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Oooo starstruck dee has little stars at the bottom of her feet! Are they just aesthetic or would they make imprints into the ground? (like pawprints)
exactly like that! though she's not the only one...
edit: might need to add some additional dialogue to this to make it more clear, but a clarification in the interim; he knows about his own footprints. he's just surprised to see something similar already there when he knows he's only just landed. he lifts his own shoe to confirm that they're not identical (and also to reveal this to the viewer). seems his stoicism beat off the clarity in this one, sorry 😭
#meta knight#starstruck dee#have had this one sitting around for *months* while i bit my nails on posting it#and then i thought maybe i *shouldn't* during the shipaganza bc it's not a direct prompt; though i do think you can read it that way#and for ~Reasons~ i needed to post this one sooner rather than later so i had to bite the bullet.#though meta knight has understandably been the second most prompted. they do indeed have the Funnest Possible Dynamic for it#stoic guy and the bug eyed little Creature he doesn't really trust as far as he could throw her (long long way)#so just to clarify this one is NOT for the shipaganza but you can read it that way if you want to#this is just a canon scene between them from her storyline. this is just something they canonically share. starry eyed idiots.#also fwiw i think i probably picked up the shoe-patterns for the knights from postitnotes7#been a headcanon in the back of my mind for a long while but i'm pretty sure i osmosis'd it from their work#especially after drawing post's designs so much for the hnkss. i temporarily forgot how i used to draw their armour ngl#and also btw starstruck deetectives psspsps#i'm planning a much better post about this later (probably in march) but i'm going to start using this tag for Important Posts for y'all#🎀🔍#<- for the starstruck deetectives when there's something significant in the post.#i worry about making it 'too easy' but also want stuff to be accessible. it's just for fun? the OC lore game! ARG but it's just my oc.#that would be fun right? maybe? is that too indulgent? i could probably pull it off if folks were actually interested enough to participate#anyway!! go to bed starflung#also if you read this far: anon is open again! still open for shipaganza prompts but i'm not gonna be finished them in february 😂
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Back at it again with another theory: What if Lucanis’ betrayal wasn’t a betrayal at all?
(obviously, spoilers below the cut)
During The Wigmaker Job, we have some dialogue between Illario and Lucanis about their position within both the Crows and the Dellamorte family. Illario wants Caterina to step down so he can take the coveted First Talon spot. Lucanis reassures him that his time is coming, to which Illario makes a snide comment about whether his cousin would ever go against their grandmother’s wishes. When they continue the conversation after the job, Illario states that Lucanis is the potential heir, that he’s her favorite, and that he’s unlikely to say no to her. Lucanis doesn’t argue, only insists that he doesn’t want to be First Talon, and that he hopes she’ll see reason before that. It’s mentioned again in Eight Little Talons - Caterina favors Lucanis. It’s well-known enough among the Crows that Viago and Teia discuss it in front of her (not on purpose, but she doesn’t deny it). He’s her prodigy through and through.
In the opening scene for the Lucanis quest in Veilguard, Caterina is poised, as you’d expect of the First Talon. She’s certain that the body they buried wasn’t her grandson, that it had been altered with blood magic. She doesn’t pose it as a theory, though: she poses it as a fact. It could, of course, merely be her confidence, but there’s another very unusual aspect to the scene – everyone else discusses how Lucanis was clearly betrayed, that someone must have sold him out in order for the Venatori to capture him. Caterina is the only one in that room who never speaks on it. She doesn’t ask for justice, doesn’t mention vengeance, never acknowledges that her grandson was sold out by someone he trusted – perhaps because he wasn’t.
What if, when Caterina comes to him with a plan, with an impossible request, he’s still her favorite prodigal grandchild, and he still does whatever she asks? She’s had him tortured before as a child, has tortured and starved and beaten him herself before, because it makes him stronger and more resistant to it in the future. He says in The Wigmaker Job that he used to hate her for it, but now he understands. He justifies it. All Crows justify it, because they have to - if they don’t, then the cruelty wasn’t for survival’s sake, and their suffering meant nothing. Perhaps he doesn’t even question it. When Caterina tells him that she has a job for him, he takes it.
What if the contract has a caveat? Sure, Calivan must die by his hand by the end of it, a little treat for a job well done, but what if his primary mission is reconnaissance, is discovery? The Venatori are using blood magic to torture and corrupt prisoners. It would behoove the Crows to find out what it entails and how to resist it, before it’s turned back on them. It would have to be someone so deeply, unabashedly loyal to her that when she asked them to infiltrate a Venatori prison, expecting torture at best, their own death at worst, they’d take the job anyway, no questions asked - someone Caterina can trust, certainly, but also someone who has never once said no to her.
And Lucanis has always been a loyal grandson.
#lucanis dellamorte#dragon age: the veilguard#datv#datv spoilers#veilguard spoilers#da posting#maybe it’s also just because she thinks it would make him stronger and that’s how she always justifies it to herself because she’s evil!!!!#she’s MICRODOSING her GRANDSON with BLOOD TORTURE and DEMONS to fashion him into A BETTER WEAPON#I keep hearing people be like ‘oh there’s a moment in the lucanis storyline where I GASPED’#and other than like ‘he was dead the entire time’ I’m like…… what would be that shocking#and you know what would be that shocking??#if he put himself through it on purpose#envisioning a line where he’s like ‘when Caterina told me to go I didn’t ask questions because I’m a good crow!!!!!’#(also I think that would REALLY give a good bite to his demon being SPITE of all things)#also also I still think that Illario kills caterina (if she’s actually dead) but y’know what?#if he does GOOD FOR HIM#also lucanis just happening to be bursting out of his cell when you get there…. SUSPECT#was he just ready to break out at any time? if so why did he stay and get tortured for a YEAR?#why were the guards so afraid of him?? what was he capable of???#‘you’re a crow’ or ‘but you’re not a crow’ ohhhh so you were expecting a rescue?#oh I am CONNECTING the DOTS (I haven’t connected shit) I’VE CONNECTED THEM#voelene#your caterina + illario post started these wheels turning and I am eternally grateful#also tho did update this slightly because I forgot about their conversation at the end of TWJ#also got so wrapped up in my hatred of caterina that I failed to consider another emotionally devastating option:#that lucanis was the one who wanted to go and caterina covered for him#now THAT’S got some bite to it too#and maybe Lucanis volunteering to take on a demon is why it doesn’t possess him fully#it’s like a wynne/anders thing it’s symbiotic
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The Expanse | Season 5 (2020-21), Mark Fergus and Hawk Ostby
#the expanse#theexpanseedit#wow this season was BLEAK#it worked much better in context with the other seasons!#(first time i watched it there were just too many things flying over my head because i didn't remember things from the past)#so it's definitely better than the impression it left me#like... it was a rough ride! but it was because the story was so depressing!#our space babies all scattered!#mars dying#amos on a dystopic-er earth#drummer's storyline???#naomi's storyline???????#(holden storyline not as strong sorry)#and i think they really could have made a better job with marco inaros#but everything makes sense and has its place in the bigger narrative#tv 2024#i made this#i just want a tag for the things i personally put out into the world
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i feel like i'm in at a lonely table for one here... but i don't want any SU continuity to be a prequel. and i think some people who want a prequel, haven't really thought through what that would look like.
either a war prequel or a rose quartz prequel would end up as a huge downer. the steven/post-steven era is the only one that has any HOPE for the vast majority of the characters.
idk. i feel like if you really want flashbacks, there's nothing STOPPING a post-SU future series (whether an anthology series or a new main character) from having flashbacks. maybe pearl's the main character for an episode, and its mostly her telling old war stories. maybe bismuth and garnet finally have that beta raid flashback.
but if you set it in the past, definitively, then its going to be a bummer. because all the characters end up corrupted, shattered, deeply traumatized, or fleeing to homeworld. nobody feels like a winner right after the war. not a single character.
most gems are only beginning to heal from it now.
SU, thematically, has always focused on the possibility of hope and change. that's only possible in the future, not the past.
you want lore? you can have that in an anthology or post-future series. there is nothing stopping peridot or the diamonds from having a "explaining gem origins and religion" ep. you want action sequences? again, pearl can narrative war flashbacks, or we can even set an anthology episode in the past proper. or have a new conflict!
personally, i don't see a reason to set it only in the past. that's just an unnecessary limit on the stories you're able to tell.
#steven universe#su sequel#su prequel#i realize i'm writing a quite depressing fanfic (at the moment) while complaining about downers#but the difference between Something Better and what i would Actually want an SU sequel to look like#is that Something Better is focused on a very depressed character with a lot of issues and not a lot of friends#but it can still get better for her... eventually!#whereas in a Real SU Sequel you would probably want... a bit more balance? more levity and a few more joyful or lighthearted storylines?#because its a fundamentally hopeful show. made for a mass audience rather than me self-indulgently psychoanalyzing one character#but i STILL think Something Better will end up more hopeful than a prequel show would be... because nobody would end up happy in a prequel!#not one person!!!
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i know i’m the only person on the planet who cares about kotone but if they would just put her in reload i would buy it instantly. please. i want to play the answer so so so so bad but i cannot make myself play a game where aigis is straight. please. give me my lesbian robot and i will buy your $70 remake instantly
#i still haven’t actually done my new game+ with makoto in portable because i truly don’t care about him that much#like. ok he’s the original whatever. kotone has infinitely better social links imo and also the only way i can handle straight romance#is if i’m playing the girl. i HATEEEE doing straight romance as a male character#ugh anyway. please for the love of god give me my lesbian storyline. please. i need this#you put her in Q2. i know you remember she exists. give the lesbians what they want#personal
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LET’S GO GAMERS!!!!!!!
#AAAAAAAAAAAAA#Shima speaks#I thought I preordered it but turns out I didn’t.#Which is probably better anyway bc I would have had to wait for it to be delivered#So I probably wouldn’t have even gotten it until next week#So I just went to Target and bought it. Now it is IN MY HANDS…THE DAY OF RELEASE…#I’M SO EXCITED TO PLAY IT AAHSHFHDHFNDN#Mario#Paper Mario#Paper Mario TTYD#One of my favorite games of ALL time remade ✨#I’m going to throw up I’m so hyped. I want to go home and play it right NAOW but I’m still at work unfortunately#SO READY TO SEE MY KIDDOS AGAIN…AND FINALLY VIVIAN TRANS CANON IN AMERICA#Also SO excited to witness the TEC storyline again. My favorite character ever#Rolls on the floor#I WANNA PLAY IT NOWWWW. BUT I GOTTA WAAAAAAAIT.
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I wasn't gonna make an Indigo Park oc but then I started thinking about the theme park I went to as a kid and I got the idea of a beaver running a ride based on water flumes like Logger's Run or Splash Mountain :3
They're also based on wildlife education characters like Smokey the Bear and Ranger Rick!
#indigo park#indigo park oc#id imagine their ride would be close to Oceanic Odyssey so theyd be good friends with Finley :)#they also 100% sound like Velma Dinkley#this design was so fun to work on tho#and doing research on similar characters unearthed some Core Memories#like I completely forgot about Ranger Rick!!!#i used to love reading those and national geographic whenever I found an issue :)#i like to think theyre a really anxious character that tries to prepare for everything#but then their worrying causes things to go wrong#but somehow they manage to narrowly escape it every time#the name took a bit bc i wanted to name them after a tree but none of them sounded right#i almost went with Bramble but Baylee sounded better to me and wasnt as similar to Rambley#also their ride is based on Logger's Run from Michigan Adventure my beloved <3#theres a little storyline about needing to transport the logs to fix a dam thats about to burst#and at the end you save the day and are rewarded with an honorary Ranger Badge! (sold separately)#anyways thats all i love them thx#i played a lot with overlays too i think it turned out pretty cool :)#i am not immune to cute art style and fun character design#also i remembered to sign my art for once lol#spacebug does art
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Is this a safe space to say that while i loved all the bucktommy scenes in 8x5 their chemistry felt a bit off to me. that little moment in 8x1 had more chemistry than anything in 8x05
i don't think their chemistry was off but i don't think the writing of the episode gave them much to play up their chemistry. we got domestic scenes but storywise it was a scene of buck being distracted and tommy being exhausted. every scene last season was them playing a romantic arc, this wasn't that. and like i said in that post (which motivated this ask i assume) i think tommy being involved in the silly and low-stakes episodes is a great thing. i think my only criticism can be that the loft scene could use some casual touches but that's the kind of stuff they don't really put in the script, it's something oliver and lou will find as they settle into playing established bucktommy vs bucktommy crushing on each other and sharing first kisses/dates
#you dont really see chemistry sizzling in every episode with the other couples either some storylines are better vehicles for that#i hope we get a bucktommy storyline tho#i always said 8x06 conflict was gonna be resolved in one ep but now i want it to be smth going till 8x08 lmao#but i dont think lou is in those eps#i have a longer take on emotionality/character beats in this season but it's premature at this stage#i'll wait till i see how this bucktommy storyline and eddie chris storyline goes#mimi talks#bucktommy#911#911 critical ig
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Riddler's daughter in the "Arkham Academy" storyline from Urban Legends #21-23... I quite like this take on her og look from the last continuity.
#riddler's daughter#enigma#quinn nash#riddler#edward nygma#the pants are better baggy instead of skintight#also i was quite fond of the pigtails/ponytail but obviously the short hair is fun#she was a teen in the arkham academy storyline#but she's obviously an adult in the christmas special where she's a phd student who goes out with kate kane. for a number of reasons#so i assume she grew out of this look eventually when she stopped wanting edward's approval. but it's still cute#why the hell did they name her quinn in the christmas special though#nash being a reference to nashton obviously makes sense#but did we really need another quinn. was that confusion necessary. are there no other names#also i read arkham academy and it was cute. the catboy is a soundcloud rapper and killer croc eats him
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I'm really genuinely so confused as to why I keep getting asks from people telling me that they hope Tommy dumps or even kills Lucy and ends up with Lizzie instead. I've gotten multiple variations at this point of "Lucy deserves to be raped/killed/otherwise hurt because how dare she get in the way of Tommy and Lizzie's happiness." I've just been deleting and ignoring them, but it's gotten to the point where there've been so many that I legitimately do not understand what is happening or what I did to cause this kind of reaction.
Like, I get it. A lot of you love Lizzie and ship her with Tommy. I have never had any problem with that. But if that's the type of story you're after, GO READ SOME FUCKING LIZZIE X TOMMY FICS AND LEAVE ME ALONE.
This series has never been marked as a Lizzie x Tommy story. I'm so confused as to why so many seem to expect that relationship to be the endgame of the series, and not the one that the series is actually tagged with and written around. I'm really starting to question my own writing abilities at this point. Has my depiction of Tommy and Lucy's relationship actually been that off-putting? Is Lucy really that unlikable that everyone hopes she ends up alone and miserable for the rest of her life, or even fucking dead?
I just don't understand. Someone please explain it to me.
#might delete this later idk i'm just tired and frustrated and ranting right now because what the fuck#as a side note i don't EVER want to hear anything about lizzie fans being nicer/better than grace ones ever again#i've gotten hate and harassment from both at this point and i can say that each camp is truly AWFUL in their own right#though at least grace fans have never openly told me that they hope my oc gets violently raped and murdered#so they've got that going for them for now i guess#i always figured lucy wasn't really all that well liked and that this storyline would be controversial#but damn i never could have expected this kind of reaction#and no before some of you get all bent out of shape i'm obviously not talking about all lizzie and grace fans#you know the type of fans i'm talking about#lily babbles
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no thoughts - just thor thinnaphan in colours that complement his eyes
#a boss and a babe#a boss and a babe the series#thor thinnaphan#abaabedit#baabedit#thai bl#thai drama#bl drama#bl series#my edits.#this is it this is the whole set#thank u costume designer i owe u my life 🙏#he better have a happy storyline#it's bad enough that they split up fluke and him for this lmao#but also i didn't know i wanted forcethor and now here i am
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Waiting for my Eddie Diaz centric episode (it better be tonight! gimme it! )
#I swear if I watch tonight’s episode#and they half ass a Eddie Diaz storyline#and just make it hehehahaha I’m gonna go insane#like they better deal with his issues and not make it like a one convo and it’s solved#I want them to my fav man his characteristics back#I’m watching 911 and everyone has storylines being solved and Eddie is just nothing in the episodes#I hate it and they better solve everything 🫵#i don’t care at this point what direction they go with it I just need it to be good#irrelevant tags >#911 abc#eddie diaz#911#911 show#buddie#gay eddie diaz#ryan guzman#eddie 911#911 season 8
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i really do hope that 911 ventures further into Chris’ abandonment issues and doesn’t just ignore it for the rest of the season
#also i think they should have expanded on the buck and chris scene#buck’s on-going storyline is allll about his abandonment issues#i love that eddie was there for chris but they really missed out on a good heart-to-heart between buck and chris#something about wanting better for your kids and working to make sure they don’t have the same trauma that you do#something about seeing too much of yourself in your kid and wanting better for them#something about doing everything in your power to ensure that your kid never goes through the same things that you did#something about raising your kids in an environment that helps them become a better person than you were#something about not wanting your kids to make the same mistakes that you did and doing everything you can to lead them down the right path#something about buck reassuring chris once again that he will never leave him#that he’s loved and he’ll always have a home#christopher diaz#evan buckley#911 abc#911 on abc#911 spoilers#buckley diaz family
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bad things that happened to me yesterday:
i lost the screenplay competition (and when i say lost, i mean that back in may i got selected as one of the final 6 out of 60 applications, and that there were three winners yesterday and i wasn't one of them, the winners don't get anything expect honor and are very likely to receive funding for their project but they can still be rejected in the end and i can still apply for that funding even though i didn't win)
good things that happened to me yesterday:
so!!! many!!! people!!! (who are basically strangers) told me i should've won, including a jury member from last year and two members of the international jury
it really meant a lot to me that one of the people i talked to was so so angry on my behalf
a producer/director duo (who were also mentors in the competition) want to read my treatment, the producer hugged me and told me they were rooting for me, the director told me i have very good ideas and they're looking forward to talking to me more
i got a hug from the jury member i have a little crush on 🤭
literally everyone told me to keep writing and practically begged me not to drop the idea because it's really good
i feel like i made at least one new friend who already told me she's obsessed with me and thinks i'm really cool 🤭
even though i "lost" i don't feel like i lost at all, if anything this feels like the beginning
#and if we're being honest .............#1) it's good for me to not get something i wanted for once#it builds character#and 2) this underdog storyline that i have going on right now can only get better by 'losing'#and everyone telling me that it was a bullshit decision#winner of the hearts and such#and being that can be way better than actual winning#a.
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i don't like being negative about things but this is really just constructive criticism (that no people who make the show will see so it might be useless but anyway ksdkfsdg) i love 23.5 very very much but they tried to fit too many storylines into only 12 (so far 10) episodes and some resolutions just feel so...underwhelming...and it'd be much better to just not do them, for example, this whole thing with aylin and ton was just...not it, it wasn't really addressed and it just left a bitter taste for everyone, plus aylin had trouble talking anyway, we could've had her opening up anyway and use the extra time for aylinluna scenes that for whatever reason went missing today (bcs there was basically nothing and they went to eat in luna's house but we never see that? okay plus no make up scene or anything), also don't get me wrong but there's kinda too much time focusing on supporting boys, it's fine for them to exist and have cute little stories (even tho at this point i really don't know why ton exists but anyway) but i felt like they had so much time and lines in this episode, time and lines that were taken from the MAIN girls but anyway that's gmmtv i guess, so anyway all of this plus how fast the ongsasun conflict escalated and i get it, they're teenagers they do dumb things, i guess the conflict is eventually ongsa being insecure anyway but...we could've spent more time on those things rather than extra storylines that went nowhere and i just felt this issue a lot in this episode
so anyway my love for the show remains and i still believe it's the best thai gl we have so far, but i wanted to share my thoughts that i guess other people share too
#23.5#23.5 degrees#also if you watched 10yt#you might agree with me that as much as i loved the show and still do#i felt like there were once again too many storylines with no real resolution#or a resolution that didn't feel like what i wanted#still loved it but i wanted more#and i kinda feel the same here#then again we have 2 eps left so hopefully it's gonna be better here#anny watching#also since i'm not used on making <<negative>> posts i hope no one gets upset by me posting this on the tag#it goes with all the love and appreciation i have for the show <3
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when i think about how Bojack’s fully deserved punishment for Sarah Lynn’s death still took the form of him giving a ton of money to her worthless abusive parents who exploited her her whole life and still exploited her in death and ended up looking like innocent victims to the whole world
#bojack horseman#sarah lynn#i so so so wish that they had finished this storyline by implying that paige sinclair somehow discovered that there was something bad there#i wouldn't even have needed a conclusion per say just the implication that she noticed the step-father being a weirdo#and wanted to look into it but no. those two got a perfect happy ending#if anything things are probably better for them with sarah lynn's death (no more problem and still a ton of money) and it makes me so sad#i know this show is not about cheap happy ending but sarah lynn's piece of shit parents getting such a good deal out of death...#that's too much man
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