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All of Midnights can be about Nancy if you try hard enough
#but also specifically labyrinth#'UH OH I'M FALLING IN LOVE OH NO I'M FALLING IN LOVE AGAIN OH I'M FALLING IN LOVE' is gonna be the anthem of s5#YOU'LL ALL SEE#... mostly because its the anthem of s2 and they literally said to watch s2
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How Homestuck Beyond Canon Candy Timeline has/will have parallels with Homestuck proper around and during the events of [S] Game Over
Jane Crocker heavily aligned/influenced by with Crocker Corp. Notice how her neck accessory looks very similar to the Crocker computer tiara. There's also the circuits surrounding the button, which are reminiscent of Crockertier Jane's visual mind control effect by The Condesce.
Jane also kind of looks like The Condesce with how she's silhouetted here.
The head of Crocker Corporation on a large Crocker space ship. A ship which I would like to point out looks eerily similar to the ship that The Condesce flies around in except the forks/sporks are facing the opposite direction and it's got black on it instead of mostly red.
Jake dying at the hands of Crocker influenced Jane and coming back to life parallels with this Jane coming close to killing Jake, but stopping right before death. Same green text too.
The cast of characters surrounding this time in the comic are also similar.
We also got the whole Crocker laser beam of death being hinted at which we've absolutely seen before.
I talked about this in one of my previous theories, Jake is getting a better grasp of his hope powers; so, I think we could see another hope explosion again in some capacity out of Jake's concern for Tavvy.
I could also totally see Jake being held hostage by one of the Crocker Clones A.K.A. the Brig Boys and Kanaya cutting them up with her chainsaw (hopefully avoiding Jake).
This is more of a little side detail, but Vriska is once again on the sidelines while this massive important fight takes place because she's trapped in her own personal Hell this time.
CHARACTER DEATH FLAGS - I don't know how to organize this post and there was a lot more potential evidence to this than I thought there was going into it.
Let me preface this with the fact that the existential split between Meat and Candy sometimes seems to try to course correct itself and much like certain peoples DNIs, it doesn't want any doubles. We see this with Dirk, Dave (he died even if he ascended to ultimate self afterwards), June/J/John, Terezi(seemingly), Meenah (her other self is in the black hole with Lord English so we can't necessarily confirm death but yknow), Aradia (is just Aradia), Gamzee, Calliope (that is a whole complex situation), and Rose (if her future sight is correct, but we'll get to that). Those are the only examples I can think of at this time, but it's absolutely a repeating pattern of the universe sort of course-correcting to have only one of each of our main characters exist at a time. This, at least in the cases of Dirk, Dave, & Rose seems to be related to the ascension to ultimate self, but we can't really say if that's why the other characters only get one existence at this time.
Karkat has has at least 2 deaths from around this time, one involving Crockertier Jane as well which could be a sign of things to come.
Rose's death flag is that she has literally foreseen her death in her future sight. She is thinking about Kanaya and Roxy in the same thought process while seeing her own death, feeling full of regret (even though she's trying to repress her own feelings) about her relationship to Roxy and Kanaya. Very similar to her being regretful as she was dying in Roxy's arms. I'm also guessing the bullet that hits her will be from Jake's gun, just throwing that out as a possibility.
ROSE: What... ROSE: Happened to me? ROXY: the witch got u ROXY: with her fork ROXY: but youre gonna be ok ROSE: Oh. ROSE: That's nice. ROSE: *Cough.* ROXY: maybe you uh ROXY: shouldnt try to talk now ROSE: You saved me, didn't you? ROXY: ... ROSE: Thanks. ROSE: But, ROSE: She's gone, isn't she. ROSE: For good, I mean. ROXY: ? ROSE: I saw her die. ROSE: And. ROSE: It's a shame how... ROSE: *Cough.* ROSE: A shame that I never even... ROSE: Got to tell her... ROSE: I loved her. ROXY: who?
ROSE: Kanaya. ROSE: But... ROSE: You too, mom.
Kanaya also has a death flag here in getting hit by The Condesce's laser beam of death, but it's more of a maybe given that we see Rose's future vision of Kanaya holding her body in her arms. Keep in mind though we also had this bit of dialogue about the reliability of future sight right before we saw that vision.
JADE: dont forget im more than a little versed in future sight myself ok JADE: i dont care how credible it seems, you cant depend on that information!
Jake and Jane are also on the chopping block potentially, but I can't think of a way at this time, unless Kanaya mistakes Jake for one of the clones amidst her rage and ends up cutting through him along with the Crocker clones. The one pictured below was done by Aranea who is out of the story. Maybe Meenah's trident hits Jake somehow or something, I don't know. We also have meat Jake and Jane who are doing more okay.
On top of the parallels to the doomed timeline that was [S] Game Over, we also had Vriska say that this reality was fake and didn't matter. I'm paraphrasing and I don't know if we'll get a doomed timeline situation yet with the 4 kids still in it, but I just thought the amount of parallels was interesting & worth pointing out.
I also wanted to get this out before the next update in case it's related to the flash animation and any of my predictions come true.
Alternatively I think the flash animation will be Ultimate Dirk kick starting his SBURB home brew session on Deltritus. He probably has all the tech and narrative powers to do it based on what we've seen, they just need a species they'll both be satisfied with as the players for the session.
#I wasn't sure how to title this hs theory; can you tell? Wanted it to be accurate; this isn't the clickbait video site lmao#sorry that some of the image qualities vary; I couldn't be bothered to find specific pages in the long labyrinth that is act 6 and#ended up just using a summary video for some of these because that was much easier. There is so much to talk about I'm probably going to#miss something in HSBC so if anyone has anything else to add onto this post feel free to do it. when I tell you that formatting these#colored text chat logs was a nightmare; I mean that. Every time I saved the draft it kept glitching the chat logs too. Kept having to fix.#there's also some characters like Roxy where we don't know what she's up to in the candy timeline as well as Sollux and John/June Egbert#Also Calliope are any of them preparing for this fight or have some kind of plan? Captor could help but would need cover while he blasts#Anyway this mostly started from Jane's whole batterwitch vibe she has going on with Crocker corporation and her laser machine#hopefully Kanaya will be okay; but I'm definitely super worried about Rose atm and Jake too; also what's going on with Tavvy#Candy Jane as the new condesce it's not looking good for Commander Karkat Meenah or Kanaya. Mr English plz come save your son Tavros#mine#op#homestuck theory#homestuck beyond canon#homestuck#jake english#rose lalonde#jane crocker#kanaya maryam#karkat vantas#homestuck spoilers#homestuck upd8#cw flashing images#cw blood#cw gore
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They need enrichment in a new enclosure. ¡Reblog and tell us why you sent them where you did in the tags!
#also considered were the backrooms the scp foundation and the underworld specifically from hades#ah well#delicious in dungeon#dungeon meshi#dunmeshi#fnaf#five nights at freddy's#pokemon#kanto region#jurassic park#twilight#twilight saga#the twilight saga#forks washington#labyrinth#labyrinth 1986#hotel transylvania#fallout#the waste land#mlp#mlp fim#my little pony#my litte pony friendship is magic#portal#portal 2#aperture science#star trek#starship enterprise#the enterprise#asoiaf
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I just finished ch4 of Raincode. Holy fucking shit. Many things to be said but primarily never love anything
#shut up me#mdarc#mdarc spoilers#upcoming in the tags#>>>>#How is it POSSIBLE that my favourite character in every kodaka mystery game ive played so far is a murderer in ch4. HOW. HOW !!!!!!!!#And its always the most tragic shit too#Starting the mystery labyrinth with yakou on deaths door I felt it in my heart that somehow he did this#I did not have any of the dots connected but I KNEW IT because OF COURSE THAT WOULD HAPPEN TO ME SPECIFICALLY#MY FUCKING GOD !!!!#At least I like vivia now. fucking hell#also is it too early to say Makoto is one of my favourites now too#I know ch4 ended with him drugging everyone and bombing(!?) the wdo but i still want to trust him for some reason lmao
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I just think Hunter was obsessed with Willow and didn't even know it during the period from any sport in a storm to labyrinth runners. They maybe don't talk as often as they could, they're both busy and have conflicting schedules, so when they do talk, Hunter absorbs everything she says.
After roughly 3 weeks of texting (hexting? I feel like the kids would call it hexting), He knows that her favorite colour is orange, she likes her tea with extra milk and a bit of honey during winter, she likes working out to the noisiest angriest music in her playlist, her dad Gilbert is a construction witch who specialises in pottery, she used to listen to breakup songs and think about her childhood best friend (Hunter doesn't know it's Amity) and she actually has a mild pollen allergy despite being a plant witch and has to take potions for it.
He casually drops all this info piece by piece during their stay in the human realm and willows like. Well I can't not marry him. It'll have to be a winter or fall wedding to account for her allergies </3
#ramblings of a lunatic#the owl house#toh#hunter toh#willow park#huntlow#Hunter is often ignored and hides and compartmentalizes his identity in order to survive and be respected = his love language is listening#he doesn't just go quiet around Willow bc he's shy (tho that's definitely a factor) he's also like wow everything you say is amazing#i want to listen to you 24/7#(Willow realizes this and thinks back to how often she was ignored and isolated-#-and how it made her feel worthless and she's like. i must make him my bride)#i haven't rewatched in a while so i can't exactly tell how much of this is self indulgent and how much is like. actually character accurate#it's in limbo but it feels true to me#we don't know the details of their text exchanges beyond him sending her (presumably) a cute pic of flapjack#I've seen ppl argue that they didn't talk much over text bc she's slightly suspicious of him at first in labyrinth runners#but tbh I've always chalked that up to the general mindfuckery going on at hexside at that time#ergo she couldn't immediately trust that this was actually Hunter until he mentioned something specific about Gus#so i like to imagine it was semi-frequent chatting but i payed lip service to the idea that it wasn't super duper close#playing both sides so I always win etc etc#this is really just a covert way of babbling my willow headcanons
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why are cats not the most moral option i remember that fingerkings possess people <---- doesn't know fl lore well
the cats kidnap and imprison children for the heinous crime of chasing cats around london.
there's other stuff (they're generally royalist bastards) but this is the most obvious example of their crimes.
#even just the fact that they have an entire section of their labyrinth dedicated to imprisoning people is. morally dubious at best#also the coilheart games last august were basically an extended presentation on why the cats (tigers specifically) are bastards#ask#fallen london#i think morality is really dubious between the two parabolan factions tbh. neither is really ''good''#there's just ''the one you want to work with more than the other''#parabolan factions arent abt who's right it's abt who's your favorite gang of war criminals etc etc
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you! i saw you reblog from nocti now you bear the curse too!
in all seriousness, i'd love to hear about 5 for puru and minette, plus 2 for your eo3 guild, especially the two zodiacs :>
HELLO THERE!!
I'm attaching a lot of images so I'll put it under a read more (:
Puru and Minette's names actually come from "Plus" and "Minus"!
In universe it doesn't mean anything, really, but they were designed out of the idea of being "two but one" and a mirror of eachother. Minette belongs to my GF but we made them together (:
Fun fact! You can see it in the other images but Puru has a minus sign in her eyes and Minette has a plus!
It's funny you mention the zodiacs because they're actually from my first eo3 guild! I made them in high school. I don't have any art of Lakshmi really, but I have a lot of Norn!
This is her in her current design / form! But I had made her around early 2019!
A lot of her early art was traditional, so it's mostly packed up now...
Notably in my current EO3 guild, I have a few characters who were in my first one!
Norn, a zodiac. But there's also Sif, my sovereign. Lakshmi, of course. And then Halcyon, Dakota, and Camelia! A gladiator (formerly buccaneer), wildling, and yggdroid!
I also included characters that are new! Sif and Norn are the oldest of them, and they've taken ~5 years to come into how they are now.... Especially their relationship with Kujura. (Which is it's own can of worms.)
I kind of rambled a lot, so feel free to ask specific questions abt anyone you want (if you want)!! Thank you for asking :)
#answers#i'm not tagging all my eo3 ocs umm#oc: puru and minette#oc: norn#guild: gjoll#god i could talk a lot abt my eo3 guild... okyou had some notable changes from when she was first made. in that specifically she's related#to one of my gfs ocs now.... long lost half sibling#theyre both red haired punchy girls...#funny enough mytyl also has a sister. who is also on the armoroad side.#sif norn lakshmi camelia have always been on the side of the deep city but i can't remember where dakota and halcyon fell.#actually sif and norn were made for an original labyrinth project first... but theyre defined by their relationship to the abyssal king so#i should finish writing my eo3 stuff and post it one day... maybe. we'll see.
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Oh yeah, @cruelfeline I found the cloak entry about the First Tanta fighting something with allies:
Nice and vague, could have been anything, but I'm still choosing to believe that was Susurrus. First Tanta fought him directly, her seven warriors kept the Rheddig or any minions he summoned at bay.
And just for kicks I checked the other equipment entries to see if I could find anything for sure about these "seven trusted warriors," and I found... less than seven lol
Or at least less than seven that explicitly state these people had a connection to the First Tanta. There's nine cloaks and four necklaces that were sealed in the Labyrinths, any of them could have belonged to those warriors.
#Forspoken#Forspoken spoilers#Forspoken cloaks#Forspoken necklaces#Forspoken archive#Forspoken equipment#Forspoken lore#Forspoken worldbuilding#First Tanta#super interesting that the cloak that actually belonged to the First Tanta is basically a recolor of one of Cinta's cloaks#it's a recolor of Fearless to be specific#hmmmmmmm#to be fair all the labyrinth cloaks are recolors of other Tanta's cloaks lol#except Leif which is a recolor of Frey's default cloak#Puissant and Divers are recolors of Sila cloaks#Fain and Bonifate are recolors of Prav's#Whilom and Monsterful are Olas#and Forfend and Veriment are Cinta#anyway yeah#I'm also choosing to believe there's more labyrinths to be discovered and thus more pieces of Susurrus :3#and with him more cloaks and necklaces#at least three of which will explicitly state that they belong to someone who had a direct connection to the First Tanta#game don't make me make seven more OCs for the First Tanta/Susurrus prequel fic I'll hyucking do it
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Okay I know someone has written a Destiel Princess Bride AU. In fact I'd be willing to put money down that there's at least twenty. So who's gonna pony up the links for me? :3c
#supernatural#destiel#also while we're at it#if there's a good labyrinth au feel free to send me links to those too#not too worried about specifics because i'm sure i can narrow them down but i like long works and the more crowley involvement the better#he hasn't popped up in any of the fic i've read so far and that makes me sad :(
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the archive undying is a book that was made so precisely for me to enjoy and i know this because i tried to tell my best friend about it and i literally couldn’t because they kept being like “that’s exactly what i thought you’d say that’s exactly what i thought you’d say” over every single word starting from the title
#sola said#what do you mean the guy who likes archives and robots and necromancy and queer shit and southeast asian worldbuilding and gods and cities#and memory and labyrinths#loved this book#i need everyone to read it but also it's extremely fucked up and fucked me up in such specific ways that idk how to recommend it#anyway. read#the archive undying#i am not asking#(also. hi friend. yes i'm vaguing you ily)
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I love how my sexual orientation feels so elaborate and specific to me and complicated that it feels like I’m wandering through a labyrinth and still discovering new twists and turns and having to describe it with a bulletin board with red string connecting everything. But with my gender I’m like “yeah….it’s whatever”
#this is not just about microlabels it’s about being trapped in the labyrinth#also for my gender I did try to apply many microlabels when I was questioning#and I have come across microlabels that could describe it#but nothing sticks. I mean that in a very literal sense. like my gender is slippery and I can’t put stickers (specific labels) on it#because it just slides off#so who knows what’s even going on anymore#also my sexuality…..can I simultaneously be aroace demi acespike cupio repulsed bellus pan lesbian butch4femme t4t queerplatonic……#fuck if I know#I don’t actually use all of those labels but someone else with my experiences might want to use them! I’m just sticking to#pan-oriented aroace for now#it’s so complicated that it’s kind of hilarious#words words words
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it's kind of crazy how when you watch/read something that's good it is indeed good. Who would have thought life worked that way
#i just got done reading gwenpool & yesterday i watched the truman show for the first time#(which by coincidence is two stories that deal with 'fictional realities' … hmm)#and both were awesome.#gwenpool in particular plays with the 'space is time' concept of comics pretty well & just has some very nice sentiments about comics#fiftytenpost#i also read/caught up on fantastic four 2022 recently & that scratches a really specific sci-fi itch that makes me happy#edit: i also watched pan's labyrinth in a class recently and that was super super good
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I love to talk but I rly do feel like we have to be talking for a minimum of 8 hours straight before I feel like I can even begin to rly broach things on my mind or that have been bothering me a lot that I actually want to talk abt without being vague or deflecting or omitting or lying and if the conversation takes a break at any point it resets back to 0 and its still nice regardless but.
#we're all just desperately chasing each other around for a semblance of connection in this cold bleak world#but unfortunately due to the relentless crushing pressures of capitalism we also have to work so no time for that#man. sorry just frustrated n miserable now. wish i was capable of feeling close to other ppl wish i could give other ppl that connection#but instead we're just ships in the night passing by or whatever#and i have to settle with not rly being known or wanted or important in other ppls lives and its forever. btw#bc even if ppl do think they know me or do want me around or i am important to them in some way.. the specific torture labyrinth i call#home is constructed in the most elegant and precise way that im incapable of believing them to be sincere anyway#so thats all on me! if I tried harder and made more of an effort to communicate with or trust ppl i wouldnt feel this way!#but i dont so better luck in the next life i guess! this is why i dont think abt this shit bc it makes me want to kms#whats even the point man#dont even worry abt me im fine just need to fucking vent bc i dont have time to allow myself to feel anything bc i have plans tmr#so i need to go to bed early. and ill just try my best to keep distracted forever so ill never need to face how pathetically desperate#i am for any kind of emotional intimacy whatsoever and also physical contact but im not normal enough to fulfil any of my own needs#yeah well. its my life that i have to live and im the one making it this way. digging my grave and lying in it innit#its fine tho bc they make repressed fictional characters that i can project onto instead of confronting any of my issues#so ill just be here in my labyrinth doing that. while everyone else gets to see sunlight and grass and whatever#im just so tired i dont want to do this i want to pretend i dont care and dont need it and maybe itll become true. its too much for me#let me know when they need me to pilot the jaeger and drift with someone and thru our mindmelding i can finally achieve intimacy and trust#well anyway. that was embarrassing. hope it works out for everyone else#hope my flatmate gets her ideal life w our other old flatmates and finds a convenient way of discarding me from that like they want#except im going to make it as difficult as possible for as long as i can for them to get rid of me bc im selfish and want what i want so.#my obligate parasite ass. or whatever. im going to throw up if i keep thinking so thats a good place to stop and go to sleep probably#.vent#dont interact im being stupid as fuck and dont care just leave me alone thanks
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silly memes 2023 part 3
#ive since gone through all my Images and deleted So Many bc i just...dont look at them and dont need them on my phone ngl#also shoutout to txt for having a labyrinth song specifically for me :D#thats a niche meme just for me#i promise i can be nice about the ateez lore i just think its kind of silly sometimes :D#let me do your worldbuilding!!!!#anyway#just my two cents#my stuff#my post#digital scrapbook
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EPIC FANS GATHER ROUND !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! witness my insane character designs and say NOTHING about my obvious lack of Greek mythology knowledge thank u
#the specific pattern of the meander makes it so that there are separating paths rather than the singular continuous one#labyrinths#meanders#MEANDER SPOTTING#also i wanna add that i rlly like your art!#i love the apollo design :3
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Beginners Guide to Descriptive Sentences
Hi writers.
I’m Rin T, and in this post I’m excited to share with you a detailed guide on how to craft vivid descriptions and descriptive sentences for your writing. I’ve long believed that descriptive writing is the magic that turns ordinary text into an immersive experience. When done well, every sentence acts like a brushstroke that paints a scene in the reader’s mind.
────────────────────���─────── Why Descriptive Writing Matters ────────────────────────────
I have seen how powerful descriptions can engage readers and establish a strong connection with the narrative. Descriptive writing is not simply about decorating your work; it is about building an atmosphere that transports your reader to a world. your world.
When you write descriptions, remember:
You are setting the tone.
You are building a world.
You are evoking emotions.
You are inviting your readers to experience your story with all their senses.
──────────────────────────── Step-by-Step: Crafting Vivid Descriptions ────────────────────────────
Below are my personal tips and tricks to help you build detailed and captivating descriptions:
Begin With the Senses
Description does not solely depend on what the eyes can see. Consider sound, smell, taste, and touch. For instance, instead of writing “The witch’s hut was eerie,” try elaborating: “The witch’s hut exuded an eerie aura. The creaking timber and distant echoes of whispering winds mingled with the pungent aroma of burnt sage and mysterious herbs.” In this way, you help the reader not only see the scene but also feel it.
Choose Precise and Evocative Language
Precision in language is vital. Replace generic adjectives with specific details to boost clarity and imagery. Rather than “The forest was dark,” consider: “The forest was a labyrinth of shadowed boughs and muted undergrowth, where the light barely touched the spindly branches, and every step unveiled whispers of ancient spells.” Specific details create tangible images that stay with readers.
Show, Don’t Just Tell
A common mistake is to “tell” the reader how to feel, rather than “showing” it through context and detail. Instead of writing “It was a spooky night,” immerse your reader: “Under a pallid crescent moon, the night unfurled like a canvas of foreboding whispers; broken branches and rustling leaves narrated the secrets of a long-forgotten curse.” By showing the elements, you invite the reader to experience the fear and mystery firsthand. (You don't need to be as dramatic as my examples, but this is simply for inspiration)
Use Figurative Language Thoughtfully
Metaphors, similes, and other figures of speech lend an artistic flair to your descriptions. When writing about a scene in a magical world, you might say: “Her eyes shone like twin beacons of moonlit silver, cutting through the gloom as if to part the veil of night itself.” Such comparisons evoke emotions and deepen the reader’s connection with the scene. However, be cautious not to overdo it; a little figurative language can go a long way.
Strike a Balance Between Details and Pacing
While elaborate descriptions are alluring, too many details can weigh down your narrative. Consider introducing the broader scene first and then focusing on key elements that define the mood. For instance, start with an overview: “The village lay nestled between ancient stone arches and mist-covered hills.” Then, zoom into details: “A solitary, ivy-clad tower sent spiraling tendrils of mist into the twilight, as if guarding secrets of a long-lost incantation.” This technique creates a rhythm, drawing readers in gradually.
──────────────────────────── Practical Exercises to Enhance Your Descriptive Writing ────────────────────────────
To help you practice these techniques, try the following exercises:
Sensory Detail Drill: Select a familiar scene from your fantasy world (for example, a witch’s secluded garden). Write a short paragraph focusing on each of the five senses. What do you taste as you bite into a magical fruit? What sounds resonate in the quiet of the enchanted night? This drill helps you to avoid flat descriptions and encourages you to integrate sensory experiences.
Revision and Refinement: Take a simple sentence like “The night was cold,” and transform it using the advice above. Rework it into something like, “The night was a canvas of shimmering frost and darkness, where every breath of the wind carried a hint of winter’s sorrow.” Compare the two, and notice how minor adjustments can dramatically heighten the mood.
Peer Review Sessions: Sharing your work can offer invaluable insights. Exchange your descriptions with fellow writers and ask for focused feedback, Does the description evoke the intended emotion? Does it deliver a clear image? Use these sessions as opportunities to improve and refine your craft.
──────────────────────────── Common Pitfalls and How to Avoid Them ────────────────────────────
Through my years of writing, I've learned that even the most passionate writers can stumble. Here are some pitfalls to watch out for:
Overloading With Adjectives: While it’s tempting to create elaborate descriptions, too many adjectives and adverbs can distract rather than enhance. Aim for clarity and purpose in every word. Instead of “a very dark, spooky, frightening forest filled with creepy sounds,” try “a forest shrouded in ominous silence, where every rustle hinted at unseen mysteries.”
Falling Into Clichés: Familiar images can sometimes render your work predictable. Try to avoid worn phrases. Instead of “as dark as night,” imagine “as impenetrable as the void that separates worlds.” Unique expressions capture attention and create lasting impressions.
Neglecting the Flow: Descriptions are vital, but the narrative must continue to drive forward. Check that your detailed passages serve to enhance the storyline rather than bog it down. Ask yourself: Does this description bring the reader closer to the action, or does it detract from the momentum of the narrative?
──────────────────────────── Advanced Techniques for the Aspiring Writer ────────────────────────────
Once you’re comfortable with the basics, consider these advanced methods to elevate your descriptions into artful prose:
Integrate Descriptions Seamlessly: Instead of isolating your descriptions, weave them into dialogue and action. For example, as a witch brews her potion, you might describe the bubbling cauldron and swirling mists as part of her incantation, not just as a standalone scene. “As she whispered the ancient words, the cauldron responded, its surface rippling like a dark mirror reflecting centuries of secrets.”
Reflect Character Perspectives: Let your characters’ emotions color the scene. If a character fears a looming threat, their perception will add a layer of tension to the environment. “I entered the dim corridor with trepidation, my heart pounding as the flickering torchlight revealed spectral figures dancing along the walls.” This technique makes the description both situational and personal.
Use Rhythm: The cadence of your sentences can mirror the pace of your narrative. In high-tension moments, short, abrupt sentences heighten the urgency. Conversely, in serene scenes, longer, flowing sentences can create a tranquil atmosphere. Experiment with sentence structure until you find a balance that suits both your style and the mood you wish to convey.
──────────────────────────── Final Thoughts and Encouragement ────────────────────────────
your narrative is your unique creation. you too will find your distinctive voice. I encourage you to keep experimenting with different techniques until your descriptions feel both natural and mesmerizing. Write freely, revise diligently, and most importantly, let your creative spirit shine through every line.
Thank you for joining me. I hope these tips can help you.
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