scariest thing they ever met
Bruce
it's similar to Canon but Bruce is more active in trying help get along with him and the family since Bruce thinks fighting as he has is enough.
Cass use Jason as a jumping off spot when they fight together it pisses Jason off but Cass doesn't care also Cass as shortest BatFam after Damien is not a fan of fighting Jason since if she gets grabbed its game over so when she fought Jason she was playing defensive in this au
Tim if titans tower happens is terrified of Jason for how easily he was beat tossed around like a rag doll in this au and but when gets over his fear their probably the closest siblings.
Tim if titans tower doesn't happen he is Jason number one defender simply because a few dead or fight Jason again is easy decision in his book like he remembers when in this au when Jason was fighting multiple bat at a time every week like it was nothing and he would rather not.
Steph has the most fun teaming with Jason since that means the brick house can take on most fodder no problem so the only real problem are big bads and they have craziest prank wars
Duke is weird since dc wants nothing with him at all. Though I think he has the most potential character growth in dc comics along side Cass and Jason of course if dc gave a shit about any of them dukes powers are so intriguing and dc does nothing with him sorry mini tangent but him Jason would be bound over being protectors of the daylight and crime ally respectfully
Babs is a weird character in general when it comes to Jason but I feel like though in this au she had the hardest time accepting Jason was red hood because while Bruce was in thick of it so he had to face it more directly and dick was just glad he could finally make with up Jason. Babs was watching from sidelines and the difference between kid Jason and adult Jason can give you whiplash but that sweet little boy is now bigger than a brick house a kills people so yeah although she helps Jason the most when she comes to accept that their the same Jason
Damian respect for Jason is a lot since he easily one scariest fighters on earth all though you could argue certain people are better and more skilled fighters but Jason used his powerful build with all skills he's learned over the years let's Damian a certain respect for him
Honorable mentions
Talia al-ghul / Ra's al ghul
Are terrified of Jason if he finds out how much of the truth they manipulated so he could attack Bruce because if Batman needs back up then so they
Short king dick au
That's his baby brother godamit he doesn't care what others think
Justice league
What do you mean a human is justice league level threat Bruce what do you mean he has access to almost all of your contingencies what do you mean you can't track him Bruce what do you mean he rules most Gothams crime bruce answer us bruce
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jackmkelly · 6 months ago
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i love the outsiders so bad (saw it for the 2nd time yesterday) but melody getting on live today mentioning specs newsies was the craziest whiplash ive ever experienced
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astrobei · 9 hours ago
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listening to the arcane s2 soundtrack in order is the craziest whiplash ever bc it’s like heimerdinger singing his jaunty little hextech inspired tune followed by 2 minutes and 27 seconds of me playing the timebomb dance sequence in my mind like a movie and dropping to my knees in anguish with my head in my hands and just when i’ve gotten used to that. BAM. that’s when they hit you with the freak lesbian jail cell sex anthem. 😼
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go-go-devil · 4 months ago
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infodump to me about the lamb lies down on broadway so i have the intel for my next big listen of it!!!
Here I go!
So The Lamb is honestly a pretty insane album, not just for Genesis but classic prog rock as a whole. It's one of the most ambitious and creative concept albums I've ever listened to, but because of that it can be very alienating to some listeners due to how vague and overly poetic the lyrics can get (not quite Eraserhead levels of dream logic, but it gets close at times and most of us have very different takeaways from the story).
I think what makes this album so enjoyable and timeless for me is how unabashedly fearless it is in simply having fun telling its story. There's lots of dramatic and intense moments, but its also paced well with beautifully ethereal bits and even some silly moments. Every single song plays its part well and flows in perfectly with the next, no matter how much of a mood whiplash the lyrics or music can feel at times. Hell, one of the last lines in the album is "If you think that it's pretentious, you've been taken for a ride," and I just love that! It's the spirit of prog rock right there: go crazy and have and adventure, who cares what uppity critics think!
Besides that, it's also one of the most autistic albums ever made. Partually because I hc Rael as autistic due to the way he speaks and acts but also because the very nature of the album is like one big surrealist autism moment. Rael's constantly trapped in uncomfortable places that are too constricting or too crowded with people he can't understand and/or has trouble being around, and even has an anxiety attack at the end of "The Chamber of 32 Doors" due to being trapped in a room full of people who won't shut up. I felt all of that as a teen in high school, and I still feel it now T_T
Then of course there's my "controversial" interpretation of the album, at least I assume it is amongst many of the Lamb fans I've found on this site and irl, that this is one of the most delightfully sex-repulsed stories I've ever engaged with. Probably done by complete accident, but I don't care!
Just hear me out on this one. Sexual intercourse is NEVER shown favorably in this album; it's either not well executed/completely humiliating ("Counting Out Time") or overtly disturbing ("The Lamia" and definitely the album notes describing the Slippermen's fate in "The Colony of Slippermen"). The story ends with Rael sacrificing his penis to save both himself and his loved one, and that's a fucking insane thing to type down but I'm not exaggerating anything! That's just what The Lamb is like! Rael gains enlightenment by sacrificing a part of himself that never truly gave him anything fulfilling in his life.
One of the reasons I got into prog rock was because I'm sex repulsed and so many classic prog songs have nothing to do with sex or romantic relationships, and it's honestly so goddamn refreshing to find a piece of media that, for fucking ONCE, depicts sex as something as uncomfortable and unfulfilling as I've always known it to be. I felt seen by this story in a way most of my other favorite fiction could never achieve.
I'll never know what exactly Peter Gabriel was thinking when he wrote this story, and I certainly won't act like anyone's sex-positive interpretations of The Lamb aren't valid. But that's the beauty of it. It means different things to different people, but unites them all in a weird, rocking tale with some of the craziest imagery ever put to an album <3
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morningstargirl666 · 8 months ago
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20 Questions For Fic Writers
thank you @garglyswoof and @stars-and-darkness for tagging me!
How many works do you have on ao3?
12, though 2 of those are moodboards so don't really count.
2. What's your total ao3 word count?
553,036. Huh. Lower than I expected. No doubt that will shoot up when the tbbw rewrite is done [fake laughter, hiding real pain]
3. What fandoms do you write for?
TVD, TO a.k.a Klaroline
4. Top five fics by kudos:
The Big Bad Wolf, Into Eternity, The Little Wolf, The Red Wedding and Falling For You.
5. Do you respond to comments?
Yes! I try to respond to every one as I love talking with readers. I figure if someone spends time to write a comment, I'll return the favour and reply. In fact when I'm updating fics regularly, if my reply to your comment turns up in your inbox it's often a pre-warning that a new chapter is about to drop, as I read over comments I've missed before updating.
6. What is the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?
Does Damon murder count? [I don't really do angsty endings, I need my happily ever after]
7. What's the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?
Probably Into Eternity. It's really sappy and makes me feel all warm and gooey inside. What can I say - I'm a romantic at heart.
8. Do you get hate on fics?
Yes, kinda. Is it hate if it's just wild interpretations of the characters or plot? Some people leave comments that just make you blink repeatedly and think...are they reading the same fic I'm writing? I remember one time someone left a comment calling Caroline a pushover (honestly had some kind of vendetta against her showing ANY kind of emotion like okaaaaay mate) even though in that very same chapter...she literally kicked Klaus is the balls. Man, that was a weird day.
9. Do you write smut?
No. Not yet. In the future? There may or may not be scenes planned. 😏 I'm picky with smut, I need feelings and the eMoTiOnS, I need to be INVESTED. Porn with plot, rather than just smut for smut's sake.
10. Craziest crossover:
Haven't written a crossover - unless intending to drop Dracula into tbbw at some point coints. There's some great ones in the fandom though, just not really my thing.
11. Have you ever had a fic stolen?
Not that I'm aware of [narrows eyes]
12. Have you ever had a fic translated?
No! But I'd be flattered if one ever was, as long as its translated on ao3 and given credit to me.
13. Have you ever co-written a fic before?
No, I haven't. I might be open to it though, if it was a round-robin kind of thing where the writers take in turns to write the scenes.
14. All time favorite ship?
KLAROLINE!!! NOW LOUDER FOR THE PEOPLE IN THE BACK!!!
15. What's a wip you want to finish but doubt you ever will?
I really want to finish Divided We Fall, Falling For You and Songs of the Sea. I wouldn't say I doubt I'll ever finish them, just that I doubt I'll finish them while I'm still writing the tbbw series. Too much of the klaroline brain rot is invested in that fic alone.
16. What are your writing strengths?
I've been told it's shifting between moods? So I can give readers whiplash in the emotions department - one minute you're crying, the next you're laughing. I like to think my strength is dialogue though. Even the way I write is focused around it.
17. What are your writing weaknesses?
Historical accuracy. I'll fall down a rabbit hole researching stuff like any writer, but the researching is more out of obligation and crippling writer guilt rather than actual enjoyment. Which is why I often take creative licence and go fuck it, history has its own au now bitches (sorry ella).
18. Thoughts on dialogue in another language?
If its little words here and there - even a sentence or two - yes. Full conversations though unless you're fluent yourself are not fun to sift through.
19. First fandom you wrote in?
Star Wars? I want to say Star Wars. Idk those fanfics are over on my ffnet account which I will not be going back to anytime soon. I dare not go where the light doesn't touch, Mufasa speaks wisely.
20. Favorite fic you've written?
It used to be The Red Wedding but I actually love The Little Wolf more now. That one's a true labour of love, fueled on rage and spite, curtesy of Julie Plec.
I will tag @galvanizedfriend @kirythestitchwitch @marxandangels @bellemorte180 @impossiblekryptonitecolor @the-road-betwixt @purplesigebert @that-sarcastic-optimist
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poppindawgs · 3 months ago
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thanks to melissa. I am getting the craziest music recommended to me. yes by the spotify dj. reptilia by the smiths into paper bag by fiona apple is the crazy whiplash i’ve ever experienced
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kiwiana-writes · 10 months ago
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🖤 🔥 🪐
🖤 favorite hobbies outside of your blog
Answered here!
🔥 craziest thing that’s ever happened to you
I had a lot of really wild experiences as a teenager, most of which are not worth dwelling on haha. Unfortunately I can't think of anything that was both a crazy thing to happen and like... fun to think about lmaoooo
🪐 favorite shows / series of all time
Favourites are haaaaaaaaaard. Doctor Who, definitely (we're currently rewatching and through absolutely no planning, because we don't have a schedule, last night was Tony Curran's Doctor Who episode and let me tell you, the emotional whiplash of watching him get his back blown out for seven straight episodes in Mary & George to then be sobbing my guts out over his portrayal of Vincent Van Gogh is... a lot lmao). Schitt's Creek, of course. Leverage. Santa Clarita Diet (still bitter over that cancellation). Boston Legal. Joan of Arcadia (bitter over that cancellation too). Crazy Ex-Girlfriend. Galavant. Smash. Pushing Daisies (the ultimate crying over the cancellation). That is... a long list, sorry.
[Get to know me meme]
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theladyofshalott1989 · 5 months ago
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20 questions for fic writers
Thank you for the tag @heyitszev, @thetotomoo, and @infernalrusalka! It was so fun reading all of your answers, too <3333
1. How many works do you have on AO3? Eleven!
2. What's your total AO3 word count? 220,491 posted currently (about 60k more written but not posted yet).
3. What fandoms do you write for? Hogwarts: Legacy (10 works) and Bridgerton (1 work).
4. Top five fics by kudos? "Like Moths to a Flame", "Burning Bright", "The Reynolds Dilemma", "Heart's Pleasure First", "Love's Not Time's Fool".
5. Do you respond to comments? In the words of Severus Snape, "Always." <3
6. What is the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending? My Sebastian Sallow/You one-shot "What Was I Made For?"
7. What is the fic you wrote with the happiest ending? Nearly all of my fics end happily, but I think from a "wow, the characters went through hell and back and yet they somehow got a happy ending" perspective, I would probably say "Burning Bright."
8. Do you get hate on fics? Not directly on them yet (thankfully), but I have definitely received anonymous hate here on Tumblr and Reddit. Those people can suck it. Affectionately. 🙃
9. Do you write smut? Yup.👍
10. Craziest crossover? No crossovers yet, although I'm hoping to write a Hook (the 1991 movie) & Peter Pan (the book by J.M. Barrie) long-fic someday. That's not all that crazy though...haha.
11. Have you ever had a fic stolen? Not that I'm aware of, but I don't go looking. Eek.
12. Have you ever had a fic translated? No, but that would be very cool!
13. Have you ever co-written a fic before? I'm currently co-writing an MC x MC fic with heyitszev. Someday we'll (hopefully) finish it because it's SO FREAKING GOOD ALREADY. AHHH.
14. All time favorite ship? I have consumed many ships over the years, but the one that always sticks with me is Cassian/Jyn (aka Rebelcaptain) from Rogue One. My own ship (Sebastien, Sebastian x Damien) may also be added to this list soon as these boys have consumed my every waking thought for nearly a year and a half now. Lol.
15. What's a WIP you want to finish but doubt you ever will? I don't think I've ever not finished a WIP? Hopefully I didn't just jinx myself...
16. What are your writing strengths? Banter, emotional whiplash (sorry lol), foreshadowing, and plot twists. At least I think so. Haha.
17. Thoughts on dialogue in another language? I like it! I minored in Spanish in college and have always wanted to use Spanish in a fic, but haven't really had the opportunity to yet. Maybe if I ever get around to writing a Cassian Andor-centered fic, I'll finally do it. We'll see.
18. First fandom you wrote in? Star Wars! I wrote a shit ton of Anakin/Padme when I was a young teen.
19. Favorite fic you've written? If you had asked me a few months ago, it would have been "Burning Bright", but it's now my current WIP, "You Cannot Put a Fire Out." I put a lot of myself and my insecurities into these two fics, and they were both written at a pretty emotionally turbulent time of my life, so they have a special place in my heart.
20. There's no twentieth question, so take this as your cue to give yourself a hug. (Yes, I'm talking to you!) <3
No pressure tags: @morelikeravenbore @endless-starlight-legacy
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lobstermatriarch · 9 months ago
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Tagged by @anosrepasi, thank you for thinking of me!
1) How many works do you have on AO3? 16, though I orphaned two so 18 I guess
2) What’s your total AO3 word count? 395,394 (jeez when did that happen)
3) What fandoms do you write for? Mostly games, and at this point just BG3. In the past I've written for Homestuck, Fallout 4, Mass Effect Andromeda, and the Witcher. I've got some unpublished stuff for Final Fantasy and The Locked Tomb which may or may not ever see the light of day too
4) What are your top 5 fics by kudos?
1 - Playing House
2 - The Kids Aren't Alright
3 - Goodnight, My Dear
4 - Commonwealth Mercurial
5 - Flower Bright
5) Do you respond to comments? Depends! If it's an active WIP I always do, but I've gotten lax on responding to new comments some of my older fics. It's not that I don't appreciate them, thinking of responses just stresses me out so I tend to focus on what I'm still working on
6) What is the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending? Goodnight, My Dear by a landslide
7) What’s the fic you wrote with the happiest ending? Hm. As much angst and horror as I write most of my fics end up pretty happy
8) Do you get hate on fics? Not really, I'm hardly a bnf so I don't tend to get that kind of attention. I had a few assholes in the Homestuck days but that was it
9) Do you write smut? If so, what kind? Here and there but usually as part of a larger whole. I've never felt like it was my strength so I leave it to the people who do it well
10) Do you write crossovers? What’s the craziest one you’ve written? Nah
11) Have you ever had a fic stolen? Not that I know of
12) Have you ever had a fic translated? Also not that I know of
13) Have you ever co-written a fic before? I did back in the Homestuck days, but it's been a long time
14) What’s your all time favorite ship? ....I don't understand the question
15) What’s a WIP you want to finish but doubt you ever will? I've got a Locked Tomb prequel that I'd been writing for Cytherea/Loveday, and as much as I like the concept I doubt it'll ever get finished
16) What are your writing strengths? tonal whiplash and sucker punches
17) What are your writing weaknesses? Smut, tragically :(
18) Thoughts on writing dialogue in another language in fic? Ohhh it's a struggle. I'm impressed by people who pull it off but unless I'm fluent (and I'm barely conversational in any language except English) I don't feel comfortable with it and will usually find a way to write around it
19) First fandom you wrote for? I remember writing and printing out a FFX fic that I gave to my friends in sixth grade if that counts
20) Favorite fic you’ve written? Uhhhhh recency bias might be coming into play here but I'm having a great time writing Come Down. The Durge fandom has been great, it's not a huge fic but my readers/beta reader have been super kind and leaving these great, thoughtful comments on every chapter. I guess it just goes to show that you really do need to write for yourself and a group of, like, ten other sickos to have fun
In terms of actual writing though? Heartlines.
I don't have many writing mutuals who are active on here anymore, but @antimonyantigone and @hiboudeluxe if you'd like to do it I'd love to see your answers! Anyone and everyone else who wants to, I’d like to see your answers too :]
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mythical-bookworm · 1 year ago
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20 Questions for Fic Writers!
(Thanks to @professorsaber for tagging me!)
1. How many works do you have on AO3?
10
2. What's your total AO3 word count?
99,759 (Minus About 13,000 if you don't want to include the Discord Blind Writing game, most of which I did not write)
3. What fandoms do you write for?
In order of amount of fics:
Amphibia
Gravity Falls
Back to the Future
Wings of Fire
The Cyclist
4. What are your top 5 fics by kudos?
Lost With a Second Chance (Amphibia)
Two Deaths, Five Perspectives (Amphibia)
I've been thinking of our future, 'cause I'll never see those days (Amphibia)
The Fourth Wall (Gravity Falls)
Leaves Fall Just Like Me When It Is Over (Amphibia)
5. Do you respond to comments? Why or why not?
95% of the time! For one it's always polite. But also it means the world to me when I get a comment! That means someone read my story, and has something to say. They were moved enough to take the risk and reach out. Plus it's a way to meet new people!
The only times I don't is when I legitimately have nothing I can respond with, or if it is a hate message.
6. What's the fic you wrote with the angstiest ending?
Argh that is extremely hard.
At first I would say Don't Try to be a Hero. The fic is overall an angsty introspective character study and ends with the character wallowing. But it's all introspective.
But than there's The Fourth Wall, basically a crack meta fic that does anything but take itself seriously. The entire fic is Dipper and Mabel finding the fourth wall and figuring out their in a fanfiction. It ends with them seeing the end and there is nothing they can do to stop it. Once the fic ends, they do to. Which uh yeah, darker implications than I meant.
7. What's the fic you wrote with the happiest ending?
This one is hard! None of my posted fics necessarily have a super happy all problems solved ending.
In the end I'd have to go with Leaves Fall Just Like Me When It Is Over. Anne finally reveals the full truth of what happened on her last day of Amphibia and she can finally start to heal. She feels lightened, the burden of the secret lifted.
8. Do you get hate on fics?
Not really. I've had disappointing ones, more raw ones. I had some criticism comments. And while some of it was very true, other parts just hit me like whiplash as it was put pretty bluntly.
9. Do you write smut? If so, what kind?
Nope nope nope, and nope.
10. Do you write crossovers? What's the craziest one you've written?
Nah, usually not to much into that stuff anyways.
11. Have you ever had a fic stolen?
Not that I know of.
12. Have you ever had a fic translated?
Not that I know of.
13. Have you ever co-written a fic before?
Not really, unless you count the Blind Bttf Discord Writing Game. (Results here.)
14. What's your all-time favourite ship?
Uh, ok so I'm not a huge shipper. Like I'll support the canon ships and all. but I'm not necessarily all gushy about them. And I'm usually not a fan of fanon ships.
If I had to chose one though it would be Flinn. Now I am no Adventure Time enthusiast, but I did really like this ship between Finn and Flame Princess.
A close second would be Marty/Jennifer, because the two are each others biggest cheerleaders and I love that. :)
15. What's a WIP you want to finish, but doubt you ever will?
Oh jeez, ok. Probably a Back to the Future Oneshot entitles "Are You Alright?"
Overall, I like the concept. The idea is George doesn't kiss Lorraine. As Marty is fading he runs off stage and collapses by the side of the gym, catching George's attention. George finds him and Marty successfully hides his fading from existence and tells George to tell Doc about him being shot in 1985. George delivers the message and Doc is distraught in realizing what had happened. So he decides to use the lighting strike to go back in time and help Marty get George and Loraine to kiss. George ends up learning exactly who Marty is and goes back in time to get his past self to kiss Loraine. This fails so he does it himself.
Unfortunately there are issues with this:
First is timeline. There is not enough time for all the events to occur before the lightning strike happens. Doc would have totally missed it.
Second, once ensuring Marty's existence, he wouldn't be able to go home. Doc is already using the lightning bolt to go back in time to get George to kiss Lorraine. And I simply don't want that. I want a happy ending for once dang it.
16. What are your writing strengths?
And you have asked the hardest question ever.
I've been told I do some good suspense. Also been told I have good pacing, but others say I don't so who knows on that.
Personally I feel like I'm really good at letting the characters run free. I hardly have any outline when it comes to fics and let my characters make the path. This had lead to some surprising twists that ended up being much better than what I could come up with.
17. What are your writing weaknesses?
Everything.
Okay real answer:
-Writing cute fluffy moments to be interesting. I'm working really hard on that, in fact I'm writing a BttF fic focusing a lot on that so I can get better.
-Repetitive words. How do I specify the same character without saying their name 5 times? Am I to repetitive? Am I not saying their name enough? AAAAAAAAAA
-Keeping everything in context and connected. My main issue with my Lost With a Second Chance was I made a character have amnesia, which did nothing in the long run. All it did was make drama. So I'm trying to make everything connect, everything have a reason. Plus creating cool loops.
-Show not tell. I'm a lot better, but I definitely need improvement.
-Not make things to obvious but not so unobvious is seems weird. For example, mysterious villain. I'm struggling to not just have something that magically gives the character all the information, but than I'm struggling to get them the answers so the villain doesn't seem shallow cause he's not, you just don't know it yet. Or, oh this character is acting this way because of a, b, and c, but I dropped you in the middle so I'm not sure how to put the point across without blatantly telling you.
18. Thoughts on writing dialogue in another language for a fic?
Never thought about it. I only know one language so I'd have to put things into Google Translate. I have taken sections of books and Google Translated it a bunch of times to absolutely destroy it though.
19. First fandom you wrote for?
Amphibia!
20. Favourite fic you've ever written?
Definitely Great Scott! (Doctober 2023) . I had so so so much fun writing it and I truly improved by it!
Tagging @knickynoo @daryfromthefuture @bg-sparrowand anyone else who wants to do it!
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sp4rk-p1ug · 7 months ago
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i don’t know why people follow me on here my account is the craziest whiplash ever. poetic waxing about palestine slashed with gay parksborn fanfic is an insane combo
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becauseimanicequeen · 8 months ago
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RANDOM THOUGHTS: Manner of Death ep. 14 (rewatch)
(These are my random thoughts from my rewatch on the 31st of March - 1st of April 2024)
Since my rewatches may contain spoilers, I’m putting my random thoughts after the “Read More” link.
I can’t believe this is the last episode. It’s gone by so fast.
Anyway, I’m going into this expecting some assholes to be exposed, some more danger, Inspector M to be okay, many Tan and Bun moments, and a crazy proposal.
See, jealousy really is a cold-hearted bitch.
What is wrong with these characters exposing their secrets and goals to the people who will be the most affected by the repercussions if those secrets come out? I mean, if they didn’t want to kill you before, they definitely do now.
Bun, baby, you don’t have to ask Tan what he wants to be. The answer will always be “Your husband!”
Look at this asshole going for the kid first.
Inspector M is back! Look at him being all hot while fighting Gun (while he’s still injured). And he’s wearing black and blue (my weaknesses). And he’s being salty (my favorite Inspector M flavor). And the way he shoots Gun without even flinching! It’s much more fun to watch him when he isn’t giving me whiplash.
The way That is protecting Sorn! Why are they so fucking adorable?
Bitch, you’ve been fooled. You’ve made your bed, not lie in it. Or, more like, you dug your grave, now lie in it.
I always appreciate a clever tech whizz.
The way Tan and Bun reacted to the tech whizz wondering what Tan was hiding on his computer will never not make me cackle!
This music is giving me Game of Thrones vibes.
Thank every higher power that this tech whizz is smarter than these other two idiots. Yes, Tan and Bun are idiots at times. I still love them, though.
Mass upload that shit and let it spread like wildfire!
I’m so happy that Inspector M was the one who got to arrest the commander.
The realization on the judge’s face when he realized he was fucked was so satisfying to watch. I reveled in every millisecond.
I’m always down for a good revenge. Por getting rid of Rung was sweet.
I’m sure Inspector M and Oat hooked up after Oat helped the inspector. At least they did in my delulu-world. I mean, if we ever get Transplant, they can show us. But, until then, they live happily ever after in my head.
I love that Nam wants to become a doctor. That’s the kind of effect Bun had on her.
Look at That and Sorn being all lovey-dovey. I fucking love them! They should really be wearing helmets when riding that MC, though…
And now the craziest proposal I’ve ever seen. I want to slap Tan for doing this. But I also want to hug him.
And that was the end of Manner of Death. I love this series so much that I’ll come back to it again, and again, and again. And I will always hope for Transplant. So, when are we getting Transplant?
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