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all-pacas · 1 month
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I also found a script for Occam's Razor. This one is much closer to the one that aired — I only noticed two differences of note:
In the aired version, when House dismisses the idea that the patient only has one disease, the kids aren't thrilled with it. Foreman convinces/guilts the others two into pulling all-nighters to keep running tests with him. In this version, the three of them all seem to have the same idea at once, pulling the initiative away from Foreman.
There's an extra scene on the Cameron/Chase "sex could kill you" subplot, set after scene where she gives him his little sex ed talk in the conference room. I can see why it was cut — it doesn't really add anything — but it does add a bit of interesting detail: Cameron has been avoiding Chase since finding out he might be interested in her, and
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…IDK, it's very funny. Absolutely redundant (why would Cameron bring this up again), but I guess it does explain why Chase asks her out and gets shot down flat end of episode. This cut scene (there's a bit more too it, Foreman once again the third wheel to them) is really the only major difference I spotted, tho.
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happyyft · 4 months
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Trying something outtt
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shannonsketches · 3 months
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Every time I talk to a DB fan who doesn't know or doesn't agree that the whole franchise is an adventure comedy first and an action series second I feel insane but then I find an old Toriyama interview,
You made some comedic scenes where you have minor villains Pilaf & co. appear; how did you come up with a balance between laughs and fierce battles? Do you pay attention to the difference between comedy and battle in making a work “entertaining”?
I believe that, when you combine comedy and serious battles, both of them might come alive even more. As for me personally, though, I much prefer drawing dumb jokes to battle scenes.
as a bonus, every time I'm like 'idk I didn't really like most of the DBZ movies prior to Yo Son Goku and Friends Return and BotG,' and get the 'whAAaaT they're so gOOD' (from my brother, tbh askdjs) but they all seemed really Action-Drama and About the Fight Scenes and I'm like 'meh kinda boring tbh' I get to gaze upon,
In the latest movie, Toriyama-san, you participated in the production from the scriptwriting stage for the first time. What is the reason for that? Was there anything you noticed in coming face-to-face with the work after so long?
I was told about a project for Dragon Ball in its first animated film in a long while, and I read the story outline; while the beings “Beerus, God of Destruction” and “Super Saiyan God” (which goes above Super Saiyan) were interesting, the themes were heavy, and I felt that the world was a bit different from Dragon Ball. Rather than telling them about this or that problematic spot, I thought it would be faster if I just wrote it out concretely, and while I had intended just to give them a model―”for example”―my hand wouldn’t stop, and ultimately, I ended up writing almost everything, including the dialogue. I am reflecting on the fact that I did something terribly rude to the scriptwriter.
Akira "It was bad so I fixed it, oops" Toriyama, Absolute Legend
#I saw someone on Reddit say Toyotarou's Super was “sloppy bad fanfiction” and “WHAt was Toriyama thinking” as if Toriyama didn't write#the outlines and personally approve reject and give notes to Toyotarou the entire time aklsjdaljk#Like baby tell me you've never read the manga without telling me kljsajdka#Tell me you've Never Read Toriyama's Writing Even One Time without telling me#god i can't imagine what the original botg was going to be if Beerus' name was Virus#Toriyama looked at a Goku Saves the Day script and went “What if Goku loses immediately and needs Everyone's Help in order to even compete”#“What if this movie was about Vegeta and how much he's grown actually. What if Dragon Ball was idk... like...fun and meaningful”#“What if Goku gets his ass beat right away and can't win this fight even WITH help What if the best he can do is just Be Entertaining”#I hope you are enjoying your afterlife mr t i love your choices so so so much#Like my ABSOLUTE respect to the directors and board artists and animators and actors and crew who do amazing work in those films#but 90% of toei's producers and staff writers can meet me in the pit tbqfh#like granted it's been a long time but I feel like I enjoyed the REALLY old ones like Tree of Might and Worlds Strongest??#But Broly was SUCH a huge turn off and the future trunks movie was kind of my last straw for caring about any of the EU stuff askldj#gen the only part of the anime I like at all anymore are some of the unhinged choices the dub cast makes because you can tell#that they're having fun when they're not spending six hours screaming into a mic and that is extremely valuable to me
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cybergothvox · 3 months
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Beach induction and Injury care as caring for emotional hurt Hypnosis
The following is an original hypnosis script by me, which includes a beach themed induction and injury care as a metaphor for emotional hurt. The two sections are separated by a line break so that if you are only interested in one half it is easy to find the correct section.
The first half is a beachy induction, which doesn't really have to do with the injury care portion, but they are put together just so that there is an induction and the injury care suggestions will be read when you are already in trance and sink in more deeply. This part focuses on ocean imagery and the sound of waves.
The injury is described to be minor and not painful, and is described as little as possible, in order to avoid creating feelings of being hurt. The imagery of it being taken care of is focused on instead. This section will implant the trigger phrase "You are worthy of love" in order to be able to feel the feelings of being cared about and worthy of love whenever you need to feel that.
The last section ties the first two together and helps to walk you back up from the trance.
Imagine that you are at the beach.
The tides of the ocean flow in and out.
In 
And out
In a steady rhythm. 
Allow your breathing to match
In
And out
In a steady rhythm
To the sound of waves
With each breath
Feel your body relax
More and more
Focused
More and more
On my words
And the sound
Of waves
It is normal to have thoughts of other things
As each thought comes
Just as quickly it is taken by the waves
Washed away by the sound
Of water
In and out
Washing away your thoughts
Dropping you deeper 
And deeper
Into trance
Filling you with a warm
Pleasant feeling
You relax
More and more
Feeling safe
Feeling comfortable
Feeling, happy
Focused
On my words
And on the sound
Of waves
In
And out.
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Slowly,
Still feeling relaxed
And happy 
And safe
You become aware of a minor injury
Somewhere on your body. 
It doesn’t bother you
It doesn’t hurt
But still
You deserve to be cared for
You are worthy of love
The phrase
‘You are worthy of love’
Echos in your mind 
And each time you think to yourself that
‘You are worthy of love’
And each time you read the phrase
‘You are worthy of love’
It feels more and more true
Someone that you care about
And trust
Who cares about you
Places an ice pack on your injury
Because they know
You are worthy of love
You deserve to be taken care of
This person can even be yourself
Because you know
You are worthy of love
And each time you think that
It feels more and more true. 
The ice is pleasantly cool
And not too cold
It soothes you
And you know it is there
Because you are cared about
Because someone is helping you
And you deserve to be helped
Once your injury is soothed
The ice is taken away
And a healing gel
Is put on your injury
It feels warm and pleasant
And that warm pleasant feeling
Radiates outwards
Spreading across your skin
And filling you with the feeling
Of being loved
And cared about
And the knowledge
That you are worthy of love
Next, a bandage is wrapped around your injury
It feels soft and comfortable
Soothing against your skin
Comforting
Like an embrace
It is wrapped snuggly
But not too tight
Just enough that you can feel it there
Hugging you
Reminding you that
You are worthy of love
Each time you think to yourself
‘You are worthy of love’
You will feel this bandage
Hugging you
Reminding you of how it feels
To be taken care of
To deserve to be taken care of
Injuries take time to heal
And that is okay.
It is okay if you need attention
And care
For this injury again.
You are worthy of love
You are worthy of care
As much as you need
As many times as you need
Until you feel better
You can stay in this feeling
Of being so relaxed
Comforted and cared about
For as long as you would like.
When you are ready, I want you to slowly leave the beach
And to become more aware of your surroundings.
Gently wiggle your fingers or move your limbs
Grounding yourself in your body and in the space
Allow your thoughts of other things to return,
No longer being washed away.
Gently wake up, taking all the time that you need
Until you feel ready to continue on with your day and your life
Knowing you can return back here again
Whenever you need to.
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barrygeuse · 3 months
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i wish the creators of ride the cyclone actually gave a fuck about disabled people and listened to their input when finally making changes to their horribly ableist script but apparently even a simple google search about mutism was too hard to do
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cheryl-williams · 1 year
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ash showing cheryl the necklace he got for linda is something that can be so personal
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telephonicsonnyboy · 3 days
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a glimpse at my day ta-day!!
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deviousdiesel · 2 months
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#so that dotd rewrite is out and i have some thoughts on it but i wouldn't know where to put them.. maybe in here bc i don't actually feel -#- like making a whole ass text post. this is coming from me as criticism and not hate.. just some crit from one fan to another if you get m#SPOILERS AHEAD >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>#first off props to the team because this was obv a labor of love - 4 and a half years to make a feature long fan movie is hard work#and the animated stuff was a really nice touch and very commendable - you don't see them too often in big fanworks#in terms of the story well.. there are some things i like and some things that i don't (personally) again no hate#i'm aware this is a rewrite and boy howdy it IS a rewrite - though i am a bit sad that percy doesn't end up being the protagonist and it's#- thomas that has to play hero again.. like i kinda get it but what made the original dotd stand out was that percy was given the spotlight#so i spent an ungodly amount of time wondering when percy was gonna take charge or step into the main story to resolve the problem.. sigh#i liked that they tried to give norman more of a character bc a lot of characters do often get neglected in the series but it was kind of -#- hard to sell that for me? the twist in this rewrite was very creative and i do appreciate it but i guess it just ain't for me#“different” is ok and this is just one of many fan rewrites for this particular story#if there was something i enjoyed.. i guess the beginning was still kind of exciting because the set up was honestly like hype a bit#i liked that diesel and d10 actually got to interact face to face and there are clearer dynamics established for the diesels#and also. silverband's performances as d10 will always be fun he does a fantastic job voicing him (how d10 stole xmas will still be my fav)#my criticisms for this movie also derive from the pacing and the voice acting - i found it hard to try and understand tones sometimes -#- because the delivery felt so off.. like don't get me wrong not everyone in the fandom is a voice actor but if we're using static faces -#- for these fan works the delivery has to be a little more clear or else it'll sound like you're reading from a script.. sorry yall :"|#for the pacing i found it a bit hard to parse when some things were going on and how fast things were progressing#as well as the crashes.. that's also another thing bc i couldn't tell bc of the sfx and audio balancing - it could be better..#i wanna say. muffled voices do not substitute for a “far away”/off-screen voice bc i still can't hear it :“|#there were a lot of throwbacks and references to older thomas media/movies but some of them felt a little.. much?#if this is a dotd rewrite why are we getting some parallels with tatmr.. but i digress. at least they made diesel beef with duck a bit#there's a lot more i could say but i'm keeping those to myself. at the end of the day this fan movie was hard work for everyone involved#and you can tell some of the folks were having fun in there - props to them! i'm always glad to see more fan works in the community#we've come so far we're making feature length fan stories and rewrites that's crazy! i hope to see more in the future#fauxtrainpost.txt
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gayabeilles · 2 months
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too much manic energy rn. put on don angle
#this cd is wild it’s like. duke ellington. the beatles. the most beautiful melancholic drag you ever heard. original composition. beatles.#did I hunt this down because I fell head over heels in love with minor drag? mayhaps.#hey remember that post I went off in the tags in a few days ago being like I GOTTA WRITE THE PAH SECTION AAAAAA#so it turns out I’ve been procrastinating on that#made a nice plot and read a bunch of stuff in the meantime but oh hey I still gotta write this section#maybe frenetic harpsichord will help me focus#I don’t want to work on my thesis I want to write school of the air scripts and make little trinkets#why is it so difficult to work on the things I actually Need to do ;A;#also?????? people (or one person at least) is demonstrably excited about the Ptáček rp????????#why is my reaction to being perceived to be simultaneously excited and embarrassed this is stupid lmao just be excited it’s allowed#(points at self) say hi in the discord!!!!! tell them you’re pleased they like it!!!!!!!! be normal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#idk idk my ears feel warm just thinking about this that’s so dumb lol why am I having a physiological reaction to this#also still losing my mind from Box!!!!! this was so nice I’m gonna cry omg#should see if I have any sheet metal hmmmm#cannot make anything requiring soldering or casting but I can still do some things…….#okay okay I gotta get back to writing I’m meeting with my advisor at 4 aaaaaa#using music and manic energy and methylphenidates to get this section done 🥲#putting those in my acknowledgements btw
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uproariousscarecrow · 4 months
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some more frames i liked!! i'm just shy of 75% done with this project, and i'm really excited!!!!
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festeringfae · 11 months
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It's so wild how The Exorcist (1973) is still considered prestige when it's just like. "What if a little girl had bodily fluid and was in pain. Would that be fucked up or what?"
Like uh, yeah? It would be? You gonna have anything to say about that besides really vague right wing propaganda, or are we just gonna have copycat movies so we can pretend this movie had enough substance to be genuinely influential? Am I gonna have to wait 50 years and Geena Davis' level of influence for this franchise to get deeper than God Is Not Dead (2014)? I am? Well, fuck, glad I was born in '92, then!
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vonlipvig · 6 months
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no idea how this holdovers plagiarism drama is gonna shape up, and i'm not reading and comparing the scripts myself. if anatomy of a fall wins best original screenplay then it wasn't plagiarism, and if anatomy of a fall loses then it was plagiarism.
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songofwizardry · 9 months
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i stumbled across a Rumi quatrain on tumblr today and it reminded me to go looking for my favourites, so here's a few, all taken from Kulliyat-e Shams-e Tabrizi, with the caveat that i do not speak Farsi and I have read them all as translations only. more notes on translation at the end, but all of these are translated by Zara Houshmand, and taken from the archives of The Iranian.
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#1771
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#57
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#1584
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#1316
and the note on translation: these are of course not the Coleman Barks translations, the most popular English translations. i think the orientalism and... de-Sufi-fying and de-Muslim-ifying of the Barks translations and a lot of English-language and Western perception of Rumi is much more discussed now (Jawid Mojaddedi, who is writing a translation of Rumi's multi-volume Masnavi, says, "The Rumi that people love is very beautiful in English, and the price you pay is to cut the culture and religion.") if you're interested, Persian Poetics has a great twitter thread about it and their website has text, audio, and video resources where they've talked about it. and this article from Ajam Media is a short read and an interesting comparison of a few different translations.
if you enjoy Zara Houshmand's translations, she has a book of translations of Rumi's quatrains, Moon and Sun. there's many translations of Rumi's works not by Barks, that prioritise different things: you can 100% find a translation that isn't Barks, and Rumi's work is. so beautiful and so much better when you are not reading whatever uhhh... interpretation Barks came up with.
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magentagalaxies · 1 year
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skloomdumpster · 2 years
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"you were going to walk out my life forever, so you wrote me a fucking letter" "that's because I knew if I told you in person you'd try to-" "What? Try to stop you? Yes I would, Bloom- Do you even know what's beyond that?" "I don't know" "Do you even know where it leads?" "I don't know" "Do you know if it's dangerous?" "No."
"But it has to be closed from the inside and I'm the only one who can do it-" "-I don't think you want to try and find I different way. I think you want a way out, I think you wanted a way out for a long time now"
+ the suicide letters for each loved one
"She's gone" while the girls cry and hug each other
If you read that ending as anything other than death, I have no idea of what to tell you
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eugeniedanglars · 2 years
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btw everyone say thank you to megan mullally for convincing nick offerman to drop the other project he had that would have conflicted with the filming schedule for the last of us
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