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Kique, babygirl, lemme repeat something to you that every sane artist knows at the very beginning of their artistic journey, because it's fucking common sense for most:

You cannot own a pose
You cannot own an colour palette
You cannot own an artstyle
"Style trace" is not a thing. "Canine with saber teeth" is not a concept you own. (And just a sidenote. I love how he, the King of Theft and Tracing, is now complaining somebody else is "stealing" from him.) You cannot copyright a style for the same reason you cannot copyright a colour, an idea, a concept, a musical note, a name, because those are free, abstract, widely ranging concepts that stem from pure thought and creativity and therefore cannot be owned by anyone. I cannot believe I'm telling this to someone who's in his 30s and has been an artist for nearly two decades, but here we are, I guess.
Please, stop embarrassing yourself with this ridiculous callout. You're not even grasping at straws, you're grasping at thin air in hopes you'll eventually grab a blade or two. Anything this callout is proving is what kind of a petty idiot you are. For the love of God, stop with this nonsense and save yourself the little bit of dignity you still have left
#Again. The claim that “Kique has reached his lowest point” is always false because I guarantee you he can and will go lower#Absolutely embarrassing. Lol. Lmao even. Wtf is this supposed to be#Newsflash Kique but “Canine with saber teeth” is like the oldest sparkledog concept there is#No matter how much you wanna claim Staz is the villain you're doing the opposite#You're coming off as the mentally ill ex that's obsessed with former partner that you relentlessly stalk#Stop bro. Seriously. Stop. All you're doing is that you're making yourself look absolutely pathetic#Sidenote. I actually encountered this in a few discord/twitter communities and it's. Alarming to say the least#You cannot own a colour palette. You cannot own a pose. You cannot own an artstyle. Die mad about it#Kique#Kique7#Kique Nordin#Asmundr#Asmundr Home#St4z#Zirvasity
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Wow, for whatever reason Kique decided to put the entirety of Asmundr on ComicFury. I enjoyed this comic when it was active, and it was one of the fateful reasons why I decided to give Home a chance. Pushing that enjoyment aside, Asmundr is an a average story at best. That still puts it heads and shoulders above what its sequel would become. The irony in Kique's disclaimer for the comic is something else, as he's become worse as a storyteller.
That said, yes Asmundr is heavily traced. The story was ripped off from 2008's Outlander, and there are swaths of the story that were never explained or ended on a confusing note.
Yet, when I go back I still find myself enjoying the story. And I'm marveling at how Kique is now so lazy with Home when he actually put effort into his first comic despite its flaws.
Characters that can actually be friends. Better yet, Niita asks Kainan to clarify his feelings for her, and comes out and says they're just friends. No weird sexual undertones. Just two dogs being friends.
A man stepping down from a position of power to make room for women leaders? It's more likely than you think in Asmundr! In theory this doesn't work out for Niita and Lifa, but I can't see this happening in Home. Plus, some of the women in this comic actually have agency and don't seem lost without a man telling them what to do. Mind-blowing given how the sequel would treat its female cast.
Remember when speech bubbles actually indicated if a character was shouting? Yeah, I miss those days too.
We actually had characters who weren't bland doing interesting things. Poor Vilda, she never got to say a single word in Home. Given how everyone's character has been ruined, that's probably for the best.
It's kind of a shame that given the last time I read Asmundr, that it's surprising to see common practices that Kique used to do in his older comic, but stopped doing for his current comic. I wonder how many Home fans who never read the original will go back to it, and see how much Kique enjoyed Asmundr, versus the lack of care or interest that plagues Home. It's telling that comments have been turned off for his OG comic.
#home comic#kique nordin#kique7#home#asmundr home#asmundr comic#asmundrcomic#critique#webcomic#comicfury#bad dog comics
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Bit aggressive much..? One time I can agree with the smackjeeves readers and that’s how you shut a valid point?
Say he’s emotional abusive, that’s possible, yet all I saw from their interactions is that Rogio always was the dominant one. After Ronja was titled Viscountess, Rogio went to Ranach and berated him, on the night of Kargo’s capture, it was Rogio that pinned him down and bared his fangs at him, etc etc. I am in no way protecting Ranach, I have zero sympathy for r4pists! But to say he manipulated Rogio? Where exactly? Saying he’s gonna kill him if the tribe found out about their relationship, that’s manipulation and a threat… but that’s by far the only example I can think of.
Plus, when Rogio stumbled upon the tribe, Ranach looked at him and cared for him with sympathy, literally saying he makes sure he gets through his injuries. At the very beginning, when Ranach heard of his brother’s death, it was Rogio that went and comforted him. I never seen an abuser but i don’t really think they’ll allow their victim to touch them? He was more manipulative to Ronja than Rogio.
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Ugh Excuse Me? (screenshots at bottom of post)
Alright so ladies and gentlemen. Turns out kique and his white-knights in fact stalking our tumblr posts. Can't say I'm surprised, but whatever. you guys have your opinions and we have ours. First of all we are just people would love to speak our opinions without being sidelined because you're a fragile as fuck 32 year old man? like man act your age. second of all, I for one do not make these posts to "bully" or anything. I am simply putting you on the spot for all the shit you have caused, even before home comic. everyone who read your comic asmundr saw how you'd treat your readers. Even paying ones! The public should know how you are to others. if they choose to support you or not. Thats fine, that's their choice. I do not control the other people here. you are not a good person then what you think you are, you treat others like shit unless they kissing your ass and giving you money. Look man, I don't give a care what you do or if you do art and comics. but most of us here were former fans that got tired of your bullshit when someone didn't agree with you. It's not that hard to understand, call us haters all you want. I for one have only put out stuff regarding your actions with linked proof. I never edited my shit or faked what I posted. unlike you who have a habit of editing your post to make yourself seem a victim and bullying someone else to make them look worse. how's that any better? we saw what you posted on a DA post about zirvasity and edited it. also my dude, wtf is this?

Never had I once claimed "sexual assault or abuse" about you towards another person, kindly correct yourself. in no way has that been said in any posts. About your weird and terrible take on rape yeah? But SA? nah man, I draw the line at that, unless you can show me legitimate proof. kindly correct yourself. That was never said about you. I have a limit. also disclaimer, but I have no idea who leaked your patreon shit. I know for a fact that wasn't me cause I respect the paywall and since thats how you make your income. you can beef it out with whoever did. Also no one made comments about your transgender either. I don't care. Thats a you thing, and if it makes you happy, cool I'm glad but that also a false claim. I'm not some homophobic person. I'm just some person talking about your comic and the many issues with it. Thats all, heck if you weren't so fragile you could learn from it also. Critique isn't a bad thing. You just refuse any help given to you for the better. You can bitch all you want for all I care and play victim, there's still proof out there about your behavior. learn to be a better person maybe and people wouldn't dislike you?.
Kique's post from instgram. edited to make him seem like he's innocent further. But my point still stands. P.S., If there are grammar errors, english is not my first language. But it should still get the point across.
#kique7#kique nordin#asmundr#home comic#asmundrhome#home#bad dog comics#kique#asmundrcomic#dog comic
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My favorite thing is when I call someone out for stalking me with malicious intent and them turning around to the server owners screaming "doxxing" because I said their name loud and clear.
(this warning got sorted with the owners, so no worries)
I didn't do that honey, you did that yourself.
Call me a villain all you want, you three are making youselves look like a bunch of fools coming afer me for 4 damn years. Grow up and find a better hobby.
I won't stop existing online, I won't stop making content for my patrons - What is your goal?
Literally what is your goal?
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HEY DUDES AND DUDETS
I'm NOT OUT OF THE WOODS YET Just taking a mini unannounced vacay but also been busy in other stuff not pertaining to here. more so writing, it takes focus ( research, edits, style etc. ) just as I pet it here. but most would know I make comments on DA in the Grasscake home discussions there. One thing you will know however is that I never miss a beat and what I learned apparently is that Kique/Runestorm is now putting the NSFW content and images up from Patreon to his furaffinity account
YA KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS FOLKS!!!???.
once a page is public its not obligated by patreons rules Now people will know what's up without getting the boot rip all them brave folks out there O7 lmao.
ALSO its a mature content so you'll need an account to see it. its a good thing I have an account that's been collecting dust for eons.
You can tell from this piece alone that I collected on how much the quality depleted as them prices be up.
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Why you may ask? don't know but their is speculations and theories I can put up.
He is losing Patreon by the day and needs relevancy and traffic.
He was reported on Patreon because it goes against Patreons TOS of NSFW content and now he has to find somewhere else to draw attention to him.
Its a place where people are less likely to know him and not get reticule/backlash. Cause its literally feral animals fucking with human Genitals . NSFW is already a sticky slope on a very thin line of what's appropriate to concerning. it's already weird he does the pages and poses as though its hentai/Pornhub. and trust you'll know when you see them.
Patreon subscribers are just not into the NSFW content ( Shocker I know ) not surprised. he had bonus pages and stuff showing worldbuild content. when he started getting more patreons from making NSFW Sentient feral content is when he abandoned his promise.
He is not producing in the rate that he usually does. he's been pumping and dumping pages left and right, now its staggering and losing fumes. Its like giving someone water everyday and then slowly ceasing giving them water. if there is no water their, people is going to migrate elsewhere or die of dehydration.
Deadbeat Chris and Kique decide its an idea to upload what is ' one of the most ' controversy ' up to the public. after all they literally the only ones to rely on each other since one left everything in disarray from their wife and tried to steal money to do that while the other pulling the strings and want a drama filled world. both not right in the head but are also not the brightest ( his close knights may have also suggested it as well though really didn't think it through ).
I have more but these are the one's that popped up. And the fact he didn't do it because it was iffy from both DA and Comicfurry, and ADDING THAT HE STARTED POSTING ASMUNDR UP TOO!!???.
*inhales* ah the smell of desperateness.
#home comic#asmundr#kique7#asmundrhome#kique nordin#home#asmundrcomic#kique#kiquenordin#bad dog comics#patreon artist#questionable choices#questionable mindset#and i oop#and its not over#bruh#like bruh#comic#artist beware#comics#big oof#ironic#KiqueN#Runestorm
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This is ridiculous.
(I've never been on Tumblr before, so my apologies. I have no idea how to use this platform.)
I've been a silent fan of this comic for about 4-5 years now, and for a long time, I chose not to reveal my existence. I was around 15 when I first got into it and started reading. But after seeing the new pages that have been leaked under this hashtag, I don’t know what to say or think. I feel like my time following this comic and its artist is coming to an end.
I admit that, back then, I was one of the people who leaked pages. That’s the main reason Kiq started putting copyright watermarks all over his pages on ComicFury. But I didn’t want to get into trouble, so I deleted the shit.
Now, after years of denial, I have to admit- this comic is garbage. Characters are killed off for no reason, and the writing is so poor that there's no emotional weight or impact when a character dies. It feels pointless, like the character never even existed in the first place. This is not how you write a story. How are readers supposed to feel pain when the comic itself doesn’t depict any? It just doesn’t make sense.
I’m very sensitive when it comes to character portrayal, and Kiq is definitely not doing it right. I love these characters, but not their creator. I have to say, when Kiq had his girlfriend, at least some things made sense, but now? Everything feels rushed and emotionless. It’s as if nothing really happened for hundreds of pages, and then suddenly, everything is happening at once.
That wouldn’t be such a big issue if it were written and illustrated properly. But we get a total of maybe 5-6 pages for the big fights, after waiting 300-500 pages for them to even begin. And what about the supposed "main characters" who are barely even shown, just mentioned in passing? Like, what the actual bone is going on in this comic? How can someone be a main character when they’re not even in the damn story?
So I don’t understand why Kiq acts surprised when people leave or turn against him. Readers have to criticize things when they make no sense at all. This kind of storytelling completely ruins both the plot and the characters’ personalities and purpose- and it’s damaging his reputation as an author. He should know that he bears the responsibility for the way his comic is received. If this continues, more people will leave. And not just a few, but many.
I’m not going to get into the personal drama, because I don’t know the full story of what happened between him and his staff and ex-staff members.
I just wanted to finally say something after years of silence and no contact with anyone who follows or knows this comic.
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Khan, Venus and Bifa. Traveller, witch, warrior... Nice doggies 🐶✨
These characters are at least 5 years old. They are very old and very important to me. Nostalgic moment haha!
A long time ago, I was interested in the comic Asmundr — a story about dogs who fought with spears, communicated with spirits and created tribes (packs). The comic was original and creative. I still follow of the comic, but the story... It's getting worse :(
Most readers are waiting for the end of Asmundr. The comic has stopped being interesting.
However, my characters no longer have anything to do with the Asmundr, I created another universe for them. But more on that later, if you're interested 🔥🔥🔥
#artists on tumblr#my art#illustration#oc#oc art#animals#digital art#dogs#asmundr#dog#asmundrcomic#home comic#Home
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Home (Asmundr) Dialogue Edits (5)
Art credits belong to Kique. I will not be sharing any edits from Patreon pages out of respect for the artist.
Thakir deserves better than his Viscountess/Friend abandoning him to run/take care of a Tribe while she sulks and flirts with Rome. Link to original: https://home-comic.thecomicseries.com/comics/902/
Thakir: Hey, Jahla? Sorry to bother you, but we've been wondering if you have made any decisions on the situation... Jahla: No... Maybe we should join Kainan. Thakir: Join Kainan? You're aware that none of us are trained fighters, right? That'll put the Tribe in danger! Jahla: We can't just leave them to deal with Marduk alone.
Thakir: Jahla, listen to me please. I know you're worried about them, but you have a Tribe of your own! Jahla: There must be something. Maybe the scrolls I collected have more information. Thakir: You're not listening to a word I say, are you? If you're so concerned about a Tribe that isn't your own, then just report it to the Capital! The Matriarch trusts you! You don't have to do any- Jahla: I am not going to go crying to the Capital every time I have an issue! This is my family!
Jahla: Ugh, Thakir, please... I can't just sit here. I have to help them somehow.
Jahla: They would do it for me. Rome: What happened this time? Thakir: Oh. Nothing new. Don't worry about it.
Thakir: With how often she leaves us, I should be Jarl... Yippee.
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the disappointment I felt when I saw that the PSA promised by notChrisAlakai and notKiquejohan FINALLY got posted…..
only to see that its two meager pages of absolute bullshit.
I bet he really felt good about that one folks! Patted himself on the back. Real “gotcha” moment there, Kique. Im sure your circle jerk agrees.
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Can I just quickly say that I'm lowkey not even surprised he was stealing brushes from Aaron Blaise? Kique has been gushing about this man's work for years, especially about the work he's done on Beauty and the Beast and Brother Bear. Of course he'd resell his assets, because god forbid Kique creates something on his own instead of stealing from people he admires
#This is a tinfoil hat moment but I do think that the reason why some of the dogs (and especially Jahla) looked very bear-ish-#-at certain parts of the comic#Because how much do you wanna bet he referenced/traced this man's work so much it began to affect his own?#The whole big head/giant forehead/small eyes/robust snout is a perfect formula for drawing a bear#And it's so apparent in Kique's art at times#Imagine stealing from someone you claim to admire. Really Kique have you no shame?#Embarrassing#Kique#kique nordin#kique7#Aaron blaise#Asmundr#Asmundr home#Home comic#Kique is stealing. Again
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While the other comics I followed were good, Home was just so bad this week I couldn't help but spotlight it.
#webcomic#home comic#kique nordin#kique7#home#webcomics#asmundr home#Golden Shrike#Africa comic#To Catch a Star
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Kique’s Love Language: Lust Only
So there have been some thoughts about the newest pages (885 and 886) and I wanted to add into the discussion. When you write, you are inserting a part of yourself into the story that you are telling. Anyone that tells you that they aren’t, is lying or being disingenuous. It could be a little influence, it could be a lot. Just depends on the creator of the piece. Having said that, I do believe that the reason a lot of the romance issues in Home is a problem is because Kique has no idea how a healthy relationship works. I’m not trying to take podshots at him. This is merely based on what is viewable in the comic although yes, how he treated his IRL partners leaves a lot to be desired. It would be one thing if there was just one instance of bad relationships within the story, but there are multiple ones. This is not an issue in itself, but not once does Kique ever acknowledge its existence to the audience, via a character or stated within the subtext that these relationships or ever present them as… questionable at best.
Ignoring that Rome is a self-insert, his character growth is flat. We saw him at Ravencrest. He was an outsider and the others were related to each other. He knew that the brothers were jackasses but still stayed there because reasons. When Jahla got caught, he tells the Jarl that Havenreach is an ally of the Solar Stag Tribe to his Jarl. Even though the Jarl didn’t believe him, Rome again had no reason to nearly murder his tribe members and free a ‘dangerous’ wolf by the locals. He has no reason to trust Jahla but for some reason he does. He’s hamfisted in the story and his subsequent appearances haven’t painted him in a better light. That’s always been my problem with this character. If Jalha has a concern, Rome is there. If Jalha needs someone to talk to, Rome is there. Rome read the script to the story and magically knows how to solve every problem or how to answer it. Nevermind that Thacker and Folliun have been by her side longer than Gigachad Rome. She goes directly to him and doesn’t ask the opinion of a fucking priest or her damn familiar. She knew Rhov for years, but in the span of a few months (if that, it’s hard to tell with the bad pacing of this comic) gets together with this bastard.
Someone reminded me that Jahla was being groomed to the leaders for Asmundr with Rhov and I honestly forgot about this early plot point. She lost her dominant qualities almost overnight it seems. And this isn’t a one time deal because Ronja suffers the same issue. What was wrong having two dominant partners, or a situation where a role reversal happens and the females are dominant? Why does competency seem to only work for males and not females? It’s not surprising that though a FxF has been named, their relationship is happening off screen and I expect that to continue to be the case.
Rogio/Roamer, Rogio/Roamer/Kargo, Jahla/Rome, and to a smaller extent Rhov/Feaf have this same problem. One of the characters just dominates the relationship with the other being notably demure and submissive. When I say dominant, I’m not speaking about force here, but I mean just about all of the actions taken or discussions are typically dictated by one character. A healthy relationship is built on compromise and understanding with BOTH parties involved. The above relationships I mentioned are fueled by lust. Someone is sad? They have sex. Someone is going through a crisis? Sex cures all. Roamer found out that Zilas was killed by the MT. This supposedly important character DIED at the hands of a hostile tribe and Rogio just fucks him 10 minutes later. This is not a misunderstanding because it’s been happening all too often in the comic in the later chapters.
Roamer and Kargo had issues, but it was relatable to many readers because there were ups and downs in their relationship which is true to anyone. Ironically enough this relationship was one of his best written relationships because Kique was copy and pasting from Sparticus. I hate to say it, but when he was stealing dialogue, he wrote better. A huge oversight is that there are no conflicts within the character dynamics when lovers are concerned. If Kique wanted to go that route, he should have just created a bunch of Porn without Plot pieces with his favorite characters.
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page 893 & 894
Alright. so can't ignore the elephant in the room. but what the actual fuck where these two latest pages? First of all the most down played and terrible explanation on why your quote on quote father is "damaged" like i'm sorry but ronja's daughters are gonna be young adults very soon at some point and she had't told them about ranach yet? like girl what were you waiting on. this entire convo was long overdue and kique rushed it so fast and swept it under the rug to get it over with, it's so poorly executed. fucking vandi, kargo and ferah could 100% vouch for her explanation on why he's so terrible. cause no rogio doesn't count, he enabled his actions and did stuff for him. he's just as bad and their relationship wasn't toxic unless proved. I wouldn't trust rogio as my damn uncle as far as I can throw him. again fuck that guy lol. but anyways, vandi is technically their grandmother now, this entire convo should of at least been a decent amount of pages maybe 4 at most instead of just saying "oh he killed people" like he did way more then "kill" he raped and should have an eye awakening of the past tribe living and how he manipulated their own mother. naeva's reaction is bit bratty when I first read this page, and honestly I thought she was stupid. as she rather listen to her own morals then her mothers over a father she never met, it doesn't matter as he has never been around in their lives for her to give a shit about him. also how is naeva gonna know its her father? does her mother have a fucking picture of him somewhere? she never stated his color or anything specific about his character appearance. since these dogs are apparently clearly aware of color and markings. though in a small degree, i kinda agree how she is reacting? she's still being a bit of a bitch honestly. but because her own mother refused to give her a detailed explanation and have her daughters truly understand why he's a "big threat". i feel like she could of easily said their father died or something if it mattered that much to her that she doesn't want her daughters to truly end up seeking him. I just feel, now that we might have this anti child turning evil motive that doesn't really make sense? there's really no real reason for them to switch sides and betray their mother if that's a possibility other than to just appease ranach since he can manipulate thats about it. it'll just be for dramatic useless tension. anyways... so instead of ronja being a parent and not going after her own daughter to try and talk some sense into her as this is a vulnerable topic for both of them now. instead we get the worst and dumbest transition in the next page. its night time now and what does ronja do? well instead of again reaching out to her daughter. deer dog pops up into her tent and well they basically have sex. we are once given the cycle that sex cures everything and holy shit i don't know how she can be in the mood for that. like omg just talk about your problems for once without fucking each other. also idk what deer dog means by "tender soul" my dude you barely been around her kids, every-time you were on screen you were either by ronja or standing in the background. I doubt you know what her daughter is like and just exactly know how she'd react. but honestly if naeva sneaks off or goes searching for her father. gotta say it's ronja's fault at that point cause she didn't give a care enough about her own daughters safety and rather get bonded. also off topic kinda, but I keep seeing people claim that naeva as the "black pup" is it just me? I don't see her as black in color, unless my eye sight is really bad and I dont know it. but I honestly have been confused by it. I'd consider her dark toned comapared to her sisters. but not black color wise.
#kique7#kique nordin#asmundr#home comic#asmundrhome#home#bad dog comics#kique#asmundrcomic#dog comic
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For someone so pissed about me having an ethical brown dog character, you really don't take your own advices that you preach. Since you hate me so much, why don't you redesign the character i made for Steelthorne's leader (that i also asked you to change btw) so you don't have to draw it anymore? hmm?
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Tearing Page 733 hind
Tch MAAAAAAAANNNN!!! I’ve been waiting for this page to come up, cause this is just blatant kique misogyny and sexist of making females complacent of something as serious as a scratch of the muzzle from a short fuss - right here and insulting of the characters who are in Asmundr Comic. It's like the movie: thing of a clone of the person.
Page 93, 94 & 104
Lifa is just acting way too submissive on this when Lifa, who would never put up with this, Lifa of all dogs who know the red-flags of manipulative and threats of harm from unbalanced power dynamic,
Page 143 & 265
LIFA who has told and taught the family to stick together and work as a team in a no mercy environment, protect your own and think with a clear mind - is blatantly letting family abuse slide by. And immediately go to the next Subject cause showing how evil Marduck is then Lifa’s family basically falling apart is far more important. If it was Ronja, Jahla or a female family member - bet they would be ridiculed, belittled, practically coerced to apologize. While If it was Rogio or Ranach or Roamer getting hurt or pitied or had been killing people ( which they did ) , they would be coddled and sympathized - which is what’s happening here, Rohgir being sympathized for basically wounding his sister and daughter of Lifa and it's not bluntly told but implies for Jahla to be “ understanding “ so they can move on and be a happy family again. Ignoring/brushing the problem off doesn’t fix it.
Heck THIS IS NOT HOW ROHGIR ACTED EITHER, this is like a 180 of Rohgir’s personality.
pages 263, 265 & 297
yes, he is blunt and crass and yes secretive, and would take risky decisions that would protect his family to live another day, but in any way shape or form would never raise a paw to another because his eugenic uprising would have him be Marduck 2.0 AND RANULFR .
Kaine and Lifa should be shocked/horrified since this is The one who Rohgir's family + pack fought in a war against his father's ideology of being the superior species ( that he disowned as a a father ) , that also tried to also non-consensually mate with Niita; his aunt and Lifa's sister . Stressed or not you should never resort to hurting your siblings unpurposely. Why are the Akiulfrs even under him as subordinates? at this point if he is willing to attack the triad leaders who’re equal to him as family . That implies he's willing to hurt his own members who HAVE no equal power over him that are no blood related members. It would be a full on rebellion.
Page 389 & 656
Roughhousing is okay, but everything is not fun and games when someone literally gets hurt. Most would even ask if it’s ok to do certain things or if a simple “ ow “ or “ stop, that hurt “ would immediately be apologized/stop all together. At least sensible people. Intentionally hurting someone needs to be stopped because you'll enable it and once enabled, it will lead to toxic to dangerous behaviors, interactions or/and abuse. You see it all the time and you see it now.
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The author really doesn’t know what he wants to do with the majority of the characters, cause literally everyone is a villan who is misunderstood or the moment he makes them a villain and then changes his mind and back peddles to make them not a villain but a misunderstood, sympathizing character. I rather suck a gallon of pure lemons before I sympathize with Ranach and Rogio.
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Lifa like...this is your son, siblings or not you shouldn't be hurting each other nonetheless intent on killing. the fact Jahla doesn't even mention her biting Rohgirs neck that can kill or paralyze his spine is already a reflag of their own. why you hiding that fact saber teeth can puncture and do damage, they obviously don't break.
DIALOGUE REWRITTEN
Lifa could have said: Lifa: “ This is not like him to… “ // ( To keep secrets yeah but not to twist the truth. )
Jahla: " he clawed my muzzle off …before banning me from the Island."
Lifa: " What...??!!”
Kainen: " He may be dealing a lot with a large pack..,"
Lifa cutting Kainen off: " It does not excuse my son to resort to retaliation. Threats, but not of family and certainly NOT of his own."
Jahla: "we talk to him as a family then? Perhaps if he sees us be fine..."
Lifa looks off in frustration and disgruntlement: "We would, but Marduck would not approve. We would already be off to find the others if we did." // ( discard the page of that Marduck introduction and he is shown later after Jahla found him by the family describing him. )
Kainen, licking lips nervously, looks over to the Beacon and where Marduck went: " He's one of Father's own and makes it clear every chance he gets." // ( In a better scene Kainen indicating Marduck attacking the Rabishu and I Kainen to prove a point when he tried to leave. )
Jahla In deep thought, scrunching eyebrows: "Perhaps, I can talk to him. I am familiar with Father just as much as he is, just tell me what I need to know about him." // ( cause the old Jahla would be gun-ho excited of learning more about Father, after all she broke with Rhovanion, monologue a poor excuse with Rome, studied the hidden languages, taken in Father's creation; Avanti - is now acting hostile of a dog she barely even given a chance. )
And that would lead to the next Page Jahla encountering Marduck NOT CRAMMING IT IN ONE PAGE. it's like the dumbest thing to state an “ oh” .
Plus it's the same pose of 3 dogs sitting overhead/bird eye view and discussing. Plus Lifa’s face is Rogio like a copy + paste of Rogio.
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We got now mothers enabling their kids to stay with strangers ( Feomeh with Diarko ) , Mothers letting their son do all the talking and leading ( Liari & Ralei ) , mothers letting male family members keep their rank after disobeying a command from the leader ( Ronja and Roamer ) , and now excuse sibling physical assault (Lifa and Jahla ) ps. Forgot about the Nubia situation and Feaf of disregarding a non-consensual agreement to bearing a Hybrid child from the quote ' golden ' in quote lioness a few pages ago. Thanks to the commenter for jogging my memories ♥
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