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“Swing your razor wide, Toga, see how well it flits - as it floats across the throats of hypocrites.”
I just think the ending could have done some things a little different.
#I was in Sweeney Todd once#Probably my fave musical#that or Chicago#Give me George Hearn and Angela Lansbury#None of that Tim Burton garbage#completely misses the mark#you need a Greek chorus#you do not cut the chorus or City on Fire#Sweeney was out for vengeance against corrupt public figures#he was not just some weird Burton OC#CORRUPT PUBLIC FIGURES#HMMMMMM#My partner is very concerned about this picture#I just think#this was a real missed opportunity#tw: blood#tw: death#tw: violence#himiko toga#toga himiko#boku no hero academia#dabi#touya todoroki#mha hawks#i just think we should stab hawks#league of villains#my hero academia#paranormal liberation front#this really doesn’t make much sense unless you know Sweeney
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It's crazy how Dungeon Meshi's manga can feel more cinematic and emotional than the anime to me, even when they're practically the same. Compared to the anime, this moment is such a heartbreaking gut-drop. The way Kui uses negative space and flat compositions to create a sense of horrific stillness is so key.
The way the text (Senshi's monologue) is sequestered to an empty corner of a panel or huddled away from the edge of its text box is not only a great way of showing Senshi's headspace (fearful, isolated, dissociating), but creates a visual representation of pause, as if you hold your breathe after each line. The first panel puts us directly in Senshi's perspective too (compared to in the anime, which puts us as an outside observer over Senshi's shoulder). The detail of the door and bricks so effectively implies that he stared at it for so long, waiting and hoping, that its image is burned in his memory. The wood grain, the brick arch, the number of rivets. The lack of dialogue in the second panel shows a moment of realization too –– "he's dead" (also a great example of the Kuleshov effect). And it's that pause that creates a beat and sets a great rhythm to his headspace, like a music rest: "He never came back." (oh god.) "I'm all alone." Finally, the third panel's negative space, cropping Senshi, shows how truly alone he feels. Without his family, the world ceases to exists. Under shock, he traps himself in a 1-foot radius, too scared to even perceive a world outside its boundaries; a world that can hurt him, kill him, make him disappear with it. There is only his body, the stone beneath his feet and against his back, his thoughts, and that awful bowl of soup.
Even though they're a series of flat images, there's an implicit reading of silence in Senshi's realization and horror. Kui influences your experience to slow down and take your time.
Compare this to the anime, which fills every shot with dialogue. The pacing is fast; we never get to sit in silence like we do with the manga. The horizontal frame allowed the boarders to add Senshi, turning the composition into an over-the-shoulder shot, which takes us out of Senshi's POV. They also added a zoom-out in shot one, which adds unnecessary energy to a very somber scene. The tightening on Senshi as a close-up reaction shot also dulls the moment. In the original panel, Senshi stares ahead at the empty space to his left as a shadow surrounds his mind. It not only shows how Senshi's senses are dulling and his world is shrinking (setting up panel three), but shows how terrified Senshi is of what's in front of him, how the air itself becomes pitch black and opaque, how Senshi is surrendering himself to fear. The pacing is understandable and necessary; this episode packed a lot of story content together. It's just a shame because it really (imo) deflated one of the most nauseating moments in Dungeon Meshi.
#dungeon meshi#senshi#analysis#personal#long post#not art#because comics are inherently more abstract and rule-breaky the format thrives off show don't tell#i think trigger is doing a great job overall but they missed the mark on this scene#for me cinematic storytelling will prioritize rhythm; tension; and silence over plot. that's why the manga feels more “cinematic”#if you've been enjoying the anime i cannot recommend also reading the manga enough. it's a completely different experience with much more#subtext and emotion to draw from
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Part 178 of my bakery “enemies” au!
baking montage!
First / Prev / Next / All
Kofi
#ml#miraculous ladybug#miraculous#marinette dupain cheng#marinette dupain-cheng#adrien agreste#adrienette#adrinette#my art#bakery enemies au#this scene is my bane apparently because I keep rearranging the parts and so#anyway remember how i took a break because i rearranged the parts so an incomplete part was wedged in#anyway i completed that part. and then i. rearranged it again. so now it's no longer wedged there and i#THIS PROBABLY DOESNT MAKE SENSE AND IS DIFFICULT TO EXPLAIN BUT I. BASICALLY A LOT OF STRESS FOR NET ZERO CHANGE#GOOD FOR ME!! 😎😎😎#also i think the spooning scene's mature mark was removed so that's cool#last part still missing though dw about it
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R.I.P. the version of Percy Jackson, who spoke competently in front of the senate, fairly easily ridiculed Octavian, and managed to sway the romans to his side simply by providing good arguments and being a natural born leader in Son of Neptune, you will always be famous to me
#just completely defeating the guy who is supposed to be a dangerous political opponent in a verbal discussion#I love to see it#HOO Percy Jackson at his very best#R.I.P. You were missed in Mark of Athena#And every other book since#heroes of olympus#son of neptune#percy jackson#rr crit#hoo crit#I'm so sorry#you deserved better writing after this
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Halflife ponies. Btw.
A warning to any MLP enjoyers: if this ends up on derpibooru or any similar site I'll gnaw you into splinters like a cheap plastic dog toy. I'm on the DNP lists under animatorfun and I'll request a new link for this blog specifically if I havw to. Please stop reuploading my shit 💀
Edit: i forgot to reenable the layer with Gordon's glasses it's so over. I was wondering why she looked weird oughhgggh
Edit2: fixed gordon <3
#no reposting#Barneys lack of a cutie mark is NOT because I forgot. it is a joke about his undecided major i promise#barney was gonna be a pegasus but i forgot to draw his wings and he looks better without them anyways so. earthpony barney#they feel more balanced this way anyways#an attempt was made to comply with the mlp gen5 design style...#i dont have much to say about Gordon and Alyxs designs#Gordon... i just drew Gordon But Pony tbh.. tweaked her colors a bit using colors picked from the apple family#i dont really like flesh colored ponies....#alyx.. im not completely satisfied with#shes Missing Something and i cant figure out what#giving her socks felt like too much#she feels half finished#especially with her mane so detailed xc#whoo knows maybe ill update her later (i won't)#aaanyways#half life 2#half life fanart#gordon freeman#alyx vance#barney calhoun#my little pony
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Broken Roofs and Fixed Perspectives
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#poorly drawn mdzs#mdzs#xue yang#xiao xingchen#Lots of cut content notes on this one. Lets all have a moment of silence for all the cut A-Qing's in each perspective.#particularly ripped and buff 'Daozhang Defender 'A-Qing (her perspective)#funny but poor layout#XY also had a red arrow pointed at him in his own POV that said 'just troubled' but it made the panel too cluttered.#He does see himself as troubled and uses that to justify his actions#but I also think there is room for him to not really know exactly how to feel about himself in this situation#Yi-city is such a fantastic tragedy for so many reasons and you will bear witness to me rambling about it in the tags as this arc continues#Helping a blind man fix a roof? A manipulative act of building trust or genuine display of wanting to collaberate?#XY and A-qing have experience of the cruelty of the world where as xxc has blind (haha) faith that kindness prevails#These three simultaneous know each other more than the other's think and *yet* completely miss the mark.#the stories they tell in the blizzard (and the reactions they have) so perfectly display who these characters are#Both xxc and xy tell stories about unfair cruelty. To xxc it is others who's suffering is highlighted. XY highlight's his own.#A-qing understands xue yang more that she wants to admit. She predicts the twists in xy's story and empathizes with the hurt and anger#A-qing is also taking advantage of xxc! She is also lying to survive!#Though shes mostly benign in her intentions. She really did vibe check the rank stank on XY's soul on the spot#Alas...no one listens to teen girls....
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Serious question: Which Siffrin is the most powerful in terms of "unintentional, oblivious flirting"? ie Fighter Frin's posing. And would they become more or less powerful should they becone aware of it?
A very serious question. I will answer this seriously: Fighter!Siffrin is the most powerful in unintentional flirting when they are not aware of it. Housemaiden!Siffrin would be the most powerful in flirting when they ARE aware of it.
#I am so sorry Researcher!Isabeau. You don't stand a chance against the worst housemaiden in history.#shoutout to Researcher!Sif for trying to flirt and missing the mark so badly it accidentally hits a completely different target#turns out trying to talk about the sun exploding isn't as romantic as you think XD#ISAT Role!Swap AU
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so fucking stupid that they made join the hunt the tagline for late show supernatural btw. hunting being a metaphor for the military is pretty explicit, it's not even close to subtle. dean's constantly referred to as a soldier by other characters, a lot of young hunters we see talk about how they only got into the life because of their family, most of them at least in the early seasons are strongly prejudiced towards monsters and have a very us against them mentality, the main thing that cas and dean initially bond over is the fact that theyve been taught to view their sense of self worth in the context of their capacity for violence and following orders. a LOT of the characterization of hunters in the first couple of seasons centers around their desensitization of violence towards non-human beings and prejudice against them actually. i mean for god's sake sam and dean call their own father 'sir'
so much of dean's narrative is about how being groomed to be a hunter has ruined his life and sense of self-worth and made him feel really dehumanized. the show is pretty up front about it being the root of his problems with toxic masculinity, anger issues, and inability to be emotionally vulnerable. he is the POSTER CHILD for why no one should ever get into hunting so how the fuck did the late show writers miss the key themes so badly. this is the anti-war show idiots maybe think for a second before you make that your tagline
#i keep talking abt this but it really is the perfect indication that the later writers had no idea hwat the original show was abt and what#made it so compelling. they completely miss the mark the second they start making hunters the idolized heroes of the series#supernatural#spn#dean winchester#the pig squeals
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Blue Lily, Lily Blue ch 20 // Mister Impossible ch 25
#declanedit#ronanedit#trcedit#tdtedit#Declan Lynch#Ronan Lynch#TRC#TDT#quote posts#i somehow completely missed that Ronan returned the favor#drove to dc/alexandria to go to mass with Matthew and Declan#it's more timeline fuckery cuz it couldn't possibly have been years lmao#it's only been a year and a half since the first series even begun skgajdhlsjalkjds#this actually makes me really emotional though?? no joke#that Ronan both recognized the gesture for what it was when Declan was doing it#and then also returned it#knowing that it was kind and that it would mark him as kind as well#a demonstration of how much he cares about his brothers (both of them) no matter how prickly he is#your honor they love each other#they're learning how to show it again
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I will preface this post by saying I haven’t rewatched the non canon freelancer/ lasko videos since they got taken down so it has been a while since my memory of them might be a little fuzzy but I saw someone say this in the tags on my previous post and I agree with it whole heartedly that when freelancer encountered laskos apprehension a lot of the time their response was to simply kiss them and while yes that is cute I think it kinda parallels the stuff with Geordi and cutie because ya in the moment it might be a sweet gesture but as we’ve seen that cannot be the response for someone’s insecurities or fears about different situations because the person who has to constantly push their boundaries aside will build up resentment which is also a big reason why I’m really glad they aren’t a canon couple because when you compare freelancers reactions to the coworker we can see how the different reactions push lasko in very different directions because while freelancer was often able to push lasko to do these different daring things laskos confidence didn’t really improve overall however with the coworker we can see that he’s becoming more sure of himself at his own pace rather than at others insistence
#redacted.txt#if I forgot stuff and completely missed the mark lemme know but ya#redacted audio#redactedverse#lasko moore#redacted asmr
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2023 British Grand Prix - Qualifying - Oscar Piastri(ft. Mark Webber, Jenson Button, Max Verstappen & Lando Norris)
#sry this took so long!!! my internet was holding me hostage!!!#but oh MY GOD!!!!!!!! OSCARRRRRRRRRRRR IM SCREAMINGGGG#oscar!!! ich bin so stolz auf dich!!!!!!!!!!!#i was watching this in public and my hands were shaking and my heart was pounding i cant believe it actually happened!!!#absolutely fantastic quali session!! every single round i was like woah???????#its so crazy to see how far mclaren have some since the beginning of the season#like i remember them being i think p19 and p20 at the beginning of the season#but now look!!! p2 and p3???? crazy.#i guess mark actually does have good foresight! we can stop bullying him abt the piasco jdksdk#anyways ahhhhh ive missed being able to fully keep up w the race wknd!#im not fully back yet but it feels rly good to be able to do this not in a completely frantic rush as per the past 2 races#but i will say its been nice to be in a better timezone!! im not excited to have to wake up early again once i get back#oscar piastri#op81#lando norris#max verstappen#mark webber#jenson button#f1#formula one#formula 1#we do a little bit of f1#2023 british grand prix#2023 british gp
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barely 3 weeks into school and i already have an f in 2 classes i think my only choice is to revolutionize the world
#in my defense my math teacher isnt marking my work as completed and i was sick and missed work in english#i sleep so much i forget i have homework#its ok ill just do a bunch of stuff tonight#revolutionary girl utena#rgu
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“I can’t do it. I just can’t.”
“Please, Whumpee, just try. I know-”
“No, you don’t! You don’t know anything! Stop trying to make it feel as if I wasn’t completely alone in there!”
#sorry i would've posted this earlier but i forgot it existed#it's been sitting in my drafts for quite awhile now#rainbow's whump#rainbow's prompts#whump#whump writing#whump prompt#i love well-meaning caretakers who try to help and miss the mark completely <33 truly there's nothing better
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okay... idk at all if this has been discussed or that I'm just stating the obvious. I'm posting any way to get more feedback.
so. can we be sure that the last boat scene even happened (in the way we saw it at least)
yeah the letter was delivered to the intended recipients. the letter also did say 李相夷绝笔 lit. the final writing by li xiangyi. there's a brief exchange between him and the assumed "boatman" asking him where he was going. and we see he spat blood while writing yeah but:
llh/lxy's eyesight had been failing for some time.
Professional Letter Writers are a thing in the past in service to people who can't write their own letters (idk enough to verify the historical accuracy in this specific context though)
what has been bugging me since forever is the manner of speech of the letter. yeah it's different from their everyday speech, but that's actually perfectly fine since this is A Letter so I'm good with it being more formal. but... there's something I just can't quite pinpoint. especially with the use of the 君 jun pronoun by llh/lxy to refer to dfs when there could be other pronouns with less connotations of intimacy (and scholarly/imperial court system) implied and still conveyed cordiality, marking a shift in their relationship. (I'm not well versed with wuxia as a genre enough to know what are the conventions. someone else who does can say something though.)
whatever these put together means (eg. he may not have written the letter personally, or he wrote it in a different situation from what we saw, etc etc.) alongside:
this scene existed only as part of a visualisation as the letter content is revealed to the audience (or assumed to be fdb reading the letter to dfs & guests of the wedding spectators of the duel)
the boat lxy/llh jumped on is not the same as the one he was writing the letter on - the boatman is also not on it despite the conversation at the beginning, but lxy/llh's dressing and hairpin are the same as the ones before he jumped. (the boatman delivered the letter so he's real though.)
also as @wonderfulnonsense happened to have just pointed out in the tags left in my other post: it's in fact the same boat he took to go fight dfs at donghai 10 years ago. (edit: or maybe it isn't? as pointed out by anon.)
if we viewed whatever we perceived in this scene as imaginary (not what actually happened), then the reading of it being a metaphor for lxy/llh being on his way to enlightenment just makes sense. (the boat being a carrier on his spiritual transformations.) especially when you consider that 彼岸 the other shore is another concept in buddhism to represent enlightenment, alongside the motif of lotuses. (credits to @markiafc for the buddhism reading - edit: mark's meta here) and then, consider the beach ending... yeah.
#莲花楼#mysterious lotus casebook#my posts#lhl#lhlmeta#断剑又绝笔......#this was a question / discussion brought up internally but i wanted more feedback / ideas so. and also for the record#but ofc...if there are details missed out that completely prove this wrong then pretend i never wrote this#pls blame it on the brainrot#lhl discussion of the day is buddhism meta.#taoism and buddhism readings loving hand in loving hand.#honestly i did not think of the story specifically as a path of enlightenment until i was writing the meta#and then it was a downward spiral there on.#it makes a lot of sense given how it's a story about cultivation of the personage (and the struggles of it)#which is the goal of all chinese ideologies. not just taoism and buddhism. they just have different answers#mark is gonna come back with a massive buddhism meta. i'm excited and afraid#also the detail i am sitting on is what is the significance of him signing off as lxy. on top of his r/s with dfs being from lxy's pov.#considering the way he has been identifying with lxy ever since he took over llh as an identity.#PLUS when i first heard lxy thanking dfs for the wangchuan flower. the chinese didn't include the subject of flower#i thought he was talking about 忘川 METAPHORICALLY bc i forgot that was the name of the flower HJBJHHJBJHB#yeah so like this is the river of oblivion he's on or wtv (i'm just babbling now)#also i said INTENDED RECIPIENTS. but the envelope cover is also interestingly empty. though boatman knew who it was meant for
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something about how the puzzler is depicted with a cane. something about how the only main actors of colour are cast as rats. something about how the queer identities of actors are erased, except for a gay man who is ridiculed for his sexuality. something about how showfall media treats its marginalised cast. something about how generation loss so horrifically reflects the stereotypes and ropes assigned to the queer and disabled and racially marginalised in past films and series. something about how we are still facing bias and discrimination in the modern live streaming industry
#tjis might be really surface level analysis but whatever#also if the tone wasnt clear im saying generation loss is an effective criticism of these attitudes#not that its upholding them. i think gl is a very fowardtjinking/progressive/whatever analysis of our entertainment culture#i dunno maybe i completely missed the mark with this one#sneefs text
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It is incredibly isolating to navigate through fandom as an aromantic person. Aro experiences are so varied, and there is no definite aro experience that encapsulates the alienation that fandom spaces cause for certain people.
Fandom is mostly built and structured on shipping. And if not, the blorbofication of characters, which tends to go down the shipping pipeline; where does that leave the romance repulsed aro person who genuinely does not want to see any form of shipping? Platonic dynamics, right?
Yeah, sure. But by platonic dynamics, it's only "best friends" or "family" right? Where does that leave the aro folks with undefined labels? No, qprs aren't a get-out-of-jail card.
And qprs- they have no rules or standards set upon them by society, not even having a clear definition for what it is, because not all qprs are the same. Yet, for some reason, it ended up becoming the "nonbinary" option to a lot of people- not romantic or "regular" platonic? Qpr it is, right?
But where does that leave the aro folk who don't want a qpr? Who don't wish to see characters depicted in pairs or trios or so forth- who embrace the lack of a partner?
And these concepts presented; when aro folk talk about them, do you care? And if you do, do you understand? Do you try to?
If you aren't aro, but wish to be supportive, are you a genuine ally? Do you raise the concerns of aro folk you share the space with?
Or do you take a look at these concepts- and decide you understand them "well" enough? Do you decide to speak for aro folks instead?
Do you depict relationships outside of romance because you believe in the importance of platonic relationships? Will you accept the fact that not all platonic interactions will be familial or "best friends"?
Can you accept depictions of qprs outside of "more than friends, less than lovers"? Are you willing to accept it is not just "best friends" or "romance lite"? Will you accept that nothing is inherently romantic- and characters in a qpr may fall under your standards of lovers?
Can you resist the urge to put every character in a pair or trio or group? Are you comfortable with the notion of characters finding more joy in being by themselves, outside of all those lenses you see them in?
It's good if you can.
And if you can't, at the very least, do you understand why some aro folk in your space are upset? Embittered by your favorite ships? Starving for representation?
Did you depict these characters with these concepts with the knowledge that aromanticism is fluid?
#antihibikase.txt#Long Post#((I'm sorry. I have been thinking about this for weeks and I am unhappy.))#((Honestly? I have been feeling more and more isolated in fandom recently.))#((It hurts. I know non aro folks are trying.))#((And its hard to describe. It's alienating.))#((And the typical fandom response is more representation- which is well-meaning.))#((But. Specifically to non aro folk. When you depict these aro concepts are you normal about them.))#((Do you do so respectfully.))#((Reminder that qprs are not restricted to aro folks btw.))#((I'm so so tired. It's easy to say you care but then completely miss the mark.))#((And just in case- this is NOT alluding to anyone. Please allow me to let my rage be my own.))#((Or to share this with those who understand.))#((And if you as a non aro person feel attacked by this- sorry.))#((I did my best to word this as firmly as possible without sounding angry because I am aware that-))#((-many will read this in bad faith.))#((Okay to reblog btw.))#((This isn't one of my usual rambles despite it being under my txt tag.))
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