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I just came across a draft for a TLC second gen fic I wrote where Kaiders daughter (Peony) and Wolflets son (Ran) fall in love after Ran is forced to be Peony’s personal guard.
Of course, it was called The Princess and the Guard.
Would anyone be interested in reading it?
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#i wrote this like#two years ago#but the plot is still solid#the lunar chronicles#thelunarchronicles#marissa meyer#tlc fandom#tlc cress#the rampion crew#tlc#linh cinder#carswell thorne#tlc cinder#wolflet#kaider
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you know what? we got the edizzy shirt sharing the wrong way round- ed is all limbs, a real twig of a man and izzy is built like a brick wall- if these two swapped shirts ed would be drowning and izzys would be obscenely tight
#it does not help that izzy already wears looser shirts ed would be able to fit like. two of him in there#i adore the hc that they share a wardrobe and thats why eds shirts are so small and izzys so big but like.#if they were swapped it would be even worse#actually. back on my silly shirt agenda put izzy in eds little purple top it would be good for the economy#that shirt would not hide an inch of that rack and it would be so short.#nyxtalks#ofmd#izzy hands#israel hands#edward teach#blackhands#edizzy#izzy being shorter doesnt mean he isnt solid. that man is dense and immovable#eds got these tiny ass hips he would drown in izzys shirts#i mean i still love the idea of them swapping i think ed would love to drown in izzys shirts#izzy would be stood there plotting to murder everyone. they are all distracted though.#izzys shirt Would be too short in the arms for ed though
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I think the main thing that pisses me off about like 90% of mephiles ships is that people will be like "how old is he??" Look that fanwiki says that he's ten and they RUN with it. Like they don't read further. I'm so convinced that most people don't even know the plot of 06 bc the shit I've seen people draw and write with the characters is just mind boggling.
#trash rambles#like yeah i understand thwt nearly all of the named sonic characters are either minors or unspecified#but like#even if he was actually ten#shipping him with other minor characters would be so weird 😭#plus i dont think it would even matter if he has actually a minor because that uncomfortable power dynamic would still be there with most#other characters#and like#god idk#the amount of dog shit mephiles ships i have to have blocked in my tags is extremely upsetting#LIKE. WDYM?#MARIA??????#STOP IT 😭#tikal makes more sense but that one still makes me uncomfortable#idk i dont even remember all the ones i blocked i just remember that find the maria posts was like#devistating#that and the one person who liked all my 06 posts and was a mephiles and elise shipper (theyre siblings to me so someone like that liking m#art of them is understanbly upsetting)#that being said how old do i think infinite is??? because he doesnt have an official age (that i could find)#personally i think hes anywhere from 19 (at the absolute youngest) to like. early 30s idk 💀#somewhere between thoes idk#the only version of him that has a 100% solid age in my head is for the ghost au and hes 22 in that (bc hes a junior in collage)#n e way#i just woke up so ignore if this is illegible#ugh idk i really try not to be gate-keepy about stuff i like because its annoying but like#i love 06 so much it kinda hurts tl see people just kinda not knowing even the basic plot or like. only going off the fandubs (which i#really enjoy but at a certain point you can only say mephiles is ur favorite and have people quote it at you or in the comments of your 06#posts so many times before you just like. idk. (also ive had people irl tell me 06 sucks after i told them directly it was my favorite sonic#game??? like??? bro you asked ME.))
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Damn, what if I reworked Starbreaker to be exclusively in Anarac's pov instead of trying to balance 5 new povs in one book?
Thoughts?
#ok so pros#1) he's got objectively the most significance to and stakes within the plot#2) he's kind of a non-entity for the first few chapters so i can just use him as a lens for seeing the other characters at first#more of a narrator than an actual character#like [REDACTED] in Rel's haunting but less omniscient#3) the five pov thing really might be a bit much for one book#you just can't do a solid character arc for five entire characters in the span of maybe 90k words#which leads us to cons#1) I'd be giving Anarac more focus at the expense of everyone else#he can be nosy sure but we wont get to see Pash's insane perspective or the internal view of Nyda and Kaulakri falling in love#actually i think less time in Faalgun's head could be a boon to his character but still#2) I've never written a full novel with only one pov and I'm scared#3) Anarac has a lot of issues guys#issues that will keep him from wanting to get off the boat and follow the crew into danger#i could do a few planetary exploration povs from other characters but i feel like that defeats the point#idk i need opinions#writing#writerscommunity#writblr#my ocs#writing questions
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cradling chronic fatigue!tim in my hands until i finally figure out what terrible situation to write him in
#it’s been like months since this started and i still can’t decide on a solid plot#tim drake#batman#red robin#dc red robin
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I think I finally have an idea how to make Headspace at least a bit more thematically cohesive - make the locations represent the stages of grief. Headspace as a whole is Sunny's Denial, of course, but I think there could be more to it
(This still takes place in the same “rewrite” where Mari kills herself, by the way. Just to be clear.)
The playground in the forest at the start of the game could represent Denial more precisely. Mari's alive, Sunny's old friends are all by his side and it's an eternal summer because that's how Sunny himself wants everything to be
Anger could be represented by a big, scorching desert with violent sandstorms; this could also allow Orange Oasis, a leftover from early development that was left in the final product for whatever reason, to be relevant to the plot. Maybe placing the desert after Sunny goes outside and sees the “new” Aubrey could give it additional relevance - Headspace’s Aubrey could become increasingly irate as you progress to indicate that reality is slowly seeping into Sunny’s fantasies. I don’t think the Unbread Twins would even need to be changed much - just make them pissed at being trapped in an endless cycle of baking bread and have them try to take out their anger on Omori and co. lol
I guess Sweetheart's Castle could represent Bargaining? Have something very bad happen to the kids in the desert and make that the catalyst for Headspace’s Hero becoming overprotective along the lines of “If I do a better job at taking care of them, things like what happened in the desert won’t happen anymore”. Maybe the plot could be tweaked so that Hero is the one who proposes to marry Sweetheart on the condition she doesn’t hurt the kids, but she doesn’t uphold her end of the bargain and throws everyone except him into the dungeon anyway
Deeper Well could represent Depression because figuring out what whirlpool leads where is bound to make you depressed it’s a water level and the obvious “depression is akin to drowning” metaphor is obvious lmao. It would probably have to be longer, though, since it’d be the last location. Humphrey would just be Headspace’s final boss battle instead of a whole separate location.
The stage Headspace would conspicuously lack (because it loops on itself after Deeper Well) is Acceptance. I suppose Faraway Town itself could represent it in a sense. Reconnecting with his friends is what allows Sunny to move on in the original game, after all.
This idea could also establish a sharp contrast between Sunny’s dreams and the real world in terms of characterization - he slots his friends into definite and simplistic categories in his mind while the ways they grieve in the real world are decidedly different and more complex than he realizes.
#still unsure of what to do with Basil#he's good as a plot device to kick off Headspace's adventure and give the gang a solid motivation for embarking on their quest#but he wouldn't really have much use in this version of the story beyond that#omori#omori game#omori sunny#sunny omori#omori mari#mari omori#omori aubrey#aubrey omori#omori hero#hero omori#wood's omori rewrite
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THE BEST OF GRISSOM ACADEMY
Featuring: Cmdr. Sophie Shepard, EDI, and Jack With: Flight Lt. Jeff "Joker" Moreau, Lt. James Vega, Ens. Jason Prangley, Ens. Rodriguez, David Archer, and Kahlee Sanders I never had a family- and these guys... Anyone screws with my students and I will tear them apart. Mass Effect 3: Legendary Edition (2021)
#mira makes gifs ✨#james vega#sophie shepard#jeff joker moreau#EDI#jack#subject zero#david archer#kahlee sanders#mass effect#mass effect 3#me3#mass effect legendary edition#dailygaming#grissom is literally my favorite side mission in ME3 so i was so excited to make this omg#it just has it all- good plot + solid witty one liners + an awesome bunch of characters + a nice emotional moment like#and it stars jack who’s like one of my favorite ME2 squaddies so ??? it’s just an all around iconic mission#EDI has so much good grissom dialogue too and she looks mighty cute in her lil hunter hood! 🥹#james has a few really good lines too but none of the ones i liked were in the cutscenes so it was sooo hard to get more of him in the set#i will say i forgot how much good jack dialogue there is in grissom like i just love and stan my girl so much#and now when i see her i think of saoirse and seamus every time like that’s THEIR GIRL KICKING ASS!! ✨✨#her lines with prangley and rodriguez are top notch too honestly#but honestly my favorite moment is still shep and EDI’s conversations with david#like EDI’s soft little ‘no apology is necessary’?#when david says ‘the number of days you lengthened my life’?#i tear up a little bit playing grissom every time bc overlord is the best ME2 dlc and you cannot change my mind#also soph once again eating in cleric’s fabulous guardian armors for shepard (which will always be famous✨)#like the shoulders?? the omni mark?? the set is just talented. brilliant. incredible. show-stopping. spectacular. beautiful. iconic.#and soph's usually rep'ing the purples/deep reddish pinks but did i make the omni mark blue so we could rep spectre alenko colors?#i’ll let you be the judge ✨
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#trying to find a balance because im not a storyteller and none of my ocs have actual cohesive solified plots#but i still want to Show talon's history ajd development instead of Telling#especially since telling just sounds so. idk. elementary school child that has all the superpowers during playtime#sucks that anything i Show is not gonna have the same impact as if id been writing a comic for yrs and now you're seeing the payoff....alas!#talkys#*solidified...or solid i dont even remember which i meant to write
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listen i’m not saying that old resident evil was peak female rep and without its faults but its so sad to me seeing how quickly the female characters in the franchise got sidelined or fell to tropes
#resident evil#jill valentine was the first playable female character in survival horror#a badass in re3#then…. reduced to a sexy brainwashed woman in re5 and since then her role as one of the main protags has dwindled compared to chris#claire redfield was a resilient and resourceful character with solid interests and goals#and was a strong main protag for re2 and cvx#then she gets sidelined because….. ?? why#ada wong quickly got sidelined for the male counterpart as soon as she appeared in re4#and her character has been more and more dependent on her sexuality#and her relationship to leon#shinji mikami just straight up hates rebecca because he didnt make her strong enough#but she still is only really a plot device in the other things she showed up in save re0#resizura rants#edit:#sorry i have to add more tags about claire#because she was well on her way of being a more compelling character than leon#she had a direct relation to one of the first protags#her route (claire A) is considered the canon one in the original game#and she got her own main game (that people ignore because theres not a number next to it)#which is one of the most important games in the franchise storywise#which saw the redfields actively trying to take down umbrella! like she had a hand in the downfall of the MAIN ANTAGONIST#but SHE’S the one who gets sidelined?
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I started the Rings of Power show and listen I’m having fun overall but I am REELING that they’re getting me to feel the villainfucker vibes between Sauron and [redacted]
#I hilariously was inaccurately spoiled I thought for SURE that Sauron was gonna end up being someone else#and I was like damn I wish this guy was Sauron because of XYZ dramaturgy#and then I accurately spoiled myself AGAIN#but I was not mad because I was proven right and j love to be right#u gotta understand I love middle earth shit so much the bar is not that high for me I’m just happy to be there#can I do without a solid 60% of the characters and plot lines? yes#am I still solidly enjoying it?#ALSO YES!
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She is complete…. The Timeline is finally done. Nothing like outlining 35+ years worth of backstory lore only to have to start writing the actual story outline 🙃
#writeblr#creative writing#original writing#writeblr community#writers community#writer community#writing community#fantasy worldbuilding#worldbuilding#lgbtq fantasy#dark fantasy#lgbt fiction#lgbt writers#writers of tumblr#wip#storyboard#i can finally start the draft 2 outline#i could cry honestly#this is so exciting#i still have a ways to go#my magic system needs outlining#but the conflict faced in the story has a very strong base for me to build off of#and I’m so pumped#theliestheytellwip#we have a solid PLOT now though#and all my characters eelationships actually make sense now#relieved
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Land 5 aka before the final boss done !
Albion...
Well, it has a city named Bordeaux !
Ça fait un bail que Bordeaux et l'Aquitaine ne sont plus aux mains de la perfide Albion !
What else can I say...
The final stage bgm was kickass, I loved the architecture and the "subquests" with goats and the character who turns ennemies green was... A thing lol. Still Nigel isn't a deadweight so that's something nice.
Plot wise...
Ugh.
If anyone got it better than I do then please help me lol, because from what I understood, the pope (hereditary title in this verse) got only one child (tfw your line is super special magical plot related but you only get one kid) and told both of his right arms, Nigel and Sanatio, that they should never speak of her to anyone, including themselves.
So... Nigel secured Scarlett far away (uh...) 6 years ago and didn't tell Sanatio, per the pope's orders, Sanatio knew Scarlett existed but since her existence must remain secret, per the pope's orders, he... Uh... Never knew where she was ?
So when the pope decided to fold against the evil empire, and subsequently later died (something Gharnef is pissed about, because the pope's line is the only one able to destroy mc guffins) Sanatio thought that he had to pretend the pope was still alive to make sure Albion and the Orthodoxy would not descend into chaos ?? Like, Nigel couldn't tell him that "I shipped Scarlett to parevia aka an island that is as far from Albion as the UK is from France, under her dad's orders some years ago, let's find her to both protect and mount a resistance against the empire ?"
I knew Albion was scrapped because bankruptcy and all, but damn if in a game where Gilbert, Virginia, hell Alain and to an extent Yunifi and Morad exist, this felt contrived as fuck.
Besides, I know you are technically able to go to Albion before doing bastorias, Drakengard or Elheim (Bastorias or Elheim must be done though) but damn if doing things in order paints Scarlett in a crap light, after Erigor and witnessing the elves zombies and learning about the occupation in both Cornia and Drakengard with mysterious plagues around, and we open Albion with Scarlett worrying about her dad (while she was there when Galerius told us he was dead !) and wanting to show Alain the place where she picked up flowers when she was younger.
Special mention to her former childhood friend Raelys (?) with whom she reunites and wants to go to their special flower field again... Only to be ambushed by Raelys because while childhood memories are nice and all, Raelys' younger brother was taken hostage and she wants to save him.
Then we have Fodoquia's backstory... And Scarlett looks like an ass, especially for someone who was basically supposed to inherit Albion, who never cared about her country and her people.
Still in the few subsequent chapters she expresses her desire to help the people of Albion and her care for them (with still the memetic "I always thought about you" to get childhood friend when a majority of her rapports so far where about Alain, her feelings for him and jealousy at the other female leads or fluff) so there's that.
Ultimately I believe this discrepency is both due to the game being short on money but also the writers having wrote Scarlett as the "ojou" archetype, when the elf twins, even with their 5 lines about the plot of their land, and to some extent, Virginia and Yunifi/Ramona are concerned about their homes and people and written as such.
Plot happens and it's revealed, the empire is actually full of body surfers who were banned to the shadow realm for having sacrificed an unicorn and their big plan is to transmigrate everyone in living bodies, Scarlett's line is special because her magical powers are the result of experiments on humans with blood/parts/powers (?) of an unicorn, the failed results were duds and gave birth to the feathered people (angels) but Scarlett's ancestor was a success, the Cornian royal line is also special because it was founded by a young woman who was the only one granted immortality and not banished to the shadow realm eons ago, so she got some magic powers but gave up her immortality, and the laguz were originally elves who decided to become laguz so their bodies couldn't be snatched, but they forgot how to turn back.
Anyhow, for all of the unicorn imagery Alain got, I found it cool that the "our line was founded by the Maiden in the Unicorn and Maiden duo" thing is/was referenced in Ilenia/Virginia's skillset, it sort of helped to lessen the "uwu Alain is the saviour and chosen one" thingie that hits especially hard after Drakengard and Gilbert's last convo where he confesses he and Drakengard in general have always been jealous of cornia, so learning only Cornia's king can be the "chosen one" to get rid of the evil ghost empire...
Also, since you can skip Drakengard to reach that point and ignore her existence, I guess the "Alain saviour bcs he descends from the Maiden and has the magic ring" feels even weirder when Virginia is also in the party, but she can't equip the magic ring (granted if Alain were to die, would Virginia be able to equip it plot wise ?)
Fwiw, even if Gerard's infinity +1 sword can be used by Alain, I gave his magic ring to Virginia, his other grandkid by beating his ass with the Tricorns, plot be damned.
I mean, I usually dgaf about chosen ones plots, but when the second arc was all about a potential claimant/heir accepting to stand down and let their sib/cousin run the show, the game saying "only sib/cousin can save the world" feels a bit like a slap lol
Alain gave the "totally not-engagement ring" to Joseph, his dad in all but blood, and I rounded up several rapport conversations (wtf was Fodoquia and Bryce's lol) and mini quests.
Units wise... Ramona works well with the angels who have their discharge skill lol, and Bertrand spinning with his hammer will never cease to be hilarious.
I'm sure I'm not using Berengeria well though, because now she keeps on dying (ffs you have a giant shield can you just use it for once ??)... But Bruno makes up by hitting like a truck.
#Unicorn overlord stuff#Otherwise it's a solid game#The plot is standard but it's well told#Leah tried to take her revenge in the arena with a Drakengard team ft Virginia bcs why not#Virginia was the only one standing after Amalia's ssj transformation#Lol#Morad is a big softy I love him#He's upset bcs Ramona sew a cute lion patch in his armor#He does theater for the kids#We Stan a king lol#I'm still not over the 2k sandwiches in Albion
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i feel like the world has collectively forgotten that Jakob Goldspur's wife, Evelyn, the previous BELOVED mayor of Jarlaheim disappeared heading to a GED mountain like, pipe opening and DISAPPEARED AND NO ONE KNOWS WHERE SHE IS
#and now her lil shit of a son is still in charge#like it was a PLOT POINT in the Jarlaheim and Jorvik Stables quest line#and i just feel like it ENDED#like we headed into Harvest Counties and Herman was captured and shit btu THEN WHAT#sso#star stable#lore#my friend things Mrs. X is Evelyn#which is a solid theory
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god of war ragnarok is a bunch of surprisingly thoughtful philosophical conversations occurring on a canoe or while scaling sheer 90 degree cliffs, an ever-growing nebulous pile of very concerning chekhov’s guns, and Atreus collecting more weird uncles than you could possibly imagine
#haley plays god of war#god of war spoilers#idk if this counts as spoilers im just tagging cuz its still so recent#spoilers#playing these games as someone w a solid grasp of norse mythology is so rewarding and fun#they clearly did their research (despite taking liberties here and there of course) but#im constantly seeing somethign and going OOOOOH!!! THERE IT IS THATS THE THING FROM THAT ONE STORY#so fun#one of the biggest plot points of the first game was fully revealed to me because i remembered the significance of mistletoe
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My mother in law finished my first book in the trilogy I’m writing and I’m dead because she loves it skjndjkdhidj she read the last hundred fifty pages in nearly one sitting and said it’s the strongest part of the book but that it’s well worth how “slow” the beginning is because by the time shit starts going down you really know the characters well I’m dead. she’s weird as hell about books and it’s not her genre but I live with her and I know she wouldn’t be able to fake liking it she can be mean as hell pfpflkjf
#baby’s first fucking booooook fkjfbkfjhf#it still needs a lot of work but blehhhh#I’m 60 pages in to the second and I’m so excited to at least get the solid first draft done of the trilogy lol#the second is going to be the longest but I finished the first in less than a year amazingly so maybe I can actually do this shit before I#fucking die fppflkfjf#140000 word first book#probably 300000 word second#I’m thinking unless I can fill the plot out way more the second will be about as long as the first#I don’t know#the only reason I think the second is gonna be much longer is because it’s over 16 years#unless I figure out a better ending point#which I don’t think will work because I need to save a pov for after something happens#for the third book#it’s just gonna have the most#big shrug#I meant the say the third will be about as long as the first fuck#ki rambling#ki writing
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thinkin of writing just like. a little plotless oneshot about my chronically ill Sif headcanon. soft and comfy little thingy
#no promises on anything ever from me#I have one million projects I wanna do all the time and I only finish a handful#also I'm still. doing cathartic cacophony so that's multiple isat fics at once for my sad little brain fog brain#but also. I just want. nice comfy fic where I project my disability onto another blorbo#anyway. I don't think chronically I’ll sif will be canon to cathartic cacophony#*ill#mainly just because it's take away focus from the main plot#*it'd#stars. autocorrect. leave me alone.#uh I talked about some of this on main before but yeah more solid ideas here I guess#headcanon is real and true in my brain. craft exhaustion gives sif a chronic illness#which just happens to have the same symptoms as mine hm smiles#if anyone's wondering what my illness is um. first of all none of your business don't ask randos that?#but second of all idrk.#it. exists. that's what I know. yay#and I am gifting it to Sif. hm? what's that? they don't want it? they've suffered enough?#no no I promise it's really good and fun they'll love it!#<- the devious liar
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